frukoyurdakul wrote:

Everything looks good, let's give it a shot.

Bubbled!

Surono wrote:

Kantan
* 00:01:487 - ~ 00:17:486 - spread and consistency still not good in this part imo, 00:02:153 - 00:04:820 - so yeah add both don here would make the build pattern balanced and not sudden increased, 00:12:986 - kinda hard and futsuu just similar density, I recommend to move 00:12:820 - in here as similar before and with the consistency of futsuu, because its simple and first rhythm emphasis from the song than 00:12:986 - mapped in this drum. 01:10:820 - dont forget apply in this part too check
* 01:00:820 - kat, seems good with intense of vocal and also to balance with next colors pattern. duhh smth about density spread each other~ k, seems fine
* 01:03:153 - you forget in here, well kat. yeah close to the end of map, point above and here for kiai should be consindered for sake consistency density between each diffs. if applying this i think it's don better bcz vocal is very still there and no drums, but yeah i changed

Futsuu
*00:19:320 - 00:21:320 - 00:22:653 - 00:24:653 - 00:35:320 - 00:31:320 - 00:35:320 - somehow it would be balanced between each diffs if you deleted these notes and kiai density seems good, you can let the rest of kiai part since the beginning until before entering the kiai has high density than kiai ahah, so yeah should be deleted those Ive pointed out anndd 00:22:820 - give it finish for consistency with the others after deleted those notes i see what you're saying yet didn't like deleting all mentioned (some parts while deleted just sounded really stupid D:), still deleted some and did a bit of variation here and there
* 01:00:153 - why its not finisher, maybe don finish it or just give it finish in this kat? ok just it.. for me it matters at all, I will rebubble it i didn't make notes finishers at same moments on every other diffs and i still think it's not that much of a cymbal sound comparing to the very start of kiai (also it's only on this short ver of song lmao)

Protoescapist wrote:

Awesome mapset. Всё и так зачетно. Удачи в ранке :3

1. 00:33:486 - The finisher usage seems a bit inconsistent, so as long as there is not a really good reason behind this, I suggest making this usage consistent between other diffs.
   00:38:820 ~ 00:44:153 - Between these spots there is no difficulty change between Kantan and Futsuu except the usage of 1/2 at 00:43:653 - this spot on Futsuu. Try to make them a bit different. You can add some notes on Futsuu since the change from Futsuu to Muzukashii seems a bit wide compared to the rest of the spread.

1. 00:14:570 - Removing this is a good idea since 00:09:236 - this spot doesn't have a note in it.
2. 00:30:653 - Change this to don or make it kat on Inner Oni to keep the colors consistent. Muzukashii should be considered too.
3. 00:45:153 - The triplet usage seems different between this, Muzukashii and Inner Oni. Since Inner Oni is the best option, I suggest changing here and Muzukashii to dkd too.

1. Apparently Muzukashii 3/2 break issues are still there, some sections are still too long. I remember it was longer so I wanted you to remove a note by giving as an example, but still, from the beginning to 00:19:153 - here there are no 3/2 breaks (the minimum is two) while the section is actually 54/1 long without a break. Same occasion goes for 00:25:486 ~ 00:38:820 - between this section as 42/1 which is still pretty long and needs at least one 2/1 break. Kiai has some occasions but they are acceptable because the part is meant to be the most dense part of the map. This is the reason for bubble pop. If you can't decide where to put breaks, I can help in the future.
2. 00:42:820 - 00:43:320 - You don't have finishers on those notes.

1. 01:00:153 - You have a don finisher while on Futsuu, Muzukashii, Oni and Inner Oni you have a simple kat there even though on some of them you are still be able to put a finisher. Make your mind to keep them consistent. My suggestion is to put finishers to the other diffs since there is a 4-stanza start, which means it's the middle of the kiai.

frukoyurdakul wrote:

I wish you called me I totally forgot about you lol i decided to wait and i forgot to even think about reminding you so whatever xd

[General]

1. 00:33:486 - The finisher usage seems a bit inconsistent, so as long as there is not a really good reason behind this, I suggest making this usage consistent between other diffs. oops, that's quite a mistake; ok i've made them just regular notes here
   00:38:820 ~ 00:44:153 - Between these spots there is no difficulty change between Kantan and Futsuu except the usage of 1/2 at 00:43:653 - this spot on Futsuu. Try to make them a bit different. You can add some notes on Futsuu since the change from Futsuu to Muzukashii seems a bit wide compared to the rest of the spread. yep, added some

[Oni]

1. 00:14:570 - Removing this is a good idea since 00:09:236 - this spot doesn't have a note in it. phphphph yeah don't know why i decided to do a variation there
2. 00:30:653 - Change this to don or make it kat on Inner Oni to keep the colors consistent. Muzukashii should be considered too. okay, made it k on rest
3. 00:45:153 - The triplet usage seems different between this, Muzukashii and Inner Oni. Since Inner Oni is the best option, I suggest changing here and Muzukashii to dkd too. ofc

[Muzukashii]

1. Apparently Muzukashii 3/2 break issues are still there, some sections are still too long. I remember it was longer so I wanted you to remove a note by giving as an example, but still, from the beginning to 00:19:153 - here there are no 3/2 breaks (the minimum is two) while the section is actually 54/1 long without a break. Same occasion goes for 00:25:486 ~ 00:38:820 - between this section as 42/1 which is still pretty long and needs at least one 2/1 break. Kiai has some occasions but they are acceptable because the part is meant to be the most dense part of the map. This is the reason for bubble pop. If you can't decide where to put breaks, I can help in the future. i think that i kinda managed to pull this off on my own but help will still be appreciated ;w;
2. 00:42:820 - 00:43:320 - You don't have finishers on those notes. fixed

[Kantan]

1. 01:00:153 - You have a don finisher while on Futsuu, Muzukashii, Oni and Inner Oni you have a simple kat there even though on some of them you are still be able to put a finisher. Make your mind to keep them consistent. My suggestion is to put finishers to the other diffs since there is a 4-stanza start, which means it's the middle of the kiai. lol wuuut how is this possible that i missed deleting finish there, god help me with my stupid mistakes

Yeap, you may call me back after you handle these.

frukoyurdakul wrote:

[General]

00:33:486 - Yeah this note needs a finisher on all diffs. Also remove the note on Futsuu at 00:33:653 -

01:00:153 - Same on this note, make them all dons and put a finisher on them, after that on Oni 01:00:070 - remove this note. arrgh this is tough for me because i was sticking with that thought that there is no cymbals sound is the song itself there but ok I GIVE UP

01:10:820 - Same on this too, on Muzukashii, Oni and Inner Oni you need a finisher on them. Also make the colors consistent.

[Kantan]

00:52:153 (5) - I think this can be moved 00:51:986 - here to cover up an off-beat rhythm on the first 4-stanza and keep the rhythm more simpler on the 2nd 4-stanza structure. Same goes on with 01:02:820 (23) - to 01:02:653 - here. oh this is pure gold thanks

ye alright

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Last check.

[Oni]
01:10:736 - Let's introduce finishers after 1/4 snaps on Inner Oni, remove this note.

Surono wrote:

luv dude fruko gg, for QAT and qt pls. sorry for late Hitsu, Gratz!

Namki wrote:

поздравляю!

igorsprite wrote:

nice