It was very helpful.
_underjoy wrote:00:35:778 - I find this pattern mindblockable because it has strange hand balance and anchors, try something like this?
easier for right hand
00:38:372 - and the same thing here
You can also do this:
both patterns are ok, pick what you want.
▲ Alright, Actually I wanted to make right/left jack harder.
I rearranged after consider your patterns. like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7343227
I can pass this pattern without any problem, If It is a issue for the future, I might fix them.
00:41:291 - is better if you move notes like this:
▲Fixed. looks good, and feeling too.
00:59:778 - this? would be a good balance for jacks (22 and 66)
▲It was a intention, fixed. And I added a note on red section. 00:59:940 - for harder
other section too, I did it.
01:00:832 (60832|6) - ghost note, even if you can hear it's so weak you should delete it anyway
There's a hihat, but after I remove this one, I think It's better to emphasize the drum.
01:04:967 - same as before, try this
01:06:021 (66021|2) - ghost too
▲It's not ghost, but done as above.
01:57:832 - this should be a bigger chord, like 4 or 5 note. It's strong sound.
02:12:751 - This pattern can be more comfortable I think:
02:16:481 (136481|3,136562|4,136643|3) - change these notes (454 to 545), so that you dont press 4 key so many times in a row.
▲some arranged the structure
02:30:751 (150751|3,150832|2,150913|3) - left hand is also easy to mindblock, try changing these notes (434 to 343)
I will consider it when I self check whole chart. thanks!
02:36:589 (156589|3,156913|3) - put first note in 2 and second in 6 to break key 4 anchor and make it more comfortable.
▲some arranged the structure
04:11:129 - I feel this pattern is too easy, so I made another you can use here:
▲some arranged. Actually, I already recognized this is too easy. so I will add some notes in this structure later in the future.
04:12:751 - add notes here, make these LNs  because it's strong
▲I will consider it.
04:15:832 (255832|2,255913|1,255994|2) - change (323 to 232) to make pattern more interesting
04:26:859 (266859|5) - move to 4 for more interesting pattern
04:33:183 - better pattern here:
▲Nice. looks good. but I kept it because I really like 47/56 trill. Instead of it, I applied it on last burst one.
04:36:427 (276427|2,276427|1,276670|1,276670|2,276913|2,276913|1,277075|2,277075|1,277318|2,277318|1) - I think you should make this pattern harder for left hand, make some trills here? because it's hard on right hand and easy for left.
04:38:372 - this pattern is better I think:
04:44:210 - same, you can use more interesting patterns:
04:50:372 - you can rearrange these bursts to be better - some chords are too big and not comfortable (also repetitive):
but I kept 5chord, because I made a rest when bursted them. 04:50:778 - I might If It was a stream with, could remove a note.
I will try make it better than now.
Thanks for mod!