OKAY Thanks for your time.
ArcherLove wrote:i tried ;;
my mod consist of visualization + playability only and sometime I ignore technicality so If it's doesn't suit your standard I'm sorry first ww
00:32:450 (32450|0,32531|1,32612|4,32612|2,32693|3,32693|1,32774|4,32774|2) - how about http://puu.sh/tJqyH/79046627c6.jpg ?
I really don't want to make easier than now, maybe I always will keep them.
01:16:315 (76315|4) - how about move to 1 instead? and move 01:16:396 (76396|5) - to 5? Consider
01:16:639 - 01:16:801 - do you hear the "css css" sound? (like static tv sound) add? 01:16:963 - this too but it's longer so LN? how about --> http://puu.sh/tJqMZ/a34800a535.jpg ?
Nice point, but I considering the structure. because If I add them, maybe I should change whole patterns for that
01:21:180 (81180|0) - end it 01:23:612 (83612|2) - ? -> 01:23:774 (83774|1) - mvoe to 5? I consider to cut LN, but maybe not.
01:33:990 (93990|1) - I think it's better at 3? It already has a meaning with like 01:35:291 - 01:36:585 -
01:40:477 - add at 4? same sound as 01:40:315 (100315|1,100315|4,100315|0) -
01:41:774 (101774|4,101774|2) - ^? (4 too)
01:44:044 - add to 2? ^ same reason
01:44:369 - ^ add to 1 or 6?
01:46:315 - add to 4? ^
01:48:099 (108099|1,108099|0,108261|1,108261|0) - missing 1 note?
I think no one can predict the drum what is this exactly(especially in this part)
but actually we can feel the rhythm that being more highlight slowly.
so I wanted to express it. so maybe I will not touch them to add or remove. but Thanks I will see them again carefully
01:57:990 (117990|2,117990|4,118072|1,118072|5,118153|4,118153|2,118315|4,118315|2) - I get the symetrical pattern but how about this instead? http://puu.sh/tJqYG/eb559dafa6.jpg ? Consider
02:39:666 (159666|4,159666|5,159666|3,159666|6,159666|2,159747|0,159747|1,159828|3,159828|2,159909|0,159909|1,159990|5,159990|4,160072|3,160072|2,160153|0,160153|1,160234|3,160234|2) - hmm how about --> http://puu.sh/tJrcF/256160f36c.jpg ?
Consider. but, the intention was the one that separated 1234 to 567 for next structure. thanks for feedback!
erm I have no idea but it's over 7 times same pattern
02:40:477 (160477|0,160639|1,160801|2,160963|3,161126|2,161288|1,161450|0) - how about try to mirror some? or http://puu.sh/tJrho/807f1402a1.jpg ? Thanks for feedback, I will try to change them.
from 03:12:099 (192099|3,192099|1,192099|0) - to 03:21:828 (201828|2,201828|0) - it's too unbalance? I play with only left hand ww (I have nothing against it and it's fitting the sound, but maybe you want to re-arrange) I like it, but I will try to change them too. Thanks!
04:18:828 (258828|1) - eaither move to 1 or 4? It Feels good.
05:26:693 (326693|6,326693|2) - why only 2? you have 00:41:288 (41288|0,41288|4,41288|2) - 3
05:28:963 (328963|2,328963|6) - ^
05:31:558 (331558|4,331558|2) - ^
05:37:072 (337072|4,337072|2) - ^
The first part has an piano synth at least. but last verse is not.
oki gl ww
I can't touch the streamy part because it's style thingy and that would be broken if I were to re-pattern it