Garalulu wrote:

M4M

column
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Monochromatic Horizon]
01:57:994 - 01:58:156 - 이런 부분은 2연타로 표현하는 게 느낌이 더 살 것 같네요 Consider

02:03:832 - 02:03:994 - 5 6 7 7 6 5로 내려가는 계단보단 02:03:183 - 02:03:345 - 와 대칭되는 구조로 표현하는 것도 좋겠습니다. 아니면 02:02:697 (122697|4,122697|5,122697|6,122697|3,122697|0) - 와 대칭으로 표현해도 좋구요

03:54:264 - 03:54:751 - How about this? 03:53:291 - 03:53:616 - 와 비슷한 구조로서 연결된다는 느낌이 나게 합니다. Consider

04:03:832 (243832|0,243832|1,243994|0,243994|1,244156|1,244156|0,244318|2,244318|0,244318|1) - 살짝 뭉쳐있는 감이 마음에 걸리네요. 04:04:156 (244156|1,244318|2) - 를 한칸씩만 옮겨도 깔끔합니다. 요기는 추후에 변경하겠소.

04:25:886 - 04:26:048 - How about this? 피아노의 동일한 음을 고려해서 배치해보았습니다. 04:45:427 (285427|2,285427|4,285508|2,285508|4) - 여기 표현처럼요! 표현한 의도가 다르기 때문에 NO.제안은 감사합니다.

05:01:562 (301562|0) - 1 2 1 구조를 일부로 만들 필요는 없을 것 같네요. 개인적으로는 3에 있는 게 좋습니다.
It's okay

05:07:886 - 05:08:210 - 단놋을 제거해 롱놋 2개로만 표현하는 게 상황을 환기시키기에 좋네요. example

05:17:940 - 05:18:589 - ^ example
의도였으나 반영해야 할 필요성은 보이니 consider

chex

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Kawawa :3

sorry for late but here it is...
also sorry if i give you a bad mod because i actually dont know how to mod this xD

Column Format:
7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Monochromatic Horizon]

- 00:18:914 (18914|6) - i guess it might be better to move it i the opposite side to emphasize the difference of pitch with 00:17:617 (17617|6) like you did here 02:45:508 (165508|6,166805|0)
I think It's okay because there's no issue for any playble. but I will consider it when I remap.

- 00:32:859 - i think this should be triple? it has a sound (something like a clap?) that the triples have from what i heard
I could not hear them. but I think you also right. both are vaild.

- 01:47:372 (107372|1,107535|2,107697|3) - make these doubles in this part? it has loud sounds that makes it feel like entering a climax part
I will consider it when I remap this part! thanks for feedback.

- 02:08:291 (128291|3,128454|2,128535|3) - move to 3,4,5? symmetrical pattern with 02:07:967 also i think it is more easier to execute
Some arranged.

- 02:26:697 - this seems like uncomfortable, that stacks at column 5 + those 1/4s on the right, i guess you can do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7376969 or something better
Some arranged.

- 03:36:021 - add note here? grace flow for the chime sound, same here too 03:39:589
I ignored them. I think they're not necessary for slow jam part.

- 03:39:345 and 03:49:724 - i guess this should be quad too? snare sounds in this part has 4 notes, or maybe that was intentional?
ya, intention. but I will consider it later

- 04:15:832 - something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7377024 i think this is more comfortable and as a basis in your patterns for stacks at right here 04:14:372 then left here 04:15:021 so... right too 04:15:670 something like that
will consider when remap.

- 05:01:562 (301562|0) and 05:09:021 (309021|0) - move both to 3? more comfortable
It's okay

i hope this can help you somehow

Nice map Goodluck! c:

DE-CADE wrote:

reject ponywawa

Fresh Chicken wrote:

pp or die

2017-04-22 21:56 Kawawa: Hi
2017-04-22 21:56 Kawawa: pony boy
2017-04-22 21:56 Kawawa: long time no C
2017-04-22 21:56 Fresh Chicken: yeah
2017-04-22 21:56 Kawawa: yeah
2017-04-22 21:57 Fresh Chicken: 음 근데 이거사실 패턴 잡을게 몆개 어ㅏㅂ석든요
2017-04-22 21:57 Fresh Chicken: 없거든요
2017-04-22 21:57 Fresh Chicken: 근데 제가 또 문제가 쿠도를 받고싶어요
2017-04-22 21:58 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-04-22 21:58 Kawawa: 제가 unsure한게
2017-04-22 21:58 Kawawa: 몇개 있는데
2017-04-22 21:58 Fresh Chicken: 웨얼 알 데이?
2017-04-22 21:59 Kawawa: 우선 변속 3군데\
2017-04-22 21:59 Kawawa: 00:56:859 - 요기 그 치킨님이 제안해주신거 기억하시죠
2017-04-22 21:59 Fresh Chicken: 예
2017-04-22 21:59 Kawawa: 근데 이게 더 상향 될 방법이 없을까요
2017-04-22 21:59 Fresh Chicken: 아 변속을 더 쎼게요?
2017-04-22 22:00 Kawawa: 이게 간격 공식으론 맞나요?
2017-04-22 22:00 Kawawa: 그때 제가 약간 변경했던걸로 기억하는데
2017-04-22 22:00 Fresh Chicken: 음 간격공식으로는 틀렸어요
2017-04-22 22:00 Fresh Chicken: 1/4로 나눠진 상태에서 더해야되는데
2017-04-22 22:00 Fresh Chicken: 이건 쉴드가 있어서 1/3 이 됬거든요
2017-04-22 22:00 Kawawa: 간격 공식은 맞아야 할거같은데
2017-04-22 22:00 Kawawa: 어떻게 생각하세요?
2017-04-22 22:00 Fresh Chicken: 간격을 3개로 나눠야하는 상황에는 .33333333333으로 되어버리는지라
2017-04-22 22:00 Kawawa: 흠
2017-04-22 22:00 Fresh Chicken: 음 일단 공식맞춰서 만들어드리는거는 괜찮은데
2017-04-22 22:00 Fresh Chicken: 지금이거보더ㅏ
2017-04-22 22:00 Fresh Chicken: 이거보다
2017-04-22 22:00 Fresh Chicken: 쎈 변속을
2017-04-22 22:00 Fresh Chicken: 사용하고싶으신거죠?
2017-04-22 22:01 Kawawa: 이 상태로도 좋긴한데
2017-04-22 22:01 Kawawa: 쎄다하다는게 무슨 느낌으로 변경되는거져
2017-04-22 22:01 Fresh Chicken: 어 이거들 더해서 2.5구나 그러면 간격으로 맞네
2017-04-22 22:01 Fresh Chicken: 그
2017-04-22 22:01 Fresh Chicken: 이렇게 쓕 내려오는게
2017-04-22 22:01 Kawawa: 더 순간적으로 확 와닿는건가?
2017-04-22 22:01 Fresh Chicken: 훨씬 더 강렬하게 내려오는거죠
2017-04-22 22:01 Fresh Chicken: 음 뭐라고해야되ㅏ지
2017-04-22 22:01 Kawawa: 아 이게 전부 간격으로 맞아요?
2017-04-22 22:01 Fresh Chicken: 지금은 쓔우욱 펑 인데
2017-04-22 22:01 Fresh Chicken: 네 보니까 맞아요
2017-04-22 22:02 Kawawa: 그렇군요
2017-04-22 22:02 Fresh Chicken: 33.3 x 2 = 66.6 and 66.6 x 0.5 = 33.3 이니까 99.9
2017-04-22 22:02 Fresh Chicken: 0.1은 개미만한 차이니까 사실상 맞아요
2017-04-22 22:02 Kawawa: 01:03:670 - ~ 01:04:237 -
2017-04-22 22:02 Kawawa: 그럼 여기도 맞나보네요
2017-04-22 22:02 Kawawa: 비슷한 원리로 사용되었던걸로 기억하니
2017-04-22 22:03 Fresh Chicken: 여기
2017-04-22 22:03 Fresh Chicken: 네 맞아요
2017-04-22 22:03 Kawawa: 음 그럼 ㅂ변속은
2017-04-22 22:03 Kawawa: 04:55:237 - 여기랑 05:42:589 - 여기
2017-04-22 22:04 Kawawa: 이 두군데는 간격 공식상 틀렸죠?
2017-04-22 22:04 Fresh Chicken: 첫번째꺼는 일단 틀렸고
2017-04-22 22:05 Fresh Chicken: 네 틀렸네요 두개다
2017-04-22 22:05 Kawawa: 역시
2017-04-22 22:05 Kawawa: 저런 느낌으로 간격 맞춰서 해결방안을 구할 수 있을까요
2017-04-22 22:05 Fresh Chicken: 당근빳따아뉩니까
2017-04-22 22:05 Fresh Chicken: 일단
2017-04-22 22:05 Fresh Chicken: 04:55:237 - 여기는
2017-04-22 22:05 Kawawa: 변속이 우선 간격을 무조건 맞추는걸 가정하에
2017-04-22 22:05 Kawawa: 짜야하는거에요?
2017-04-22 22:05 Fresh Chicken: 04:55:237 - 0.5 04:55:481 - 2.5 를 사용하는 방법
2017-04-22 22:05 Fresh Chicken: 아니요 솔직히
2017-04-22 22:06 Fresh Chicken: 어느정도 적정선의 오차라면 괜찮아요
2017-04-22 22:06 Fresh Chicken: 아니면 감으로 떄려맞출수있는 그런 변속도 괜찮고
2017-04-22 22:06 Fresh Chicken: 감으로 떄려맞추는건 마스형이 잘만드는데
2017-04-22 22:06 Fresh Chicken: 저는 그런걸 잘 못해서 ㅋㅋ
2017-04-22 22:06 Kawawa: 저기 근데
2017-04-22 22:06 Kawawa: 0.5 2.5하면
2017-04-22 22:06 Kawawa: 확 떨어지는 임패긑가
2017-04-22 22:06 Kawawa: 임팩트가 부족해서
2017-04-22 22:07 Fresh Chicken: 임팩트를 더 살리시고싶다면
2017-04-22 22:07 Fresh Chicken: 극단적인 방법이 하나
2017-04-22 22:07 Fresh Chicken: 있긴하죠ㅕㅕ
2017-04-22 22:07 Fresh Chicken: 1/8 또는 1/16 변속을 사용하는 방법은데
2017-04-22 22:07 Fresh Chicken: 1/16은 10배속을 넘어버릴수있으니 패스
2017-04-22 22:07 Kawawa: 딱 지금 넣은 0.25 3.1처럼
2017-04-22 22:07 Kawawa: 확떨어지게 하고 싶은데,
2017-04-22 22:07 Fresh Chicken: 네 그런식으루요
2017-04-22 22:08 Kawawa: 공식 간격을 맞춰서 넣자니 안되던거 같더라구요
2017-04-22 22:09 Fresh Chicken: 04:55:237 - 0.5 04:55:521 - 4.5
2017-04-22 22:09 Fresh Chicken: 해보ㅓ실래요?
2017-04-22 22:09 Fresh Chicken: 1/8
2017-04-22 22:10 Kawawa: 음 뭔가 약간 느리게 떨어지는데
2017-04-22 22:11 Fresh Chicken: 음 그러면
2017-04-22 22:11 Fresh Chicken: 0.5 를 0.3으로 4.5를 4.7로
2017-04-22 22:11 Fresh Chicken: 해보세욧
2017-04-22 22:11 Kawawa: 0.2 4.8로
2017-04-22 22:11 Kawawa: 해도 되겠네요?
2017-04-22 22:12 Fresh Chicken: 네
2017-04-22 22:12 Fresh Chicken: 0.1 4.9까지도 되지요
2017-04-22 22:12 Kawawa: 0.2 4.8은 뭔가 아쉽고
2017-04-22 22:12 Kawawa: 0.1 4.9는 확 멈추네
2017-04-22 22:12 Kawawa: 0.15 4.85는 되요?
2017-04-22 22:12 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-04-22 22:12 Fresh Chicken: 네 되죠 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-04-22 22:12 Fresh Chicken: 소숫점 두자리 수까지
2017-04-22 22:12 Fresh Chicken: 되요
2017-04-22 22:12 Kawawa: 0.15 4.85는
2017-04-22 22:13 Kawawa: 괜찮아보이나요
2017-04-22 22:13 Kawawa: 아 0.2 4.8할게요.
2017-04-22 22:13 Fresh Chicken: 0.15는 뭔가 너무 확 오는 느낌이 강한듯싶은디
2017-04-22 22:13 Fresh Chicken: 02 가 나은듯 제생각에도
2017-04-22 22:13 Kawawa: 넹
2017-04-22 22:14 Fresh Chicken: 05:42:589 - 여기는
2017-04-22 22:14 Fresh Chicken: 중간에 2 가
2017-04-22 22:14 Fresh Chicken: 보니까 확 와버려서 당황하게 되더라구요
2017-04-22 22:14 Fresh Chicken: 천천히 내려오다가
2017-04-22 22:14 Fresh Chicken: 05:43:237 - 얘를 확 강조하고싶으신변속이죠?
2017-04-22 22:14 Kawawa: 네
2017-04-22 22:15 Fresh Chicken: 05:43:075 - 2.0 없에도 저는 괜찮다고 보는데
2017-04-22 22:15 Fresh Chicken: 음 일단 시도해보시겠어여
2017-04-22 22:15 Kawawa: 0.6 0.8 1.0
2017-04-22 22:15 Kawawa: 이거만요?
2017-04-22 22:15 Fresh Chicken: 네
2017-04-22 22:16 Kawawa: 약간 밋밋하긴한데
2017-04-22 22:16 Kawawa: 1.0을 1.4로 바꿔도 되지 않나요?
2017-04-22 22:16 Kawawa: 05:43:075 - 여기가 1.4가 되어야하나
2017-04-22 22:16 Fresh Chicken: 05:43:035 - 여기가 1.4가 되면 맞아요
2017-04-22 22:17 Fresh Chicken: 아 아니다
2017-04-22 22:17 Fresh Chicken: 1.2 가 맞네요
2017-04-22 22:17 Fresh Chicken: 1. Offset: 1,078ms BPM: 185.00
2017-04-22 22:17 Fresh Chicken: 아이런 슈발
2017-04-22 22:17 Fresh Chicken: 아 아니라
2017-04-22 22:17 Fresh Chicken: 그 간격을 무조건 1로 맞춰야 되는게아니라
2017-04-22 22:17 Fresh Chicken: 얘가 슬로우잼이 들어갔잖아요 0.6 으로
2017-04-22 22:17 Fresh Chicken: 그럼 0.6으로 간격을 맞춰주는 방법이있거든요
2017-04-22 22:18 Kawawa: 오호 그렇군요
2017-04-22 22:18 Kawawa: 0.6 0.8 1.2로 두자니
2017-04-22 22:18 Kawawa: 뭔가 넘 느리게 떨어지네
2017-04-22 22:18 Fresh Chicken: 05:42:589 - 0.8 05:42:913 - 0.4 05:43:035 - 1.2 05:43:156 - 1
2017-04-22 22:18 Fresh Chicken: 해보실래여
2017-04-22 22:20 Kawawa: 0.6 0.8 1.2로
2017-04-22 22:20 Kawawa: 우선 유지해볼게요
2017-04-22 22:20 Fresh Chicken: 오케이데스
2017-04-22 22:20 Fresh Chicken: 저 잠시만요
2017-04-22 22:20 Fresh Chicken: 자꾸 뱃속에서 악마가
2017-04-22 22:20 Kawawa: 0.8 0.4 1.2는 저기 0.4에서 1.2로 넘어가는데 한텀 끊기고 들어가서 약간 아쉽네요
2017-04-22 22:20 Kawawa: ㅠㅠ
2017-04-22 22:20 Fresh Chicken: 나올려하는데
2017-04-22 22:20 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-04-22 22:20 Kawawa: 네
2017-04-22 22:28 Fresh Chicken: 암 백
2017-04-22 22:28 Fresh Chicken: 또 다른 퀘스쵼이 있으신가요
2017-04-22 22:28 Kawawa: Hi
2017-04-22 22:28 Kawawa: long time no C
2017-04-22 22:28 Fresh Chicken: yeah
2017-04-22 22:28 Kawawa: 패턴은 치킨님이
2017-04-22 22:29 Kawawa: 말하시는거 이후
2017-04-22 22:29 Kawawa: 퀘스쵼 해드릴게요
2017-04-22 22:29 Fresh Chicken: 사실 패턴 그닥 볼게없는게[
2017-04-22 22:29 Fresh Chicken: 전 먼저 쳐보고 그냥 제 삘에 꼴리는걸 잡는데
2017-04-22 22:29 Fresh Chicken: 이건 몆번 쳐봤는데
2017-04-22 22:29 Fresh Chicken: 뭔가 에디터내에서 잡아야할만한 것들이 실제로 쳐보면 상당히 잘쳐져셔ㅓ
2017-04-22 22:29 Fresh Chicken: 패턴에는 그닥 지적할게 없을듯 싶네여
2017-04-22 22:29 Fresh Chicken: 베리 구조적 패턴 오케이?
2017-04-22 22:30 Kawawa: OK
2017-04-22 22:30 Fresh Chicken: 낫띵 아덜쓰?
2017-04-22 22:31 Kawawa: 흠
2017-04-22 22:31 Kawawa: 그럼 제가
2017-04-22 22:31 Kawawa: 퀘스쵼하죠
2017-04-22 22:31 Fresh Chicken: 예
2017-04-22 22:31 Kawawa: 02:17:251 (137251|1,137291|4,137291|2,137332|5,137372|6,137372|3,137413|2,137454|1,137454|5,137494|4,137535|0,137535|3,137575|1,137616|6,137616|4,137616|5,137616|2) -
2017-04-22 22:31 Kawawa: 02:17:291 (137291|4,137291|2,137332|5,137372|6,137372|3,137413|2,137454|1,137454|5,137494|4,137535|0,137535|3,137575|1,137616|6,137616|4,137616|5,137616|2) -
2017-04-22 22:31 Kawawa: 제가 이쪽을 원래
2017-04-22 22:31 Kawawa: 02:17:372 - 02:17:535 - 이런곳에 2노트를 안스고\
2017-04-22 22:32 Kawawa: 02:17:291 - 02:17:454 - 02:17:616 - 쾅쾅쾅하는곳에만 3,4개로 두고 나머지 1/8을 1개씩 뒀는데,
2017-04-22 22:32 Kawawa: 뭐가 나은거 같나요?
2017-04-22 22:32 Kawawa: 02:17:372 (137372|6,137372|3,137454|5,137454|1,137535|3,137535|0) - 솔직히 여기 2개 넣는거에 의미가 있는거로 보이나요
2017-04-22 22:33 Fresh Chicken: 1/4에는 2개, 1/8에는 하나씩 넣었다 이걸 의도하면 넘어가는 패턴인데 제눈에는 그닥 문제점은 보이지 않지만
2017-04-22 22:33 Fresh Chicken: 02:17:291 - 02:17:454 - 주관적으로는 이런 멜로디있는곳, 그리고 쾅쾅이에만 두개씩 넣었을듯 싶어요
2017-04-22 22:33 Kawawa: 저도 그렇게 생각하는데
2017-04-22 22:33 Kawawa: 그게 너무 뻔하기도 해서
2017-04-22 22:35 Fresh Chicken: 확실히 뻔하긴 해요
2017-04-22 22:35 Fresh Chicken: 일단 저는 그 두개다 문제가 없다고 판단해요
2017-04-22 22:36 Kawawa: 흠 애매하네
2017-04-22 22:36 Kawawa: 우선 킵할게요
2017-04-22 22:36 Fresh Chicken: 네 저도 킵해도 문제없다고 판단
2017-04-22 22:37 Kawawa: 05:18:264 - 이런건 상관없어보이나요?
2017-04-22 22:37 Kawawa: 잠깐 저배속 넣는거
2017-04-22 22:37 Fresh Chicken: 아 맞아 저거
2017-04-22 22:37 Fresh Chicken: 저거는 솔직히
2017-04-22 22:37 Fresh Chicken: 0.85 정도가 맞다고ㅓ
2017-04-22 22:37 Fresh Chicken: 생각해요 저는
2017-04-22 22:37 Kawawa: 0.85가 근데
2017-04-22 22:38 Kawawa: 하자니 너무 체감이
2017-04-22 22:38 Kawawa: 없더라구요
2017-04-22 22:38 Fresh Chicken: 근데 그게 판정에 차이가 나버리더라구요
2017-04-22 22:38 Fresh Chicken: 드레드노트 짜면서 느낀건데
2017-04-22 22:38 Fresh Chicken: 사람들 판정내는게 0.85하고 0.8하고
2017-04-22 22:38 Fresh Chicken: 다르더라구요
2017-04-22 22:38 Kawawa: 음
2017-04-22 22:39 Kawawa: 05:39:021 - 05:28:643 - 05:18:264 - 05:07:886 - 00:43:237 -
2017-04-22 22:39 Kawawa: 전부 0.85로
2017-04-22 22:39 Kawawa: 바꿨어요
2017-04-22 22:39 Fresh Chicken: 야쓰
2017-04-22 22:39 Kawawa: 00:51:183 - 여기는
2017-04-22 22:39 Kawawa: 0.8로 안바꿨긴한데
2017-04-22 22:40 Kawawa: 아니 0.85로 안바꿨긴한데
2017-04-22 22:40 Kawawa: 어떻게 생각하세요
2017-04-22 22:40 Fresh Chicken: 음 저기는
2017-04-22 22:40 Fresh Chicken: 음
2017-04-22 22:40 Kawawa: 아마 0.85로
2017-04-22 22:40 Kawawa: 해야할거같긴한데
2017-04-22 22:40 Kawawa: 일관성면이나 의도면이나
2017-04-22 22:40 Fresh Chicken: 전 00:51:345 - 여기가 갑자기 1로 바뀌어버려서 좀 당황스럽다고 생각하거든요
2017-04-22 22:40 Fresh Chicken: 그럼 0.85로 바꾸고
2017-04-22 22:40 Fresh Chicken: 1/16으로해서
2017-04-22 22:40 Kawawa: 00:51:183 - 0.85 00:51:345 - 1이요?
2017-04-22 22:41 Fresh Chicken: 00:51:345 - 여기서 부터 0.86 0.87 ... 1 로 이렇게 올리는게 좋을거같아요
2017-04-22 22:41 Fresh Chicken: 네
2017-04-22 22:41 Fresh Chicken: 갑자기 슬로우잼에서 1배속이 되니까
2017-04-22 22:41 Fresh Chicken: 살짝 당황스러운 느낌이 있어요
2017-04-22 22:41 Kawawa: 음 근데
2017-04-22 22:41 Kawawa: 1/16부터 1로 짜잘하게 올리기에는
2017-04-22 22:41 Kawawa: 저 롱놋에서 판정이 갈리지 않을까요
2017-04-22 22:41 Fresh Chicken: 일단 저였으면 그렇게 아마 썼을거에요
2017-04-22 22:41 Fresh Chicken: ㅇㅅㅇ
2017-04-22 22:42 Fresh Chicken: 근데 판단은
2017-04-22 22:42 Fresh Chicken: 당신의 몫이요
2017-04-22 22:42 Kawawa: 음 우선 유지하겠소
2017-04-22 22:42 Fresh Chicken: 예.
2017-04-22 22:42 Fresh Chicken: 근데 이거 또 키아이 남용으로
2017-04-22 22:42 Fresh Chicken: 뭐라하느,ㄴ거 아녜요?ㅋㅋ
2017-04-22 22:42 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-04-22 22:42 Kawawa: 설마요
2017-04-22 22:42 Kawawa: 근데 그렇게 남용같지도 않은데
2017-04-22 22:43 Fresh Chicken: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ그렇겠져
2017-04-22 22:43 Kawawa: 제 퀘스쵼은 이게 끝이오
2017-04-22 22:44 Fresh Chicken: 음 그렇다면
2017-04-22 22:44 Kawawa: 02:32:616 (152616|0,152616|4) - 뭐 이런곳
2017-04-22 22:44 Kawawa: 2놋 썼는데
2017-04-22 22:44 Fresh Chicken: Do you...wanna bubble...?
2017-04-22 22:44 Kawawa: 상관 없어보이죠?
2017-04-22 22:44 Fresh Chicken: 네 그닥
2017-04-22 22:44 Fresh Chicken: 문제되지도않고
2017-04-22 22:44 Fresh Chicken: 오히려 하나 지우면 못생겨질듯
2017-04-22 22:44 Kawawa: OD HP
2017-04-22 22:44 Kawawa: 너프할까요?
2017-04-22 22:44 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-04-22 22:45 Fresh Chicken: OD는 변속이 좀 있는지라
2017-04-22 22:45 Fresh Chicken: 그대로 놔두시는게 좋아요
2017-04-22 22:45 Kawawa: 아뇨 8.5 밑으로
2017-04-22 22:45 Kawawa: 8.5도 과하다고 생각하기 ㄴ한데
2017-04-22 22:45 Kawawa: 8.2정도로 해야하지 않나 싶기도 하고
2017-04-22 22:45 Fresh Chicken: 사실상 8이 최적이긴 해요OD는
2017-04-22 22:45 Kawawa: 8.2 / 9.1?
2017-04-22 22:45 Kawawa: 8.0 / 9.1
2017-04-22 22:46 Fresh Chicken: 네 그것도 괜차는듯
2017-04-22 22:46 Kawawa: 8.3 9로 할게요.
2017-04-22 22:47 Fresh Chicken: 넴
2017-04-22 22:48 Kawawa: 업데했습니다
2017-04-22 22:48 Fresh Chicken: 아 입대했습니다로 봤어
2017-04-22 22:49 Kawawa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-04-22 22:49 Fresh Chicken: 흠
2017-04-22 22:50 Fresh Chicken: 겹친 타이밍뽀인뜨도 업군요
2017-04-22 22:50 Kawawa: 마지막으로 업데했을 때
2017-04-22 22:50 Kawawa: 제너럴쪽 전부 다 봤어요
2017-04-22 22:51 Kawawa: 껄껄
2017-04-22 22:51 Fresh Chicken: 아-주 좋소!
2017-04-22 22:51 Fresh Chicken: 그렇다면
2017-04-22 22:51 Fresh Chicken: 두유..워너 버블..?
2017-04-22 22:52 Kawawa: 예
2017-04-22 22:52 Kawawa: owo

DE-CADE wrote:

Dont tell anybody

[Monochromatic Horizon]

00:22:806 - Change to 0.60x make it a half speed from 1.20x 00:24:751
Fair

00:29:048 (29048|4) - Move to 3 to make it more balance for hands
Looks good

00:34:481 (34481|3) - Ghostnote pls delete, u just hear slight the echoes of the piano
hmm I got it your point, but I still can hear them.
First of all https://puu.sh/vujsS/d1d8523d11.mp3 This is repeat pitch for this part.
And It will has a high pitch chord at last place(recorded 00:34:399 - ~ 00:34:481 - :: https://puu.sh/vujy7/8e602247c3.mp3)
so I think It's not a ghost section. maybe we can discuss it again.

00:41:454 - up to you anyway https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7901334
looks fair, but I will keep first.

00:58:237 (58237|0,58237|2,58318|0,58318|2) - Shouldn't be jack this time https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7901378
01:03:427 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7901386
Thanks for opinion! Changed like this https://puu.sh/vukPq/c4e475b6dd.jpg https://puu.sh/vukQ1/04d2916606.png

01:01:724 - seems missing a hitsound here
Alright.

01:00:508 (60508|5) - remove this one, It consitent with 01:05:697 - as your patterns.
Fair enough.

01:58:481 - i would, do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7901406
Sorry I will keep first(before was that. haha)

02:08:535 (128535|6) - Change to LN mapping https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7901435
02:08:616 (128616|4) - Up to you again https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7901447
before I used LN with 1/8 drum(02:08:535 - ~ 02:08:778 - )I still hear them as 1/8th.
what do you think about?(I did not change it yet)

04:18:589 (258589|4,258589|3,258589|0,258589|6,258670|2,258697|4,258697|5,258751|0,258805|5,258805|6,258832|2) - Better focus at snap 1/4 otherwise drama
I thought that was more to be a problem, but not cause of poly rhythm.
(Probably heavier pattern at the same time as end timing of the SV :: https://puu.sh/vumpv/95b2625d72.png)
so I nerfed like that https://puu.sh/vumCa/20be8f7c48.jpg Thanks! could pass easily now.

02:38:129 - 02:38:291 - I think It can't be calculated as 2chords
After you remove them, can make highlight here 02:38:210 -
Arranged some.

02:55:886 - 02:55:994 - I recommend you to avoid the jack, I think you can take a rest here
Made it break time, and buff'd here 02:56:535 -

04:39:508 (279508|5,279508|3,279508|4,279508|1,279508|2) - use 3 LN pls
Arranged some.

04:27:345 - https://puu.sh/vtiFH/7d6d50522c.png
looks good.

04:42:670 - Remove a note.
04:42:751 - Add a note, 4chords as the way you map this part,
was that intention, but fair enough. applied.

04:46:805 - Where is the short LN mapping like 04:45:508 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7901508
was that intention like 04:44:210 -
but pretty good. applied.

04:55:562 (295562|5,295562|0,295562|2,295562|4,295562|6,295562|1) - end at 05:00:345
looks fair

i will check the HS please wait

Critical_Star wrote:

some irc check

22:21 Critical_Star: meow, call me when u are free
22:21 Kawawa: owo
22:21 Kawawa: meow, I free
22:22 Critical_Star: owo
22:23 Critical_Star: wanna irc? just a few stuff actually
22:23 Kawawa: wow so fast -w-
22:24 Kawawa: I was okay if you do that slowly
22:24 Kawawa: okay wanna irc
22:24 Critical_Star: :x
22:24 Kawawa: 'x'
22:26 Critical_Star: 00:20:212 (20212|6,20374|5,20536|4,20860|0,21022|1) -  suggest > http://puu.sh/vwMJM/32a9d14266.png i think it fit better to the sound, what do you think?
22:27 Kawawa: oh I was following piano at there.
22:27 Kawawa: 00:18:914 (18914|6,18914|5,19239|5,19239|6,19563|5,19563|6,19887|6,19887|5) -  is same with 00:20:212 (20212|1,20212|0,20374|1,20374|0,20536|1,20536|2,20698|1,20698|2) -
22:28 Critical_Star: oh i thought u catch those  1/2 sound here
22:28 Kawawa: 00:22:806 -
22:28 Kawawa: should I remove this section?
22:29 Critical_Star: i was about to say that too hmm
22:29 Kawawa: I think this is okay, but in case.
22:30 Critical_Star: sound end there but it will be odd to end at blue line
22:30 Kawawa: yeah.
22:31 Kawawa: I think there has a same piano pitch
22:31 Kawawa: 00:18:914 (18914|0,19077|1,19239|2,19401|0,19563|2,19725|1,19887|0,20049|2) - like those piano
22:31 Kawawa: repeated.
22:32 Critical_Star: i can hear the echo there but well i think should be fine to keep that
22:32 Kawawa: 00:20:212 - ~  00:21:347 -  =  00:21:509 - ~ 00:22:644 -
22:32 Kawawa: 00:21:509 -  so is that same with  00:20:212 -  00:22:806 -
22:33 Critical_Star: oki
22:33 Critical_Star: 01:15:264 (75264|3,75345|2,75427|3,75508|4) -  how about > http://puu.sh/vwN5T/ec456e3af7.png ?
22:33 Critical_Star: wait 
22:33 Critical_Star: nvm that
22:34 Critical_Star: 01:15:670 (75670|1,75751|3,75832|6,75913|3) -  i saw this
22:35 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/vwPqE/0bb3672171.png I move it like this
22:35 Critical_Star: ok
22:36 Critical_Star: 01:24:427 (84427|3) -  how about move to 2? because i did see u make a little pattern gap for each higher pitch piano sound here
22:37 Kawawa: 01:17:291 - ~ 01:27:670 -  I can't change anything in this part, because I repeated this shape 4times. (and moved left one)
22:38 Kawawa: ;w;
22:38 Critical_Star: ah i see, i should notice that like 01:18:751 (78751|4,78913|5,79075|6,79237|5,79399|4,79562|5,79724|6) - 
22:38 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/vwPBJ/3ac6ab0c3e.png
22:38 Critical_Star: 01:21:345 (81345|3,81508|4,81670|5,81832|4,81994|3,82156|4,82318|5) - 
22:38 Critical_Star: good structure i like it
22:39 Kawawa: thanks 'w'
22:41 Kawawa: some hitsounds fixed
22:42 Kawawa: 02:06:913 - "Punk" Removed, It should be moved, my mistaken, 02:03:670 - And added it here. seems a missing
22:43 Critical_Star: sure
22:46 Critical_Star: 04:49:399 (289399|5,289399|4,289562|5,289562|4,289724|6,289724|5,289886|6,289886|5) -  u can reduce a note here to make a different from their sound impact
22:48 Kawawa: umm, maybe I need to remove them? o.o
22:48 Critical_Star: or make it LN
22:49 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/vwQa6/47ed9e5269.png
22:49 Critical_Star: just something different feel could be nice
22:49 Critical_Star: :x
22:49 Kawawa: oh I was that,
22:50 Kawawa: And I tried it too https://puu.sh/vwQcV/4a91bb1ade.png
22:50 Kawawa: hmm but still feel awkward than now
22:50 Kawawa: ;w;
22:51 Critical_Star: ;w;
22:51 Kawawa: because It was a bundle for the main melody section 04:48:751 (288751|3,288751|0,288751|2,288913|2,288913|3,289075|4,289075|1,289075|3,289075|0,289237|3,289237|4,289399|5,289399|1,289399|2,289399|4,289562|4,289562|5,289724|2,289724|6,289724|3,289724|5,289886|6,289886|5) -
22:51 Kawawa: can I keep this one?
22:51 Critical_Star: sure
22:51 Kawawa: 04:18:589 (258589|3,258589|5,258589|6,258589|0,258670|2,258697|4,258751|0,258805|5,258832|2) -
22:52 Kawawa: I wondering what do you think this
22:52 Kawawa: recommend to keep 1/4th only?
22:52 Critical_Star: it is 1/4 + 1/6 here it is fine for me
22:53 Critical_Star: hmm personally think current one is better
22:54 Kawawa: before was that one http://puu.sh/vwQp2/0c01dcb00b.jpg
22:54 Kawawa: but I followed dede's opinion
22:54 Critical_Star: ah yes i know your old pattern at here before
22:54 Critical_Star: hmm
22:54 Critical_Star: doesn't it feel hard?
22:54 Kawawa: before one is
22:54 Kawawa: honestly too hard.
22:55 Kawawa: 04:18:589 - especially
22:55 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/vwQp2/0c01dcb00b.jpg
22:55 Kawawa: so I made it nerf
22:55 Critical_Star: stair 1/3 jack is hard, unless u make it like 123 - 4-5-6 <but this is too easy
22:55 Critical_Star: 04:18:264 (258264|0,258264|3,258264|2,258372|4,258372|1,258372|3,258481|4,258481|2,258481|5,258589|6,258589|5,258589|3,258589|0) -  short one is okay
22:56 Kawawa: this is okay?
22:56 Kawawa: than before one?
22:57 Critical_Star: u can use by the previous one i guess but 04:18:589 (258589|0,258589|3,258589|5,258589|6) - 
22:57 Critical_Star: should consider reduce to 3
22:57 Critical_Star: note
22:58 Critical_Star: looks harder to have 4 note there
22:58 Kawawa: hmm
22:58 Kawawa: this is?
22:58 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/vwQFd/2b11545296.jpg
22:58 Kawawa: but is looks fit.
22:59 Kawawa: I think.
22:59 Kawawa: 04:18:264 (258264|1,258264|3,258264|0,258372|1,258372|2,258372|4,258481|5,258481|2,258481|3,258589|4,258589|6,258589|3,258697|5,258697|4,258805|6,258805|5,258913|6) -
22:59 Kawawa: 04:18:589 (258589|0,258670|1,258751|2,258832|1,258913|0) -
23:00 Kawawa: 04:18:589 (258589|6) - If I remove this one, then hmm some looks empty?
23:00 Critical_Star: 04:18:589 (258589|3) -  if remove this>
23:00 Critical_Star: ?
23:01 Critical_Star: but well it look like broken stair lol
23:01 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/vwQMz/d86112a360.jpg
23:01 Critical_Star: 04:18:264 (258264|0,258372|1,258481|4,258481|2,258589|3,258697|4,258805|5) - 
23:01 Kawawa: lol
23:01 Kawawa: 'W'
23:01 Critical_Star: 'W'
23:01 Critical_Star: omg haha
23:01 Critical_Star: i am ruining it lol
23:02 Kawawa: I could not sure about it http://puu.sh/vwQQI/9f28c9ac31.jpg
23:02 Kawawa: but now version is sure a quite  http://puu.sh/vwQS8/6ca039f3a4.jpg
23:02 Kawawa: I think easy than my thinking
23:03 Critical_Star: can u play the pattern well?
23:03 Kawawa: 1times passed.
23:03 Critical_Star: ok cool
23:03 Kawawa: but can pass before ver.
23:03 Kawawa: but can't pass before ver.
23:04 Critical_Star: https://puu.sh/vwQS8/6ca039f3a4.jpg this one u can do it right
23:05 Kawawa: yeah.
23:05 Critical_Star:  alright then i think it should be no problem for you to do this pattern
23:06 Kawawa: 'w'
23:06 Critical_Star: .w.
23:07 Critical_Star: 05:07:967 -  intend to miss this one>'?
23:08 Kawawa: because SV
23:08 Kawawa: x0.85 for a while.
23:08 Kawawa: and for take a rest
23:10 Critical_Star: okay seems clear 
23:11 Critical_Star: any part u are concern>?
23:11 Kawawa: UM
23:11 Kawawa: 00:34:481 (34481|3) - I can hear sound
23:11 Kawawa: you too?
23:12 Critical_Star: yes i can hear it
23:12 Kawawa: 00:45:913 (45913|4,46075|4) - I want to move it to 6
23:13 Critical_Star: actually 5 is much more comfortable in my opinion
23:13 Kawawa: okay then 5
23:13 Kawawa: 'w'
23:13 Critical_Star: :x
23:14 Kawawa: Ah
23:15 Critical_Star: 00:54:670 (54670|5,54751|3,54751|6,54832|5,54913|4,54913|6,54994|5,54994|3,55075|6,55075|4) -  i guess i have to prctice more 7K stream, pattern like this is still hard for me :X
23:15 Kawawa: 02:08:535 - ~ 02:08:859 - can you hear 1/8th drum?
23:15 Critical_Star: hmm
23:15 Kawawa: I will try it better 00:54:670 -
23:15 Critical_Star: not really, the 1/8 sound start at 02:08:859 - 
23:16 Critical_Star: eh nono, if u can play it nicely sure 
23:16 Kawawa: oh I see,
23:16 Critical_Star: i just point the part i am bad at lol
23:16 Kawawa: 02:08:535 - ~ 02:08:859 - why I still can hear 1/8th?
23:16 Kawawa: so before was 1/8th here too
23:16 Kawawa: but expew told me it's not 1/8th
23:16 Kawawa: but I still was not sure
23:16 Kawawa: now is fine.
23:17 Kawawa: because "drrr
23:17 Kawawa: a bit
23:17 Critical_Star: hmm
23:17 Critical_Star: it does sound like 1/8 drrt
23:17 Critical_Star: but
23:17 Critical_Star: 02:08:859 (128859|0,128859|5,128859|3,128859|6,128899|1,128940|4,128940|2,128981|5,129021|0,129021|6,129062|1,129102|4,129102|2,129143|5,129183|3,129183|1,129183|6,129183|0) -  
23:17 Critical_Star: if i compare this one
23:18 Kawawa: 00:55:075 (55075|6) - maybe I can remove this one in case,
23:18 Kawawa: yeah.
23:18 Critical_Star: i can hear that better in 1/8
23:19 Kawawa: I see
23:21 Kawawa: I think that's all.
23:21 Kawawa: but I will re-check everythings again
23:22 Critical_Star: 02:11:778 (131778|2,131818|1,131859|0) -  oh do u want to use LN for here too?
23:22 Kawawa: hmmm
23:22 Kawawa: I wanted
23:22 Kawawa: hmm
23:22 Kawawa: 02:11:859 (131859|6,131859|0) - 2notes is fine?
23:22 Critical_Star: i forgot a place u did the same thing
23:23 Critical_Star: it feel a little empty when u remove a note there so i guess is okay
23:24 Kawawa: yeah, some bns also told it's okay
23:24 Critical_Star: 02:32:535 (152535|6,152575|5,152616|4) -  i guess is the same case why u didnt use LN
23:24 Kawawa: 02:32:535 (152535|6,152575|5,152616|0,152616|4,152656|1,152697|2,152737|3,152778|4) -  02:11:778 (131778|2,131818|1,131859|0,131859|6,131899|5,131940|4,131981|3,132021|2) -
23:24 Kawawa: yeah was same thing
23:24 Kawawa: -w-
23:25 Critical_Star: ok really the end here 'w'
23:26 Kawawa: I will say you after I recheck everything
23:26 Kawawa: that what I change
23:26 Kawawa: 'w'
23:26 Critical_Star: alright
23:27 Critical_Star: want me post this now?
23:27 Kawawa: umm maybe after I recheck?
23:27 Critical_Star: sure