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Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo

Deif wrote:

Necesito ayuda para hacer los siguientes gráficos para mi mapa: Spinner-osu, spinner-spin y spinner-clear.

¿Podrías ayudarme? Este es el link del mapa: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31750
Hola o/

Spinner Elements

Avisame si quieres algún cambio o si no te gusta. Por cierto, sugiero hace el 'spinner-metre' un poco más 'brillante' para que sea notable que se están llenando las barras.

Adiós \o
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
S.S.H. <3
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Deif
Muchas gracias Gonzvlo, está todo perfecto ;)

Y aumenté el brillo del spinner-metre, ahora queda bastante mejor.

Verdisphena wrote:

S.S.H. <3
Verdi <3
Daiguren
430 posts
Joined July 2009
Daiguren
yeah..finished,,,quite a long time lol

Download: S.S.H. - Holy Orders (Deif) [Daiguren].osu

btw...plz make the kiai time same in all diffs... : D
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Deif
Added, thanks =)
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Hi Deif

[General]

- From the image you can see that the hit circle have a jagged side on it and it doesn't look so good. This happens cause the hit circle size is bigger then the hit circle overlay thus making the edge of the hit circle is visible. Try to re-size the hit circle to a smaller size then the overlay.
- some of the combo bursts are bad (comboburst-0 & 3) cause part of the image got cropped, maybe you can find another image to use?

[Tails]
Maybe use another name for the diff? Tails has nothing to do with Guilty Gear :o
00:40:930 (1) - the spinner is too long it's not very fun compare to the previous intense part. I highly suggest to end this spinner on 00:41:702 according to the guitar or you can use an iNiS break by remove the spinner then start the break at 00:41:702.
In case you don't know about iNiS break
here's what I mean http://puu.sh/3bn4. To do this just move your cursor to the edge of the break the you can extend/shorten it as you like
04:05:496 (1,1) - the ending is too cruel. I suggest to remove 04:06:488 (1) or shorten the spinner by 1/4

[LKs]
Love the hitsound usage, it's awesome but the spacing is confusing sometimes. Some of them are:
00:15:456 (4,1) - it's predictable cause of the music so I guess this is fine
00:56:810 (4,1) - why not use the same spacing as 00:56:700 (3,4) ?
When it's stick closely to the music it's quite predictable but if it's not, then it's downright unexpected :o
00:39:000 (2) - move this to 00:38:890 then remove 1 repeat. the gap between 1 and 2 doesn't sound right
00:39:331 (1) - move this too 00:39:166 if you do the above pattern then shorten it by 1/4
00:40:820 (x) - add a circle here?
00:41:151 (x) - ^
00:41:371 (B) - same break comment as above
01:31:768 (1) - remove NC
01:35:076 (1,2,1,2) - don't really like the trap here. Maybe make it into the same combo set to 01:34:966 (2)

[Daiguren]
00:28:469 (1) - the whistle-whistle pattern stop are gone from here on. It's a great pattern so why stop there?
00:38:669 (1) - for this one I suggest using 2 spinners. The 1st spinner start from 00:39:055 to 00:40:379 and the 2nd one start from 00:40:820 to 00:41:702. Maybe add a circle in 00:40:599 if you don't like the gap between the 2 spinner
01:01:552 (1) - flow better if you unstack this note
03:38:588 (4) - whoops the repeat is covered by the hitburst of 03:37:926 (4). Try moving the repeat to the side and maybe make it diagonal

That's all from me, being inactive from modding for 4 months have made me dull.
For the other 2 diff try using normal clap more, look at how LKs use the clap, it sounds very great and fit the song.
Good Luck & Star for you
Speedy Cat_old
Speedy Cat_old
xD
senaya
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senaya
Hi :)

[General]
I suggest to remove comboburst-0 since it's cut from both sides and it doesn't look good.
BG.png is HUGE: it's 1,41Mb in size. Compress it in jpg or something..

[LKs]
This one is the hardest to read D:
01:19:196 (3,4) - confusing? only players with superfast reaction will notice that slider is (4) and not (3)
03:05:504 (1) - you might get in trouble with this overlap later
03:47:520 (7) - remove?

[Daiguren]
Liked this one the most. Easier to read than other two.
02:01:764 (3) - won't it better fit music if you remove slider and add a not at 02:01:874 instead?

[Tails]
03:26:898 (2) - this repeat gets hidden under the previous sliders, but i guess it's easy to read that there will be same slider as before.
04:02:628 (4) - i'd suggest to move this slider closer to (3) since in this section all sliders go in patterns by 4 and then you switch to nc.

GG ftw :)
Daiguren
430 posts
Joined July 2009
Daiguren

Sallad4ever wrote:


[Daiguren]
00:28:469 (1) - the whistle-whistle pattern stop are gone from here on. It's a great pattern so why stop there? Ok.fixed
00:38:669 (1) - for this one I suggest using 2 spinners. The 1st spinner start from 00:39:055 to 00:40:379 and the 2nd one start from 00:40:820 to 00:41:702. Maybe add a circle in 00:40:599 if you don't like the gap between the 2 spinnergood idea,but I don't add a circle between the 2 spinners
01:01:552 (1) - flow better if you unstack this note just i think a suddenly stop can make this diff a little harder,but anyway fixed,.
03:38:588 (4) - whoops the repeat is covered by the hitburst of 03:37:926 (4). Try moving the repeat to the side and maybe make it diagonal i use 3 circles to instead

That's all from me, being inactive from modding for 4 months have made me dull.
For the other 2 diff try using normal clap more, look at how LKs use the clap, it sounds very great and fit the song. as you said, N-C is fit the song, but i cant use it very well,so sorry
Good Luck & Star for you

senaya wrote:

[Daiguren]
Liked this one the most. Easier to read than other two. thank you
02:01:764 (3) - won't it better fit music if you remove slider and add a not at 02:01:874 instead? sorry, i will keep my stuffs
thx for mods : D

Download: S.S.H. - Holy Orders (Deif) [Daiguren].osu
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LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

Sallad4ever wrote:


[LKs]
Love the hitsound usage, it's awesome but the spacing is confusing sometimes. Some of them are:

00:15:456 (4,1) - it's predictable cause of the music so I guess this is fine
00:56:810 (4,1) - why not use the same spacing as 00:56:700 (3,4) ? cause this is a new combo
When it's stick closely to the music it's quite predictable but if it's not, then it's downright unexpected :o er:o
00:39:000 (2) - move this to 00:38:890 then remove 1 repeat. the gap between 1 and 2 doesn't sound right
00:39:331 (1) - move this too 00:39:166 if you do the above pattern then shorten it by 1/4
00:40:820 (x) - add a circle here? sure
00:41:151 (x) - ^
00:41:371 (B) - same break comment as above
01:31:768 (1) - remove NC no, this nc is meaningful, or this part would be like a bank of cloud
01:35:076 (1,2,1,2) - don't really like the trap here. Maybe make it into the same combo set to 01:34:966 (2)

senaya wrote:

[LKs]
This one is the hardest to read D:
01:19:196 (3,4) - confusing? only players with superfast reaction will notice that slider is (4) and not (3) oh, this is unrankanble.. im sry
03:05:504 (1) - you might get in trouble with this overlap later ok
03:47:520 (7) - remove?
Download: S.S.H. - Holy Orders (Deif) [LKs].osu
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Deif
"Sallad4ever's mod"

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Deif

[General]

- From the image you can see that the hit circle have a jagged side on it and it doesn't look so good. This happens cause the hit circle size is bigger then the hit circle overlay thus making the edge of the hit circle is visible. Try to re-size the hit circle to a smaller size then the overlay. (I'm trying to fix that issue, which will be solved in further updates)
- some of the combo bursts are bad (comboburst-0 & 3) cause part of the image got cropped, maybe you can find another image to use? (I've modified comboburst-0, so it isn't cropped anymore. But comboburst-3 seems fine to me)

[Tails]
Maybe use another name for the diff? Tails has nothing to do with Guilty Gear :o (The names of the diffies stand for the nicknames of the creators)
00:40:930 (1) - the spinner is too long it's not very fun compare to the previous intense part. I highly suggest to end this spinner on 00:41:702 according to the guitar or you can use an iNiS break by remove the spinner then start the break at 00:41:702. (Remapped)
04:05:496 (1,1) - the ending is too cruel. I suggest to remove 04:06:488 (1) or shorten the spinner by 1/4 (Fixed)

That's all from me, being inactive from modding for 4 months have made me dull.
For the other 2 diff try using normal clap more, look at how LKs use the clap, it sounds very great and fit the song.
Good Luck & Star for you
"senaya's mod"

senaya wrote:

Hi :)

[General]
I suggest to remove comboburst-0 since it's cut from both sides and it doesn't look good. (Already fixed, not removed)
BG.png is HUGE: it's 1,41Mb in size. Compress it in jpg or something.. (Ugh... not atm)

[Tails]
03:26:898 (2) - this repeat gets hidden under the previous sliders, but i guess it's easy to read that there will be same slider as before. (Let's see what other modders say about it)
04:02:628 (4) - i'd suggest to move this slider closer to (3) since in this section all sliders go in patterns by 4 and then you switch to nc. (Moved a little bit)

GG ftw :)
Still fixing some issues, I'll upload everything when I finish them *job stress*

EDIT: Finished that moddings, thank you guys! Uploaded.

I'll try to fix the issue that Sallad pointed out (if I can ;__;)
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
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Deif
Sry for double-post but... why the hell does people spend their pinky stars here? xDD

/me leaves another pinky star lololol
Sodomia
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Joined March 2011
Sodomia
the most song of deif ^^
hitmefast
101 posts
Joined September 2010
hitmefast
general

solve the problem with the preview point pls (you can check it at ur own song page)
make easy, normal and hard diff?
change the .ogg for an mp3
also the .wav's for mp3 XD?

daiguren

put a lead-in?
bpm is 272.080 (4 times checked also in x25 x50 and x75)
offset at 240 if you want the offset there ;p

00:16:117 (1,2) change 1 to 2
01:04:963 (3) make it easy? xd
02:14:318 this slider is unranked

lks

bpm + offset + lead-in?

02:14:777 slider
03:41:676 add hitsound
03:42:558 ^
03:43:219 maybe the same?
03:48:292 ^
03:49:174 maybe too

its a 'bit' similar to the 1º one :O

tails

bpm + offset + lead-in?
nice.
maybe make it a bit less insane :3


cool song, will be nice you add 'easy' diffs so more ppl can enjoy ^^


star~ :3
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
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Deif
"hitmefast's mod"

hitmefast wrote:

general

solve the problem with the preview point pls (you can check it at ur own song page) (The preview point is set at 2:53:153 in all the diffs, dunno what problem are you referring at)
make easy, normal and hard diff? (This map is for approval, not for ranked... so easier diffies aren't really necessary)
change the .ogg for an mp3 (Why? You can use either ogg or mp3)
also the .wav's for mp3 XD? (Same as before)

tails

bpm + offset + lead-in? (The timing change you propose is really small, I'll wait for a 2nd opinion. This map dones't need any lead-in seconds, as the notes begin at 00:07:295 in my diffy)
nice.
maybe make it a bit less insane :3 (LKs' is much more difficult than mine ;p)


cool song, will be nice you add 'easy' diffs so more ppl can enjoy ^^


star~ :3
No changes in my diffy. If you guys want to re-check timing or change someting in your maps, just tell me.
Daiguren
430 posts
Joined July 2009
Daiguren

hitmefast wrote:

daiguren

put a lead-in?
bpm is 272.080 (4 times checked also in x25 x50 and x75)
offset at 240 if you want the offset there ;p

00:16:117 (1,2) change 1 to 2
01:04:963 (3) make it easy? xd
02:14:318 this slider is unranked
Are you sure you are modding my diff? ;_;
hitmefast
101 posts
Joined September 2010
hitmefast

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

hitmefast wrote:

daiguren

put a lead-in? 0 lead-in
bpm is 272.080 (4 times checked also in x25 x50 and x75) cheked
offset at 240 if you want the offset there ;p cheked

lks

00:16:117 (1,2) change 1 to 2
01:04:963 (3) make it easy? xd
02:14:318 this slider is unranked
Are you sure you are modding my diff? ;_;
ups :p
its from lks sry daiguren >_<
Mercurial
Mercurial


5.10... WTF?
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Snepif
I want this approved now lol. I thought I had already given you a star... but I didn't o.O.. so here it is!
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
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Topic Starter
Deif
HP Drain was reduced by 1 in [Tails] as happy30 suggested, ty~

EDIT: Not anymore 5.10 star difficulty lol
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
  1. The background is too much colorful which makes the gameplay much harder, at least for me. I'd suggest to reduce the brightness of image (or change it to more calm one).
[Tails]
  1. Only one thing, the jump notes at very end are little too much crazy in compare to rest of map imo. I'm not complaining here, buuut i'd make those jumps smaller a little.
But great stage anyways. :3

[Daiguren]
  1. 02:40:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't know why but i don't like this part. It's a bit comfusing.
Nothing serious here too :D Good stage to practice 2-finger tapping.

[LKs]
I don't really like this one hm. I won't type here some specific issues, because there is no mistakes here, just style that i don't like. I kinda can't see what's going on when playing this one xD But i won't be so complaning here...
...buuut c'mon 1/4 streams on 270BPM? D:

Sooo, I generally really like the map ^_^ big star from me. Just please do something with this BG image xD
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
[Tails]
01:05:522 (1) - Add a new combo? I'm not 100% sure on this one.


[Daiguren]
00:12:148 (1,2) - Remove new combo on (1) and add a new combo on (2) so it matches the previous combos.
00:24:719 (2) - Add whistle, finish, and clap to this note like you did to (1) and the end of the spinner.

I guess the rest is fine. Too hard to mod. Anywho, it loos fun.
Here is a STAR.
Daiguren
430 posts
Joined July 2009
Daiguren

ShaggoN wrote:

[Daiguren]
  1. 02:40:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't know why but i don't like this part. It's a bit comfusing.o:
Nothing serious here too :D Good stage to practice 2-finger tapping.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Daiguren]
00:12:148 (1,2) - Remove new combo on (1) and add a new combo on (2) so it matches the previous combos.kk
00:24:719 (2) - Add whistle, finish, and clap to this note like you did to (1) and the end of the spinner. k
Download: S.S.H. - Holy Orders (Deif) [Daiguren].osu
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
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Topic Starter
Deif
"ShaggoN's mod"

ShaggoN wrote:

General
  1. The background is too much colorful which makes the gameplay much harder, at least for me. I'd suggest to reduce the brightness of image (or change it to more calm one).
(Okay, reduced brightness a little bit)

[Tails]
  1. Only one thing, the jump notes at very end are little too much crazy in compare to rest of map imo. I'm not complaining here, buuut i'd make those jumps smaller a little.
(I'm sure people will deal with them :3)

But great stage anyways. :3

Sooo, I generally really like the map ^_^ big star from me. Just please do something with this BG image xD
"Kiddo-Kun's mod"

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Tails]
01:05:522 (1) - Add a new combo? I'm not 100% sure on this one. (IDK...)

I guess the rest is fine. Too hard to mod. Anywho, it loos fun.
Here is a STAR.
Thank you guys!
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
hrrrnnngggghhhhh.

LKs
IS THIS ABLE FOR HUMAN COMSUMPTION
00:29:241 (2) - This is being covered by the previous (3) slider, as so ->>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124588
02:49:624 (9) - Add new combo

Dai:
01:20:961 (2) - NO ME GUSTA.

I don't know what the hell just happened, so here's a random image

LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

CDFA wrote:

LKs
IS THIS ABLE FOR HUMAN COMSUMPTION
00:29:241 (2) - This is being covered by the previous (3) slider, as so ->>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124588 i see, it is hard to read, but there is no way that can be better
02:49:624 (9) - Add new combo sure
Download: S.S.H. - Holy Orders (Deif) [LKs].osu
Daiguren
430 posts
Joined July 2009
Daiguren

CDFA wrote:

Dai:
01:20:961 (2) - NO ME GUSTA. what's the meaning of it? O_o
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
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Topic Starter
Deif
Translation time: NO ME GUSTA = I don't like it (in Spanish)
mekadon_old
mekadon_old
272.04BPM WTF WOOOOOOOARRRRRRRGH

Tails

01:09:051 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - <3
02:26:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That's slightly confusing when first played. I REALLY thought it's a 1/2 spaced note.. Try making sliders or something; is neater imo
02:59:329 (1) - Could have been replaced with a spinner, but whatever

LKs

My tablet literally came when I tested this diff lol
00:39:000 (2) - Doesn't fit at all imo orz
01:34:966 (2,1,2,1) - Same as ^, but try reducing the volume so that it sounds better
03:35:500 (10) - move it somewhere else plz

Daiguren

02:40:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - confusing aaaaa ;A;

Sadly I can only pass LKs and Daiguren on HT orz ;___;

Congrats on making one of the hardest maps existed on osu!;

Star
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

mekadon wrote:

LKs

My tablet literally came when I tested this diff lol
00:39:000 (2) - Doesn't fit at all imo orz fixed
01:34:966 (2,1,2,1) - Same as ^, but try reducing the volume so that it sounds better
03:35:500 (10) - move it somewhere else plz sure

Sadly I can only pass LKs and Daiguren on HT orz ;___;

Congrats on making one of the hardest maps existed on osu!; I guess my diff still has big space to be harder ;)

Star
Download: S.S.H. - Holy Orders (Deif) [LKs].osu
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Deif
"mekadon's mod"

mekadon wrote:

272.04BPM WTF WOOOOOOOARRRRRRRGH (boom!)

Tails

01:09:051 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - <3
02:26:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That's slightly confusing when first played. I REALLY thought it's a 1/2 spaced note.. Try making sliders or something; is neater imo (I'd let the double-pentagon shape by now, if any other think that it's confusing, I'll change it)
02:59:329 (1) - Could have been replaced with a spinner, but whatever (It's the same situation as 01:30:224 (1,2,3))

Sadly I can only pass LKs and Daiguren on HT orz ;___;

Congrats on making one of the hardest maps existed on osu!;

Star
Thanks Alice <3

EDIT: @CDFA Best mod post of 2011 xD
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hey.

I checked the folder,and there're some issues:

First of all,combobursts are a bit too wide.
388 pixels width would be much better.

And the other thing is BG.
As it was used in the storyboard,it should obey 800 x 600 size rules for storyboarding.

Otherwise seems fine.

[Tails]
00:18:764 (1) - Whyyy it's so close to previous object? :| There's a 1/1 space..Place 00:18:323 (2) a bit farther or vertically flip 00:18:764 (1,2) instead.
00:51:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is wrong. Distance between (1) & (2) and (2) & (3) shouldn't be equal.
02:07:498 (4,5) - It's so confusing and plays really bad.Add a note between them.
03:53:806 (2) - Object is almost totally hidden by the slidertrack.It seems readable,but not it sure if it's allowed.

[Daiguren]
01:44:560 (4) - Unstack it,otherwise spacing seems a bit confusing.
02:26:687 (5) - New combo.
02:40:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Oh,this is so awkward. I suggest you to rebuild this pattern a little or at least reduce this spacing,otherwise it looks out of the whole map.
03:39:249 (2,3) - This is 1/2 jump? Meh..I think it's a bit overmapped..This one,such jump before and after.

[LKs]
00:10:824 (1) - Why is it here? Fix spacing.
00:12:147 (4,5,6,1,2) - Why are they so messed up? :| Could you clear up it a bit?
00:14:794 (1,2) - I'd stack them. Otherwise,spacing looks a bit wrong.
01:01:111 (1,2) - Too close to previous object.
02:14:335 (1) - Hey,that was unrankable.

Eh..so insane.

Good luck,Deif.
Star~
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

IceBeam wrote:

[LKs]
00:10:824 (1) - Why is it here? Fix spacing. here is here, anti-jump
00:12:147 (4,5,6,1,2) - Why are they so messed up? :| Could you clear up it a bit? sry but i cant= =
00:14:794 (1,2) - I'd stack them. Otherwise,spacing looks a bit wrong. fixed
01:01:111 (1,2) - Too close to previous object. fixed
02:14:335 (1) - Hey,that was unrankable. omg, only if there is 1 person who can't read or can't get this slider, i will fix it.

Eh..so insane.

Good luck,Deif.
Star~
Download: S.S.H. - Holy Orders (Deif) [LKs].osu
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
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NatsumeRin
[General]
it's too hard to test so i can't make sure, but i think BPM 272.05, offset 236 may be a better timing. You could try to find someone to double check it? But now it sounds really late to me at the last.

[Tails]
00:31:777 (1,2) - I think the music turns at 00:31:998 (3), so this curve seems at a strange place for me... consider this?

00:51:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - i suggest not to use such a spacing, though you have a group of notes with same beat before, but it's more readable than this group, could you arrange them in a more clear way?
01:46:987 (1) - how about try this, because it's more a 3/2+3/2+1/1 beat here, 4 sliders is not the best way to express that. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/126605
02:07:829 (5) - if could, move it further... really easy to misread this as 1/2

[Daiguren]
00:31:998 - i think you should keep to use default-hitwhistle here...? this change sounds a bit sudden
01:26:916 (7) - stack this with 8 would be make it more smoothly...?
01:43:458 (5,7,8) - add clap?
02:11:909 (5,6,7,8) - just personal feeling, but a very fast song doens't fit this kind of hidden notes.
02:41:243 (4,7) - new combo

[LKs]
00:15:235 (2,3) - 我觉得既然要停顿,索性把2叠在1上,234拉开一点(也和后面的1/4拉出距离)
00:21:411 (1,2等) - 这样如何(注意改成了1/3)

00:40:820 (1,2,3,4) - 我怎么觉得这么缩
00:54:053 (5,6,7) - 不舒服
01:27:247 (9,10,1,2,3) - 不管note选择还是排列都觉得略不对劲,作为一个小节起音就用slider尾滑过会不会不太好
02:13:894 (8,9,10) - 略丑
02:38:266 (8,9,10) - 换折返slider?这种速度还要分两个三连有点勉为其难?
02:44:000 (3,4,5,6) - 你把4叠到现在1上5换到现在4上大家领你的情(我猜)
02:51:168 (16,1) - 虽然有new combo但我还是觉得一紧张这个就能按下去了,BPM毕竟太高
02:56:351 (9,10,1,2,3) - 和前面相同
03:41:014 (2,2) - 我觉得该继续whistle pace然后之后一小节的第四次再断

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Daiguren
430 posts
Joined July 2009
Daiguren

IceBeam wrote:

[Daiguren]
01:44:560 (4) - Unstack it,otherwise spacing seems a bit confusing.
02:26:687 (5) - New combo. fixed
02:40:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Oh,this is so awkward. I suggest you to rebuild this pattern a little or at least reduce this spacing,otherwise it looks out of the whole map.
03:39:249 (2,3) - This is 1/2 jump? Meh..I think it's a bit overmapped..This one,such jump before and after.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Daiguren]
00:31:998 - i think you should keep to use default-hitwhistle here...? this change sounds a bit sudden fixed
01:26:916 (7) - stack this with 8 would be make it more smoothly...? fixed
01:43:458 (5,7,8) - add clap? fixed
02:11:909 (5,6,7,8) - just personal feeling, but a very fast song doens't fit this kind of hidden notes.
02:41:243 (4,7) - new combo fixed

yeah,thank you Rin and ice

Download: S.S.H. - Holy Orders (Deif) [Daiguren].osu

about Timing: wait for Deif to change or not XD
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[LKs]
00:15:235 (2,3) - 我觉得既然要停顿,索性把2叠在1上,234拉开一点(也和后面的1/4拉出距离) 也好
00:21:411 (1,2等) - 这样如何(注意改成了1/3) 听着是很好 但spacing没法配置了
ATTACH[117.png]
00:40:820 (1,2,3,4) - 我怎么觉得这么缩 fixed
00:54:053 (5,6,7) - 不舒服
01:27:247 (9,10,1,2,3) - 不管note选择还是排列都觉得略不对劲,作为一个小节起音就用slider尾滑过会不会不太好 额 懒得改了
02:13:894 (8,9,10) - 略丑 fixed
02:38:266 (8,9,10) - 换折返slider?这种速度还要分两个三连有点勉为其难? k
02:44:000 (3,4,5,6) - 你把4叠到现在1上5换到现在4上大家领你的情(我猜) 那也= =
02:51:168 (16,1) - 虽然有new combo但我还是觉得一紧张这个就能按下去了,BPM毕竟太高 这真没地方弄了
02:56:351 (9,10,1,2,3) - 和前面相同
03:41:014 (2,2) - 我觉得该继续whistle pace然后之后一小节的第四次再断 后面的声音特小
Download: S.S.H. - Holy Orders (Deif) [LKs].osu
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Deif
"IceBeam's mod"

IceBeam wrote:

Hey.

I checked the folder,and there're some issues:

First of all,combobursts are a bit too wide.
388 pixels width would be much better. (Resized)

And the other thing is BG.
As it was used in the storyboard,it should obey 800 x 600 size rules for storyboarding. (Resized)

Otherwise seems fine.

[Tails]
00:18:764 (1) - Whyyy it's so close to previous object? :| There's a 1/1 space..Place 00:18:323 (2) a bit farther or vertically flip 00:18:764 (1,2) instead. (Flipped 00:18:764 (1,2,1,2) instead)
00:51:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is wrong. Distance between (1) & (2) and (2) & (3) shouldn't be equal. (You're right~)
02:07:498 (4,5) - It's so confusing and plays really bad. Add a note between them. (I hope this way is right)
03:53:806 (2) - Object is almost totally hidden by the slidertrack.It seems readable,but not it sure if it's allowed. (It can be intuitive to hit IMO)

Good luck,Deif.
Star~
"NatsumeRin's mod"

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
it's too hard to test so i can't make sure, but i think BPM 272.05, offset 236 may be a better timing. You could try to find someone to double check it? But now it sounds really late to me at the last. (I'll ask in #modhelp)

[Tails]
00:31:777 (1,2) - I think the music turns at 00:31:998 (3), so this curve seems at a strange place for me... consider this? (I really like this idea)
[attachment=1:30b42]116.png[/attachment:30b42]
00:51:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - i suggest not to use such a spacing, though you have a group of notes with same beat before, but it's more readable than this group, could you arrange them in a more clear way? (Done)
01:46:987 (1) - how about try this, because it's more a 3/2+3/2+1/1 beat here, 4 sliders is not the best way to express that. (I like it :) )
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/126605
02:07:829 (5) - if could, move it further... really easy to misread this as 1/2 (Already changed with previous mod)
Thank you very much, your help is really appreciated =)

Full submission because of size changes in some images. Gotta ask someone else if that timing is correct~
Destroyer_old_1
Destroyer_old_1
Rly Nice Map and song ! Nice Work! :D
i very like it! ^-^
you get an star :P
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Kite
Kinda crazy but good
Also, 02:23:158 - this section should be 1/3

Dai's diff is badass and Tails toooo
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
hmm, I got BPM: 272.060 Offset: 240 ... (really hard to test...I have to set AR at 8 lol..

Star for SSH~...
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