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Touno Sakura - PRIZM/CIRCUiT

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xNyamx
298 posts
Joined August 2015
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xNyamx
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年3月4日 at 19:08:15

Artist: Touno Sakura
Title: PRIZM/CIRCUiT
Source: ナツイロココロログ ～Happy Summer～
Tags: eroge opening ALVINE Hearts joker- Akitoshi
BPM: 155
Filesize: 8033kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Normal (1.86 stars, 171 notes)
  2. Easy (1.45 stars, 149 notes)
  3. Insane (3.97 stars, 374 notes)
  4. joker's Hard (2.92 stars, 237 notes)
Download: Touno Sakura - PRIZM/CIRCUiT
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ready for mod
Easy (BG : Kotone) : me
Normal (Kisara) : Akitoshi
Hard (Rin) : joker-
Insane (Kuon) : me

BG http://hearts.amuse-c.jp/rorologhs/gallery.html (R18)
OP video(official) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=37GX-yOvHjk
Meta http://hearts-staff.ldblog.jp/archives/50482030.html

HardのBGが神
Last edited by xNyamx , edited 13 times in total.
Kotori-Chan
496 posts
Joined February 2014
Kotori-Chan
modding because boobies and those girls are just too cute
oh and FIRST !

Easy


00:03:163 (4) - x400 y 96 for perfect blanket,dont forget to readjust 00:02:776 (3) - !
00:28:324 (5,1) - i know ai mod doesnt say something,but ds looks kinda weird here
00:53:098 (3,1,2) - not sure if overlap like this is fine in easy

cant find something rhthym wise,nice diff !

Normal


more boobies <3

00:29:873 (2) - dont really get it what this is mapped to 00:30:260 - and would be nice if you make that clickable :(
00:54:260 - really should be clickable !! not good to have a that strong sound on a slider end
01:07:615 - add a circle ?
01:10:518 - would better place a 1/1 slider here,suits better to vocals

Hard


00:13:615 (1,1) - stack correctly ?
00:26:389 (2) - been lazy here or something ? that slider doesnt suit to vocals or music at all :>
you can do that better~
00:29:098 (1) - shouldnt it start here ? 00:28:905 -
00:30:647 (4) - should start here 00:30:453 -

Cute boobies insane


00:16:711 (1,2) - not really sure about that jump here,but i think its fine
00:29:098 (1) - should start here 00:28:905 -
00:30:647 (1) - should start here 00:30:453 -
00:32:582 - strong vocal sound like that really should be clickable
00:43:227 - a slider here suits alot better
00:45:357 - slider for vocals
00:46:905 - slider again~ those jumps or circles you made just doesnt really represent that vocal sounds well
01:05:873 - ^^^^
01:08:195 - ^^^^^^
01:18:260 - ^^^^^^
01:07:227 (3,4,5) - jumps like this are for example fine as they follow vocals correctly, but thats not the case in the points i said earlier :(

00:57:357 (2,3,4) - a bit overspaced imo


rest seems quite fine,good luck with that map !
really cute nice song
may the boobies be with you~
oh and take my stars :3 <3
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Kotori-Chan wrote:

modding because boobies and those girls are just too cute
oh and FIRST !

Hard


00:13:615 (1,1) - stack correctly ? ya
00:26:389 (2) - been lazy here or something ? that slider doesnt suit to vocals or music at all :> i take drum sound cuz this part is calm
you can do that better~
00:29:098 (1) - shouldnt it start here ? 00:28:905 - same
00:30:647 (4) - should start here 00:30:453 - i know what you mean but i wanna leep it, but if other point out it, i'll fix
thanks mod~

update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: rororog.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64615
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 96453
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:PRIZM/CIRCUiT
TitleUnicode:PRIZM/CIRCUiT
Artist:Touno Sakura
ArtistUnicode:冬乃桜
Creator:xNyamx
Version:joker's Hard
Source:ナツイロココロログ ～Happy Summer～
Tags:eroge 琉姫アルナ Ryuki_aruna とむ。 ALVINE joker- Akitoshi
BeatmapID:1199017
BeatmapSetID:565057

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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409,16,65873,2,0,P|389:51|385:104,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,201,66260,6,0,P|454:166|410:136,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,89,66647,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,212,66840,2,0,L|296:315,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,363,67227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,283,67421,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,283,67615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,146,67808,6,0,P|152:158|81:106,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,50,68389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,89,68582,2,0,P|304:50|319:-5,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,115,68969,2,0,P|403:154|404:206,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,282,69357,5,2,0:0:0:0:
335,282,69550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
247,198,69744,2,0,P|201:186|145:185,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,266,70131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,266,70227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,266,70324,2,0,L|109:354,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,260,70711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,179,70905,6,0,B|78:75|78:75|114:110,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,30,71486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,111,71679,2,0,L|240:210,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,254,72066,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,254,72260,1,2,0:0:0:0:
369,137,72453,6,0,P|440:131|504:177,2,150,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,188,73421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,78,73615,1,8,0:0:0:0:
221,78,74002,6,0,L|163:84,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,131,74389,2,0,L|151:136,3,37.5,8|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,182,74776,2,0,L|129:188,3,37.5
168,235,75163,2,0,L|117:240,3,37.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,285,75550,6,0,P|198:315|274:295,1,112.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,228,76131,2,0,P|346:198|270:218,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,225,76518,2,0,L|230:143,2,75,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,326,77098,6,0,P|76:341|15:289,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,229,77679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,134,77873,2,0,P|16:81|19:39,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,143,78260,2,0,P|188:138|262:172,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,163,78647,6,0,P|258:206|272:249,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,298,79034,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,184,79227,2,0,P|346:146|355:110,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,68,79615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,181,79808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
498,181,80002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,184,80195,6,0,P|266:162|202:218,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,285,80776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,187,80969,2,0,P|114:151|111:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,206,81357,2,0,P|20:247|34:296,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,285,81744,6,0,P|210:326|293:300,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,229,82324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,229,82518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,300,82711,1,2,0:0:0:0:
447,300,82905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,187,83098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,187,83679,6,0,P|506:105|479:41,1,150,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,16,84260,2,0,L|298:15,2,75,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,105,84840,6,0,L|172:103,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,146,85421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,240,85615,2,0,P|162:220|198:213,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,337,86002,2,0,P|249:356|286:363,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,238,86389,6,0,L|326:183,7,37.5,6|0|0|0|8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,176,87163,2,0,L|381:121,7,37.5,2|0|0|0|8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,114,87937,6,0,P|470:125|530:93,1,101.249996910095,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,47,88518,2,0,P|312:36|252:68,1,101.249996910095,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,81,88905,2,0,L|241:173,2,67.4999979400635,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,139,89486,6,0,L|155:278,1,134.999995880127,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,342,90260,2,0,L|339:203,1,134.999995880127,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,139,91034,2,0,P|82:160|-8:137,2,134.999995880127,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,67,92002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,132,92195,2,0,L|269:207,1,67.4999979400635,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,270,92582,6,0,P|408:260|466:302,1,134.999995880127,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,105,93357,2,0,L|361:119,1,134.999995880127,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,139,94131,2,0,P|172:229|201:294,2,134.999995880127,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,69,95098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,135,95292,2,0,L|308:226,1,67.4999979400635,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,252,95679,6,0,P|332:290|253:283,1,134.999995880127,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,233,96453,2,0,P|130:201|221:202,1,134.999995880127,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,117,97227,2,0,L|387:277,2,134.999995880127,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,42,98195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,106,98389,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,106,98582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,41,98776,6,0,L|146:49,7,33.7499989700318,2|0|0|0|8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,91,99550,2,0,L|98:100,7,33.7499989700318,2|0|0|0|8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,133,100324,6,0,P|93:217|112:256,1,101.249996910095,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,312,100905,2,0,P|229:263|227:212,1,101.249996910095,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,166,101292,2,0,L|305:155,2,67.4999979400635,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,178,101873,5,4,0:3:0:0:


@にゃむさん
tagsなんですが、opening入れたほうがいいです。あとブランド名であるHeartsもいれてもいいかもしれません。
あとあんまり作詞作曲者とかvocal以外のartistを入れるのは主流ではないですが、そこもおまかせします
xNyamx
298 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
xNyamx

Kotori-Chan wrote:

modding because boobies and those girls are just too cute
oh and FIRST !

Easy


00:03:163 (4) - x400 y 96 for perfect blanket,dont forget to readjust 00:02:776 (3) - ! keep
00:28:324 (5,1) - i know ai mod doesnt say something,but ds looks kinda weird here　ok
00:53:098 (3,1,2) - not sure if overlap like this is fine in easy keep

cant find something rhthym wise,nice diff ! Thanks


Cute boobies insane


00:16:711 (1,2) - not really sure about that jump here,but i think its fine little change
00:29:098 (1) - should start here 00:28:905 - keep 00:29:098 - ここはvocalと合わせて後ろの音を取るべきだなと思いました。
00:30:647 (1) - should start here 00:30:453 - keep　個人的に↑を白線から始めたので、統一感持たせた方が違和感なくいいかなと、　（vocal地味にある気がする）
00:32:582 - strong vocal sound like that really should be clickable nice
00:43:227 - a slider here suits alot better keep
00:45:357 - slider for vocals ok
00:46:905 - slider again~ those jumps or circles you made just doesnt really represent that vocal sounds well
01:05:873 - ^^^^
01:08:195 - ^^^^^^
01:18:260 - ^^^^^^ keep
01:07:227 (3,4,5) - jumps like this are for example fine as they follow vocals correctly, but thats not the case in the points i said earlier :(

00:57:357 (2,3,4) - a bit overspaced imo ok


rest seems quite fine,good luck with that map !
really cute nice song
may the boobies be with you~
oh and take my stars :3 <3

Thanks for mod & stars^^
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xNyamx
298 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
xNyamx

joker- wrote:

@にゃむさん
tagsなんですが、opening入れたほうがいいです。あとブランド名であるHeartsもいれてもいいかもしれません。
あとあんまり作詞作曲者とかvocal以外のartistを入れるのは主流ではないですが、そこもおまかせします
okです。　更新しました。
yotm
161 posts
Joined October 2014
yotm
m4m~

[Easy]
  1. 00:01:228 (1,2) - こういう組になってるやつは少しでも形が違うと目立つのでしっかりコピーするのがいいと思います。Insaneでも同じようなとこが気になったので、一通り確認してもらえればと思います。
  2. 00:09:744 (5) - イントロ部分の他のスライダーよりbendが小さくて直線みたいに見えるので、適度に曲げませんか?
  3. 00:13:615 - 00:26:002 で雰囲気ががらっと変わっているイメージなので、hitsoundの音量を変えるのが良いと思います。
    　特に複雑な音のピアノがあるので、そこに押されて譜面がより単調に見えてしまっています。
    　同じような理由で、00:38:389、01:04:711などなど・・・にも音量変化欲しいと感じました。あと全体的に音小さい気がします。
  4. 00:51:163 (1,2) - が中途半端な重なり方でちょっと嫌です。少し曲げるか適度に重ねたい気がしました。
  5. 01:15:550 (3) - 強い音なのでhitsoundほしいです。終点と同じような音とかでいいと思います。
  6. 01:41:873 (5) - この１打、Easyにおいてサークルとして拾うほど強い音でもない気がします。拾うとして01:41:486 (4) - スライダーにしてその終点でつけるぐらいでもいいかなーと個人的に。
[Akitoshi's Normal]
  1. 00:08:969 (3) - 00:02:776 (3)と同じhitsoundで良いはずですが、意図的でないなら違和感ありました。
    　同じく01:29:486 (1) - も
[joker's Hard]
  1. 00:06:647 (4,5,6) - ここだけリズム違うのでスペーシング変えるのもありかもしれないです、初見プレイのときここでミスったのでただの私怨mod。
  2. 00:32:002 (7,1) - もうちょい近くても良い気がします、stackで流れ切れて00:32:195 - に強い音があるわけでもないので。
  3. 01:01:615 (1,2,3) - なんかクイってなってますが、スライダーから流れるflowで良い気がします。
  4. 01:05:486 (3,4,1) - ここで対称性のある配置は違和感がありました。01:17:873 (3,4,1) - と差別化させたかった意図とかもある気がしますが、同じ音取りでもいいと感じました。
  5. 01:13:421 (2,3) - ここピタッと止まっててかっこいいので、な↓つ↑が⤵、という音程に合わせた上下運動で配置させるのもありかと思います。
  6. 01:22:324 (2,3,4,5) - 曲の中で一番盛り上がってるとこだと思ったので(音程が高いとか、Cメロ繰り返しの音程変化とかで)四角配置とかで難易度上げて良い気がします。
[Insne]
  1. https://puu.sh/tTHfY/e5cde2df74.png　←気になったので最初の十数秒のみ別にしたところ、この難易度でした。難易度推移が極端で、サビが印象に残らないのもあるのでイントロ部分簡単にするべきだと思います。
  2. hitsoundの音量はMAX70ぐらいで調整するのが良いと思います、全体的に小さく感じます。
  3. 00:13:615 - ここで音量下げる必要はない気がします。
  4. 00:32:582 (2) - hitsound抜けてる気がします。
  5. 00:40:324 (2) - 意図的にやってるのはわかりましたが、とくに強調するべき音ではない+ここ一箇所だけなので、違和感がありました。
  6. 00:49:518 (2) - 周りと同じようにfinishつけたいです。00:50:195 (4,6) - ^
一部雑な指摘になってますが許してください(._.)　細かいとこはあまり見てないです(もしかしたら追加modするかも)
お互い頑張りましょう～
xNyamx
298 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
xNyamx

yotm wrote:

m4m~

[Easy]
  1. 00:01:228 (1,2) - こういう組になってるやつは少しでも形が違うと目立つのでしっかりコピーするのがいいと思います。Insaneでも同じようなとこが気になったので、一通り確認してもらえればと思います。自分なりに曲げてみました。
  2. 00:09:744 (5) - イントロ部分の他のスライダーよりbendが小さくて直線みたいに見えるので、適度に曲げませんか?ほい
  3. 00:13:615 - 00:26:002 で雰囲気ががらっと変わっているイメージなので、hitsoundの音量を変えるのが良いと思います。
    　特に複雑な音のピアノがあるので、そこに押されて譜面がより単調に見えてしまっています。
    　同じような理由で、00:38:389、01:04:711などなど・・・にも音量変化欲しいと感じました。あと全体的に音小さい気がします。　完全に忘れてました。
  4. 00:51:163 (1,2) - が中途半端な重なり方でちょっと嫌です。少し曲げるか適度に重ねたい気がしました。　ok
  5. 01:15:550 (3) - 強い音なのでhitsoundほしいです。終点と同じような音とかでいいと思います。　あるとおもいます！
  6. 01:41:873 (5) - この１打、Easyにおいてサークルとして拾うほど強い音でもない気がします。拾うとして01:41:486 (4) - スライダーにしてその終点でつけるぐらいでもいいかなーと個人的に。りょうかいですー
[Insne]
  1. https://puu.sh/tTHfY/e5cde2df74.png　←気になったので最初の十数秒のみ別にしたところ、この難易度でした。難易度推移が極端で、サビが印象に残らないのもあるのでイントロ部分簡単にするべきだと思います。　わかりました。 変更します。
  2. hitsoundの音量はMAX70ぐらいで調整するのが良いと思います、全体的に小さく感じます。　全体的に10上げました。
  3. 00:13:615 - ここで音量下げる必要はない気がします。 k
  4. 00:32:582 (2) - hitsound抜けてる気がします。　ほんまや
  5. 00:40:324 (2) - 意図的にやってるのはわかりましたが、とくに強調するべき音ではない+ここ一箇所だけなので、違和感がありました。　変えました。
  6. 00:49:518 (2) - 周りと同じようにfinishつけたいです。00:50:195 (4,6) - ^
(2)(6)につけました。

一部雑な指摘になってますが許してください(._.)　細かいとこはあまり見てないです(もしかしたら追加modするかも)
お互い頑張りましょう～
ありがとうございますー。
TequilaWolf
279 posts
Joined November 2013
TequilaWolf
mod
Insane-

00:26:389 (2) - stack on 00:26:002 (1) - ? feels better

00:27:550 (1) - try use 1/2 slider+circle

00:34:518 (4,5,6) - use stream? like this http://puu.sh/uhSap/3124b3b635.png

00:53:292 (7,8) - too close. maybe like this? http://puu.sh/uhSj2/3754977c5c.jpg same 00:56:389 (8,9) -

01:12:840 (2,3) - increase spacing

01:23:292 - add note maybe
#
xNyamx
298 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
xNyamx

TequilaWolf wrote:

mod
Insane-

00:26:389 (2) - stack on 00:26:002 (1) - ? feels better keep

00:27:550 (1) - try use 1/2 slider+circle ok

00:34:518 (4,5,6) - use stream? like this http://puu.sh/uhSap/3124b3b635.pngkeep

00:53:292 (7,8) - too close. maybe like this? http://puu.sh/uhSj2/3754977c5c.jpg same 00:56:389 (8,9) - ok

01:12:840 (2,3) - increase spacing ok

01:23:292 - add note maybe keep
#
thank you mod^^
Harmango
129 posts
Joined August 2015
Harmango
Hey M4M from #modreq

Easy
00:03:163 (4) - Move this note up and avoid overlap on the slider
00:11:292 (2) - Avoid overlap unless thats the aspect of the map that you're aiming for
00:13:227 (4) - ^
00:24:066 (2) - ^
00:25:615 (4) - Idk if this is just me but when you listen to this note, it sounds offbeat however there is a beat there but the sound of the beat isn't strong enough, try adjusting what beat this note is placed on
01:26:389 (1) - You could angle the ending of this slider upwards so it flows better and it wont overlap
01:29:098 (4) - I feel like there isn't a beat cause its very quiet
01:41:486 (4) - In my opinion I would have this note at the tick right before the one its currently on, so instead of the white tick have it on the blue one which is right before the white tick.


Insane
01:08:969 (5,6) - Flip these two notes for better flow
01:12:066 (6) - Move this note a bit lower, would look better and the spacing would be better in my opinion
01:19:808 (4,5) - Try to obtain the same distance between these two notes and these ones 01:19:615 (3,4)
01:23:679 (1) - Flow would look better if the slider was a bit curved from the end
01:39:937 (10) - rotate the note a bit more to the right from the end so that it would feel better going to the next note

Everything else seems good to me in these two difficulties! Good luck :D
Btw here is my beatmap :) t/514350
xNyamx
298 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
xNyamx

harmanjit102 wrote:

Hey M4M from #modreq

Easy
00:03:163 (4) - Move this note up and avoid overlap on the slider ok
00:11:292 (2) - Avoid overlap unless thats the aspect of the map that you're aiming for ok
00:13:227 (4) - ^ keep
00:24:066 (2) - ^ keep
00:25:615 (4) - Idk if this is just me but when you listen to this note, it sounds offbeat however there is a beat there but the sound of the beat isn't strong enough, try adjusting what beat this note is placed on keep sry
01:26:389 (1) - You could angle the ending of this slider upwards so it flows better and it wont overlap little changed
01:29:098 (4) - I feel like there isn't a beat cause its very quiet keep
01:41:486 (4) - In my opinion I would have this note at the tick right before the one its currently on, so instead of the white tick have it on the blue one which is right before the white tick. changed


Insane ok^^
01:08:969 (5,6) - Flip these two notes for better flow
01:12:066 (6) - Move this note a bit lower, would look better and the spacing would be better in my opinion
01:19:808 (4,5) - Try to obtain the same distance between these two notes and these ones 01:19:615 (3,4)
01:23:679 (1) - Flow would look better if the slider was a bit curved from the end
01:39:937 (10) - rotate the note a bit more to the right from the end so that it would feel better going to the next note

Everything else seems good to me in these two difficulties! Good luck :D
Btw here is my beatmap :) t/514350　　　　　done
Thanks!!
xNyamx
298 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
xNyamx
insane 少しスページング修正しましたー。
brdzxh
181 posts
Joined June 2013
brdzxh
hi from my queue

not good at lower diffs but i hope its fine

Easy
00:03:163 (4,5) - blanket
00:06:647 (5) - could make into a repeat slider or something similar if u want
00:24:453 (3) - should like this

00:25:421 - slider here and remove 00:25:615 (4) -
00:49:227 (3) - maybe repeat slider here too
00:51:163 (1,2) - blanket
just look for more blankets u can do and some of those repeat sliders i mentioned

Akitoshi's Normal
00:19:034 (5,6) - maybe make some of these sections with short repeat sliders
00:24:453 (4) - nc maybe
- looks good, cant really say anything else here

joker's Hard
00:06:647 (4,5) - i dont think you should ignore the kicks in the background
00:14:776 (4,1) - spacing seems a bit too big
00:14:969 (1,3) - blanket?
00:24:453 (1,2) - i would make these kicks or whatever single circles instead considering theres no sound on 00:25:324 but im not sure if thats okay for a hard difficulty
00:26:002 (1,2) - try to do something like this instead

00:34:518 (2) - wouldn't ignore sound here either
00:39:550 (4) - ctrl+g maybe
00:41:098 (2) - rotate 90 degrees and move it to somewhere around the original position
00:46:131 (1,2,3) - consistent spacing
01:00:066 (1,2,3) - same as above
01:08:582 (3) - i think I would curve this a bit more to the right and maybe move 01:08:969 (4) - to blanket it
01:07:421 (5,6) - you can unstack here because there are changes in the vocals
- plays fine, can look a bit better

Insane
questionable background
00:02:002 (5,6) - i would curve these in another direction because the music changes - ctrl+j maybe?
00:03:550 (5,6) - same here
00:07:034 (9) - you could make this into a slider
00:12:453 (5,6) - decrease spacing here
00:12:840 (6) - nc?
00:14:002 (2,1) - fix stack
00:19:034 (5,6) - shouldnt ignore the bass sound in the background at this star rating as its a pretty clear sound
00:22:518 (6,2) - blanket maybe and then make 00:22:131 (5) - similar to 00:22:518 (6) - follow the theme
00:26:389 (2,3) - blanket
00:34:518 (4,5,6) - kick sound here
00:40:324 (2) - missing clap hitsound
00:40:711 (4) - would make a straight slider upwards here
00:50:776 - should be clickable
00:53:679 - ^ you can also make 00:53:486 (8) - into a slider
00:59:873 (6,1) - could also blanket
01:30:260 (4,5) - mentioned this in the beginning
01:31:034 (1,3) - blanket
also maybe reduce AR a bit

might have forgotten some stuff because im a bit tired, but that should be everything that i could see, good luck with the map!
xNyamx
298 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
xNyamx

brdzxh wrote:

hi from my queue

not good at lower diffs but i hope its fine

Easy
00:03:163 (4,5) - blanket
00:06:647 (5) - could make into a repeat slider or something similar if u want
00:24:453 (3) - should like this

00:25:421 - slider here and remove 00:25:615 (4) - keep
00:49:227 (3) - maybe repeat slider here too
00:51:163 (1,2) - blanket no
just look for more blankets u can do and some of those repeat sliders i mentioned ok change 01:01:615 (4) -

Insane
questionable background SAFE!!!!
00:02:002 (5,6) - i would curve these in another direction because the music changes - ctrl+j maybe? hmm... thanks suggetion. but keep for now
00:03:550 (5,6) - same here ^
00:07:034 (9) - you could make this into a slider emphasize doubles
00:12:453 (5,6) - decrease spacing here
00:12:840 (6) - nc?
00:14:002 (2,1) - fix stack
00:19:034 (5,6) - shouldnt ignore the bass sound in the background at this star rating as its a pretty clear sound okay add circle 00:19:324 -
00:22:518 (6,2) - blanket maybe and then make 00:22:131 (5) - similar to 00:22:518 (6) - follow the theme
00:26:389 (2,3) - blanket
00:34:518 (4,5,6) - kick sound here yes, its true. but keep for now.
00:40:324 (2) - missing clap hitsound
00:40:711 (4) - would make a straight slider upwards here
00:50:776 - should be clickable
00:53:679 - ^ you can also make 00:53:486 (8) - into a slider i want to make little break.
00:59:873 (6,1) - could also blanket
01:30:260 (4,5) - mentioned this in the beginning sry keep for now
01:31:034 (1,3) - blanket
also maybe reduce AR a bit →8.5

might have forgotten some stuff because im a bit tired, but that should be everything that i could see, good luck with the map!

no reply = normal fix

Thanks!!
kwk
572 posts
Joined May 2010
kwk
from my q
can you add an r18 warning to your bg link in your description... :?

[Easy]
  1. maybe cs 3.2 so you have a slight gap between your notes so it looks a bit cleaner? It's still under 1.5*
  2. 01:12:066 (3,4) - can you avoid overlap here?
  3. looks fine
[Akitoshi's normal]
  1. 00:05:098 (2) - 00:06:647 (5) - 00:11:292 (2) - not sure if its intentional but drum sampleset?
  2. 01:07:808 (1,2,3,4) - curve this a bit more smoothly?
[joker's hard]
  1. 00:20:969 (4,1) - blanket properly?
  2. 00:25:034 (2) 01:16:131 (2) - maybe circle here is better? i think its easier to grasp the rhythm
  3. 00:39:163 (3,4) - dont think this fits in with the rest of the maps style, change patterning a bit?
  4. 00:56:776 (6,1) - i think keep similar spacing to 00:53:679 (6,1) - would be good
  5. 01:05:873 (4,1) - maybe increase spacing slightly here for emphasis on 1?
  6. looks fine
[insane]
easy bg :) normal bg :) hard bg :) insane bg :!:
  1. try ar8?
  2. 00:04:131 (7,1) - i think spacing here should be bigger than 00:04:324 (1,2) - since you are emphasing 1 and not 2
  3. 00:05:873 (1) - finish? and same thing ^
  4. 00:02:582 (7,1,2,3) - you have good spacing change here but you dont use it again for 00:08:775 (7,1,2,3) - which is unfortunate i think
  5. 00:18:453 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this pattern? http://puu.sh/ulPXh/e42ea5d516.png i think its more natural movement
  6. 00:26:002 - 00:32:195 - i think this entire section would work better with a lot smaller ds so the next section 00:32:195 - stands out a lot more. 00:51:163 - do the same as what you did here 00:51:163 -
  7. 0:48:066 (2,3,4,5) - spacing...? looks very strange
  8. 01:08:582 (4,5,6) - move 5 a bit so it looks a bit neater? http://puu.sh/ulQyI/9898b9909f.png
  9. 01:26:002 (5) - finish
  10. 01:29:292 - check your hitsounding in this section, i think your missing a lot of claps
gl
xNyamx
298 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
xNyamx

kwk wrote:

from my q
can you add an r18 warning to your bg link in your description... :? ok

[Easy]
  1. maybe cs 3.2 so you have a slight gap between your notes so it looks a bit cleaner? It's still under 1.5* keep for mow sry
  2. 01:12:066 (3,4) - can you avoid overlap here?
  3. looks fine
[insane]
easy bg :) normal bg :) hard bg :) insane bg :!: SAFE!!
  1. try ar8?
  2. 00:04:131 (7,1) - i think spacing here should be bigger than 00:04:324 (1,2) - since you are emphasing 1 and not 2
  3. 00:05:873 (1) - finish? and same thing ^
  4. 00:02:582 (7,1,2,3) - you have good spacing change here but you dont use it again for 00:08:775 (7,1,2,3) - which is unfortunate i think
  5. 00:18:453 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this pattern? http://puu.sh/ulPXh/e42ea5d516.png i think its more natural movement
  6. 00:26:002 - 00:32:195 - i think this entire section would work better with a lot smaller ds so the next section 00:32:195 - stands out a lot more. 00:51:163 - do the same as what you did here 00:51:163 - little change
  7. 0:48:066 (2,3,4,5) - spacing...? looks very strange hmm.. i think good flow. but little change
  8. 01:08:582 (4,5,6) - move 5 a bit so it looks a bit neater? http://puu.sh/ulQyI/9898b9909f.png lilttle change
  9. 01:26:002 (5) - finish
  10. 01:29:292 - check your hitsounding in this section, i think your missing a lot of claps no
gl
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