Meramipop - Secret Desire - Dyes Remix -

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_MiaoFUuU_
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月18日 at 23:46:34

Artist: Meramipop
Title: Secret Desire - Dyes Remix -
Source: 東方神霊廟 ~ Ten Desires.
Tags: シークレットデザイア 凋叶棕 霍青娥 デザイアドライブ 東方神霊庙 ~ Ten Desires 東方Project 上海アリス幻樂団 touhou project team shanghai alice
BPM: 174
Filesize: 15124kb
Play Time: 05:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Desire Drive (5.52 stars, 1684 notes)


Download: Meramipop - Secret Desire - Dyes Remix -
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[Kamiya]
你的滑条拉的真tm带劲

[Merami Poppu]

00:11:304 (1) - 这里开始就开坑会不会太早了啊。
00:20:270 (1) - whistle
00:20:960 (1) - ^
00:21:649 (1) - ^
00:27:856 (1,2) - 打着不顺手 有种强制慢速的感觉 建议把间距拉长点00:27:684 (2,1) - 这里间距也一样 或者我建议你把00:27:684 (2) - 改成note连打贴后面的1slider 后面的都一样
01:39:753 (1,2,3) - 间距再小点
02:01:477 (2,1) - 间距拉开些
02:12:684 (1,2) - 这里ctrl+g?
04:53:373 (1) - 这里开始可以选择逐渐拉大滑条sv 单个的1.8x感觉单调了


05:37:511 (1) - 说实话这里是不是偷懒啊~!自己说都能大跳的 不过可以简单的再放几个note放几个滑条啊
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

[Kamiya] wrote:

你的滑条拉的真tm带劲

[Merami Poppu]

00:11:304 (1) - 这里开始就开坑会不会太早了啊。 节奏是1/8我也很绝望啊
00:20:270 (1) - whistle
00:20:960 (1) - ^
00:21:649 (1) - ^
00:27:856 (1,2) - 打着不顺手 有种强制慢速的感觉 建议把间距拉长点00:27:684 (2,1) - 这里间距也一样 或者我建议你把00:27:684 (2) - 改成note连打贴后面的1slider 后面的都一样 小re
01:39:753 (1,2,3) - 间距再小点 叠起来了
02:01:477 (2,1) - 间距拉开些
02:12:684 (1,2) - 这里ctrl+g? re
04:53:373 (1) - 这里开始可以选择逐渐拉大滑条sv 单个的1.8x感觉单调了 懒了我


05:37:511 (1) - 说实话这里是不是偷懒啊~!自己说都能大跳的 不过可以简单的再放几个note放几个滑条啊 如你所愿,已塞爆圈圈
多谢四萌dalao送摸~
yf_bmp
Tangled Desire
  1. 感觉有的梗没放开 总体可以
  2. 底音可以变换
  3. 00:22:166 (2) - 往下放,168x380左右
  4. 00:23:718 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这种可以更带感,比如可以根据音调来调每组的大小 类似的都看一遍吧
  5. 00:27:856 (1,2) - 这种建议不要用直滑条带过 类似的剩下的
  6. 00:51:822 (2) - 没必要在这起头
  7. 00:52:684 (2,3) - 很奇怪 并不舒服
  8. 00:54:925 (1,2,3) - ctrl+j +逆时针45°比现在其实看着好
  9. 01:02:856 (1) -
  10. 01:03:718 (1,2) -
  11. 01:05:442 (1,2,1,2) - 可以做点不一样的
  12. 01:06:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 用滑条做这一段的收尾也许更好
  13. 01:18:201 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 可以做点更好的
  14. 01:31:304 (1,2,3,4) - 缩小这四个的距离会比现在好
  15. 01:34:753 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一样 有更好的方案替代,这个不经玩 剩下还有
  16. 01:37:511 (1,2,3) - 可以做点不一样的
  17. 01:40:270 (1) - 3/4
  18. 01:42:339 (1,2,3,4) -
  19. 01:55:442 (1,2,3) - 换个方向
  20. 01:48:546 (1,2,3) -
  21. 01:50:787 (6,7) - 感觉过于拘束
  22. 02:11:994 (1,2) - 不好
  23. 02:18:891 - 02:28:546 - 我觉得这段不和气氛 或许改一下音效也可
  24. 02:41:304 (2,1,2) - 02:41:994 (3,1) - 这两个之间不一样就感觉很随意。。后面的间隔并不好
  25. 第二段kiai参考第一段摸
  26. 03:25:097 (1,1,1,1) - 空的其实很怪
  27. 03:33:373 (1) - 3/4+超高速
  28. 03:36:132 (1) -
  29. 03:38:546 (1) - 然而这个是unrankable的
  30. 03:38:891 (1) -
  31. 03:43:891 (1,1) - 空的很怪 或者首位重叠比较好
  32. 03:56:477 (1,2,3) - 节奏不好 再加上后面空的1/2
  33. 03:59:235 (1,2,3) -
  34. 04:13:028 (1,2,1,2,1) - 很突兀。。
  35. 剩下参考前面的
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

yf_bmp wrote:

Tangled Desire
  1. 感觉有的梗没放开 总体可以
  2. 底音可以变换
  3. 00:22:166 (2) - 往下放,168x380左右 flow没什么问题
  4. 00:23:718 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这种可以更带感,比如可以根据音调来调每组的大小 类似的都看一遍吧
  5. 00:27:856 (1,2) - 这种建议不要用直滑条带过 类似的剩下的
  6. 00:51:822 (2) - 没必要在这起头 这里我直接放弃跟人声了
  7. 00:52:684 (2,3) - 很奇怪 并不舒服 这里根据人声速度下还好吧
  8. 00:54:925 (1,2,3) - ctrl+j +逆时针45°比现在其实看着好 这里保留
  9. 01:02:856 (1) -
  10. 01:03:718 (1,2) -
  11. 01:05:442 (1,2,1,2) - 可以做点不一样的
  12. 01:06:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 用滑条做这一段的收尾也许更好 保留一下,短滑条打不出感觉啊
  13. 01:18:201 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 可以做点更好的
  14. 01:31:304 (1,2,3,4) - 缩小这四个的距离会比现在好
  15. 01:34:753 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一样 有更好的方案替代,这个不经玩 剩下还有 暂时想不出什么梗,就这样好了
  16. 01:37:511 (1,2,3) - 可以做点不一样的
  17. 01:40:270 (1) - 3/4这里加了切指有点不舒服
  18. 01:42:339 (1,2,3,4) -
  19. 01:55:442 (1,2,3) - 换个方向
  20. 01:48:546 (1,2,3) -
  21. 01:50:787 (6,7) - 感觉过于拘束 还好保留
  22. 02:11:994 (1,2) - 不好
  23. 02:18:891 - 02:28:546 - 我觉得这段不和气氛 或许改一下音效也可
  24. 02:41:304 (2,1,2) - 02:41:994 (3,1) - 这两个之间不一样就感觉很随意。。后面的间隔并不好 还好,打着切指没问题
  25. 第二段kiai参考第一段摸
  26. 03:25:097 (1,1,1,1) - 空的其实很怪 这里就当休息一下啦
  27. 03:33:373 (1) - 3/4+超高速 这里改了,直接用距离表达出来
  28. 03:36:132 (1) -
  29. 03:38:546 (1) - 然而这个是unrankable的
  30. 03:38:891 (1) -
  31. 03:43:891 (1,1) - 空的很怪 或者首位重叠比较好
  32. 03:56:477 (1,2,3) - 节奏不好 再加上后面空的1/2 主要不想加太多短滑条,好玩就好
  33. 03:59:235 (1,2,3) -
  34. 04:13:028 (1,2,1,2,1) - 很突兀。。隔了两下,不过flow和直连一样的
  35. 剩下参考前面的
谢谢爱抚大师送的摸,改了好多,re了一部分~ :)
Narcissu
爺爺,能不能用一個單詞當難度名……

爺爺,能不能不要種草,還是水草

你可以新加一個顏色把灰色空出來,然後所有突然出現的減速長滑像00:28:546 (1) - 都用灰色。平時跳過灰色

00:23:028 - 01:56:822 - sc2 whistle太吵了,似乎不會有人排滿八分梆子...

01:34:753 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 01:45:787 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這個可以變速從慢到快,因為人聲音調和音量都是遞增。加上你用了很多次所以建議換點不同款式,像01:45:787 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 03:19:580 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 用弧線最後的04:53:373 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 用折線等。不然有一種偷工減料的感覺

02:43:028 (1) - 這個NC我覺得還是放串開頭好,排版上面就是一起的了。要麼02:42:856 (3,4) - 換成疊起來的就會在排版上面有區分度像02:48:546 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 。另外這裡和04:16:822 (4,1,2) - 應該用一樣的節奏
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Narcissu wrote:

爺爺,能不能用一個單詞當難度名…… 嗨呀,我直接用东方BGM的曲名做难度名好了

爺爺,能不能不要種草,還是水草 好好好,kiai改了删了一些,欲望加速那段听爱抚插大小分组。

你可以新加一個顏色把灰色空出來,然後所有突然出現的減速長滑像00:28:546 (1) - 都用灰色。平時跳過灰色

00:23:028 - 01:56:822 - sc2 whistle太吵了,似乎不會有人排滿八分梆子... 还好吧,偷你的音效www

01:34:753 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 01:45:787 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這個可以變速從慢到快,因為人聲音調和音量都是遞增。加上你用了很多次所以建議換點不同款式,像01:45:787 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 03:19:580 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 用弧線最後的04:53:373 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 用折線等。不然有一種偷工減料的感覺 既然你们都这样说这part就re了,偷懒一下都不行。

02:43:028 (1) - 這個NC我覺得還是放串開頭好,排版上面就是一起的了。要麼02:42:856 (3,4) - 換成疊起來的就會在排版上面有區分度像02:48:546 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 。另外這裡和04:16:822 (4,1,2) - 應該用一樣的節奏 那我直接NC头
谢水仙摸,回头摸你的~
Hanazawa Kana
老哥,稳
我今天网易云日推第一首就是这个
vick
hi hi hi _MiaoFUuU_~

Desire Drive


General: maybe AR9.3 and OD8.5 ?

00:17:166 (2) - i think that the overlap would look better from the other side of the circle, something like this http://puu.sh/u90kt/c87997be8e.jpg
but you would have to move 00:17:684 (2) - so yeah, your choice
00:45:960 (5,6) - hmm, i think this 2 are a little bit too hard to read, too much stacking in that slider, maybe something like this would work ? http://puu.sh/u90s7/95e37a1756.jpg
00:48:718 (5,6) - same
00:55:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why so many DS between these ? the song is pretty calm in this part
01:34:753 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - HOYLLLLL thats fucking amazing, im in love with that
01:55:615 (2) - maybe is a little awkward so maybe you shouldnt change this but what do you think about a ctrl g in this one ?
02:03:546 (2) - this one is really, i mean REALLY hard to read, maybe you will need to change it at some point
02:07:856 (1) - i mean, if the song is getting "slower" why the SV is higher ?
04:03:373 (3,4,5) - hmm i dont know if stacking that triple looks good cuz is a space between this and the next slider and the notes are too close, the spacing should be bigger in this one to dont missread
04:13:028 (1,2,3,4,1) - whoah


Amazing map, i really liked it
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

vick wrote:

hi hi hi _MiaoFUuU_~

Desire Drive


General: maybe AR9.3 and OD8.5 ?

00:17:166 (2) - i think that the overlap would look better from the other side of the circle, something like this http://puu.sh/u90kt/c87997be8e.jpg
but you would have to move 00:17:684 (2) - so yeah, your choice
00:45:960 (5,6) - hmm, i think this 2 are a little bit too hard to read, too much stacking in that slider, maybe something like this would work ? http://puu.sh/u90s7/95e37a1756.jpg
00:48:718 (5,6) - same
00:55:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why so many DS between these ? the song is pretty calm in this part because 00:54:925 (1,2,3) - speed has been fast,the flow will Uncomfortable if the DS is too little
01:34:753 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - HOYLLLLL thats fucking amazing, im in love with that haha thanks~
01:55:615 (2) - maybe is a little awkward so maybe you shouldnt change this but what do you think about a ctrl g in this one ? i let if all ctrl g
02:03:546 (2) - this one is really, i mean REALLY hard to read, maybe you will need to change it at some point
02:07:856 (1) - i mean, if the song is getting "slower" why the SV is higher ? because 1/2 has Drums spot
04:03:373 (3,4,5) - hmm i dont know if stacking that triple looks good cuz is a space between this and the next slider and the notes are too close, the spacing should be bigger in this one to dont missread the flow look not bad,so keep
04:13:028 (1,2,3,4,1) - whoah www


Amazing map, i really liked it

vick,thank you for loving it haha ;w;
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

老哥,稳
我今天网易云日推第一首就是这个
xixixi.........
Binguo
变速太挫0.05不管是外观和手感都没有什么区别不如不放 要搞搞大点比如说00:23:718 (1,2,1,2) - 1.5 1.6 1.7 1.8 然后00:24:408 (1,2,1,2) - 1.8 1.7 1.6 1.5


00:25:270 (1) - 请不要直接带过 好歹弄个折返什么的 不怂的话最好单点 小DS位移 或者原地单点
00:27:856 (1,2,3) - 这里应该加速重点强调然后扭出大J吧 因为这里和其他地方不同并且音乐偏重
00:33:546 (2,1,2) - 试试1/8滑条
00:46:304 (1) - 0.5试试看
00:49:925 (1,2) - 请加速
01:40:960 (1,2,1,2) - ↑
02:07:856 (1) - 丑
04:12:684 (1,2) - 感觉好别扭 向上吧还有间距拉大
05:09:925 (1) - 丑

重复的懒提 简单来说比之前好很多 成为大佬之后不要忘记我
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Misaki-Mei wrote:

变速太挫0.05不管是外观和手感都没有什么区别不如不放 要搞搞大点比如说00:23:718 (1,2,1,2) - 1.5 1.6 1.7 1.8 然后00:24:408 (1,2,1,2) - 1.8 1.7 1.6 1.5


00:25:270 (1) - 请不要直接带过 好歹弄个折返什么的 不怂的话最好单点 小DS位移 或者原地单点
00:27:856 (1,2,3) - 这里应该加速重点强调然后扭出大J吧 因为这里和其他地方不同并且音乐偏重
00:33:546 (2,1,2) - 试试1/8滑条
00:46:304 (1) - 0.5试试看
00:49:925 (1,2) - 请加速
01:40:960 (1,2,1,2) - ↑
02:07:856 (1) - 丑
04:12:684 (1,2) - 感觉好别扭 向上吧还有间距拉大
05:09:925 (1) - 丑

重复的懒提 简单来说比之前好很多 成为大佬之后不要忘记我
破图怎么做大佬?


多谢果神送摸,改了ID都认不出了。就改两点,其他没太大分别,有些慢速的有电音。
Hey lululu
==.....

為何那麼神?
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Hey lululu wrote:

==.....

為何那麼神?
因为修仙233
Septembre
Hello,

Some metadata corrections :

Title シークレットデザイア- Dyes Remix -
English Title Secret Desire - Dyes Remix -
Romanised Artist : Meramipop
Source : 東方Project
Tags : Add ESQUARIA (circle), Recollection (album of this song), Dyes Iwasaki (remixer), ルオン / Luon (arranger), あおまふ / Aomafu (Lyrics)

Source : http://lydiagrave.net/esquaria/special/recollection/
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Septembre wrote:

Hello,

Some metadata corrections :

Title シークレットデザイア- Dyes Remix -
English Title Secret Desire - Dyes Remix -
Romanised Artist : Meramipop
Source : 東方Project
Tags : Add ESQUARIA (circle), Recollection (album of this song), Dyes Iwasaki (remixer), ルオン / Luon (arranger), あおまふ / Aomafu (Lyrics)

Source : http://lydiagrave.net/esquaria/special/recollection/
Thank you for metadate XD :)
Lobelia
说真的,教我作图吧
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

[ Abhor ] wrote:

说真的,教我作图吧
都要没动力打开osu了_(:з」∠)_
Lavender
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