Hi, late M4M from my queue :^)
Good luck!
Illumination
Really nice map, I believe it can be your first ranked map pretty easily now (sorry for shitmod, not much to say imo)- 01:12:089 (3) - Why doesn't it have the same shape as 01:11:383 (1,2) - ? They are mapped to the same sound so it's a bit weird to suddenly break the consistency imo, same for 01:17:736 (3) -
- 01:52:147 (1,1,2) - The spacing here is really confusing to read and awkward imo, currently the spacing makes the player think that 01:52:677 (2) - is actually on the blue tick here 01:52:589 instead of the white tick, so increase the spacing between 01:52:500 (1,2) - or reduce the spacing between 01:52:147 (1,1) - , same for 04:07:677 (1,1,2) -
- 01:53:736 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Here it clearly sounds like you're following the vocals so it doesn't make sense to put 01:55:147 (2) - on the white tick instead of here 01:54:971 just for the sake of not missing the big white tick imo, same for some similar patterns
- 02:10:589 (4) - It would be better if it was stacked on 02:10:677 (1) - since you did it here 02:10:236 (2,3) - and because the strongest sound is here 02:10:677 (1) - so it's a nice way to emphasize it
- 02:11:559 (11,12,1) - The spacing doesn't seem to be consistent here and the way how 02:11:736 (1) - is placed gives an awkward flow so moving it somewhere like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7399463 would be a cool solution (yes, you'll have to fix the blanket with 02:12:089 (1) - )
Good luck!