Hello! sorry for the wait
Illumination- 01:00:442 (2) - This could be much more balanced both visually and playability-wise if you put them about the same distance between (1) & (3). Something like this
http://puu.sh/vcs1h/4360868fd0.jpg ofc you can make it much more neater if you like
- 01:09:794 (1,2) - & 01:12:618 (1,2,3,4) - musically is about the same, yet you map those two differently. The best compromise I think is to change the later into 2 1/2 slider
- 01:14:912 - whistle would fit perfectly here. If you agree with this you can put whistles on any similar section
- 01:52:500 (1) - too close to the next circle imo, try placing it around 443|378 or wherever it has spacing around 1,3-1,4 to the next circle
- 02:07:500 (5,6,1) - & 02:09:971 (1,2,3) - I think the music & drum is not strong enough to warrant such a big spacing. I know, the slider leniency will make it feels not as big as it looks, but still ._.
- 02:08:206 (2,3) - based on how you place pattern on this section, I certainly feel that this need more spacing between them
http://puu.sh/vct8c/11f3eab7a5.jpg- 02:57:971 (1,2) - you could break them into 4 repeaters to be honest as there're strong beat on the red tick. It'll have more impact that way
http://puu.sh/vctjk/39d5189b29.jpg- 03:01:500 (1) - if you want, you can shorten this slider by 1/ 2, and then place another long slider on 03:04:324 - till 03:05:736 -. That will make this section feel less hollow, because it just feels weird to have lots of vocal note left out uncovered by something
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7761289 (ignore the design)
- 03:18:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - compared to the previous one, I feel this pattern wasted the prominent drum sound on 03:19:147 - and 03:20:559 -. I'll suggest you to keep it similar to 03:15:618 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - or even create new pattern that fully utilize the sound that the music provide like
http://puu.sh/vctPE/41327d4917.jpg (normal hitclap placed on (3) head)
Alright, I can't play a single thing afterwards, so I wouldn't be able give proper feedback on that.
- 04:08:030 (1,2) - too close, same thing with 01:52:500 (1) -
- 04:53:030 (1) - This are not necessarily reverse on anything. It would be better if you change this into one long slider instead of putting reverse on it
quite nice actually, I like this
hope this helps a bit, Good Luck!