M4M from your queue. Hi.
[Illumination]
00:06:079 - map this, there not being an object makes it really awkward, especially on HD. Also considering that this beat is as strong as 00:05:902 (3,4) - these two
00:15:432 (4) - the return arrow here is on a completely silent beat, could say it is overmapping.
00:17:373 - same
Vocal sliders:
First slider - 00:23:373 - the slider here (and other sliders in this section) don't represent the vocals. For example, if you want to fix this slider, end it on 00:24:432 - and place a hitcircle on 00:24:608 -
Second slider - end it on 00:26:902 - and place a hitcircle on 00:27:255 -
Third slider - end on 00:30:079 - and a hitcircle on 00:30:255 -
Fourth slider - end on 00:32:549 - and another slider FROM 00:32:902 - TO 00:33:608 - and a hitcircle on 00:33:961 (4) -
//Explanation for Fourth slider: Adding a second slider will follow the vocals better while the slider end and a hitcircle will accompony the piano sounds on 00:33:608 - 00:33:961 -
Oh, and by the way, by CTRL+G and a lil bit of moving the slider around, you can make 00:23:373 (1) - this slider a question mark together with a hitcircle later.
I will explain this part to you later if you don't understand.
Let's continue.
01:25:490 (1) - this hard stream is rather unappealing, big difficulty jump from a full minute of 4* mapping. You lost the word "Build" in "build-up"
01:30:784 - remove applause because this part of the map is not that difficult. Leave the applause only for the second kiai for max hype
01:52:490 (1,2) - many players will read this as a triple.
02:10:579 (4) - delet dis
02:14:902 (1) - I'd suggest Slider Tick Rate 1 if you want to do this kind of sliders, many people will break here for being unlucky rather than lack of skill.
03:01:490 - I remapped you this section, check this (only account rhythm I use, placement is completely random)
https://youtu.be/XrDpH-6vovQ03:24:873 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I dislike this kind of stuff because the spacing remains the same yet there are two pauses in the highlighted interval
03:27:696 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - same
03:56:637 (1,2) - I'd CTRL+G this. Strong beat is on 03:56:637 - I'd emphasise that with a hitcircle. 03:56:814 - this isn't that strong. That is completely subjective, though.
04:09:608 (2) - I'd make this part like this:
http://puu.sh/tMAgU/daad909830.png double-triple plays like ass, trust me. Try to avoid it. This goes for this entire part of the song, as you use your own concept multiple times (also rather subjective, but your way plays worse).
04:37:137 - same as the beginning
04:42:784 - same
04:48:432 - this doesnt have such strong a beat, but since you should map all the others this way, place a hitcircle here too
04:57:343 - - end the spinner here (or shorten it in another way).
That's it, my map to mod:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/492069