SEKAI NO OWARI - RPG

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Topic Starter
gary00737
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年3月4日 at 18:32:03

Artist: SEKAI NO OWARI
Title: RPG
Tags: J-POP TOY'S FACTORY クレヨンしんちゃん バカうまっ!B級グルメサバイバル!!
BPM: 135
Filesize: 2495kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.34 stars, 126 notes)
  2. Hard (3.49 stars, 289 notes)
  3. Insane (3.84 stars, 321 notes)
  4. Normal (2.08 stars, 197 notes)


Download: SEKAI NO OWARI - RPG
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hello , i am gary.

Hope you like it and give me some advice.

thank you.
milr_
Hello! from #modreq

[General]
Remove Tag "SEKAI NO OWARI"
Because this tag is the same as the artist name.

[Normal]
You may remap normal diff, because Distance spacing is not constant.

NC : ①
remove NC : ②

  • 00:04:665 (5) - ①
    00:09:776 (5) - ① , 00:10:443 (1) - ②
    00:13:331 (5) - ① , 00:13:998 (1) - ②
    00:24:221 (2) - ①
    00:32:887 (4) - ① 00:33:554 (1) - ②
    00:36:443 (6) - ① 00:36:887 (1) - ②
    00:39:998 (4) - ① 00:40:665 (1) - ②
    00:43:553 (4) - ① 00:44:220 (1) - ②


[Hard]

  • 00:02:665 (5) - ① , 00:03:332 (1) - ②
    00:06:220 (5) - ① , 00:06:887 (1) - ②
    00:09:776 (4) - ① , 00:10:443 (1) - ②
    00:13:332 (4) - ① 00:13:998 (1) - ②
    00:13:332 (4,5) - This spacing is short. You will have to increase this spacing
    00:16:665 (5) - ① 00:17:332 (1) - ②
    00:24:221 (3) - ①
    00:25:776 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - it is not good to be gathered. Players may be annoyed this pattern. :?
    00:29:332 (6) - ① 00:29:776 (1) - ②
    00:32:887 (6) - ① 00:33:332 (1) - ②


This map is fine. I hope to be a ranked map. Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
gary00737

milr_ wrote:

Hello! from #modreq

[General]
Remove Tag "SEKAI NO OWARI"
Because this tag is the same as the artist name.

[Normal]
You may remap normal diff, because Distance spacing is not constant.

NC : ①
remove NC : ②

  • 00:04:665 (5) - ①
    00:09:776 (5) - ① , 00:10:443 (1) - ②
    00:13:331 (5) - ① , 00:13:998 (1) - ②
    00:24:221 (2) - ①
    00:32:887 (4) - ① 00:33:554 (1) - ②
    00:36:443 (6) - ① 00:36:887 (1) - ②
    00:39:998 (4) - ① 00:40:665 (1) - ②
    00:43:553 (4) - ① 00:44:220 (1) - ②


[Hard]

  • 00:02:665 (5) - ① , 00:03:332 (1) - ②
    00:06:220 (5) - ① , 00:06:887 (1) - ②
    00:09:776 (4) - ① , 00:10:443 (1) - ②
    00:13:332 (4) - ① 00:13:998 (1) - ②
    00:13:332 (4,5) - This spacing is short. You will have to increase this spacing
    00:16:665 (5) - ① 00:17:332 (1) - ②
    00:24:221 (3) - ①
    00:25:776 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - it is not good to be gathered. Players may be annoyed this pattern. :?
    00:29:332 (6) - ① 00:29:776 (1) - ②
    00:32:887 (6) - ① 00:33:332 (1) - ②


This map is fine. I hope to be a ranked map. Good Luck :)
Thank you for modding!! :)
Melsoon
Hi from #modreq ^^

  1. 00:02:415 (2) - more space between the sliders
  2. 00:02:859 (3) - curve it a little bit more (hold shift to temporarily deactivate the grid snap)
    you'll get something like that, but try to make it better
  3. 00:04:193 (4) - add a circle here for following the rhythm
  4. 00:05:526 (2) - mmooore space!
  5. 00:05:970 (3,1,2) - make a "blanket" here
  6. 00:07:304 (2,1) - and here
  7. 00:09:526 (3,4,5) - space
  8. 00:11:748 (1,2,1,2) - rearrange it, please (like this and this for example)
  9. 00:15:304 (1,2,3,4) - rearrange it into something like that
  10. 00:17:081 (1,2) - add some space between these sliders
  11. 00:18:859 (3,4) - *click*
  12. 00:20:637 (5) - add some space between the circle and the slider
  13. 00:24:193 (1,2) - add some space; also you can make a blanket
  14. 00:25:970 (3,4,5) - more space; also you can make it like this so they'll be like mirrored
  15. 00:27:304 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - more space between all of these circles and sliders
  16. 00:32:193 (2,3,4) - some space
  17. 00:34:859 (1,2,3) - ^
  18. 00:36:637 (1,2,3,4) - rearrange like this
  19. 00:38:415 (1,2,3,4) - some space
  20. 00:41:081 (5,1) - blanket?
  21. 00:41:970 (1,2) - some space, blanket
    (add some space everywhere to make the map look more accurate)
  22. 00:57:081 (4,5) - you can make a blanket here
  23. 01:01:081 (4,5) - move it and ^
  24. 01:21:970 (3) - curve this to make it look like this 01:20:193 (1)
  25. 01:31:304 (3,4) - fix the blanket
  26. 01:33:526 (1,2) - make a blanket


I tried :)
I liked the map! Good luck in mapping!

sorry this is my first mod aaaaAAaAaAah don't blame me :D:D
Topic Starter
gary00737

Melsoon wrote:

Hi from #modreq ^^

  1. 00:02:415 (2) - more space between the sliders
  2. 00:02:859 (3) - curve it a little bit more (hold shift to temporarily deactivate the grid snap)
    you'll get something like that, but try to make it better
  3. 00:04:193 (4) - add a circle here for following the rhythm
  4. 00:05:526 (2) - mmooore space!
  5. 00:05:970 (3,1,2) - make a "blanket" here
  6. 00:07:304 (2,1) - and here
  7. 00:09:526 (3,4,5) - space
  8. 00:11:748 (1,2,1,2) - rearrange it, please (like this and this for example)
  9. 00:15:304 (1,2,3,4) - rearrange it into something like that
  10. 00:17:081 (1,2) - add some space between these sliders
  11. 00:18:859 (3,4) - *click*
  12. 00:20:637 (5) - add some space between the circle and the slider
  13. 00:24:193 (1,2) - add some space; also you can make a blanket
  14. 00:25:970 (3,4,5) - more space; also you can make it like this so they'll be like mirrored
  15. 00:27:304 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - more space between all of these circles and sliders
  16. 00:32:193 (2,3,4) - some space
  17. 00:34:859 (1,2,3) - ^
  18. 00:36:637 (1,2,3,4) - rearrange like this
  19. 00:38:415 (1,2,3,4) - some space
  20. 00:41:081 (5,1) - blanket?
  21. 00:41:970 (1,2) - some space, blanket
    (add some space everywhere to make the map look more accurate)
  22. 00:57:081 (4,5) - you can make a blanket here
  23. 01:01:081 (4,5) - move it and ^
  24. 01:21:970 (3) - curve this to make it look like this 01:20:193 (1)
  25. 01:31:304 (3,4) - fix the blanket
  26. 01:33:526 (1,2) - make a blanket


I tried :)
I liked the map! Good luck in mapping!

sorry this is my first mod aaaaAAaAaAah don't blame me :D:D
Thank you for modding !!! :)

Although I did not follow to changes.

[Normal]
You may remap normal diff, because Distance spacing is not constant.
Example: 0.8x Distance spacing
I have also asked others.
Modifications will make the beatmap neat.
but i still follow the rules.

sorry about my ENG. google translate is my friend.
_Shironeko_
21:29 _Shironeko_: hello xD
21:29 *_Shironeko_ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1192416 SEKAI NO OWARI - RPG]
21:30 _Shironeko_: do you want i mod this map in chat ?
21:30 gary00737: hello
21:30 _Shironeko_: cuz there are 4 diffs :< too lazy to mod in the thread
21:30 gary00737: ok , but my eng not good
21:30 _Shironeko_: same
21:30 _Shironeko_: im vnese
21:30 _Shironeko_: my english is bad too
21:30 _Shironeko_: just understand enough :(
21:30 gary00737: XD
21:31 gary00737: ok
21:31 _Shironeko_: but i dont know how to copy this converstation and put it in the thread :( i really need kudosu
21:32 gary00737: copy and paste ?
21:32 _Shironeko_: yes :
21:33 _Shironeko_: so that i can get kudosu from you
21:33 gary00737: oh
21:34 gary00737: try it :D
21:34 _Shironeko_: t/549094 like that,from hikan
21:34 gary00737: is ok
21:35 _Shironeko_: 00:01:082 (1,2,3,4) - these down 1 grid
21:35 _Shironeko_: 00:02:415 (5) - new combo
21:36 _Shironeko_: 00:03:970 (4,5) - down 1 grid too
21:36 gary00737: sorry , whick diff?
21:36 _Shironeko_: last diff
21:36 gary00737: which))))
21:36 gary00737: ook
21:36 _Shironeko_: 00:05:303 (3,4) - down 1 grid
21:36 _Shironeko_: 00:05:970 (5) - new combo
21:37 _Shironeko_: 00:07:525 (4,5) - make that same like 00:03:970 (4,5) - ,do not change the pattern :c
21:38 _Shironeko_: 00:23:526 (1,2,3,4) -
21:39 _Shironeko_: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7172489 make these like this
21:39 _Shironeko_: 00:24:637 (1) - new combo
21:39 _Shironeko_: 00:24:637 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7172498
21:41 _Shironeko_: your pattern is odd :
21:42 _Shironeko_: when u change the distance i suggest you to make a New Combo
21:42 _Shironeko_: 00:33:748 (3) - new combo
21:43 _Shironeko_: 00:40:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - check the distance
pls give me kudosu
Topic Starter
gary00737

_Shironeko_ wrote:

21:29 _Shironeko_: hello xD
21:29 *_Shironeko_ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1192416 SEKAI NO OWARI - RPG]
21:30 _Shironeko_: do you want i mod this map in chat ?
21:30 gary00737: hello
21:30 _Shironeko_: cuz there are 4 diffs :< too lazy to mod in the thread
21:30 gary00737: ok , but my eng not good
21:30 _Shironeko_: same
21:30 _Shironeko_: im vnese
21:30 _Shironeko_: my english is bad too
21:30 _Shironeko_: just understand enough :(
21:30 gary00737: XD
21:31 gary00737: ok
21:31 _Shironeko_: but i dont know how to copy this converstation and put it in the thread :( i really need kudosu
21:32 gary00737: copy and paste ?
21:32 _Shironeko_: yes :
21:33 _Shironeko_: so that i can get kudosu from you
21:33 gary00737: oh
21:34 gary00737: try it :D
21:34 _Shironeko_: t/549094 like that,from hikan
21:34 gary00737: is ok
21:35 _Shironeko_: 00:01:082 (1,2,3,4) - these down 1 grid
21:35 _Shironeko_: 00:02:415 (5) - new combo
21:36 _Shironeko_: 00:03:970 (4,5) - down 1 grid too
21:36 gary00737: sorry , whick diff?
21:36 _Shironeko_: last diff
21:36 gary00737: which))))
21:36 gary00737: ook
21:36 _Shironeko_: 00:05:303 (3,4) - down 1 grid
21:36 _Shironeko_: 00:05:970 (5) - new combo
21:37 _Shironeko_: 00:07:525 (4,5) - make that same like 00:03:970 (4,5) - ,do not change the pattern :c
21:38 _Shironeko_: 00:23:526 (1,2,3,4) -
21:39 _Shironeko_: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7172489 make these like this
21:39 _Shironeko_: 00:24:637 (1) - new combo
21:39 _Shironeko_: 00:24:637 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7172498
21:41 _Shironeko_: your pattern is odd :
21:42 _Shironeko_: when u change the distance i suggest you to make a New Combo
21:42 _Shironeko_: 00:33:748 (3) - new combo
21:43 _Shironeko_: 00:40:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - check the distance
pls give me kudosu
thank you for modding :)
Knose1

Knose1



NB: I can only finish between 0 and 3.5 stars

-Perfect but add colors on hit circle
-Great
-Plz don't stack notes before and during a hit circle stream (when you made the "star")
-To many hit circle -> don't seems funny to play on it
-Snap on beats -> It will be better to have more notes snap on Song
Topic Starter
gary00737

Knose1 wrote:


Knose1



NB: I can only finish between 0 and 3.5 stars

-Perfect but add colors on hit circle
-Great
-Plz don't stack notes before and during a hit circle stream (when you made the "star")
-To many hit circle -> don't seems funny to play on it
-Snap on beats -> It will be better to have more notes snap on Song
thanks for modding!

i edited hard :)
Kirylln
Hi,Just passing by


00:20:415 (6) - i don't think there's any need for a slider to be here, a circle would just be enough to emphasize the drum .Also add a Finish sound
00:18:859 - the drum here is quite clear so i don't think it would be a good idead to ignore it .Crop the slider and change it to something like this http://puu.sh/tFb23/1f2e5ca77c.png
00:25:526 (3) - New combo here
01:13:304 (1) - New combo here
00:17:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - you were following the instrumental before this then sudddenly switched to vocal which is quite unnatural
00:19:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i have no idea what you're following here
00:30:193 (2,3) - this slider 00:30:193 (2) - follows two drum sounds which sound quite similar so i don't think it would be a good idea to use one slider to represent the drums so i'd recommend you change it into something like this http://puu.sh/tFbHr/a6951f9663.png
00:31:304 (4) - New combo here
00:37:748 (5) - New combo here
00:41:304 (4) - New combo here
01:00:859 (6) - New combo here
01:13:304 (5) - New combo here
01:23:970 (7) - New combo here
01:28:193 (4) - New combo here
01:35:748 (3) - New combo here
01:24:193 (1) - i'd recommend a slider here so that you can cover the vocal too.
01:21:859 (3) - i don't hear anything here, even when slowing it down to 25%
01:21:193 (8) - ^
01:25:415 (4) - ^
01:38:415 (9) - Add finish sound at the end of the slider/Insane
00:02:415 (4) - New combo here
00:05:303 (2) - New combo here
00:07:748 (2) - New combo here
00:15:303 (3) - New combo here
00:17:304 (8) - New combo here and merge it with the next combo as well
00:19:970 (5) - New combo here
00:20:415 (7) - Add finish sound
00:32:637 (4) - New combo here
01:04:415 (3) - New combo here
01:06:748 (7) - i don't hear anything here
01:20:193 (4) - New combo here
01:22:193 (3) - New combo here
01:38:415 (7) - add finish sound at sliderend
Idk how to map Normal and Easy so just leave them there
Also since you're quite new to mapping i'd highly recommend you go and watch pishifat's videos so that you can have a good understanding over the basics of mapping
That's all i have to say !
Good luck on your mapping journey ! :)
Topic Starter
gary00737

Kirylln wrote:

Hi,Just passing by


00:20:415 (6) - i don't think there's any need for a slider to be here, a circle would just be enough to emphasize the drum .Also add a Finish sound
00:18:859 - the drum here is quite clear so i don't think it would be a good idead to ignore it .Crop the slider and change it to something like this http://puu.sh/tFb23/1f2e5ca77c.png
00:25:526 (3) - New combo here
01:13:304 (1) - New combo here
00:17:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - you were following the instrumental before this then sudddenly switched to vocal which is quite unnatural
00:19:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i have no idea what you're following here
00:30:193 (2,3) - this slider 00:30:193 (2) - follows two drum sounds which sound quite similar so i don't think it would be a good idea to use one slider to represent the drums so i'd recommend you change it into something like this http://puu.sh/tFbHr/a6951f9663.png
00:31:304 (4) - New combo here
00:37:748 (5) - New combo here
00:41:304 (4) - New combo here
01:00:859 (6) - New combo here
01:13:304 (5) - New combo here
01:23:970 (7) - New combo here
01:28:193 (4) - New combo here
01:35:748 (3) - New combo here
01:24:193 (1) - i'd recommend a slider here so that you can cover the vocal too.
01:21:859 (3) - i don't hear anything here, even when slowing it down to 25%
01:21:193 (8) - ^
01:25:415 (4) - ^
01:38:415 (9) - Add finish sound at the end of the slider/Insane
00:02:415 (4) - New combo here
00:05:303 (2) - New combo here
00:07:748 (2) - New combo here
00:15:303 (3) - New combo here
00:17:304 (8) - New combo here and merge it with the next combo as well
00:19:970 (5) - New combo here
00:20:415 (7) - Add finish sound
00:32:637 (4) - New combo here
01:04:415 (3) - New combo here
01:06:748 (7) - i don't hear anything here
01:20:193 (4) - New combo here
01:22:193 (3) - New combo here
01:38:415 (7) - add finish sound at sliderend
Idk how to map Normal and Easy so just leave them there
Also since you're quite new to mapping i'd highly recommend you go and watch pishifat's videos so that you can have a good understanding over the basics of mapping
That's all i have to say !
Good luck on your mapping journey ! :)
:) Thank you for modding !

Thanks the videos! 8-)
mark1008hau
大大好,既然大家都是香港人,那就請我用中文口語幫你MOD一下吧
我係睇到你係巴哈個POST而黎既~如果你方便的話,希望你都可以幫我張MAP MOD一下,大家一齊交流.
小弟功力唔高,主要黎下既object既位置點樣優化
General:首先Easy同Normal難度既map,每件物件之間既距離應該都要隨時間而變,即係如果時間隔越耐,距離就要隔越長,咁樣先更符合ranking criteria.要check的話可以用ctrl+shift+a 開AI mod,禁check distance snap睇返有邊d物件唔岩位,要用右手邊既distance snap選項調整距離,一開始會有少少唔習慣,但係必要的.
distance snap較做0.9-1 objects既邊界盡量唔好相疊
預覽點(黃線)唔係白線上面,要較返好
00:02:859 (3) - 00:05:970 (3) - 00:24:193 (1) - 00:38:415 (1) - silder應該更加圓,包住下一個circle/silder
00:04:637 (1) - 00:09:081 (2) - 00:11:748 (1) - 01:35:748 (3) - distance snap
00:05:526 (2) - 00:19:748 (4) - 00:30:415 (5) - 01:19:304 (7) - 可以試下放入上一個silder既中間位置/circle,更美觀
00:10:859 (5) - 調整位置,稍向左移
00:11:748 (1) - 唔太需要NC,以及呢四個silder既弧度應更高
00:17:081 (1) - 調整位置,向右上移
00:20:637 (5) - cancel
00:27:748 (1) - 應更圓
00:41:081 (5) - 00:49:970 (6) - 00:50:859 (1) - 00:57:970 (5) - 調整位置,稍向下移
00:42:859 (2) - 向左移
01:02:859 (6) - 向右移
01:02:859 (6) - 向右下移,放入下一個silder中間,01:05:970 (5) - 更曲
01:10:859 - 加circle
01:16:637 (4) - 向左下移
01:17:526 (5) - 更曲
01:29:970 (1) - 有d奇怪,轉折位太密,會令人有錯覺,用返正常或只加一個轉折點最好
01:32:637 (5) - 向右移,更曲
distance snap都係要開 較大約1.1-1.2,而家距離太密
00:02:415 - silder end here
00:02:637 - add 1 circle
00:03:304 (2) - 可以係中間加個return
00:05:525 (2) - 同第一,第二點
00:06:859 (2) - 同第三點
00:11:304 (2) - 00:19:970 (2) - distance snap
00:10:415 (6) - 放入上一個silder既中間位置/circle,更美觀
00:15:304 (1) - 00:16:193 (3) - 包住00:15:970 (2) -
00:17:304 (1) - silder太短,宜分開做兩個slider,否則會令人有只需return一次既錯覺
00:18:859 (1) - 可拆為一個return一次既silder加一個circle
00:19:748 - 01:07:081 - 01:21:970 - 應加個circle or sth,不應留空
00:23:526 (1) - 中間return一次
00:24:193 (2) - 00:24:859 (1) - 00:32:193 (3,4) - 00:39:304 (3,4) - 不應為同一直線,嘗試好似我上面所講既方法調整位置
00:24:859 (1) - 00:26:193 (1) - 唔要nc較好
00:26:193 (1) - 00:29:748 (1) - 01:03:304 (1) - 轉做一個return一次既silder+circle
00:27:748 (1) - 更曲 00:28:414 (2) - 放入上一個silder既中間
00:49:081 (1) - end point放入下一個slider既中間
01:04:415 (2) - 01:05:304 (1) - 中間return一次/變成短d既silder+circle
01:38:526 (1) - 移後少少,可以係01:38:526 (1) -
暫時mod到呢度,最主要都係silder位置,形狀既問題,可以google一下silder既製作技巧.
其實我都係第一次mod人地既圖,方便既話都歡迎大大幫我張圖mod一下,詳情請見巴哈既post^_^.
mark1008hau
繼續幫你睇埋Hard難度同Insane難度,但實力有限,意見都只係參考一下就可以了
我中途先發現到,你係巴哈上面講話譜面太過平白,應該係因為你大多時都只係以鼓聲做節奏,比較少用歌聲/其他樂器聲,呢首歌鼓聲又重節奏感,所以冇起伏算係正常,可以多D依賴歌聲應會更好
circle size太大,較4-5就可以
00:04:637 (1) - 00:05:303 (1) - 冇必要NC
00:12:192 (4) - 00:13:081 (5) - 隔開D
相同既節奏,距離應該一樣,例如00:11:081 (1) - 同00:11:304 (2) - 之間隔左9格,類似節奏既00:14:636 (1) - 同00:14:859 (2) - 就應該都隔返9格(而家隔左8格),但只係minor位
00:47:526 (1) - 00:58:193 (1) - 01:12:637 (2) - 01:14:415 (2) - 01:16:193 (2) - 星星/SPACING可以隔開D,否則俾人感覺好亂
00:49:081 (1) - 轉SILDER,去到00:49:304 -
01:00:637 (4) - 01:02:415 (4) - 感覺變速太快,可以隔返埋D
01:09:970 (7) - 轉SILDER,去到01:10:193 -
因為少SLIDER既關係,譜面上冇乜太大需要改善既地方
00:12:414 (2) - 向右下方調,唔好痴住00:11:748 (1) - 既OPENING
00:13:748 (1) - SLIDER太曲在此作用不太,可用返正常弧度
00:18:415 (4) - 開始到00:20:415 (3) - ,有少少唔習慣既感覺,原因係因為你用既係鼓聲,但歌聲係呢段既節奏同鼓聲完全唔同,由於歌聲比鼓聲更奪目,要作取捨
P.S.其實都有頗多位置都有呢個情況,例如00:16:193 (3) - 既中間位
00:37:748 (1) - no NC is better
00:49:526 (2) - 更曲,其實可以COPY 00:49:081 (1) - 再將佢上下調轉
**01:03:304 (1) - 有同樣問題,可COPY 01:03:748 (2) - 再左右調轉
00:51:081 (1) - 離00:50:637 (5) - 遠D
01:07:748 (4) - 轉做兩個RETURN,係01:08:081 - 完
而01:08:304 (5) - 就係01:08:193 - 開始,加多兩個RETURN,係同樣時間(01:08:637 - )完
01:09:748 (5) - 既RETURN位,可圈可點,我自己就係一開始聽唔慣,但聽多幾次又可以接受,如果轉就要取消RETURN
將01:13:193 (4) - 搬到01:12:970 - ,然後將01:13:081 (3) - 變SLIDER係01:13:304 - 完,DELETE 01:13:304 (1) -
01:32:637 (2) - 01:33:081 (3) - SLIDER SHAPE要調整,同我上面講既差唔多
01:36:193 (3,4) - 向下移到01:36:637 (5) - 中間
其實做得唔差,但係因為鼓聲太平實,所以正如有巴友所言,感覺唔太突出.
Topic Starter
gary00737

mark1008hau wrote:

大大好,既然大家都是香港人,那就請我用中文口語幫你MOD一下吧
我係睇到你係巴哈個POST而黎既~如果你方便的話,希望你都可以幫我張MAP MOD一下,大家一齊交流.
小弟功力唔高,主要黎下既object既位置點樣優化
General:首先Easy同Normal難度既map,每件物件之間既距離應該都要隨時間而變,即係如果時間隔越耐,距離就要隔越長,咁樣先更符合ranking criteria.要check的話可以用ctrl+shift+a 開AI mod,禁check distance snap睇返有邊d物件唔岩位,要用右手邊既distance snap選項調整距離,一開始會有少少唔習慣,但係必要的.
distance snap較做0.9-1 objects既邊界盡量唔好相疊
預覽點(黃線)唔係白線上面,要較返好
00:02:859 (3) - 00:05:970 (3) - 00:24:193 (1) - 00:38:415 (1) - silder應該更加圓,包住下一個circle/silder
00:04:637 (1) - 00:09:081 (2) - 00:11:748 (1) - 01:35:748 (3) - distance snap
00:05:526 (2) - 00:19:748 (4) - 00:30:415 (5) - 01:19:304 (7) - 可以試下放入上一個silder既中間位置/circle,更美觀
00:10:859 (5) - 調整位置,稍向左移
00:11:748 (1) - 唔太需要NC,以及呢四個silder既弧度應更高
00:17:081 (1) - 調整位置,向右上移
00:20:637 (5) - cancel
00:27:748 (1) - 應更圓
00:41:081 (5) - 00:49:970 (6) - 00:50:859 (1) - 00:57:970 (5) - 調整位置,稍向下移
00:42:859 (2) - 向左移
01:02:859 (6) - 向右移
01:02:859 (6) - 向右下移,放入下一個silder中間,01:05:970 (5) - 更曲
01:10:859 - 加circle
01:16:637 (4) - 向左下移
01:17:526 (5) - 更曲
01:29:970 (1) - 有d奇怪,轉折位太密,會令人有錯覺,用返正常或只加一個轉折點最好
01:32:637 (5) - 向右移,更曲
distance snap都係要開 較大約1.1-1.2,而家距離太密
00:02:415 - silder end here
00:02:637 - add 1 circle
00:03:304 (2) - 可以係中間加個return
00:05:525 (2) - 同第一,第二點
00:06:859 (2) - 同第三點
00:11:304 (2) - 00:19:970 (2) - distance snap
00:10:415 (6) - 放入上一個silder既中間位置/circle,更美觀
00:15:304 (1) - 00:16:193 (3) - 包住00:15:970 (2) -
00:17:304 (1) - silder太短,宜分開做兩個slider,否則會令人有只需return一次既錯覺
00:18:859 (1) - 可拆為一個return一次既silder加一個circle
00:19:748 - 01:07:081 - 01:21:970 - 應加個circle or sth,不應留空
00:23:526 (1) - 中間return一次
00:24:193 (2) - 00:24:859 (1) - 00:32:193 (3,4) - 00:39:304 (3,4) - 不應為同一直線,嘗試好似我上面所講既方法調整位置
00:24:859 (1) - 00:26:193 (1) - 唔要nc較好
00:26:193 (1) - 00:29:748 (1) - 01:03:304 (1) - 轉做一個return一次既silder+circle
00:27:748 (1) - 更曲 00:28:414 (2) - 放入上一個silder既中間
00:49:081 (1) - end point放入下一個slider既中間
01:04:415 (2) - 01:05:304 (1) - 中間return一次/變成短d既silder+circle
01:38:526 (1) - 移後少少,可以係01:38:526 (1) -
暫時mod到呢度,最主要都係silder位置,形狀既問題,可以google一下silder既製作技巧.
其實我都係第一次mod人地既圖,方便既話都歡迎大大幫我張圖mod一下,詳情請見巴哈既post^_^.

mark1008hau wrote:

繼續幫你睇埋Hard難度同Insane難度,但實力有限,意見都只係參考一下就可以了
我中途先發現到,你係巴哈上面講話譜面太過平白,應該係因為你大多時都只係以鼓聲做節奏,比較少用歌聲/其他樂器聲,呢首歌鼓聲又重節奏感,所以冇起伏算係正常,可以多D依賴歌聲應會更好
circle size太大,較4-5就可以
00:04:637 (1) - 00:05:303 (1) - 冇必要NC
00:12:192 (4) - 00:13:081 (5) - 隔開D
相同既節奏,距離應該一樣,例如00:11:081 (1) - 同00:11:304 (2) - 之間隔左9格,類似節奏既00:14:636 (1) - 同00:14:859 (2) - 就應該都隔返9格(而家隔左8格),但只係minor位
00:47:526 (1) - 00:58:193 (1) - 01:12:637 (2) - 01:14:415 (2) - 01:16:193 (2) - 星星/SPACING可以隔開D,否則俾人感覺好亂
00:49:081 (1) - 轉SILDER,去到00:49:304 -
01:00:637 (4) - 01:02:415 (4) - 感覺變速太快,可以隔返埋D
01:09:970 (7) - 轉SILDER,去到01:10:193 -
因為少SLIDER既關係,譜面上冇乜太大需要改善既地方
00:12:414 (2) - 向右下方調,唔好痴住00:11:748 (1) - 既OPENING
00:13:748 (1) - SLIDER太曲在此作用不太,可用返正常弧度
00:18:415 (4) - 開始到00:20:415 (3) - ,有少少唔習慣既感覺,原因係因為你用既係鼓聲,但歌聲係呢段既節奏同鼓聲完全唔同,由於歌聲比鼓聲更奪目,要作取捨
P.S.其實都有頗多位置都有呢個情況,例如00:16:193 (3) - 既中間位
00:37:748 (1) - no NC is better
00:49:526 (2) - 更曲,其實可以COPY 00:49:081 (1) - 再將佢上下調轉
**01:03:304 (1) - 有同樣問題,可COPY 01:03:748 (2) - 再左右調轉
00:51:081 (1) - 離00:50:637 (5) - 遠D
01:07:748 (4) - 轉做兩個RETURN,係01:08:081 - 完
而01:08:304 (5) - 就係01:08:193 - 開始,加多兩個RETURN,係同樣時間(01:08:637 - )完
01:09:748 (5) - 既RETURN位,可圈可點,我自己就係一開始聽唔慣,但聽多幾次又可以接受,如果轉就要取消RETURN
將01:13:193 (4) - 搬到01:12:970 - ,然後將01:13:081 (3) - 變SLIDER係01:13:304 - 完,DELETE 01:13:304 (1) -
01:32:637 (2) - 01:33:081 (3) - SLIDER SHAPE要調整,同我上面講既差唔多
01:36:193 (3,4) - 向下移到01:36:637 (5) - 中間
其實做得唔差,但係因為鼓聲太平實,所以正如有巴友所言,感覺唔太突出.
真心感謝你 中文表達果然截然不同
我改了很多 把不滿意的都改掉了 :D
-NeBu-
Insane:

00:09:970 (1,3) - You should overlap this two on slider start/end
00:13:303 (5) - This slider don't fit rhythm (there should be circle and then slider)
00:13:748 (1,2) - unnecessary overlap
00:34:415 (4) - Place it somewhere x:260 y:228
00:35:081 (1,2) - overlap
01:17:304 (2,3) - Overall, theres so many things like this in this map that could be done better - at least try to blanket them (00:04:637 (1,2) - / 00:08:193 (3,4) - / and mooore)
01:20:748 (5,7) - this placement is damn bad, at least overlap slider start/end when you make things like that ;p
01:31:081 (5,6,7) - this DS between 5/6 should be same as 6/7
01:33:526 (1,2,3,4) - for squares use ctrl+shift+d
01:36:193 (3,4,5) - again DS between 3/4
Topic Starter
gary00737

NeBuSC2 wrote:

Insane:

00:09:970 (1,3) - You should overlap this two on slider start/end
00:13:303 (5) - This slider don't fit rhythm (there should be circle and then slider)
00:13:748 (1,2) - unnecessary overlap
00:34:415 (4) - Place it somewhere x:260 y:228
00:35:081 (1,2) - overlap
01:17:304 (2,3) - Overall, theres so many things like this in this map that could be done better - at least try to blanket them (00:04:637 (1,2) - / 00:08:193 (3,4) - / and mooore)
01:20:748 (5,7) - this placement is damn bad, at least overlap slider start/end when you make things like that ;p
01:31:081 (5,6,7) - this DS between 5/6 should be same as 6/7
01:33:526 (1,2,3,4) - for squares use ctrl+shift+d
01:36:193 (3,4,5) - again DS between 3/4
Thanks for mondding ;)
DreaM117er
From 巴哈

再一次說聲抱歉,我太久沒上巴哈漏看了訊息 :?

你在節奏方便的處理不錯,蠻有天分的;接著就是去調整每個難度的排列,比方:

Easy和Normal:
  1. 你光是這兩個難度裡面都有circle碰撞circle或滑條的情形,可以調整一下CS (數字調大)去改善。

    另外Easy,可以用跟Normal一樣的做法 (即開1/2 snap space去做圖,節奏也比較豐富多變,也就不會顯得太單調)


Hard跟Insane
  1. Hard的話排列比較沒那麼好,雖然這個曲子的BPM較低,你也用太過頭的DS了,整體的感覺跟Insane非常像,就只差在AR跟OD的不同。

    我建議DS space調整到1.3作圖並且不要有太超過的跳就不會有太大的問題
    .
  2. Insane的話,我直接給你一個完整的摸:
    00:01:082 (1,2) - 滑條擺前面,circle擺後面。前後對調,你不會覺得重鼓在滑條尾巴上很奇怪嗎?? 00:03:526 (3,4) - 這裡也是相同的。還有整個曲子類似的地方我就不提了,我相信你自己的耳朵也聽得出來
    00:01:970 (4,1) - 我自己的建議,你在Hard裡面也有2個circle相疊的情形。這個地方就很適合這樣擺
    00:22:415 - 你怎麼沒有從這裡繼續作圖呢?? 這裡非常適合開頭喔


最後的建議,你的Insane很明顯的都跟在vocal上,開頭的部分我覺得你節奏下的很棒,可以整個曲子都跟著鼓,若是改的好的話,我已經可以想像到這會是一張很好玩的圖。

繼續保持努力 :)

還有其他的問題直接遊戲關網站內信call我,我會立刻回你 :)
Topic Starter
gary00737

DreaM117er wrote:

From 巴哈

再一次說聲抱歉,我太久沒上巴哈漏看了訊息 :?

你在節奏方便的處理不錯,蠻有天分的;接著就是去調整每個難度的排列,比方:

Easy和Normal:
  1. 你光是這兩個難度裡面都有circle碰撞circle或滑條的情形,可以調整一下CS (數字調大)去改善。

    另外Easy,可以用跟Normal一樣的做法 (即開1/2 snap space去做圖,節奏也比較豐富多變,也就不會顯得太單調)


Hard跟Insane
  1. Hard的話排列比較沒那麼好,雖然這個曲子的BPM較低,你也用太過頭的DS了,整體的感覺跟Insane非常像,就只差在AR跟OD的不同。

    我建議DS space調整到1.3作圖並且不要有太超過的跳就不會有太大的問題
    .
  2. Insane的話,我直接給你一個完整的摸:
    00:01:082 (1,2) - 滑條擺前面,circle擺後面。前後對調,你不會覺得重鼓在滑條尾巴上很奇怪嗎?? 00:03:526 (3,4) - 這裡也是相同的。還有整個曲子類似的地方我就不提了,我相信你自己的耳朵也聽得出來
    00:01:970 (4,1) - 我自己的建議,你在Hard裡面也有2個circle相疊的情形。這個地方就很適合這樣擺
    00:22:415 - 你怎麼沒有從這裡繼續作圖呢?? 這裡非常適合開頭喔


最後的建議,你的Insane很明顯的都跟在vocal上,開頭的部分我覺得你節奏下的很棒,可以整個曲子都跟著鼓,若是改的好的話,我已經可以想像到這會是一張很好玩的圖。

繼續保持努力 :)

還有其他的問題直接遊戲關網站內信call我,我會立刻回你 :)
謝謝你喔 Hard跟Insane差不多全部都重整了 希望你可以覆審
Asuka_-
from #modreqs

Easy
00:06:415 - should be clickable better imo
00:06:859 (1) - remove NC
00:11:748 (6) - NC here
00:13:526 (1,3) - swap NC
00:15:304 (3,4,5,6) - change to 1/2slider + 2circles ? should avoid 4circles, cause i think hard to play for bigginer.
01:07:304 (1,1) - plz more recovery time.
01:29:970 (1,2) - blanket (nazi)

Hard

00:54:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - put slider somewhere?

Insane

00:25:748 (2,3) - swap? it is better imo
01:15:526 (7,8,9) - try this https://gyazo.com/425f3af44dae7d2289838a57fd11c7ae
01:19:081 - clickable
01:35:081 - ^

gl~
Topic Starter
gary00737

Asuka_- wrote:

from #modreqs

Easy
00:06:415 - should be clickable better imo DONE
00:06:859 (1) - remove NC DONE
00:11:748 (6) - NC here DONE
00:13:526 (1,3) - swap NC DONE
00:15:304 (3,4,5,6) - change to 1/2slider + 2circles ? should avoid 4circles, cause i think hard to play for bigginer. DONE
01:07:304 (1,1) - plz more recovery time. DONE
01:29:970 (1,2) - blanket (nazi) DONE

Hard

00:54:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - put slider somewhere? DONE

Insane

00:25:748 (2,3) - swap? it is better imo DONE
01:15:526 (7,8,9) - try this https://gyazo.com/425f3af44dae7d2289838a57fd11c7ae DONE
01:19:081 - clickable DONE
01:35:081 - ^ keep

gl~
Thank you for modding :)
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