fieryrage wrote:

garbage fucking shit map
stfu look at ur own map

00:01:297 (2) - for future reference while ur remapping this section having snares/claps on slider ends makes me want 2 puke dont do this
ok
00:18:297 (1,2,3) - silence slider ticks and ends plz thanks
ok
00:25:440 (3,5) - ik these are nc'd for aesthetics but again u kinda want to refrain from ncing excessively like this, it's not a huge deal but aesthetic.e
ok
ok skipping first min cuz u said ur remapping anyway

01:11:440 (9) - personally i'd start spacing out the stream more here and nc this instead of 01:11:726 (1) - here, the emphasis is pretty noticeable so (and this goes for all streams like this xd)
remap
01:22:869 (1) - uhh this isn't 1/3 there's a note on the white tick, red tick and blue tick here in 1/4 rhythm
gonna do 1/2 slider for more playability
01:24:012 (1) - also put another 210 bpm timing point here the downbeat gets adjusted at this point, it's a lot more noticeable once 01:42:297 (1) - this stream starts and the downbeat is like 01:43:440 (1) - ten notes later omegalul
OK MY DUDE I LOVE YOUR MOD
01:25:726 (1) - useless nc
yea oops accident
01:38:297 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - idk why you decrease spacing so much when the emphasis is practically the same here, space out the latter pattern a bit more
going on emphasis with lyrics here; lower pitch = lower spacing i guess lo idk we'll see
01:41:154 (1) - useless nc
useless like u l0l
01:42:583 (1) - useless nc again xd
i was probably high when i made this seciton
01:47:940 (4) - kinda borderline overmapping i'd personally remove this note since there's really nothing in the song on the blue tick here
redone to go with the drums in bg lol
02:12:012 (1,2,3) - honestly i hope you die for ever mapping this type of pattern
mad
02:14:297 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - follow the guitar here? it's hella potent here so idk why you aren't
consistency with the jumps to emphasis spacing decrease
02:16:583 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - space this out a bit more, it's hard to tell it's 1/3 as it is right now since the spacing from 02:18:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the 1/4 stream is basically the same as the 1/3
yea i was literally gonna remap this
02:37:869 (1,2,3,4) - eh this really doesn't need to be emphasized that much or nc'd i'd reduce spacing from 02:37:583 (4,1) - and un-nc
i think it wasnt spaced that much before, i just fixed some stacks and it became spaced and i forgot about it lol
02:47:012 (1) - ya more useless ncs
ok
02:59:726 (3,4) - emphasize 4 more? the snare is more potent
no im not overmapping like guilty all the same + consistency with the section
03:10:869 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - why isn't this nc'd and spaced out more like the other one
ill remap
03:12:012 (6) - un-nc
wtf is with me and nightcore
03:13:154 (1) - ^
ye
03:16:583 (1) - god dammit dude ur nc's were actually ok now they're just all over the place un-nc this 2
03:19:012 (5) - ^
03:20:012 (1) - ^
yea idk what im doing at this point i also removed the nightcore after the streams
03:22:869 (1) - nice 1
literally better than any slider you can ever make in any of your maps fukin stay mad kid
03:53:056 (2,3) - i wouldnt stack and just do the same patterns like b4 tbh
flow rider
03:58:869 (3) - this is 1/8 ending on blue tick
close enough
04:02:619 (1) - lol (already pointed this 1 out and fixed so)
ea
04:11:502 (3) - stream and kiai should start on this red tick here cuz that's when the screaming starts
drum
04:30:145 - nice kiai
gotta emphasis THE SPACING xdDDdd
04:36:930 (1) - slider Tick silenc
ok let me fucking hitsound this first
04:40:930 (1,2,3,4) - wheres the emphasis
drum =/= emphasis in this song so thats why it doesnt suck like ur maps L0
04:53:502 (1) - same thing as 01:22:869 (1) - this isn't 1/3
ok
05:20:930 (4) - y no slider? would fit here perfect
mad bc ur mad
05:28:928 (1) - u wanna make the kiai start on the red timing point here as well btw
wtf why
05:49:070 (2) - this is 1/6
ur dicg is also 1/6
05:55:213 (17) - nc
05:57:499 (17) - ^
no because its also kinda hard to tell where hes screaming so yea lo lets see what otoher people say
06:26:070 (5) - move nc here instead of 06:26:642 (1) - for downbeat
ok
06:29:356 (17,18,1) - stack these like you did 06:28:213 (1,2) - here
stop advising me to shitmap

• capitalize gokensei lol
  
  00:01:154 (4) - nc here instead of 00:00:726 (1) - here
  00:05:369 (7) - considering you're emphasizing guitar wouldn't it be better to remove this note? not really necessary but it emphasizes guitar imo
  00:06:869 (9) - move nc here instead of 00:07:154 (1) - here (this one is kinda debatable but downbeats usually take precedence over guitar anyway)
  00:15:726 (5,6,1,2,3) - kind of awkward, the flow goes side to side but the stream starts in the middle of the jump pattern, wouldn't something like this be better if not just rotating the stream in general?
  00:18:297 (1,2) - plz silence Slider Tick
  00:21:726 (4) - move nc here instead of 00:21:154 (1) - yada yada basically just move most of the ncs to downbeats instead cuz as it is right now it's retarded inconsistent
  00:22:583 (8) - i hear a vocal on this red tick and it's entirely ignored
  00:22:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern suffers from a huge lack of emphasis in contrast to other patterns with similar rhythm like i mean 00:27:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - right after you do this so
  00:24:012 (1) - wtf is this hitsound lol
  00:24:726 (6,7) - add claps to red ticks here and anywhere else that might've been missed i cba to look thru hitsounds xd
  00:25:440 (3,4) - while this is a nice blanket it plays fucking atrociously, with the flow you set up i expected this to be overlapping 00:25:297 (2) - this but it's like right below it and not even emphasized when it's a clap what the fuvcdjvk
  00:30:012 (3,4) - no SERIOUSLY THESE CLOSE KICKSLIDER / SLIDER PATERNS ARE GARBAGE STOP
  00:34:869 (6,7,8) - why isn't this a triangle
  00:43:726 (3,4) - why the random rhythm change tho
  00:48:297 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm in this section is weird, why is there no breaks in between when there was throughout the rest of the map?
  00:55:297 (4,5,6) - wtf u doing
  01:04:012 (1,2) - this could be spaced out more, having it stacked is kinda snore
  01:04:583 (1,2,3) - just stack this triple ::::::::/
  01:18:583 (5) - nc
  01:21:440 (1,2,3) - silence slider ends
  01:22:297 (1,2,3,4) - this gives this pattern like absolutely no emphasis despite having claps and a finish just do a jump thing or smth here
  01:24:154 (2,3) - idk why this reduces spacing xd..
  01:37:869 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  01:46:869 (1,2) - considering the stream before it this jump is kinda weird aesthetics wise, maybe do this?
  01:47:297 (5,1) - barely spaced from previous slider can u not
  01:47:869 (4,1) - space out more, this is a downbeat
  01:51:797 (3,4) - stack directly u peice of shit
  01:54:154 (3,4,5,6) - with spacing like this i'm going to assume this is a 1/4 pattern, but there's a gap in between, so i'd space this out (ie 01:55:154 (3,4,5,6) - this is the same exact spacing but different rhythm)
  01:59:154 (3,4) - this should be exaggerated more due to the guitar
  02:06:512 - missing note here on purpose or?
  02:16:583 (1) - as i said before i'd space this 1/3 section out so it's easier to differentiate (and also make it consistent in terms of difficulty xd) since 02:18:869 (1) - the transition here is the same spacing as 02:17:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this entire stream
  02:36:012 (5,1) - space this out more like every other kickslider/slider pattern u have PLEASe
  02:36:297 (1,2,3) - LOL NICE
  02:55:440 (1,2,3) - continue the stream or smth, stacking here is stupid imo
  03:06:869 (3) - nc
  03:12:012 (6,7,8) - ok this is like more spaced than literally any other 1/4 in the map can u reduce this actually
  03:21:154 (9) - uhh this might classify as a burai slider (unreadable) but i have no clue so if a bn bugs you about it u should change it
  
  skip slow part since i'm gay and can't mod that shit
  
  04:02:619 (1) - lands at 04:02:645 - at the timing point, not where you have it rn
  04:11:645 - kiai should start here instead of 04:11:787 (1) - since that's where the yelling is, stream should also start here so make 04:11:502 (3) - not a repeat and add notes on the red/blue ticks
  04:30:073 (1,2,3,4) - kinda weird reduction in spacing, just keep it the same imo
  04:33:216 (4,5) - space this jump out a bit more
  04:35:787 (1,2,3,4) - lol wtf is this jump pattern actually it's so awkward to play properly
  04:40:930 (1,2,3,4) - lack of emphasis especially on 04:41:216 (3,4) - these last two notes
  04:52:073 (1,2) - mini stack here looks pretty ugly
  04:54:645 (1) - where's the kiai time here, it's the exact same as 01:24:012 (1) - like wot
  05:07:645 (4,5) - reduction in spacing which really shouldn't be here, space out a bit more
  05:09:073 (2,3) - space out a bit more
  
  fuck slow sections
  
  05:27:787 (4,1) - make these stack cuz it's cooler
  05:42:356 (6) - make this a repeat slider and remove 05:42:499 (1,2) - it's awkward asf rhythm to play as it is rn
  05:44:928 (1,2,3,4) - 2 3 and 4 look like they come immediately after the slider as it is rn instead of a bit later, space 2 from 1 a bit more like this
  05:48:356 (1,2,3) - please die
  05:55:213 (17) - nc
  05:57:499 (17) - ^
  05:59:213 (6,1,2,3) - spacing stuff blah blah blah
  06:02:499 (9,1) - considering literally every other pattern in the map this can easily be mistaken as a triple so like don't
  06:05:070 (6,7,8,9) - spacing stuff again
  06:06:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - personally would reduce burst spacing here, feels way too out of place rn
  06:14:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this entire jump pattern feels awkward due to the amount of angle changes, smooth this out a bit
  06:17:070 (2,3,4,5) - space out a bit more
  06:19:213 (9) - nc should be here and not 06:19:499 (1) - here
  06:23:785 (10) - ^
  06:28:213 (1,2) - starting a stream on a triple is wicked gay, just do a kickslider here or smth, makes it flow a lot better
  06:30:642 (9) - personal opinion but this should be a slider ending on 06:31:070 - xd

fieryrage wrote:

remod
you can give kds again since it's remapped from the original version i modded
ye XD
gave proper title + romanized version + album titles + tags and whatnot i'm next-gen kwan
(though deathmetal should just be death metal in your tags)
ok stop bragging
diff

• capitalize gokensei lol
  u can capitalize ur mom
  00:01:154 (4) - nc here instead of 00:00:726 (1) - here
  nightcore
  00:05:369 (7) - considering you're emphasizing guitar wouldn't it be better to remove this note? not really necessary but it emphasizes guitar imo
  
  i kinda wanted to try to emphasize the drums most of song as well as guitar for other parts and it kinda just merges with guitar right here
  basically it triggers me that its gonna skip the drum
  00:06:869 (9) - move nc here instead of 00:07:154 (1) - here (this one is kinda debatable but downbeats usually take precedence over guitar anyway)
  one main thing is how i the nc over a stack is absolutely ugly and i wanted to highlight guitar part
  00:15:726 (5,6,1,2,3) - kind of awkward, the flow goes side to side but the stream starts in the middle of the jump pattern, wouldn't something like
  this be better if not just rotating the stream in general?
  wouldnt that just do the same thing but just extend the jump distance
  00:18:297 (1,2) - plz silence Slider Tick
  ok
  00:21:726 (4) - move nc here instead of 00:21:154 (1) - yada yada basically just move most of the ncs to downbeats instead cuz as it is right now it's retarded inconsistent
  yea oops
  00:22:583 (8) - i hear a vocal on this red tick and it's entirely ignored
  vocals are ignored in the entire song i think
  00:22:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern suffers from a huge lack of emphasis in contrast to other patterns with similar rhythm like i mean 00:27:440
  (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - right after you do this so
  yea fukl i thought i changed this pattern like 3 seperate times but i guess i forgot to save xd
  i also made it really ugly
  00:24:012 (1) - wtf is this hitsound lol
  ok i actually put these everywhere until i found some new cymbal sounds and i thought but i think i thought a hihat at the time was good here and stuff so we'll see how many people complain
  00:24:726 (6,7) - add claps to red ticks here and anywhere else that might've been missed i cba to look thru hitsounds xd
  yea i deleted a bunch of fking stuff and FORGOT TO HITSOUND FCk
  00:25:440 (3,4) - while this is a nice blanket it plays fucking atrociously, with the flow you set up i expected this to be overlapping 00:25:297 (2) - this but it's like right below it and not even emphasized when it's a clap what the fuvcdjvk
  ok triples there u go fuking nazi modded that shit
  00:30:012 (3,4) - no SERIOUSLY THESE CLOSE KICKSLIDER / SLIDER PATERNS ARE GARBAGE STOP
  nok
  00:34:869 (6,7,8) - why isn't this a triangle
  
  it is r u high
  
  00:43:726 (3,4) - why the random rhythm change tho
  tyea fk more triples because i tried to copy the close slider thing from uta and ended up abusing it
  
  00:48:297 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm in this section is weird, why is there no breaks in between when there was throughout the rest of the map?
  this was actually one of the unchanged section of the map from the start so make sure u have an understandable, have a great day moment
  ok idk if i made it worse so help
  00:55:297 (4,5,6) - wtf u doing
  mapping jumopds
  01:04:012 (1,2) - this could be spaced out more, having it stacked is kinda snore
  Ye XD
  01:04:583 (1,2,3) - just stack this triple ::::::::/
  streams for ConSisTneCy with the previous part
  01:18:583 (5) - nc
  what the fuck
  01:21:440 (1,2,3) - silence slider ends
  ok dad
  01:22:297 (1,2,3,4) - this gives this pattern like absolutely no emphasis despite having claps and a finish just do a jump thing or smth here
  
  but zig zag pattern ;((((
  01:24:154 (2,3) - idk why this reduces spacing xd..
  
  lower intensity with vocals helo
  01:37:869 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  edited a big part previous cus that makes the mod above sound hypocritical
  01:46:869 (1,2) - considering the stream before it this jump is kinda weird aesthetics wise, maybe do this?
  
  idk wat ur talking about so i just stacked it
  01:47:297 (5,1) - barely spaced from previous slider can u not
  bUt EmPhAsIs Xd
  01:47:869 (4,1) - space out more, this is a downbeat
  ok i had to move like 40 different stacks but thats just ok
  
  01:51:797 (3,4) - stack directly u peice of shit
  triggered
  01:54:154 (3,4,5,6) - with spacing like this i'm going to assume this is a 1/4 pattern, but there's a gap in between, so i'd space this out (ie 01:55:154
  (3,4,5,6) - this is the same exact spacing but different rhythm)
  ok i got confused and just put it in a random place lets see if that fixes XDxD
  
  01:59:154 (3,4) - this should be exaggerated more due to the guitar
  
  ur rite but i made it uglyt
  
  02:06:512 - missing note here on purpose or?
  
  ye
  02:16:583 (1) - as i said before i'd space this 1/3 section out so it's easier to differentiate (and also make it consistent in terms of difficulty xd) since
  
  literally blame distance snap also i made it wider but not sure if its more readable or not
  02:18:869 (1) - the transition here is the same spacing as 02:17:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this entire stream
  
  yae i did it dumb bich
  
  02:36:012 (5,1) - space this out more like every other kickslider/slider pattern u have PLEASe
  no cus 3/4 slider
  
  02:36:297 (1,2,3) - LOL NICE
  
  what
  
  02:55:440 (1,2,3) - continue the stream or smth, stacking here is stupid imo
  yea ur opinion doesnt matter because im higher ranked than you so therefore my points are more valid than yours and in fact i guess you can call my "opinions" facts because just how right they are
  
  03:06:869 (3) - nc
  ok
  03:12:012 (6,7,8) - ok this is like more spaced than literally any other 1/4 in the map can u reduce this actually
  
  lol no i need those red anchor blankets
  
  03:21:154 (9) - uhh this might classify as a burai slider (unreadable) but i have no clue so if a bn bugs you about it u should change it
  ok later
  skip slow part since i'm gay and can't mod that shit
  
  lol reta
  
  04:02:619 (1) - lands at 04:02:645 - at the timing point, not where you have it rn
  lol gj me
  04:11:645 - kiai should start here instead of 04:11:787 (1) - since that's where the yelling is, stream should also start here so make 04:11:502 (3) - not a repeat and add notes on the red/blue ticks
  went with drums instead
  AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
  04:30:073 (1,2,3,4) - kinda weird reduction in spacing, just keep it the same imo
  
  yea o well
  
  04:33:216 (4,5) - space this jump out a bit more
  ok
  04:35:787 (1,2,3,4) - lol wtf is this jump pattern actually it's so awkward to play properly
  
  ok i reversed it idk how that happened
  04:40:930 (1,2,3,4) - lack of emphasis especially on 04:41:216 (3,4) - these last two notes
  ok i made it back and forths so u dont complain
  04:52:073 (1,2) - mini stack here looks pretty ugly
  
  ok
  
  04:54:645 (1) - where's the kiai time here, it's the exact same as 01:24:012 (1) - like wot
  o ur write
  05:07:645 (4,5) - reduction in spacing which really shouldn't be here, space out a bit more
  
  ok i made jumps ugly
  05:09:073 (2,3) - space out a bit more
  how
  fuck slow sections
  05:27:787 (4,1) - make these stack cuz it's cooler
  ok when everyone tells me im a peice of shite
  
  05:42:356 (6) - make this a repeat slider and remove 05:42:499 (1,2) - it's awkward asf rhythm to play as it is rn
  ok i followed half of the mod
  05:44:928 (1,2,3,4) - 2 3 and 4 look like they come immediately after the slider as it is rn instead of a bit later, space 2 from 1 a bit more like this
  
  bUT THE BLANKETS
  
  05:48:356 (1,2,3) - please die
  
  sure.
  05:55:213 (17) - nc
  05:57:499 (17) - ^
  
  ok
  05:59:213 (6,1,2,3) - spacing stuff blah blah blah
  increased slightly
  06:02:499 (9,1) - considering literally every other pattern in the map this can easily be mistaken as a triple so like don't
  considering how my dick can be easily mistaken to be the biggest in the world i wont change it
  maybe
  06:05:070 (6,7,8,9) - spacing stuff again
  
  i think its appropriate
  06:06:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - personally would reduce burst spacing here, feels way too out of place rn
  nAh ItS pRePeRaTiOn FoR tHe SpAcE sTrEaM
  06:14:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this entire jump pattern feels awkward due to the amount of angle changes, smooth this out a bit
  ok i get it this ending sucks cock
  06:17:070 (2,3,4,5) - space out a bit more
  
  mayb
  06:19:213 (9) - nc should be here and not 06:19:499 (1) - here
  06:23:785 (10) - ^
  A E S T H E T I C S
  06:28:213 (1,2) - starting a stream on a triple is wicked gay, just do a kickslider here or smth, makes it flow a lot better
  
  no >:)))))
  
  06:30:642 (9) - personal opinion but this should be a slider ending on 06:31:070 - xd

gotta have that extra S P A C E D space stream ending with weird turns for maximum failure in the end

the entire map is kinda inconsistent (which makes sense considering how slow you finished), the former part is really awkward in terms of jump placements and kicksliders which aren't really present near the end of the map (some jump patterns near the end are still awkward tho), so personally i'd relook through the map just to make sure everything flows well cuz unless your main gimmick here is antiflow there is a LOT of awkward flow that can easily be avoided
shut up nigre

hitsounding is kinda bleh at parts, there's a lot of overused finishes (i didn't notice whistles so idk about those, i'm assuming they're fine) and missing claps

ur missing ur mom

i also didn't really like how inconsistent the triples were; sometimes the sliders before the triples ended on the red tick, sometimes the blue tick, sometimes the white tick, it felt really awkward to play when you didn't really know what pattern would be coming for what's essentially the same rhythm over and over

Troll wrote:

IOException wrote:

amazing map


here's some comments on minor things that dont matter
obviously i get that ur trying to make it jumpy and hard so if what youre doing is intentional then go for it but here are my thots:

00:03:440 (8) - moev this in the middle? liek between 6 and the next 1
uhhhh nope sorry stack machine work
00:05:012 (5,6,7,8,1) - flow seems kinda messed up here... look for patterns?
i think the triples create a good stopping point to recover and change flow
00:06:297 (6) - not super noticeable, but u shud make this just a straight angle slider instead of curved cuz everything else is straight
ok i made it straighter
00:11:440 (1,2,3) - overmapped
2 true
00:16:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i think this is a bit overmapped, "stream" doesnt really start till 00:17:154 (1) -
na i think it works
00:26:297 (8,9,10) - i think the 8 and 9 shud be swapped... that's probably just me tho
remapped
00:29:440 (6) - why doesn't this look like 1 or 3
extended sliders = different patterns so it doesnt get mistaken for a 1/2 still
00:37:726 (9) - nc?
ye
00:49:154 (1,2,3,4) - overmapped
ye
00:53:297 (5,6) - i think you cud just copy paste 00:52:869 (3,4) - and then ctrl H it
nope sorry uhhhhh copy paste mirrored patterns r not my style
01:03:583 (6) - can u turn the slider the other way? (so it's facing right)
y tho
01:08:583 (1) - i really like this part
thx
01:11:726 (1) - y is this nc
velocity change
01:18:012 (3) - y does this curve around
A E S T H E T I C S
01:23:440 (3,4,5,6) - if i was mapping this, i'd make these a bit less spaced, or even use sliders to emphasize that the verse starts next measure and there is some kind of time signature change going on here
but i love space
01:56:583 (1,2) - tilt the 1 so its parallel
y tho its pointing at the stream
02:01:726 (1) - can you silence the end of this slider?
ye
02:07:869 (2) - ctrl +G
yea works better that way
02:16:583 (1,2) - make these longer (spatially) since they're slower
nop sorry
02:17:726 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - mite wanna space this stream out a bit more too...
i think the 1/3 sliders prepare you enough for the 1/3 streams and they're easier to differentiate already
i dont like spaced 1/3 streams
02:18:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ...so u can emphasize the difference between the 1/6 stream and 1/8 stream (u can space out after but make the beginning of the 1/8 stream significantly less spaced than the 1/6)
i dont really see the need for spacing change since there isnt really anything significant in this section to justify doing so
02:20:583 (9,10) - parallel pls
ok
02:23:440 (1,2) - y didnt you continue the stream here
cus jumps
02:25:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - lmao this entire guitar solo is 1/6 but thats ok
yea but drums are 1/4
03:04:012 (1,2,3,4) - this shud be 2 circles + 1 slider if ur following the pattern
nope ths pattern is present everywhere else in the song
03:22:869 (1) - for the δ
δwδ
04:10:573 (4,5,6,7,8) - should this be soft?
some fixed
04:22:359 (5) - 04:26:930 (5) - 04:29:216 (5) - why do you turn on the 5 instead of the 1??
no reason xd
04:36:930 (1) - y dos this turn around
A E S T H E T I C S
04:44:930 (3,4) - ok these are similar enough that u shud just copy paste and then ctrl+H ctrl+J or differentiate them more
the slightly different rift sounds more rough so the sliders are a bit more rough and ugly
05:28:928 (1) - is it just me or does the drums timing sound off a bit here?
yea it does but idk why either
06:02:928 (3) - shud make this 1/2 slider + circle
y tho
06:06:785 (6) - same
P E R F E C T B L A N K E T S
06:10:070 (1) - for this section, can u stick to a single triple pattern? like between (1 - 2 3 4 - 5), (1 - 2 - 3 4 5) can u just pick one and stick to it cuz the song doesn't change much here
but the patterns repeat themselves, same with the song so therefore the patterns are fine right?? :thinking:
06:24:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - y is this suddenly circular flow
random jumps but no reason why it shouldnt be right

overall:

definitely suuuper uta-inspired but it looks like u tried to copy the style so much that some of the jumps and stuff dont really work well
also i think some of the triples are kinda random

<3 IOException

2017-08-02 11:26 fieryrage: 00:05:012 (5) - shouldnt this be slider to keep rhythm consistency with 00:02:726 (5) - 
2017-08-02 11:26 idke: let me
2017-08-02 11:26 idke: update
2017-08-02 11:26 idke: sec
2017-08-02 11:30 idke: ok its
2017-08-02 11:30 idke: posting
2017-08-02 11:30 idke: upd8
2017-08-02 11:30 fieryrage: ok
2017-08-02 11:30 fieryrage: my point still stands
2017-08-02 11:30 fieryrage: xd
2017-08-02 11:31 idke: ok yes
2017-08-02 11:32 fieryrage: 00:11:726 (4) - is this rly needed to be a slider
2017-08-02 11:32 fieryrage: i understand why but it feels overmapped
2017-08-02 11:33 idke: no u rite
2017-08-02 11:33 idke: does the slider at 3 feel overmapped
2017-08-02 11:33 idke: or just 4
2017-08-02 11:33 fieryrage: just 4
2017-08-02 11:33 fieryrage: theres a noticeable five burst
2017-08-02 11:34 fieryrage: 00:18:297 (1) - cool circle but the beginning of this slider makes me want to commit
2017-08-02 11:34 idke: ill just make it like
2017-08-02 11:34 idke: quint to slider
2017-08-02 11:34 fieryrage: ok sec areuieu started h1z1 im gonna kill msyuself
2017-08-02 11:35 idke: jk quint is cancer
2017-08-02 11:38 fieryrage: 00:22:583 (5) - 
2017-08-02 11:38 fieryrage: missing clap here is aids
2017-08-02 11:39 fieryrage: same thing for the other patterns lul
2017-08-02 11:39 idke: gonna do drum + clap
2017-08-02 11:39 idke: cus they overlap
2017-08-02 11:39 idke: xddd
2017-08-02 11:39 idke: and ok
2017-08-02 11:39 idke: i think its cus i remapped
2017-08-02 11:39 idke: and i forgot to rehitsound
2017-08-02 11:39 fieryrage: i mean u follow the guitar more so its not a huge deal
2017-08-02 11:39 fieryrage: i just dislike not mapping claps
2017-08-02 11:40 fieryrage: 00:32:440 (4,5,6) - what the fuck
2017-08-02 11:40 idke: haha jumps mapped when i first mapped this
2017-08-02 11:40 idke: am i right
2017-08-02 11:41 fieryrage: 00:48:869 (7) - y is this rhythm different from like
2017-08-02 11:41 fieryrage: literally every other section likethis
2017-08-02 11:41 fieryrage: 01:08:869 (3) - is this alienstyle thing intentional
2017-08-02 11:41 fieryrage: 01:11:726 (1,2,3,4,5) - space out more
2017-08-02 11:42 idke: o u rite
2017-08-02 11:42 idke: and yeah
2017-08-02 11:42 idke: 1:08
2017-08-02 11:42 idke: and why space out more
2017-08-02 11:42 idke: wtf
2017-08-02 11:42 fieryrage: cuz its more intense
2017-08-02 11:42 fieryrage: 01:20:869 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
2017-08-02 11:42 fieryrage: u did it here
2017-08-02 11:42 fieryrage: lo
2017-08-02 11:43 idke: uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
2017-08-02 11:43 idke: but its progressively getting more spaced
2017-08-02 11:44 idke: its going up by .1 sv each time
2017-08-02 11:44 idke: jk last one is .2
2017-08-02 11:44 idke: let me fix that
2017-08-02 11:45 fieryrage: sec h1z
2017-08-02 11:46 idke: should i change the looks of these kicksliders
2017-08-02 11:46 idke: 00:16:583 (9,10,11,12) -
2017-08-02 11:46 idke: they look very bland compared to the maps style
2017-08-02 11:47 fieryrage: idk
2017-08-02 11:48 idke: ok
2017-08-02 11:48 idke: also the alien style thing sliders is justified by the slgiht difference in the guitar rift
2017-08-02 11:48 idke: the first one is always more weird
2017-08-02 11:49 idke: or maybe they're the same sound
2017-08-02 11:49 idke: sounds different to me
2017-08-02 11:52 fieryrage: idk
2017-08-02 11:52 fieryrage: they sound kinda different
2017-08-02 11:52 fieryrage: 00:24:297 (2,7) - 
2017-08-02 11:52 fieryrage: s top
2017-08-02 11:52 idke: ye
2017-08-02 11:52 idke: its only slgiht
2017-08-02 11:53 fieryrage: 01:22:583 (3,4) - more emphasis on these notes but same spacing wtf
2017-08-02 11:54 idke: mad bro
2017-08-02 11:54 idke: let me try mapping the 1/6
2017-08-02 11:54 idke: i just realize it fits more
2017-08-02 11:54 idke: rather than a slider and 1/3
2017-08-02 11:55 fieryrage: 01:54:012 (2,1) - 
2017-08-02 11:55 fieryrage: ok like
2017-08-02 11:55 fieryrage: i dont rly get why u dont just
2017-08-02 11:55 idke: lol jk
2017-08-02 11:55 fieryrage: direct overlap when its like this
2017-08-02 11:55 fieryrage: cuz ur overlaps are so inconsistent with how they overlap it makes me want to die
2017-08-02 11:56 idke: they're supposed to be structured in a specific way but i moved that part so i guess it just died xddd
2017-08-02 11:56 fieryrage: no theyre like
2017-08-02 11:56 fieryrage: all over the dam place
2017-08-02 11:56 fieryrage: 01:38:726 (4,3) - 
2017-08-02 11:56 fieryrage: like what
2017-08-02 11:57 fieryrage: 01:35:726 (3,2,5) - 
2017-08-02 11:57 idke: bro squares
2017-08-02 11:57 fieryrage: liuke just make these the same distance
2017-08-02 11:57 fieryrage: ?????///////
2017-08-02 11:57 idke: wtf why
2017-08-02 11:57 idke: i dont want no equilateral triangle
2017-08-02 11:57 fieryrage: ????????
2017-08-02 11:58 fieryrage: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8746293
2017-08-02 11:58 fieryrage: making it like this does not mean a triangle
2017-08-02 11:58 fieryrage: nigga the fuck
2017-08-02 11:58 fieryrage:  i just mean in terms of overlaps
2017-08-02 11:58 fieryrage: like the distance randomly changes and it looks ugly as fuck
2017-08-02 11:58 idke: its suposed to
2017-08-02 11:58 idke: xdDDd
2017-08-02 11:59 fieryrage: ur not Monstrata
2017-08-02 11:59 fieryrage: That doesn work!@
2017-08-02 11:59 idke: yea i am
2017-08-02 11:59 fieryrage: 01:56:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i feel like this could be spaced a lot more
2017-08-02 11:59 idke: ok
2017-08-02 11:59 fieryrage: 02:02:297 (3) - adding whistle to sliderhead here is good DIEa
2017-08-02 11:59 idke: i wanted to make a significant difference
2017-08-02 11:59 idke: between those 2
2017-08-02 11:59 idke: but i guess i can space it out
2017-08-02 12:00 fieryrage: 02:04:583 (5) - remove clap from slider
2017-08-02 12:00 fieryrage: i mean u can space out the other one too
2017-08-02 12:00 fieryrage: if u want
2017-08-02 12:00 fieryrage: 02:07:869 (2,3) - when ur claps are like dead
2017-08-02 12:02 fieryrage: ok yea ur claps are like
2017-08-02 12:02 fieryrage: weird as hell
2017-08-02 12:02 fieryrage: they should beon basically every red tick for normal parts of the song
2017-08-02 12:02 fieryrage: but theyre missing in some places so ????????????
2017-08-02 12:02 fieryrage: aside from that
2017-08-02 12:02 fieryrage: 02:14:297 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - u could follow 1/3 guitar here, helps introduce the 1/3 stream a bit better
2017-08-02 12:03 idke: for clap from slider i changed to drum
2017-08-02 12:03 idke: 2:07 i changed to drums and claps on end of sliders so it actually goes well
2017-08-02 12:04 idke: and i think the 2 1/3 sliders introduce it enough
2017-08-02 12:04 idke: unlike probox fucking spaced 1/3 out of nowhere
2017-08-02 12:04 fieryrage: ok
2017-08-02 12:04 idke: also i feel like the drums are much more powerful
2017-08-02 12:04 idke: at the jumpy bit
2017-08-02 12:05 fieryrage: 02:44:583 (6,7,8) - wtf are u doing with spacing here
2017-08-02 12:05 idke: also i fixed the hitsounds on slider part
2017-08-02 12:06 idke: fuk
2017-08-02 12:06 idke: old jump
2017-08-02 12:06 idke: excuse
2017-08-02 12:06 fieryrage: thats like saying i mapped guilty a month ago so everything is old now
2017-08-02 12:07 idke: fixed spacing a bit
2017-08-02 12:07 idke: dude no
2017-08-02 12:07 idke: its actually one of the patterns i mapped when i first made the map
2017-08-02 12:08 fieryrage: 02:55:440 (1,2,3) - im prety sure i pointed this out before but stacking after a stream is gay
2017-08-02 12:08 fieryrage: id space out but by like 0.2x
2017-08-02 12:08 idke: i personally dont see anyhting wrong with it
2017-08-02 12:08 idke: tho
2017-08-02 12:08 fieryrage: its just gay for playability imo xd
2017-08-02 12:08 fieryrage: 02:56:583 (3,1,2) -  sto p
2017-08-02 12:08 idke: wtf no
2017-08-02 12:09 idke: ok i actually
2017-08-02 12:09 idke: stacked that before
2017-08-02 12:09 idke: but i moved it xd
2017-08-02 12:09 idke: fixed
2017-08-02 12:11 fieryrage: 02:59:726 (3,4) - jump here?
2017-08-02 12:11 fieryrage: more intesne
2017-08-02 12:11 idke: ye
2017-08-02 12:11 idke: gonna change the other stacks to keep consistenC
2017-08-02 12:12 fieryrage: 03:04:012 (1,2,3,4) - 
2017-08-02 12:12 fieryrage: stop
2017-08-02 12:13 idke: ya i changed that to
2017-08-02 12:13 idke: space out the 4
2017-08-02 12:13 idke: for conSIntenyfYTNc
2017-08-02 12:13 idke: acutlaly
2017-08-02 12:13 idke: ill keep the pattern but just switch 2/3
2017-08-02 12:14 fieryrage: 03:22:297 (9,1) - 
2017-08-02 12:14 fieryrage: ?????????????????
2017-08-02 12:14 fieryrage: actually
2017-08-02 12:14 fieryrage: more confusing than that
2017-08-02 12:14 fieryrage: 03:21:154 (9,2) - 
2017-08-02 12:14 fieryrage: ???????????????????????????????????
2017-08-02 12:15 idke: i changed to a slower slider at 9
2017-08-02 12:15 idke: and added a note where the slow slider was at 1 and a spinner
2017-08-02 12:16 idke: actually ill keep 1x but add spinner
2017-08-02 12:16 idke: and remove slow slider
2017-08-02 12:16 idke: everyone fucking breaks on it
2017-08-02 12:16 fieryrage: 03:54:369 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - wot are these stacks even supposed to be FOLOWIGN
2017-08-02 12:16 fieryrage: in the RHTYHm
2017-08-02 12:17 idke: oops
2017-08-02 12:17 idke: i fucking
2017-08-02 12:17 idke: hitsounded them wrong
2017-08-02 12:17 idke: xddd
2017-08-02 12:17 idke: D
2017-08-02 12:17 idke: D
2017-08-02 12:17 fieryrage: L:
2017-08-02 12:17 idke: i added extra hitsounds where there hsouldnt be
2017-08-02 12:18 idke: let me fix
2017-08-02 12:18 idke: hitsounds are supposed to follow the guitar strings or whatever
2017-08-02 12:18 idke: jk i guess not its fucking switching
2017-08-02 12:18 idke: every time
2017-08-02 12:19 idke: i think
2017-08-02 12:19 idke: those are pianos
2017-08-02 12:19 idke: actually lOL
2017-08-02 12:20 idke: there its fixed
2017-08-02 12:20 fieryrage: 04:24:645 (2,3) - 
2017-08-02 12:20 fieryrage: SPspace out mORE
2017-08-02 12:20 fieryrage: 04:30:359 (3,4) - ^^^^^^^^
2017-08-02 12:22 idke: spaced out 4:30
2017-08-02 12:22 idke: 4:24 i dont see a reason to
2017-08-02 12:22 idke: jk i lied
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: 05:03:787 (1,2) - 
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: nice spacinmg
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: 05:05:216 (3,4,5) - 
2017-08-02 12:23 idke: wtf is wrong with that
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: ITS
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: LITERALLY
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: RIGHT NEXT TO THE FUICKING SLIDER
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: AND ITS A 12/2 GAP
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: 05:02:645 (1,2,1,2) - 
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: like
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: these are the same gaps
2017-08-02 12:23 fieryrage: but theyre different rhythynm
2017-08-02 12:24 idke: o
2017-08-02 12:24 idke: ok no u seet
2017-08-02 12:24 idke: the
2017-08-02 12:24 idke: big gap happens when its a lot more intense
2017-08-02 12:24 idke: but the thing u pointed out its more intense on the white tick
2017-08-02 12:24 idke: so thats why its really close to the slider
2017-08-02 12:25 fieryrage: 05:27:787 (4,1) - 
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: 04:58:645 (5,1) -
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: like this is intense
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: 04:56:359 (5,1) -
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: but this isnt
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: wots wrong with 5:27
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: ttf
2017-08-02 12:25 fieryrage: OVERLAP
2017-08-02 12:25 fieryrage: s
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: u mean stacks
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: ???
2017-08-02 12:25 fieryrage: yes
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: what about
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: do u want me to stack on top of stream
2017-08-02 12:25 idke: or
2017-08-02 12:26 fieryrage: yea
2017-08-02 12:26 fieryrage: also 05:50:642 (1) - this slider gives me cancer but thasts personal
2017-08-02 12:26 idke: ya personal problems
2017-08-02 12:27 idke: 05:44:356 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
2017-08-02 12:27 idke: is this an ok transition
2017-08-02 12:27 idke: mlaw was like
2017-08-02 12:27 idke: this transition is weird af
2017-08-02 12:27 fieryrage: idk
2017-08-02 12:27 fieryrage: not really
2017-08-02 12:27 fieryrage: just looking at it
2017-08-02 12:28 fieryrage: ok my mom is yeling at me to go somewhere
2017-08-02 12:28 fieryrage: BEE r be
2017-08-02 12:28 fieryrage: im posting irc for kdusou
2017-08-02 12:28 idke: ok