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Meilin (O W O)
Dang it -Kyu this is not easy to mod LOL
Disclaimer: Normally I can mod something of bpm 100 and lower, but this is even less dense than the usual songs i find at this bpm, so please bear if this is a little short.
[Easy]
Ok so
This diff is an easy, yes, but I believe it is slightly undermapped, not that it is a bad thing, but I think it would be more beneficial to map a bit more on this diff considering the note density.
I think you should map the following points (and similar places in the rest of the map):
00:09:615 (3) - should be 2/1 slider
00:19:215 (6) - add reverse arrow, because it'll give a better sense of "closure" on the rhythmic pattern before it; currently, the rhythm is left hanging, and the result is also a large blank space between this and the next note
Next, I do not believe the outtro should be mapped. Specifically, portions AFTER 00:56:415 - shouldn't be mapped (except perhaps for a spinner). It is EXTREMELY weak and the sounds are hard to pick up already.
Ok, other suggestions. To be honest most of these are just nitpicky since there's not really anything to suggest:
00:19:215 (6) - slider is not perfectly straight, end node should be moved to x138. Next note should probably be adjusted accordingly
00:27:615 (2) - being nitpicky, this oughtta be on the y-axis
00:28:815 (3) - nitpicky again, could be symmetrical to 00:26:415 (1) - but only if you apply the previous suggestion
00:38:415 (6) - slider is not perfectly straight, end node should be adjusted to y41
00:51:615 (2,4) - these two aren't perfectly straight
[Normal]
I think spacing is too low; It's not easy to distinguish the notes 3/4 away (e.g. 00:04:065 (3,4) - , notes one blue and one red tick away from each other) from those 1/2 away, especially considering how short the sliders are; it's not that SV is low, but since the rhythm choice uses short sliders, spacing comparison between sliders and circles becomes more apparent. I believe the remedy will be to increase spacing. Although to be honest, the spacing at the current looks good between circles (such as 1/2 circles like 00:04:515 (4,5) - ), and it starts to look weird between sliders (such as 00:14:415 (5,6) - )
00:20:415 - should probably be mapped, either reverse arrow on previous slider or circle
00:25:215 - similar above, since you mapped a similar rhythm at 00:04:515 (4,5,6,7) -
00:39:615 - similar above
00:44:415 - similar above, since you mapped a similar rhythm at 00:04:515 (4,5,6,7) -
I also think portions AFTER 00:56:415 - shouldn't be mapped (except perhaps for a spinner)
[Shira's INTERLUDE]
Umm, I'm not sure what to point out since most of it checks out, so this is all I can offer. Hope this is ok (/w\)
00:21:315 (5) - I think this should not be mapped; there's no sound strong enough here unlike in other parts
00:40:515 (5) - similar as above
00:57:615 - I still think this onward should not be mapped except if it's a spinner.
Hope this helps (/w\)
It's all good actually.