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MONSTA X - Safari in Monbebe World

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Xiaolin
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Xiaolin
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Monstrata wrote:

Lapis' Normal

00:01:959 (1,2,3,4) - I would have arranged it more like this: so the pattern leads into slider 3 better. currently i feel the entry angle is kinda weird. I tried something else. Moved it a bit from its current placement to the left. Making a straight flow here wasn't aesthetically pleasing to me.
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00:45:496 (2,3,1) - Same issue here. The pattern doesn't lead well into slider 1. Right now, 2>3 creates a downward movement
would have expected something like this tbh
01:01:379 (2,3) - Align it better?
creates a cleaner aesthetic
^Tbh this could apply to quite a few of your linear slider patterns like 00:59:614 (2,3) - .
no reply = fixed

Aligned every linear pattern in kiai, and some before kiai. Thank you for modding!
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Tags:Starship Entertainment 주헌 셔누 기현 형원 민혁 원호 아이엠 Jooheon Shownu Kihyun Hyungwon Minhyuk Wonho I.M Fire in the hole cute moe Lapis Aoki
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Firetruck
1,011 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Firetruck
@Monstrata applied everything on hard, will work more on easy to make the rhythm denser (i felt that 3/2 repeat sliders didnt fit that well with the vocals, but ill figure out a way to make it denser anyways)
edit: I think you could cut down on those 3/1 sliders in kiai and use slightly denser rhythms. I'm a bit concerned about the spread because Normal uses a lot of 1/2 rhythm. I really recommend breaking down 00:53:658 (3) - and 01:00:717 (3) - into 1/1 sliders and stuff.
i wanna keep it like this since it follows the vocals so well >//> since lapis is nerfing normal just a bit this might not be an issue? idk if u still think that i should do it after i call you back just say so and ill do it :^)


thanks alot for modding <3 ill call u back after i fix easy and get a mod or 2
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
o, hello there

we looked through e/n one more time because monstrata x asked the mapper to get an extra check
IRC log
21:50 Bakari: it's butt touching time
21:50 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1279154 MONSTA X - Safari in Monbebe World [Easy]]
21:50 Firetruck: woo
21:50 Bakari: 00:05:488 (1,2,3) - basically the thing from discord
21:51 Firetruck: yup
21:51 Bakari: 00:10:782 (3,4) - 00:16:076 (3,4) - compare these with 00:26:552 (3,4) -
21:51 Bakari: wouldn't it be better to make the flow more linear? https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/0zNxBBuW.jpg
21:52 Firetruck: u rite
21:52 Firetruck: it would
21:52 Bakari: 00:32:644 - the reverse is extra, there weren't similar ones before
21:53 Firetruck: yeah just noticed i forgot to change that one
21:54 Bakari: 00:47:040 - are you sure this thing doesn't need a clickable object?
21:55 Bakari: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8253351 here's a poorly made example
21:56 Bakari: 00:47:923 - not sure you'd wanna map this beat, I'd probably skip it
21:58 Firetruck: yup
21:58 Firetruck: made it clickable :^)
21:58 Bakari: 01:00:717 (3) - overlaps with the accuracy thingy down on screen
21:59 Bakari: https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/XfluY8c6.jpg
21:59 Firetruck: o das smart
22:01 Bakari: i like it a lot
22:01 Firetruck: yay
22:01 Bakari: now normal
22:01 Bakari: should i post it?
22:01 Bakari: or just drop here and post as a part of the log?
22:02 Firetruck: u choose :^)
22:03 Bakari: let me just drop it here
22:03 Bakari: it looks cool
22:03 Firetruck: alright xD
22:04 Bakari: 00:26:552 (1) - looks too similar to (3), yet noticeably different. I'd make them either parallel, or curve (1) to make them more contrasting. https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/tk33wWXh.jpg
22:10 Bakari: 00:47:261 (2,3,1) - feels somewhat artificial, i'd keep the zigzag thingy 1-2 started and replace (3) with a circle. it'd be the same rhythm and just a slightly different flow https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/ih63E90r.jpg
22:10 Bakari: rhythmically it's all cool to me

i love the way e/n diffs are done.
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Hard
  1. 00:06:150 (2,1) - blanket is off
  2. 00:30:082 (1,2) - same
  3. 00:52:555 (2) - the slider shape looks weird lol, use a more curvy one? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8261614 this apply to other similar ones
  4. OD 6 pls
Normal
  1. 00:02:620 (2,3,4) - too dense compared to the hard diff rhythm, 00:03:061 (3,4) - should be a slider
  2. 00:04:385 (2,3,4) - Same, 3 and 4 should be a slider
  3. 00:06:591 (3,4) - same a slider for better spread
  4. 00:08:576 (3) - a single circle would give the player a break, also it would improve the spread, since your normal is almost the same as hard rhythmicaly talking
  5. 00:15:635 (3) - same
  6. 00:20:929 (3) - Again a single circle is better
  7. 00:26:111 (3) - same
  8. 00:27:655 (3,4) - a single slider
  9. 00:31:405 (3) - single circle
  10. 00:36:177 (3) - single circle
  11. 00:41:294 (3) - same
  12. 00:47:923 (3) - same
  13. 00:49:026 (2,3) - a slider and the a single circle at 00:49:687 (4) -
  14. 00:50:790 (2,3,4) - same
  15. 00:52:555 (2,3,4) - 00:54:320 (2,3,4) - 00:56:084 (2,3,4) - same
    your diff is good, but I think these rhythm changes would improve the spread, tbh a lot of patterns are more dense than the hard which isn't good, also probably AR 5 is better
Easy
  1. 00:01:959 (1) - it doesn't end in a beat of the main melody, just end it at the previous red tick, then you can make a 1/2 slider at 00:03:061 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8261744
  2. 00:03:723 (3,4) - use the same rhythm as I suggested above
  3. 00:05:488 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:07:253 (3,4) - ^
  5. 00:09:017 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:10:782 (3,4) - yeah! this is what I mean, it does fit better the song main rhythm
  7. 00:14:311 (1,2) - again, compare 00:14:311 (1,2) - to 00:16:076 (3,4) - and tell me what sounds better?
  8. 00:21:370 (3,4) - same, this is the rhythm that would fit the song overall https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8261744, but would be too repetitive (as the song lol), I'd do some variations like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8261785 , for example you can use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8261744 for the instrumental only part and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8261785 for the vocal part, because the rhythm you are actually using 00:24:788 (1,2) - doesn't fit the song at all.
  9. yeah this one needs a rhythm rework, call me once you worked on this! and I'll remod it
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Had an IRC mod with Firetruck; didn't find many issues.

Easy: Suggested blankets, and some rhythm adjustments.
Normal: Agreed with Natsu, and will look over it again, after she's adjusted stuff.
Hard: Was fine to me!

Call me for bubble after you have updated.
Firetruck
1,011 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Firetruck
did rhythm re-work on easy as natsu suggested and applied the stuff on hard as well, thanks for modding!
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
Applied everything in Natsu's mod. Thank you for modding!
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osu! Alumni
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Tag conflict within the diffs, please fix this!

accidentally added bubble icon, mapper will update asap, I can't remove it otherwise it'll just give +5 sp for no reason
edit2: Ok, bubbled now! After Lapis' fix, my concerns are gone as well.

Cute map :3
Firetruck
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Firetruck
thanks <33 lets do this boys
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin
i love minhyuk
Firetruck
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Firetruck

Lapis Aoki wrote:

i love minhyuk
i love jooheon
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
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Firetruck wrote:

Lapis Aoki wrote:

i love minhyuk
i love jooheon
i love wonho
Nuolong
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Nuolong
YAS
FIRE
THIS
BITXH
UP MOTHAUDUCJXK8FNG
YEA IRRE YAS BUBBLÉ THÄT SHÎT BOIII
AND NATSUU YAYZYZGSSS biTCHHHHCHCHHHXHHC
GO FIRETURJCKCCKKCKK
Firetruck
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Nuolong wrote:

YAS
FIRE
THIS
BITXH
UP MOTHAUDUCJXK8FNG
YEA IRRE YAS BUBBLÉ THÄT SHÎT BOIII
AND NATSUU YAYZYZGSSS biTCHHHHCHCHHHXHHC
GO FIRETURJCKCCKKCKK
can i give kudosu for this amazing post
Natsu
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Natsu
looks fine
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin
O BOOOOI, I'LL NOW MARRY MINHYUK GOODBYE
Firetruck
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thanks alot irre & natsu <33

MONBO BOYS
Nuolong
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WEW YAS
Sidetail
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congrats!
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Sidetail wrote:

congrats!
HEIII CENTERHEAAAAD
headphonewearer
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headphonewearer
hard
00:01:959 (1,1) - försök att vara consistent med såna här sliders för vissa är fula och vissa är ok
00:03:723 (1,2,3) - konstigt flow för att (2) inte följer en cirkel typ. känns och ser bättre ut om du gör ctrl+h på den
00:06:150 (2) - samma med curved slider här, antingen har du en röd tick i mitten eller ingen hela tiden, annars blir det konstigt
00:09:679 (2) - kanske ctrl + j? går att undvika att nudda hp drain om du gör det
00:19:606 (1,2) - aa ser konstigt ut med 2 curved sliders här idk
00:24:788 (1,2) - du kan göra så att follow points ser bättre ut här eftersom att du ville ha en rak linje, gör det genom att dra sliderticken på (1) lite mer riktad till (2)
00:26:552 (1) - detta ser mycket bättre ut
00:30:082 (1,2) - om du vill dqa för att fixa något här så kan du lika gärna fixa denna blanket lite
00:30:082 (1,1) - fult overlap men det är ok, blir svårt att fixa på ett bra sätt ändå och inte helt noticable i gameplay
00:40:632 (2,3,4) - linjen ser ganska ful ut om man kollar på follow points så kanske du borde fixa det
00:48:364 (1) - kanske du kan flytta den ner lite så det blir en rak linje med (4,5) idk
00:48:364 - slider velocity borde vara högre här imo för att det är kiai, lite svårt att ändra kanske men aja
00:50:790 (2,3) - skulle vara bättre om (3) var högre upp så det såg mer circular ut jämfört med (2) om du fattar
00:58:952 (1) - om du gör ctrl+j på denna så ser det 100000000000000 gånger bättre ut
01:02:040 (3) - kanske lite högre spacing bara för att?

sry xd
Firetruck
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Mapper wrote:

hard
00:01:959 (1,1) - försök att vara consistent med såna här sliders för vissa är fula och vissa är ok jag gjorde olika på varje sound, aldrig lika o de va med meningen lol, jag tycker de är snygga
00:03:723 (1,2,3) - konstigt flow för att (2) inte följer en cirkel typ. känns och ser bättre ut om du gör ctrl+h på den va, de spelar bra imo
00:06:150 (2) - samma med curved slider här, antingen har du en röd tick i mitten eller ingen hela tiden, annars blir det konstigt de syns ju inte när man spelar xD de är fortfarande curved på samma sätt bara gjorde på olika sätt
00:09:679 (2) - kanske ctrl + j? går att undvika att nudda hp drain om du gör det jag gillar detta flow
00:19:606 (1,2) - aa ser konstigt ut med 2 curved sliders här idk hur ser de konstigt ut?
00:24:788 (1,2) - du kan göra så att follow points ser bättre ut här eftersom att du ville ha en rak linje, gör det genom att dra sliderticken på (1) lite mer riktad till (2) de är inte meningen att de ska va en rak linje, 00:41:294 (3,4,1) - blir en triangle
00:26:552 (1) - detta ser mycket bättre ut de är din stil, inte min.
ja tycker de jag har e mycke bättre xd dessutom så är de speciella flowet i hela mappen med mening för de spelar bra imo
00:30:082 (1,2) - om du vill dqa för att fixa något här så kan du lika gärna fixa denna blanket lite pls
00:30:082 (1,1) - fult overlap men det är ok, blir svårt att fixa på ett bra sätt ändå och inte helt noticable i gameplay jag tycker den e snygg xd
00:40:632 (2,3,4) - linjen ser ganska ful ut om man kollar på follow points så kanske du borde fixa det samma som förut
00:48:364 (1) - kanske du kan flytta den ner lite så det blir en rak linje med (4,5) idk vill inte ha en rak linje här
00:48:364 - slider velocity borde vara högre här imo för att det är kiai, lite svårt att ändra kanske men aja gillar inte att göra högre sv i kiai o sånt på hard, de känns awkward. dessutom va conceptet med denna mapp en väldig repetitive och simpel mapp, som låten!
00:50:790 (2,3) - skulle vara bättre om (3) var högre upp så det såg mer circular ut jämfört med (2) om du fattar de förstör raka linejn jag gjort här 00:51:452 (3,4,1) -
00:58:952 (1) - om du gör ctrl+j på denna så ser det 100000000000000 gånger bättre ut om du inte märkt det så gör jag detta flow i hela mappen av en anledning, för att jag tycker att det spelar jävligt bra :^) och de ser snyggt ut också
01:02:040 (3) - kanske lite högre spacing bara för att? har aldrig gjort högre spacing i mappen innan så de skulle bli inconsistent

sry xd
:^)
headphonewearer
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headphonewearer
aha, visste inte att du hade det med meningen
Cyuubi
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Cyuubi
fuck you for getting this song stuck in my head... XD
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