of course the song is nice, it's shinee
I didn't reply to some of the points you mentioned, that means I fixed them. xP
- 00:01:255 (1,2) - this needs more volume is almost inaudible. Made it 40%,should be fine now.
- 00:54:535 (1) - same, I can't hear it (barely) Increased it here too.
- 01:10:855 (6,1) - blanket can still be improved a lot
- 01:56:455 (3,4,1) - ^
- 02:03:655 (1) - same as 00:54:535 (1) -
- 02:04:615 (2) - missing NC, since the previous same part has a NC. But the previous part doesn't have NC..?
- 02:51:175 (1) - why the break is delayed?? Because he starts rapping at 02:51:415
- 00:36:295 (5) - 01:12:935 (5) - 02:33:095 (4) - unsnapped tails
- with all the slider chains your current AR feels too slow, AR 5 plays a lot better.
- 00:01:255 (1,2) - same as the hard diff
- 00:54:535 (1) - ^
- 00:58:855 (2) - use a single circle instead? to make the diff less dense and also bring more emphasis to the next vocals? same for 01:02:695 (2) - 02:07:975 (2) - 02:11:815 (2) -
- 03:23:815 (1) - same a single circle here would bring more emphasis to the next vocals and also would bring a break from holding sliders. same here 03:27:175 (4) -
- 03:28:135 (2,3) - if you did the previous, the add a slider here to avoid such dense rhythm.
- 02:03:655 (1) - same as the hard diff
- 02:49:255 (1) - this is touching the HP bar, according to the guidelines you should avoid doing such things.
- 03:59:815 (3,1) - a little spacing error
- AR 3 feels better when playing tbh
- 00:01:255 (1) - same as the other diffs
- 00:15:975 - why the delayed break? Oh, removed it.
- 00:47:335 (4) - a 1/1 slider and circle would represent the music better IMO I think it's fine like this. The woosh sounds here becomes more intense, so I feel like using a slider like this would emphasise it better.
- 00:53:015 - why the break is delayed? -
- 00:54:535 (1) - same as the other diffs
- 01:34:375 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - combos are wrong, aren't they supposed to be every 2 stanzas like the rest of the map? Fixed the combos here.
- 01:56:455 (4) - same as 00:47:335 (4) - Same reason.
- 02:03:655 (1) - same as the other diffs
- 03:05:575 (1) - why the break is delayed?
call bakari back to rebub and let me know in pm
hello @ qat pls nuke
Lapis Aoki wrote:i actually stole lapis aokina's map and uploaded it as mine
please don't tell qat
i ain't lying but i legit cried listening to that
now if you love her pls