1. the birth of the world (5,79 stars, 2419 notes)

Mirash wrote:

первый в эпике

low bpm нахуй ты это в теги пихнул поржать
то, что ты в начале выделяешь драмами я бы выделял финишами, импакта больше(нормал финиш в основном), ну можешь и не ставить, у тебя ок
еще, в аимоде не указано, но ноты немного не снапнуты 01:07:088 (1) - отсюда и дальше, почти до следующего красного поинта
эдитор кусок дерьма на самом деле, меня эта вещь тоже достала пеппи гавнюк игру меняет а на редактор х#й забил уже давно

02:38:658 (1) - ну это не ранкабельно, думаю не сильно что-то поменяется ежели так сделаешь:

исправил
04:17:481 (1) - можно их задницы заглушить, все равно ничего нет на них и звучать лучше будет исправил
05:14:098 (1) - сейм жопу замуть ему исправил
08:40:361 (1) - финиш нормал? да
08:42:207 (1,1,1) - и на эти вистлы софт да
09:09:784 (4) - поставь на началее слайдера, у тебя слишком острый угол, сложно играть:

исправил
09:13:361 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - плис:

ну типа
09:15:899 (1,2,3,4) - форма говнище сделай волнищу красивую как
09:28:245 (2) - слишком большой даже для такого вокала, под бланкет к слайдеру неплохо заходит исправил
09:55:130 (1) - можно единички по приколу вистлить хаха, вроде звучит через одну
10:48:810 (2,3,4) - wot сделай спейсинг одинаковый может окк
11:26:695 (1) - на синем тике должен заканчиваться, по-моему окк
12:39:195 (3,5) - нормал самплсет? да

perfect

VINXIS wrote:

rank? ?/ ? /

VINXIS wrote:

rank? ?/ ? /

1. apparently the correct metadata for the title (at least romanised) is "IT G MA Remix (josh pan Opus)" according to itunes and stuff, not sure if you should keep the korean characters tho
2. there is a lot of little overlaps here and there, be sure to try to clean up the map as much as possible, check your blankets too
3. 00:34:011 - break?
4. 01:07:088 (1) - this ends on the 1/3 tick at 01:07:344 -
5. 01:25:935 (3,4) - why isn't this like 01:13:628 (1) -
6. 02:26:024 (1) - this slider is noticeably different from the others
7. 04:36:304 - the hitnormal hitsounds in this part are really quiet, it would probably be best to raise their volume or something
8. 06:54:812 - ^
9. 06:54:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - those circles aren't snapped to the right rhythm, it's more like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 09:16:245 (4,5,6) - why isn't the spacing equal here
11. 10:31:118 - o i recognize this melody
12. 11:56:503 (1,2,3,4) - those should be snapped to 1/3
13. 12:21:118 (1,2,3,4) - ^
14. 13:45:156 (2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - kinda weird to have the downbeat on the slider ends, especially for the last note on 13:48:041 -

Alheak wrote:

Hello, from our modding queue

1. apparently the correct metadata for the title (at least romanised) is "IT G MA Remix (josh pan Opus)" according to itunes and stuff, not sure if you should keep the korean characters tho truee
2. there is a lot of little overlaps here and there, be sure to try to clean up the map as much as possible, check your blankets too i will correct gradually
3. 00:34:011 - break? yes
4. 01:07:088 (1) - this ends on the 1/3 tick at 01:07:344 - true
5. 01:25:935 (3,4) - why isn't this like 01:13:628 (1) - definitely
6. 02:26:024 (1) - this slider is noticeably different from the others fixed
7. 04:36:304 - the hitnormal hitsounds in this part are really quiet, it would probably be best to raise their volume or something fixed (taken from C:66)
8. 06:54:812 - ^ ^
9. 06:54:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - those circles aren't snapped to the right rhythm, it's more like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   true
10. 09:16:245 (4,5,6) - why isn't the spacing equal here fixed
11. 10:31:118 - o i recognize this melody ~~~{ ⚆ ͟ل͜ ⚆ }~~~
12. 11:56:503 (1,2,3,4) - those should be snapped to 1/3 fixed
13. 12:21:118 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
14. 13:45:156 (2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - kinda weird to have the downbeat on the slider ends, especially for the last note on 13:48:041 - definitely

Plays fine, most of my concerns are about the aesthetics, try to review those a bit, rework some slider shapes to have better curves and all that, otherwise great map, quite an experience especially for 14 minutes. I am doing my best

Good luck! thank you!

GoldenWolf wrote:

Hello this is (late) mod

So first off, sorry about being so late, but also for the short mod. This is quite the strange map, and to be honest I don't get the logic behind most of the patterns. They look like randomly placed objects, but at the same time, they don't. I can't make meaningful suggestions without understanding what's going on, so I'll point out timing-related stuff instead.
- I know, they look random. Maybe, I will remap some places that I do not like.

06:03:951 (1) - You'd have to check with a BN or something, but this slider might be unrankable?
✓ Fix'd
06:55:602 (2) - this slider should end on 1/6 snapping 06:55:812 - here
✓ Fix'd
07:33:497 (1) - Since you're mapping the drums after this slider, you should make this one follow the drums too on 07:33:970 - and 07:34:286 -
✓ Fix'd
07:52:760 (1) - For what it's worth, this section shouldn't be 1/6 snapping but.. 1/16. The drums is actually playing 13ms before the 1/6 snapping which is 07:52:957 - here for this slider, so 1/16 snapping. This whole section is swinging but not on regular 1/6 snapping. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
✓ FiExEd

08:15:812 - Add a new redline here with bpm 86.250, so the slider ends on the correct drum beat at 08:16:333 - and it also snaps with the next one
✓ Done

08:25:411 - Add a new redline, bpm 68.000 ✓
08:25:907 - Add a new redline, bpm 72.000 ✓
08:26:532 - Add a new redline, bpm 65.000 ✓
08:26:705 - Add a new redline, bpm 56.000 ✓
08:26:906 - Add a new redline, bpm 74.000 ✓
08:27:312 - Add a new redline, bpm 66.500 ✓
08:28:214 - And finally, one here, bpm 79.030 ✓

That means 08:25:907 (4,5) - those two sliders will have to get some changes, I do suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/v1sFz/5994b9f8bf.jpg as something that would both fit the song and be playable
✓

08:55:245 (2,3) - The guy is completely off for these two, it's more like this,

altough I doubt it's a good idea to actually map it that way lol, the closest you could get with a single reverse slider is on 1/16 snapping with this

✓ Okk

And for that whole section, you do know those are 130bpm super spaced streams, and that putting those 9 minutes in might not be the best idea if you don't want the player to get mad
+ Added some nerfs in spacing

14:05:781 - Spinner should end here on 1/8 snapping
✓ Okk

rest of the timing seems fine to me
✓

good luck with this one
thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

_derp wrote:

02:51:010 (4,5,6) - вот это мне кажется лучше сделать как тут 02:55:716 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) -
03:35:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - примерно так будет лучше
Пожалуй, все. Я хз как ты не заебался мапать пятнадцатиминутный сонг, лул, боюсь представить сколько в общем времени потратил. Я ~6 часов трачу на полторы минуты незамысловатого маппинга D: Удачи с ранком, это шедевр. :^)