00:12:906 (12906|2,13064|1) - ctrl-G because then the pitch relevancy stays, up to you though
00:23:011 (23011|2,23169|3) - move these over to the left 1, so it'll be similar to ^
00:33:274 - looking at what MEGAtive wrote, they were correct about it lasting 1/2 beat, but it's 1/8th snapped instead of 1/12th, so it should look like this:
00:37:222 (37222|1,37222|0,37695|2,37695|3,38169|1,38169|0) - have this be similar to 00:34:695 (34695|0,34695|1,35169|1,35169|2,35643|2,35643|3) -
00:39:590 (39590|2) - move to 2?
00:42:748 (42748|1,43222|2) - move these right one column so you still have the ascending chords
00:44:485 (44485|2,44643|2,44801|2) - that feels uncomfortable, move 00:44:643 (44643|2,44722|1) - to the right and then move 00:44:801 (44801|2) - to 2
00:46:695 - this feels a lot more comfortable to hit imo:
01:16:380 - same goes here:
make 01:26:327 (86327|1,86327|3,86406|2,86485|1,86485|3) - similar to 01:25:380 (85380|2,85380|3,85458|1,85537|3,85537|2) -
01:37:380 (97380|3,97458|2,97537|3,97616|2) - this is uncomfortable, change to this:
01:46:222 (106222|2,106222|0,106380|1,106380|2) - this in particular feels unnecessary, change to this (which also has the note you missed):
02:00:590 - until 02:01:695 - what are these sv changes they feel unnecessary
02:18:156 (138156|2) - this does indeed end at 02:18:195 -