Ray - Baby Lady LOVE · forum

HML

Joined June 2013

HML 2017-01-27T09:17:43+00:00

(really fun DT map. Only if I wasn't so bad at 10.3)
00:01:502 (1,2) - Move down so it doesn't overlap with 00:02:689 (1) - in the editor? It get's me a bit kooky seeing that.
00:11:672 (1) - Maybe a different slidershape? I think it looks better with the red anchors further apart.
00:12:350 (1) - Move this NC to 00:12:858 (2) - so the player can read the 1/2 to 1/4 gap easier, and for the patterns to be their own combos?
00:35:909 (1,2) - ^
00:47:604 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern needs to be emphasized more, maybe up the spacing a bit?
00:50:316 (1,2,3) - ^ Ditto
01:14:045 (4) - Just a personal rule of mine, but I'd NC the stream to help it stand out more, and make it it's own thing.

La Soleil

00:03:536 (4) - NC to help the player read the 1/2 to 1/4 gap better. It also looks cleaner.
00:11:333 (2,3,4,1) - Reduce spacing here so the player doesn't confuse 00:11:672 (1,2,3) - with 1/2 (the spacing looks very similar)
00:25:401 (4) - NC because looks better and helps with gap reading
00:52:180 (2) - NC ^
01:08:621 (5) - NC because streams should be their own thingy
01:14:045 (4) - ^ Same dealio

Good luck hun

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2017-01-27T13:03:59+00:00

HML wrote:
Fizz
(really fun DT map. Only if I wasn't so bad at 10.3)
00:01:502 (1,2) - Move down so it doesn't overlap with 00:02:689 (1) - in the editor? It get's me a bit kooky seeing that. nothing wrong with it owo
00:11:672 (1) - Maybe a different slidershape? I think it looks better with the red anchors further apart. nah
00:12:350 (1) - Move this NC to 00:12:858 (2) - so the player can read the 1/2 to 1/4 gap easier, and for the patterns to be their own combos? im unsure on what 1/2 to 1/4 gap you're talking about, but you gotta respect the downbeat when comboing; 00:12:350 (1,2,3,4,5) - is its own pattern
00:35:909 (1,2) - ^ same thing
00:47:604 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern needs to be emphasized more, maybe up the spacing a bit? difficulty reasons
00:50:316 (1,2,3) - ^ Ditto difficulty reasons
01:14:045 (4) - Just a personal rule of mine, but I'd NC the stream to help it stand out more, and make it it's own thing. sure

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Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-01-27T22:52:39+00:00

HML wrote:
La Soleil
00:03:536 (4) - NC to help the player read the 1/2 to 1/4 gap better. It also looks cleaner. I have the spacing the same every time there is a 1/4 section which should help the player read it, nc'ing it would most likely just be overkill in my opinon
00:11:333 (2,3,4,1) - Reduce spacing here so the player doesn't confuse 00:11:672 (1,2,3) - with 1/2 (the spacing looks very similar) It is currently new combod to indicate there is some sort of change
00:25:401 (4) - NC because looks better and helps with gap reading Sure
00:52:180 (2) - NC ^ Sure
01:08:621 (5) - NC because streams should be their own thingy Sure
01:14:045 (4) - ^ Same dealio Sure
Good luck hun

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-01-29T08:55:51+00:00

_orange wrote:
[Ambient's Hard]

00:17:774 (3,4) - 00:20:316 (5,6,1) - 00:21:333 (3,4,5) - These may be a problem because you stacked all 1/4 1/2 and 1/1 the same, it's confusing - Fixed!
00:47:604 (1) - 00:50:316 (1,2,3) - They're kinda the same so why not map it the same - Variation
01:17:943 (2,4) - Move these further apart maybe? I think it could look better - Fixed!

Thanks _orange!

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Moonlit

112 posts

Joined August 2013

Moonlit 2017-01-29T10:24:42+00:00

Update: http://puu.sh/tD81p/a54752ebdc.osu

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2017-01-30T01:53:06+00:00

did this for fun. dunno if you want it.
http://puu.sh/tG7rm/094998c284.flv

Korey

141 posts

Joined August 2013

Korey 2017-02-02T14:50:51+00:00

rizen's

http://puu.sh/tL87V/b1b349340c.osr playtest

00:05:401 (7) - nc
00:12:350 (1) - changed to 3/4 so 00:12:689 - is clickable since it feels weird to give it less emphasis then 00:12:858 (2,3,4,5) -
00:13:028 (3) - i also dont see why 3 is emphasised when i see it as arguably weaker then the rest. 00:13:028 (3,4,5) - also these linear circles are used later for 00:15:740 (3,4,5) - 00:18:452 (3,4,5) - when they sound distinctly different to me.
00:21:163 (3,4,5,1) - also on the topic of those linear circles this pattern should be different then 00:15:740 (3,4,5,1) - they shouldnt repeat till 00:21:163 (3,4,5) - those are the only two occurences of the rhythm.
00:28:282 (5) - 00:30:994 (5,6) - 00:39:130 (5,6) - 00:41:842 (5,6) - consistency, don't see why the first instance should be different other than to emphasize the bell or whatever on 00:30:994 (5) - if so 00:39:130 (5) - 00:41:842 (5) - should be a 1/2 slider
00:35:062 (5,6) - maybe stack for emphais since they have the same spacing as 00:34:553 (2,3) -
00:45:740 (4) - delete this
00:54:384 (1) - stack not emphasising anything particular and feels random
01:02:180 (2) - i suggest you change this slider as it causes unnecessary reading issues
01:11:672 - 1/2 slider here to emphasize the downbeat 01:12:011 (1) - because at the moment the downbeat has little contrast with the previous circles. or emphasize them better with spacing.

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-02-03T00:22:33+00:00

IRC with Rizen

the goods

10:41 Rizen: ambienttttt
10:41 Rizen: i was wondering if u could help me testplay somethin pls
10:41 Ambient: of course deary
10:41 Rizen: i'm thinking if it has too many problems, imma drop it
10:42 Rizen: =w
10:42 Ambient: is it the ol nekopara
10:42 *Rizen is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1194294 Ray - Baby->Lady LOVE [Rizen's Neko]]
10:42 Ambient: yup
10:42 Rizen: ya
10:42 Ambient: god i actually hate this song now
10:42 Rizen: first extra in like 6-8 months
10:42 Rizen: same x.x
10:43 *Ambient is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1194294 Ray - Baby->Lady LOVE [Rizen's Neko]]
11:02 Rizen: finally
11:02 Ambient: ayyyy
11:04 Ambient: tbh i don't really like it, but then again i don't like most tv size extras
11:05 Ambient: the chorus is great
11:05 Ambient: you really captured the "extra" of a tv size
11:05 Ambient: like some parts just feel too random
11:06 Rizen: mmm
11:06 Rizen: any parts that stood out?
11:06 Ambient: 00:04:214 (1,2,3,4) - i reckon should be all spaced the same
11:06 Ambient: too early in the map for spacing like that
11:06 Ambient: 00:09:638 (1,2,3,4) - same here just feels too wonky
11:08 Ambient: 00:47:096 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - eeehhhhhhhh
11:09 Rizen: b-but there are 1/8 sounds there T_T
11:09 Ambient: might want to have 00:47:604 (1) - apart of the stream instead of away from it, so many people are going to sliderbreak and or miss
11:09 Rizen: perhaps I can decrease spacing there
11:09 Ambient: or im just bad
11:09 Ambient: nah the visuals are good
11:09 Ambient: just hard to hit
11:09 Rizen: ya, that's a good idea
11:10 Rizen: part of stream
11:10 Rizen: btw what do you think of 00:53:706 (3,4,1,2) - ?
11:10 Ambient: i liek
11:10 Rizen: specifically the stacking at 00:54:045 (4,1) -
11:11 Ambient: mmm
11:11 Ambient: you could maybe stack 00:54:384 (1) - onto 00:54:553 (2) -
11:11 Rizen: I wanted to give spacing emphasis to 00:54:553 (2) - tho
11:11 Ambient: 00:54:553 (2) - is perf
11:12 Ambient: woops
11:12 Ambient: 01:13:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) -
11:12 Ambient: ok you cooouuuulldddddd
11:12 Rizen: pp jumpss
11:12 Rizen: oh, moved 00:54:384 (1) - to somewhere like x:35 y:323
11:12 Ambient: stack 00:54:384 (1) - onto the end of 00:53:706 (3) - ?
11:13 Ambient: then have 00:54:553 (2) - move up and blanket the start of 00:53:706 (3) -
11:14 Ambient: http://puu.sh/tLN4a/32bb42941f.jpg
11:15 Rizen: oo that works too
11:16 Ambient: ayy
11:16 Ambient: and from then on i enjoy the rest
11:17 Rizen: not too many errors orrr
11:17 Ambient: nah the kiai time is gud
11:17 Ambient: nothing i can really be picky on
11:18 Rizen: ah ok
11:18 Ambient: hopefully bikini gets some more mods shortly, like there is so much leniency on mapping tv size extras
11:18 Ambient: so dont worry too muich about it
11:18 Rizen: this if my first ever extra GD so i'm a little worried about it ;-;
11:18 Ambient: you'll be fine hun
11:19 Rizen: thanks xoxo

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-02-03T00:57:37+00:00

IRC with Ambient (will get to others when I have time ;;)

the other goods

13:21 Ambient: can you judge my hard pls
13:21 Ambient: o master of easier diffs
13:23 Ambient: your first time extra my first time hard ~w~
13:23 Rizen: surree
13:24 Ambient: cheeeers
13:25 Rizen: o
13:25 Rizen: u mean
13:25 Rizen: the neko one
13:25 Ambient: yas
13:29 Rizen: 00:16:248 (5,1) - could space a bit more since the spacing is similar to how you normally space 1/2 beats
13:29 Ambient: o yup
13:30 Rizen: I kinda found 00:16:757 (1,2,3) - sorta underwhelming
13:31 Rizen: maybe make slider 2 two 1/2 sliders
13:32 Ambient: okie
13:33 Rizen: 00:21:333 (3) - perhaps take this out of the stack
13:33 Rizen: like [https://puu.sh/tLOl4/a700c84518.png this] or somethin
13:33 Rizen: I just find stacks kinda boring ;;
13:34 Ambient: i luv stacks
13:35 Ambient: made two 1/2 sliders instead
13:36 Rizen: where at, 00:21:333 (3,4) - ?
13:36 Ambient: ye
13:36 Rizen: circles will still be better for those piano sounds
13:36 Ambient: :<
13:36 Rizen: 00:34:045 (1) - nice but I find the slider head too close to 00:33:875 (4) - mmmmm
13:37 Rizen: what do you think of smth like [https://puu.sh/tLOzf/117fe7eedf.png this]
13:38 Ambient: yah i was stuck on that for a but
13:38 Ambient: bit*
13:38 Rizen: 00:45:570 (3) - 1/2 slider then circle will fit the music better imo
13:39 Rizen: 00:46:079 (4,5,6) - space out circle 5 more plsss
13:39 Rizen: too similar to 00:45:570 (3,4) - 
13:40 Ambient: gotcha
13:40 Rizen: 00:47:604 (1) - three circles like 00:50:316 (1,2,3) - maybe
13:40 Rizen: for consistency and will work better with drum hits
13:41 Ambient: donezo
13:45 Rizen: kiai is nice
13:45 Rizen: 01:26:418 (4,5,6) - any chance to not stack these? ;c
13:46 Ambient: NO >:(
13:46 Ambient: yas
13:47 Ambient: made it a slider and a note
13:48 Rizen: what about a 3 circle triangle
13:48 Rizen: https://puu.sh/tLPkN/9847e8d5b8.png
13:49 Ambient: ooo thats much better
13:51 Ambient: phew thanks man
13:52 Rizen: np bro

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-02-03T01:02:33+00:00

Cheers Rizen

some more goods

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Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2017-02-04T14:52:45+00:00

How about renaming Neko to "OVA"?
would make more sense imo

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-02-04T21:02:19+00:00

wwwwwwwww

[rizen chan kun]

00:18:960 (6) - nice job for not NCing this :^)
00:21:672 (1) - hey m8, just tellin' ya that u missed a tail whistle there, that's all
00:27:943 (4,5,1) - nice stack. fix it by manually pls xd
00:34:892 (4,1) - dat (4) is almost at the position of (1)'s anchor there. 00:34:892 (4) - is 1 x pixel away from (1)'s anchor xd
01:01:672 (1,2) - manual stack again

[rain]

try to use rizen's diff for hitsounds. it feels much better tbh .-.
00:01:502 - why no hitsound here? it feels so empty here tbh
00:13:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - missing hitsound + wrong use of hitsound
00:31:333 (1,2,3) - why (3) seems like having a low distance spacing since it's an emphasize beat here .-.
01:01:163 (1,2,3) - 3 1/1 slider vocal notes here huh... use triangle pattern instead, cuz it seems suitable to use it
01:06:418 (7) - aim it to 01:06:587 (1) - otherwise it'd be a "misleading" direction here
01:13:197 (6) - NC, 01:13:536 (1) - remove NC
01:15:231 (3) - this doesn't emphasize anything as a loud beat and it's a huge gap here

[ambient]

00:16:248 (5) - missing whistle tail
the use of DS on some parts are really weird, like 00:24:384 (3,1,2) - 00:50:316 (1,2,3,1) - etc
00:20:485 (1) - use finish since it's an emphasize beat
00:24:384 (3) - this slider doesn't look like neko for me .-.

hmm

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-02-05T00:16:10+00:00

nyu - wrote:
How about renaming Neko to "OVA"?
would make more sense imo

Agreed

lit120 wrote:
wwwwwwwww

[rain]
try to use rizen's diff for hitsounds. it feels much better tbh .-.
00:01:502 - why no hitsound here? it feels so empty here tbh
00:13:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - missing hitsound + wrong use of hitsound
00:31:333 (1,2,3) - why (3) seems like having a low distance spacing since it's an emphasize beat here .-. Increased spacing
01:01:163 (1,2,3) - 3 1/1 slider vocal notes here huh... use triangle pattern instead, cuz it seems suitable to use it done
01:06:418 (7) - aim it to 01:06:587 (1) - otherwise it'd be a "misleading" direction here Thanks for the mod
01:13:197 (6) - NC, 01:13:536 (1) - remove NC done
01:15:231 (3) - this doesn't emphasize anything as a loud beat and it's a huge gap here Yeah that was unintentional, thanks
All hitsounding will be taken from rizen's

hmm This worries me

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-02-05T00:19:34+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[ambient]
00:16:248 (5) - missing whistle tail - - Fixed!
the use of DS on some parts are really weird, like 00:24:384 (3,1,2) - 00:50:316 (1,2,3,1) - etc - ah yup, Fixed!
00:20:485 (1) - use finish since it's an emphasize beat - Fixed!
00:24:384 (3) - this slider doesn't look like neko for me .-. - I hate neko girls ~w~, made it a little better

Thanks for the mod!

baby>toddler>child>teenager>lady

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TitleUnicode:Baby→Lady LOVE
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Version:Ambient's Vol. 1
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Pentori

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Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-02-21T06:59:12+00:00

henlo
[General]
can u try avoid brown combo colours? doesn't really seem like a kawaii colour

[Rizen]
hp 8 is ridiculous lol, definitely doesn't support your combo usage/rhythm density. try hp 7 or lower
there are a few missing nc's that you can probably find urself, stuff like 00:05:401 (7) - 00:13:536 (6) - etc
00:10:147 (4) - doesnt look that nice, should try centre the red node, or at least give the tail some length http://puu.sh/ucGPv/89d1357625.jpg
00:11:672 (1,2,3) - these jumps feel like they come out of no where, since everything else has justified placement. 2.0x ds feels more appropriate. also while ur at it u should make the triangle look even
00:20:147 (10) - doesnt stand out as much as is does in the music, try using a lot more spacing?
00:34:892 (4,5,6,1) - these angles play really awkwardly since everything previously was sharp
00:35:316 - 00:36:672 - triplets here?
00:35:401 (1,3) - these seem really undermapped lol, stuff like 00:35:570 - 00:36:418 - can be mapped. i get that u want to emphasise the vocals, but this can be done with circles too with appropriate spacing
00:38:452 (2,3,4) - gross angle ;w; especially because its highly spaced
00:44:892 (1,3) - why overlap now? normally u wouldve stacked this
00:45:401 (2) - whistle?
00:45:571 (3,4) - could make this a 1/2 slider instead, since 3 is a lot stronger than 4
00:46:418 (1,2,3) - should have a finishes as well, its the same as 00:46:079 (6)
00:46:587 - clap for snare
00:47:096 (4) - sounds like the stream starts at 00:46:926 (3) - instead
00:47:519 (9,1) - dont think ppl will be able to read this. i had no idea what was going on here until i opened editor
00:56:757 (7,8) - 00:58:113 (7,8) - making these sliders is a good idea to show that it's different to the other jumps
00:59:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - instrumentally, this is no different from 00:58:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet in the second instance you put unnecessary jumps 01:00:147 (2,3,4) - to fill time

also u should use the triplet at 01:01:079 - for consistency
01:02:180 (2) - should nc this too?
01:20:146 (1) - spacing is pretty underwhelming for a downbeat

[Rain]
od 8 pls
cant u just use "Vol. 3" as a diff name. looks like you're gding ur own map
00:01:502 - would be a lot nicer if you used s:c2 for the beginning so ur whistles dont sound like kick drums
00:05:740 (2,3,4) - the intensity of the first section doesnt feel right, u have big jumps like this for a quieter part, yet later on u dont even use this much spacing 00:15:740 (3,4,5,6) - 00:17:096 (3,4,5,6) . try to make the beginning a little easier so the player can feel a difference between sections
00:04:723 (4,5) - 00:08:113 (1,2) - dont think u should use extended sliders when u aren't specifically emphasising anything out of these
00:07:774 (4) - using 2 circles would be more appropriate to address the snare on 00:07:943
00:10:485 (3,4,1) - such random jumps.. i dont think u need so much spacing for 00:10:655 (4) - since 00:10:824 (1) - is the strongest here
00:13:028 (3,4) - doesnt look that nice
00:16:757 (2,3,4) - flow is pretty uncomfortable, use something sharper
00:20:147 - such a strong sound, should try make it clickable
00:23:536 (2,3,4,5) - try give some angle to this, the almost vertical angle looks so robotic
00:25:401 (1) - an sv change would work nicely here
00:25:909 (1,2) - these sliders aren't the same?
00:30:994 (5,1,2) - doesnt flow very well, since 5 implies anti-clockwise motion, could try placing 2 around 490|55
00:31:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:33:197 (2,3,4) - 00:34:553 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing feels a little too inconsistent. compare these for example and u'll notice visually that the distances drastically change for each pattern
00:35:740 (2,3) - dont think it's a good place to stack when the music is intense
00:36:248 (4) - skipping the strong snare 00:36:418 - creates a weird rhythm. id just use circles on the 1/2 here
00:36:757 - sv is suddenly less than 00:25:909 - ? i cant hear much of a difference between these sections
00:37:096 (3,4,5) - visually consistent spacing pls. 00:37:435 (4,5) - look much closer than 00:37:096 (3,4)
00:46:079 (1,2) - why not make these 1/2 sliders instead? to avoid skipping the snare on 00:46:587
00:46:418 (2,3,4) - finishes
00:49:299 - 00:52:011 - shouldnt skip snares
00:54:384 (1,2,3) - you should probably avoid the overlaps with 00:54:384 (1,3) - since it's a different pattern to 00:53:706 (3,4,1) . also it would be nicer if u made 00:54:384 (1,2) - bigger than 00:54:553 (2,3) - for emphasis on clap
00:55:062 (4) - why use a single slider to represent so many different sounds? 00:55:062 - 00:55:231 - are pretty strong so u should space those
00:56:418 (3,4) - should prob rethink this, since 3 is stronger than 4
00:57:435 (2) - u put so much emphasis into 00:56:757 (5) - yet here u have the clap on the slider's end 00:58:113 -

01:06:248 (5,6,7) - dont think u need the whistles
01:12:011 (1,2) - such weak spacing
01:12:519 (3,4) - doesnt work at all with the triplet. this kinda pattern works for 2 dominant sounds or a drum roll, but in the music there's only a triplet on 01:12:519
01:13:452 - why whistle on slider end? if anything this should be silenced with a green line
01:17:265 (7) - can u point the kick slider in the general direction of the next beats? right now implied flow is all over the place
01:21:841 (3,4) - music hasn't really changed intensity, yet the density suddenly becomes really low :/
01:21:841 (3) - extended slider seems pretty inconsistent, 1/2 would be better like u did at 01:10:994 (3,4)
01:24:892 (5,6,7) - u should just use circles on the 3/4, to be consistent with 00:11:672 (1,2,3)
01:26:079 (2,3) - pls, u cant just use a kick slider and treat is as a circle

enjoy ur trump wall

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-02-21T07:29:40+00:00

Pentori wrote:
henlo
[General]
can u try avoid brown combo colours? doesn't really seem like a kawaii colour

[Rain]
od 8 pls
cant u just use "Vol. 3" as a diff name. looks like you're gding ur own map Fine
00:01:502 - would be a lot nicer if you used s:c2 for the beginning so ur whistles dont sound like kick drums Rizen was in charge of hitsounding i think
00:05:740 (2,3,4) - the intensity of the first section doesnt feel right, u have big jumps like this for a quieter part, yet later on u dont even use this much spacing 00:15:740 (3,4,5,6) - 00:17:096 (3,4,5,6) . try to make the beginning a little easier so the player can feel a difference between sections ok
00:04:723 (4,5) - 00:08:113 (1,2) - dont think u should use extended sliders when u aren't specifically emphasising anything out of these I agree with the first one but the 2nd one is emphasising that ding sound
00:07:774 (4) - using 2 circles would be more appropriate to address the snare on 00:07:943 Sure
00:10:485 (3,4,1) - such random jumps.. i dont think u need so much spacing for 00:10:655 (4) - since 00:10:824 (1) - is the strongest here
00:13:028 (3,4) - doesnt look that nice
00:16:757 (2,3,4) - flow is pretty uncomfortable, use something sharper
00:20:147 - such a strong sound, should try make it clickable
00:23:536 (2,3,4,5) - try give some angle to this, the almost vertical angle looks so robotic
00:25:401 (1) - an sv change would work nicely here
00:25:909 (1,2) - these sliders aren't the same?
00:30:994 (5,1,2) - doesnt flow very well, since 5 implies anti-clockwise motion, could try placing 2 around 490|55
00:31:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:33:197 (2,3,4) - 00:34:553 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing feels a little too inconsistent. compare these for example and u'll notice visually that the distances drastically change for each pattern
00:35:740 (2,3) - dont think it's a good place to stack when the music is intense
00:36:248 (4) - skipping the strong snare 00:36:418 - creates a weird rhythm. id just use circles on the 1/2 here
00:36:757 - sv is suddenly less than 00:25:909 - ? i cant hear much of a difference between these sections
00:37:096 (3,4,5) - visually consistent spacing pls. 00:37:435 (4,5) - look much closer than 00:37:096 (3,4)
00:46:079 (1,2) - why not make these 1/2 sliders instead? to avoid skipping the snare on 00:46:587
00:46:418 (2,3,4) - finishes
00:49:299 - 00:52:011 - shouldnt skip snares
00:54:384 (1,2,3) - you should probably avoid the overlaps with 00:54:384 (1,3) - since it's a different pattern to 00:53:706 (3,4,1) . also it would be nicer if u made 00:54:384 (1,2) - bigger than 00:54:553 (2,3) - for emphasis on clap
00:55:062 (4) - why use a single slider to represent so many different sounds? 00:55:062 - 00:55:231 - are pretty strong so u should space those
00:56:418 (3,4) - should prob rethink this, since 3 is stronger than 4
00:57:435 (2) - u put so much emphasis into 00:56:757 (5) - yet here u have the clap on the slider's end 00:58:113 -
01:06:248 (5,6,7) - dont think u need the whistles
01:12:011 (1,2) - such weak spacing
01:12:519 (3,4) - doesnt work at all with the triplet. this kinda pattern works for 2 dominant sounds or a drum roll, but in the music there's only a triplet on 01:12:519
01:13:452 - why whistle on slider end? if anything this should be silenced with a green line
01:17:265 (7) - can u point the kick slider in the general direction of the next beats? right now implied flow is all over the place
01:21:841 (3,4) - music hasn't really changed intensity, yet the density suddenly becomes really low :/
01:21:841 (3) - extended slider seems pretty inconsistent, 1/2 would be better like u did at 01:10:994 (3,4)
01:24:892 (5,6,7) - u should just use circles on the 3/4, to be consistent with 00:11:672 (1,2,3)
01:26:079 (2,3) - pls, u cant just use a kick slider and treat is as a circle

enjoy ur trump wall We're gonna build a wall and the nominators will pay for it

Yeah so like
im remapping my shitty diff, Sorry for the time wasted ;-;

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2017-03-06T13:11:41+00:00

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-03-23T15:47:14+00:00

srry for delayyy

ikorza wrote:
rizen's

http://puu.sh/tL87V/b1b349340c.osr playtest

00:05:401 (7) - nc fixed
00:12:350 (1) - changed to 3/4 so 00:12:689 - is clickable since it feels weird to give it less emphasis then 00:12:858 (2,3,4,5) - reworked that part ;w;
00:13:028 (3) - i also dont see why 3 is emphasised when i see it as arguably weaker then the rest. 00:13:028 (3,4,5) - also these linear circles are used later for 00:15:740 (3,4,5) - 00:18:452 (3,4,5) - when they sound distinctly different to me. the 3 is emphasised since the pitch of that instrument is going from low to high. Also I removed all linear patterns in rework
00:21:163 (3,4,5,1) - also on the topic of those linear circles this pattern should be different then 00:15:740 (3,4,5,1) - they shouldnt repeat till 00:21:163 (3,4,5) - those are the only two occurences of the rhythm. no more linear circles because of rework aaa
00:28:282 (5) - 00:30:994 (5,6) - 00:39:130 (5,6) - 00:41:842 (5,6) - consistency, don't see why the first instance should be different other than to emphasize the bell or whatever on 00:30:994 (5) - if so 00:39:130 (5) - 00:41:842 (5) - should be a 1/2 slider the first one is a slider because it didn't have the echo vocals as opposed to the other times you have listed, hence the slider
00:35:062 (5,6) - maybe stack for emphais since they have the same spacing as 00:34:553 (2,3) - reworked that pattern
00:45:740 (4) - delete this but there's a sound at that tick, hence the circle and reduced spacing ?.?
00:54:384 (1) - stack not emphasising anything particular and feels random fixed this previously with amb
01:02:180 (2) - i suggest you change this slider as it causes unnecessary reading issues personally I like it as it adds flavour to the difficulty
01:11:672 - 1/2 slider here to emphasize the downbeat 01:12:011 (1) - because at the moment the downbeat has little contrast with the previous circles. or emphasize them better with spacing. spaced more

lit120 wrote:
wwwwwwwww

[rizen chan kun]
00:18:960 (6) - nice job for not NCing this :^) nc'd the object just before this one
00:21:672 (1) - hey m8, just tellin' ya that u missed a tail whistle there, that's all i'll wait for rain because he's in charge of hitsounds ;w;
00:27:943 (4,5,1) - nice stack. fix it by manually pls xd reworked so no longer valid
00:34:892 (4,1) - dat (4) is almost at the position of (1)'s anchor there. 00:34:892 (4) - is 1 x pixel away from (1)'s anchor xd reworked,
no longer valid
01:01:672 (1,2) - manual stack again reworkedd, no longer valid

Pentori wrote:
henlo

[Rizen]
hp 8 is ridiculous lol, definitely doesn't support your combo usage/rhythm density. try hp 7 or lower 6
there are a few missing nc's that you can probably find urself, stuff like 00:05:401 (7) - 00:13:536 (6) - etc fixxed
00:10:147 (4) - doesnt look that nice, should try centre the red node, or at least give the tail some length http://puu.sh/ucGPv/89d1357625.jpg done
00:11:672 (1,2,3) - these jumps feel like they come out of no where, since everything else has justified placement. 2.0x ds feels more appropriate. also while ur at it u should make the triangle look even I gave more emphasis to circle 3 since that instrument thing in the background is going from a low note to high note
00:20:147 (10) - doesnt stand out as much as is does in the music, try using a lot more spacing? s p a c e d more
00:34:892 (4,5,6,1) - these angles play really awkwardly since everything previously was sharp reworked, no longer valid
00:35:316 - 00:36:672 - triplets here? fixed
00:35:401 (1,3) - these seem really undermapped lol, stuff like 00:35:570 - 00:36:418 - can be mapped. i get that u want to emphasise the vocals, but this can be done with circles too with appropriate spacing ok, changed to circles
00:38:452 (2,3,4) - gross angle ;w; especially because its highly spaced new patternn
00:44:892 (1,3) - why overlap now? normally u wouldve stacked this reworked that part
00:45:401 (2) - whistle? dun
00:45:571 (3,4) - could make this a 1/2 slider instead, since 3 is a lot stronger than 4 kinda still want the circle for those other instruments in the music ;( I did reduce spacing though
00:46:418 (1,2,3) - should have a finishes as well, its the same as 00:46:079 (6)
00:46:587 - clap for snare removed circle in rework
00:47:096 (4) - sounds like the stream starts at 00:46:926 (3) - instead fixedd
00:47:519 (9,1) - dont think ppl will be able to read this. i had no idea what was going on here until i opened editor made a part of stream
00:56:757 (7,8) - 00:58:113 (7,8) - making these sliders is a good idea to show that it's different to the other jumps done
00:59:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - instrumentally, this is no different from 00:58:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet in the second instance you put unnecessary jumps 01:00:147 (2,3,4) - to fill time also u should use the triplet at 01:01:079 - for consistency changed rhythm so jumps not there. Also placed triplet as stated
01:02:180 (2) - should nc this too? yipp
01:20:146 (1) - spacing is pretty underwhelming for a downbeat fixed with rework

thanks for the mods!

boop (reworked A LOT)

osu file format v14

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Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-03-25T01:05:36+00:00

Baby > Lady > Pending

Kawashiro

1,522 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2017-04-12T12:30:28+00:00

M4M

Rizen

00:07:186 (2,3,4) - Because of the Beat. I recommend you to Ctrl G these notes. If you want to emphasize the next slider by using circle, i think putting slider jump will better
00:42:780 (3,4,5,6) - hmm... It's too hard. this jump is harder than almost patterns in kiai. I never think this part needs strong jump... nerf plz
00:52:101 (1) - why you put nc? In 00:49:390 (3) - here, you didn't.
01:23:966 (7,1) - Swap nc will be fit in vocal (like vol.3 diff)

3

00:07:357 (3,4) - how about reduce distance? it'll emphasize 00:08:035 (1) - this slider
00:20:746 (2,3) - when i play it, this stack was strange. i think you can replace 3 like 240 368
01:10:407 (5,1) - swap nc will be fit in vocal (like Rizen's diff)
01:15:830 (5,1) - ^
01:22:440 (5) -

Fizz

00:07:187 (2,3,4) - almost same reason in rizen's diff, ctrl g will make better beat
00:23:797 (1) - I think this note doesn't need nc. its nc abusing
00:25:323 (2) - ^
01:12:611 (1) - ^
01:13:967 (1) - ^
01:24:813 (1) - ^
01:26:170 (1) - ^
01:15:831 (5,1) - swap nc
01:18:543 (7,1) - ^
01:21:255 (5,1) - ^

Ambiend

01:10:746 (1) - del NC. why you suddenly change nc cycle? 01:03:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you used nc in every 8 bit
01:21:763 (1) - ^
01:24:814 (1,2) - swap nc will be fit in vocal

moonlit

Check Aimod and fix all distance error and unsnapped kiai

Good mapset

GL

Moonlit

112 posts

Joined August 2013

Moonlit 2017-04-12T23:15:36+00:00

moonlit

Check Aimod and fix all distance error and unsnapped kiai

fixed the kiai but most of the distance snap stuff is broken in AI mod so didnt change

https://puu.sh/viowV/ed59e75795.osu

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-04-13T02:34:12+00:00

Fixed all, thanks!

love me some lady baby

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63627
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Baby Lady LOVE
TitleUnicode:Baby→Lady LOVE
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:- Rain -
Version:Ambient's Vol. 1
Source:ネコぱらOVA
Tags:Cat girl visual novel ova bakery Coconut Chocola Vanilla Cinnamon Azuki Maple Kashou Minaduki Shigure neko paradise nekopara Moonlit Fizz Ambient Rizen
BeatmapID:1188556
BeatmapSetID:562021

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
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Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-04-13T06:22:56+00:00

UnLock- wrote:
M4M

3
00:07:357 (3,4) - how about reduce distance? it'll emphasize 00:08:035 (1) - this slider Sure!
00:20:746 (2,3) - when i play it, this stack was strange. i think you can replace 3 like 240 368 Changed the entire section
01:10:407 (5,1) - swap nc will be fit in vocal (like Rizen's diff) sure
01:15:830 (5,1) - ^ sure
01:22:440 (5) -

Good mapset

GL Thanks!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-04-13T12:04:07+00:00

applied everything but the first point; I prefer the current rhythm as it allows 00:07:864 (4) - to be clickable and not land on a slider end.

thanks!

code

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63627
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 27186
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Baby Lady LOVE
TitleUnicode:Baby→Lady LOVE
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:- Rain -
Version:Rizen's OVA
Source:ネコぱらOVA
Tags:Cat girl visual novel ova bakery Coconut Chocola Vanilla Cinnamon Azuki Maple Kashou Minaduki Shigure neko paradise nekopara Moonlit Fizz Ambient Rizen
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edit: this is post-ambiend and nrfd

Kaifin

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Kaifin 2017-04-18T00:30:38+00:00

these cat ears sliders in normal are the future

Moonlit

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00:25:831 (1) - DS
00:51:424 (2) - DS
00:55:662 (1,2,3) - your triangle is uneven and it's super blatant because of the patterning
01:06:509 (1) - DS
01:07:018 (2) - DS
01:11:255 (4) - DS
01:14:645 (1) - DS
01:15:831 (3,4) - you may want to space this a little more horizontally angle wise, as newer players tend to follow the sliders ALL the way which can make it uncomfortable to do slight slider leniency stuff like this, here's a screenshot of what i mean to fix
SPOILER
01:17:865 (2) - DS

okay these fucking cat ear sliders are genius but you need to fix your distance snap cause you aren't using variable spacing in any consistent manner + this is the lowest diff in the set

sry to just spam DS DS D S D S DS D S but like it's the only major problem with your map so

this is honestly my favourite diff of the set just because of these fucking sliders i cant get over them

Ambient

00:15:323 (2,4,5) - uneven distance between these objects makes this shape look super weird and off
00:17:357 (3,6) - bugged stack
00:21:255 (3,5) - bugged stack
00:30:916 (4,4) - based on your structure before this point im suprised that you don't just stack this
00:33:797 (4,1) - bugged stack
a lot of your stacks are bugged, comb through the map and restack all your objects quickly to fix them
press Ctrl A: next time try to spread out your mapping from the centre of the screen more and try not to be so confined away from the edges
01:23:289 (2,4) - blanket
SPOILER
01:26:340 (3,4,5) - uneven triangle

kind of a shitty mod for your diff sorry, i can't think of a lot to say about it, it's just kinda serviceable

Fizz

00:04:136 (1,2) - bbbbbblanket
SPOILER
00:12:780 (2,3,4,5) - unevenly spaced (specifically 00:13:119 (4,5,1) - )
00:23:797 (1,2,3) - uneven line
00:45:492 (1) - i hear what you're NCing to but since it breaks your NC structure and you're literally not patterning it any differently to emphasize this new sound you're NCing to, you shouldn't
00:52:611 (9,1,3) - uneven overlap (3 is slightly more overlapped on 1 than 9 is)
00:53:967 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - why do you just stop structuring here
i would say something about all the overlaps that aren't the same level of overlapped that aren't directly next to each other but are so close on the time line that it makes your mapping/structure messy, but i think its your style so

have u considered collabing with rizen and calling the diff fizzen?

VOL 3

00:03:119 (2,3) - blanket
SPOILER
00:05:662 (2,5) - exposed
SPOILER
00:10:069 (4,1) -
SPOILER
00:14:306 (1,2,3,4,5) - this isn't spaced even/straight
00:18:882 (1,2) -
SPOILER
00:19:560 (3,4) -
SPOILER
00:21:255 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - i like this pattern
00:24:984 (3,4) -
SPOILER
01:15:152 (3,4) -
SPOILER
i don't really have a lot to say about your difficulty, your rhythm + patterning is okay but your structure is non existent, it's like if you took monstrata patterning and jumbled it all up with no logical connections between most patterns besides stuff like the one i pointed out above
the #1 thing you need to focus on going forward in your mapping is your aesthetics + structure, and since your strength seems to be patterning i'll leave you with this bit of advice: try to connect every pattern you make to another pattern via structure or just the patterning itself
if you want me to elaborate on what i'm talking about hit me with the pm

rizen: 00:27:864 (4) - is this offscreen? it's like very very very close so you might want to nudge it up regardless

i like the stream with the 1/8 sliders that is well designed imo

this map doesn't taste like strawberries (except the normal that diff is bomb af)

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-04-18T11:16:47+00:00

@Kaifin
you're not the first person to mention the 1/8 sliders

the slider in question isn't offscreen in either 4:3 or 16:9 so imma leave it for now -3-

thanks for lookin!

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-04-18T11:35:23+00:00

Kaifin wrote:
these cat ears sliders in normal are the future

Moonlit
Moonlit's computer broke, responding on his behalf
metadata
I manually checked all the DS, its usually like .99 and 1.01 which is fine, usually the ds check doesnt pop up, it should be fine
00:06:848 (1) - DS
00:18:882 (1) - DS
00:19:730 (3) - DS
00:25:831 (1) - DS
00:51:424 (2) - DS
00:55:662 (1,2,3) - your triangle is uneven and it's super blatant because of the patterning Seems fine to me
01:06:509 (1) - DS
01:07:018 (2) - DS
01:11:255 (4) - DS
01:14:645 (1) - DS
01:15:831 (3,4) - you may want to space this a little more horizontally angle wise, as newer players tend to follow the sliders ALL the way which can make it uncomfortable to do slight slider leniency stuff like this, here's a screenshot of what i mean to fix Agreed
SPOILER
01:17:865 (2) - DS

okay these fucking cat ear sliders are genius but you need to fix your distance snap cause you aren't using variable spacing in any consistent manner + this is the lowest diff in the set He agrees and thanks you for this

sry to just spam DS DS D S D S DS D S but like it's the only major problem with your map so

this is honestly my favourite diff of the set just because of these fucking sliders i cant get over them

VOL 3
00:03:119 (2,3) - blanket
SPOILER
00:05:662 (2,5) - exposed
SPOILER
00:10:069 (4,1) -
SPOILER
00:14:306 (1,2,3,4,5) - this isn't spaced even/straight
00:18:882 (1,2) -
SPOILER
00:19:560 (3,4) -
SPOILER
00:21:255 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - i like this pattern
00:24:984 (3,4) -
SPOILER
01:15:152 (3,4) -
SPOILER

Fixed all blankets and the uneven mini stack thing
i don't really have a lot to say about your difficulty, your rhythm + patterning is okay but your structure is non existent, it's like if you took monstrata patterning and jumbled it all up with no logical connections between most patterns besides stuff like the one i pointed out above
the #1 thing you need to focus on going forward in your mapping is your aesthetics + structure, and since your strength seems to be patterning i'll leave you with this bit of advice: try to connect every pattern you make to another pattern via structure or just the patterning itself
if you want me to elaborate on what i'm talking about hit me with the pm

this map doesn't taste like strawberries (except the normal that diff is bomb af)agreed

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-04-20T00:36:40+00:00

Kaifin wrote:
these cat ears sliders in normal are the future

Ambient
00:15:323 (2,4,5) - uneven distance between these objects makes this shape look super weird and off - Fixed!
00:17:357 (3,6) - bugged stack - Stacked
00:21:255 (3,5) - bugged stack - Stacked
00:30:916 (4,4) - based on your structure before this point im suprised that you don't just stack this - O true
00:33:797 (4,1) - bugged stack - Stacked
a lot of your stacks are bugged, comb through the map and restack all your objects quickly to fix them - Donezo
press Ctrl A: next time try to spread out your mapping from the centre of the screen more and try not to be so confined away from the edges
01:23:289 (2,4) - blanket
SPOILER
- Yuck how did i miss that, fixed!
01:26:340 (3,4,5) - uneven triangle - Fixed!

kind of a shitty mod for your diff sorry, i can't think of a lot to say about it, it's just kinda serviceable

yeah totally understandable, in regards to my maps being so dense that is something i REALLY need to work on, thanks for the mod!

2 days late soz

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Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2017-04-20T08:34:55+00:00

@Unlock
sorry i dont quite understand your first mod and the rest is just nitpicky

Kaifin wrote:
Fizz
00:04:136 (1,2) - bbbbbblanket fixed
00:12:780 (2,3,4,5) - unevenly spaced (specifically 00:13:119 (4,5,1) - ) some of these are impossible to make perfectly even but i fixed one
00:23:797 (1,2,3) - uneven line i cant see why this is uneven
00:45:492 (1) - i hear what you're NCing to but since it breaks your NC structure and you're literally not patterning it any differently to emphasize this new sound you're NCing to, you shouldn't k
00:52:611 (9,1,3) - uneven overlap (3 is slightly more overlapped on 1 than 9 is) it barely appears overlapped
00:53:967 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - why do you just stop structuring here ?
i would say something about all the overlaps that aren't the same level of overlapped that aren't directly next to each other but are so close on the time line that it makes your mapping/structure messy, but i think its your style so yeah it's called not giving a fuck about tiny things like that

h

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Lokidoki

374 posts

Joined June 2015

Lokidoki 2017-04-24T16:18:59+00:00

Modding two highest difficulties

[General]
I noticed on diffs that use a triple here(vol.03 and OVA). On 00:11:593 (1) - when playing with combocolors the darker combocolor (blue-grayish) looks confusing, i suggest manually changing it to a less-darker one, like combo color 6.
Plus the jump between vol. 03 and OVA is quite big, especially when Rizen's difficulty focuses a lot on precise aiming.
These diffs are pp as hell lol.
[Vol. 03]
00:24:306 (1,2) - too straight of a jump imo, i'd make it a less wider angle.
00:33:966 (1,3) - i dunno about this overlap, i'd just stack it with the sliderhead.
00:47:356 (9,1) - maybe this was meant this way, but doesn't this jump seem a little big?
[Rizen's OVA]
00:03:118 (2,3) - stack properly.
00:42:102 (1,2,3) - this flows, kind of weirdly... maybe a less edgy shape? placing (2) on x:160 y:32 should play better.
00:43:458 (1,2,3) - that's a weird to hit pattern, but i can't come up with anything better than just making a 00:43:458 (1,2) - a less wide angle.
01:23:966 (1,2) - and 01:24:474 (4,5) - seem fairly emphasised, when 01:24:474 (4,5) has a clearly stronger sound to it.

Coconut best waifu, and good luck with ranking!

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,361 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2017-05-20T15:54:07+00:00

[General]

[Vol 0]
AR 5 seems too high for a lowest diff, try to -0.5
00:06:170 (4,1) - Please keep a consistent spacing here.
00:18:035 (4,1) - ^
00:24:306 (3,1) - ^
01:05:831 (5,1) - ^
01:14:306 (5,1) - ^

Current spread is not that satisfying. From Vol0 to Vol1 the gap is huge...same from Vol1 to Vol2. Maybe you need to reduce the difficulty of these two diffs.

Some tips on nerfing Vol1:
Lowering AR by 1
Nerfing super larger jumps like 00:33:797 (4,1) -
Simplify complex patterns like 00:24:306 (5,6,7) - (Challenging stack) 00:34:984 (2,3,4,5) -

For nerfing Vol 2 just nerf some huge jumps.

[Vol 4]
00:11:593 (1,2,3) - Why not increase the spacing between them for a bit? It's 3/4 rhythm gap and the drums are really strong.
00:14:644 (1,1) - I think this is a bit overdosed. (a bit too large for 1/4 gap)
00:47:186 (8) - NC?

The map is pretty solid and when you finish nerfing that two diffs (if you choose to do that), you could call me a recheck and I will complete my mod on that two diffs.
The map has potential to be nominated.

Last edited by Mafumafu 2017-05-23T12:20:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-05-20T16:16:12+00:00

Lokidoki wrote:
Modding two highest difficulties
[General]
I noticed on diffs that use a triple here(vol.03 and OVA). On 00:11:593 (1) - when playing with combocolors the darker combocolor (blue-grayish) looks confusing, i suggest manually changing it to a less-darker one, like combo color 6. I will address this with new combo colors
Plus the jump between vol. 03 and OVA is quite big, especially when Rizen's difficulty focuses a lot on precise aiming.
These diffs are pp as hell lol. ~ 👀
[Vol. 03]
00:24:306 (1,2) - too straight of a jump imo, i'd make it a less wider angle. Done
00:33:966 (1,3) - i dunno about this overlap, i'd just stack it with the sliderhead. Moved down and removed the overlap
00:47:356 (9,1) - maybe this was meant this way, but doesn't this jump seem a little big? Yes they are, its to emphasize the cymbals, lowered them a little to reduce spacing though
Coconut best waifu, and good luck with ranking!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-05-20T16:31:49+00:00

nerfed my diff a bit

applied everything in lokidoki's mod, thanks!

nerf this

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
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Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-05-20T16:38:42+00:00

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Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-05-23T13:54:15+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[Vol 4]
00:11:593 (1,2,3) - Why not increase the spacing between them for a bit? It's 3/4 rhythm gap and the drums are really strong. sure
00:14:644 (1,1) - I think this is a bit overdosed. (a bit too large for 1/4 gap) ok, shortened spacing to half of what it was
00:47:186 (8) - NC? added

thanks!

update

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Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-05-23T14:30:47+00:00

Updated Rizen's, Ambient's, Fizz's Diff and added DakiniBrave (my old alias) to the tags

waiting on moonlit

Moonlit

112 posts

Joined August 2013

Moonlit 2017-05-23T20:09:50+00:00

applied all of Regraz's changes

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Mordred

532 posts

Joined October 2015

Mordred 2017-05-24T15:39:22+00:00

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00:03:458 (3) - lmao pls

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Saileach

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Joined November 2014

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Saileach 2017-05-25T08:18:40+00:00

~~It's my style, honestly tho its not unrankable so im probs not gonna change that~~ Fine i changed it >.>

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-05-29T05:42:40+00:00

Vol. 3

00:07:187 (2,3) - The jump felt a bit too big, especially since 00:07:865 (4,1) - is the height of the melody.
00:09:559 (1,4) - You can probably work this into a better structure. Right now it looks white messy ad 1 is uncomfortably close to 4.
00:10:407 (5,6) - Don't stack them especially when 5>6 maps a pitch increase similarly to 00:09:559 (1,2,3) - .
00:12:780 (2,3,4,5,1) - These are quiet... reflect that with smaller spacing? and maybe just use 1.00 DS instead of jumps?
00:17:018 (3,4,5,1) - Really uncomfortably wide angle with 3>4>5>1 imo xP. I think you can improve the movement here.

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00:22:950 (6) - Don't stack. Do something like this: creates a really nice flow into the next pattern

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00:24:306 (1) - Ctrl+G really flows better imo.
00:28:119 (5) - Just delete it. The triplet is unnecessary especially since you forget to map it later anyways.
00:28:543 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't stack 1+2 either. You can do something like this: to facilitate good flow into slider 3.

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00:33:288 (5,6) - When possible, try to use the same slider again to create visual consistency. Pick either 5 or 6, and copy paste it. don't use two different sliders

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00:40:407 (5,6,1) - Entry angle into 1 is quite poor. 4>5>6 create a counterclockwise movement so i'm expecting something like this: All 3 sliders will work with the flow, If you want a wide angle from 5>6>1, pick blue. if you want the most common and "natural" movement, pick beige, if you want aesthetically pleasing, and sharp in angle, pick grey.

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00:57:017 (1,2,3) - poor overlap aesthetic imo. What you did with 00:54:813 (4,5,6,7) - was good. Use this instead. If you overlap too little, it looks bad, basically xD.

Basically, I'd like to see more thought going into slider and pattern designs. You don't have to make everything a pattern like me, but try to give a reason for every single one of your slider/circle being exactly where they are. Flow could also be improved, and I feel part of that is because you sometimes decide to stack 1/2's while sometimes not stacking and using jumps. Imo go with jumps since they facilitate better flow. I've never been a fan of 1/2 stacked circles since you force players to stay at the same location and that breaks momentum a bit (but thats my opinion, ur free to disagree as many mappers do xD).

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