Bon, chui la xD.
[General]
00:10:658 (10658|2,10958|2,11258|2,11858|1,12308|3) - Uhh is not really an unrankable issue, and it look as if it won't change, but it actually does.
Why are you making the begining drum with sample soft-hitwhistle, while after you put a normal soft-whistle using the icon on the left side.
The thing that can change in-game is, if people turn off hitsound, they won't hear the begining note 00:10:658 (10658|2,10958|2,11258|2,11858|1,12308|3) - as "soft-hitwhistle", but will hear them as hitnormal.
This is one of the rare map that hitsound nearly change the entire song, so you'll have to be extra carefull on your hitsound, due to it being so loud, it change the rhythm of the song itself.
[Map]
00:12:308 (12308|3) - Remove your soft-whistle here, no loud drum that you been matching with whistle.
00:14:858 - Add a whistle to keep it consistent.
00:19:658 (19658|3,19658|2,19808|2,19808|1,19958|1,19958|0,20108|1,20108|2) - How about something like this :
http://puu.sh/un18c/ba5731dd9a.jpg? I feel that it follow the drum much better, same drum sound as well, instead of a double stairs which make the column 2 and 3 having too much jack, while the drum is really simple here.
00:22:508 (22508|3,22508|2) - Is there a reason this to be double note? is not the only one, but seriously feel random your double note on 1/2 snap.
Like look at this repeat pattern : 00:22:208 (22208|2,22208|3,22358|0,22358|1,22508|3,22508|2) - , there no sound that give this feeling no?
00:28:358 (28358|3,28358|2,28508|0,28508|1,28658|3,28808|1,28808|0,28958|3,28958|2,29108|0,29108|1,29258|2,29258|3) - This is easy to play, yet because is so simple to play is also so easy to notice that it doesn't fit the song at all, like is the same pattern, yet the song give tons of different rhythm.
00:32:558 - , 00:33:158 - , 00:33:758 - and 00:34:358 - no more clap here for the loud drum?
00:51:758 - Forgot your clap here.
01:11:108 (71108|0,71258|3,71258|2,71408|0,71558|3,71558|2,71708|0) - Same reason as
00:28:358 (28358|3,28358|2,28508|0,28508|1,28658|3,28808|1,28808|0,28958|3,28958|2,29108|0,29108|1,29258|2,29258|3) - . Pretty boring pattern for a pattern that doesn'T fit much the song. The song have different rhythm while you make it the same.
01:17:633 (77633|2) - Delete, ghost notes, the low streamy piano start at 01:17:708 -
01:24:158 - ahhhh 3 soft-hitnomal sound sooo loud and uglyy, where your clap?!
01:26:408 (86408|3,86408|1,86408|2,86708|3,86708|0,86708|2,87008|1,87008|0,87008|3,87308|2,87308|0,87308|1) - all these have the same drum sound at least, and the same synth, at least add a whistle at 01:26:408 (86408|3,86408|1,86408|2,86708|2,86708|3,86708|0) - , just like 01:27:008 (87008|1,87008|0,87008|3,87308|2,87308|1,87308|0) - . 3 soft-hitnormal is killing my ears QAQ
01:34:808 (94808|1,94808|0,95108|3,95108|2,95558|3,95558|1,95708|2,95858|3,95858|2) - OMG 2 finish is TOO LOUD, remove at least 1!! Also to make this 01:37:058 - the loudest.
01:53:858 (113858|1,114308|3,114758|0,115058|3) - You probably match this for the instrument or vocal but this 01:55:358 (115358|0) - should start at 01:55:508 - . An example of how long the LNs should be :
http://puu.sh/un2cN/4405a37f7b.jpg (don't do this pattern, is just to show how long the LN should have been.
02:00:308 (120308|1,120308|2) - Forgot a clap here.
02:05:258 (125258|0,125258|1,125333|2,125408|3,125408|0,125483|1,125558|2,125558|3,125633|0,125708|1,125708|3,125783|2,125858|0,125858|1) - How about make the hitsound cooler here that fit the song drum
. Change these 2 02:05:708 (125708|1,125783|2) - into whistle
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There is a change of drum in the middle.
02:06:608 (126608|2,126758|2,126908|2,127058|2) - Hmm a bit too much 3rd column?
http://puu.sh/un2se/2c81054fe2.jpg02:16:058 (136058|0,136058|3,136208|2,136208|1) - Make these 3 notes, like you did at 02:15:458 (135458|3,135458|1,135458|2,135608|0,135608|2,135608|1) - and 02:17:858 (137858|2,137858|1,137858|0,138008|3,138008|2,138008|1,138458|1,138458|2,138458|3,138608|0,138608|1,138608|2) -
02:25:958 (145958|3,146108|2,146108|1,146258|0,146408|3,146558|2,146558|1,146708|0,146858|1,146858|2,147008|3,147158|2,147158|1,147308|0) - Again same pattern while the song do clearly give a different rhythm.
02:28:058 - Should have more note then 02:28:208 - , so make 3 notes at 02:28:058 - , and 2 notes at 02:28:208 -
02:30:158 - I understand you really really want to just map for the drum, but here, the synth is loud and clear, and would cause confusion to have to hit later. Just add one note to show that it isn't a loud drum.
02:51:008 (171008|2,171158|2,171308|2,171458|2,171608|2,171758|2) - I don't know if you notice this
http://puu.sh/un2RH/5bf8ca15bc.jpg, a bit too much for 3rd column xD
02:55:508 (175508|2,175658|2,175808|2,175958|2,176108|2,176258|2,176408|2) - ^ again :
http://puu.sh/un2Zg/5612f1ede5.jpg03:01:058 (181058|1,181058|2,181208|2,181208|3) - Why is there randomly a normal-hitwhistle?! It sound so random, and is a really clear hitsound as well.
http://puu.sh/un338/713b4eab1c.jpg. Change it back to Auto.
03:09:158 (189158|3,189158|2,189308|0,189458|1,189458|2,189608|3,189758|2,189758|1,189908|0,190058|1,190058|2,190208|3,190358|2,190358|1,190508|0) - Again! Same pattern for a cool drum rhythm in the song ;w;. Fit the song more please.
03:11:108 (191108|0,191258|1,191258|2,191408|3,191558|2,191558|1,191708|0,191858|1,191858|2,192008|3,192158|0,192158|1) - Look at the continue S pattern.
03:19:508 (199508|3,199658|0,199808|3) - To be honest, if I want to fit the drum, I'll make player feel the drum at 03:19:508 - and 03:19:808 - . Right now, these 3 03:19:508 (199508|3,199658|0,199808|3) - feel the same :S.
03:41:858 (221858|0,221858|3,221858|2,222008|0,222008|1,222458|0,222458|1,222458|3,222608|2,222608|3) - Make all these consistent 3 notes
03:37:658 (217658|2,217658|1) - ^
04:14:858 - Not mapping this loud drum anymore?
04:28:658 - Should have a triplet here too.
04:32:258 - + till the end. OMG lower the amount of soft-hitfinish please. This is totally a map that I'm turning hitsound off. The finisher ARE SO LOUD and painfull for the ears while playing. I have no idea how you could map like this xD.
