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Thank mod request from my user page
Some Suggestions
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[Noboru]
AR +1?(IMO)
OD +1?(IMO)
00:46:703 (1) -Remove New combo and 00:47:650 (2) - New combo?
00:52:387 (1) - New combo?
01:10:703 (2,3) - I not like litter overlap try sometime like this http://puu.sh/3viv carefully if you fix this you need fix spacing at 01:13:229 (1)
02:05:018 (2) - weird slider wave maybe this http://puu.sh/3viP (more symentrical) ? (note carefully spacing at 02:05:966 (3,4,5,6) )
02:40:387 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/3vja this (7) the start slider i can't see this arrow with (8) so this is unrank try someting place other
02:57:439 (3) - ugly slider arc maybe this http://puu.sh/3vkf ? (better symentrical) If yes here code
03:11:334 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bad symentrical (IMO) maybe this http://puu.sh/3vjt ? most better symentrical
04:01:228 (6) - ^ same above at 02:05:018 (2)
04:22:070 (6) - put new combo and at 04:22:386 (1) - Remove new combo
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[Mikako]
HP -1
AR+1
00:30:913 (1) - New combo?
00:35:650 (1) - New combo?
00:40:703 (1) - New combo?
00:54:755 (6) - New combo and at 00:54:913 (1) - Remove new combo
01:22:703 (3,4) - I see this is jump 01:23:018 (4) - new combobecause jump but this just my IMO
01:32:807 (1) - put new combo and at 01:33:439 (2) - Remove new combo
01:47:334 (2) - weird slider maybe this http://puu.sh/3vlo ? (note if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:48:281 (3,4) )
02:03:124 (2) - remove curve slider and put slider parellal (IMO)
02:41:334 (5) - put new combo and at 02:41:650 (1) - Remove new combo
02:45:124 (1) - put new combo and at 02:45:439 (1) - Remove new combo
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - this just my imo i think this stream is very hard play i think put slider repeat but this just my imo
03:53:650 (7) - weird slider wave try symentrical
03:56:176 (9) - ^ same above 03:53:650 (7)
04:06:913 (2,3) - the end sliders are weird stack try better stack
04:11:018 (9) - Put new combo and 04:11:334 (3) - Remove new combo
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That all i think sorry my poor english
Star! and good luck song
Thank mod request from my user page
Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Noboru]
AR +1?(IMO)
OD +1?(IMO)
00:46:703 (1) -Remove New combo and 00:47:650 (2) - New combo?
00:52:387 (1) - New combo?
01:10:703 (2,3) - I not like litter overlap try sometime like this http://puu.sh/3viv carefully if you fix this you need fix spacing at 01:13:229 (1)
02:05:018 (2) - weird slider wave maybe this http://puu.sh/3viP (more symentrical) ? (note carefully spacing at 02:05:966 (3,4,5,6) )
02:40:387 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/3vja this (7) the start slider i can't see this arrow with (8) so this is unrank try someting place other
02:57:439 (3) - ugly slider arc maybe this http://puu.sh/3vkf ? (better symentrical) If yes here code
SPOILER
372,244,177439,2,8,B|441:132|245:9|175:121,1,340
03:11:334 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bad symentrical (IMO) maybe this http://puu.sh/3vjt ? most better symentrical
04:01:228 (6) - ^ same above at 02:05:018 (2)
04:22:070 (6) - put new combo and at 04:22:386 (1) - Remove new combo
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[Mikako]
HP -1
AR+1
00:30:913 (1) - New combo?
00:35:650 (1) - New combo?
00:40:703 (1) - New combo?
00:54:755 (6) - New combo and at 00:54:913 (1) - Remove new combo
01:22:703 (3,4) - I see this is jump 01:23:018 (4) - new combobecause jump but this just my IMO
01:32:807 (1) - put new combo and at 01:33:439 (2) - Remove new combo
01:47:334 (2) - weird slider maybe this http://puu.sh/3vlo ? (note if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:48:281 (3,4) )
02:03:124 (2) - remove curve slider and put slider parellal (IMO)
02:41:334 (5) - put new combo and at 02:41:650 (1) - Remove new combo
02:45:124 (1) - put new combo and at 02:45:439 (1) - Remove new combo
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - this just my imo i think this stream is very hard play i think put slider repeat but this just my imo
03:53:650 (7) - weird slider wave try symentrical
03:56:176 (9) - ^ same above 03:53:650 (7)
04:06:913 (2,3) - the end sliders are weird stack try better stack
04:11:018 (9) - Put new combo and 04:11:334 (3) - Remove new combo
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That all i think sorry my poor english
Star! and good luck song