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Nymph
不好意思呢~由于太喜欢这首歌 所以我来吐下槽~

General:
2个难度SV都偏高

Noboru:
我猜想你想把这个难度弄成3星左右?但是也不应该就因为这样子就把难度参数调这么高...有点不伦不类了 而且加个HR之后打2个100就半血了..
建议3个参数都-2.
SV的话我觉得1.2 1.3就可以了
00:34:545 (4) - 蓝线太奇怪了 EASY难度 不要这样子吧
00:46:702 (1) - FINISH也许更好?
00:55:860 (3) - 不知道你感觉怎么样 但是在我这里这音量有点太大了 建议弄成30
01:02:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里特别适合做一个音量变化 你的2是音量25 那么3可以音量35 4音量45 然后在5这里减低到30音量 6开头加FINISH 试试效果如何
01:11:808 (4) - 这种难度不建议用3连打
01:26:176 (3,4,5) - 这里背景音已经这么高了 应该降低音量才对啊....
01:27:124 (1) - 不明白这个回转的短滑条的用意是什么 个人认为单个长滑条更适合
01:34:702 (4,5,6,7) - 这里用转盘更好吧...用几个SLIDER又复杂又没看出过渡效果...
01:37:229 (2) - 头FINISH
01:46:229 (3,4) - 不应该属于这个难度的东西
01:56:176 (3) - 同上
02:11:176 (3,4) - 一起挪动到02:11:018开始 然后分别加一个转折?这样更符合鼓
02:13:860 (8) - 02:13:544开始吧?也是更符合鼓
03:25:071 (5,6) - 这不符合难度呢。。
03:25:860 (1) - 头FINISH呀
03:44:492 (4) - 这个结尾FINISH 这种地方放FINISH都很好听
03:54:597 (1) - 前面不用转盘 怎么这里想起来用了 T T
04:15:439 (5) - 吐槽不能...
04:32:333 (3) - 这个时间不对吧..我也没弄明白这个怎么放合适
话说我不觉得这歌适合这样用鼓声跟原歌曲的鼓声 用点默认的SOFT-WHISTLE可能更适合?这鼓声给我一种异样的胸闷感 T T

Mikako:
大部分还是想说的音量啊 FINISH 还有SV太高的问题
01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这里前面距离递增 后面再递减一下呗 现在的似乎不太好玩
哎 不行了 肚子饿了 后面不看啦T T
加油吧星之声~ GOGO~
Topic Starter
zsr123

Nymph_ wrote:

不好意思呢~由于太喜欢这首歌 所以我来吐下槽~

General:
2个难度SV都偏高

Noboru:
我猜想你想把这个难度弄成3星左右?但是也不应该就因为这样子就把难度参数调这么高...
有点不伦不类了 而且加个HR之后打2个100就半血了.. 建议3个参数都-2. done

SV的话我觉得1.2 1.3就可以了 个人不是很喜欢太慢的SV ,目前我感觉还不错....
00:34:545 (4) - 蓝线太奇怪了 EASY难度 不要这样子吧 跟bass呀= = (其实我一直把这个难度当normal做的...)
00:46:702 (1) - FINISH也许更好?前面这段很平静的说.. 突然来个finish感觉很奇怪...
00:55:860 (3) - 不知道你感觉怎么样 但是在我这里这音量有点太大了 建议弄成30 恩,,这个难度的忘记改了,不过感觉40更好
01:02:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里特别适合做一个音量变化 你的2是音量25 那么3可以音量35 4音量45 然后在5这里减低到30音量 6开头加FINISH 试试效果如何 done
01:11:808 (4) - 这种难度不建议用3连打 感觉还行的呀 > <.. 按照normal来说...
01:26:176 (3,4,5) - 这里背景音已经这么高了 应该降低音量才对啊.... @ @
01:27:124 (1) - 不明白这个回转的短滑条的用意是什么 个人认为单个长滑条更适合
01:34:702 (4,5,6,7) - 这里用转盘更好吧...用几个SLIDER又复杂又没看出过渡效果... done
01:37:229 (2) - 头FINISH done
01:46:229 (3,4) - 不应该属于这个难度的东西 fixed
01:56:176 (3) - 同上 这个够无脑啊 一直按着就行= =... 我也找不到什么好的方法代替这个地方..
02:11:176 (3,4) - 一起挪动到02:11:018开始 然后分别加一个转折?这样更符合鼓 done
02:13:860 (8) - 02:13:544开始吧?也是更符合鼓 done
03:25:071 (5,6) - 这不符合难度呢。。fixed
03:25:860 (1) - 头FINISH呀 不喜欢= =
03:44:492 (4) - 这个结尾FINISH 这种地方放FINISH都很好听 done
03:54:597 (1) - 前面不用转盘 怎么这里想起来用了 T T > <... 这里也硬跟音乐 就太难了...
04:15:439 (5) - 吐槽不能...> <
04:32:333 (3) - 这个时间不对吧..我也没弄明白这个怎么放合适 的确..加根红线好了..
话说我不觉得这歌适合这样用鼓声跟原歌曲的鼓声 用点默认的SOFT-WHISTLE可能更适合?这鼓声给我一种异样的胸闷感 T T

Mikako:
大部分还是想说的音量啊 FINISH 还有SV太高的问题
01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这里前面距离递增 后面再递减一下呗 现在的似乎不太好玩
哎 不行了 肚子饿了 后面不看啦T T
加油吧星之声~ GOGO~[/color]
谢谢 :)
Magical Pokie
遊戲裏MOD^
Magical Pokie
Hi,New Combo=NC^
(NC可以不採納)
Noboru
32:492 這裡 NC
47:650 NC
1.06.913 nc
1.11.650 這裡很壓力……


總體來說,1/8有幾個。。沒有滑鼠技巧的新手,會斷掉&……
KanaRin
As per your request.
Here's some suggestion for you.

[Taiko]

That's some things you need to know in my modding.
- KAT = Blue note ( Big KAT = Big notes , same of DON)
- DON = Red note


00:40:702 (26) - Remove Kat , Don here.
00:41:650 (29) - Kat?
01:32:176 (171) - 1/4 (Stream) can't use big notes! Remember that in the next time :P
02:07:544 (282) - ^
02:12:597 (298) - ^ and change to Kat here.
03:14:650 (110) - Can't use big note and change to Kat here
03:15:755 (114) - ^
03:20:807 (135) - ^
03:24:281 (148,149,150,151) - just remove big notes here.
03:46:071 (224) - remove finsh too
04:18:913 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341) - Don't suggest Stream here, try to change it.& Remove 1/4 finsih too.
04:23:965 (349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365) - ^
And I think the last red lines (timing change) have a bit too hard to read.
I suggest that let the map ended in 04:26:492 (365) - .


Well. In fact , That's a really nice first map.
But some rules you need to know XD
Remember do not use big notes in 1/4.

My Rating: 8 / 10.

Star~ Good luck.
Topic Starter
zsr123

KanaRin wrote:

As per your request.
Here's some suggestion for you.

[Taiko]

That's some things you need to know in my modding.
- KAT = Blue note ( Big KAT = Big notes , same of DON)
- DON = Red note


00:40:702 (26) - Remove Kat , Don here.done
00:41:650 (29) - Kat?done
01:32:176 (171) - 1/4 (Stream) can't use big notes! Remember that in the next time :P ok,fixed
02:07:544 (282) - ^ fixed
02:12:597 (298) - ^ and change to Kat here.fixed
03:14:650 (110) - Can't use big note and change to Kat heredone
03:15:755 (114) - ^fixed
03:20:807 (135) - ^fixed
03:24:281 (148,149,150,151) - just remove big notes here.fixed
03:46:071 (224) - remove finsh too fixed
04:18:913 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341) - Don't suggest Stream here, try to change it.& Remove 1/4 finsih too.fixed, can't find something else better instead this @ @ , still kat,don,kat,don would be boring IMO..> <
04:23:965 (349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365) - ^ fixed
And I think the last red lines (timing change) have a bit too hard to read.
I suggest that let the map ended in 04:26:492 (365) - .
ok

Well. In fact , That's a really nice first map.
But some rules you need to know XD
Remember do not use big notes in 1/4.

My Rating: 8 / 10.

Star~ Good luck.
thank you very much :)
CuNha
:)
Topic Starter
zsr123
thanks for your star :)
NatsumeRin
[Noburu]
不建议最简单难度用到circle的4分音三连,会对完全的新手难度过高。rank时也可能在难度问题上被刁难。但决定权仍然是你的
01:50:808 (3) - 如果横过来或者斜开一点,折返点不和4有重叠部分,会不会更好看。这里主要提个思路,因为我感觉相对于音效你的排版明显提升空间比较大……
03:43:860 (2) - 感觉这个音是whistle?
04:04:071 (2,3,4) - 可以转的再圆滑一点
04:10:386 - 有加音的感觉
04:33:280 (4) - 没snap好

[Mikako]
00:54:755 (6,1) - 建议用叠,或者任何的小spacing,6的感觉很轻不用也和平时做一样大的移动。而后面123不用摆那么直,只是参考:

01:03:124 (6) - 头少个whistle?
01:05:966 (3,4,5) - 这里音量大,不妨摆的开一些,或者小跳,或者距离渐远,这样的手法试一试。后面new combo似乎该在现在的6上,这个时候spacing再缩回来。
01:22:071 (1,2,3) - 这一串给我的感觉是你开始想两排直线出去结果发现右边顶到屏幕了不得不缩,这样试试又如何呢:
01:26:492 (3) - 往下放,转的圆一点
01:31:387 (4,5) - slider的位置会让手感不太好。建议4往后放1/4,5删,空的位置补circle,就是4circle-slider-circle
01:34:386 (3,4,5) - 小间距建议
01:36:597 (1,2,3) - 比较明显的不等间距
后面没什么更多类型的具体问题好讲,整体来看,间距有些小了(因为BPM太低,这样总有些缩手缩脚),摆的太直了(尤其体现在三连五连)
音效很好,把排版弄好了相信你很有前途的……加油~

edit:
[Taiko]
如果大部分还是按架子鼓的思路,就没必要单做taiko了……这是我的看法。
整体节奏密度有点低了。


Topic Starter
zsr123

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Noburu]
不建议最简单难度用到circle的4分音三连,会对完全的新手难度过高。rank时也可能在难度问题上被刁难。但决定权仍然是你的
01:50:808 (3) - 如果横过来或者斜开一点,折返点不和4有重叠部分,会不会更好看。这里主要提个思路,因为我感觉相对于音效你的排版明显提升空间比较大…… done
03:43:860 (2) - 感觉这个音是whistle?不是> <
04:04:071 (2,3,4) - 可以转的再圆滑一点 好.
04:10:386 - 有加音的感觉
04:33:280 (4) - 没snap好fixed

[Mikako]
00:54:755 (6,1) - 建议用叠,或者任何的小spacing,6的感觉很轻不用也和平时做一样大的移动。而后面123不用摆那么直,只是参考:
[attachment=2:77104]87.png[/attachment:77104] done
01:03:124 (6) - 头少个whistle?没有= =
01:05:966 (3,4,5) - 这里音量大,不妨摆的开一些,或者小跳,或者距离渐远,这样的手法试一试。后面new combo似乎该在现在的6上,这个时候spacing再缩回来。 done
01:22:071 (1,2,3) - 这一串给我的感觉是你开始想两排直线出去结果发现右边顶到屏幕了不得不缩,这样试试又如何呢:
SPOILER
[attachment=1:77104]88.png[/attachment:77104]
[attachment=0:77104]89.png[/attachment:77104]
done
01:26:492 (3) - 往下放,转的圆一点 换了另一种摆法
01:31:387 (4,5) - slider的位置会让手感不太好。建议4往后放1/4,5删,空的位置补circle,就是4circle-slider-circle done
01:34:386 (3,4,5) - 小间距建议
01:36:597 (1,2,3) - 比较明显的不等间距 fixed
后面没什么更多类型的具体问题好讲,整体来看,间距有些小了(因为BPM太低,这样总有些缩手缩脚),摆的太直了(尤其体现在三连五连)
音效很好,把排版弄好了相信你很有前途的……加油~

edit:
[Taiko]
如果大部分还是按架子鼓的思路,就没必要单做taiko了……这是我的看法。
整体节奏密度有点低了。


谢谢 :)
OzzyOzrock
Here >w<

Download: LOW - Through The Years Far Away (zsr123) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu

Timing might be old ;_; but maybe not if you did not change it...
Topic Starter
zsr123
thanks :)
Axey
^^
just suggestions

[Mikako]
00:39:123(5)-(5)拉到00:39:755,把(6)去掉,加个和(5)一样的silder 调整间距
01:24:913(10,11)-和(7,8)在一个高度上比较好看?

nice map >w< no kds~
Topic Starter
zsr123

BakaHuang wrote:

^^
just suggestions

[Mikako]
00:39:123(5)-(5)拉到00:39:755,把(6)去掉,加个和(5)一样的silder 调整间距
01:24:913(10,11)-和(7,8)在一个高度上比较好看?

nice map >w< no kds~
谢谢 :)


ah,,, 习惯点 give kudos 那个键了 虽然之前就看到你后面写了> , <
-kevincela-
Sorry for the delay,but here's my mod :D

[Noboru]

  1. Well,there are many parts that can be too hard for a Easy/Normal,but i guess it's fine,since the BPM is slow
  2. 03:25:228 - I would add a note here
[Mikako]

  1. 00:49:229 (5) - Spacing
  2. 01:11:334 (3) - ^
  3. 03:28:703 (3) - 1 grid right
  4. 03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this stream in 1/4
  5. 04:07:545 (3) - 4 grids left
Good map,keep up the good job! :D
Topic Starter
zsr123

-kevincela- wrote:

Sorry for the delay,but here's my mod :D

[Noboru]

  1. Well,there are many parts that can be too hard for a Easy/Normal,but i guess it's fine,since the BPM is slow
  2. 03:25:228 - I would add a note here done
[Mikako]

  1. 00:49:229 (5) - Spacing should be fixed
  2. 01:11:334 (3) - ^ ^
  3. 03:28:703 (3) - 1 grid right done
  4. 03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this stream in 1/4
  5. 04:07:545 (3) - 4 grids left
Good map,keep up the good job! :D
thanks for your modding. :)
poor net here , cant upload map atm :o
Pereira006
hello~~

Thank mod request from my user page

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Noboru]

AR +1?(IMO)
OD +1?(IMO)

00:46:703 (1) -Remove New combo and 00:47:650 (2) - New combo?
00:52:387 (1) - New combo?
01:10:703 (2,3) - I not like litter overlap try sometime like this http://puu.sh/3viv carefully if you fix this you need fix spacing at 01:13:229 (1)
02:05:018 (2) - weird slider wave maybe this http://puu.sh/3viP (more symentrical) ? (note carefully spacing at 02:05:966 (3,4,5,6) )
02:40:387 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/3vja this (7) the start slider i can't see this arrow with (8) so this is unrank try someting place other
02:57:439 (3) - ugly slider arc maybe this http://puu.sh/3vkf ? (better symentrical) If yes here code
SPOILER
372,244,177439,2,8,B|441:132|245:9|175:121,1,340

03:11:334 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bad symentrical (IMO) maybe this http://puu.sh/3vjt ? most better symentrical
04:01:228 (6) - ^ same above at 02:05:018 (2)
04:22:070 (6) - put new combo and at 04:22:386 (1) - Remove new combo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Mikako]

HP -1
AR+1

00:30:913 (1) - New combo?
00:35:650 (1) - New combo?
00:40:703 (1) - New combo?
00:54:755 (6) - New combo and at 00:54:913 (1) - Remove new combo
01:22:703 (3,4) - I see this is jump 01:23:018 (4) - new combobecause jump but this just my IMO
01:32:807 (1) - put new combo and at 01:33:439 (2) - Remove new combo
01:47:334 (2) - weird slider maybe this http://puu.sh/3vlo ? (note if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:48:281 (3,4) )
02:03:124 (2) - remove curve slider and put slider parellal (IMO)
02:41:334 (5) - put new combo and at 02:41:650 (1) - Remove new combo
02:45:124 (1) - put new combo and at 02:45:439 (1) - Remove new combo
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - this just my imo i think this stream is very hard play i think put slider repeat but this just my imo
03:53:650 (7) - weird slider wave try symentrical
03:56:176 (9) - ^ same above 03:53:650 (7)
04:06:913 (2,3) - the end sliders are weird stack try better stack
04:11:018 (9) - Put new combo and 04:11:334 (3) - Remove new combo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
That all i think sorry my poor english
Star! and good luck song :P
Topic Starter
zsr123

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

Thank mod request from my user page

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Noboru]

AR +1?(IMO)
OD +1?(IMO)
done, and HP +1
00:46:703 (1) -Remove New combo and 00:47:650 (2) - New combo? no, sorry..
00:52:387 (1) - New combo?done
01:10:703 (2,3) - I not like litter overlap try sometime like this http://puu.sh/3viv carefully if you fix this you need fix spacing at 01:13:229 (1) uh..picture too small , but tried to fix overlap..
02:05:018 (2) - weird slider wave maybe this http://puu.sh/3viP (more symentrical) ? (note carefully spacing at 02:05:966 (3,4,5,6) )done
02:40:387 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/3vja this (7) the start slider i can't see this arrow with (8) so this is unrank try someting place other it's visible > <

02:57:439 (3) - ugly slider arc maybe this http://puu.sh/3vkf ? (better symentrical) If yes here code
SPOILER
372,244,177439,2,8,B|441:132|245:9|175:121,1,340
done
03:11:334 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bad symentrical (IMO) maybe this http://puu.sh/3vjt ? most better symentrical done
04:01:228 (6) - ^ same above at 02:05:018 (2) done
04:22:070 (6) - put new combo and at 04:22:386 (1) - Remove new combo done
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Mikako]

HP -1
AR+1
done
00:30:913 (1) - New combo? no,sorry
00:35:650 (1) - New combo? no,sorry
00:40:703 (1) - New combo? no,sorry
00:54:755 (6) - New combo and at 00:54:913 (1) - Remove new combo done
01:22:703 (3,4) - I see this is jump 01:23:018 (4) - new combobecause jump but this just my IMO no,sorry
01:32:807 (1) - put new combo and at 01:33:439 (2) - Remove new combo done
01:47:334 (2) - weird slider maybe this http://puu.sh/3vlo ? (note if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:48:281 (3,4) ) done
02:03:124 (2) - remove curve slider and put slider parellal (IMO) done
02:41:334 (5) - put new combo and at 02:41:650 (1) - Remove new combo done
02:45:124 (1) - put new combo and at 02:45:439 (1) - Remove new combo done
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - this just my imo i think this stream is very hard play i think put slider repeat but this just my imo wont be too hard since the bpm is slow, but well.. DONE..
03:53:650 (7) - weird slider wave try symentrical should be better now i guess..
03:56:176 (9) - ^ same above 03:53:650 (7) ^
04:06:913 (2,3) - the end sliders are weird stack try better stack I wasnt thinking make them stack..
04:11:018 (9) - Put new combo and 04:11:334 (3) - Remove new combo done
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
That all i think sorry my poor english
Star! and good luck song :P
thank you .. :)

it's ok, my english also poor :o
Banana
我是来扔星星的 :D
Topic Starter
zsr123
谢谢 :)
Magical Pokie
死吧 8-)
Dotsu
都是建议:

[General]


  • 最简单的难度还是太难了点
    所以还是建议做一个更简单的难度 不用1/4 note 另外Slider速度也弄小点 圈弄到最大
    后面那段Kiai Time建议在04:26:492结束
[Noboru]

  • 01:05:018 (3,4,5): 这里音量上升的有点突然
    01:17:018 (5): 这个长Slider还是分成几个Slider或者Slider和Circle吧
    01:36:597 (1): 离转盘有点近
    01:50:808 (3) , 02:05:966(3): 这种重复好几次的1/4 Slider对于新手来说会有点难
    02:13:544 (8): 建议分解成两个Slider
    02:58:071 (3) , 03:20:176 (4) : 这里不如静音算了(其实把Slider Tick Rate改成0.5就好了
    03:25:228 (5): 这个位置可能会让人误解 建议往左下拖一拖
    03:54:597 (1): 这个转盘放在这里感觉不大合适
    04:13:860 (4,5): 因为⑤你用了2X Slider速度所以间距也变成2X了(2X Slider速度貌似也没什么必要
    04:39:191 (1): 去掉Finish吧
[Mikako]


  • 00: ():
    01:42:281 (8): 感觉这个Slider有点太直了
    02:17:334 (9): 总看着有点别扭…改成左右方向试试(从右往左
    02:58:071 (3): 静音吧
    04:15:124 (2,3): 这里是2倍间距
太鼓就不看了

粉星鼓励一下 :D
Topic Starter
zsr123

impossiblexu wrote:

都是建议:

[General]


  • 最简单的难度还是太难了点
    所以还是建议做一个更简单的难度 不用1/4 note 另外Slider速度也弄小点 圈弄到最大
    后面那段Kiai Time建议在04:26:492结束
[Noboru]

  • 01:05:018 (3,4,5): 这里音量上升的有点突然 降低了点
    01:17:018 (5): 这个长Slider还是分成几个Slider或者Slider和Circle吧 done
    01:36:597 (1): 离转盘有点近 减少了1/2
    01:50:808 (3) , 02:05:966(3): 这种重复好几次的1/4 Slider对于新手来说会有点难
    02:13:544 (8): 建议分解成两个Slider 1个circle 和 2个 slider了
    02:58:071 (3) , 03:20:176 (4) : 这里不如静音算了(其实把Slider Tick Rate改成0.5就好了
    03:25:228 (5): 这个位置可能会让人误解 建议往左下拖一拖 done
    03:54:597 (1): 这个转盘放在这里感觉不大合适
    04:13:860 (4,5): 因为⑤你用了2X Slider速度所以间距也变成2X了(2X Slider速度貌似也没什么必要 fixed , 那个地方有一段 2倍bpm的 1/6鼓..
    04:39:191 (1): 去掉Finish吧
[Mikako]


  • 00: ():
    01:42:281 (8): 感觉这个Slider有点太直了 弄弯了点..
    02:17:334 (9): 总看着有点别扭…改成左右方向试试(从右往左 done
    02:58:071 (3): 静音吧 5%
    04:15:124 (2,3): 这里是2倍间距 做了一点改动..
太鼓就不看了

粉星鼓励一下 :D
非常感谢 :)
SamiPale
sry隔了两个星期

[General]
红线纯按照李白的来就行了,后面那两条95的可以删掉,可以踩到1/4线的

[Noboru]
01:36:597(1,2) - 大声点?
01:47:334(5) - normal-finish?
02:17:650(1) - spinner落在小节第一拍上就不要那么小声音了吧
从note的密度来看好像也不算简单..1/4 1/8的折返比较多,到[Mikako]难度的时候他们的纯折返的地方可以分成几个slider玩点花样也好

[Mikako]
开头很静的部分spacing可以拉大点
00:38:807(4) - 删掉?本来这个combo我觉得是要remix..这里不改下或者后面的slider也可以拉短点
01:34:386(4) - 这里远点没关系
03:09:755(2,3,4) - 这里也可以把spacing拉大点衔接下一个combo
03:25:228(1,2,3) - 这里换成5连比较好

不错,就是排版要加强
Topic Starter
zsr123

SamiPale wrote:

sry隔了两个星期

[General]
红线纯按照李白的来就行了,后面那两条95的可以删掉,可以踩到1/4线的 不行.. 直接按照原来的timing 放线上 听起来不准..

[Noboru]
01:36:597(1,2) - 大声点?提高了10%
01:47:334(5) - normal-finish? done
02:17:650(1) - spinner落在小节第一拍上就不要那么小声音了吧 加了个finish
从note的密度来看好像也不算简单..1/4 1/8的折返比较多,到[Mikako]难度的时候他们的纯折返的地方可以分成几个slider玩点花样也好

[Mikako]
开头很静的部分spacing可以拉大点
00:38:807(4) - 删掉?本来这个combo我觉得是要remix..这里不改下或者后面的slider也可以拉短点 保留了.. 跟随的是曲子的bass
01:34:386(4) - 这里远点没关系
03:09:755(2,3,4) - 这里也可以把spacing拉大点衔接下一个combo done
03:25:228(1,2,3) - 这里换成5连比较好 done

不错,就是排版要加强
谢谢 :)
EnakoRin
General
  • 歌曲最后一部分虽然map了,不过在normal难度中偏难,如果可以请去掉最后节奏变化的部分
    这歌太长了吧orz新规矩貌似要求4分钟以上不能rank
Noboru
  • 00:32:492 (2) - new combo?
    00:34:545 (4) - normal中用1/4不太合适吧,虽然放在这里符合歌曲节奏
    00:35:650 (5) - 听起来怪怪的
    00:54:755 (1) - 你看这里怎么处理下,用1/4对新手来说很痛苦
    01:06:913 (6) - new combo?
    01:11:650 (3,4,5) - normal别用这种的= =否则你这个图就成降低AR什么的HARD了。后面的就不提示了
    01:16:703 (3) - new combo?
    01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我在normal里面用这个,结果被喷了。你这个图和我那个一样最低难度是normal,所以得照顾新手
    01:28:387 (3) - 去掉clap
    01:29:650 (5) - 去掉第一个圈上的clap
    01:41:650 (5) - new combo
    01:43:545 (1) - 去掉new combo
    01:46:703 (3) - new combo
    01:48:597 (1) - 去掉new combo
    01:52:071 (5) - new combo
    01:56:176 (3) - normal更不推荐这种短+多repeat的slider了,除非你做个SB提示玩家Hold On
    01:58:071 (4) - new combo
    01:58:703 (1) - 去掉new combo
    02:02:176 (5) - new combo
    02:03:755 (1) - 去掉new combo
    02:06:913 (4) - new combo
    02:08:808 (1) - 去掉new combo
    02:12:281 (5) - new combo
    02:41:650 (8) - new combo
    02:45:439 (4) - new combo
    02:54:913 (7) - 第二个圈加finish
    02:59:966 (6) - new combo
    03:21:439 (5) - new combo
    03:23:334 (1,2,3,4) - 太难了
    03:38:492 (1) - 去掉new combo,这几个重叠得不好看
    03:40:702 (3) - new combo
    03:40:702 (3) - 第三个圈加个音效,这里感觉有点空
    03:44:492 (4) - 加个Hold On的SB比较好,不然容易断
    03:54:597 (1) - 加finish
    04:01:228 (6) - new combo
    04:05:018 (5) - normal更不推荐这种短+多repeat的slider了,除非你做个SB提示玩家Hold On
    04:11:334 (4) - new combo
    04:11:965 (1) - 去掉new combo
    04:15:439 (5) - 太吵了
    04:29:017 (4) - 加finish
Mikako
  • 00:36:124 (6) - 移动到00:35:965
    01:32:176 (6) - new combo
    01:32:807 (1) - 去掉new combo
    02:02:334 (6) - 没有必要弄repeat吧
    03:25:860 (5) - 第一个圈加finish
    04:05:018 (5) - 最后一个圈加finish
    04:06:913 (2,3) - 没重叠好
    04:16:386 (6) - new combo,第一个圈加finish
    04:44:830 - 是不是该加个spinner
音效不错,star
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
Topic Starter
zsr123
No_Gu
request from my queue

4:44 - 1 diff

[mikako]
00:21:439 (1,2,3,4) - 话说这地方音乐有在响吗
00:31:545 (8) - x248 y144
00:40:703 (6,7,8,9) - 弄个正方形吧
01:24:597 (9) - NC?
后面没啥问题了- -
Topic Starter
zsr123

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

4:44 - 1 diff

[mikako]
00:21:439 (1,2,3,4) - 话说这地方音乐有在响吗
00:31:545 (8) - x248 y144 ok
00:40:703 (6,7,8,9) - 弄个正方形吧 ok
01:24:597 (9) - NC?
后面没啥问题了- -
谢谢 :)
spboxer3
modding log via IRC
18:18 spboxer3: 00:30:913 (1,2) - [Normal]交換一下NC? 我覺得這個節奏的差距並沒有很大(可能你加NC的用意是為了補HP) 可是NC在後頭比較符合音樂 
18:18 spboxer3: 00:30:913 (1,2) - [Normal]交換一下NC? 我覺得這個節奏的差距並沒有很大(可能你加NC的用意是為了補HP) 可是NC在後頭比較符合音樂
18:19 zsr123: hao wo kan kan
18:20 spboxer3: 恩 話說拼音基本上我是看不懂的Orz... 盡量不要用拼音 雖然有些我能看懂Orz...
18:21 zsr123: 恩。。。 刚才输入法没切过来。。 其怪win8在这游戏里面切中文要按3次 切回英文却只按一次
18:21 spboxer3: 刪掉不常用的就好了
18:22 zsr123: 改好了 00:30:913 (4) - 取消了NC 00:32:492 (1) - NC
18:22 spboxer3: 話說win8有點厲害
18:22 zsr123: 就一个输入法。。
18:22 zsr123: win8 切输入法很麻烦。。 要设置成2种语言 而不是和以前 中文状态下 切换输入法的关闭
18:22 zsr123: 现在是切换 中文 和 英文= =
18:24 spboxer3: 01:25:544 (2,3) - ,01:27:123 (1,2) - 這種的我會建議盡量別overlaps
18:25 spboxer3: 能稍微分開點是沒關係的 就算spacing開了些 至少會比較乾淨
18:26 spboxer3: 01:29:650 (5,1,2,3) - 說實話 我的做法會讓
18:26 spboxer3: 會讓這些作出弧度
18:26 zsr123: 意思是那2个slider不要和note有重叠是吧?
18:26 spboxer3: 對
18:26 zsr123: 好
18:27 spboxer3: 我所說的弧度是指整齊的 不是像現在有地方很彎 但是有地方卻比較平滑
18:27 zsr123: 好
18:28 spboxer3: 01:41:650 (5) - NC在這01:43:544 (1) - 移除
18:28 zsr123: 我看看 该怎么摆 有辅助线就好了= =
18:28 spboxer3: 01:46:702 (3) - 01:48:597 (1) - 同上
18:29 spboxer3: 02:02:176 (5) - 02:03:755 (1) - ^
18:29 spboxer3: 後續不多說 稍微看一下吧 NC部分
18:30 zsr123: 恩
18:30 spboxer3: 舉例來說02:02:492 - 這位置是下一段的開始處 02:02:176 (5,6,7) - 卻是接續在一起的 於是我會把NC加在02:02:176 - 而不是02:03:755 -
18:30 spboxer3: 能懂我的意思
18:31 spboxer3: 你現在給人的感覺是NC超出界了
18:31 spboxer3: 上一段越線到下一個小節
18:32 spboxer3: 02:12:281 (5) - 這邊少了NC 記得補上
18:33 spboxer3: 話說你的Normal combo數好像都太長了點 記得注意一下 最好重新檢查過 我的建議是盡量別超過7 雖然有時候會有例外 這不是絕對的 但是通常Normal到7 combo已經很少見了
18:34 zsr123: 恩 我把全部的NC看一遍先。。。 貌似是我以前乱用NC了= = 没有跟着音乐的小节...
18:34 spboxer3: 02:57:439 (3) - 建議重拉lol 現在的slider比以前好看多 沒有大礙但是建議改一下
18:34 spboxer3: 如果你覺得現在就好也是可以的
18:35 spboxer3: 那NC部分我就先不說了
18:35 zsr123: 改过或许更好 我先试试
18:35 zsr123: 恩。。
18:35 spboxer3: 三個點就可以 不用用到4個
18:37 spboxer3: 03:23:334 (1,2,3,4) - 這種節奏在Normal裡很難讀懂 尤其是1/4的開頭要快不快要慢不慢 容易讓新手困惑 即使打了幾遍還是會覺得怪怪的
18:38 zsr123: 03:23:334 (1,2,3,4) - 那这里用spinner过渡下吧?
18:38 spboxer3: 03:35:965 (3,4,1) - 這種形狀實在有點怪怪的Orz... 考慮看看要不要做得有想法點 雖然這張2年了Orz... 可是以現在的技術來說感覺比較偏向隨手擺放的感覺
18:39 spboxer3: 好
18:39 spboxer3: 03:44:492 - note然後spinner延後至03:44:807 -
18:40 spboxer3: 這地方雖然節奏有變 但是還是能感覺出來重音是在03:44:807 -
18:40 spboxer3: 而前頭4個1/2,1/1感覺得出來是一組的
18:41 spboxer3: 所以我會建議改成我說的方式
18:43 spboxer3: 03:59:807 (4,5) - 如果你要這樣擺 那04:01:071 - 應該也要下個note 這樣才會符合這種節奏的sample 聽起來會順耳的多 如果要另外的擺法我會建議03:59:807 (4) - move到03:59:650 - & 04:00:439 (5) - ->04:00:281 -
18:44 spboxer3: 04:05:018 (5) - 是1/6不是1/8
18:44 zsr123: 恩 目前正在改 03:55:965的地方。。
18:44 zsr123: 03:35
18:45 spboxer3: 沒關係 我一直說下去 你可以慢慢改
18:45 zsr123: 好
18:45 spboxer3: 如果有問題可以跟我說 :P
18:45 zsr123: 恩
18:48 spboxer3: 我覺得Normal有點傷阿...
18:49 spboxer3: Hard:
18:50 spboxer3: 00:54:913 (2) - 感覺節奏多餘了 即使Taiko中這種做法很常見 但是這是standard 又加上這是首非常安靜的歌 因此不適合
18:51 zsr123: 是normal伤还是hard ? = =
18:51 spboxer3: 是Normal傷
18:51 spboxer3: Hard剛剛看auto感覺還OK
18:52 zsr123: 03:59:807 (4) - 04:00:439 (5) - 这2个我觉得不改比较好点= =
18:52 zsr123: 主要问题出在哪了? = =
18:52 zsr123: normal.
18:52 spboxer3: 那考慮在04:00:913 - 加個note??
18:52 spboxer3: 對 在Normal
18:53 spboxer3: 比較亂點
18:55 zsr123: 这个地方想保留= = 00:55:229 (2) - 音量降低至10%应该会好点
18:56 zsr123: 04:00:913 (6) - 04:01:071 (7) - 这2地方都加了note
18:57 spboxer3: 自創音效不能靜音或是接近聽不到
18:57 spboxer3: Orz...
18:57 zsr123: 居然有这种规定= =
18:57 spboxer3: 有
18:58 spboxer3: 只是因為不想改間距??
18:58 zsr123: 我觉得这样很好听呀= =
19:00 spboxer3: 不改沒關係 我只是說說我的意見
19:01 spboxer3: 01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 看得出來是種有想法的排列 可是感覺後頭萎了
19:02 spboxer3: 感覺是漸進式的增加 可是後頭的間距變小了
19:02 zsr123: 04:05:018 (5) - 正在修改。。
19:02 spboxer3: 沒關係 慢慢改 我先說~
19:05 spboxer3: 01:56:176 (3) - 我的看法-> 01:56:176 - &01:56:334 - 用note 然後01:56:492 - 開始slider 這樣會比較適合 看你決定吧
19:06 spboxer3: 02:02:334 (6) - 打法其實不是很好
19:08 spboxer3: 以玩家的角度來打這個pattern 02:02:334 - 用打擊點是適合的 但是02:02:492 - 也是重音而且比前頭更強 應該也要用打擊才對 可是用了slider reverse導致了只有音效 但沒有打擊感 強烈建議修改
19:09 spboxer3: 02:57:439 (3) - 同樣形狀問題 看你要不要改~
19:11 zsr123: 等等 有点乱= = 你现在说的是Hard吧?
19:11 spboxer3: 對 我剛剛寫Hard: 以下的都是Hard
19:12 zsr123: 好
19:12 spboxer3: 03:18:913 (7,8,9,10,11) - 這邊一樣 打擊感問題 click的時機都在1/4上 這樣會非常難打的 通常我們click的
19:13 spboxer3: 時機只有在1/1,1/2上
19:13 spboxer3: 1/4都是在連打部分使用
19:14 spboxer3: 03:24:281 (7,8) - 中間的03:24:597 - 感覺加個節奏會更好
19:15 spboxer3: 如果要加我會建議把8移到03:24:597 - 後頭再加上note 同樣是打擊點問題
19:17 zsr123: 01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个地方改成了 从1~9间距递增 应该行吧 话说有个note放在了x504 y88的位置 没问题吧??
19:18 spboxer3: 04:05:018 (5,1,2,3) - 這段節奏5的位置越線到開頭了 因此會產生1與2,3不連貫 而04:06:913 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 很明顯的就是一個梗 可因為前頭1的位置導致不一致
19:19 spboxer3: 剛剛那個1~11的部分等上傳後再看吧 你現在這樣說我不太清楚呢:<
19:19 zsr123: en
19:20 spboxer3: 04:35:965 (3,4,5,6) - 保持一直線??
19:21 spboxer3: 04:37:860 (7) - 別忘記對齊6
19:21 spboxer3: 對了 記得Hard 的NC也要重新看過
19:23 spboxer3: 再多找一些modder來看 之後找我recheck吧
Topic Starter
zsr123

spboxer3 wrote:

modding log via IRC
18:18 spboxer3: 00:30:913 (1,2) - [Normal]交換一下NC? 我覺得這個節奏的差距並沒有很大(可能你加NC的用意是為了補HP) 可是NC在後頭比較符合音樂 
18:18 spboxer3: 00:30:913 (1,2) - [Normal]交換一下NC? 我覺得這個節奏的差距並沒有很大(可能你加NC的用意是為了補HP) 可是NC在後頭比較符合音樂
18:19 zsr123: hao wo kan kan
18:20 spboxer3: 恩 話說拼音基本上我是看不懂的Orz... 盡量不要用拼音 雖然有些我能看懂Orz...
18:21 zsr123: 恩。。。 刚才输入法没切过来。。 其怪win8在这游戏里面切中文要按3次 切回英文却只按一次
18:21 spboxer3: 刪掉不常用的就好了
18:22 zsr123: 改好了 00:30:913 (4) - 取消了NC 00:32:492 (1) - NC
18:22 spboxer3: 話說win8有點厲害
18:22 zsr123: 就一个输入法。。
18:22 zsr123: win8 切输入法很麻烦。。 要设置成2种语言 而不是和以前 中文状态下 切换输入法的关闭
18:22 zsr123: 现在是切换 中文 和 英文= =
18:24 spboxer3: 01:25:544 (2,3) - ,01:27:123 (1,2) - 這種的我會建議盡量別overlaps
18:25 spboxer3: 能稍微分開點是沒關係的 就算spacing開了些 至少會比較乾淨
18:26 spboxer3: 01:29:650 (5,1,2,3) - 說實話 我的做法會讓
18:26 spboxer3: 會讓這些作出弧度
18:26 zsr123: 意思是那2个slider不要和note有重叠是吧?
18:26 spboxer3: 對
18:26 zsr123: 好
18:27 spboxer3: 我所說的弧度是指整齊的 不是像現在有地方很彎 但是有地方卻比較平滑
18:27 zsr123: 好
18:28 spboxer3: 01:41:650 (5) - NC在這01:43:544 (1) - 移除
18:28 zsr123: 我看看 该怎么摆 有辅助线就好了= =
18:28 spboxer3: 01:46:702 (3) - 01:48:597 (1) - 同上
18:29 spboxer3: 02:02:176 (5) - 02:03:755 (1) - ^
18:29 spboxer3: 後續不多說 稍微看一下吧 NC部分
18:30 zsr123: 恩
18:30 spboxer3: 舉例來說02:02:492 - 這位置是下一段的開始處 02:02:176 (5,6,7) - 卻是接續在一起的 於是我會把NC加在02:02:176 - 而不是02:03:755 -
18:30 spboxer3: 能懂我的意思
18:31 spboxer3: 你現在給人的感覺是NC超出界了
18:31 spboxer3: 上一段越線到下一個小節
18:32 spboxer3: 02:12:281 (5) - 這邊少了NC 記得補上
18:33 spboxer3: 話說你的Normal combo數好像都太長了點 記得注意一下 最好重新檢查過 我的建議是盡量別超過7 雖然有時候會有例外 這不是絕對的 但是通常Normal到7 combo已經很少見了
18:34 zsr123: 恩 我把全部的NC看一遍先。。。 貌似是我以前乱用NC了= = 没有跟着音乐的小节...
18:34 spboxer3: 02:57:439 (3) - 建議重拉lol 現在的slider比以前好看多 沒有大礙但是建議改一下
18:34 spboxer3: 如果你覺得現在就好也是可以的
18:35 spboxer3: 那NC部分我就先不說了
18:35 zsr123: 改过或许更好 我先试试
18:35 zsr123: 恩。。
18:35 spboxer3: 三個點就可以 不用用到4個
18:37 spboxer3: 03:23:334 (1,2,3,4) - 這種節奏在Normal裡很難讀懂 尤其是1/4的開頭要快不快要慢不慢 容易讓新手困惑 即使打了幾遍還是會覺得怪怪的
18:38 zsr123: 03:23:334 (1,2,3,4) - 那这里用spinner过渡下吧?
18:38 spboxer3: 03:35:965 (3,4,1) - 這種形狀實在有點怪怪的Orz... 考慮看看要不要做得有想法點 雖然這張2年了Orz... 可是以現在的技術來說感覺比較偏向隨手擺放的感覺
18:39 spboxer3: 好
18:39 spboxer3: 03:44:492 - note然後spinner延後至03:44:807 -
18:40 spboxer3: 這地方雖然節奏有變 但是還是能感覺出來重音是在03:44:807 -
18:40 spboxer3: 而前頭4個1/2,1/1感覺得出來是一組的
18:41 spboxer3: 所以我會建議改成我說的方式
18:43 spboxer3: 03:59:807 (4,5) - 如果你要這樣擺 那04:01:071 - 應該也要下個note 這樣才會符合這種節奏的sample 聽起來會順耳的多 如果要另外的擺法我會建議03:59:807 (4) - move到03:59:650 - & 04:00:439 (5) - ->04:00:281 -
18:44 spboxer3: 04:05:018 (5) - 是1/6不是1/8
18:44 zsr123: 恩 目前正在改 03:55:965的地方。。
18:44 zsr123: 03:35
18:45 spboxer3: 沒關係 我一直說下去 你可以慢慢改
18:45 zsr123: 好
18:45 spboxer3: 如果有問題可以跟我說 :P
18:45 zsr123: 恩
18:48 spboxer3: 我覺得Normal有點傷阿...
18:49 spboxer3: Hard:
18:50 spboxer3: 00:54:913 (2) - 感覺節奏多餘了 即使Taiko中這種做法很常見 但是這是standard 又加上這是首非常安靜的歌 因此不適合
18:51 zsr123: 是normal伤还是hard ? = =
18:51 spboxer3: 是Normal傷
18:51 spboxer3: Hard剛剛看auto感覺還OK
18:52 zsr123: 03:59:807 (4) - 04:00:439 (5) - 这2个我觉得不改比较好点= =
18:52 zsr123: 主要问题出在哪了? = =
18:52 zsr123: normal.
18:52 spboxer3: 那考慮在04:00:913 - 加個note??
18:52 spboxer3: 對 在Normal
18:53 spboxer3: 比較亂點
18:55 zsr123: 这个地方想保留= = 00:55:229 (2) - 音量降低至10%应该会好点
18:56 zsr123: 04:00:913 (6) - 04:01:071 (7) - 这2地方都加了note
18:57 spboxer3: 自創音效不能靜音或是接近聽不到
18:57 spboxer3: Orz...
18:57 zsr123: 居然有这种规定= =
18:57 spboxer3: 有
18:58 spboxer3: 只是因為不想改間距??
18:58 zsr123: 我觉得这样很好听呀= =
19:00 spboxer3: 不改沒關係 我只是說說我的意見
19:01 spboxer3: 01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 看得出來是種有想法的排列 可是感覺後頭萎了
19:02 spboxer3: 感覺是漸進式的增加 可是後頭的間距變小了
19:02 zsr123: 04:05:018 (5) - 正在修改。。
19:02 spboxer3: 沒關係 慢慢改 我先說~
19:05 spboxer3: 01:56:176 (3) - 我的看法-> 01:56:176 - &01:56:334 - 用note 然後01:56:492 - 開始slider 這樣會比較適合 看你決定吧
19:06 spboxer3: 02:02:334 (6) - 打法其實不是很好
19:08 spboxer3: 以玩家的角度來打這個pattern 02:02:334 - 用打擊點是適合的 但是02:02:492 - 也是重音而且比前頭更強 應該也要用打擊才對 可是用了slider reverse導致了只有音效 但沒有打擊感 強烈建議修改
19:09 spboxer3: 02:57:439 (3) - 同樣形狀問題 看你要不要改~
19:11 zsr123: 等等 有点乱= = 你现在说的是Hard吧?
19:11 spboxer3: 對 我剛剛寫Hard: 以下的都是Hard
19:12 zsr123: 好
19:12 spboxer3: 03:18:913 (7,8,9,10,11) - 這邊一樣 打擊感問題 click的時機都在1/4上 這樣會非常難打的 通常我們click的
19:13 spboxer3: 時機只有在1/1,1/2上
19:13 spboxer3: 1/4都是在連打部分使用
19:14 spboxer3: 03:24:281 (7,8) - 中間的03:24:597 - 感覺加個節奏會更好
19:15 spboxer3: 如果要加我會建議把8移到03:24:597 - 後頭再加上note 同樣是打擊點問題
19:17 zsr123: 01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个地方改成了 从1~9间距递增 应该行吧 话说有个note放在了x504 y88的位置 没问题吧??
19:18 spboxer3: 04:05:018 (5,1,2,3) - 這段節奏5的位置越線到開頭了 因此會產生1與2,3不連貫 而04:06:913 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 很明顯的就是一個梗 可因為前頭1的位置導致不一致
19:19 spboxer3: 剛剛那個1~11的部分等上傳後再看吧 你現在這樣說我不太清楚呢:<
19:19 zsr123: en
19:20 spboxer3: 04:35:965 (3,4,5,6) - 保持一直線??
19:21 spboxer3: 04:37:860 (7) - 別忘記對齊6
19:21 spboxer3: 對了 記得Hard 的NC也要重新看過
19:23 spboxer3: 再多找一些modder來看 之後找我recheck吧

谢谢 :)


edit : updated (2013/5/17 10:57)
MineC24
Modding queue~

Normal
imo, AR - 1

00:49:860 (4,5) - umm... avoid these please? (My thinking -> confuse..)
01:43:544 (1) - remove NC
01:48:597 (1) - ^
02:02:176 (1) - imo, remove NC and 02:02:492 (3) - add NC
02:02:492 (3,4) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766091 (02:03:755 (4)'s 3rd slider point -> x:280 y:232)
03:18:281 (4) - change by 01:29:650 (5)
04:13:860 (1) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/2Xdrt.jpg

Hard
00:27:755 (3,4) - avoid these
01:03:124 (6) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766098 (Blanket)
01:23:334 (5) - imo, NC
01:24:597 (9) - NC and 01:24:913 (1) - remove NC
02:51:597 (3) - imo, grid up
03:11:966 (5) - imo, NC
03:13:229 (9) - NC and 03:13:545 (1) - remove NC

GL :)
Topic Starter
zsr123

MineC24 wrote:

Modding queue~

Normal
imo, AR - 1 done

00:49:860 (4,5) - umm... avoid these please? (My thinking -> confuse..)
01:43:544 (1) - remove NC has made some changes around here
01:48:597 (1) - ^ done
02:02:176 (1) - imo, remove NC and 02:02:492 (3) - add NC done
02:02:492 (3,4) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766091 (02:03:755 (4)'s 3rd slider point -> x:280 y:232) done ;)
03:18:281 (4) - change by 01:29:650 (5)
04:13:860 (1) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/2Xdrt.jpgdone

Hard
00:27:755 (3,4) - avoid these
01:03:124 (6) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766098 (Blanket) done
01:23:334 (5) - imo, NC
01:24:597 (9) - NC and 01:24:913 (1) - remove NC
02:51:597 (3) - imo, grid up done
03:11:966 (5) - imo, NC
03:13:229 (9) - NC and 03:13:545 (1) - remove NC

GL :)
thank you :)


updated
OEvil
[Hi, From My Quene ]
Sorry My Mod Sucks

[Normal]
It was Good

[Hard]
- 00:41:334 (3) - Move to {x:392 y:208}.
- 00:41:650 (4) - Move to {x:352 y:120}.
- 03:28:545 (4) - Move to {x:356 y:288}.
- 03:28:703 (5) - Move to {x:396 y:252}.

Also Add More Difficulties
Topic Starter
zsr123

OEvil wrote:

[Hi, From My Quene ]
Sorry My Mod Sucks

[Normal]
It was Good

[Hard]
- 00:41:334 (3) - Move to {x:392 y:208}.
- 00:41:650 (4) - Move to {x:352 y:120}.
???



I changed these notes to slider , might be better


- 03:28:545 (4) - Move to {x:356 y:288}. done
- 03:28:703 (5) - Move to {x:396 y:252}.done

Also Add More Difficulties 2 diffs will be fine imo, because of this music. the easiest diff might not be very easy for new player, but if I make a easier diff than this one it would be boring to play imo,and it's very long. also this music it's not suitable for an Insane diff
thank you :D


updated
Verlaren
request via PM in game.

mod
2013-05-31 12:39 zsr123: Hi,can you help mod my map ? :)
2013-05-31 12:40 Verlaren: hi. At the moment i accept request from my queue
2013-05-31 12:40 zsr123: I see, thanks . :)
2013-05-31 12:40 Verlaren: np
2013-05-31 12:42 Verlaren: you can try XD Read my rules and two latest posts
2013-05-31 12:43 zsr123: the map I want you to mod which the music is 95bpm x.x
2013-05-31 12:44 Verlaren: link pls
2013-05-31 12:45 zsr123: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/31535
2013-05-31 12:45 Verlaren: I want to listen to the song
2013-05-31 12:45 zsr123: ok, hope you like it ^.^
2013-05-31 12:47 Verlaren: Now i look at your map, wait pls
2013-05-31 12:48 zsr123: thank you :D
2013-05-31 12:48 Verlaren: go irc mod?
2013-05-31 12:49 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 12:49 Verlaren: let's go
2013-05-31 12:49 Verlaren: general --->
2013-05-31 12:50 Verlaren: first? deselect letterbox during breaks/ you haven't a storyboard
2013-05-31 12:50 Verlaren: ,*
2013-05-31 12:50 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 12:51 Verlaren: fine, next
2013-05-31 12:51 Verlaren: Normal
2013-05-31 12:52 Verlaren: OD -1 IMO
2013-05-31 12:52 zsr123: done
2013-05-31 12:52 Verlaren: 00:29:018 (4,5) - spacing error
2013-05-31 12:54 zsr123: it's ok here imo
2013-05-31 12:54 Verlaren: Slider velocity 1.70 too large for normal/ Change on 1 or 1.1
2013-05-31 12:54 Verlaren: 00:30:913 (5) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:55 Verlaren: sounds is reeally good
2013-05-31 12:55 Verlaren: 00:35:650 (4) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:55 zsr123: 1.7 is fine since bpm is very low looks like same speed with SV1 bpm 170+
2013-05-31 12:57 Verlaren: 00:41:018 (4) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:58 zsr123: sorry these finish sounds not good to me @ @
2013-05-31 12:59 Verlaren: it's a pity
2013-05-31 12:59 zsr123: not gonna add any finish before 01:06:913 (1) - @ @
2013-05-31 12:59 Verlaren: 00:51:123 (5) - remove whistle from tail
2013-05-31 13:00 Verlaren: 00:55:860 (3) - set volume - 20% rather than 40%
2013-05-31 13:00 Verlaren: is better
2013-05-31 13:01 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:01 Verlaren: 01:05:965 (5) - ^
2013-05-31 13:03 zsr123: maybe 30% sounds better
2013-05-31 13:05 Verlaren: 01:06:913 (1,2) - make a symmetrical sliders.
2013-05-31 13:06 Verlaren: 01:06:913 (1,2) - (1) touches reverse arrow (2)
2013-05-31 13:07 Verlaren: 01:26:176 (3,4,5) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:07 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:08 Verlaren: 01:25:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - uneven spacing between patterns. fix it
2013-05-31 13:09 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:09 Verlaren: 01:36:597 (1) - maybe add clap on slider's start?
2013-05-31 13:10 zsr123: sounds not good to me @ @
2013-05-31 13:11 Verlaren: 01:37:229 (2,3) - (2) touches (3)'s end. Replace 01:38:492 (3)
2013-05-31 13:11 Verlaren: 01:38:492 (3,1) - (3) touches reverse arrow (1)
2013-05-31 13:12 Verlaren: 01:55:544 (2) - move on x:263 y:63
2013-05-31 13:13 zsr123: i dont see any problem here . the arrow is visible clearly
2013-05-31 13:13 Verlaren: IMO, lol )
2013-05-31 13:14 zsr123: 01:55:544 (2) - done
2013-05-31 13:14 Verlaren: 02:05:965 (2) - too many reverses, try to find something else here
2013-05-31 13:15 Verlaren: 02:40:386 (3) - remove whistle, add finish (slider's start point)
2013-05-31 13:16 Verlaren: 02:41:650 (4) - bad idea. slider's end is hidden
2013-05-31 13:17 Verlaren: 02:56:807 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing between patterns. fix it
2013-05-31 13:17 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:19 Verlaren: 03:44:807 (1) - spinner must be started on 03:44:492
2013-05-31 13:20 Verlaren: 04:09:439 (2,3) - move on two grids down
2013-05-31 13:21 Verlaren: 04:34:386 (2,3) - hard for normal. Change on slider
2013-05-31 13:22 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:22 Verlaren: 04:39:191 (1) - must be ended on 04:44:830
2013-05-31 13:23 Verlaren: That's all for normal, Hard -->
2013-05-31 13:23 Verlaren: When you're done, tell me
2013-05-31 13:24 zsr123: ok ready for hard
2013-05-31 13:25 Verlaren: let's go
2013-05-31 13:26 Verlaren: 00:30:913 (3,4,5) - make a symmetrical tringle
2013-05-31 13:26 Verlaren: 00:38:176 (2,3,4) - ^
2013-05-31 13:27 Verlaren: 00:55:860 (5) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:27 Verlaren: 01:05:966 (3,4,5) - ^
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:10:703 (1,2,3,4) - make a symmetrical square
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:26:176 (4,5,6) - volume
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:29:334 (1) - ^
2013-05-31 13:29 Verlaren: 01:34:386 (1,2,3) - maybe stack this patterns?
2013-05-31 13:29 Verlaren: 01:35:649 (5,6) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:30 Verlaren: 01:44:492 (7) - move on x:316 y:344
2013-05-31 13:31 zsr123: most of these were done
2013-05-31 13:32 Verlaren: 01:47:334 (1,3,5) - remake sliders. Use new 3-point system and make them symmetrical
2013-05-31 13:32 Verlaren: 01:53:649 (5) - remake slider
2013-05-31 13:33 Verlaren: 01:58:703 (3) - move to x:68 y:232
2013-05-31 13:34 Verlaren: 02:02:334 (5,1) - Is not good idea. Unstack pls
2013-05-31 13:35 Verlaren: 02:15:439 (3,4) - (3) touches reverse arrow (4)
2013-05-31 13:37 Verlaren: 02:36:913 (3,4,5,6) - change on --> http://puu.sh/353Et.jpg
2013-05-31 13:37 Verlaren: and remake 02:37:860 (6)
2013-05-31 13:38 Verlaren: 02:42:597 (4) - move on x:208 y:108
2013-05-31 13:39 Verlaren: 03:06:913 (1) - make a clear slider
2013-05-31 13:40 Verlaren: 03:25:229 (1,2,3,4) - why silince?
2013-05-31 13:41 Verlaren: 03:46:071 (1,3) - i recommend remake this sliders, they is not beautiful
2013-05-31 13:42 Verlaren: 03:57:439 (3) - i suggest remake this slider
2013-05-31 13:43 Verlaren: 04:13:860 (3) - use new system and make clear slider
2013-05-31 13:44 Verlaren: 04:44:830 - add note with finish
2013-05-31 13:44 zsr123: ok, i'll remake these slider after you finish modding , and may I ask where I can find the new system you mention ? @ @
2013-05-31 13:45 Verlaren: simply make new slider with 3 points
2013-05-31 13:46 Verlaren: of course if you make a simple slider )
2013-05-31 13:47 zsr123: ok :p
2013-05-31 13:47 Verlaren: That's all, good luck. And if you have a questions, you can ask me XD
2013-05-31 13:47 zsr123: ok thank you very much :D
Topic Starter
zsr123

Verlaren wrote:

request via PM in game.

mod
2013-05-31 12:39 zsr123: Hi,can you help mod my map ? :)
2013-05-31 12:40 Verlaren: hi. At the moment i accept request from my queue
2013-05-31 12:40 zsr123: I see, thanks . :)
2013-05-31 12:40 Verlaren: np
2013-05-31 12:42 Verlaren: you can try XD Read my rules and two latest posts
2013-05-31 12:43 zsr123: the map I want you to mod which the music is 95bpm x.x
2013-05-31 12:44 Verlaren: link pls
2013-05-31 12:45 zsr123: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/31535
2013-05-31 12:45 Verlaren: I want to listen to the song
2013-05-31 12:45 zsr123: ok, hope you like it ^.^
2013-05-31 12:47 Verlaren: Now i look at your map, wait pls
2013-05-31 12:48 zsr123: thank you :D
2013-05-31 12:48 Verlaren: go irc mod?
2013-05-31 12:49 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 12:49 Verlaren: let's go
2013-05-31 12:49 Verlaren: general --->
2013-05-31 12:50 Verlaren: first? deselect letterbox during breaks/ you haven't a storyboard
2013-05-31 12:50 Verlaren: ,*
2013-05-31 12:50 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 12:51 Verlaren: fine, next
2013-05-31 12:51 Verlaren: Normal
2013-05-31 12:52 Verlaren: OD -1 IMO
2013-05-31 12:52 zsr123: done
2013-05-31 12:52 Verlaren: 00:29:018 (4,5) - spacing error
2013-05-31 12:54 zsr123: it's ok here imo
2013-05-31 12:54 Verlaren: Slider velocity 1.70 too large for normal/ Change on 1 or 1.1
2013-05-31 12:54 Verlaren: 00:30:913 (5) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:55 Verlaren: sounds is reeally good
2013-05-31 12:55 Verlaren: 00:35:650 (4) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:55 zsr123: 1.7 is fine since bpm is very low looks like same speed with SV1 bpm 170+
2013-05-31 12:57 Verlaren: 00:41:018 (4) - add finish on tail
2013-05-31 12:58 zsr123: sorry these finish sounds not good to me @ @
2013-05-31 12:59 Verlaren: it's a pity
2013-05-31 12:59 zsr123: not gonna add any finish before 01:06:913 (1) - @ @
2013-05-31 12:59 Verlaren: 00:51:123 (5) - remove whistle from tail
2013-05-31 13:00 Verlaren: 00:55:860 (3) - set volume - 20% rather than 40%
2013-05-31 13:00 Verlaren: is better
2013-05-31 13:01 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:01 Verlaren: 01:05:965 (5) - ^
2013-05-31 13:03 zsr123: maybe 30% sounds better
2013-05-31 13:05 Verlaren: 01:06:913 (1,2) - make a symmetrical sliders.
2013-05-31 13:06 Verlaren: 01:06:913 (1,2) - (1) touches reverse arrow (2)
2013-05-31 13:07 Verlaren: 01:26:176 (3,4,5) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:07 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:08 Verlaren: 01:25:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - uneven spacing between patterns. fix it
2013-05-31 13:09 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:09 Verlaren: 01:36:597 (1) - maybe add clap on slider's start?
2013-05-31 13:10 zsr123: sounds not good to me @ @
2013-05-31 13:11 Verlaren: 01:37:229 (2,3) - (2) touches (3)'s end. Replace 01:38:492 (3)
2013-05-31 13:11 Verlaren: 01:38:492 (3,1) - (3) touches reverse arrow (1)
2013-05-31 13:12 Verlaren: 01:55:544 (2) - move on x:263 y:63
2013-05-31 13:13 zsr123: i dont see any problem here . the arrow is visible clearly
2013-05-31 13:13 Verlaren: IMO, lol )
2013-05-31 13:14 zsr123: 01:55:544 (2) - done
2013-05-31 13:14 Verlaren: 02:05:965 (2) - too many reverses, try to find something else here
2013-05-31 13:15 Verlaren: 02:40:386 (3) - remove whistle, add finish (slider's start point)
2013-05-31 13:16 Verlaren: 02:41:650 (4) - bad idea. slider's end is hidden
2013-05-31 13:17 Verlaren: 02:56:807 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing between patterns. fix it
2013-05-31 13:17 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:19 Verlaren: 03:44:807 (1) - spinner must be started on 03:44:492
2013-05-31 13:20 Verlaren: 04:09:439 (2,3) - move on two grids down
2013-05-31 13:21 Verlaren: 04:34:386 (2,3) - hard for normal. Change on slider
2013-05-31 13:22 zsr123: ok
2013-05-31 13:22 Verlaren: 04:39:191 (1) - must be ended on 04:44:830
2013-05-31 13:23 Verlaren: That's all for normal, Hard -->
2013-05-31 13:23 Verlaren: When you're done, tell me
2013-05-31 13:24 zsr123: ok ready for hard
2013-05-31 13:25 Verlaren: let's go
2013-05-31 13:26 Verlaren: 00:30:913 (3,4,5) - make a symmetrical tringle
2013-05-31 13:26 Verlaren: 00:38:176 (2,3,4) - ^
2013-05-31 13:27 Verlaren: 00:55:860 (5) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:27 Verlaren: 01:05:966 (3,4,5) - ^
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:10:703 (1,2,3,4) - make a symmetrical square
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:26:176 (4,5,6) - volume
2013-05-31 13:28 Verlaren: 01:29:334 (1) - ^
2013-05-31 13:29 Verlaren: 01:34:386 (1,2,3) - maybe stack this patterns?
2013-05-31 13:29 Verlaren: 01:35:649 (5,6) - reduce volume
2013-05-31 13:30 Verlaren: 01:44:492 (7) - move on x:316 y:344
2013-05-31 13:31 zsr123: most of these were done
2013-05-31 13:32 Verlaren: 01:47:334 (1,3,5) - remake sliders. Use new 3-point system and make them symmetrical
2013-05-31 13:32 Verlaren: 01:53:649 (5) - remake slider
2013-05-31 13:33 Verlaren: 01:58:703 (3) - move to x:68 y:232
2013-05-31 13:34 Verlaren: 02:02:334 (5,1) - Is not good idea. Unstack pls
2013-05-31 13:35 Verlaren: 02:15:439 (3,4) - (3) touches reverse arrow (4)
2013-05-31 13:37 Verlaren: 02:36:913 (3,4,5,6) - change on --> http://puu.sh/353Et.jpg
2013-05-31 13:37 Verlaren: and remake 02:37:860 (6)
2013-05-31 13:38 Verlaren: 02:42:597 (4) - move on x:208 y:108
2013-05-31 13:39 Verlaren: 03:06:913 (1) - make a clear slider
2013-05-31 13:40 Verlaren: 03:25:229 (1,2,3,4) - why silince?
2013-05-31 13:41 Verlaren: 03:46:071 (1,3) - i recommend remake this sliders, they is not beautiful
2013-05-31 13:42 Verlaren: 03:57:439 (3) - i suggest remake this slider
2013-05-31 13:43 Verlaren: 04:13:860 (3) - use new system and make clear slider
2013-05-31 13:44 Verlaren: 04:44:830 - add note with finish
2013-05-31 13:44 zsr123: ok, i'll remake these slider after you finish modding , and may I ask where I can find the new system you mention ? @ @
2013-05-31 13:45 Verlaren: simply make new slider with 3 points
2013-05-31 13:46 Verlaren: of course if you make a simple slider )
2013-05-31 13:47 zsr123: ok :p
2013-05-31 13:47 Verlaren: That's all, good luck. And if you have a questions, you can ask me XD
2013-05-31 13:47 zsr123: ok thank you very much :D

thanks :)


updated
Zero__wind
Hi :3 from my queue. Sorry for the delay

Hard
00:27:755 (3,4) - make them seperate may be better
00:35:650 (1,2,3) - recommended to follow the more noticeable melody in the background, this current one is kindda hard to catch
01:08:176 (1) - unneccessary NC
01:24:597 (9,1,2,3) - too close. The hitsound is still loud then I think it means that it's still in a strong part, then you should still use larger spacing to fit
01:44:807 (8,1) - make them seperate would look better, forget about the distance snap, this is a Hard
01:48:281 (2) - seems should be up 1 grid
02:01:860 (4,5,1,2) - a bit confusing to be in this diff, avoid stacking may be better
02:46:703 (2,3) - maybe make them a blancket
03:13:860 (2,3) - make them further from each other
03:42:281 (6,7) - ^
04:28:386 (4) - NC

Normal
CS3 plz
01:16:702 (3,4,1) - omg this is not recommended to be in a Normal, though you may say the BPM is low. Also other similar ones
01:34:702 (1) - this is too short to be in a Normal diff. Also other similar ones. 03:54:597 (1) - this length is ok

that's all
good luck
Topic Starter
zsr123

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 from my queue. Sorry for the delay

Hard
00:27:755 (3,4) - make them seperate may be better done
00:35:650 (1,2,3) - recommended to follow the more noticeable melody in the background, this current one is kindda hard to catch
01:08:176 (1) - unneccessary NC NC removed
01:24:597 (9,1,2,3) - too close. The hitsound is still loud then I think it means that it's still in a strong part, then you should still use larger spacing to fitdone
01:44:807 (8,1) - make them seperate would look better, forget about the distance snap, this is a Harddone
01:48:281 (2) - seems should be up 1 griddone
02:01:860 (4,5,1,2) - a bit confusing to be in this diff, avoid stacking may be betternow 1 stacks with 2,might be better imo
02:46:703 (2,3) - maybe make them a blancket
03:13:860 (2,3) - make them further from each other
03:42:281 (6,7) - ^
04:28:386 (4) - NC done

Normal
CS3 plz circle size ? it's 3
01:16:702 (3,4,1) - omg this is not recommended to be in a Normal, though you may say the BPM is low. Also other similar ones removed a note
01:34:702 (1) - this is too short to be in a Normal diff. Also other similar ones. 03:54:597 (1) - this length is ok fixed

that's all
good luck

thank you

updated 2013/6/10 10:08
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