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hello here to recheck

[Salad]

00:06:936 (2) - Maybe a bit far after the previous dash, try reducing to x:192.
00:20:835 (2) - This one is the same, maybe just try x:240.
00:22:820 (2) - Same here, x:320 would feel nicer.


[EZ]

00:01:476 (1476|1,1724|2,1973|1,2221|2) - seems a bit of a weird pattern with the pitches as they are now, because the 4th note is notably higher pitch than second, maybe try 1,2,1,3 here instead of 2,3,2,3?
00:14:382 (14382|3,14879|2) - Here for pitch, 3,2 would sound better than 4,3, at least to my ears.
00:17:857 (17857|0) - Definitely sounds a lot better on 2 here.

[NM]

00:02:469 (2469|3) - Sounds like there should be 2 notes at this point given the previous timeline, a note on 2 sounds good to me.

Alright, done.
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- Magic Bomb - wrote:

hello here to recheck

[EZ]

00:01:476 (1476|1,1724|2,1973|1,2221|2) - seems a bit of a weird pattern with the pitches as they are now, because the 4th note is notably higher pitch than second, maybe try 1,2,1,3 here instead of 2,3,2,3? This section has always been a bit of a compromise in pitch since the music has a 6 note ascending roll, making it difficult to be pitch accurate, I feel as though 2,3,2,3 is a better alternative as it allows for symmetry at 00:03:462 - as well as allowing 00:00:980 (980|0,1476|1) - these two notes to be pitch accurate while your suggestion would have them on the same note which I think is much more noticeable than the 2,3,2,3.
00:14:382 (14382|3,14879|2) - Here for pitch, 3,2 would sound better than 4,3, at least to my ears. The reason this is 4,3 is to prevent 00:14:879 (14879|2,15871|1) - These two notes which are different pitch not to be on the same column. I will however Ctrl-G these two: 00:14:879 (14879|2,15871|1) - to correct the pitch a little.
00:17:857 (17857|0) - Definitely sounds a lot better on 2 here. Sure, done.

[NM]

00:02:469 (2469|3) - Sounds like there should be 2 notes at this point given the previous timeline, a note on 2 sounds good to me. Sure, note added to 1, works fine.

Alright, done.
Thanks for the re-check!
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All suggestions applied!

Salad
osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Jimmy and Tommy
TitleUnicode:天下の大盗
Artist:Yasunori Shiono
ArtistUnicode:塩生康範
Creator:Weber
Version:Deif's Salad
Source:エストポリス伝記II
Tags:Lufia 2 Rise Of The Sinistrals The Greatest Thieves In The World SNES video game super nintendo 16-bit estpolis Deif
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hnng
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Weber wrote:

hnng
Happy Birthday Weber! Congrats on qualif... oh wait...

Maybe next year, eh?
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Timmy x Jommy.
Fuck mania.

Bubbled <3
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Everythings are confirmed.
Congratz!
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Lufia II music ♥ Congratz!
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omg Lufia, grats!
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HOLY SH*T WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN
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