Zing wrote:

(NOTE: Throughout this summary I used a color coding. Consider all yellow text as friendly suggestions, orange as serious warnings, and red means I would order you to do these things if I could.)

General notes -

Reconsider every 1/6 in this map. They inflate the difficulty ridiculously, sound bad (for the most part), and give this the feel of a PP map.

Consider finishers in the slow parts on the down beats. In addition, I would consider wiping all 1/4 streams from these parts. < Still thinking on this one

Overall, this map is inconsistent across the board, so much so that it impacts its playability. These are just a few suggestions of mine, but in my (even ameteur) opinion this map is far from a good one.

Initial rating: 3/10

Specific items -

00:13:379 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - This stream should not exist. No audio even remotely justifies it. < yea i had a feeling i would have to remove

00:25:853 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - This sounds very awkward; at the very least remove [131]. < Done

00:28:063 (145,146,147,148,149) - Recommend remove (148) and finish (149) for emphasis. < Done

I would also finish 00:30:905 (14), 00:33:432 (15), and similar notes. < sounds better thanks

00:43:853 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - All of the finishers here are placed awkwardly to where they impede readability and negatively impact the chart's feel. Keep the location of each of the finishers in here (94, 98, 101, 105, 108, 110) in mind when you're constructing the Muzu though; if you follow each with a rest, it seems like it would sound good.

01:07:695 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - Again, no audible justification for this stream, but at least it plays well.

01:36:590 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - I would remove (63) for consistency, same for (59). < Yup has been done

01:58:695 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This might be the worst pattern utilizing 1/6 in the entire map. If you remove any of them, remove this one. < yea its a mess, but keeping kkkd 1/6 since it does match but patching up after so it isn't a mess

02:18:432 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - See 01:07:695

02:47:011 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - See 01:36:590; I would remove 16 and 18.

03:46:774 (1) - tf is this note, please remove or move 1/4 beat forward.

1. Disable the "countdown".
2. Consider put the preview point in chorus.
3. Due to the length this map should have at least 3 diff.

1. 00:05:405 - here is better add note for triple is better to oni
2. 00:05:642 - add note?
3. 00:10:458 - ^
4. 00:15:116 (7) - change don?
5. 00:23:169 (59) - feel here a don sound fit better
6. 00:41:011 (56) - change kat?
7. 00:44:326 - missing note?
8. 00:45:274 - ^
9. 00:47:958 (5) - change don the sound is high in 00:48:116 -
10. 00:55:063 (3) - change don
11. 01:18:748 - add note?
12. 01:49:221 (54) - feel better a kat here for cymbal
13. 01:56:169 (110) - change don?
14. 02:02:011 (23) - change kat consistency like 02:00:748 (17,20) -
15. 03:12:748 - missing note?
16. 03:35:642 - in part similar feel that missing note for guitar imo
17. 03:41:800 (1) - this spin end in 03:46:853 - sound end there.