terratropic wrote:

hello from queue

• General

  1. move bpm offset to 3315 (its that off)
  2. slider velocity should be different and increase in small increments (0.2 or 0.3 per diff is my rule) for each difficulty. this will affect slider lengths, so you're gonna have to remap
  3. for normal avoid large sv changes if you can (0.5 is too much imo), and for easy sv changes should be avoided altogether
  4. there is a lot you could do to make these maps look more visually presentable. i wont go over these in the individual mods since it would take all day long, but i'll give you a few guidelines/tips
     1. use new combos (especially the last 2 diff), as they keep your notes organized (dont overuse them though). a good rule is to have an NC for every long white tick in the timeline (or two ticks), but you can apply it to powerful sections of the song as well
     2. for a newer mapper, i'd avoid using slider shapes with lots of control points and just stick to simple ones like curves and straight lines
     3. if you use grid snap, use a grid level of 4 or don't use grid snap at all. this will give you more options as to where you can place you objects, and more control as well
     4. avoid having the borders of objects touch (example: 00:33:634 (3,5) in insane) it just looks sloppy imo. either have notes overlap or space apart, but dont have borders touch
  5. i remember reading somewhere that white combo colour shouldn't be used because it hurts people's eyes during kiai, i don't have the link but i would change it just to be on the safe side
  6. lots of unnecessary 3-note and 5-note bursts/streams in the last 2 diffs where these notes aren't heard in the music (example: 01:06:134 (1,2,3,4,5) in Devil). overmapping does not keep a map from getting ranked (idk if you actually plan to go for rank),
     but if you added these just for the sake of increasing star diff i strongly recommend you fix these parts
  7. for quiet parts of the map (00:03:277 - , 00:21:848 - , 00:27:562 -, 01:23:276 -), it would be more appropriate to follow the vocals here. use lower SV, try to limit circle use in these sections, and lower spacing to fit the quietness. avoid having gaps in the timeline as they make the player uncomfortable having nothing to hit
  8. 1/2 sliders that reverse more than once, like one at 00:13:276 (1) in Hard are confusing to the player (not to mention unrankable anyway) so try to fix those
  9. as for the difficulty spreads there's a balance issue. devil is too close to insane in terms of star difficulty, and way to far from hard. hard is too close to normal. normal and easy are actually one diff higher than it suggests.
  10. only the highest difficulty in the mapset can have a unique name, so you'll have to swap devil and insane diffs around
  
  
  Hard

  00:06:134 (1) - spinner comes too early, place at 00:08:991 and end at 00:10:062
  00:14:705 (3,4,5,6,7) - 2 stacks with notes at different intervals makes it difficult to read, add a long slider in place of 00:14:705 (3,4) and space 00:15:419 (5,6,7) apart so they don't touch
  00:18:991 (7) - NC here
  00:58:634 (8,9) - better to space these apart because the next note 00:58:991 (1) feels awkward to play after the stack
  00:58:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - too much of a gap between notes, try a pattern of slider-circle-slider-circle and alternate between the two until you get to 01:03:634
  01:02:384 (1) - i don't like placing spinners where there's kicks playing, it would be more suitable at 01:04:705 (1) where it's more relaxing and quiet
  01:16:223 (4) - i don't see any reason to lower SV here, and also this slider is misplaced
  01:17:026 - have a note for this clap
  01:17:205 - see above
  01:21:848 (1) - extend this spinner so it ends at 01:23:276
  01:23:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not only does this stack feel weird to play, it's also lazy, try to use sliders here
  
  
  Devil

  00:06:134 (1) - see Hard
  00:20:419 (6) - NC this, these 3 notes should have its own combo
  00:35:419 (9) - replace this with a 1/1 beat slider to fill the gap at 00:35:776
  00:37:562 (9) - NC this
  00:41:134 (11) - again. have a 1/1 slider here
  01:02:205 - see Hard
  01:21:848 (1) - see Hard
  01:23:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - overmapped and doesnt fit the calmness of this section, you could simplify this a lot more
  01:25:419 (12) - add NC here
  
  
  Insane

  00:08:991 (1) - extend this spinner by 1 beat/tick
  00:20:062 (1,2) - swap these NC's
  00:26:134 (9) - add Nc here
  00:30:419 - idk why you lowered the SV here since its not a quiet part
  00:34:705 (9) - NC this
  00:37:562 (10) - see above
  00:38:991 (1) - this should be spaced much farther from 00:39:348 (2) to reflect the gap in the timeline
  00:53:276 - personal suggestion, but i think it would be cool to NC every 2 notes to match the alternating pitch in the instrument
  00:58:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - since this part is in 3/4 meter it would make more sense to NC every 3 notes
  01:03:455 (1) - i really don't think you need this spinner, there isnt much time to spin and the long streams are uncomfortable to play right after spinners
  01:10:419 (6) - NC this
  01:13:991 - you missed a note here
  01:21:848 (1) - see Hard
  01:23:634 - see Devil
  i dunno if you're actually trying to rank or just seeking advice as a new mapper but it's clear that this mapset won't be getting ranked as it is right now.
  but rank or not, good luck

huu wrote:

Hi.
From my queue.
Please keep in mind that most of this is highly opinionated, so feel free to decline any mods as you see fit.

Insane:
You use the "Normal" hitsound preset far too often. Consider changing some of them to Soft or Drum instead.
Your hitsounds here are also too loud, the song is barely hearable. Consider lowering the hitsound volume.
00:31:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix stack here
00:37:957 (2,3,4,5,6) - And here
01:00:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - And here as well
01:01:350 (7,8) - Place 8 further away from 7. This just looks messy the way it is, considering everything before was a jump.

Angel:
Same issue as with Insane - the "Normal" hitsound preset is used too often. Change some to Soft or Drum.
And yes, the hitsounds are also too loud. Lower their volume so the song is more audible.
00:05:636 (4,6) - Should be a stack imo
00:24:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird flow. Bring 5 closer to 4, something like this.
00:29:029 (1) - Add nc here
00:41:886 (1) - Pretty weird slider. A slider body like this looks a lot better in my opinion.
01:16:172 - 01:16:886 - Considering this part has no sliders to speak of, the inherited points here are useless.

That's about it.
Good luck!

TwillghtSparkle wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue
Feel free to change what u like

Angel :
00:03:315 (1) - those 4 sliders at beggining are too fast . since is calm part , i would reduce sv
00:10:814 (2) - blanket with 1 .
00:10:993 (3) - change the position so u can do a triangle with 2 3 4 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7228817
00:11:529 (4) - stack with 2 from 00:10:814 (2) - and rotate it so can aim at next circles https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7228822
00:14:743 (1) - i don't like this overlap , stack with previous slider and rotate mb https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7228831
00:20:457 (1) - distance is preety big . Maybe a blanket with 4 then sometihng like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7228842 ( i think that is not good for this map)
00:22:957 (6) - stack with 3 slider head
00:27:600 (1) - here come a calm part , so u should put this in evidence . Reduce disstance http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7228857 something like this
00:41:886 (13) - NC , sv changed , to no confuse people
00:53:314 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - wow confusing . Try to no stack them so much . My suggestion . Start with lower distance , and add more at every 2 circles https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7228881
00:59:029 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - same like here . U can use same distance coz music intensity is not changing , but use all the map , not only the 1/3 of it , or u can use kick sliders or sliders and prioritize the strong beats
01:03:672 (3) - kick sliders use , instead this slider , too many beatss u lose
01:04:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - slider can be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7228902 idk , try something more fun
01:16:172 (3) - is not 1/3 beat here ?(idk)
01:26:172 (1) - 2 sliders 1/2 instead 1

Insane :
00:07:600 (5,6,7) - blankets http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7228918
00:14:743 (1) - nc
00:24:743 (1) - adjust a bit slider so can look nice with 00:24:207 (10) -
00:26:886 (9) - Nc , slider velocity changed
00:28:314 (3) - uhm why so fast slider , the previous one was too slow for music intensity
00:33:314 (1) - 1 reverse is enough , add circle at 00:33:850 (2) - x 314 y 214
00:41:886 (1) - add a spinner better
00:58:314 - nothing here? stronmmg beat
00:58:672 - same here
01:03:672 (2) - u lose too many beats here . kick sliders or circles
01:04:922 - cmon map something here this part is beautiful and raising intensity . U can start from smmall distance to more
01:09:386 (2) - distance is small , can be coonfused with 1/2 x87 y165
01:10:279 (4) - x134 y99
01:10:457 (5) - move after u moved the previous 2 ones
01:10:725 (6) - hmm this beat is on blue and can be confusing , use a slider idk(i think that is strange )


Hard : 00:04:029 (3,4,5,6) - ok so those can be improved . Looks boring too . https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7228990
Do a slider , copy paste , then ctrl shift R , rotate by 30* and put in a blanket. Then repeat the process . If you copy the first slider , be sure you willl rotate by 60* the third one and 90* the fourth one
00:13:850 (2) - add a circle here
00:14:029 (3) - ^
00:18:672 (5,6) - not equal
00:59:386 (2) - those sliders are not ok , Why? You can hear the most important beat on slider tail? That should be clickable
A lot of things repeat here like i pointed in insanes , check themm in this diff too

That's my mod gl ^^

Gokateigo wrote:

Hi from my queue o/

Insane

1. 00:08:136 (6) - Add a timing point with the SV multiplier set to x0.65 and change the slider
2. 00:09:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make a slider for the vocals, it's easier to do low slider/Fast jumps than Slow jumps/Fast jumps
3. 00:21:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I think it's overmapped, this part is calm you should map vocals with sliders
4. 00:25:457 (3) - Move this circle to the following sliderhead
5. 00:27:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Overmapped too(i dont think so )
6. 01:08:672 (2) - Change this slider shape, the following circle is hard to hit
7. 01:26:529 (9) - This sould be a slider
8. Add a spinner at the end

Angel

1. 00:03:850 (2,3,4,5,6) - These jumps are too spaced
2. 00:05:279 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
3. 00:21:171 (5) - Move this to this 00:20:814 (3) postition
4. 00:21:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Overmapped like the insane

Xinchii wrote:

Hi 從巴哈路過的XDD
稍微看一下Angel難度給個建議而已 , 可以參考看看 :3

[Angel]

1. 00:07:600 (1,2) - 這兩個Slider建議可以複製其中一個再旋轉180度 , 會看起來比較對稱
2. 00:08:136 (2) - 這個圓弧的溝可以包住00:07:422 (6) - , 可以加一點畫面的整潔感
   
   box

   
3. 00:11:529 (4,5,6,7) - 這邊從(4)到(5,6,7)的距離有點短 , 跟你在這一段其他梗的擺放距離比起來會有點突兀 , 推薦也改一點跳
4. 00:20:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這邊(1,3,5)的聲音很明顯 , 我個人會建議你加重強調這3個部份
   目前這5個Note的擺放距離是平均的 , 遊玩上比較沒有起伏
   推薦是把(1,2)(3,4)的距離縮短 , 只在(2,3)(4,5)作跳躍
   可以比較看看像這樣的效果
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:23:672 (7,8) - (8)可以Ctrl+G , 跟前面的(5,6)的flow作呼應
6. 00:27:600 (1,2,3) - 這3個改成一個Slider吧 , 跟一下歌詞
   這邊歌詞字很少結果放4個1/2 Note , 後面(5,6)歌詞字多反而Slider , 很違和的
7. 00:30:457 (1,2) - 總覺得這邊應該要帶點比較嗨的氣氛 , 兩個Slider帶過去好像有不夠
8. 00:48:314 (6,7,8,9) - 距離可以拉大 , 做短滑條跳 , 最近短滑條比較流行這樣(笑)
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:56:172 (1,2) - 對稱應該會好一點
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:09:029 (1,2,3) - 一樣可以短滑條Jump , 或是至少讓這3個物件間的視覺距離平均一點
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:11:172 (6,7,8,9) - 一樣 , 其實短滑條目前都習慣視為單點 , 放這麼近滿壓力的
12. 01:23:672 - 這之後的段落可以減少一點物件量跟距離 , 配合歌曲的氣氛做結尾會好一點
    
    SPOILER

    
    大致上跟個歌詞就好

Good luck ~

1. 00:08:136 (1,2) - either nc both or neither
2. 00:31:707 (1) - 这个转盘尾音量调小
3. 00:56:172 (1) - 可以试试这样，感觉比较顺http://puu.sh/tVfS2/5476396788.jpg
4. 01:04:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏明显是这样啊 放一串没意义http://puu.sh/tVg5d/9e49a802b9.jpg
5. 01:08:582 - 这里这种地方，如果是低难度漏过去没问题 但是这个难度我觉得应该放note，后面类似的地方也是
6. 01:19:029 (1,2,3,4) - 这里应该是单点+三连的节奏
7. 00:57:600 (7) - nc
8. 其实说到nc，比如00:24:743 - 和00:27:600 - 这两段就可以用两组不同的颜色

1. 00:15:279 - 加个note，如果不想破坏对称就放在中间/滑条尾
2. 00:19:922 (6,7,8,1) - bad flow 个人建议http://puu.sh/tVgIP/46c7048cd8.jpg
3. 00:54:743 (6) - nc
4. 00:57:600 (6) - ^
5. 01:00:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:01:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的五连 我觉得用重叠单点更好
6. 前面kiai节奏的几条放在这边也适用 比如01:08:672 - 和01:19:029 (1,2,3,4) - 还有01:18:314 (5,6,7) - 这里也是
7. 01:18:672 (8) - 这里建议拉一个3/4滑条 01:20:100 (7) - 同理

1. 01:03:493 (3,1) - 这里不理解为什么间距突然变小以至于叠了一点...
2. 01:08:850 (4,5) - ^

1. 00:49:743 (1) - 这里可以用这个代替http://puu.sh/tVhNY/874b4de9f4.jpg
2. 01:10:457 (3) - 可以拖到01:10:993 -
3. 01:16:172 (3) - ^
4. 01:26:172 (6) - nc

pacsu wrote:

hi here is my mod
sorry if it s short , im not a pro and your map has been moded by so many peoples

insane
00:07:600 (5,6) - maybe put the 6 at the end of the 5 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7262413 done
00:17:600 (1,2,3) - the overlap is not the same and maybe if you make the 1 and 2 go in different direction... done
00:18:672 (5) - make the same curve that the 4 done
00:41:886 (1) - yes ... a bit boring , make it go faster or put a spiner ummm.. that is a calm part soooooo
01:08:314 (1,2) - maybe make the same curve(or no curve) for the 1 and 2 i think that is better
01:26:172 (8) - end the slider 01:26:350 - here and put a circle 01:26:529 - here , because the sound is ore important done


sorry for this mod
i m a newbie but i try my best

X Light wrote:

[Angel]

1. 00:08:136 (1,2) - either nc both or neither done
2. 00:31:707 (1) - 这个转盘尾音量调小done
3. 00:56:172 (1) - 可以试试这样，感觉比较顺http://puu.sh/tVfS2/5476396788.jpg done
4. 01:04:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏明显是这样啊 放一串没意义http://puu.sh/tVg5d/9e49a802b9.jpg done
5. 01:08:582 - 这里这种地方，如果是低难度漏过去没问题 但是这个难度我觉得应该放note，后面类似的地方也是 done
6. 01:19:029 (1,2,3,4) - 这里应该是单点+三连的节奏done
7. 00:57:600 (7) - nc done
8. 其实说到nc，比如00:24:743 - 和00:27:600 - 这两段就可以用两组不同的颜色

调整中..\
[Insane]

1. 00:15:279 - 加个note，如果不想破坏对称就放在中间/滑条尾done
2. 00:19:922 (6,7,8,1) - bad flow 个人建议http://puu.sh/tVgIP/46c7048cd8.jpgdone
3. 00:54:743 (6) - ncdone
4. 00:57:600 (6) - ^done
5. 01:00:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:01:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的五连 我觉得用重叠单点更好 done
6. 前面kiai节奏的几条放在这边也适用 比如01:08:672 - 和01:19:029 (1,2,3,4) - 还有01:18:314 (5,6,7) - 这里也是???
7. 01:18:672 (8) - 这里建议拉一个3/4滑条 01:20:100 (7) - 同理

done
[Hard]

1. 01:03:493 (3,1) - 这里不理解为什么间距突然变小以至于叠了一点... done
2. 01:08:850 (4,5) - ^

done
[Easy]

1. 00:49:743 (1) - 这里可以用这个代替http://puu.sh/tVhNY/874b4de9f4.jpg done
2. 01:10:457 (3) - 可以拖到01:10:993 - done
3. 01:16:172 (3) - ^ done
4. 01:26:172 (6) - nc

done
祝好运

MasterHerobrine wrote:

From MH's STD Modding & Guest Difficulties Queue!

[General]
All seems good!

[Easy]
00:09:029 (5) - In my opinion, there is needed more curved slideк?done
00:11:172 (3) - Do a blanket here. https://puu.sh/tROoB/5ebb044440.pngdone

[Normal]
Look at the diff and make less curved sliders like 00:03:315 (1,3) - and others.done
01:25:457 (5) - Replace a note, because this is not rankable in Normal.done

[Hard]
00:06:172 (6) - Place NC heredone
00:07:600 (9) - Make this slider less curved.done
00:39:743 (3,4,5,6) - Make some spacing here. https://puu.sh/tSnCm/add2293a13.png
01:02:600 (4) - Less curved slider, please.done
01:06:529 (3,3) - ^done

[Insane]
00:41:886 (1) - Make a slider more interesting?done

[Angel]
01:24:743 (4) - No sound slider. Remove.i think that's not suitable

Sorry for really small suggestions, but it's all goof in rhythm but there are a lot of curved sliders and other things...
GL~!
(You can find my M4M map here)

MrMenda wrote:

Hey! Menda here from OSUWOT Queue.

Hard

General Comments:
Sliders are too straight, curve them a bit. Use them as a blanketdone
-00:04:029 (3,4,5) - Curve those sliders a bitdone
-00:06:172 (1,2,3) - Blanket with slider 1done
-00:07:600 (4,5) - Wouldn’t overlap them.done
-00:12:600 (5,6) - Curve themdone
-00:16:172 (1,2) - Blanketdone
-00:16:886 (4,5) - ^done
-00:23:314 (4) - ^?
-00:24:743 (1) - ^?
-00:34:029 (3,4) - ^done
-01:20:457 (1,2) - Curve themdone
-01:23:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Lower SV to give a better emphasisdone
-01:26:172 (7) - Leave this as a 1/2 slider and a circle in the white tickdone

Flow is really good, but try to curve sliders and make blankets in the map, as their flow is much better.

Insane

Buff OD to 7.5 at least

-00:09:029 (1) - Lower SVdone
-00:09:564 (2,3,4,5,6) - There is no sound here to fit them, but somehow they fit there.fixed it
-00:14:029 (5) - Change it for a triple done
-00:21:172 (5) - Sliderdone
-00:23:314 (6) - Curve itdone
-00:23:672 (7) - New Combodone
-00:24:743 (1,2) - Blanketdone
-00:26:350 (7,8) - ^done
-00:26:886 (1) - I would change it into a 1/2 reverse sliderdone
-00:28:314 (3,4) - Blanket againdone
-00:30:279 (10) - Remove itdone
-00:30:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really good, seriously.
-00:40:636 (8) - New Combodone
-00:54:386 (5) - Flip itdone
-01:10:725 (7) - New Combodone
-01:16:439 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Do not do it a straight pattern, change it to have some cross jumps. New combo in 7.done
-01:18:672 (8,1,2,3) - Blanketdone
-01:20:457 (1) - Closerdone
-01:25:814 (7) - Remove.done

Kiai is really well done.

Angel

Missing a circle for the burst in 00:05:815 done
-00:06:172 (4,5) - Curve themdone
-00:09:029 (4) - Try doing it a more thematic slider, as the difficulty name is Angel.done
-00:13:314 (1,2,3) - Make 2,3 closer to 1done
-00:19:564 (7) - New combo heredone
-00:39:029 (1,2) - Turn 1 into a 1/2 slider and Blanketdone
-00:40:457 (8) - New combodone
-00:41:886 (1,1,2,3) - Huge 1/4 jump for a Insane (Extra)done
-00:51:172 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Curve the sliders here and make a Blanketdone
-Build up for Kiai is really good.
-01:09:386 (3,4,5,6) - Curve 3 a bit, separate 4 and make it a blanket. done
-01:15:189 (3,4,1,2,3) - Remove new combo and same as ^done

Best difficulty in the set, really polished.

Good luck to get this ranked!! This set is promising!! If it is possible for you to M4M let me know pls

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

hey

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Title:Gabriel Drop Kick
TitleUnicode:ガヴリールドロップキック
Artist:Tomita Miyu, Oonishi Saori, Oozora Naomi, Hanazawa Kana
ArtistUnicode:富田美憂、大西沙織、大空直美、花澤香菜

easy
open aimod and check distance snap ~

00:11:172 (3) - 304,136 for better blanket with (2)done
00:16:886 (2) - i think curve slider is enoughdone
00:18:314 (3,1) - too close and overlapdone
00:39:029 (1,4) - overlapdone
00:54:029 (3,5) - ^done
01:08:314 (4,5) - wth is this? this is too dense for easy diff,just make 1/1 slider here or i1/2 reverse slider if you want emphatize the sound moredone
01:11:172 (4) - ctrl j and then ctrl g for better patterndone
01:13:314 (3) - ^done
01:14:029 (4,5) - same as 01:08:314 (4,5) -done
01:15:457 (1) - unnecessary finishjust maintain the rhythm
01:16:886 (4) - ctrl j for make the pattern smoothly than beforedone
01:17:600 (1,1) - overlap ;w;done
01:20:457 (1,3) - bad overlapdone
01:25:457 (5,6) - maybe put 2/1 slider here and then a circle? cause if you leave it blank 01:25:457 - it looks odd imodone

note : you must avoid overlap in easy diff cause its unrankable (you can rank your map if you put too much overlap in easy diff) - read this guide https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy_(Difficulty)


ok thats it from me gl!

walaowey wrote:

Hi m4m here,
about the metadata stuff, i believe u should follow -NanoRIPE- suggestion.

Angel

00:20:636 (2,4) - both of this part dont have sound lol, not suitable to have circle here. can remove them or change (1) and (3) to a 1/2 slider
00:24:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part is overmap too, no beats on those blue ticks at all.
01:19:207 (2,3,4) - stack them together?
01:20:904 (2,3) - stack them better
01:25:814 - remove this, no beat here
01:16:172 (7,8,9) - these circles is confusing to play, maybe NC it to differentiate the spacing
00:31:886 - increase the volume in this part? its hard to hear it now
00:15:368 (3,4) - this is quite hard lol, the spacing is too large imo, and its 1/4 spacing from the previous slider, maybe place them close?


-Some of the rhythm selection here is quite weird, try to lower the playback speed to 25% and listen to the song carefully, you will get the rhythm easier that way
-Check a guide on how to hitsound, your hitsounding need some improvement><
-your NC need improvement too. try to check on other maps for how they do NC
JUST Remake ;v;

Insane

00:44:297 - extend this slider to the white tick on 00:44:386 -done

Normal

AR6 is quite high, imo change it to AR5 will be better
00:31:886 (3) - we dont usually use timing changes in normal diff lol, i suggest u to remove it

:/

Easy

01:08:314 - LOL dun use 1/2 in easy, they're hard to read for new playerdone
01:14:029 - ^done
01:14:029 - ^
01:23:672 - DS is off here, use same DS throughout the difficulty;/
01:14:029 - ^

find me in game if u have any questions regarding my mod

Good luck

JayJay-San wrote:

ayy it's your boi jay here, from the modding queue

Angel

00:09:029 (4) -When I first played it I found this slider quite odd, it just feels weird when playing the map... maybe make it something like a halo? or a heart, so it relates to the map? If it does, just tell me how it relates to it.[b][color=#BFF00]just fixed it like my grandpa[/color]
00:39:029 (1,2,3) - Here I wouldn't stack the 1/2 notes, you should probably stack the 1 and the 2, and then keep the three in the same spot. It's just a little hard to read at firstdone

00:45:814 (8) - The third slider grey is not needed, make this slider straight.done


01:01:350 (5,6) - the overlap on these notes are hard to see, maybe place it a little above, or a little below, or to the right?[b]done


01:18:672 (6) and 01:20:100 (7) - The transition from a blue tick to an instant note might feel a bit uncomfortable, it somewhat sounds better on the red tick, since ending sliders don't have rules to them really, this is your choice, but just a word of advice.
Rhythm
00:30:457 (1,2) - Maybe make that second note straight below the 1st, and start a new combo for 00:31:172 (3,4,5,6) ? Just a thought.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7431956 something like that
done
00:46:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this section was hard to read, 1/2 stacks.
done
00:48:314 (4,5) - these notes are super close, but are spaced?
done
01:03:314 (3,4) - Maybe stack these, so the jumps feel easier to aim
done
01:23:672 (1,2,3) - These 1/1 notes are long, so space those out.
done
01:25:100 (5,6,7) - These are 1/2, they shouldn't have the same spacing as the 1/1's because that makes the player think that they are also going to be 1/1 notes.

fixed it

Insane

00:16:172 (1,2,3) - Make that three closer to the two?
fixed it
00:19:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section seems really squished together? Transition from 5,6,7,8 feel odd.

fixed it

Hard

00:12:957 (6) - Move this note down a bit.
fixed it
01:09:922 - there is a sound here, it's pretty loud as well.
fixed it
01:09:029 (5,1) - that transition sounds weird because there isn't a note in between.
fixed it
01:14:743 (1) - Move that so it's not overlapping the circle, to follow the spacing, not too much, just move it to right
fixed it
01:14:743 (1,2,3) - There is also an unheard sound here too. Fix that.

I Hate Smoothie wrote:

JayJay-San wrote:

ayy it's your boi jay here, from the modding queue

Angel

00:09:029 (4) -When I first played it I found this slider quite odd, it just feels weird when playing the map... maybe make it something like a halo? or a heart, so it relates to the map? If it does, just tell me how it relates to it.[b][color=#BFF00]just fixed it like my grandpa[/color]
00:39:029 (1,2,3) - Here I wouldn't stack the 1/2 notes, you should probably stack the 1 and the 2, and then keep the three in the same spot. It's just a little hard to read at firstdone

00:45:814 (8) - The third slider grey is not needed, make this slider straight.done


01:01:350 (5,6) - the overlap on these notes are hard to see, maybe place it a little above, or a little below, or to the right?[b]done


01:18:672 (6) and 01:20:100 (7) - The transition from a blue tick to an instant note might feel a bit uncomfortable, it somewhat sounds better on the red tick, since ending sliders don't have rules to them really, this is your choice, but just a word of advice.
Rhythm
00:30:457 (1,2) - Maybe make that second note straight below the 1st, and start a new combo for 00:31:172 (3,4,5,6) ? Just a thought.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7431956 something like that
done
00:46:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this section was hard to read, 1/2 stacks.
done
00:48:314 (4,5) - these notes are super close, but are spaced?
done
01:03:314 (3,4) - Maybe stack these, so the jumps feel easier to aim
done
01:23:672 (1,2,3) - These 1/1 notes are long, so space those out.
done
01:25:100 (5,6,7) - These are 1/2, they shouldn't have the same spacing as the 1/1's because that makes the player think that they are also going to be 1/1 notes.

fixed it

Insane

00:16:172 (1,2,3) - Make that three closer to the two?
fixed it
00:19:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section seems really squished together? Transition from 5,6,7,8 feel odd.

fixed it

Hard

00:12:957 (6) - Move this note down a bit.
fixed it
01:09:922 - there is a sound here, it's pretty loud as well.
fixed it
01:09:029 (5,1) - that transition sounds weird because there isn't a note in between.
fixed it
01:14:743 (1) - Move that so it's not overlapping the circle, to follow the spacing, not too much, just move it to right
fixed it
01:14:743 (1,2,3) - There is also an unheard sound here too. Fix that.

fixed it

thx for ur modding!

JayJay-San wrote:

rip kudosu