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From MH's STD Modding & Guest Difficulties Queue!



[General]
All seems good!

[Easy]
00:09:029 (5) - In my opinion, there is needed more curved slideк?
00:11:172 (3) - Do a blanket here. https://puu.sh/tROoB/5ebb044440.png

[Normal]
Look at the diff and make less curved sliders like 00:03:315 (1,3) - and others.
01:25:457 (5) - Replace a note, because this is not rankable in Normal.

[Hard]
00:06:172 (6) - Place NC here
00:07:600 (9) - Make this slider less curved.
00:39:743 (3,4,5,6) - Make some spacing here. https://puu.sh/tSnCm/add2293a13.png
01:02:600 (4) - Less curved slider, please.
01:06:529 (3,3) - ^

[Insane]
00:41:886 (1) - Make a slider more interesting?

[Angel]
01:24:743 (4) - No sound slider. Remove.

Sorry for really small suggestions, but it's all goof in rhythm but there are a lot of curved sliders and other things...
GL~!
(You can find my M4M map here)
posted
hi here is my mod
sorry if it s short , im not a pro and your map has been moded by so many peoples

insane

00:07:600 (5,6) - maybe put the 6 at the end of the 5 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7262413
00:17:600 (1,2,3) - the overlap is not the same and maybe if you make the 1 and 2 go in different direction...
00:18:672 (5) - make the same curve that the 4
00:41:886 (1) - yes ... a bit boring , make it go faster or put a spiner
01:08:314 (1,2) - maybe make the same curve(or no curve) for the 1 and 2
01:26:172 (8) - end the slider 01:26:350 - here and put a circle 01:26:529 - here , because the sound is ore important


sorry for this mod
i m a newbie but i try my best :)
posted
[Angel]
  1. 00:08:136 (1,2) - either nc both or neither
  2. 00:31:707 (1) - 这个转盘尾音量调小
  3. 00:56:172 (1) - 可以试试这样,感觉比较顺http://puu.sh/tVfS2/5476396788.jpg
  4. 01:04:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏明显是这样啊 放一串没意义http://puu.sh/tVg5d/9e49a802b9.jpg
  5. 01:08:582 - 这里这种地方,如果是低难度漏过去没问题 但是这个难度我觉得应该放note,后面类似的地方也是
  6. 01:19:029 (1,2,3,4) - 这里应该是单点+三连的节奏
  7. 00:57:600 (7) - nc
  8. 其实说到nc,比如00:24:743 - 和00:27:600 - 这两段就可以用两组不同的颜色

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:279 - 加个note,如果不想破坏对称就放在中间/滑条尾
  2. 00:19:922 (6,7,8,1) - bad flow 个人建议http://puu.sh/tVgIP/46c7048cd8.jpg
  3. 00:54:743 (6) - nc
  4. 00:57:600 (6) - ^
  5. 01:00:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:01:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的五连 我觉得用重叠单点更好
  6. 前面kiai节奏的几条放在这边也适用 比如01:08:672 - 和01:19:029 (1,2,3,4) - 还有01:18:314 (5,6,7) - 这里也是
  7. 01:18:672 (8) - 这里建议拉一个3/4滑条 01:20:100 (7) - 同理

[Hard]
  1. 01:03:493 (3,1) - 这里不理解为什么间距突然变小以至于叠了一点...
  2. 01:08:850 (4,5) - ^

[Easy]
  1. 00:49:743 (1) - 这里可以用这个代替http://puu.sh/tVhNY/874b4de9f4.jpg
  2. 01:10:457 (3) - 可以拖到01:10:993 -
  3. 01:16:172 (3) - ^
  4. 01:26:172 (6) - nc

祝好运 :)
posted

pacsu wrote:

hi here is my mod
sorry if it s short , im not a pro and your map has been moded by so many peoples

insane

00:07:600 (5,6) - maybe put the 6 at the end of the 5 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7262413 done
00:17:600 (1,2,3) - the overlap is not the same and maybe if you make the 1 and 2 go in different direction... done
00:18:672 (5) - make the same curve that the 4 done
00:41:886 (1) - yes ... a bit boring , make it go faster or put a spiner ummm.. that is a calm part soooooo
01:08:314 (1,2) - maybe make the same curve(or no curve) for the 1 and 2 i think that is better
01:26:172 (8) - end the slider 01:26:350 - here and put a circle 01:26:529 - here , because the sound is ore important done


sorry for this mod
i m a newbie but i try my best :)
all finished! thx for modding!
posted

X Light wrote:

[Angel]
  1. 00:08:136 (1,2) - either nc both or neither done
  2. 00:31:707 (1) - 这个转盘尾音量调小done
  3. 00:56:172 (1) - 可以试试这样,感觉比较顺http://puu.sh/tVfS2/5476396788.jpg done
  4. 01:04:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏明显是这样啊 放一串没意义http://puu.sh/tVg5d/9e49a802b9.jpg done
  5. 01:08:582 - 这里这种地方,如果是低难度漏过去没问题 但是这个难度我觉得应该放note,后面类似的地方也是 done
  6. 01:19:029 (1,2,3,4) - 这里应该是单点+三连的节奏done
  7. 00:57:600 (7) - nc done
  8. 其实说到nc,比如00:24:743 - 和00:27:600 - 这两段就可以用两组不同的颜色
调整中..\
[Insane]
  1. 00:15:279 - 加个note,如果不想破坏对称就放在中间/滑条尾done
  2. 00:19:922 (6,7,8,1) - bad flow 个人建议http://puu.sh/tVgIP/46c7048cd8.jpgdone
  3. 00:54:743 (6) - ncdone
  4. 00:57:600 (6) - ^done
  5. 01:00:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:01:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的五连 我觉得用重叠单点更好 done
  6. 前面kiai节奏的几条放在这边也适用 比如01:08:672 - 和01:19:029 (1,2,3,4) - 还有01:18:314 (5,6,7) - 这里也是???
  7. 01:18:672 (8) - 这里建议拉一个3/4滑条 01:20:100 (7) - 同理
done
[Hard]
  1. 01:03:493 (3,1) - 这里不理解为什么间距突然变小以至于叠了一点... done
  2. 01:08:850 (4,5) - ^
done
[Easy]
  1. 00:49:743 (1) - 这里可以用这个代替http://puu.sh/tVhNY/874b4de9f4.jpg done
  2. 01:10:457 (3) - 可以拖到01:10:993 - done
  3. 01:16:172 (3) - ^ done
  4. 01:26:172 (6) - nc
done
祝好运 :)
posted

MasterHerobrine wrote:


From MH's STD Modding & Guest Difficulties Queue!



[General]
All seems good!

[Easy]
00:09:029 (5) - In my opinion, there is needed more curved slideк?done
00:11:172 (3) - Do a blanket here. https://puu.sh/tROoB/5ebb044440.pngdone

[Normal]
Look at the diff and make less curved sliders like 00:03:315 (1,3) - and others.done
01:25:457 (5) - Replace a note, because this is not rankable in Normal.done

[Hard]
00:06:172 (6) - Place NC heredone
00:07:600 (9) - Make this slider less curved.done
00:39:743 (3,4,5,6) - Make some spacing here. https://puu.sh/tSnCm/add2293a13.png
01:02:600 (4) - Less curved slider, please.done
01:06:529 (3,3) - ^done

[Insane]
00:41:886 (1) - Make a slider more interesting?done

[Angel]
01:24:743 (4) - No sound slider. Remove.i think that's not suitable

Sorry for really small suggestions, but it's all goof in rhythm but there are a lot of curved sliders and other things...
GL~!
(You can find my M4M map here)
sorry i forgot your post== all fixed!
posted
Hey! Menda here from OSUWOT Queue.

General Comments:
Sliders are too straight, curve them a bit. Use them as a blanket
-00:04:029 (3,4,5) - Curve those sliders a bit
-00:06:172 (1,2,3) - Blanket with slider 1
-00:07:600 (4,5) - Wouldn’t overlap them.
-00:12:600 (5,6) - Curve them
-00:16:172 (1,2) - Blanket
-00:16:886 (4,5) - ^
-00:23:314 (4) - ^
-00:24:743 (1) - ^
-00:34:029 (3,4) - ^
-01:20:457 (1,2) - Curve them
-01:23:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Lower SV to give a better emphasis
-01:26:172 (7) - Leave this as a 1/2 slider and a circle in the white tick

Flow is really good, but try to curve sliders and make blankets in the map, as their flow is much better.
Buff OD to 7.5 at least

-00:09:029 (1) - Lower SV
-00:09:564 (2,3,4,5,6) - There is no sound here to fit them, but somehow they fit there.
-00:14:029 (5) - Change it for a triple
-00:21:172 (5) - Slider
-00:23:314 (6) - Curve it
-00:23:672 (7) - New Combo
-00:24:743 (1,2) - Blanket
-00:26:350 (7,8) - ^
-00:26:886 (1) - I would change it into a 1/2 reverse slider
-00:28:314 (3,4) - Blanket again
-00:30:279 (10) - Remove it
-00:30:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really good, seriously.
-00:40:636 (8) - New Combo
-00:54:386 (5) - Flip it
-01:10:725 (7) - New Combo
-01:16:439 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Do not do it a straight pattern, change it to have some cross jumps. New combo in 7.
-01:18:672 (8,1,2,3) - Blanket
-01:20:457 (1) - Closer
-01:25:814 (7) - Remove.

Kiai is really well done.
Missing a circle for the burst in 00:05:815
-00:06:172 (4,5) - Curve them
-00:09:029 (4) - Try doing it a more thematic slider, as the difficulty name is Angel.
-00:13:314 (1,2,3) - Make 2,3 closer to 1
-00:19:564 (7) - New combo here
-00:39:029 (1,2) - Turn 1 into a 1/2 slider and Blanket
-00:40:457 (8) - New combo
-00:41:886 (1,1,2,3) - Huge 1/4 jump for a Insane (Extra)
-00:51:172 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Curve the sliders here and make a Blanket
-Build up for Kiai is really good.
-01:09:386 (3,4,5,6) - Curve 3 a bit, separate 4 and make it a blanket.
-01:15:189 (3,4,1,2,3) - Remove new combo and same as ^

Best difficulty in the set, really polished.


Good luck to get this ranked!! This set is promising!! If it is possible for you to M4M let me know pls :)
posted

MrMenda wrote:

Hey! Menda here from OSUWOT Queue.

General Comments:
Sliders are too straight, curve them a bit. Use them as a blanketdone
-00:04:029 (3,4,5) - Curve those sliders a bitdone
-00:06:172 (1,2,3) - Blanket with slider 1done
-00:07:600 (4,5) - Wouldn’t overlap them.done
-00:12:600 (5,6) - Curve themdone
-00:16:172 (1,2) - Blanketdone
-00:16:886 (4,5) - ^done
-00:23:314 (4) - ^?
-00:24:743 (1) - ^?
-00:34:029 (3,4) - ^done
-01:20:457 (1,2) - Curve themdone
-01:23:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Lower SV to give a better emphasisdone
-01:26:172 (7) - Leave this as a 1/2 slider and a circle in the white tickdone

Flow is really good, but try to curve sliders and make blankets in the map, as their flow is much better.
Buff OD to 7.5 at least

-00:09:029 (1) - Lower SVdone
-00:09:564 (2,3,4,5,6) - There is no sound here to fit them, but somehow they fit there.fixed it
-00:14:029 (5) - Change it for a triple done
-00:21:172 (5) - Sliderdone
-00:23:314 (6) - Curve itdone
-00:23:672 (7) - New Combodone
-00:24:743 (1,2) - Blanketdone
-00:26:350 (7,8) - ^done
-00:26:886 (1) - I would change it into a 1/2 reverse sliderdone
-00:28:314 (3,4) - Blanket againdone
-00:30:279 (10) - Remove itdone
-00:30:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really good, seriously.
-00:40:636 (8) - New Combodone
-00:54:386 (5) - Flip itdone
-01:10:725 (7) - New Combodone
-01:16:439 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Do not do it a straight pattern, change it to have some cross jumps. New combo in 7.done
-01:18:672 (8,1,2,3) - Blanketdone
-01:20:457 (1) - Closerdone
-01:25:814 (7) - Remove.done

Kiai is really well done.
Missing a circle for the burst in 00:05:815 done
-00:06:172 (4,5) - Curve themdone
-00:09:029 (4) - Try doing it a more thematic slider, as the difficulty name is Angel.done
-00:13:314 (1,2,3) - Make 2,3 closer to 1done
-00:19:564 (7) - New combo heredone
-00:39:029 (1,2) - Turn 1 into a 1/2 slider and Blanketdone
-00:40:457 (8) - New combodone
-00:41:886 (1,1,2,3) - Huge 1/4 jump for a Insane (Extra)done
-00:51:172 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Curve the sliders here and make a Blanketdone
-Build up for Kiai is really good.
-01:09:386 (3,4,5,6) - Curve 3 a bit, separate 4 and make it a blanket. done
-01:15:189 (3,4,1,2,3) - Remove new combo and same as ^done

Best difficulty in the set, really polished.


Good luck to get this ranked!! This set is promising!! If it is possible for you to M4M let me know pls :)
all fixed! thanks for your opinion! ;)
posted
hey

metadata

Title:Gabriel Drop Kick
TitleUnicode:ガヴリールドロップキック
Artist:Tomita Miyu, Oonishi Saori, Oozora Naomi, Hanazawa Kana
ArtistUnicode:富田美憂、大西沙織、大空直美、花澤香菜

easy
open aimod and check distance snap ~

00:11:172 (3) - 304,136 for better blanket with (2)
00:16:886 (2) - i think curve slider is enough
00:18:314 (3,1) - too close and overlap
00:39:029 (1,4) - overlap
00:54:029 (3,5) - ^
01:08:314 (4,5) - wth is this? this is too dense for easy diff,just make 1/1 slider here or i1/2 reverse slider if you want emphatize the sound more
01:11:172 (4) - ctrl j and then ctrl g for better pattern
01:13:314 (3) - ^
01:14:029 (4,5) - same as 01:08:314 (4,5) -
01:15:457 (1) - unnecessary finish
01:16:886 (4) - ctrl j for make the pattern smoothly than before
01:17:600 (1,1) - overlap ;w;
01:20:457 (1,3) - bad overlap
01:25:457 (5,6) - maybe put 2/1 slider here and then a circle? cause if you leave it blank 01:25:457 - it looks odd imo

note : you must avoid overlap in easy diff cause its unrankable (you can rank your map if you put too much overlap in easy diff) - read this guide https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy_(Difficulty)


ok thats it from me gl!
posted
Hi m4m here,
about the metadata stuff, i believe u should follow -NanoRIPE- suggestion.
00:20:636 (2,4) - both of this part dont have sound lol, not suitable to have circle here. can remove them or change (1) and (3) to a 1/2 slider
00:24:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part is overmap too, no beats on those blue ticks at all.
01:19:207 (2,3,4) - stack them together?
01:20:904 (2,3) - stack them better :P
01:25:814 - remove this, no beat here
01:16:172 (7,8,9) - these circles is confusing to play, maybe NC it to differentiate the spacing
00:31:886 - increase the volume in this part? its hard to hear it now
00:15:368 (3,4) - this is quite hard lol, the spacing is too large imo, and its 1/4 spacing from the previous slider, maybe place them close?

-Some of the rhythm selection here is quite weird, try to lower the playback speed to 25% and listen to the song carefully, you will get the rhythm easier that way :P
-Check a guide on how to hitsound, your hitsounding need some improvement><
-your NC need improvement too. try to check on other maps for how they do NC
00:44:297 - extend this slider to the white tick on 00:44:386 -
AR6 is quite high, imo change it to AR5 will be better
00:31:886 (3) - we dont usually use timing changes in normal diff lol, i suggest u to remove it :P
01:08:314 - LOL dun use 1/2 in easy, they're hard to read for new player
01:14:029 - ^
01:23:672 - DS is off here, use same DS throughout the difficulty

find me in game if u have any questions regarding my mod :D

Good luck
posted

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

hey

metadata

Title:Gabriel Drop Kick
TitleUnicode:ガヴリールドロップキック
Artist:Tomita Miyu, Oonishi Saori, Oozora Naomi, Hanazawa Kana
ArtistUnicode:富田美憂、大西沙織、大空直美、花澤香菜

easy
open aimod and check distance snap ~

00:11:172 (3) - 304,136 for better blanket with (2)done
00:16:886 (2) - i think curve slider is enoughdone
00:18:314 (3,1) - too close and overlapdone
00:39:029 (1,4) - overlapdone
00:54:029 (3,5) - ^done
01:08:314 (4,5) - wth is this? this is too dense for easy diff,just make 1/1 slider here or i1/2 reverse slider if you want emphatize the sound moredone
01:11:172 (4) - ctrl j and then ctrl g for better patterndone
01:13:314 (3) - ^done
01:14:029 (4,5) - same as 01:08:314 (4,5) -done
01:15:457 (1) - unnecessary finishjust maintain the rhythm
01:16:886 (4) - ctrl j for make the pattern smoothly than beforedone
01:17:600 (1,1) - overlap ;w;done
01:20:457 (1,3) - bad overlapdone
01:25:457 (5,6) - maybe put 2/1 slider here and then a circle? cause if you leave it blank 01:25:457 - it looks odd imodone

note : you must avoid overlap in easy diff cause its unrankable (you can rank your map if you put too much overlap in easy diff) - read this guide https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy_(Difficulty)


ok thats it from me gl!
thx for ur modding!
posted

walaowey wrote:

Hi m4m here,
about the metadata stuff, i believe u should follow -NanoRIPE- suggestion.
00:20:636 (2,4) - both of this part dont have sound lol, not suitable to have circle here. can remove them or change (1) and (3) to a 1/2 slider
00:24:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part is overmap too, no beats on those blue ticks at all.
01:19:207 (2,3,4) - stack them together?
01:20:904 (2,3) - stack them better :P
01:25:814 - remove this, no beat here
01:16:172 (7,8,9) - these circles is confusing to play, maybe NC it to differentiate the spacing
00:31:886 - increase the volume in this part? its hard to hear it now
00:15:368 (3,4) - this is quite hard lol, the spacing is too large imo, and its 1/4 spacing from the previous slider, maybe place them close?


-Some of the rhythm selection here is quite weird, try to lower the playback speed to 25% and listen to the song carefully, you will get the rhythm easier that way :P
-Check a guide on how to hitsound, your hitsounding need some improvement><
-your NC need improvement too. try to check on other maps for how they do NC
JUST Remake ;v;
00:44:297 - extend this slider to the white tick on 00:44:386 -done
AR6 is quite high, imo change it to AR5 will be better
00:31:886 (3) - we dont usually use timing changes in normal diff lol, i suggest u to remove it :P
:/
01:08:314 - LOL dun use 1/2 in easy, they're hard to read for new playerdone
01:14:029 - ^done
01:14:029 - ^
01:23:672 - DS is off here, use same DS throughout the difficulty;/
01:14:029 - ^

find me in game if u have any questions regarding my mod :D

Good luck
thx ur modding!
posted
ayy it's your boi jay here, from the modding queue

00:09:029 (4) -When I first played it I found this slider quite odd, it just feels weird when playing the map... maybe make it something like a halo? or a heart, so it relates to the map? If it does, just tell me how it relates to it.

00:39:029 (1,2,3) - Here I wouldn't stack the 1/2 notes, you should probably stack the 1 and the 2, and then keep the three in the same spot. It's just a little hard to read at first.

00:45:814 (8) - The third slider grey is not needed, make this slider straight.

01:01:350 (5,6) - the overlap on these notes are hard to see, maybe place it a little above, or a little below, or to the right?

01:18:672 (6) and 01:20:100 (7) - The transition from a blue tick to an instant note might feel a bit uncomfortable, it somewhat sounds better on the red tick, since ending sliders don't have rules to them really, this is your choice, but just a word of advice.

00:30:457 (1,2) - Maybe make that second note straight below the 1st, and start a new combo for 00:31:172 (3,4,5,6) ? Just a thought.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7431956 something like that

00:46:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this section was hard to read, 1/2 stacks.

00:48:314 (4,5) - these notes are super close, but are spaced?

01:03:314 (3,4) - Maybe stack these, so the jumps feel easier to aim

01:23:672 (1,2,3) - These 1/1 notes are long, so space those out.

01:25:100 (5,6,7) - These are 1/2, they shouldn't have the same spacing as the 1/1's because that makes the player think that they are also going to be 1/1 notes.
00:16:172 (1,2,3) - Make that three closer to the two?

00:19:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section seems really squished together? Transition from 5,6,7,8 feel odd.
00:12:957 (6) - Move this note down a bit.

01:09:922 - there is a sound here, it's pretty loud as well.

01:09:029 (5,1) - that transition sounds weird because there isn't a note in between.

01:14:743 (1) - Move that so it's not overlapping the circle, to follow the spacing, not too much, just move it to right

01:14:743 (1,2,3) - There is also an unheard sound here too. Fix that.
posted
m4m from my queue (map here: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/557501 hard and insane)
00:05:815(1,2,3,4,5) how about you separate them and make something like a stream? like https://puu.sh/ukQfY/27cf3312c5.png
00:14:743(1,2) put hitcircles in the red ticks?
00:49:743(3)move it up maybe?
00:10:279(2,3,1) A bit exaggerated jump. move it a bit up
00:14:029(5) move it to the right
00:15:457(3,4,5,6,7) same as above
00:41:886(1) remove this slider cuz after the end there's an unnecessary jump.
00:51:886(1,2,3,4) make it a stream
01:01:886 (1,2,3,4) same as above
01:04:743 (1) how about you make it two ticks smaller?
01:06:886 (1,2,3) another stream
01:07:243 (4) move it closer to 01:06:886 (1,2,3)
posted
hi from my queue

- Metadata

I don't think metadata is entirely correct as I found this on MyAnimeList:
"Opening Theme:
"Gabriel Drop Kick (ガヴリールドロップキック)" by Gabriel Tenma White (Miyu Tomita), Vignette Tsukinose April (Saori Oonishi), Satanichia Kurumizawa McDowell (Naomi Oozora), Raphiel Shiraha Ainsworth (Kana Hanazawa)"

The title should be the japanese one and then Gabriel Drop Kick should be the romanized title. As for the artists, I actually dont know how you should deal with that, so maybe ask someone with more experience around metadata.
As for the tags, you dont need the "-" in between :)

EDIT: You should take a look at Doormat's map for metadata, here https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1177545

- Spread

I think the the difference between hard and insane might be a bit too much. I also suggest that you rename your easy difficulty to normal, normal to hard and then hard to light insane or something similar because currently you have 2 difficulties with the "hard" category

Also, adjust the volume for each section, because there are some places where the hitsounds make much more noise than the music
Maybe ar3?
00:03:315 (1) - shorten this slider and put a circle at 00:04:023
00:09:029 (5) - this shape looks a bit odd, I would NC this
00:10:814 (2,3) - blanket
00:12:600 (3) - looks a bit odd; remove an anchor point
00:14:029 (2,1) - blanket
00:20:457 (3) - NC
00:25:457 (3,4) - these look a bit odd, just make them a single curve
00:27:600 (1,5) - stack and then blanket 00:29:743 (5) - with 00:28:314 (2) -
00:39:743 (2,3) - blanket
00:44:386 - should be clickable; maybe have a repeat slider here?
00:49:029 (4) - NC
00:55:457 (6,1) - improve blanket
01:07:600 (3) - dont curve this much
01:10:457 (3) - repeat slider here instead
01:16:886 (4,1) - stack
01:21:886 (3) - this looks awkward, try to use one anchor point
01:25:814 (2) - not necessary
00:04:743 (4,1) - maybe blanket
00:07:600 (4,5) - reduce spacing
00:08:136 (5,6) - ^
00:09:029 (7) - Sliderend is off the grid, and the shape itself looks kinda weird so try to reshape it so it blankets with 00:08:672 (6) - and you could also make it slower if u want
00:09:029 (7,1) - incase u decide to go with the same shape, blanket this
00:16:172 (1,1) - be careful with sliders like these at this difficulties because they dont know when it ends, so try to stick with one repeat instead of 2
00:20:457 (3) - NC
00:21:886 (1) - slider should start here
00:27:600 (1,2) - blanket
00:31:172 (2,3) - increase spacing here, also maybe NC 00:31:886 (3) -
00:38:314 (7) - remove an anchor point
00:40:100 (4,5) - unstack
00:45:457 (3,3) - what i mentioned above
00:51:172 (3,4) - unstack - note: if u dont want to unstack you can stack 00:51:350 (4,5) - these instead
00:58:850 (7) - remove, no sound here
01:09:386 - should be clickable
01:10:814 (4,4) - off-beat, move them to the first blue tick before the notes
01:21:886 (1) - one anchor point is fine
00:04:743 (4,1) - stack
00:10:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is kinda hard at this level, so I suggest making it easier
00:12:957 (6,1) - blanket
00:20:457 (3) - NC
00:24:743 (1,4) - stack
00:35:100 (7,8) - blanket?
00:41:886 (1) - either improve the shape, or just have a break here
00:45:814 (6,1) - blanket
00:45:100 (3) - would make this a straight slider
00:50:100 (4,1) - blanket
01:03:672 (1) - one anchor point is fine
01:06:172 (1,2,3) - this angle looks a bit weird
01:08:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing
01:09:029 (5) - one anchor point instead of two
01:10:814 (4) - offbeat as I mentioned in the previous difficulty
01:11:707 (8) - no sound here
01:13:672 (2) - curve so you can blanket with 01:13:314 (1) - sliderend
01:14:029 (1,2,3,4,1) - consistent spacing
01:15:636 - should be clickable
01:26:172 (7) - NC
00:05:457 (3) - slider should be here
00:05:636 (4,5) - remove
00:07:600 (5) - NC and move it a bit away from 00:06:886 (3) -
00:10:279 (2,3) - no sound here; remove
00:10:457 (1,5) - stack
00:10:993 (4,6) - stack
00:12:957 (8,5) - stack and make it look like this

00:16:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - improve overlaps; this is something you should look over the whole map and improve since there are many awkward overlaps and I cant really point them all out :P
00:20:636 (2,4) - I cant hear anything here, so you can delete them, but you can decide for yourself
00:22:600 (3,5) - blanket
00:25:814 (5,9) - blanket
00:29:029 (6) - slider should be here
00:41:886 (1) - maybe a break would be better here :p
00:49:029 (1,2,3) - consistent spacing
00:56:172 (1,2,3) - ^
00:57:957 (2,3) - is this spacing necessary
01:09:386 (2) - one anchor point
01:10:457 (6) - NC
01:10:725 (1) - no NC
01:11:350 (5) - would put 2 circles here instead
01:25:100 (5) - blanket
01:26:886 (1) - i dont think this is necessary
Some of these 5 note bursts also seem kinda overmapped, with barely any sound that supports it, so look into that
00:03:315 (1,2,3,4) - undermapped
00:09:029 (4) - this shape is, uh.. questionable.
00:11:529 (2) - would try to make a blanket here
00:15:457 (3) - double stack here instead
00:15:814 (5) - make single
00:17:957 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - are these jumps necessary?
00:21:886 (1) - could make this a slider
00:22:422 (2,1) - blanket
00:22:779 (4,2) - blanket
00:26:172 (1,2) - reduce spacing here
00:28:314 (3,3) - stack
00:32:600 (5,1) - jump might be too big
00:44:386 - should be clickable
00:50:457 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - doesnt play really well
01:03:672 (4) - NC
01:10:993 (2,3) - shouldnt have the same spacing as 01:11:350 (4,5) -
01:18:672 (6) - NC
01:23:672 (1,4) - stack
01:25:457 (7) - should be slider here and remove this 01:25:814 (8) -
01:26:529 (10) - circle instead


You should look for potential stacks and blankets and avoid weird overlaps and awkward angles at higher difficulties, but I think thats it for my mod, good luck with the map! :D
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JayJay-San wrote:

ayy it's your boi jay here, from the modding queue

00:09:029 (4) -When I first played it I found this slider quite odd, it just feels weird when playing the map... maybe make it something like a halo? or a heart, so it relates to the map? If it does, just tell me how it relates to it.[b][color=#BFF00]just fixed it like my grandpa[/color]
00:39:029 (1,2,3) - Here I wouldn't stack the 1/2 notes, you should probably stack the 1 and the 2, and then keep the three in the same spot. It's just a little hard to read at firstdone

00:45:814 (8) - The third slider grey is not needed, make this slider straight.done


01:01:350 (5,6) - the overlap on these notes are hard to see, maybe place it a little above, or a little below, or to the right?[b]done


01:18:672 (6) and 01:20:100 (7) - The transition from a blue tick to an instant note might feel a bit uncomfortable, it somewhat sounds better on the red tick, since ending sliders don't have rules to them really, this is your choice, but just a word of advice.
Rhythm
00:30:457 (1,2) - Maybe make that second note straight below the 1st, and start a new combo for 00:31:172 (3,4,5,6) ? Just a thought.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7431956 something like that
done
00:46:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this section was hard to read, 1/2 stacks.
done
00:48:314 (4,5) - these notes are super close, but are spaced?
done
01:03:314 (3,4) - Maybe stack these, so the jumps feel easier to aim
done
01:23:672 (1,2,3) - These 1/1 notes are long, so space those out.
done
01:25:100 (5,6,7) - These are 1/2, they shouldn't have the same spacing as the 1/1's because that makes the player think that they are also going to be 1/1 notes.

fixed it
00:16:172 (1,2,3) - Make that three closer to the two?
fixed it
00:19:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section seems really squished together? Transition from 5,6,7,8 feel odd.

fixed it
00:12:957 (6) - Move this note down a bit.
fixed it
01:09:922 - there is a sound here, it's pretty loud as well.
fixed it
01:09:029 (5,1) - that transition sounds weird because there isn't a note in between.
fixed it
01:14:743 (1) - Move that so it's not overlapping the circle, to follow the spacing, not too much, just move it to right
fixed it
01:14:743 (1,2,3) - There is also an unheard sound here too. Fix that.
fixed it

thx for ur modding!
posted

I Hate Smoothie wrote:

JayJay-San wrote:

ayy it's your boi jay here, from the modding queue

00:09:029 (4) -When I first played it I found this slider quite odd, it just feels weird when playing the map... maybe make it something like a halo? or a heart, so it relates to the map? If it does, just tell me how it relates to it.[b][color=#BFF00]just fixed it like my grandpa[/color]
00:39:029 (1,2,3) - Here I wouldn't stack the 1/2 notes, you should probably stack the 1 and the 2, and then keep the three in the same spot. It's just a little hard to read at firstdone

00:45:814 (8) - The third slider grey is not needed, make this slider straight.done


01:01:350 (5,6) - the overlap on these notes are hard to see, maybe place it a little above, or a little below, or to the right?[b]done


01:18:672 (6) and 01:20:100 (7) - The transition from a blue tick to an instant note might feel a bit uncomfortable, it somewhat sounds better on the red tick, since ending sliders don't have rules to them really, this is your choice, but just a word of advice.
Rhythm
00:30:457 (1,2) - Maybe make that second note straight below the 1st, and start a new combo for 00:31:172 (3,4,5,6) ? Just a thought.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7431956 something like that
done
00:46:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this section was hard to read, 1/2 stacks.
done
00:48:314 (4,5) - these notes are super close, but are spaced?
done
01:03:314 (3,4) - Maybe stack these, so the jumps feel easier to aim
done
01:23:672 (1,2,3) - These 1/1 notes are long, so space those out.
done
01:25:100 (5,6,7) - These are 1/2, they shouldn't have the same spacing as the 1/1's because that makes the player think that they are also going to be 1/1 notes.

fixed it
00:16:172 (1,2,3) - Make that three closer to the two?
fixed it
00:19:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section seems really squished together? Transition from 5,6,7,8 feel odd.

fixed it
00:12:957 (6) - Move this note down a bit.
fixed it
01:09:922 - there is a sound here, it's pretty loud as well.
fixed it
01:09:029 (5,1) - that transition sounds weird because there isn't a note in between.
fixed it
01:14:743 (1) - Move that so it's not overlapping the circle, to follow the spacing, not too much, just move it to right
fixed it
01:14:743 (1,2,3) - There is also an unheard sound here too. Fix that.
fixed it

thx for ur modding!
rip kudosu
posted

JayJay-San wrote:

rip kudosu
same
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