1. Vastness (6.01 stars, 1287 notes)

-[Snowy]- wrote:

I really love the flow and the kickslider placing, I wish I was half as good as you at that ;/
Vastness

SPOILER

00:26:483 (4,1) - Slider (1) Should be timed where the hitcircle (4) is √
00:34:759 (3) - Remove, not necessary since you aren't mapping those sounds before √
00:42:001 (2) - No sound here, remove √
00:43:725 (2,3,4) - ^ Just make the slider at 00:43:035 (1) - Longer/slower to fill in the space I personally think placing like this will be better
00:45:363 (8,9) - ^ Hmm...I think the latter one can be kept.The former one has been removed
01:08:466 (3) - ^ You repeat this triple every time the sound comes up, I wont need to repeat this every time since you know what I'm talking about I will try to modify it
01:25:449 (4) - Place this slider on the previous red tick, shorten the slider that comes before itThis part I will think twice,it may need a few changes
01:26:052 (5,6) - No sounds here, remove √
01:26:828 (4) - Again, place this on the previous red tick
01:27:431 (5) - Remove Hmm...I dont think so
01:30:535 (2) - ^
01:31:914 (2) - ^ You do this every time too, I wont need to repeat I think keep it will be better
01:34:414 (1,2) - Slider (2) ends on a stronger sound, place object (2) on the red tick instead and change the sliderI need further thinking
01:36:483 (4,5,6,7) - In this section, hitcircles where they shouldn't be and no hitcircles where the should be
01:37:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream doesn't have sounds on each object, replace with sliders and hitcircles
01:38:035 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ I dont need to repeat
I think so,I'll remap this section
01:39:070 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream was timed well since there are sounds for every object, do this more I will have a try
01:50:966 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Time the sliders better to the voice, maybe put one for each syllable?
01:55:966 (8,9,10) - There shouldn't be a triple here, maybe hitcircle and slider on the two sounds?modified√
01:57:690 (10) - Remove There are sounds as well,so think it can be kept
02:08:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Fix this entire thing, remove the hitcircles where there are no sounds and add the hitcircles where there are sounds, you can use the timing I used on my map for this section I will consider it

The second half is basically the same problems, you can find them out
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3BC_I2ufqC8&t=5s
This video explains pretty well what you are doing wrong, next time be sure to listen to the song at 50% speed or so and listen if there are sounds where you put objects
If you master this I really think you can become an amazing mapper, this map is so creative