1. Eternal Love (4,48 stars, 1005 notes)

-Nitrous wrote:

I see Love Live!
Because we all want to shine! Let's all shine together !

Insane Marathon

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   Arashi no Naka no Koi dakara ( 嵐のなかの恋だから lit. Because It's Love Amidst The Storm) is the coupling song by μ's for their second special single from the iOS and Android rhythm game, Love Live! School idol festival. It was released on October 28, 2015.
   Source: http://love-live.wikia.com/wiki/Arashi_ ... Koi_dakara
   Yeah, favorite LLSIF song to play for me !
2. 00:08:515 (3,1) - Remove (3) and move (1) to 00:08:515 - and use it as an extended slider instead. It just doesn't sound right. Fixed
3. 00:14:101 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Nice heart. Can be improved. Thanks ! I just rotated it by 10 clockwise just to make it look a bit better
4. 00:56:825 (2,3) - can be blanketed to look better Blanked, I mean fixed
5. 01:59:411 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - shifting from 1/2 to 1/3 rhythm can be confusing specially you used circles I suggest using sliders to help the player know the rhythm will shift to 1/3 The NC spam is supposed to show what rythm is here, but if it is really confusing I'll change it to slider
6. 04:02:513 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - cool heart too, can be improved Thanks !
7. 04:54:857 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - same here, shifting from 1/2 to 1/3 Same reason as two up lul
8. 05:05:744 (1) - Personal preference but I don't like the slider whistle here. Mind muting it? Mhh, but there no whistle here xD

Because osu! needs more Love Live! Good luck in ranking! Thank you for the mod, have a nice day ! :3

Duck with Hat wrote:

Heya!
This is all that I found on yer map!
Note: I use Grid size "tiny" so don't be confused.
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Timing Points:
00:46:791: Two on the same place
00:50:101: Here again
04:20:306: Agaeeeein The timing points for the hitsounds made me want to kill myself so I didn't check anything, thank for pointing it !
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Circles and stuff:

00:15:136: Put it more to the right so it can link with the other slider I overlaped the two parts of the heart a little

01:03:136: I actually think a slider would fit more The song almost stops here, so I represented it with a clear no mouvement in the map

01:06:032: Personally for me, I just don't like where this slider stands Ctrl+H and put it higher and on the right of the slider after

01:09:343: ^ Didn't change it, it's cool where it is for me :3

01:19:792: Place that circle in the same distance like the other 3 (or you can place it on number 3 would look good too!) Used distance snaping and spacing coefficent? (is that it in english ?) to to make them the same distance

01:32:101: You can remove Kiai here until 01:33:342 I don't want the Kai to cut during this lound part, but it's a nice idea, I might use it in next map

01:55:894: One to the right, please! You mean spacing ? Then yeah it's better, fixed

02:00:101: This one is a bit too early (use 1/4) and maybe put it on the slider (or where you want) It's part of the 1/3 single tap before it so I can't change it

02:14:204: One down, please! Yes ! Master !

02:25:687: One to the right, please! Not one because I want the same distance between the three objects, but I moved the circle a little to the right and down

02:42:239: This slider is placed weirdly True, rotated by -10

03:15:445: One down and two to the right! Just did one right

03:24:652: You can remove here kiai too until 03:25:893 Same reason for other kai thing

03:39:238: One to the right and two up! No i wanted this stream to be fluid

04:07:375: I don't know if you wanted that, but that circle looks really out of place Yes it does, fixed

04:27:547: Kiai until 04:28:788 Nop again lul

That's all.
I hope I could help you (maybe not cuz I'm dope at modding). It's k, your mod was really nice, small things like that help a lot !
But all in all, I wish you good luck in the future!Thanks !

Kotori-Chan wrote:

finally found some time to mod this
super late m4m :3.. No problem :3

~ETERNAL LOVE~

00:06:033 (1,1) - the jump from that slow slider to the next is kinda extreme imo and ez to miss or hit 100 on
make them a bit closer to each other Fixed
00:14:101 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - i think you can make that heart a bit better,by making 00:15:136 (1) - a bit less sharp Yep, did that to the other heart that look like that too
00:19:894 (1,2) - the spacing on these is kinda extreme too,some spacing there is good~ for emphatize Just made them a little closer
but thats really a bit too much i think ;w;
01:03:756 (1,2) - ^^^^ Same
01:07:067 (1,2) - ^^^^^^ Same
00:59:205 (7,1,2) - i would increase spacing between 7 and the next combo a bit,was kinda a very little missleading when i played it Rotated the reverse slider a bit, spaced more and put the circle combo 2 a little higher
01:06:239 (4) - didnt you forget to NC here :> ? sv change added
01:59:411 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - that NC spam isnt really necessary It's here to indicate the 1/3 rythm, and I don't want to map this rythm with sliders, it's actually pretty common to spam NC to indicate rythm changes (I think.. Not sure xD)
02:55:066 (1,2,3,1,2) - having spacing emphatize is good,but having kind of too much is meh >.< Yep it was a bit to much, fixed
03:54:445 (1,1) - having that slow slider pointing in the other direction and making the player jump to the next note is really meh on this part for flow,
ctrl+g slow slider and maybe put it bit closer I did ctrl+H instead and put the slow slider in a "blanket type" of the next
04:02:720 (3,4,1) - same like i said earlier,i'm sure you can make that hear a bit nicer :> Yep :3


but well thats it,really cant find any rhyhtm stuff or something,there is probably some more things where spacing and stuff is wrong,but i'm too stupid or too lazy to point all that out :3...
nice work on hitsounding btw,really really nice <3 Thanks ! I spend like 2h searching for hitsounds and I'm still not satisfied with them xD
and good luck with that map,hope mod was somewhat helpful >.<

Yoshino-- wrote:

Alright, time to do my part of the m4m

mod

Eternal Love:

00:03:757 (5) - strong sound, should be clickable imo I want this whole part to be 5 fivers clics each
00:04:378 (3) - nc? Yeah
00:10:791 (1) - don't think you need the nc Yeah, right, I don't know why I put a NC here
00:25:688 (1) - ^ ^
00:38:929 (1) - ^
00:35:722 (6) - I don't hear anything here I think it was supposed to be a S:C2 here without a clap, the hitsounds made wanna kill my self, so I might have put a hitsounds without paying attention
00:45:239 (2) - ^ This is for intensifying that part, I still don't know why I put a circle here in the first place though
00:52:791 - add a note for vocals here? That's a secondary vocal, it's not that important imo, plus I wanted that pause that leads to the reverse slider
01:20:515 (3) - start kiai here and nc? (same here 03:13:066 (2) - and here 04:15:961 (2) - ) Yeah fixed
02:01:687 (4,5) - ctrl+g? No, between the two jumps the song is still loud, it's not a perfect stop so I feel that mouvement is better here
02:12:239 (3,4,1) - I think you can space this more, really strong beats here Put combo 4 lower than its original place
02:14:204 (3,4) - flows better this way imo Changed but with a ctrl+H, ctrl+J and rotate by -30
02:41:308 (1) - not really a big fan of ending streams on even numbers, plays kinda weird; should be at 02:41:411 - anyway, because of the piano The slider before the stream is the first clic and the whole is 14 notes, so 14+1=15 = odd number, I personally don't reset my clicking finger when I see a stream after a slider so for me it's an odd number :3
02:41:722 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - space this more, since it's stronger than 02:39:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Scaled by 1.2
02:56:308 (1,2) - too spaced; 02:59:618 (1,2) - is less spaced, when it's stronger Fixed, the first one is less space than the second one now
03:08:515 (3) - make this two 1/4 sliders, fits the rhythm better I don't want any kick sliders, the song here is to calm for that
03:11:617 (2) - nc I don't know if I'd NC that, I'll see x)
03:43:066 (1,1,1) - better as circles, plays easier that way and there isn't anything on the blue ticks anyway Changed
04:10:789 - why ignore this sound I don't know, I brain lagged I think, there is a circle now
05:02:859 (2) - better to ignore the sound on 05:02:929 - and making this a 1/3 slider instead I just can't ignore drum, it's my weakness, each time I listen to a version where I ignore it I feel like it's begging me to map it x)

Also for those super slow sliders, changing the bpm for SV is unrankable, you'll have to edit the SV in notepad if you want to keep it that slow.
"Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds." Erf.. F*ck xDDD

GL with the map
Thanks for the mod ! :3

Hikan wrote:

m4m return

diff

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  00:10:999 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this looks messy, try this rhythm instead https://puu.sh/tMaex/b78ca27a2e.png Changed but not like you recommended
  00:20:723 (2,3) - this overlap :d Woops ! Fixed
  00:29:205 (2,4) - improve blanket Fixed
  01:47:619 (2,3,4) - and 01:50:930 (2,3,4,5) - inconsistent, Fixed
  01:52:999 (5) - prefer changing this into 2 circles to emphasis the vocal at 01:53:205 - Changed
  01:59:412 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - too much nc lul The spam NC is to indicate a change in the rythm of the map, if the combo/mapping is different, that means the rythm is different imo
  02:05:412 (4) - random slider appeared in the jump Changed
  02:18:447 (1,2) - the (2) carried 2 different sound make it looks so heavy, I think the rhythm you used here 02:16:792 (2,3,4) - would work much better, the same reason with 02:20:723 (2) - 02:24:033 (2) - Changed
  02:47:826 (1,2) - I suggest you to unstack this one, since you did stack to 02:49:274 (1,2) - 02:46:068 (1,2) - but with a different gaps, it may cause mistake while playing Fixed
  04:49:274 (2,3) - 04:50:102 (2) - inconsistent, change that into 2 circles too? Changed

good luck

1. 00:21:345 - Unsnapped greenline. The slider starts at 00:21:343 (3) - , might have some weird interactions with your hitsounds. Make sure these work as intended!
2. 00:35:829 -, 01:40:588 - , 04:12:656 - ^
3. http://gendo.s-ul.eu/qEuQc774.png - hitfinish 2 has more than 5ms delay! Pretty sure that aint allowed.

1. 00:05:516 (1) - Might look better if you make it less curved like so: http://gendo.s-ul.eu/be1LVydZ.png
2. 00:09:964 (5) - Sound really awkward even though it fits the song, maybe instead of doing 2 repeats, do 1 repeat and add a slider after? I think the clap really deserves it's own click. http://gendo.s-ul.eu/N3FTBptL.png
3. I see you do it later as well, so I guess you really like that return slider. I still think a single repeat + slider would play better.
4. 00:34:999 (5) - Put this a bit lower (x:416, y:315), would make the visual spacing more equal (Even tho the actual spacing is consistent right now, it looks off).
5. 00:54:861 (4) - Should be blanketed a bit better
6. 01:03:964 (2) - Maybe at (x:322,y:331) for to kind of continue on the previous pattern you had going?
7. 01:25:068 (1,2,3,4,5) - Theses lider shapes look so inconsitent, maybe make them a bit more similair? Or atleast have them fit better together by blanketing some for example.
8. 01:25:895 (3,4,5) - Also I think this jump is way too big. (Sudden 1/4 jump?)
9. 01:35:826 (4,5,6) - I think spacing between those 3 sliders should be staying the same or increasing, but definitly not decreasing !
10. 01:51:136 (3,4,5) - Maybe make a constant distance triangle here? Looks a bit messy right now
11. 02:43:274 (1,2) - Could blanket these better
12. 03:14:309 (1,2,3) - I think this would flow better, and would also make the spacing more consistent. http://gendo.s-ul.eu/7vRRZDPC.png
13. 03:15:447 (4,5) - I think this 1/4 jump isn't clear enough. I think the spacing should be increased by quite a lot. D;
14. 03:25:068 (3) - I really don't like how the spacing is so far and you barely hear the hitsound on this, I think you should give this a more distinct sound.
15. 03:32:516 (7,8,1,2) - I don't really see a reason for such a big difference of spacing between 7-8 and 1-2, should maybe make this a bit more consistent?
16. 03:50:102 (5) - I think this 5 should be a bit lower (x:84, y:231), since it flows quite bad right now.
17. 03:50:930 (6,1,2,3) - I reallyyyy don't like how the angle of the stream is complete opposite of the current flow right now, might want to make the slider flow better into that stream?
18. 04:10:999 (1) - I really think you could do something more with this slider, it just feels off right now.
19. 04:12:654 (1,1,1) - I have to be honest here, this looks quite ugly. The sliders look completely random. How about copying one of the sliders and rotating it so it becomes more consistent? Also remove the NC!
20. 04:17:205 (1,2,3) - I think a nice triangle for 1-2-3 could fit really well here, I think the sudden jump to 3 is a bit too much right now
21. 04:18:033 (4,5,6) - Again the 1/4 jump, really shouldn't do that. I don't think it's clear enough that this is 1/4 D;
22. 04:20:930 (2) - Blanket this maybe?
23. 04:25:688 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing on this triple.
24. 04:33:550 (4,1) - This rhythm feels really off, I don't know how to fix it, but you should maybe look at this again.

GenDoNL wrote:

M4M!
[Eternal Love]
First some general stuff.

1. 00:21:345 - Unsnapped greenline. The slider starts at 00:21:343 (3) - , might have some weird interactions with your hitsounds. Make sure these work as intended!
2. 00:35:829 -, 01:40:588 - , 04:12:656 - ^ Fixed ! My hitsounds bugged at some point so it was weird
3. http://gendo.s-ul.eu/qEuQc774.png - hitfinish 2 has more than 5ms delay! Pretty sure that aint allowed. Fixed, but you should off tell me which one are with a delay x) but it's k dw :3

Alright now onto actual modding

1. 00:05:516 (1) - Might look better if you make it less curved like so: http://gendo.s-ul.eu/be1LVydZ.png Yep, rotated by 20°
2. 00:09:964 (5) - Sound really awkward even though it fits the song, maybe instead of doing 2 repeats, do 1 repeat and add a slider after? I think the clap really deserves it's own click. http://gendo.s-ul.eu/N3FTBptL.png Changed but with a circle instead, I really want that stop so a slider won't really fit, I think it's still ok with only a circle
3. I see you do it later as well, so I guess you really like that return slider. I still think a single repeat + slider would play better. I'm only going to change the ones in the begin of the song so the other part are a little bit more playable
4. 00:34:999 (5) - Put this a bit lower (x:416, y:315), would make the visual spacing more equal (Even tho the actual spacing is consistent right now, it looks off). Moved
5. 00:54:861 (4) - Should be blanketed a bit better Fixed
6. 01:03:964 (2) - Maybe at (x:322,y:331) for to kind of continue on the previous pattern you had going? Yep Fixed !
7. 01:25:068 (1,2,3,4,5) - Theses lider shapes look so inconsitent, maybe make them a bit more similair? Or atleast have them fit better together by blanketing some for example. It was supposed to be a heart D: well I guess it's pretty ugly like that I'm changing it
8. 01:25:895 (3,4,5) - Also I think this jump is way too big. (Sudden 1/4 jump?) With the change from before it's also less jumpy
9. 01:35:826 (4,5,6) - I think spacing between those 3 sliders should be staying the same or increasing, but definitly not decreasing ! I had a very hard time placing these sliders correctly, and I was still not satisfied with them so here I increased spacing
10. 01:51:136 (3,4,5) - Maybe make a constant distance triangle here? Looks a bit messy right now Fixed
11. 02:43:274 (1,2) - Could blanket these better Fixed
12. 03:14:309 (1,2,3) - I think this would flow better, and would also make the spacing more consistent. http://gendo.s-ul.eu/7vRRZDPC.png Changed !
13. 03:15:447 (4,5) - I think this 1/4 jump isn't clear enough. I think the spacing should be increased by quite a lot. D; They are closer now with a more distinct overlapping for the 1/4
14. 03:25:068 (3) - I really don't like how the spacing is so far and you barely hear the hitsound on this, I think you should give this a more distinct sound. Oh I forgot a triplet here, well that happen xD and I lowered the volume of the hitsound
15. 03:32:516 (7,8,1,2) - I don't really see a reason for such a big difference of spacing between 7-8 and 1-2, should maybe make this a bit more consistent? I don't know either why I did such a big difference in spacing lol I brought (1) closer to (2)
16. 03:50:102 (5) - I think this 5 should be a bit lower (x:84, y:231), since it flows quite bad right now. Fixed
17. 03:50:930 (6,1,2,3) - I reallyyyy don't like how the angle of the stream is complete opposite of the current flow right now, might want to make the slider flow better into that stream? Rotated the stream instead by -60° and ajusted the stream
18. 04:10:999 (1) - I really think you could do something more with this slider, it just feels off right now. I don't know what to do, I suck at slider and slider art ;-;
19. 04:12:654 (1,1,1) - I have to be honest here, this looks quite ugly. The sliders look completely random. How about copying one of the sliders and rotating it so it becomes more consistent? Also remove the NC! The sliders are copy pasted, I just placed them randomly idk why, it's better now I think
20. 04:17:205 (1,2,3) - I think a nice triangle for 1-2-3 could fit really well here, I think the sudden jump to 3 is a bit too much right now It's a nice triangle now
21. 04:18:033 (4,5,6) - Again the 1/4 jump, really shouldn't do that. I don't think it's clear enough that this is 1/4 D; they are closer now, but I mean the overlap is really clear imo x)
22. 04:20:930 (2) - Blanket this maybe? Fixed
23. 04:25:688 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing on this triple. Fixed
24. 04:33:550 (4,1) - This rhythm feels really off, I don't know how to fix it, but you should maybe look at this again. Fixed rythm and changed some spacing so it'll look better

vekt0r wrote:

Hello!
Theory: Love Live is mod bait xd True true xD

Eternal Love:
00:09:343 - I think you should make this downbeat clickable because it’s pretty strong Why not :3
00:12:654 - ^ ^
00:19:895 (1,1) - I like having both of these ctrl-g’d to match 00:19:274 (1) - yeah I think it's better too, thanks :3
01:05:826 (1,2,3) - is the bump in the triple intentional? (there are a few of the same later too) No they are not, I eyeball everything so there's problems like that lol
01:13:895 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I actually like these, they work well while being playable Thanks ! :3
01:38:723 (1,2,3,4) - I would recommend this arrangement because so far the theme in the kiai has been sliders with high spacing; I would also recommend enlarging the pattern Normally there should have been other hearts but they were pretty ugly so I changed them, I just forgot to change this one, but I really like your suggestion so I included it in the map ;3

box

you see it’s the order of blood flow through the heart (when viewed from the outside)
right atrium -> right ventricle -> left atrium -> left ventricle
break in flow when the blood goes to lungs is supported by music because strong attack
(wtf am I doing with my life) Don't worry, it's ok x)

01:54:861 (1) - remove NC Fixed
02:36:240 (5) - for all of these even though the notes are grouped like that, the sliderend is pretty strong, so I would recommend replacing each with a 3/4 sliders and a circle Good idea
03:35:826 - make this clickable like all the other times this has appeared Sure !
03:40:792 - is much stronger than 03:40:999 (5) - True true, changed
03:42:240 (4,1) - ^ I want the jump just after and nothing between the triplet and the first jump (I also relized that there is a triplet after the triplet, if that makes sense lol)
03:48:240 (4,5) - ^ Changed
03:42:861 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - also here nc should be on all the 2’s Oh that looks a lot better with the NC on the (2)s
04:20:516 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 01:38:723 (1,2,3,4) - but is this even supposed to be a heart anymore what happened I abandon the idea of a heart, but you made me want to do it again so it's a heart now but I doin't think I can do the bloodflow thingy here because there is a triplet in the middle of the heart and the way the flow enters the heart
04:38:723 - same as 03:35:826 - Changed

Okay that's it! I quite like this map despite my hate for cs5 lul
Good luck! Thanks !

1. 00:15:136 (1) - Not too sure about this shape
2. 00:27:964 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'd even out these jumps little more
3. 01:23:412 (1,2,3) - Even out space
4. 01:43:481 (6) - Shape this to flow with map well
5. 02:50:723 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Lots of small slider around here not sure if good thing or not
6. 03:33:550 (1,2) - You could prob blanket this
7. 05:05:747 (1) - Nice

YoungsterMario wrote:

Eternal Love

1. 00:15:136 (1) - Not too sure about this shape It's the part of the heart it's forming ;3
2. 00:27:964 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'd even out these jumps little more In the lyrics it says that it's becoming bigger or something like that, that's what it represent, I made the jumps less big though
3. 01:23:412 (1,2,3) - Even out space Yep
4. 01:43:481 (6) - Shape this to flow with map well Rotated by -30°
5. 02:50:723 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Lots of small slider around here not sure if good thing or not Not sure to, might change it
6. 03:33:550 (1,2) - You could prob blanket this Fixed
7. 05:05:747 (1) - Nice Thanks ! :3

I am a new modder not much to say about this sorry. I hope my info will be helpful in any way. In general I think there are too many slider velocities and in order for it to be ranked there is a max 3 velocities unless you use them in a way that adds to the map. I recommend 03:16:378 (1) - this velocity. I also don't recommend CS 5. I'd use CS4. The different SV represent the intensity of each part, it's pretty normal to change SV when the song changes imo. I didn't want to use CS4, I want this map to be hard to aim ;3

Shino Inuzuka wrote:

M4M

You do realize you can set the custom hitsounds to finish or whistle so you don't have to make a new timing point for each note right? It's so hard to mod because I can't tell what timings points are for what. I know that, but I have thing in mind that required that many green lines
00:04:378 (1) - Don't start combo here. Or anywhere in the middle of a burst stream. Actually there should be no NC on the first triplet
00:04:378 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Maybe change the sv to make each slider a little slower than the last They are a little slow each
00:10:792 (7) - Start the combo here instead of the slider after Yeah
00:12:136 (1) - Don't start a new combo here Yeah
00:22:585 (1) - ^ I'm kind of done pointing all these out since theres so many, but most NCs should be on a white tick and NEVER NC in the middle of burst streams. You're combos are really a mess Yes you can start NC on triplets like that, I see them on certain ranked maps, also, the sttrong sound is at the end to the triplets where a new music phrase begins aka verse
00:27:964 (2,3,4,5,6) - These should all be the same distance from eachother I already explain (in a other mod) that the lyrics are saying "Growing", so to represent that, I'm making the jump "grow"
00:31:171 (2) - Maybe put some drum sound here No drum fere in the song, no drum in the hitsounds
00:33:343 (5,6) - Switch the order of these Changed to somthing like that with the last circle on top of the next slider
00:37:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The distancing is the wrong way around. Start the jumps small then make them bigger for emphasis Oh, you want to be that precise, personaly I eyeballed everything so it didn't seem smaller for me, It's fixed
00:48:240 (1,2,3,1,2) - Make this all one big stream The sounds that are cliced are much stronger for me than the sound on the ends of the sliders, so kick sliders are more appropriate imo
01:59:412 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - These should all be same distance from eachother Aren't they the same distance ? I used distance snap for that, so I don't understant why the editor says that it's not he same distance :/
02:03:136 (2) - Replace this with a burst stream To calm for that imo
02:05:826 (6) - Put this to the right and a little higher Newt soun is a strong sound, so increase spacing
02:10:585 (2,3,3,4) - Why are the second pair of notes way farther from eachother Because the second pair as a WAY stronger sound then the first one
02:55:481 (2,3) - Jump? The song implies a "stop", so no mouvement
03:56:102 (1) - Might be better to remove everything from here to 04:04:999 (5) - and keep it as a break because 5 minutes of playing in a row nonstop is kind of.... also the music quiets down there If I put a break, I will need to make a full spread, also, it's the duet vocal of the centers (idol stuff) in the song, so it HAS to be played
04:12:654 (1,2,3) - Sounds better as 6 shorter sliders I don't know, I'll consider it
04:42:136 (3) - Move this down a bit Fixed
04:44:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, spacing is the wrong way around Fixed

Good luck!

Parachute wrote:

Hey, heres the mod from m4m

SPOILER

General
Just a suggestion but you should use combo colours, the default ones are kinda boring if you ask me Yeah I know, but I don't know what color I can use lol

Eternal Love
00:11:826 (4,5,6,1) - Nc at 4 and not at 1 to have consistency in this section Fixed
00:22:378 (4,5,1) - nc at 4 and not 1 again Fixed
00:52:999 (6,1) - I think this jump is a biiiiit much, especially since the 6 has 2 repeats it might be kinda easy to fail on this one. Idk i think you should make it a bit lower because the music imo doesnt give in for such a big jump here ^^ Jump is less big now :3
00:53:412 (1,2) - Also i kinda think you should increase the spacing here abit, it just doesnt look very good imo Fixed
00:54:033 (3) - Id do nc here instead of 1 but and remove next nc and put a nc then on 00:57:343 (3) - and remove the one on that 1.. i think it would be better than how it is now.. i dont really see how you did them right now :/ Yeah, it's a lot better, thanks :3
00:56:723 (1,2) - Same here with the super low spacing.. you got this often in your map and idk.. i just think this looks kinda weird but its up to you really Increased spacing
01:05:826 (1,2) - Here again the super low spacing.. i would really increasy it by a BIT ^^ ^
01:06:240 (1) - This is abit too much nc and i dont know if this one really fits.. i would remove it There is a SV change, so idk
01:19:068 (2,3,4,5) - and 04:14:516 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should do something else (jumps or make the flow like 03:11:619 (2,3,4,5) - because i dont think this round thing works good here.. also the spacing should be like 03:11:619 (2,3,4,5) - .. i think this melody thing should be mapped .. with more spacing or something like that.. if you know what i mean ^^) I made it like the one at 03:11:619
If you dont change the section at 01:17:205 (1) - i would at least make ctrl+g on this one so it will have better flow from the object before this and have diff flow to the next pattern to emphasize it more
Until 01:30:240 (5) - you always changed the nc when the singing got.. like a new measure if you know what i mean with that and here you do a new combo on the actual new measure. I think you should change one of the things you did to keep consitency in the kiai time with your ncs Removed NC
01:31:895 (5,6,1,2,1,2) - Here too, id do this just 1 whole combo starting at current 5 Fixed
01:38:516 (5) - Nc here instead of next nc ^
01:40:378 (5) - Nc here instead of next nc ^
01:43:481 (6) - Same here (and the nc goes on for the second part of the song, its basically the same there so i wont really point it out) Yeah I fexd the two other chorus
01:46:171 (3,4,5) - Is the spacing change here intentional? i think this stream should be same spacing No it wasn't intentional, thanks for pointing it ou :3
01:56:102 (1,2,3) - Same here.. id fix this spacing for this short streams ^
01:59:550 (1) - Fix spacing for this one (it should be a bit more left) Fixed
02:52:585 (3,4,5) - Spacing.. i mean it really doesnt make a change playwise but it just looks weird ^^Fixed, I think, idk if you want me to increase it or decrease it x)
03:09:757 (1) - Ctrl+g for better flow here Sure !
03:45:343 (1) - Could remove nc here for less spam of them, though it wouldnt really be a wrong thing here Removed NC
03:49:068 (1,2) - Nc would fit much better on 2 here because of the new measure + the stream starts here so you should really do it there Oh yeah, fixed
04:02:516 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This "heart"shap doesnt look that good.. i think if you copy 00:14:102 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - and paste it there it would be much better after putting it into that place (may have to ctrl+h) Fixed
04:36:447 (4,1,2) - Here for example you did a nc at 1 after a pause of a note and then same pattern at 04:38:102 (3,4) - but no nc, stuff like that should be consistent imo but i already pointed it out in the first chorus so its basically the same here and you should maybe look on them a bit ^^ Yep I'll fixed that :3


But, overall its already a pretty fun map. The song is nice and low cs :3 so gl with it!

Hyrax77 wrote:

Hello hello =) Here is my m4m
There's already plenty of mods here
So a lot of what I say may have been said or may be non issues.
Sorry if this is the case!No worries ;3

00:53:412 (7,8) - This to me feels weird being a double. It feels like it would fit better as a triple, like this. Mhh no I like doubles :3
00:56:723 (5,6) - ^ ^

01:20:309 (2) - This slider-end doesn't seems to land on a sound. Sounds like it would fit better as a circle instead of a slider. True, fixed by making the first slider a reverse

01:30:240 (1) - I think this would feel better as a triplet leading into the slide, similar to 01:31:895 (1,2,3) No the sounds are not similar, one is more intense than the other
01:43:481 (1) - ^ ^

02:45:550 (5) - Idk if it's just me, but the hitsound on this was jarring. It was loud and abrupt compared to the others. N?ot for me, idk what happen to you :/
02:48:861 (4) - ^
02:52:171 (2) - ^

03:22:792 (1) - This feels like it should be a triplet. I'm sure it's like a theme or something, but when I come across this kind of thing, it throws me off a bit. Yes it is a triplet, we call those kind of 1/4 sliders "kick sliders", I used one here (and in some other parts) because it's less intense than clicking a full triplet so it represent the intensity of the song

03:44:309 (2) - This looks distant enough in spacing, but close enough in time that it should at least point towards the next note. Rotated by -20
04:07:688 (1,2) - ^ Those are for staying consistent with how I placed the first 1/4 slider + circle
04:08:309 (1,2) - ^
04:08:930 (1,2) - ^


Hopefully I've been insightful
Best of luck to you!

Thanks for the mod !

sullywally wrote:

M4M
Nice Love Live bait What do you mean ? idk what you're talking about

[Eternal Love]

1. 00:03:757 (5) - 1/6. Every other part with this in the next part you use 1/6 Because the song is in 1/3 (1/6) in this part
2. 00:21:757 (1,2,3) - Sorry this is just a 1/2 no need for a 1/4 here Wut ?
3. 00:25:481 (5) - The different DS is kinda obvious here, so it doesn't look like an equilateral (?) triangle. Change the pos. so the DS in 00:25:068 (4,5,6) - is the same Fixed
4. 00:31:274 (3,4) - There's no instrument or vocal that fit this jump, change it pls .-. Singer says something that imply denial, that what this sudden jump means And yes, I'm going as far as interpretating the lyrics of a song
5. 00:34:585 (3,5) - ctrl+g please? the pattern you use indicated that the stream should've been put on the right part not on the left of the kicksliders The unconfortable movement here is done on purpose
6. 00:37:688 (1,2,3) - move (3) so it make a straight line instead of kinda triangle-ish, also stack (2) with 00:37:481 (5) - Sure fixed
7. 00:39:964 (3) - You could tweak this a bit so the curve is the same as 00:39:136 (1) - it still a bit different as of now Fixed
8. 00:53:412 (7,8) - 00:56:723 (5,6) - should have the visual spacing imo, it kinda look like (5,6) is actually a triplet since that's the visual spacing you use for every part before Fixed
9. 01:17:205 (1) - Is the jump really need to be that big? Your second kiai have a better DS for the jump imo Fixed
10. 01:24:654 (5,1,2) - imo should have the same curve Fixed
11. 01:25:895 (3,4,5) - This is very tricky to read especially because 01:25:068 (1,2) - it kinda have the same pattern but you slip (4) in, thus resulting in 1/4 I think it's pretty readable (I say that cause I don't know how to change it)
12. 01:29:412 (3) - is lacking emphasis, (suggestion : Make it into slider to kinda show the emphasis ) Here the instruments are prioritize, and I want to show the stop that is very present in the song
13. 01:35:826 (4,5,6) - You could've made a circular pattern instead (just a suggestion) I like the triangular partern, just rotated (6) a bit
14. 01:38:723 (2,3,4,5) - While I see what you want to make I'll toss in my opinion, There's a chance when someone read this they thought the slidertail of (4) is the head, because they thought its a back-and-forth slider (If I were you I'll change the pattern, but uh.. just suggestion) You have a point on this, but I took a suggestion where it represent the blood flow of a heart, so it has to be like that ;3
15. 01:51:136 (3) - Blanket could be better Sure, don't know if I fixed it correctly because for me it was perfectly blanketed
16. 01:52:585 (3,4,5) - Again make this into a straight line instead Sure
17. 02:01:688 (4,5) - imo it would flow better if you ctrl+g Already explain that the song is still loud so mouvement it is
18. 02:15:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - The DS jump here is a bit messy, change it so it has the same DS Changed
19. 02:45:136 (4) - stack this to (2) Fixed
20. 03:18:861 (5,7) - Blanket could be better Fixed
21. 03:24:861 (3) - No need for a 1/4 repeat here There's sound here, but I noticed a vocal after the triplet so it's a stream now x)
22. 03:56:102 (1,3) - Change (3)'s curve so it's the same with (1) Changed
23. 04:44:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try keeping the jump have the same DS (or ascending DS), The vocal doesnt need different emphasize on each syllable Changed a little bit
24. 04:49:274 (2,3) - and 04:50:102 (2,3) - should have the same emphasis imo (but dont just stack the triplet ) Changed

This mod is also directed to the map that have similiar part (especially kiai) No, I'm not lazy I swear... Don't worry, you don't need to points everything, I'll find myself the part that are like you you said in the mod ;3

Good Luck~!

Thanks for the mod !

Asuka_- wrote:

hi quickmod
im not good at english.

meta
Title : "嵐のなかの恋だから" Thanks ! :3

01:26:205 (4) - i think it is not necessary There's a pretty strong sound here imo :3
03:18:757 (4) - ^ ^ but there was a little mistake with the hitsounds so thanks for making me look here x)
04:21:654 (4) - ^
04:50:412 (4) - remove I don't think I can ignore that sound

gl~

Thanks for the little mod !

DavidEd wrote:

00:09:964 (7,8) - Would be nice if these got a bigger distance between them. Kinda poor emphasize on (8) for such a strong sound Yeah sure :3
00:13:274 (9,10) - ^ ^
00:16:585 (9,10) - ^ ^
03:58:378 (2,3) - ^ ^
04:01:688 (3,4) - ^ ^
04:04:999 (5,6) - ^ ^
00:14:309 (3,6) - A bit awkward slider shapes. But if your intention was to create a heart shape, it could be polished a bit. Yeah it's supposed to be a heart, I just have a hard time maiking it look better
04:02:723 (3,1,2) - ^ ^
01:51:757 (5,1) - The slider doesn't really represent anything in the music. Perhaps replace with [hitcircle, slider] or just convert the slider into 2 hitcircles? I want this part to be consistent with the other part just before that (not the jumpy one)
03:24:964 (4,6) - Overmapped Oh yeah, I don'(t know why I put a stream here :/ fixed

Looks good so far. I'd suggest maybe going through the diff again and look for blanket mistakes (because there's too many to fit in here). Maybe it was intended? I think they a re really mistakes, I didn't really pay any attention to blanket when I was mapping but now I do, so I'm gonna check erevything lol
Couldn't really find many major mistakes tbh. It just needs polishing like I said.

Good luck!