Sekaii wrote:
KSHR's Easy:
- 00:12:342 (3,4,5,6) - well, I understand why you're doing this, but adding that many notes on easy might be too much tbh, so how about making 00:13:028 (5,6) - into 1/1 slider instead? it would fit even more imo Fixed as you suggested.
- 00:19:885 (2) - maybe you forgot to add whistle on this slider's head? somehow it sounded like something missing there, that's why =3=/
Fixed. I can't hear any sounds from the left side of my earphone.. gimme the new one..- 00:22:628 (2) - ^ Fixed. AGAHJARJAAAAA
- 00:49:371 (3,4,5,6) - same suggest as before 00:12:342 (3,4,5,6) - , make (5,6) into 1 slider instead? would be better imo
Same!- 00:58:285 (4) - I think making this slider like this might play much better imo
No change, honetsly I see no difference from the current one in terms of flow, gameplay etc.
Neoskylove wrote:
[Easy]
00:17:142 (2) - ctrl HJ for flow
No change. I don't think this improves the flow that much because it doesn't change the cursor movement.
00:54:685 - I thyink you should add a beat here since strong vocal is in here, not 00:54:857 - .
True, fixed by turning 00:54:171 (2) - into a 3/2 slider and rearranged the pattern
01:12:685 (1,2,3) - this pattern looks hard to read.... DS looks similar, I suggest you add a beat in 01:13:885 - .
No change. Just adding a note here makes the pattern much harder because it makes a 3/2 gap between in notes which is unfriendly and should be avoided.
Sonnyc wrote:
Easy.
00:12:342 (3,4,5,6) - 00:49:371 (3,4,5,6) - 01:07:542 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't say 175bpm as something low. Considering this difficulty to be the lowest one, I feel such 1/1 circles appearing in a row to be a bit difficult to become a beginner friendly aspect. Mind making these a little easier?
00:12:342 (3,4,5,6) - 00:49:371 (3,4,5,6) - => 2 sliders, 01:07:542 (1,2,3) - (2,3) => 1 slider
01:12:685 (1,2,3) - I don't think the current spacing was kinda reflecting the rhythms properly, but it would be because the rhythms are constructed with 2 circles and a slider with a wide time interval. Actually the current design could work, but can you try making (1,2) a slider instead?
Fixed as you suggested
Gaia wrote:
[KSHR]
00:32:914 (1) - i guess maybe if you could place this somewhere on the left instead itd be better?
Let me keep it as is. I feel the current flow really fits to the vocal line, especially its stress at 00:32:914 - . AHHH hard to explain subjective feeling..
00:50:742 (1) - this could but placed lower for a more uniform pattern
Rearranged the pattern itself as Sonnyc suggested
01:09:942 (1,2) - maybe try 3/2 reverse
No change. The current rhythm can follow not only the vocal line but also the electric sound which goes from 01:10:457 - . Also this is just my subjective reason, but I don't wanna use 3/2 slider as much as possible because recent Easy difs I've seen have lots of ones..
Thanks for modding!
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