This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月25日 at 1:08:45

Artist: Hashimoto Miyuki
Title: TIME (Short Ver.)
Source: Ashita no Kimi to Au Tame ni
Tags: Purple Software
BPM: 138
Filesize: 2859kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.1 stars, 82 notes)
2. Hard (4.76 stars, 205 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 344 notes)
4. Normal (3.74 stars, 130 notes)

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - TIME (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th map T.T
明日の君と逢うために OP

1st

2nd~star!

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ★
edit:IRC modded

:3

nice map~

As per your request in #modreqs

Folder:
All is good here.

General:
Note you absolutely need this timing section for the metronome to be back on track
138 BPM Offset 7399

Easy:
00:54:356 (5) - maybe a new combo here?

Normal:
Not much wrong here.

Hard:
00:10:877 (1,2,3) - (nazi alert) the spacing between these are slightly different. fix if you can?

Insane:
01:08:486 (5) - this 1/8th slider does not fit at all.
01:28:921 (1) - this spinner is unrankably short. auto has to be able to hit 2000. this spinner only hits 1000.

That's it really.
Star i guess. (it could've been better but overall, very nice.)

Star

> Muya, Thite, S o r d a, manten, Norn_NNN, Byakugan249
thanks star~


> Zelos

Zelos wrote:

General:
Note you absolutely need this timing section for the metronome to be back on track hmm..there are some notes before the red section
138 BPM Offset 7399

Easy:
00:54:356 (5) - maybe a new combo here? fixed

Normal:
Not much wrong here.

Hard:
00:10:877 (1,2,3) - (nazi alert) the spacing between these are slightly different. fix if you can? fixed

Insane:
01:08:486 (5) - this 1/8th slider does not fit at all. It changes if it is other modding and there is a point.
01:28:921 (1) - this spinner is unrankably short. auto has to be able to hit 2000. this spinner only hits 1000. hmm? spinner bonus getting 2000... this

That's it really.
Star i guess. (it could've been better but overall, very nice.)

thanks mod Zelos

da-nn

(✧≖‿ゝ≖) ｷﾗｰｰﾝ

ヽ( ゜ 3゜)ノ

nice but i want combo color more darker. it's too blend with background ( i play without video)


my mod

general

first your offset don't land on heavybeat move offset to 443 ( 00:00:443 )

insane
00:17:508 (8) - delete this ?
00:21:312 (1) - fin ( finish hitsound )
00:28:051 (7) - fin tail ( end of slider )

00:38:269 (4) - clap
00:52:182 (1) - change clap to whistle ?
00:53:051 (4) - change whistle to clap
00:55:660 (6) - remove whistle
01:01:312 (4) - whistle head
01:02:182 (1) - whistle head
01:04:790 addnote
01:04:899 ^
01:08:051 (2) - fin
01:08:486 (5) - 30 percent volume better
01:08:703 remove whistle
01:09:573 - ^
01:10:008 (3) - fin
01:12:399 (6) - whistle tail
01:15:877 there are 1/8 stream here you can use slider to gain life or etc it's up to you
01:20:442 (1) - fin head
01:23:160 add note
01:23:269 - add note
01:23:921 (3) - fin head
01:30:877 (6) - fin head
01:34:356 (1) - fin head
01:36:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream not land well try this
01:40:877 (7) - change whistle to clap

Hard

00:08:921 addnote
00:09:790 addnote
00:13:921 (1) - change this to 1/2 return slider
00:21:312 (1) - fin

00:25:660 add note
00:28:269 (5) - fin
00:35:225 (2) - change whistle to fin
00:49:138 (1) - fin head
01:03:051 (5) - fin head
01:04:790
01:07:182 (6) - change this to 2 circle is better
01:10:008 (6) - fin head
01:10:877
01:12:616 add note
01:12:725 (3) - add note
01:16:095 (1) - remove whistle form head
01:16:964 (3) - fin head
01:22:616 (4) - whistle tail
01:23:921 (3) - fin head
01:36:421 - whisltle
01:37:833 (4) - fin

Normal
00:21:312 (1) - fin head
00:28:269 (1) - fin head
00:35:225 (2) - fin head
00:49:138 (5) - fin head

01:00:442 (1) - remove fin
01:03:051 (3) - fin head
01:03:051 (3) - remove whistle
01:08:051 (5) - fin head
01:10:008 (2) - fin head
01:11:964 (4) - change this to 1 circle then 1/2 slider
01:12:834 (5) - change this to 1/2 slider then 1 circle
01:16:964 (3) - fin head
01:23:921 (1) - fin head
01:28:921 (3) - add note and fin ?
01:33:486 (3) - whistle tail

Easy
00:07:399 (2) - fin head
00:21:312 (1) - fin head
00:26:529 (5) - whistle head
00:28:269 (1) - fin
00:35:225 (1) - fin head
00:49:138 (1) - fin head
01:03:051 (1) - finhead
01:06:964 remove fin
01:14:356 (7) - whistle
01:16:095 (2) - fin tail
01:23:921 (3) - fin
01:30:877 (1) - fin head
01:32:182 add note
01:33:921 add note
01:34:356 (5) - fin head
01:37:834 (1) - fin head
01:39:573 (2) - delete this + 01:39:138 - add 1/1 slider here + 01:40:008 (3) - add 1/1 slider here

おわり
☆　星　☆

> KSHR, S i R i R u, Hinacle
thanks star~

>regenz
thanks mod and star~

almost fixed~

さすが選曲がちがうね！！！！

>w</

選曲も譜面も神！　(*ﾟSﾟ*)(*ﾟTﾟ*)(*ﾟAﾟ*)(*ﾟRﾟ*)

dododo-n

"~"

ｼｭﾊﾞｯ

> yamao0404, quintitem, Grassvalley, wiza, Lunet, Suzully
thanks~

fight ~

> ChickeN, kiririn_
arigatou~

Hello.

Folder is clean,everything else seems fine too.

[Easy]
00:09:138 (3) - Make this curve in different direction? Like this:
00:29:573 (3) - Forgot to add a clap here too?
00:56:095 (1) - Use full wide of a playfield.Rotating clockwise by 90 looks better.
01:06:529 (3,4) - These objects are off beats.Try this:

1. Make a slider from 01:06:529 to 01:07:182.
2. Add a circle to 01:07:616 or start another slider up to 01:08:051.
3. Then use 01:08:703 and 01:09:573 to keep the previous rhytm on.

01:32:616 (2) - Like this looks much better to me:

[Normal]
00:45:660 (5) - Fix this slider a little to avoid overlapping with 00:44:790 (4)?
00:52:616 (1) - Same,try to avoid overlapping with 00:52:182 (4),please.
01:21:964 (4,5) - Looks really bad =\ Stack (4) with (5).

[Hard]
00:15:442 (4) - Fix distance,it's too close to previous object.
00:37:942 - Add a note here.
01:10:008 (6) - New combo.
01:16:964 (3,4) - This pattern looks really weird.Try something else.

[Insane]
Looks a little overmapped to me..

00:06:529 (1,2,3) - Odd spacing.It should be like this at least:
01:04:790 (1) - This is very sudden jump that goes out of flow,reduce distance,please.
01:28:921 (1) - It's rankable,but I don't think anyone will get bonus score here.It's too fast and unexpected..so I suggest you to map this part with notes.

Anyway,pretty solid mapset.
Deserves a star.

IceBeam wrote:

Hello.

Folder is clean,everything else seems fine too.

[Easy]
00:09:138 (3) - Make this curve in different direction? Like this: fixed

SPOILER

00:29:573 (3) - Forgot to add a clap here too? oops.. added
00:56:095 (1) - Use full wide of a playfield.Rotating clockwise by 90 looks better. fixed
01:06:529 (3,4) - These objects are off beats.Try this: fixed

1. Make a slider from 01:06:529 to 01:07:182.
2. Add a circle to 01:07:616 or start another slider up to 01:08:051.
3. Then use 01:08:703 and 01:09:573 to keep the previous rhytm on.

01:32:616 (2) - Like this looks much better to me: ok fixed

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:45:660 (5) - Fix this slider a little to avoid overlapping with 00:44:790 (4)? fixed
00:52:616 (1) - Same,try to avoid overlapping with 00:52:182 (4),please. ^
01:21:964 (4,5) - Looks really bad =\ Stack (4) with (5). fixed

[Hard]
00:15:442 (4) - Fix distance,it's too close to previous object. mistake.. fixed
00:37:942 - Add a note here. added
01:10:008 (6) - New combo. ok
01:16:964 (3,4) - This pattern looks really weird.Try something else. some fixed

[Insane]
Looks a little overmapped to me.. ;__;

00:06:529 (1,2,3) - Odd spacing.It should be like this at least: fixed~

SPOILER

01:04:790 (1) - This is very sudden jump that goes out of flow,reduce distance,please. 2.0x spacing fixed
01:28:921 (1) - It's rankable,but I don't think anyone will get bonus score here.It's too fast and unexpected..so I suggest you to map this part with notes. ok.spinner removed,map this part with notes

Anyway,pretty solid mapset.
Deserves a star.

> IceBeam
thanks a lot

nice

nice map

> kusano, Opan, romchan67
arigatou~

Hentai-san

★

> Reflain, KanaRin
arigatou~

General

--kiai times are not the all the same. (Hard and Insane are different from Normal and Easy)

Insane

01:03:051 (4) - add finish
01:06:964 (11,12) - add finish at the end of each slider?
01:08:486 (5) - honestly, i don't see the point of this repeat slider. You can probably do something more interesting than just have this repeat slider go on for a measure. Also the vocals hold the note at 01:08:703, not at 01:08:486.
01:11:856 (4) - delete note.
01:16:964 (6) - new combo and add finish at the beginning of slider.
01:20:225 (x) - flows better imo if you add a note. Not a big deal tho.
01:30:008 (1) - change slider into one note, then add notes at 01:30:116 and 01:30:334? (drums are actually playing these notes, but it's kinda subtle)

Hard

00:25:660 (5) - wow this just feels so empty here. Do you mind adding some notes, maybe something like this? (i kinda just randomly placed the notes, so you don't have to place the notes where i placed them):
01:07:182 (6) - add finishes

Normal

01:05:225 (6) - Change into a slider like this?:
01:16:095 (2) - new combo

Easy

01:40:008 (3) - remove clap from beginning and add it to the end.
01:40:877 (x) - add note

Awesome map! :3

Star~~

winber1 wrote:

General

--kiai times are not the all the same. (Hard and Insane are different from Normal and Easy) fixed

Insane

01:03:051 (4) - add finish added
01:06:964 (11,12) - add finish at the end of each slider? ^
01:08:486 (5) - honestly, i don't see the point of this repeat slider. You can probably do something more interesting than just have this repeat slider go on for a measure. Also the vocals hold the note at 01:08:703, not at 01:08:486. At present, there is no idea... editing now EDIT: remap here~
01:11:856 (4) - delete note. deleted
01:16:964 (6) - new combo and add finish at the beginning of slider. fixed
01:20:225 (x) - flows better imo if you add a note. Not a big deal tho. sorry, no change
01:30:008 (1) - change slider into one note, then add notes at 01:30:116 and 01:30:334? (drums are actually playing these notes, but it's kinda subtle) fmm.. no change ;_;

Hard

00:25:660 (5) - wow this just feels so empty here. Do you mind adding some notes, maybe something like this? (i kinda just randomly placed the notes, so you don't have to place the notes where i placed them): good suggestion! fixed

SPOILER

[attachment=1:c43ef]screenshot058.jpg[/attachment:c43ef]

01:07:182 (6) - add finishes added

Normal

01:05:225 (6) - Change into a slider like this?:nice changed

SPOILER

[attachment=0:c43ef]screenshot059.jpg[/attachment:c43ef]

01:16:095 (2) - new combo OK

Easy

01:40:008 (3) - remove clap from beginning and add it to the end. fixed
01:40:877 (x) - add note added

Awesome map! :3

Star~~

> winber1
Great mod! thanks a lot >.<