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wmfchris
[Insane]
00:55:334 (4,6) - +whistle?
01:36:096 (6,7,8,9,10) - put the notes somehow like this?

[Hard]
00:16:095 (1) - remove new combo?
00:46:529 (3) - stack with last combo's (6) if possible?

the whole map is really nice imo, no problems for me~

star >w<
Topic Starter
swish

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:55:334 (4,6) - +whistle? add :D
01:36:096 (6,7,8,9,10) - put the notes somehow like this?


OK~ some fixed
[Hard]
00:16:095 (1) - remove new combo? fixed
00:46:529 (3) - stack with last combo's (6) if possible? fixed

the whole map is really nice imo, no problems for me~

star >w<

> wmfchris
thanks mod and star~ >w</
SagisawaYomi
:)
keimntn
良いmapです! :)
star~ ( ^ω^)~☆
MiLu
souieba agete nakatta :oops:

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Topic Starter
swish
> Hanyuuisgod, keimntn, MiLu
thanks ~ ;)
Mikkuri
#modreqs :D

I'm beginner at modding, sorry :o

[Hard]
01:04:573 (8) - clap tail?
01:08:051 (1) - finish sound better?
01:11:095 (2,3) - add whistle?
01:16:964 (3) - new combo & add finish?
01:30:442 (1) - change whistle to finish sound better?

[Insane]
00:36:747 (5) - slider are hid, maybe move this slider?
01:27:073 (6) - delete? or put slider like this

star~
Topic Starter
swish

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

#modreqs :D thanks :3

I'm beginner at modding, sorry :o

[Hard]
01:04:573 (8) - clap tail? fixed
01:08:051 (1) - finish sound better? fixed
01:11:095 (2,3) - add whistle? no change
01:16:964 (3) - new combo & add finish? add finish only
01:30:442 (1) - change whistle to finish sound better? fixed

[Insane]
00:36:747 (5) - slider are hid, maybe move this slider? sorry
01:27:073 (6) - delete? or put slider like this sorry

star~
> 0OoMickeyoO0
thanks for modding~ :)
dNextGen
hai swish \:D/
Topic Starter
swish
dNextGen \;D/
Mercurius
8-)
Rigeru_old
8-)
Topic Starter
swish
> Mercurius, Rigeru
thanks star~

> S o r d a
thanks IRC mod~ some fixed :)
IRC Mod log
11:31 (Sorda) 00:10:008 (9) -
11:31 (Sorda) 00:10:442 -
11:31 (Sorda) end?
11:33 (Sorda) 00:44:573 (6) -
11:33 (Sorda) 00:44:790 -
11:33 (Sorda) end
11:33 (Sorda) 00:45:008 - Add note
11:33 (Sorda) 00:45:225 -
11:33 (Sorda) これもかな
11:34 (Sorda) 00:49:138 (1) - move 00:48:921 -
11:34 (Sorda) 00:49:356 - Add note
11:37 (Sorda) これくらいかなあ
11:38 (Sorda) のーまる
11:40 (Sorda) 00:30:877 (5) - end 00:31:095 -
11:43 (Sorda) 01:10:877 (3) - move 01:10:660 -
11:43 (Sorda) 01:11:747 -
11:43 (Sorda) Add note
11:43 (Sorda) Easyあるしもうちょい難しくしてもいいと思うけど
11:44 (Sorda) 既にレート高かったわ
11:46 (swish) うむー
11:46 (Sorda) http://puu.sh/2U1E
11:46 (Sorda) 01:40:008 -
11:46 (Sorda) こっちの方がすきだけど難しいかな
11:46 (Sorda) 最後のスピンは01:40:008 - ここから
11:47 (Sorda) 01:41:312 - こっちだ
11:48 (Sorda) 終わりはさっきと同じでいいと思う
11:48 (swish) http://puu.sh/2U1K
11:49 (swish) これじゃだめかなぁ
11:49 (swish) すぴんかえると
11:49 (swish) あれなんだよなぁ
11:49 (Sorda) あそれでいいと思う
kinomototatsurou
:)
wcx19911123
sorry for the huge delay
from my que

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:877 (1,2,3,4) - I really suggest make (4) first and (1)(2)(3) later , a slider first to let player know the rhyme then circles is better imo
  2. 01:34:356 (3) - hidden back arrow is confusing
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:008 (3) - slider to 00:40:225 ?
  2. 01:29:138 (3) - try this http://puu.sh/2XRL
  3. 01:39:573 (4) - move to 01:39:356
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:421 - add circle
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:747 (2) - ctrl + r
  2. 00:46:421 - add circle
  3. 01:24:356 (4) - ctrl + r
  4. 01:37:399 (2) - I suggest move it to stack on (4)
nice song >w<
Topic Starter
swish
> kinomototatsurou
thanks star~ :)

> wcx19911123
thanks modding~
almost fixed :D
KSHR
modding ;)  <#modreqs>
(all suggestions)


SPOILER
Easy
  1. 00:26:529 (5) - 1grid up nazi
  2. 00:26:529 (5) - 終点のwhistleを削除して、棒部分にwhistle追加
  3. 00:30:877 (5) - 1grid left nazi
  4. 00:47:834 (5) - x:352 y:216, 00:48:269 (6) - x:308 y:284
              (6)と(1)のスぺーシングが広がっていたため
  5. 00:48:269 (6) - finish削除、clap追加
  6. 00:55:225 (3) - whistle削除、clap追加(前の同じリズムのところと付け方と合わせてます)
  7. 00:58:703 (2) - ^
  8. 01:07:616 (4) - 01:08:051に緑線(音量80%くらい?)を追加して、終点にfinish追加
              もしこれをした場合は、01:08:703 (5)までの間に緑線(音量60%)を忘れずに!
  9. 01:17:834 (3) - 始点にclap追加、終点のclap削除
  10. 01:19:573 (4) - clap追加
  11. 01:26:529 (1) - 終点のclapを削除して、始点にwhistle追加
  12. 01:36:964 (4) - whistl削除、clap追加

Normal

  • 青線配置が気になりました(Normalをプレイする人たちは混乱するかも?)
  1. 00:06:964 (2) - whistlt追加
  2. 01:05:008 (6) - このスライダーにfinishをつけるなら、終点より始点の方がいいと思います
  3. 01:06:964 (2) - clap削除
  4. 01:07:616 (4) - finishを削除して、clap追加?
  5. 01:08:051 (5) - 始点のfinishだけ音量を上げてみてはどうでしょうか(Easy, Hard, Insaneも)
              (歌詞で言うと、「奪われいる~」みたいなイメージ)
  6. 01:28:921 (3) - 始点にfinish追加
  7. 01:36:095 (5) - 終点にwhistle追加

Hard
  1. 00:13:921 (1) - 終点にwhislte追加
  2. 00:15:008 (3) - whislte追加
  3. 01:01:856 (T) - 緑線の削除
  4. 01:09:682 (T) - ^
  5. 01:17:834 (5) - 返しにwhistle追加
  6. 01:18:703 (6) - 終点のwhistleを削除して、返しにwhistle追加
  7. 01:21:312 (2) - 終点のwhislte削除
  8. 01:22:182 (3) - 始点にwhistle追加
  9. 01:30:877 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
  10. 01:36:095 (5) - 始点のwhistle削除

Insane
  1. 00:13:486 (8) - こんな感じの方が流れ的にいいかも?(個人的な考えかもしれませんがw)
  2. 00:13:921 (9) - new combo追加して、00:14:356 (1) - このnew combo削除、00:16:095 (9) - new combo追加
  3. 00:14:138 (11) - whistle削除
  4. 00:15:008 (2) - 始点にwhistle追加
  5. 00:16:095 (5,6,7,8,9) - こんな感じにスライダーを曲げてみてはどうでしょうか
                   ちなみに画像は、
                   (5) x:360 y:288, x:392 y:320, x:444 y:320
                   (6) x:476 y:144, x:464 y:196, x:420 y:224
                   (7) x:260 y:164, x:216 y:144, x:200 y:104
                   (8) x:284 y:180, (9) x:312 y:184
  6. 00:46:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - コンボがちょっと長めかも
ふぁいとー! :)
Topic Starter
swish

KSHR wrote:

modding ;)  <#modreqs>
(all suggestions)


SPOILER
Easy
  1. 00:26:529 (5) - 1grid up nazi
  2. 00:26:529 (5) - 終点のwhistleを削除して、棒部分にwhistle追加
  3. 00:30:877 (5) - 1grid left nazi
  4. 00:47:834 (5) - x:352 y:216, 00:48:269 (6) - x:308 y:284
              (6)と(1)のスぺーシングが広がっていたため
  5. 00:48:269 (6) - finish削除、clap追加
  6. 00:55:225 (3) - whistle削除、clap追加(前の同じリズムのところと付け方と合わせてます)
  7. 00:58:703 (2) - ^
  8. 01:07:616 (4) - 01:08:051に緑線(音量80%くらい?)を追加して、終点にfinish追加
              もしこれをした場合は、01:08:703 (5)までの間に緑線(音量60%)を忘れずに!
  9. 01:17:834 (3) - 始点にclap追加、終点のclap削除
  10. 01:19:573 (4) - clap追加
  11. 01:26:529 (1) - 終点のclapを削除して、始点にwhistle追加
  12. 01:36:964 (4) - whistl削除、clap追加

Normal

  • 青線配置が気になりました(Normalをプレイする人たちは混乱するかも?)
  1. 00:06:964 (2) - whistlt追加
  2. 01:05:008 (6) - このスライダーにfinishをつけるなら、終点より始点の方がいいと思います
  3. 01:06:964 (2) - clap削除
  4. 01:07:616 (4) - finishを削除して、clap追加?
  5. 01:08:051 (5) - 始点のfinishだけ音量を上げてみてはどうでしょうか(Easy, Hard, Insaneも)
              (歌詞で言うと、「奪われいる~」みたいなイメージ)
  6. 01:28:921 (3) - 始点にfinish追加
  7. 01:36:095 (5) - 終点にwhistle追加

Hard
  1. 00:13:921 (1) - 終点にwhislte追加
  2. 00:15:008 (3) - whislte追加
  3. 01:01:856 (T) - 緑線の削除
  4. 01:09:682 (T) - ^
  5. 01:17:834 (5) - 返しにwhistle追加
  6. 01:18:703 (6) - 終点のwhistleを削除して、返しにwhistle追加
  7. 01:21:312 (2) - 終点のwhislte削除
  8. 01:22:182 (3) - 始点にwhistle追加
  9. 01:30:877 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
  10. 01:36:095 (5) - 始点のwhistle削除

Insane
  1. 00:13:486 (8) - こんな感じの方が流れ的にいいかも?(個人的な考えかもしれませんがw)
  2. 00:13:921 (9) - new combo追加して、00:14:356 (1) - このnew combo削除、00:16:095 (9) - new combo追加
  3. 00:14:138 (11) - whistle削除
  4. 00:15:008 (2) - 始点にwhistle追加
  5. 00:16:095 (5,6,7,8,9) - こんな感じにスライダーを曲げてみてはどうでしょうか
                   ちなみに画像は、
                   (5) x:360 y:288, x:392 y:320, x:444 y:320
                   (6) x:476 y:144, x:464 y:196, x:420 y:224
                   (7) x:260 y:164, x:216 y:144, x:200 y:104
                   (8) x:284 y:180, (9) x:312 y:184
  6. 00:46:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - コンボがちょっと長めかも
ふぁいとー! :)
> KSHR(god)
almost fixed~ (and good Suggestion :oops: )
thanks a lot!
JoJo
:P
Topic Starter
swish
> Jojo
thanks ;)
YGOkid8
sorry for the late mod.

General:
01:41:095 (1) - Start spinner at 01:41:312 - instead

Normal:
00:17:616 (1) - Start spinner at 00:17:834 - instead

Hard:
01:33:269 (6,7,) - Move (6,7) 2 right and 2 down (lvl4) so it goes directly through the middle of the previous (5)

nice map (y)
Topic Starter
swish

YGOkid8 wrote:

sorry for the late mod.

General:
01:41:095 (1) - Start spinner at 01:41:312 - instead

Normal:
00:17:616 (1) - Start spinner at 00:17:834 - instead

Hard:
01:33:269 (6,7,) - Move (6,7) 2 right and 2 down (lvl4) so it goes directly through the middle of the previous (5)

nice map (y)
> YGOkid8
All fixed~
thanks for mod :)
YGOkid8
no problem.

EDIT: popped. didn't even realise there was meant to be video. like ykcarrot said, fullsubmit your map.
Sure
NOTE : The video file is missed. You have to full-submit again!

BTW star for nice map
Topic Starter
swish
sorry,no video in this map :cry:
It is a failure at the first upload

Because video of the same length as this song doesn't exist
Takos
ranked gogo~
Plucogi
;)
Topic Starter
swish
> Takos, Plucogi
thanks.
loli_milk
I am Swish's fan
and I love swish
yes,
My love is swish
so
She is My Wife...
Orgol
cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute mapppppppppppppppppppp
Rucker
:)
                                             
hoLysoup

Rucker wrote:

:)
                                             
Topic Starter
swish
> loli_milk, moelunet, Rucker, hoLysoup

thanks ;)
NatsumeRin
[General]
offset: +7 (450)
The time between the 2 kiai is a bit long (if it's a re-kiai technique), make it just 1/2 or 1/4 is enough.

[Easy]
The diffculty setting is a little harsh for such a Easy imo. HP,AR,OD all -1.
00:12:616 (1,2,3) - imo in this 0.75x part, you don't need to still follow the Distance Spacing multiplier very strictly, just make 1/1 circles have same spacing like 00:29:138 (2,3,4), means don't have a part stack with each other.
00:16:095 (2,3,4) - ^
01:15:008 (1) - whistle? (both beginning and end)

[Normal]
00:27:399 (6) - i suggest use a 1/2 repeated slider here. as it's very near the next section and about to start.
00:50:877 (3) - looks a little strange (because of 4's place), try this?

01:13:486 (1,1) - whistle?
01:40:660 (1) - add repeat?

[Hard]
00:08:269 (5,6,7) - why the spacing is larger here... it's not a big deal but feels strange to me.
00:15:877 (6,7) - spacing is a bit far, compared to 00:15:008 (3,4)
00:25:877 (7,8) - would be a little hard..?
00:31:747 (1) - notes comes just 1/2 after a spinner is not so good, maybe end this 1/1 earlier and then add a note at 00:34:790?
00:45:225 (1) - clap miss
01:41:095 - add a note?

[Insane]
Personally i think this song fits 1/4*2 (notes like oo oo) a lot, consider to use some?
00:17:508 (4) - i feel this is a bit extra...remove?
00:40:008 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - not complaining but this part is not that fun imo...
01:05:551 - add a note?
01:15:660 (2) - maybe add whistle too.
Topic Starter
swish

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset: +7 (450) ok~ offset +7
The time between the 2 kiai is a bit long (if it's a re-kiai technique), make it just 1/2 or 1/4 is enough.
ok. 1st,2nd kiai, 1/2 shorten

[Easy]
The diffculty setting is a little harsh for such a Easy imo. HP,AR,OD all -1. all -1
00:12:616 (1,2,3) - imo in this 0.75x part, you don't need to still follow the Distance Spacing multiplier very strictly, just make 1/1 circles have same spacing like 00:29:138 (2,3,4), means don't have a part stack with each other.
fixed
00:16:095 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:15:008 (1) - whistle? (both beginning and end) ok. add whistle

[Normal]
00:27:399 (6) - i suggest use a 1/2 repeated slider here. as it's very near the next section and about to start.
use 1/2 repeat slider
00:50:877 (3) - looks a little strange (because of 4's place), try this?
[attachment=0:f3b76]144.png[/attachment:f3b76]
changed it like that
01:13:486 (1,1) - whistle? add whistle
01:40:660 (1) - add repeat? added

[Hard]
00:08:269 (5,6,7) - why the spacing is larger here... it's not a big deal but feels strange to me.mistake.. :o fixed
00:15:877 (6,7) - spacing is a bit far, compared to 00:15:008 (3,4) fixed
00:25:877 (7,8) - would be a little hard..? hmm..i don't think so.. sorry keep it now ;_;
00:31:747 (1) - notes comes just 1/2 after a spinner is not so good, maybe end this 1/1 earlier and then add a note at 00:34:790?
ok. fixed
00:45:225 (1) - clap miss oops.. add a clap
01:41:095 - add a note? added

[Insane]
Personally i think this song fits 1/4*2 (notes like oo oo) a lot, consider to use some?
hmm.. keep it now :o
00:17:508 (4) - i feel this is a bit extra...remove? removed
00:40:008 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - not complaining but this part is not that fun imo...ok.changed this part
01:05:551 - add a note? It's not fit this song...imo, sorry ;_;
01:15:660 (2) - maybe add whistle too. ^
> NatsumeRin
thanks for modding~ :)
Hinacle
modリクエストありがとうございますー!
参考程度におねがいします~~

modの練習のために英語で書かせてもらいました!すいませんT^T

mod
<Easy>
  1. 01:09:580 (6) - Remove clap and add whistle?
  2. 01:13:493 (5) - new combo?

<Normal>
  1. 00:26:971 (5) - x:256 y:88. 00:27:406 (6) - x360 y:152. I think place of here is good.
  2. 00:49:145 (5) - new combo?
  3. 00:49:797 (1) - Remove new combo?
  4. 01:12:841 (7,8) - 1 or 2 grid left (grid size: Tiny)
  5. 01:18:710 (1) - Remove new combo?
  6. 01:22:189 (5) - looks a little strange. try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132744
  7. 01:30:015 (1) - add whistle at beginning?
  8. 01:32:623 (1) - Remove new combo?

<Hard>
  1. 00:43:493 (3) - stack it. Perv: 0.01x http://puu.sh/4wMb
  2. 01:13:493 (1,1) - Remove whistle and add finish?

<Insane>
  1. 01:02:623 (2) - Remove clap and add whistle?
  2. 01:02:841 (3) - add whistle?
  3. 01:41:102 (x) - add note

Nice map!!
gal song mapper= =+
Topic Starter
swish

Hinacle wrote:

<Easy>
  1. 01:09:580 (6) - Remove clap and add whistle? fixed
  2. 01:13:493 (5) - new combo? fixed

<Normal>
  1. 00:26:971 (5) - x:256 y:88. 00:27:406 (6) - x360 y:152. I think place of here is good. fixed
  2. 00:49:145 (5) - new combo? ok
  3. 00:49:797 (1) - Remove new combo? ok
  4. 01:12:841 (7,8) - 1 or 2 grid left (grid size: Tiny) 2grid left
  5. 01:18:710 (1) - Remove new combo? ok
  6. 01:22:189 (5) - looks a little strange. try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132744 少し変えました ;)
  7. 01:30:015 (1) - add whistle at beginning? added
  8. 01:32:623 (1) - Remove new combo? ok

<Hard>
  1. 00:43:493 (3) - stack it. Perv: 0.01x http://puu.sh/4wMb ;_;
  2. 01:13:493 (1,1) - Remove whistle and add finish? ほかのdiffに合わせてそのままにしておきます :o

<Insane>
  1. 01:02:623 (2) - Remove clap and add whistle? fixed
  2. 01:02:841 (3) - add whistle? added
  3. 01:41:102 (x) - add noteadded
> Hinacle
thanks for modding :)
Faust
IRC suggestion on adding 1 more combo color.

Not a lot of things to point out.
But these are only very light suggestions, so you don't have to follow if you think you like it the way it is now.

Nothing actually wrong with the entire mapset.

Touching on Insane:

- 01:06:102 - I think this too close to the previous stack imo. You can shift this a little higher.

- 01:08:710 - Oh, this is nice :)

- 01:22:189 - Maybe too close.

- 01:35:558 - Actually, why not use a 1/4 slider like 3 - 4. If you do, don't forget the whistle.

Rest are good. No kudosu is fine ;)
Topic Starter
swish

Faust wrote:

IRC suggestion on adding 1 more combo color.
added 1 more combo color (2→3)
Not a lot of things to point out.
But these are only very light suggestions, so you don't have to follow if you think you like it the way it is now.

Nothing actually wrong with the entire mapset.

Touching on Insane:

- 01:06:102 - I think this too close to the previous stack imo. You can shift this a little higher. changed a little :)

- 01:08:710 - Oh, this is nice :) thanks ;)

- 01:22:189 - Maybe too close. hmm,sorry ;_; keep it now

- 01:35:558 - Actually, why not use a 1/4 slider like 3 - 4. If you do, don't forget the whistle. ok. fixed~

Rest are good. No kudosu is fine ;)
ah.. sorry,already been give kds :o thanks for help,Faust :D
Breeze
おはようございます~
いい字体ですよ、すきですね ;)

So you decide to delete video? If not, please add video and do a full-submit

[Easy]
  1. 00:06:536 - It's not recommended that use different BPM such as 75% in the easiest diff. If you insist, that would be fine, too.
    At least I think it's fairly easy enough
[Normal]
  1. 01:07:189 (3,4) - I think use soft whistle here would be nice, normal finish sounds a bit loud
[Hard]
  1. 01:07:189 (6) - Same to normal, soft whistle would fit music more IMO
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:754 (5) - This slider would be hidden by previous slider while playing, hard to tell IMO
  2. 00:55:341 (4) - Shouldn't this whistle be added to 3?
  3. 01:07:189 (11), 01:07:623 (12) - Same, soft whistle
  4. 01:11:319 (9) - Whistle instead of clap
  5. 01:11:754 (3) - Remove whistle, it fit your previous sound partten
良いマップですね
When you done changes, call me back for a bubble
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