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NICO Touches the Walls - Hologram

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Mitkoff
Hello,
From Q.
A lot of subjective stuff here.., heh :o

[General]
Mb You can make kiai in ALL diff from 00:54:103 - hmm? :idea:

[Easy]
It's kind a wierd suggestion, but 00:03:814 (1) - trigger me so much because curved in the begging and https://puu.sh/uZk86.jpg looks more appropriate imo
00:06:395 (3) - ds
00:44:887 - miss sound here too. It will be cool with 00:42:306 (1,2) - part in vocal plan. Also 00:42:306 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - all this part should use a consistent rhythm with pauses like 00:44:887 - 00:47:098 - 00:48:573 -
00:24:611 (1,2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/uZlyw.jpg rhythm suggestion, because 00:25:533 (2) - now a bit hard too catch. (It's kick after stronger sound wich not clicable and vocal here are going to silence) mb too subjective tho :?

[Normal]
Probably, as it is not "easy", SV changes make map much more fun too play. 00:01:050 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Even 0.95 for intro feels much more appropriate, maybe add 1,05 for kiai too...
00:03:814 (1,2) - ds?
00:05:289 (3) - more soft wave, mb even with 00:04:552 (2) - blanket would be look nicer
00:06:917 (1) - Did it supposed to be 1.10?
00:09:128 - i recommed make 1/2 slider as vocal start 00:09:128 - also it makes 00:09:866 (1,2,3,4) - pattern easier to read
00:21:109 (6,1) - Same shape for consistency? like 00:32:906 (6,1) -, both with red dots loks cool.
00:45:255 (1) - Can You put it a bit down, for visually consistanty with 00:41:200 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - all this structure? -> So shift 00:45:993 (2) - on lleft side...
00:52:260 (3) - i suggest unstuck it for emphasize hyped moment.
01:24:515 - probably should be clikable, 01:24:147 - 01:24:515 - 01:24:884 - 3 circles for 3 strong beats seems perfect imo.

[Hard]
00:18:345 (6) - clap on reverse (tail of slider) no needed imo
00:42:122 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - feels absolutly wierd...
00:41:569 - 00:42:675 - and 00:43:043 - 00:44:149 - should have same rhythm, full following vocals too cool for ignore it, mb even with overmapped 00:43:688 - tripple here...
Anyway if You don't want overmap it 00:43:781 (1) - should have much more emphasis
00:53:366 (5) - avoid this overlap pls
01:23:225 (2,3) - ^
01:13:825 (3) - stack seems off
rest fine
Cool diff :D -b

[Insane]
00:17:607 (2,3,4,5,6) - why did You lowered ds for this moment? it shpuld be go higher, no?
00:39:910 (3,4,1) - visually same spacing? https://puu.sh/uZr1z.jpg
00:43:596 - should be mapped imo, 1/2 reverse or circle+1/2 would fit wel
00:52:443 (1,1) - please, move in screen
01:00:001 (1) - 01:02:950 (1) - emphasize it more as You mentioned it as strong finishes
01:11:982 (2) - mmm, 1.06 hmm, feels not right... too close
01:23:778 (2,1,2,3,1,2) - imo over hyped for 4,2 ... looks for me like https://puu.sh/uZsA0.jpg
01:24:331 (1,2) - 3,9 too high imo... 3.5 more then enough
01:24:884 - circle before spinner? (stack with 01:24:516 (2) - )

[Last diff]
00:33:828 (2) - kind a strange changing spacing after prev pattern where it was 1.75 https://puu.sh/uZtbl.jpg ds should looks like screenshot, or what's the point?
00:38:804 (1) - remove NC
01:15:115 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - would be nicer if DS's increases will be more softer (more consistent)
01:17:696 (1,1) - blanket , a bit off from beggining

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Fine set, rank pls
GGGLHFBBRD etc...
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SeaRasp

Sotarks wrote:

sea rasp ins
00:12:446 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 sliders instead? Possible but would rather not

00:41:938 (3,4) - 1/4 slider would be cool here! xd I agree

00:43:228 (4) - change this to a 1/2 reverse ? blank feels kinda meh Sure that's true

00:52:444 (1,1,2,3,4) - can u move this a little on the left, it's a pain to play here on the screen Changed with previous mods

00:59:079 (2) - that rythmn is not good imo, focus those kicks instead pls I'd agree but I feel like this rhythm fits better with the overall map concept which follows mainly the vocals and this emphasizes that well

01:14:747 (1,3) - missing hs fixed from previous mods
pls double check hitsounds in your diff

RVMathew wrote:

Sr's Insane
1) 00:06:580 (1) - I assume this slider is supposed to be symmetrical? If so, it isn't. which is why it looks uneven. No that's intentionally not symmetrical
2) 01:04:977 Any reason why you ignore the sound here? Added circle makes more sense yeah
3) 01:22:488 (2) I recommend shortening the slider by 1/4. That way, you avoid missing the sound at 01:22:672, and overall it sounds a lot better if you do that.This emphasizes the following pattern better though and the sound it passes over is barely noticeable

DarkFire wrote:

SeaRasp's Insane00:

12:078 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - I really thisnk that there is a overmaped moment for these insane diff Should be fine
00:52:813 (1,2,3,4) - this part to u can make some easier to play Changed from previous mods
Well this diff is pretty nice . really nice

Mitkoff wrote:

[Insane]
00:17:607 (2,3,4,5,6) - why did You lowered ds for this moment? it shpuld be go higher, no? Why should it be higher this is a nice pattern imo
00:39:910 (3,4,1) - visually same spacing? https://puu.sh/uZr1z.jpg what
00:43:596 - should be mapped imo, 1/2 reverse or circle+1/2 would fit wel Changed in another way from previous mods
00:52:443 (1,1) - please, move in screen Already changed from previous mods
01:00:001 (1) - 01:02:950 (1) - emphasize it more as You mentioned it as strong finishes Still fine for pattern
01:11:982 (2) - mmm, 1.06 hmm, feels not right... too close It's fine
01:23:778 (2,1,2,3,1,2) - imo over hyped for 4,2 ... looks for me like https://puu.sh/uZsA0.jpg already changed from previous mods
01:24:331 (1,2) - 3,9 too high imo... 3.5 more then enough Already changed from previous mods
01:24:884 - circle before spinner? (stack with 01:24:516 (2) - ) Sure !
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Affirmation
@ CrystilonZ fixed all, thx

Sinnoh wrote:

Hard
00:12:815 (1) - This pattern gets really repetitive quickly, change it up a bit with different directions rather than just using the same rotation every timedoesn't matter
00:18:713 (1) - Odd flow angle, breaks flow a bit https://puu.sh/uXUqn/6051ca6545.png^
00:36:039 (4) - flows better if this is to the left more, could move stuff aroundCurrent pattern looks better for me,
00:51:154 (1) - Add more flair to these sliders, could use some red slider points
00:55:024 (4,1) - flow doesn't emphasise vocals here, since your rhythm follows itidk, but I think current pattern can epress vocal at least
https://puu.sh/uXUdQ/d07b3e6fff.png
4 has higher pitch so needs more emphasis, but the angle used on it is wide, like 120 degrees ish. Slider head of 1 however has 60 degree which is much sharper, but the vocal is much softer so it needs less emphasis
01:01:291 (1,2) - flows too well with other parts for important vocal, can emphasise a bitI don't like jump,
01:07:190 (1,2,3) - feels odd to play this
01:13:825 (3) - missed this, remove if there aren't any others like this
01:24:884 (6) - more spacing for final note

Invertable wrote:

NeoSL's Hard

  • 00:09:497 (3) - This is not snapped

    00:06:396 (1) - Put inherited point exactly on red tickalready

    Everything else is fine idk what to mod here sry :/

Sotarks wrote:

neosl hard
00:02:341 (1) - remove nc
00:05:290 (1) - ^No.

00:59:817 (1) - pls don't skip that downbeat!! aaadoesn't matter since it is consistant.

01:00:370 (2,1) - check stack

01:11:613 (1) - same the downbeat rippppppsame as, too

01:13:825 (3) - hard overlap to read for a hard, i'd highly suggest your to unstack

01:14:009 (4) - wat are you even trying to follow here ?vocal

RVMathew wrote:

NSL's Hard
1) :idea: (Suggestion) 00:09:128 Add a 3/4 slider here, and remove 00:09:313 (2). The reason why I suggest this is because you capture the guitar and vocal sound at 00:09:128, and the 3/4 slider leads into 00:09:866 (1) pretty well. If you don't think it works, don't apply it.ignored for emphasizing symbol sound
2) 00:22:768 (4,1) - Is it possible for you to make this a perfect stack ie. tuck the sliderhead behind 4 completely? I think it looks a lot nicer, but it may sacrifice readability. doesn't matter
3) 00:48:942 (2,5) - Move 2 and 5 to (369, 204), so the triangle pattern looks a lot neater. You may have to adjust 00:49:679 (1) though.current pattern looks better...
4) 00:52:813 (2,3,4,5,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7663969 I have to say that is a wonky looking star pattern....?

DarkFire wrote:

NeoSL's Hard
00:02:341 (1) - really strange overlap. or make it nice or make it without overlap
00:16:317 (2,1) - ^ , or make this 00:17:054 (1) - cross this 00:16:317 (2) - in the middle
00:18:713 (1,2) - ^ same
00:20:741 (3,5) - 00:19:819 (3) - too much overlaps. They are nice , but flow stands too shortly
00:23:690 (2) - really stop that))
00:24:612 (1,1) - but that is a good overlap
00:28:667 (4) - mb place some down this note
00:33:828 (2) - ok, all this moments. there are too much of them. too much. It becomes predictable
00:42:122 (6,7,1) - why there is a triple but next 00:43:412 (4,1) - there is no. The same moments
I didn't fixed overlap issues since I intended them.
Actually all this diff is looks beautiful if neither the quantity of overlaps

Mitkoff wrote:

[Hard]
00:18:345 (6) - clap on reverse (tail of slider) no needed imo
00:42:122 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - feels absolutly wierd...why? I think this pattern looks good.
00:41:569 - 00:42:675 - and 00:43:043 - 00:44:149 - should have same rhythm, full following vocals too cool for ignore it, mb even with overmapped 00:43:688 - tripple here...
Anyway if You don't want overmap it 00:43:781 (1) - should have much more emphasis
00:53:366 (5) - avoid this overlap plswhy? I think this stack looks good,
01:23:225 (2,3) - ^NO.
01:13:825 (3) - stack seems off
Thanks for mod, all!

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Topic Starter
Izzywing
00:06:917 (1,1) - Blanket these ok

00:16:317 (2,5) - Also put inherited points on the end of the slider with 5% volume just so players don't hear that blue tick sound

00:20:741 (3) - ^

00:42:306 (1,2,1,2) - ^ etc it doesn't sound nice Fix all

00:27:192 (6) - I think you were emphasizing this important sound everywhere else but here the DS is to low make a little bit harder jump just to emphasize important sound and also for bigger jump to this 00:27:376 (1) fix

00:27:929 (2) - This also needs bigger emphasize. Distance between these two 00:27:929 (2,3) - is much higher than between 00:27:376 (1,2) - and it should be the opposite

00:28:667 (4) - ^ fix fix

00:45:255 (1) - Add finish? fix

00:56:867 (6,3) - Maybe stack them since you are stacking a lot messes up the aesthetics

01:05:531 (7,2) - ^ and also point 01:05:899 (1) - to 01:06:268 (2)same
@sotark fixed all except for the rhythm at the start thingy, i just prefer mine is all.

@darkfire not sure why i would swap those tbh, its fine as it is

00:33:828 (2) - kind a strange changing spacing after prev pattern where it was 1.75 https://puu.sh/uZtbl.jpg ds should looks like screenshot, or what's the point? aesthetics kinda rigid here, dont wanna break
00:38:804 (1) - remove NC continues the 123-123-12 combo pattern thats set up by vocals
01:15:115 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - would be nicer if DS's increases will be more softer (more consistent) prefer it like this actually. i like the big intensity gain as the measure ends.
01:17:696 (1,1) - blanket , a bit off from beggining Fix
Thanks for mods everyone!

Updated both GDs and fixed tags.
Nao Tomori
[expert]
how about some trendy anime related diffname like "homunculus" or "winry rockbell is a fucking 10" or something

00:05:289 (3) - nice lasse slider
00:13:552 (4,5,6) - you could do something cool here by putting sliders on the high pitched guitars (so ctrl g on these) and making 00:15:027 - into a 1/2 slider as well
00:18:713 (1,2) - think a rhythm like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740963 works better to focus on the vocal
it seem like youre following the vocals after but then you suddenly switch to guitar for like 2 sliders o.o
00:24:612 (1,2) - i suggest same rhythm here for that reason
00:29:772 (1,2) - stylistic but i hate this pattern lol, feels sooo lame to play cuz u can just wiggle a little bit off center and get both sliders. if you wanted to put emphasis on the motion you could do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740972 where the head of 2 is under 1 end.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740975 my inner mir is triggered
01:14:747 (1,1) - why 1 combo nc here o.o
01:15:484 (1,2,1,2) - also theres literally nothing strong here why did you put a fullscreen jump o.o
01:24:147 (4,5,6) - this is so hard cuz of wide angle D=
[searasp's insane]
00:21:846 (2) - slider on 2 vocal syllables is kinda meh imo
00:33:643 (2) - same
00:42:030 (4) - add a clap here so it doesn't sound as overmapped lol
01:24:884 - imo add circle here
[neosl's hard]
00:15:027 (3,4) - could be cool to use this pattern at 00:12:815 (1) - because it sounds the same
clean
[normal]
01:06:636 - this gap feels kinda weird
[easy]
00:31:431 (2) - this doesnt look like it adds much to the map xd

k
Topic Starter
Izzywing

Naotoshi wrote:

[expert]
how about some trendy anime related diffname like "homunculus" or "winry rockbell is a fucking 10" or something

00:05:289 (3) - nice lasse slider Thanks friend
00:13:552 (4,5,6) - you could do something cool here by putting sliders on the high pitched guitars (so ctrl g on these) and making 00:15:027 - into a 1/2 slider as well Eh...I guess so, but I don't think it would be any better than my current rhythm.
00:18:713 (1,2) - think a rhythm like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740963 works better to focus on the vocal This is actually a concept im borrowing from mr monstrata, which is to use 1/1 sliders after an intense section (in this case the jumps and burst) as a sort of segue into a calmer one right after. Agree that it doesnt follow the vocals perfectly, but it's a good transition.
it seem like youre following the vocals after but then you suddenly switch to guitar for like 2 sliders o.o
00:24:612 (1,2) - i suggest same rhythm here for that reason I fixed this one because the transition thing doesnt matter, was just a mistake
00:29:772 (1,2) - stylistic but i hate this pattern lol, feels sooo lame to play cuz u can just wiggle a little bit off center and get both sliders. if you wanted to put emphasis on the motion you could do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740972 where the head of 2 is under 1 end. o yea ill just make it jumps lol, fits the intensity of this better anyway
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740975 my inner mir is triggered Fixed
01:14:747 (1,1) - why 1 combo nc here o.o Fix
01:15:484 (1,2,1,2) - also theres literally nothing strong here why did you put a fullscreen jump o.o eh...well the music supports the 1-2 jumps and they're actually not that big. I nerfed em a bit I guess in fixing this I did something kinda gimmicky but it fits the aesthetics and the song so hopefully its ok with you
01:24:147 (4,5,6) - this is so hard cuz of wide angle D= o woops

[normal]
01:06:636 - this gap feels kinda weird vocals have gap = song has gap. not sure what else to do w/o making it too dense. should be ok
[easy]
00:31:431 (2) - this doesnt look like it adds much to the map xd keeping rhythm + theres actually a guitar sound here

k
thanks mr friendo
SeaRasp

Naotoshi wrote:

[searasp's insane]
00:21:846 (2) - slider on 2 vocal syllables is kinda meh imo changed to circles
00:33:643 (2) - same same
00:42:030 (4) - add a clap here so it doesn't sound as overmapped lol done
01:24:884 - imo add circle here yep
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Affirmation

Naotoshi wrote:

[neosl's hard]
00:15:027 (3,4) - could be cool to use this pattern at 00:12:815 (1) - because it sounds the sameDon't want to change since I want to make pentagon with 00:12:815 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - .
Thanks for mod :D
Topic Starter
Izzywing
Updated everything, fixed a few claps for you SeaRasp since you forgot to add them in after changing some of the sliders to circles.
Nao Tomori
additive rhythm is now supported by claps
Topic Starter
Izzywing
thanks for the feedback nao, you're my favorite overused meme
Monstrata
Afterimage

00:10:419 (1,2,3) - This 180 degree movement seened rather uncharacteristic of your jump structuring so far. how about moving 00:10:787 (3) - to stack with 00:11:894 (3) - ? Creates a nicer angle going into the next pattern imo.
00:14:657 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same, this jump pattern felt odd to me, since you broke flow going into 2 whereas so far you've been integrating the slider's path into your movements thus far. here's something I tried. 2>3>4 is the same location, just shifted in timeline. 5 has been moved so that its a ctrl+J'ed pattern of 2+4 This movement allows you to continue the flow you've built up by doing a left-ward movement onto circle 2 rather than a sharp upward movement.
00:21:109 (5,6,1) - Emphasize the crash on 1 instead? You could make the angle here sharper going into 1 and more obtuse going into 6 imo, it would compliment the sharp left-ward angles you create with 00:21:478 (1,2,3,4) - (great flow btw). Anyways, i tried something like this: 5 and 6 kind of create a symmetrical pattern through slider 4, though i just approximated.
00:28:851 (5,1) - I think this should be a 1/2 slider instead so you can emphasize the vocal pitch here. Clicking on the downbeat makes it seem like you're not following vocals, since the vocal is held here.
00:39:173 (1,2,3,4,1) - The jumps feel misplaced here. I think 2>3 is too big while 4>1 isn't big enough.
00:55:393 (5,1) - Make these a 1/2 slider instead to continue with vocal emphasis?
01:07:190 (5,1,2) - here too, Ctrl+G'ing the rhythm is a better way of syncopating between vocals and instruments.
01:24:700 (8) - How about placing this somewhere like 71||355? The angle from 7>8>1 seems unnecessarily sharp and you could facilitate some more movement here imo.

SeaRasp

HP 6 would fit the spread better.
00:06:396 (2,1) - Stacks are noticeably off.
00:46:546 (1) - Ignoring the downbeat isn't good imo. I would make the rhythm denser here. make this a circle + 1/2 slider instead?
01:04:977 (3) - How about a jump here? I think single tapping in the same location then going into a spaced stream causes players to really lose momentum. If you create movement here it allows players to better prepare for the stream movement.

Hmm, I haven't heard a lot about you as a mapper, but looking at this diff, I feel like i'll be hearing a lot from you soon. This diff was really well mapped, good job!

NeoSL

00:41:569 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - The stacks on the triplet really mess up your pattern here. Move 3+4+5 up and left 8 pixels to offset the stacking mechanic.
00:52:260 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Same, stacking mechanic causes the circles to become really close together. I would consider not stacking 00:52:444 (1) - with the slider=end and instead forming a triangle with 2>3>1
01:07:189 (5) - Missing NC

Man. This is so clean. Come GD for me any time you want :D.

Normal

00:37:514 (3,4,5) - The rhythm here felt a bit strange. The double click didn't seem necessary to me. It didn't convey the vocals properly too imo, since the stronger notes seemed not to be mapped to clicks.
00:41:569 (7) - 1/2 slider please? ;c
00:44:518 (5) - Definitely introduce 1/2 sliders here though, otherwise 00:47:467 (5,6) - feels totally out of place due to how dense it is for the same vocal rhythm.
01:06:452 (2,3,4,5) - This rhythm doesn't really emphasize the stronger vocal notes through holds. Talking about 01:06:452 - and especially 01:07:927 - .

Easy

01:23:594 (1) - Sync the 2nd red node perfectly to 01:24:147 - ? It's currently slightly off. The bump is a nice effect for mapping the red tick without mapping the red tick xD. You could try setting it up better too if you like this idea:

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This song brings back memories. Giving it a full mod cuz the song deserves an equally great map. Call me back for heart~
SeaRasp
Fixed everything Monstrata

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Topic Starter
Izzywing

Monstrata wrote:

This song brings back memories. Giving it a full mod cuz the song deserves an equally great map. Call me back for heart~ FMA was the first anime I ever saw, so yeah same for me lol, lots of memories in this. I know I said I wouldn't make anymore anime sets, but I might make an exception for "Yui - Again", the show's first OP
Applied literally everything!

00:49:955 - also removed this in the top diff because it was completely overmapped with no emphasis. Whoops.

I'll update all at once. Thanks Monstrata!
Affirmation
fixed all
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Topic Starter
Izzywing
upd
Monstrata
Qualified~
Topic Starter
Izzywing
b4 ppl ask the map was bubbled before the tier split so monstrata could qualify it.

Thanks for the qualify, woo
Affirmation
Good!
RVMathew
Congratulations!
Lefia
Congratulation~
Agatsu
grats!!
iYiyo
o: nice! grats~
Delis
:O I love the song, gratz!
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