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16:10 iloveyou4ever: Hi,do you have time to do a testplay?Thx :D
16:10 Grimbow: Sure :o give me a sec o/
16:10 iloveyou4ever: Ok!!
16:10 Grimbow: ready!
16:10 iloveyou4ever: ok :D
16:10 iloveyou4ever: https://puu.sh/tm7nj.osz
16:11 iloveyou4ever: beware of long stream
16:11 Grimbow: Oh god
16:11 Grimbow: I suck at long streams
16:16 iloveyou4ever: jesus...
16:16 iloveyou4ever: is this called sucks xD
16:16 iloveyou4ever: nice play
16:16 Grimbow: sorry X(
16:16 Grimbow: I ruined that last stream haha
16:17 iloveyou4ever: the last stream is pretty hard and long xDD
16:17 Grimbow: I also made a bad miss on the easy 1/3 haha
16:17 iloveyou4ever: shitmiss xD
16:17 Grimbow: Yeah :P
16:17 Grimbow: The map is really fun tyhough!
16:18 iloveyou4ever: I think the stream need to be consistency
16:18 iloveyou4ever: but it's a bit bored(cuz there's little variation only)
16:18 iloveyou4ever: Thx :D
16:18 Grimbow: I didn't find it boring, I liked the kiai streams
16:18 Grimbow: non conventional patterns \o/
16:19 iloveyou4ever: ok thx :D I am glad that you enjoy it >3<
16:19 iloveyou4ever: and one thing to ask
16:19 Grimbow: sure
16:19 iloveyou4ever: 03:33:861 -
16:19 iloveyou4ever: do you think there should be a note here?
16:20 Grimbow: ah yeah
16:20 Grimbow: should be that note on the 1/8
16:20 Grimbow: then 1/6 after it
16:21 iloveyou4ever: ok :D
16:21 Grimbow: http://puu.sh/tm7U1/1d77d9cce3.jpg
16:21 Grimbow: like that ^^
16:22 iloveyou4ever: but I don't want to put 1/6 in this part...
16:22 iloveyou4ever: 02:56:061 - 03:07:033 This is the most ''calm'' part
16:23 iloveyou4ever: 03:18:004 - and starting from here,this is a bit more hype
16:23 Grimbow: Ah fair enough
16:23 Grimbow: 03:29:833 (765) -
16:23 Grimbow: since you didn't use 1/6 here
16:23 iloveyou4ever: 03:39:947 - and I want to put 1/6 starting from this part onl
16:24 Grimbow: hmmmm
16:24 iloveyou4ever: but yes the music is 1/6...
16:24 Grimbow: maybe
16:24 Grimbow: if you delete 03:33:604 (799) -
16:24 Grimbow: 03:33:518 (798) -
16:24 Grimbow: change that to a d
16:25 Grimbow: then the part after could flow like the rest
16:25 Grimbow: with the 1/4
16:26 iloveyou4ever: nice suggestion!!
16:26 iloveyou4ever: ok applied
16:27 Grimbow: :D
16:27 iloveyou4ever: ready for submit?idk xD
16:28 Grimbow: 04:34:547 -
16:28 Grimbow: maybe add note here? o:
16:29 iloveyou4ever: ok add k
16:30 Grimbow: 00:11:317 (10) -
16:30 Grimbow: maybe change this to a d?
16:30 Grimbow: you have mapped all the "haa" sounds as k's and all the other "woo" sounds as d's
16:31 Grimbow: 00:12:917 (11,12,13,14,15) -
16:31 Grimbow: apart from here
16:31 Grimbow: :P
16:31 iloveyou4ever: ok
16:31 iloveyou4ever: I decide k or d by both the sound and pitch here
16:32 Grimbow: Ah yes, makes sense
16:33 Grimbow: I think it'd good to go in that case! ^^
16:33 Grimbow: fun map, flows well
16:33 iloveyou4ever: Ok Thx :D
16:33 Grimbow: :Db
16:33 iloveyou4ever: will submit it later
16:33 iloveyou4ever: xDD
16:33 Grimbow: Okay :D!
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever
Reply to Nishi's mod

I think that changing kkkddkkdk to kkkkdkkdk is not a good idea...

I see your point for suggesting to change it
However,take the example of 01:17:231 -
The sound effect pitch is going down
I think if I use k here,it won't fit the hitsound
and I think abusing k is not good here,tho it's easier to play
However I keep as d to fit the sound effect
Sorry for that :<
ChoSeung
00:27:564 delete

01:45:137 (8,9) 1/6 kk

02:01:080 (106~112) kkdkdkd

02:12:737 - 02:15:308 (How think?)


02:56:623 - 02:57:994 and 03:02:108 - 03:03:480


02:58:337 - 02:59:194 and 03:03:823 - 03:04:680


02:59:537 (622,623,624) - k d d

03:00:051 - delete

03:35:365 - 1/6 dkkd

03:55:423


Uh... This find Hard... I make map noob (so Not a lot of help.. sorry)

If you don't like them,do not give me kudosu...
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

ChoSeung wrote:

00:27:564 delete
I want to emphasis every second beats of each bar
like 00:27:566 - 00:27:966 - ...
so I put notes here

01:45:137 (8,9) 1/6 kk
nope it's 1/4 sound
02:01:080 (106~112) kkdkdkd
I want to follow the sound effect here
but decide to put by notes by the piano
emm I changed to kdkkdkd first

02:12:737 - 02:15:308 (How think?)

emm I think the original version is better
and I don't want to put more than 4 k/d together

02:56:623 - 02:57:994 and 03:02:108 - 03:03:480

nice!!changed
02:58:337 - 02:59:194 and 03:03:823 - 03:04:680

03:04:339 - I want to stay this as d so I can emphasis 03:05:025 - this high pitch piano sound
02:59:537 (622,623,624) - k d d
I think the original one seems better in emphasising the piano pitch
03:00:051 - delete
I think the piano sound is quite obvious here,so no delete
03:35:365 - 1/6 dkkd
I don't want to put 1/6 in this section,I want to develop the flow(increasing note density among calm section to kiai section)
and as this part is not as ''hype'' as kiai time.,I think putting 1/6 is not a good idea here

03:55:423

I want to emphasis the sound effect pitch at 03:55:853 - by putting k here,and I put d for the previous note cuz I want to emphasis this...no change :<
Uh... This find Hard... I make map noob (so Not a lot of help.. sorry)

If you don't like them,do not give me kudosu...
Although some stuffs are rejected,but still thanks for modding :)
yassu-
M4M

Inner Oni
・00:24:164 - change to d 00:04:964 (3,10,17) pattern

・01:15:994 ~ 01:37:937 - Pattern is irregular
 ・01:17:194 (336,337) - 01:19:937 (364,365) - Ctrl+G 01:28:165 (451,452) 01:30:908 (481,482) pattern
 ・01:18:480 - add k and 01:18:651 - delete 01:15:908 - pattern
 ・01:19:251 - change to k 01:30:223 - pattern
 ・01:22:594 - delete 01:33:565 - pattern
 ・01:25:765 (424,425,426,427,428,429) - change 01:36:737 (541,542,543,544,545,546) - like this
 ・01:26:880 - delete 01:15:908 - pattern
 ・01:29:537 - change to d 01:18:565 - pattern
 ・01:29:623 - delete 01:15:908 - pattern
 ・01:30:137 - add d 01:27:394 - pattern

・02:10:851 - delete because drum sound end 02:10:737 or 02:10:851 ~ 02:11:708 - add melody ?

・02:15:480 (205,206,207) - Ctrl+G i think that dkk is better than kkd

・02:31:423 (374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) -

I think this is better

・02:55:594 - add k? 02:54:908 (597,599) - pattern

・03:25:594 (747,748,749,750) - swag 03:27:651 (761,762,763,764) - pattern change

・03:39:737 - add d?

・04:01:937 ~ 04:23:880 - 01:15:994 ~ 01:37:937 - please refer to pattern

・04:35:108 - add k 01:15:994 (325,326,327,328,329,330) 04:01:937 (145,146,147,148,149,150) - pattern

good luck~~~ :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

yassu- wrote:

M4M

Inner Oni
・00:24:164 - change to d 00:04:964 (3,10,17) pattern
fixed
・01:15:994 ~ 01:37:937 - Pattern is irregular
 ・01:17:194 (336,337) - 01:19:937 (364,365) - Ctrl+G 01:28:165 (451,452) 01:30:908 (481,482) pattern
 ・01:18:480 - add k and 01:18:651 - delete 01:15:908 - pattern
 ・01:19:251 - change to k 01:30:223 - pattern
 ・01:22:594 - delete 01:33:565 - pattern
 ・01:25:765 (424,425,426,427,428,429) - change 01:36:737 (541,542,543,544,545,546) - like this
 ・01:26:880 - delete 01:15:908 - pattern
 ・01:29:537 - change to d 01:18:565 - pattern
 ・01:29:623 - delete 01:15:908 - pattern
 ・01:30:137 - add d 01:27:394 - pattern
change some of them
I map by sound effect here,but also want to emphasis the outstanding drum effect
and some suggestion I think it's not suitable,but still changed some of them though
Also,I want to add some variation among these two parts

・02:10:851 - delete because drum sound end 02:10:737 or 02:10:851 ~ 02:11:708 - add melody ?
will think...I think current is ok
・02:15:480 (205,206,207) - Ctrl+G i think that dkk is better than kkd
fixed
・02:31:423 (374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) -

I think this is better
I don't want to connect 1/3 and 1/4 together...not suitable
・02:55:594 - add k? 02:54:908 (597,599) - pattern
map by the drum(bass) here,no bass here
・03:25:594 (747,748,749,750) - swag 03:27:651 (761,762,763,764) - pattern change
but I think the current one fits the hitsound more
・03:39:737 - add d?
will think...
・04:01:937 ~ 04:23:880 - 01:15:994 ~ 01:37:937 - please refer to pattern
Ok :D
・04:35:108 - add k 01:15:994 (325,326,327,328,329,330) 04:01:937 (145,146,147,148,149,150) - pattern
the music parts are not the same,not need to consistent here.
good luck~~~ :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Thanks for modding :D
And want to reply some of your points,
you may pay attention to the variation of the map
If all the patterns in the kiai time are the same,that'd be boring
I know it need to be consistent
but it also need variation,
just want to state that :)
Smallwu
Hello, mod from irc request
[inner Oni]
01:36:052 (537) - d 因為它比前面那個音低了一些

02:02:109 (115,116,117) - ddk Because piano pitch 在這個部分你應該已經開始在follow鋼琴了(從前面的七連打判斷的)

02:02:795 (120,121) - Remove 多這兩顆的確挺不錯的 可是前面已經有ddk了(上面的修改) 而且這裡本身就沒鋼琴音 刪除這兩顆還能順帶的給玩家休息一下

03:20:109 (536) - d ? 感覺這樣比較符合音樂 可是變成這樣又挺卡手 感覺一下唄@w@

03:37:595 (665,666,667) - ddd (因應下面的變化)

03:37:938 (668) - 我認為這裡放滑條真的不太好 嘗試改成kkkd d d? 這樣 這樣 我也不知道 感覺比較合適=w=

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GL with Rank!
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Smallwu wrote:

Hello, mod from irc request
[inner Oni]
01:36:052 (537) - d 因為它比前面那個音低了一些
音樂由01:35:195 ~ 01:36:566 - pitch一直升高,所以我比較想這放k
02:02:109 (115,116,117) - ddk Because piano pitch 在這個部分你應該已經開始在follow鋼琴了(從前面的七連打判斷的)
我跟sound effect map的,而且這裡的piano不太明,而且這裡的piano不太明顯,所以我還是跟sound effect放kkd了
02:02:795 (120,121) - Remove 多這兩顆的確挺不錯的 可是前面已經有ddk了(上面的修改) 而且這裡本身就沒鋼琴音 刪除這兩顆還能順帶的給玩家休息一下
Ok >3<
03:20:109 (536) - d ? 感覺這樣比較符合音樂 可是變成這樣又挺卡手 感覺一下唄@w@
03:18:738 - 由這開始每個小節第三拍都有''拍''的一聲,所以我都放k了,但是我會想一下這...因為背景音還是low pitch
03:37:595 (665,666,667) - ddd (因應下面的變化)
ddd好像不太合適o.o
03:37:938 (668) - 我認為這裡放滑條真的不太好 嘗試改成kkkd d d? 這樣 這樣 我也不知道 感覺比較合適=w=
我放了kkkdkdd(1/4)

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抓不出太多的東西 抱歉>3>
GL with Rank!
謝謝modding >3<
_yu68
Sorry for being late.

mod
[General]
  1. 00:01:768 - change sample Soft -> Normal? There is no need to use soft hitsounds.
  2. change HP:5 -> 4? Since the increase amount of HP per notes is few
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:31:668 - add any circle? In addition to measure of 00:32:168 - , prevent repeated of same rhythm
  2. 00:38:068 - ^
  3. 00:56:697 (191) - delete? Reduce density increase
  4. 01:08:541 - add kat? Prevent repeated of same rhythm
  5. 04:27:398 - ^
  6. 04:32:883 - ^
  7. 04:38:369 - ^
  8. 01:17:112 (335,336,337) - change to ddk ? I think it will be easier to play by changing the color of the circle on bar line and the circle just before it.
  9. 01:19:855 (363,364,365) - ^
  10. 04:03:055 (156,157,158) - ^
  11. 04:05:798 (186,187,188) - ^
  12. 01:18:141 (346) - or 01:18:827 (353) - change to don? Even color scheme
  13. 01:21:312 (379) - ^
  14. 01:22:341 (390) - ^
  15. 01:22:598 (393) - ^
  16. 01:27:227 (441) - ^
  17. 01:27:484 (444) - ^
  18. 01:30:227 (474) - ^
  19. 01:30:484 (477) - ^
  20. 01:32:798 (502) - ^
  21. 04:07:255 (202) - ^
  22. 04:08:283 (213) - ^
  23. 04:08:541 (216) - ^
  24. 04:13:169 (265) - ^
  25. 04:13:426 (268) - ^
  26. 04:15:741 (294) - ^
  27. 04:15:998 (297) - ^
  28. 04:16:255 (300) - ^
  29. 04:19:512 (337) - ^
  30. 01:23:712 (405,406,407) - change to ddk? I feel like 01:22:855 (396,397,398,399,400) - .
  31. 01:24:998 (418) - 01:25:255 (420) - change to don? Even color scheme + I think these are similar. 01:24:227 (410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424) -
  32. 01:35:969 (536) - 01:36:227 (538) - ^
  33. 04:10:941 (242) - 04:11:198 (244) - ^
  34. 04:21:912 (363) - 04:22:169 (365) - ^
  35. 01:45:769 (11) - move to 01:45:784 - ? Fit to piano sound
  36. 01:49:512 (28) - delete? Quiet part
  37. 02:10:855 (167) - delete? Emphasize the end of kick sounds
  38. 02:23:712 (121) - 02:23:969 (124) - change to don? Even color scheme
  39. 02:25:255 (138) - ^
  40. about 03:07:083 - ~03:18:055 - I think that it is strange that the density is lower than 02:56:112 - ~03:07:083 - although it is not quiet. How about increasing notes according to piano sounds.
  41. from 04:51:312 - to 04:56:112 - change pattern x___x___x___x___... -> x_xx_xxxx_xx_xxx...? Express fade-out

Good luck!
Please ask me if there is what you cannot understand because my English is not good.
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

_yu68 wrote:

Sorry for being late.

mod
[General]
  1. 00:01:768 - change sample Soft -> Normal? There is no need to use soft hitsounds.
    fixed
  2. change HP:5 -> 4? Since the increase amount of HP per notes is few
    emm I think there're about 2020 notes only,hp4 will be a bit low
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:31:668 - add any circle? In addition to measure of 00:32:168 - , prevent repeated of same rhythm
  2. 00:38:068 - ^
    don't want to put any 5-notes pattern here
    will be too dense,and I think current one is ok too
  3. 00:56:697 (191) - delete? Reduce density increase
    nice find :D,changed
  4. 01:08:541 - add kat? Prevent repeated of same rhythm
  5. 04:27:398 - ^
  6. 04:32:883 - ^
  7. 04:38:369 - ^
    all changed
  8. 01:17:112 (335,336,337) - change to ddk ? I think it will be easier to play by changing the color of the circle on bar line and the circle just before it.
  9. 01:19:855 (363,364,365) - ^
  10. 04:03:055 (156,157,158) - ^
  11. 04:05:798 (186,187,188) - ^
    I map according to the sound effect pitch here
    I think it plays fine imo,and the most important thing is that the notes fit the music
    easy to play or not is only the second thing,not so important I think :l
  12. 01:18:141 (346) - or 01:18:827 (353) - change to don? Even color scheme
  13. 01:21:312 (379) - ^
  14. 01:22:341 (390) - ^
  15. 01:22:598 (393) - ^
  16. 01:27:227 (441) - ^
  17. 01:27:484 (444) - ^
  18. 01:30:227 (474) - ^
  19. 01:30:484 (477) - ^
  20. 01:32:798 (502) - ^
  21. 04:07:255 (202) - ^
  22. 04:08:283 (213) - ^
  23. 04:08:541 (216) - ^
  24. 04:13:169 (265) - ^
  25. 04:13:426 (268) - ^
  26. 04:15:741 (294) - ^
  27. 04:15:998 (297) - ^
  28. 04:16:255 (300) - ^
  29. 04:19:512 (337) - ^
    I know what you mean
    But I think the color scheme isn't so important
    the note fits the music is the most important thing here
    and since the music is like very high pitch
    so I put many dkkdkkdkk pattern
    but still I changed some of them :)
  30. 01:23:712 (405,406,407) - change to ddk? I feel like 01:22:855 (396,397,398,399,400) - .
    fixed,also change other parts
  31. 01:24:998 (418) - 01:25:255 (420) - change to don? Even color scheme + I think these are similar. 01:24:227 (410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424) -
  32. 01:35:969 (536) - 01:36:227 (538) - ^
  33. 04:10:941 (242) - 04:11:198 (244) - ^
  34. 04:21:912 (363) - 04:22:169 (365) - ^
    I think the current version plays a better role in emphasis the sound effect pitch change,so no change T.T
  35. 01:45:769 (11) - move to 01:45:784 - ? Fit to piano sound
    I listen it with 25% with few times and I am sure it's lie on 01:45:769 XD
  36. 01:49:512 (28) - delete? Quiet part
    Ok!
  37. 02:10:855 (167) - delete? Emphasize the end of kick sounds
    I change to a slider
  38. 02:23:712 (121) - 02:23:969 (124) - change to don? Even color scheme
    but according to the sound effect...no change sorry :<
  39. 02:25:255 (138) - ^
    ok fixed
  40. about 03:07:083 - ~03:18:055 - I think that it is strange that the density is lower than 02:56:112 - ~03:07:083 - although it is not quiet. How about increasing notes according to piano sounds.
    I want to leave a break for players...
    After the long streams,I think putting 1/1 here can give a break to players,and give them a rest
  41. from 04:51:312 - to 04:56:112 - change pattern x___x___x___x___... -> x_xx_xxxx_xx_xxx...? Express fade-out
    I change something like this
    according to the sound effect,but nice suggestion though :D

Good luck!
Please ask me if there is what you cannot understand because my English is not good.
Thanks for modding :)
_yu68




I think that this one is right but it's small problem, so I leave judgment to you.(I'm sorry for taking the time about this.)
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

_yu68 wrote:





I think that this one is right but it's small problem, so I leave judgment to you.(I'm sorry for taking the time about this.)
Oh sorry it's my fault...
I should've listened more carefully
It should be lie on 1/8 :D
Also fixed ><
Thanks so much :)
Nyan
[Inner Oni]

01:43:598 - add a don
01:48:998 - add a don
02:55:341 - add a kat
02:00:655 - add a don
02:04:426 - add a don
02:45:483 (349,350,351) - kdddk or kdkdk
02:47:969 - add a don
02:51:055 - add a don
03:40:341 (685,686,687) - kdddk or kdkdk or ddkdk
03:45:826 (8,9,10) - kdddk or kdkdk or ddkdk
03:51:312 (57,58,59) - kdddk or kdkdk or ddkdk
03:56:798 (101,102,103) - kdddk or kdkdk or ddkdk

4,5th kiai parts may be loose
I suggest adding the notes will be good
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Nyan wrote:

[Inner Oni]

01:43:598 - add a don
01:48:998 - add a don
The section is calm here,so I want the note density be loose here,no change
02:55:341 - add a kat
map by the drum bass here,and I think there's no bass here,no change :l
02:00:655 - add a don
I think there is no piano(or weak...I can't hear it XD) sound here,and it's calm section here,so I don't want to put note here
02:04:426 - add a don
map to sound effect here,and no sound effect here...
02:45:483 (349,350,351) - kdddk or kdkdk
02:45:741 - choose to add d at here only
02:47:969 - add a don
no obvious sound fx here,no change
02:51:055 - add a don
same reason
03:40:341 (685,686,687) - kdddk or kdkdk or ddkdk
03:45:826 (8,9,10) - kdddk or kdkdk or ddkdk
03:51:312 (57,58,59) - kdddk or kdkdk or ddkdk
03:56:798 (101,102,103) - kdddk or kdkdk or ddkdk
all add don at place like 03:40:598 -

4,5th kiai parts may be loose
I suggest adding the notes will be good
I want to develop the flow
If I put long streams at 4th kiai time,then it will be quite boring because the 4th and 5th kiai time patterns are the same
so I increase note density among the kiai time
Thanks for modding :)
katacheh
安安~ 來NM大爆炸~

mod
01:05:627 (257) - 換成d 聽起來比較合
01:08:541 (276,277) - kd
01:11:112 (294) - d
01:14:027 (313,314) - kd

01:50:712 - 加個d連起來? 因為鋼琴沒有斷
01:51:226 (46) - k 感覺比較合


02:01:341 (108) - 換成k感覺比較好
02:01:941 (113,114,115,116) - 換成dddkd?

02:16:169 (42,43) - 42換成k , 43delete

02:35:969 (247) - delete

02:56:969 (440,441,442) - kkd 因為音調下降
03:01:083 (462,463,464) - ^
03:02:455 (469,470,471) - ^
03:06:569 (491,492,493) - ^

03:20:112 (537) - d

03:50:455 (53,54,55) - 放成1/6的? 跟前面03:44:969 (2,3,4,5) - 一樣

04:24:398 (389,390) - dd 都跟之前的MOD一樣 沒改的話就不用看了
04:27:398 (409,410) - kd
04:29:883 (426,427) - dd
04:29:883 (422,423) - dd
04:32:883 (446,447) - kd
04:35:369 (464,465) - dd
04:38:369 (484,485) - kd
04:40:855 (501,502) - dd
04:43:855 (520,521) - kd
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

katacheh wrote:

安安~ 來NM大爆炸~

mod
01:05:627 (257) - 換成d 聽起來比較合
但這裡有明顯的高音sound effect,轉k不太合適
01:08:541 (276,277) - kd
01:08:798 - again high pitch here
01:11:112 (294) - d
01:14:027 (313,314) - kd
same as above

01:50:712 - 加個d連起來? 因為鋼琴沒有斷
這裡是冷靜part,我不想note density那麼高,所以斷一斷
01:51:226 (46) - k 感覺比較合
好der~~


02:01:341 (108) - 換成k感覺比較好
02:01:941 (113,114,115,116) - 換成dddkd?
第一個applied
第二個我02:02:112 - 放k是因為sound effect(背景音),所以沒轉到


02:16:169 (42,43) - 42換成k , 43delete
我覺得原來那個好一點>3<

02:35:969 (247) - delete
Ok!!

02:56:969 (440,441,442) - kkd 因為音調下降
03:01:083 (462,463,464) - ^
03:02:455 (469,470,471) - ^
03:06:569 (491,492,493) - ^
雖然音調下降,但整體而言也是高音的
而且這裡是冷靜段,我不想pattern太複雜
所以放kkk

03:20:112 (537) - d
暫時轉了,而且轉了03:19:941 - 做k


03:50:455 (53,54,55) - 放成1/6的? 跟前面03:44:969 (2,3,4,5) - 一樣
ok轉了

04:24:398 (389,390) - dd 都跟之前的MOD一樣 沒改的話就不用看了
04:27:398 (409,410) - kd
04:29:883 (426,427) - dd
04:29:883 (422,423) - dd
04:32:883 (446,447) - kd
04:35:369 (464,465) - dd
04:38:369 (484,485) - kd
04:40:855 (501,502) - dd
04:43:855 (520,521) - kd
對不起沒改><
Good Luck~
謝謝modding ><,EXPLOSION!!!!!!
sing216
超級遲來的mod Orz 我實在太懶啦~~
又一首串圖,今次難度仲更加高 lol

Inner Oni
kiri位基本上都係follow住sound effect,以而家既pattern我已經覺得好好. _(:3」∠)_
主要係有部份聽起來比較明顯既sound effect隔開左所以比較在意。(xxx move to xxx 個d部份既mod就係)

紫色=edit後更新

01:17:798 - add k? 因為呢到我認為聲音比較明顯

01:21:055 (378) - move to 01:20:541 (373) -
01:28:255 (455) - move to 01:27:827 -
01:50:026 (34) - move to 01:50:026 (34) -
01:50:026 (34) - move to 01:50:714 -


01:55:341 (67) - delete, 雖然本來都係follow sound effect, 但del呢一粒可以follow埋鋼琴聲同埋一致性更好
03:01:083 (461,462,463) - change to dkd? same part with 03:06:569 (490,491,492) -

03:08:798 (496,498,500,502,504,506,508,510) - delete? 音符改成以漸入既方式 如下圖

其實都係早前test完之後覺得呢個位有d違和感而諗出黎既意見lol 但我同意你講有sound effect所以你加入去都好正常。
之後我而家番黎再聽番,以下應該就係我感到有違和感既地方。
03:12:914 (508,509,510) - delete 因為呢到冇左主要既sound effect,同埋03:07:428 - 既sound effect同呢到係相連。


04:02:883 (158) - move to 04:03:741 -
04:05:626 (188) - move to 04:06:483 -
04:07:341 (207) - move to 04:07:855 -

04:14:198 (281,282) - change to dk? same part with 04:16:941 (312,313) - and 04:19:683 (343,344) - 聽起來更適合同埋呢part好多dkkdkkdkk w

Hope my advice can help you, Good Luck!!!!! :)
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

sing216 wrote:

超級遲來的mod Orz 我實在太懶啦~~
又一首串圖,今次難度仲更加高 lol

Inner Oni
kiri位基本上都係follow住sound effect,以而家既pattern我已經覺得好好. _(:3」∠)_
主要係有部份聽起來比較明顯既sound effect隔開左所以比較在意。(xxx move to xxx 個d部份既mod就係)

紫色=edit後更新

01:17:798 - add k? 因為呢到我認為聲音比較明顯

01:21:055 (378) - move to 01:20:541 (373) -
01:28:255 (455) - move to 01:27:827 -
01:50:026 (34) - move to 01:50:026 (34) -
01:50:026 (34) - move to 01:50:714 -
Ok changed :D



01:55:341 (67) - delete, 雖然本來都係follow sound effect, 但del呢一粒可以follow埋鋼琴聲同埋一致性更好
03:01:083 (461,462,463) - change to dkd? same part with 03:06:569 (490,491,492) -

03:08:798 (496,498,500,502,504,506,508,510) - delete? 音符改成以漸入既方式 如下圖

其實都係早前test完之後覺得呢個位有d違和感而諗出黎既意見lol 但我同意你講有sound effect所以你加入去都好正常。
之後我而家番黎再聽番,以下應該就係我感到有違和感既地方。
03:12:914 (508,509,510) - delete 因為呢到冇左主要既sound effect,同埋03:07:428 - 既sound effect同呢到係相連。
->emm,跟sfx我就應該放ge
但係考慮到consistency,我都係決定remove
不過只係暫時性...changed temporarily anyways :D

但係個sound effect都好明顯下...無左呢3粒音會好怪
好似會無左連貫性,所以都係維持


04:02:883 (158) - move to 04:03:741 -
04:05:626 (188) - move to 04:06:483 -
04:07:341 (207) - move to 04:07:855 -

04:14:198 (281,282) - change to dk? same part with 04:16:941 (312,313) - and 04:19:683 (343,344) - 聽起來更適合同埋呢part好多dkkdkkdkk w

Hope my advice can help you, Good Luck!!!!! :)
Snowy Heat
Hi~ Your request from topic p/5787990

General:

Better to make the volume of hitsoulds a bit lower at the beggining of the map.

Map:

01:23:882 (406) - according to the song this should be k (suggesting switching it to k ofc) so i'd rather switch 01:23:796 (405) to d.
01:26:196 (429) - for me d here sounds really strange, feels like the pattern doesn't fit here at all. I'd rather switch to d.
01:34:853 (522) - just again d sounds strange here, better switch to k and 01:34:767 (521) to d if you want.
01:36:139 - maybe add a note? Because feels empty in here.
01:59:198 (94) - k maybe.
02:20:541 - add a note (?), tune is just begging me to add a not here D:
02:24:741 (132,133) - switching these two to opposite will sound better.
02:26:712 - this one also seems like it has to have k in here.
02:32:626 (215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223) - it seems to me that this part should be in 1/6 according to melody.
02:38:112 (269,270,271,272) - kdkd will be better here.
03:01:255 (463) - d according to the music. And my finger kinda wants to press d instead of k.
03:02:626 (470) - ^
03:06:741 (492) - ^
04:09:826 (229) - same as 01:23:882 (406) that i wrote the first.
04:20:798 (350) - ^

Don't know what else to say, just wish you good luck~
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Hitsu wrote:

Hi~ Your request from topic p/5787990

General:

Better to make the volume of hitsoulds a bit lower at the beggining of the map.
change to soft 60%

Map:

01:23:882 (406) - according to the song this should be k (suggesting switching it to k ofc) so i'd rather switch 01:23:796 (405) to d.
will think about it...the drum here is k but the sound effect is low pitch here,that's d...
will think about your point :thinking:

01:26:196 (429) - for me d here sounds really strange, feels like the pattern doesn't fit here at all. I'd rather switch to d.
From here,I change the whole thing to kkdkdkkdkk...
01:34:853 (522) - just again d sounds strange here, better switch to k and 01:34:767 (521) to d if you want.
same as 01:23:882 (406) -
01:36:139 - maybe add a note? Because feels empty in here.
I want here to be consistent with 01:25:167 - ,no change.
01:59:198 (94) - k maybe.
map it background sound effect here,not the piano,so I would keep this as kkd
02:20:541 - add a note (?), tune is just begging me to add a not here D:
I want to give a break here(no super long stream here XDD),so no change
02:24:741 (132,133) - switching these two to opposite will sound better.
changed :D
02:26:712 - this one also seems like it has to have k in here.
same reason as 02:20:541
02:32:626 (215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223) - it seems to me that this part should be in 1/6 according to melody.
No I think?The sound effect remains 1/4...
02:38:112 (269,270,271,272) - kdkd will be better here.
Will think about it...questionable
03:01:255 (463) - d according to the music. And my finger kinda wants to press d instead of k.
03:02:626 (470) - ^
03:06:741 (492) - ^
I see your points,but explained in previous mod
The piano pitch is quite hard in this section
I know changing to d here can reflects the pitch change
but the d hitsound doesn't fit the music at all,so no change :l

04:09:826 (229) - same as 01:23:882 (406) that i wrote the first.
04:20:798 (350) - ^
same as 01:23:882 (406) -

Don't know what else to say, just wish you good luck~
Thanks for modding :)
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-
In game mod ~
22:00 iloveyou4ever: 還有想問一下有一個位置
22:00 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 好的 w
22:00 iloveyou4ever: 01:59:879 - 02:05:365 - ,這裡我跟sound effect會不會比較好
22:01 iloveyou4ever: 01:54:394 ~ 01:59:879 -我是跟sound effect的,所以map成kkd k d k d kkd...等等
22:01 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 我覺得現在這樣很好耶
22:01 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 同時都有跟到
22:02 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 我反而覺得前面那個 kkd k d kkd 有點太死板
22:02 iloveyou4ever: 那我改一改ww
22:04 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 我覺得 01:56:279- 和 01:58:765- 可以拿掉試試看
22:05 iloveyou4ever: 01:56:279 - 我不想這裡突然斷一斷
22:05 iloveyou4ever: 好像會影響結構
22:05 iloveyou4ever: 01:58那個我拿掉了:D
22:06 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 那拿掉 01:56:708 如何 (?
22:06 iloveyou4ever: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7242746
22:06 iloveyou4ever: 我改成這樣可以嗎?
22:06 iloveyou4ever: 好的
22:07 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 再加上把 01:56:194 補上去,好像不錯 XD
22:08 iloveyou4ever: 補上去了w
22:08 iloveyou4ever: 01:56:108 - 這個轉k會不會較好(突出琴聲)
22:10 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7242783
22:10 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 那我可能會改成這樣
22:11 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 然後第二段變成 http://puu.sh/tPrmv/01ff1fe6ed.jpg
22:11 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 可是這樣我怕改動你原本的結構太多
22:12 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 不希望中間斷掉的話或許也可以考慮 http://puu.sh/tPrqv/9f1c1508cf.jpg
22:12 iloveyou4ever: em...
22:13 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 這樣我覺得節奏會稍微活躍一點,不過你不喜歡的話也不要緊 xD
22:14 iloveyou4ever: 我照你的提議再改動了一些
22:14 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 嗯嗯
22:17 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 02:18:565- 考不考慮把 71 改成 d,然後把 72 remove 掉呢 (?
22:18 iloveyou4ever: 02:18:737 - 這個beat很重,我不想無視他
22:19 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 噢,你同時也有跟鼓聲
22:19 iloveyou4ever: 對,我不想offbeat
22:20 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 那把 71 72 改成 dk 怎麼樣
22:21 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 因為旋律在那裏有種嘎然而止的感覺,相對而言雖然 beat 很重,卻沒有旋律那麼清晰,而且比較起來感覺比較高 (?
22:21 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 哇我怎麼連用兩個比較 xD
22:21 iloveyou4ever: ww
22:21 iloveyou4ever: emm...也可以:D
22:21 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: ><
22:22 iloveyou4ever: 效果挺好:o
22:22 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: Yay xD
22:23 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 除此之外我好像就沒有找到什麼可以改的部分了
22:23 iloveyou4ever: 02:22:508 - 這7連音會不會有較好的組合?
22:23 iloveyou4ever: o.o是嗎w
22:23 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 我的話可能會用 kkddkkd
22:24 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 有一種階段式往下掉的感覺
22:24 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 也比較呼應前面的 k k d k k d
22:24 iloveyou4ever: 哇想得很周全w
22:24 iloveyou4ever: 好的改了
22:24 iloveyou4ever: 02:50:108 -
22:25 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: kkkdkkd 或 kkddkkd 看你覺得哪個聽起來比較順耳 XD
22:25 iloveyou4ever: 還有這個位置
22:25 iloveyou4ever: kkddkkd比較好w
22:25 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 好 XD
22:25 iloveyou4ever: 我聽到02:50:279 - 這裡其實還是1/6
22:26 iloveyou4ever: 會不會轉1/6比較好?
22:26 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 的確
22:26 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 如果想要簡化的話我會用 http://puu.sh/tPsmZ/b643b7f9a8.jpg
22:27 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 轉 1/6 的話大概 http://puu.sh/tPsrF/ed0c342002.jpg
22:27 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 不過我覺得轉 1/6 對玩家來說辨識度反而低
22:28 iloveyou4ever: 對...
22:28 iloveyou4ever: 但是音樂是1/6 T.T
22:29 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 那就看你要怎麼取捨了 (?
22:29 iloveyou4ever: http://puu.sh/tPsCA.jpg
22:29 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: (dkkd)kd d 會變成前半是跟旋律,後半是跟鼓的感覺
22:30 iloveyou4ever: 還是選擇1/6+1/4吧...
22:30 iloveyou4ever: 02:50:537 - 我覺得加一個音比較好,因為旋律還在的
22:30 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 也行 XD
22:31 iloveyou4ever: 應該沒其他問題了w
22:31 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 好 XD
22:31 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 要把昨天 Mod 的部分補上嗎
22:31 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 我應該還記得一些
22:32 iloveyou4ever: 好的:D
22:33 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 01:18:392- 這邊把斷點改掉,350 往前挪一個 1/4,同 01:29:363- 和另一段 kiai 的同樣部分
22:34 iloveyou4ever: 01:18:478 - 即是remove這個音?
22:35 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 350 原本在 01:18:563- 不是嗎,昨天的時候 (?
22:35 iloveyou4ever: 01:18:478 - 可是這裡有旋律o.o
22:35 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 然後被我往前挪到 01:18:478-
22:35 iloveyou4ever: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7242986
22:35 iloveyou4ever: 現在是這樣o.o
22:36 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 啊,我是說昨天 mod 的部分 O:
22:36 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 如果你需要留作紀錄的話 :O
22:36 iloveyou4ever: 不是昨天吧w
22:36 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 還是前天 ? XD
22:36 iloveyou4ever: 啊原來你是說留紀錄...
22:37 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 是的 ww
22:37 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 當時應該還修改了 03:20:794 這段
22:37 iloveyou4ever: 對 :D
22:37 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 以及 03:33:737 的短串
22:38 iloveyou4ever: 你是要寫下https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7243006
22:38 iloveyou4ever: 啊我都不知打了什麼w
22:38 iloveyou4ever: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7243006
22:38 iloveyou4ever: 我改成這樣 :D
22:39 iloveyou4ever: 03:33:994 - 這裡你原本是提議dkdk,但我覺得dkkd比較好
22:39 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 嗯嗯 xD
22:39 iloveyou4ever: 轉成dkkd可是呼應03:28:508 - 這些位置
22:39 iloveyou4ever: *可以
22:39 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 的確
22:40 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 然後當時還改了甚麼 XD 不記得了
22:40 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: 大概就這樣吧 (?
22:40 iloveyou4ever: 應該就這樣ww
22:40 -[ ix Ishida xi ]-: Ok xD
22:40 iloveyou4ever: 嗯嗯,我印象差不多了XD
22:40 iloveyou4ever: 你savelog再post吧w
Surono
the power of IN-TREE-NUTS!
dont cat cat dont cat cat dont
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)و
17:13 iloveyou4ever: I can't play it too ww
17:13 Surono: oh you can.......
17:13 iloveyou4ever: Thanks for playing anyways~~ :D
17:13 iloveyou4ever: no I can't...
17:13 Surono: 04:04:679 (175,178) - every this
17:14 Surono: you can make this as don :^ I think that sound not higher like 04:04:765 (176,179) -
17:15 Surono: just that and similar others. okey the other part are dkkdkkd confirmed leeeeellllllll
17:15 iloveyou4ever: 04:01:937 - I want to consistent with this note
17:16 iloveyou4ever: yes I know your point,but I think keeping dkkdkkd...sth like this can make the whole structure better
17:17 iloveyou4ever: but I would try to add some variation for the kiai times maybe :D but not her
17:17 iloveyou4ever: *here
17:17 Surono: `_L` dem
17:18 Surono: 04:13:079 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289) - ,,,,,,,,,, this spam and I think there have different sound
17:18 Surono: 04:13:079 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276) - and 04:14:279 (276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289) -
17:19 Surono: 04:18:222 (320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350) - and actually this good. and okey just this `_L` can I get kudos *PLAK*
17:19 Surono: jk lool
17:21 iloveyou4ever: testing~
17:28 iloveyou4ever: emm...
17:29 Surono: a
17:30 iloveyou4ever: changed some of them :D
17:30 iloveyou4ever: but SR decrease to 6* ww
17:30 Surono: `_L` dem sr
17:30 Surono: 6 = sick, 9 = nein (germany "no") rip not sick map.. now is sick map
17:30 Surono: demm memes
17:32 iloveyou4ever: osu! needs no meme w
17:32 Surono: wwwwwwwwwww
Raphalge
this'll probably be a pretty shit mod cause I can't really mod stream maps and this already has 4 pages of mods.

[eplis]
01:08:279 (273,274,275,276) - dk kd?
01:13:764 (310,311,312,313) - ^
01:18:650 (351) - move to 01:18:564 - ? Feels weird ending streams on blue ticks.
01:29:622 (465) - ^ but move to 01:29:622 (465) -
01:51:652 (50) - k maybe?
01:59:709 (98) - ^
02:09:823 (159) - ^
02:32:452 (214) - ^
02:49:823 (384) - d for consistency with the dkkd after it?
03:09:480 (500) - delete?
03:12:223 (508) - ^
03:14:966 (515) - ^ the section feels unnecessarily long otherwise
03:41:595 (695) - d? dkdk 1/6's feel really odd :?
03:47:080 (19) - ^
03:58:052 (115) - ^
04:04:595 (174) - suggest moving to 04:04:509 -
04:27:138 (402,403,404,405) - dk kd?
04:32:623 (439,440,441,442) - ^
04:38:109 (477,478,479,480) - ^

sorry for so many ^ and I hope atleast something will be helpful :o
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Raphalge wrote:

this'll probably be a pretty shit mod cause I can't really mod stream maps and this already has 4 pages of mods.
The first two pages are full of meme...

[eplis]
01:08:279 (273,274,275,276) - dk kd?
change to kd dk instead
01:13:764 (310,311,312,313) - ^
^
01:18:650 (351) - move to 01:18:564 - ? Feels weird ending streams on blue ticks.
it's how the sound effect performs :l,but yes this is hard to play...I will consider this
01:29:622 (465) - ^ but move to 01:29:622 (465) -
^
01:51:652 (50) - k maybe?
this has lower pitch compared to 01:51:995 - ,so no change
01:59:709 (98) - ^
this has lower pitch compared to 01:59:538 - ,no change :l
02:09:823 (159) - ^
The pitch for these piano sounds(02:09:566 - to 02:10:080 -)are the same,I think changing to k is not suitable
02:32:452 (214) - ^
Instead I change the one for 02:32:338 -
02:49:823 (384) - d for consistency with the dkkd after it?
I want to emphasis the high pitch melody here,so I put k here as to reflect the outstanding pitch for the sound effect here.
03:09:480 (500) - delete?
follow the background sound effect here,I think no need to delete
03:12:223 (508) - ^
^
03:14:966 (515) - ^ the section feels unnecessarily long otherwise
I think it's fine :o(idk how to explain the reason...my english is bad)
03:41:595 (695) - d? dkdk 1/6's feel really odd :?
here 03:41:595 - has the higher pitch compared to last note,I think it's fine
03:47:080 (19) - ^
same as above
03:58:052 (115) - ^
^
04:04:595 (174) - suggest moving to 04:04:509 -
reason explained at the third point
04:27:138 (402,403,404,405) - dk kd?
04:32:623 (439,440,441,442) - ^
04:38:109 (477,478,479,480) - ^
^change all to kd dk

sorry for so many ^ and I hope atleast something will be helpful :o
Thanks for modding :)
Stefan
[ΕΛΠΙΣ]
01:25:336 (420) - kkdkk feels a bit random if you compare the previous and coming pattern and usage of kat. try using kddkk instead.
02:31:766 (208,209,210,211,212,213,214) - I don't find the k usage here very well, 02:32:223 (212,213) - should be d for sure, optional you can make 02:31:880 (209) - as d too since it's slightly deeper than 02:31:423 (205,206) - .
02:43:766 (334,335,336,337,338) - since the music builds up to be lighter I don't find to repeat kdkkd works well. Use kkddk instead.
03:47:622 (25) - k at this spot is extremely strange, d sounds and works by far better.

Quite a solid map, it's something different to see parts like the first and last kiai not being continously mapped - I'd expect a big ass stream but it's something nice and interesting you didn't and split them into small combos instead, that's cool.

The flow is pretty good, although I couldn't play the longer streams properly, the "own" rhythm you add works good. You also asked for the consistency which felt good, also by checking the difficulty in the editor I barely found stuff (basically everything I've pointed above was an issue due consistency). I just had the feeling you tried to map several sounds with one specific note sound, mostly k. But that might be just me.

Hopefully you can use anything of the said things above, good luck!
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Stefan wrote:

[ΕΛΠΙΣ]
01:25:336 (420) - kkdkk feels a bit random if you compare the previous and coming pattern and usage of kat. try using kddkk instead.
I map by the sound effect pitch here.
Since I use 01:25:079 - for d as it's low pitch,and I want to emphasis the high pitch sound effect at 01:25:593 -,therefore I put kkdkk here

02:31:766 (208,209,210,211,212,213,214) - I don't find the k usage here very well, 02:32:223 (212,213) - should be d for sure, optional you can make 02:31:880 (209) - as d too since it's slightly deeper than 02:31:423 (205,206) - .
Yes I see your point,changed 02:32:223 (212,213) - to d,but I don't change 02:31:880 (209) - to d as I think k hitsound fits the music more
02:43:766 (334,335,336,337,338) - since the music builds up to be lighter I don't find to repeat kdkkd works well. Use kkddk instead.
Yes kkddk is much better :D
03:47:622 (25) - k at this spot is extremely strange, d sounds and works by far better.
Ok changed as well

Quite a solid map, it's something different to see parts like the first and last kiai not being continously mapped - I'd expect a big ass stream but it's something nice and interesting you didn't and split them into small combos instead, that's cool.
I tried to put long stream at the last kiai time,but I think it doesn't fit the music at all...so I cut them into shorter streams,which is easier and gives a better emphasising on the music.
The flow is pretty good, although I couldn't play the longer streams properly, the "own" rhythm you add works good.
Thanks ><
You also asked for the consistency which felt good, also by checking the difficulty in the editor I barely found stuff (basically everything I've pointed above was an issue due consistency). I just had the feeling you tried to map several sounds with one specific note sound, mostly k. But that might be just me.
>I just had the feeling you tried to map several sounds with one specific note sound, mostly k.
Rip my english :< I can't understand it...but I hope the consistency is fine to other players as well :D


Hopefully you can use anything of the said things above, good luck!
Thanks for modding :)
Asagi Mutsuki
From the WWMTMBWDRWMTMSWHTOSRTOAHOMCF Taiko Queue, sorry for not being Jerry :P

Inner Oni
  1. 00:05:362 - This sound much, much better as a don tbh, having this as a kat hurts the emphasis of the high pitched backup vocals at 00:05:762 and the next kat
  2. 00:27:562 - Maybe change this to a big kat? Feels more natural to play
  3. 00:36:962 - eh for the previous pattern you had dk for no melody (for example 00:30:562 and 00:32:162) while having kk (for example 00:35:362 and 00:28:962), and there's a sharp note here so why not have k owo
  4. 01:06:907 (264,265) - I'd rather have this as dk to maintain consistency with 01:05:536 (255,256) (or just change the latter to kd since every other similar is a kd too but imo this as dk sounds better)
  5. 01:11:022 (292,293) - ^
  6. 04:25:765 (393,394) - ^
  7. 04:28:508 (412,413) - ^
  8. 04:31:251 (430,431) - ^
  9. 04:36:737 (468,469) - ^
  10. 04:42:222 (504,505) - ^
  11. 01:18:650 - Move this to 01:18:564 ? The way you have it now kinda reduces the impact at 01:18:736 which is at a strong beat and 01:18:564 has a lower pitch than this point too
  12. 01:29:622 - ^
  13. 01:33:307 (505,506) - The melody here isn't the same as the 01:32:364 (494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501,502) so maybe change this to dk to bring out the slight change in the music
  14. 02:10:395 - Maybe change this to a kat to emphasize the high pitch at 02:10:509 ?
  15. 02:33:823 (228,229,230,231) - owo While I like the concept of the gradual sv change, its so small that it basically doesn't have any effect on the map lol Maybe change the increase to 0.02 ? eh its just a suggestion, its perfectly fine the way it is now lol
  16. 02:48:909 - This sound more like a don since the pitch here is pretty low
  17. 02:54:909 (430,431) - Isn't there 1/6 between these notes too? Why did you ignore it when you mapped all of the 1/6 before this lol
  18. 03:27:908 - Delete this to emphasize the 1/2 melody? Also see 03:49:594 (48,49,50,51) you had 1/2 here, might as well be more consistent :P

Well its been a long time since I've last modded, sorry for nitpicking maybe a little too much ;w; The map (especially the streams) is really fun to play! I also like the "all dons then all kats" pattern at the very end owo

Good luck !
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

cdhsausageboy wrote:

From the WWMTMBWDRWMTMSWHTOSRTOAHOMCF Taiko Queue, sorry for not being Jerry :P it's fine ww

Inner Oni
  1. 00:05:362 - This sound much, much better as a don tbh, having this as a kat hurts the emphasis of the high pitched backup vocals at 00:05:762 and the next kat
    Nice catch :D
  2. 00:27:562 - Maybe change this to a big kat? Feels more natural to play
    But I think K K doesn't fit the music at all :<
  3. 00:36:962 - eh for the previous pattern you had dk for no melody (for example 00:30:562 and 00:32:162) while having kk (for example 00:35:362 and 00:28:962), and there's a sharp note here so why not have k owo
    my English is bad and idk how to explain XDD,I just feel d k fits the music more better at this point
  4. 01:06:907 (264,265) - I'd rather have this as dk to maintain consistency with 01:05:536 (255,256) (or just change the latter to kd since every other similar is a kd too but imo this as dk sounds better)
  5. 01:11:022 (292,293) - ^
  6. 04:25:765 (393,394) - ^
  7. 04:28:508 (412,413) - ^
  8. 04:31:251 (430,431) - ^
  9. 04:36:737 (468,469) - ^
  10. 04:42:222 (504,505) - ^
    I am sorry,but I map by the sound effect here,01:06:907 - the sound effect is like high-low pitch,that's why I put kd here
    I think consistency is not so important here.
  11. 01:18:650 - Move this to 01:18:564 ? The way you have it now kinda reduces the impact at 01:18:736 which is at a strong beat and 01:18:564 has a lower pitch than this point too
    I see your point but I map to the sound effect here,I agree that >it now kinda reduces the impact at 01:18:736 which is at a strong beat and 01:18:564 has a lower pitch than this point too<
    I will consider it later :D
  12. 01:29:622 - ^ same as above
  13. 01:33:307 (505,506) - The melody here isn't the same as the 01:32:364 (494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501,502) so maybe change this to dk to bring out the slight change in the music
    I want to emphasis the drum sound at 01:33:307 - ,and it's like high-low pitch,that's why I map as kd here
  14. 02:10:395 - Maybe change this to a kat to emphasize the high pitch at 02:10:509 ?
    it's already kat XDD
  15. 02:33:823 (228,229,230,231) - owo While I like the concept of the gradual sv change, its so small that it basically doesn't have any effect on the map lol Maybe change the increase to 0.02 ? eh its just a suggestion, its perfectly fine the way it is now lol
    0.02 is too high I think,if I changed to 1.02 and 1.04 etc,for 02:34:166 - it will become 1.1x,which is too high to me.
  16. 02:48:909 - This sound more like a don since the pitch here is pretty low
    02:48:909 (376,377,378,379) - These four timestamps are the climax for this kiai time,and the pitch is quite high,
    Yes 02:48:909 - has a lower pitch,but I prefer emphasising the music more than mapping to pitch here.
  17. 02:54:909 (430,431) - Isn't there 1/6 between these notes too? Why did you ignore it when you mapped all of the 1/6 before this lol
    I map to the drum and bass starting from 02:54:738 - as it's more dominant and the music starts going calm for the next bar
    so I don't want to put high density 1/6 notes here
  18. 03:27:908 - Delete this to emphasize the 1/2 melody? Also see 03:49:594 (48,49,50,51) you had 1/2 here, might as well be more consistent :PNice catch :D changed

Well its been a long time since I've last modded, sorry for nitpicking maybe a little too much ;w; The map (especially the streams) is really fun to play! I also like the "all dons then all kats" pattern at the very end owo
Glad to hear that you enjoy it >3<

Good luck !
Thanks for modding :)
Skylish
我黎呃KDS :D

[Timing]

* You wanna stay the overall BPM right from 02:56 to 03:07 is 175 x0.9 =157.5 ~157.

> My timing check: https://puu.sh/ugmUy/da59d4b038.rar I have done all barline omittion and SV changes. Please also check it by yourself.

[ELPIS]

(temperately I used the old timing, remember to shift notes with the new timing!!! esp. after 03:07:084 - )

> 02:04:337 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136) - how about k kdk kkd? Those high-pitch melody falling at 02:04:337 - / 02:04:679 - / 02:05:022 - should be HLed as kat except 02:05:022 - (because you are going to emphasize the upcoming instrumental part). The flow is better now imo.

> 02:07:937 - this should be expected as k even though you want to have a repeatitive patterns at 02:07:937 (147,148,149,150) - and 02:08:679 (151,152,153,154) - . Since 02:08:108 - is a new start, 02:07:937 - is still at the previous session, kat is expected and preferred.

> From 02:08:108 - to 02:09:479 - , I think a very concrete D should be put on every on-beat al though the pitch of 02:08:108 (148,149,150) - sound like K dd. Here's the rationale behind: you follow D=on-beat before; by having 02:08:108 - mapped as D, the suggestion at 02:07:937 - becomes more reasonable; 02:09:479 (156,157,158,159,160,161) - this bunch of notes share the same pitch (don).

i.e. It is a more familiar pattern, I would say...

> From 02:56:124 - to 03:07:079 - , no 1/6 ?

> 03:25:850 - a don can put here so that a consistent 'n n nnn n n nnn ...' can be shown.

> There are some 1/6 available at this session (03:18:050 - to 03:39:993 - ), not only the one at 03:33:993 - , it feels strange. All or nothing.

> 03:39:821 - there is one more note (don) right here to fill the sfx up.

Okay leave all the modding stuff to Chrom. :D

Good luck!
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Skylish wrote:

我黎呃KDS :D

[Timing]

* You wanna stay the overall BPM right from 02:56 to 03:07 is 175 x0.9 =157.5 ~157.

> My timing check: https://puu.sh/ugmUy/da59d4b038.rar I have done all barline omittion and SV changes. Please also check it by yourself.
adopted

[ELPIS]

(temperately I used the old timing, remember to shift notes with the new timing!!! esp. after 03:07:084 - )

> 02:04:337 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136) - how about k kdk kkd? Those high-pitch melody falling at 02:04:337 - / 02:04:679 - / 02:05:022 - should be HLed as kat except 02:05:022 - (because you are going to emphasize the upcoming instrumental part). The flow is better now imo.
Nice changed!!

> 02:07:937 - this should be expected as k even though you want to have a repeatitive patterns at 02:07:937 (147,148,149,150) - and 02:08:679 (151,152,153,154) - . Since 02:08:108 - is a new start, 02:07:937 - is still at the previous session, kat is expected and preferred.

> From 02:08:108 - to 02:09:479 - , I think a very concrete D should be put on every on-beat al though the pitch of 02:08:108 (148,149,150) - sound like K dd. Here's the rationale behind: you follow D=on-beat before; by having 02:08:108 - mapped as D, the suggestion at 02:07:937 - becomes more reasonable; 02:09:479 (156,157,158,159,160,161) - this bunch of notes share the same pitch (don).
Accept the above all^
The new section is starting from 02:07:937 - lol,and I think K suits 02:08:108 - more,as a result I am not going to change here :<

i.e. It is a more familiar pattern, I would say...

> From 02:56:124 - to 03:07:079 - , no 1/6 ?
The music is going calm here and it's not suitable to put 1/6(high density)notes here,therefore I put 1/4 instead

> 03:25:850 - a don can put here so that a consistent 'n n nnn n n nnn ...' can be shown.
Also add one at 03:26:194 -

> There are some 1/6 available at this session (03:18:050 - to 03:39:993 - ), not only the one at 03:33:993 - , it feels strange. All or nothing.
This section is not the most climax section in the song,so I put only few 1/6 patterns,as to emphasis the climax part(starting from 03:39:994 - onwards)by using 1/6

> 03:39:821 - there is one more note (don) right here to fill the sfx up.
sorry I think there's no sfx here :<

Okay leave all the modding stuff to Chrom. :D

Good luck!
Thanks for timing and modding :D
KamizonoShinobu
Good luck on this mapset :^)
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Chocola_2287 wrote:

Good luck on this mapset :^)
Thanks my lover :D
Q____X
Hi ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ from my modding queue.

There's a lot of mods, so i gave you just a few suggestions

[Inner Oni]
01:15:736 - 01:15:907 - Maybe put notes in that spaces? i can hear a sound here, you can put like this or this
03:18:909 (528,529,530) - For me it's better kkd, fits more in my opinion, if you change that, you need to change 03:24:395 (568,569,570) - 03:29:881 (605,606,607) - 03:35:366 (650,651,652) -
03:31:852 (624) - k?
03:32:709 (632) - d?
04:49:081 (542,543) - ctrl + g?

Sorry for the short mod, the map it's really good and i can't find problems.

Good luck with rank :)
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Q____X wrote:

Hi ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ from my modding queue.

There's a lot of mods, so i gave you just a few suggestions

[Inner Oni]
01:15:736 - 01:15:907 - Maybe put notes in that spaces? i can hear a sound here, you can put like this or this
01:15:907 -not putting it because there is a finisher after this...and 175bpm 1/4 finisher is not good
01:15:736 -not putting it because I want 01:15:907 - this note to emphasis the finisher

03:18:909 (528,529,530) - For me it's better kkd, fits more in my opinion, if you change that, you need to change 03:24:395 (568,569,570) - 03:29:881 (605,606,607) - 03:35:366 (650,651,652) -
Nice!!also change note like in 03:18:909 - to k
03:31:852 (624) - k?
03:32:709 (632) - d?
03:31:766 (623,624,625,626,627,628) - these five notes have lower pitch than 03:32:452 (629,630,631,632,633,634) - these
so I put less k in the former and more for the latter

04:49:081 (542,543) - ctrl + g?
will consider about it...

Sorry for the short mod, the map it's really good and i can't find problems.

Good luck with rank :)
Thanks for modding :)
Doyak
[Inner Oni]
* 00:30:963 - 00:31:063 - Imo there should be notes here. As you did on 00:38:963 (86,87,88) - 00:43:763 (115,116,117) - 00:50:163 (155,156,157) - you filled out these gaps when there are more vocals present. That felt just a bit of inconsistent because 00:30:963 - was the only missing vocal beat.
* 01:04:113 (244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - I'd use kdkkddk here, mainly because 01:04:659 (250,251) - felt way different from each other, and 01:04:659 - is a very shrieking sound so imo k fits better.
* 01:08:536 - 01:14:022 - I doubt if putting notes here was a good choice. The drums are not like that but you made it seem like it's the case, and it's just same as 01:05:793 - 01:07:164 - etc. so I don't see why only these to be different. Same for the last part too.
* 01:15:736 - Might add a k here, because it's more intense than 01:09:993 (285,286,287,288) - so I think it needs more emphasis.
* 01:20:107 - would use a pattern with k here, as it has the highest pitch around it.
* 01:29:450 (465,466) - Sudden offbeat pattern? You didn't do this on any other places.
* 01:51:395 - It's quite a clear piano sound so filling it out seems better than just using same don 1/2s when they're clearly different.
* 02:50:109 (387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394) - They should all be in 1/6. 1/4s here don't fit with anything.
* 02:56:982 (441,442,443) - 03:01:089 (463,464,465) - 03:02:466 (470,471,472) - 03:06:574 (492,493,494) - 03:18:909 (528,529,530) - 03:19:595 (533,534,535) - 03:23:023 (561,562,563) - 03:24:395 (568,569,570) - 03:25:081 (573,574,575) - 03:28:509 (598,599,600) - 03:29:881 (605,606,607) - 03:35:366 (650,651,652) - Should be 1/6s too. I don't think 1/4s can work as a simplification of obvious 1/6 sounds. It's also inconsistent with things like 02:45:995 (352,353,354,355) - 02:46:680 (358,359,360,361) - 03:33:995 (642,643,644,645) - where you actually used 1/6s for same sounds.
* 03:23:881 - 03:23:966 - 03:34:852 - 03:34:938 - Any reason to not map this and leave a big empty space?
* 03:26:281 - From here there are much more clear 1/4 beats but I don't see any density change from the previous part. Repeating same pattern 03:26:109 (581,582,583) - 03:26:452 (584,585,586) - over a different part doesn't make sense as well. Imo you should just fill all obvious 1/4s out here.
* 04:01:766 (145) - You could remove this note to show that the music actually has a stop there unlike 01:15:822 - . The current pattern feels too plain.

I can see how the notes for the streams on the first/last kiai are constructed but they looked a bit messy for me. Mainly because there are almost no 3 or more consecutive notes with same colors, the trains looked like more of a mix of random dons and kats rather than actually creating a solid pattern that focuses on specific sounds. Also the spots you disconnected the streams are so random that it makes me wonder how you're perceiving the music and where you wanted to emphasize more than others.

That's my 2 cents, good luck~
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Doyak wrote:

[Inner Oni]
* 00:30:963 - 00:31:063 - Imo there should be notes here. As you did on 00:38:963 (86,87,88) - 00:43:763 (115,116,117) - 00:50:163 (155,156,157) - you filled out these gaps when there are more vocals present. That felt just a bit of inconsistent because 00:30:963 - was the only missing vocal beat.
mapping to the sound effect here,and decide the note(k/d)by the vocal here,and I want to keep the pattern simple as n n n nnn n n here in order to keep the consistency
* 01:04:113 (244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - I'd use kdkkddk here, mainly because 01:04:659 (250,251) - felt way different from each other, and 01:04:659 - is a very shrieking sound so imo k fits better.
yep,changed :D
* 01:08:536 - 01:14:022 - I doubt if putting notes here was a good choice. The drums are not like that but you made it seem like it's the case, and it's just same as 01:05:793 - 01:07:164 - etc. so I don't see why only these to be different. Same for the last part too.
I see your point...but I think if I take out these notes,the pattern will be so boring and lack of continuity...but yes there's no drum sound here,I will decide it later
* 01:15:736 - Might add a k here, because it's more intense than 01:09:993 (285,286,287,288) - so I think it needs more emphasis.
change to d kkd K...
* 01:20:107 - would use a pattern with k here, as it has the highest pitch around it.
emphasis the outstanding drum sound here,no change
* 01:29:450 (465,466) - Sudden offbeat pattern? You didn't do this on any other places.
I did it on 01:18:479 - 04:04:423 - and 04:15:395 - too XD
* 01:51:395 - It's quite a clear piano sound so filling it out seems better than just using same don 1/2s when they're clearly different.
I think these two piano sounds 01:51:480 (49,50) - are too obvious and I put d d so to emphasis them
* 02:50:109 (387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394) - They should all be in 1/6. 1/4s here don't fit with anything.
yes these are 1/6 sounds,but I think putting 1/6 in a calm section,especially after a long kiai time is not suitable :l
The beatmap strain(note density)should be higher when comes the kiai time and lower when comes the calm section.
Hope you understand that the map should not judt mapped to the music elements,but we also need to consider about the whole flow and note density...

* 02:56:982 (441,442,443) - 03:01:089 (463,464,465) - 03:02:466 (470,471,472) - 03:06:574 (492,493,494) - 03:18:909 (528,529,530) - 03:19:595 (533,534,535) - 03:23:023 (561,562,563) - 03:24:395 (568,569,570) - 03:25:081 (573,574,575) - 03:28:509 (598,599,600) - 03:29:881 (605,606,607) - 03:35:366 (650,651,652) - Should be 1/6s too. I don't think 1/4s can work as a simplification of obvious 1/6 sounds. It's also inconsistent with things like 02:45:995 (352,353,354,355) - 02:46:680 (358,359,360,361) - 03:33:995 (642,643,644,645) - where you actually used 1/6s for same sounds.
Explained,and I think for this part,though the music become a little bit more intense here,but still I don't put 1/6 here because the sound effect is not so obvious.I choose to put 1/6 for the part 03:39:995 - as it is the most intense part among these three parts.
* 03:23:881 - 03:23:966 - 03:34:852 - 03:34:938 - Any reason to not map this and leave a big empty space?
Because there is no sound effect here lol
* 03:26:281 - From here there are much more clear 1/4 beats but I don't see any density change from the previous part. Repeating same pattern 03:26:109 (581,582,583) - 03:26:452 (584,585,586) - over a different part doesn't make sense as well. Imo you should just fill all obvious 1/4s out here.
I see your point,but the 1/2 sound effect is more obvious for 03:25:595 - 03:25:766 - 03:25:938 - these parts,so I decide to divide them into triplets in order to emphasis the 1/2 sound.Also I want to prevent boring because the pattern will be the same as 03:20:109 -
* 04:01:766 (145) - You could remove this note to show that the music actually has a stop there unlike 01:15:822 - . The current pattern feels too plain.
Nice suggestion,changed :D

I can see how the notes for the streams on the first/last kiai are constructed but they looked a bit messy for me. Mainly because there are almost no 3 or more consecutive notes with same colors, the trains looked like more of a mix of random dons and kats rather than actually creating a solid pattern that focuses on specific sounds. Also the spots you disconnected the streams are so random that it makes me wonder how you're perceiving the music and where you wanted to emphasize more than others.
Well I tried different versions,but there are different modders say I disconnect the streams so randomly...
I try to focus on both the sound effect but as well as the drum sound qwq
If you think it's so random,can you give some better suggestion?I'll be appreciate if you do that :D Thanks ><


That's my 2 cents, good luck~
Thanks for modding :)
Etsu
Hi o/

Taiko mod request from my queue (NM)

[General]
Circle:
d = don - D = big don
k = kat - K = big kat

  1. -.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:45:963 (131) - change d?
  2. 01:04:840 (251) - i would remove this note note for break since confuse sound when come a velocity 175bpm also for el finish imo
  3. 01:23:879 (405) - change k? you map rhythm 1/1 k
  4. 01:43:764 (3) - feel better k here
  5. 01:47:000 (17) - d?
  6. 02:01:680 - missing note? like 01:50:709 -
  7. 02:10:395 (163) - change d?
  8. 02:20:280 (89) - change d and 02:20:366 (90,91) - control + g? sound combine better this pattern imo
  9. 02:23:452 (118) - delete and 02:23:366 (117) - cymbal strong there also
  10. 02:28:338 (172) - change k?
  11. 02:38:623 (275,276) - change d is sound similar in 02:38:795 (277,278) - imo
  12. 02:59:349 - feel missing note here
  13. 02:59:692 (456) - k? piano is low
  14. 03:00:392 - same missing
  15. 03:02:466 (470,471,472) - change d maybe for variation
  16. 04:45:566 - add note? hear sound drums 1/4 there
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Etsu wrote:

Hi o/

Taiko mod request from my queue (NM)

[General]
Circle:
d = don - D = big don
k = kat - K = big kat

  1. -.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:45:963 (131) - change d?
  2. 01:04:840 (251) - i would remove this note note for break since confuse sound when come a velocity 175bpm also for el finish imo
  3. 01:23:879 (405) - change k? you map rhythm 1/1 k
    I think it's better to put d here XD
  4. 01:43:764 (3) - feel better k here
    I want to emphasis the high pitch piano at 01:43:936 -
  5. 01:47:000 (17) - d?
    01:46:828 (16,17,18) - I think these piano sounds are similar,so I put them all k
  6. 02:01:600 - missing note? like 01:50:709 -
    map by both piano and sound fx for this part,and I think putting long notes will then focus on piano more than sfx,which leads to the mapping not balance
  7. 02:10:395 (163) - change d?
    I think kdkkdk is more consistent and structual here
  8. 02:20:280 (89) - change d and 02:20:366 (90,91) - control + g? sound combine better this pattern imo
    02:20:109 (87,88,89,90,91) - change to kkddd
  9. 02:23:452 (118) - delete and 02:23:366 (117) - cymbal strong there also
    02:23:452 - not removing this
  10. 02:28:338 (172) - change k?
    02:28:338 (172,173,174) - these three notes have obvious pitch like ddk...I think changing 02:28:338 (172) to k is not good
  11. 02:38:623 (275,276) - change d is sound similar in 02:38:795 (277,278) - imo
    02:38:452 (273,274,275,276) - these four notes have similar pitch ;w;
  12. 02:59:349 - feel missing note here
    As the section is calm here,I want to lower the note density,and I don't want to put too much note here...just focusing on main piano sound
  13. 02:59:692 (456) - k? piano is low
    already k?
  14. 03:00:392 - same missing
    explained
  15. 03:02:466 (470,471,472) - change d maybe for variation
    want to be consistent
  16. 04:45:566 - add note? hear sound drums 1/4 there
    add k here
No reply=Fixed
Thanks for modding :)
thzz
hi! from my queue
very sry for terrible late ;_;
i've considered what i can write as mod for a long orz

[Inner Oni]
  1. 02:38:452 (273,274,275,276) - i wanna divide them into (273,274) and (275,276) because of pitch change of the melody. i think changing 02:38:538 (274) - to d would work.
  2. 02:47:880 (369,370,371,372) - according the song, 1/3 rhythm begins 02:47:880 - . therefore, 1/3 patter should be began there.
  3. 02:54:223 (424,425,426) - here is where the kick is spamming. why don't you use d like 02:55:423 (433,434,435,436,437) - ? i would use kdd if i were you.
  4. 03:32:452 (629,630,631,632,633,634) - on this pattern, the most important point is 03:32:795 (633,634) - i feel. change 03:32:709 (632) - to d, and we can recognize that.
  5. 04:01:595 (144) - clearly high sound rings here. why don't you use k at this point?
    my suggestion here. use this as refference.
that's it
good luck o/~
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

thzz wrote:

hi! from my queue
very sry for terrible late ;_;
i've considered what i can write as mod for a long orz

[Inner Oni]
  1. 02:38:452 (273,274,275,276) - i wanna divide them into (273,274) and (275,276) because of pitch change of the melody. i think changing 02:38:538 (274) - to d would work.
    02:38:452 (273,274,275,276) - these four notes have similar pitch,that's why I put all k for them
  2. 02:47:880 (369,370,371,372) - according the song, 1/3 rhythm begins 02:47:880 - . therefore, 1/3 patter should be began there.
    I think it's 1/2(but I map as 1/4 for variation),I would listen to that again
  3. 02:54:223 (424,425,426) - here is where the kick is spamming. why don't you use d like 02:55:423 (433,434,435,436,437) - ? i would use kdd if i were you.
    02:54:223 (424,425,426,427,428) - these five notes have higher pitch compare to 02:55:423 (433,434,435,436,437) - these notes,that's why I put k for the former
  4. 03:32:452 (629,630,631,632,633,634) - on this pattern, the most important point is 03:32:795 (633,634) - i feel. change 03:32:709 (632) - to d, and we can recognize that.
    Nice!
  5. 04:01:595 (144) - clearly high sound rings here. why don't you use k at this point?
    my suggestion here. use this as refference.
    image

    want to emphasis the finisher at 04:01:938 - ,but I see your point...
    I will consider about it later
that's it
good luck o/~
Thanks for modding :)
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