Tomita Miyu, Onishi Saori, Ohzora Naomi, Hanazawa Kana - Hal

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vekt0r
Hi, m4m from your queue
Just modding the top 5 diffs which probably matches drain close enough
hope this mod actually helps lol
00:12:670 (2) - This slightly curved slider is more curved than the others
00:30:220 (1,2) - Same thing as extra where I would prefer these sharply attacked notes to be emphasized; I understand if you don’t want that though because there’s a thing going on there
00:38:470 (1) - ctrl-g maybe
01:03:970 (2) - Not that big a deal but sliderend stronger than sliderhead
01:18:220 (1,2,3,1) - For all of these, you alternate between making 3-1 the smallest and largest jump; I think it should be consistently largest (or close to largest), like the section earlier
00:04:666 (1) - Slider shape a bit off
00:16:870 (1) -, 00:21:670 (1) - Other than these 2, all the other “hai”s are curved sliders (including the four at the end) so maybe change these to curved too
I like slider shape diversity though so maybe use the shape of 01:00:670 (2) - more
01:13:720 (2,3) - This isn’t enough space to make clear that it’s a 1/1 gap, especially for people who are expecting a 1/2 gap
Thank bbcode
00:16:870 (1) - Should be a circular slider probably, like all the other ones in the map
00:24:820 (4,5,6,1,2) - I don’t think this should be so drastically different from the others; it doesn’t have to be the same but I can’t even tell what this is mapping to
01:24:820 (4,5,6,1,2) - ^
00:35:320 (1) - Could make this a 3/4 slider and start the burst on the end
00:48:970 (1,2,3,1,2) - Seems a bit weird since the general theme is perfect overlaps
00:36:220 (1,6) - What happened to the curved sliders after this? It’s probably better to not use these two to begin with tbh
00:50:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why not curve the streams downward to represent the chimes
00:56:470 (4) - I’m pretty sure there’s practically nothing there
00:57:670 (6,1) - Flow just off a tiny bit
01:02:470 (6,2) - Slightly overlapped
00:10:270 (3,5,1) - It feels kind of weird switching to these sliders and switching back; personally I would rather add this shape into the other instances than get rid of these
00:30:220 (1,2) - I know this is supposed to be calm, but imo this demon has way too much bite to just have 2 sliders here
00:58:720 (5) - Why is this the only one that flows? I certainly don’t think it’s the most flowing vocal
01:10:270 (3) - Maybe make this a 3/4 slider instead, otherwise 01:07:870 (3) - kind of loses its effect if you just repeat it again
Or you could have a special slidershape for 01:07:870 (3) -, either way I just think it should be emphasized
01:11:020 (1,2,1,2) - Would recommend crossing these 1-2s like the others
Finally done!
Even with first mod it was really hard to find stuff, but I guess that was expected here because everything's pretty solid
For each diff i just found whatever I could and also added a few suggestions
(are you going to rank full versions too pls do)
Ryuusei Aika
from your m4m queue
my map again: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/531385

General
disable countdown
dat bg lol

Easy
00:24:070 (1,2) - blanket?
00:39:820 (3,4) - ^

Normal
00:14:020 (4,2) - stack?

Hard
00:08:620 (1,2) - imo that ds is too large for 3.23*, maybe do something like 01:01:420 (1,2) - or decrease to ~1.6x is better for players
00:11:020 (1,2) - ^
00:13:420 (1,2) - ^

Pentori
00:37:870 (3,4,5) - flow feels a little weird, maybe position like 512|9 is better

Akitoshi
00:49:420 (3) - make it more centrosymmetry?
00:56:320 (3,2) - stack?
my favorite diff

Kalibe
01:18:370 (2,3,4) - maybe the ds between 3 and 4 shoule be larger then 2 and 3 as tune increase at 01:18:670 (4) -
01:20:770 (2,3,4) - ^ (not quite obvious though)

Scarlet
00:02:630 (1) - imo no need to use such a sv change(seems too fast) as here has no special sound but just a chorus, using 0.5 would be better
00:09:520 (1,2) - ctrl+g? flow would be better and 00:09:820 (1) - also follow better the trend after 00:09:670 (2) -
00:14:620 (1,1,2,1) - set nc like 1212 would be cute
00:15:220 (2) - ctrl+g? also follow the trend after 00:14:920 (1) - better
00:24:820 (4,5,6,1,2) - imo here is no need to overmap as the rhythm is the same with 00:22:420 (1,2,1,2) -
01:24:820 (4,5,6,1,2) - ^

gl
Affirmation
Q

[Hard]
00:11:620 (3) - for flow
00:35:620 (2) - ctfl G could be better for DS with 00:35:920 (3) - .
00:46:870 - add a beat for vocal

[Extra]
00:11:020 (1,1) - make blanket like 00:08:620 (1,1) - ? could be better for looking./
00:28:570 (1,2,3) - 00:30:970 (1,2,3) - 00:33:370 (1,2,3) - this part has big jumps, for better reading, I suggest you make same combocolor.

perfect map, nothing to mod.
GL
_handholding

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

Normal
00:14:020 (4,2) - stack? tried but can't seem to get it perfect idk, stacking tails is a bit dodgy sometimes and it's close enough to not notice in game
Thnx for looking
Chalwa
Hello, from queue!
[General]
  1. There aren't video on Pentori's diff.

[Easy]
  1. 00:24:070 (1,2) - You can improve this blanket (a little), because if you Ctrl + G 00:24:070 (1) slider you can see end o 00:24:820 (2) is very little unblanketed(? xd).
  2. 00:33:220 (4) - What do you think about Ctrl + J this slider? In my opinion it will get more comfortable flow to newbies between 00:32:620 (3,4) objects and also it will be fully readable to 00:34:120 (1).

[Kisses' Normal]
  1. 00:02:630 (2) - This curve in this https://chalwa.s-ul.eu/2KYWG7y1 moment is unreasonable i think and also looks a bit weird. My suggestion is move third slider node to something like 216/96. It then have this curve on this strong cymbal sound which looks more reasonable.
  2. 00:25:120 (3) - To better transition from 00:24:520 (2) i prefer to put this note at something like 488/292. It's a less important suggestion, cause now it's fine too, but i want to say if you want to make it another >.<.
  3. 00:45:820 (1) - Woah... nice curve here :D.

[Hard]
  1. 00:26:770 (1) - Yea it doesn't matter very much, but you can make here 1.4x DS from 00:26:470 (4) slider, cause better consistency. But it really changing nothing, so I dunno i should to write it, but Im writing to make my mod more proffesional (eks dee)
  2. 00:43:120 (4,1) - You can improve this blanket cause in start of 00:43:120 (4) slider you have bigger angle than in end, so you should to rotate this slider a bit to left for fix this.
  3. 00:48:220 (1) - Can you give me reason why did you put anchors in this moments , when here's nothing to emphasise? I think for better look you should to move anchors to make a slider ball in centre in 00:48:220 (1) moment. Then it will looks much better.

Here with my rules will be end of my mod, but this mod is shitty, so for Poland power will mod Kaleebeee's diff too.
[Kalibe's Insane]
  1. 00:04:791 - I think for better consistency with other diffs you should to put a spinner here which will end on 00:05:916 -. Autoplay can make here 3000 points, so it's fully rankable and playable, cause if i can read this anyone can read this (of course not spinner, but a pattern after spinner)
  2. 01:05:470 (1) - I'm a bit confused why this is only one slower slider in kiai and also why you put it here, when you didn't make it 00:55:870 (2) when sounds and vocal is the same. It's better if you remove a inherited point from 01:05:470 (1).

Sorry for very bad mod, but i want only to clear a queue, cause i haven't got much desire to mod now.
Nice mapset. Really nice Hards...
GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
Doormat

vekt0r wrote:

[Extra]00:10:270 (3,5,1) - It feels kind of weird switching to these sliders and switching back; personally I would rather add this shape into the other instances than get rid of these gotta agree that the switch is a bit weird. reworked the patterns to something more suitable
00:30:220 (1,2) - I know this is supposed to be calm, but imo this demon has way too much bite to just have 2 sliders here this is intentional. i want a simple calm repeating rhythm to contrast with the high energy jumps during this section
00:58:720 (5) - Why is this the only one that flows? I certainly don’t think it’s the most flowing vocal oops, meant to Ctrl + G this
01:10:270 (3) - Maybe make this a 3/4 slider instead, otherwise 01:07:870 (3) - kind of loses its effect if you just repeat it again i gotta disagree, i think a 1/1 slider would give the same amount of emphasis that a 3/4 slider would have. i wanted the second kiai to have longer sliders to contrast with the first kiai
Or you could have a special slidershape for 01:07:870 (3) -, either way I just think it should be emphasized
01:11:020 (1,2,1,2) - Would recommend crossing these 1-2s like the others good idea
(are you going to rank full versions too pls do probably lol)

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

General
disable countdown ok
dat bg lol

Easy
00:24:070 (1,2) - blanket? think i got it now
00:39:820 (3,4) - ^ oops fixed

Hard
00:08:620 (1,2) - imo that ds is too large for 3.23*, maybe do something like 01:01:420 (1,2) - or decrease to ~1.6x is better for players i think the spacing is fine since the intention here is to make 1/1 jumps
00:11:020 (1,2) - ^
00:13:420 (1,2) - ^

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Hard]
00:11:620 (3) - for flow ok
00:35:620 (2) - ctfl G could be better for DS with 00:35:920 (3) - . mm i think it's fine. the 1/4 repeat is short enough that the player can hold it at where the (2) is clicked. will get more opinions on this
00:46:870 - add a beat for vocal made previous note a slider instead

[Extra]
00:11:020 (1,1) - make blanket like 00:08:620 (1,1) - ? could be better for looking./ ok
00:28:570 (1,2,3) - 00:30:970 (1,2,3) - 00:33:370 (1,2,3) - this part has big jumps, for better reading, I suggest you make same combocolor. doesn't seem too necessary imo, there's nothing tricky about these parts other than they're just big jumps

perfect map, nothing to mod. wa thanks ><
GL

Chalwa wrote:

Hello, from queue!
[General]
  1. There aren't video on Pentori's diff. fixed for pentori

[Easy]
  1. 00:24:070 (1,2) - You can improve this blanket (a little), because if you Ctrl + G 00:24:070 (1) slider you can see end o 00:24:820 (2) is very little unblanketed(? xd). yeah done
  2. 00:33:220 (4) - What do you think about Ctrl + J this slider? In my opinion it will get more comfortable flow to newbies between 00:32:620 (3,4) objects and also it will be fully readable to 00:34:120 (1). i think it plays pretty comfortably that even a beginner would be able transition between the sliders smoothly. will need to give this some more thought.. maybe i could even change it to an S-shaped slider..

[Hard]
  1. 00:26:770 (1) - Yea it doesn't matter very much, but you can make here 1.4x DS from 00:26:470 (4) slider, cause better consistency. But it really changing nothing, so I dunno i should to write it, but Im writing to make my mod more proffesional (eks dee) oh, this was a mistake. accidentally moved this lol
  2. 00:43:120 (4,1) - You can improve this blanket cause in start of 00:43:120 (4) slider you have bigger angle than in end, so you should to rotate this slider a bit to left for fix this. i tried
  3. 00:48:220 (1) - Can you give me reason why did you put anchors in this moments , when here's nothing to emphasise? I think for better look you should to move anchors to make a slider ball in centre in 00:48:220 (1) moment. Then it will looks much better. mainly due to space constraints and that i wanted the slider shape to be something that was unused before since the vocals are held pretty long here. red anchor points don't necessarily have to emphasize anything.

thanks for the mods everyone!

@vect0r and Ryuusei i'll mod your maps soon~
[ -Scarlet- ]

vekt0r wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue
Just modding the top 5 diffs which probably matches drain close enough
hope this mod actually helps lol

_handholding
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Hobbes2
Doormat - Today at 11:41 AM
tfw no one wants to mod my hallelujah map at all
FUCK

[General]

Timing at the start isn't right, timing point at 00:04:238 - should be 124 bpm instead of 140, then the timing point at the new 00:04:721 - should be 120bpm

purple combo color should probably be a bit lighter, feels kinda...intense compared to the rest

[Easy]

nice diff, i have one comment that 01:16:870 (1,2,3) - doesnt really look good because of unequal thicknesses of the gaps between objects, but thats pretty picky so w/e

01:28:720 (4) - also dont really like this, wouldnt use a random 1/2 slider at the end because its just asking for a 100 by a new player

[Kisses]

00:02:630 (2) - this shape lol
00:24:520 (2,3,4) - pretty bad flow here, think you should make it nicer
01:13:870 - map this for vocal?

[Pentori's Hard]

00:26:170 (1) - this NC isnt really necessary
00:39:520 (4,5,1) - visually this flows kinda poo because you're hitting the slider from behind
00:56:320 (4) - if anything this object would deserve the spacing emphasis, not 00:56:170 (3), tho i get you placed it like this here to make the triangle
01:28:720 (1) - mm would prefer 2 circles since the tail of the slider feels stronger than the head to me

[Akitoshi's Light Insane]

00:03:613 (1) - silence the end?
00:13:420 (4) - NC shoulda been here, not 00:14:020 (1) -
00:23:170 (2,5) - fix the stacking in this area, its kinda noticeably messed up
00:35:620 (5) - this entends to 00:35:845, so maybe extend it by a reverse and move it closer to 6

[Kalibe's Insane]

00:14:620 (1,2) - weird that these touch but 00:15:220 (1,2) - dont
00:26:470 (6) - NC shoulda been on this object
00:48:220 (1) - goes pretty offscreen
00:57:370 (2,3) - ctrl+g these? might just be that i hate playing linear flow xd
01:05:470 (1) - improve the blanket and remove the NC. also why the SV change here? feels kinda random lol

[Kibbleru]

00:00:380 (1) - this isnt really 1/4 so its probably better if you just use a slow slider or something instead
00:03:696 (1) - silence the ending?
00:10:720 (3,1,2) - would look nicer if this was symmetrical, just feels kinda random atm
last slider could be 2 circles instead cos the tail is just as strong as the head (if not stronger)

[Karen]

00:04:666 (1) - ending of this slider looks kinda bad, maybe if it blankets itself or something it would look better
00:08:920 (4) - NC to be consistent with 00:11:320 (1) - and 00:13:720 (1) -
00:29:170 (1,2,3) - here you map vocals, but not 00:26:770 (1) - ?
01:13:870 - weird not to map this, i can understand the less dense rhythm for 01:12:220 (1,2,3,1,2,3), but on this measure there are vocals you can map to

im lazy so uh..

[Extra]

00:08:620 (1,1) - This pattern can be blanketed better for sure
00:11:020 (1,1) - on a similar note, use the same thickness between that you used for 00:08:620 (1,1) -

well its a clean map with jumps and stuff, cant really complain

cool set, gl. bunch of good diffs in here.
_handholding

Hobbes2 wrote:

[Kisses]

00:02:630 (2) - this shape lol haha Changed with last mod xd
00:24:520 (2,3,4) - pretty bad flow here, think you should make it nicer ok fixed
01:13:870 - map this for vocal? I feel like it flows better rhythmically if I just stick to the instruments, the added circle feels too forced
thnx for the mod

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:ハレルヤ☆エッサイム
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Pentori

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

Pentori
00:37:870 (3,4,5) - flow feels a little weird, maybe position like 512|9 is better intentional flow breaks, same with 00:40:270 (2,3,4)

Hobbes2 wrote:

[Pentori's Hard]
00:26:170 (1) - this NC isnt really necessary fix
00:39:520 (4,5,1) - visually this flows kinda poo because you're hitting the slider from behind hm alright
00:56:320 (4) - if anything this object would deserve the spacing emphasis, not 00:56:170 (3), tho i get you placed it like this here to make the triangle none of these are really emphasised cos u have plenty of time to move to 00:55:870 (2) - from the 1/1 slider. this is more of a visual pattern
01:28:720 (1) - mm would prefer 2 circles since the tail of the slider feels stronger than the head to me provides unique emphasis imo
thanks
osu file format v14

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Venix
[ez]
  1. 00:32:620 (3,4) - Flow is a bit harsh here. I think you can fix it by ctrl+j on 00:33:220 (4) - this slider.
  2. 00:39:820 (3) - Don't you think movement will be better when you'll flip this slider in horizontal line? I think yes, but this is just light proposition.
  3. 01:17:620 (2,3) - I think these sliders can make clear and fine blanket composition like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7462294
  4. 01:28:720 (4) - I think you can change this slider to repeat slider and move it to left on timeline by 1/2 tick.

That's all! Amazing song ;p
lit120

vekt0r wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue
Just modding the top 5 diffs which probably matches drain close enough
hope this mod actually helps lol

00:36:220 (1,6) - What happened to the curved sliders after this? It’s probably better to not use these two to begin with tbh not a problem for me
00:50:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why not curve the streams downward to represent the chimes this one's enough for linear stream
00:56:470 (4) - I’m pretty sure there’s practically nothing there there is if u set the playback rate to 25%
00:57:670 (6,1) - Flow just off a tiny bit seems ok
01:02:470 (6,2) - Slightly overlapped let it be~

Finally done!
Even with first mod it was really hard to find stuff, but I guess that was expected here because everything's pretty solid
For each diff i just found whatever I could and also added a few suggestions
(are you going to rank full versions too pls do)
no change here, so thx for mod!

uhh i'll handle the custom hitsounds soon. don't rly have a mood for it a bit .-.
Topic Starter
Doormat

Hobbes2 wrote:

Doormat - Today at 11:41 AM
tfw no one wants to mod my hallelujah map at all
FUCK lmao

[General]

Timing at the start isn't right, timing point at 00:04:238 - should be 124 bpm instead of 140, then the timing point at the new 00:04:721 - should be 120bpm took another listen, and i agree that the overall slowdown bpm is a bit off. adjusted it, but 124 feels off too since the initial slowdown was slightly off as well.

purple combo color should probably be a bit lighter, feels kinda...intense compared to the rest mm i think it's fine; the purple and orange are a bit more intense compared to the yellow and blue to represent the angel vs devil thing that the series has going on

[Easy]

nice diff, i have one comment that 01:16:870 (1,2,3) - doesnt really look good because of unequal thicknesses of the gaps between objects, but thats pretty picky so w/e mmm gaps look pretty equal to me, maybe if more people point this out

01:28:720 (4) - also dont really like this, wouldnt use a random 1/2 slider at the end because its just asking for a 100 by a new player ya good point

[Extra]

00:08:620 (1,1) - This pattern can be blanketed better for surethink i got it
00:11:020 (1,1) - on a similar note, use the same thickness between that you used for 00:08:620 (1,1) - good point

well its a clean map with jumps and stuff, cant really complain

cool set, gl. bunch of good diffs in here.

Venix wrote:

[ez]
  1. 00:32:620 (3,4) - Flow is a bit harsh here. I think you can fix it by ctrl+j on 00:33:220 (4) - this slider. oops meant to curve it in other direction, forgot to fix lol
  2. 00:39:820 (3) - Don't you think movement will be better when you'll flip this slider in horizontal line? I think yes, but this is just light proposition. not a big deal since it'll flow the same way, but sure
  3. 01:17:620 (2,3) - I think these sliders can make clear and fine blanket composition like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7462294 mmm looks fine to me, maybe if one more person points this out
  4. 01:28:720 (4) - I think you can change this slider to repeat slider and move it to left on timeline by 1/2 tick. changed to 1/1 slider instead, but yeah i did move this to left by 1/2 tick

That's all! Amazing song ;p
thanks for the mods! @gders i had to change some timing settings, so i fixed it for your diffs, but i didn't touch anything else.

also updated all gd diffs that provided an update
Venix
I think +6 offset to all points will work better
Deppyforce
bonsoir

[general]
00:35:621 - offset of these 1/4 things feel early check pls the entire map might be early too but i just noticed these so idrk
00:05:221 - also this might be off too cuz i tried to make 1/12 rhythm to follow that thing in the background and it doesnt fit :joy: :gun:

[easy]
00:24:071 (1,2) - nazi blonket
00:27:821 (3,4) - try ctrl+g rhythm on this, it emphasizes 00:28:571 - better and make it stands out more (strong sound and vocals)
same for all other ones
00:37:421 (3,4) - tbh i think this verse works better if u use bcuz now the 1/1 4th beat are stronger than last verse so mapping base on 1/1 here would make more sense so swap rhythm between this verse and last verse lmao
01:05:021 (1) - i'd make it different shape from last slider to emphasize kiai better since u cant use ds so u gonna have to emphasize by shape if possible
01:28:571 (4) - ds :thonkang: i mean its fine cuz readable 100% but if u do this u should emphasize start of kiai too tbh

[kisses normal]
nice i like the rhythm usage
00:44:321 (3) - extend this to 00:45:221 - might fit better with the map consider from how u focus on vocals before

[hard]
00:01:730 (2) - the sound on reverse is weaker than other 2 surronding it maybe change to 1/1 slider or change shape to emphasize it?
00:28:421 (3,4) - maybe try stack these or do something to make the strong sound stand out more? same for others
00:43:121 (4,1) - nazi blanket again lamo
01:16:721 (3,1) - i saw u emphasize sounds with bigger ds before but not doing it here?

[pentoris hard]
everything isnt snapped properly check aimod

[corinns light insane]
less ar for spread? 3.9 works
00:08:846 - pls mute these ends god dammit
00:23:771 (5,2) - is stack kinda fuked a bit here lol check it
00:35:621 (5) - extend this to 3/4 maybe cuz the vocal kinda ends on next bue tick too and theres sound
00:56:921 (2) - stack nazi
01:28:721 (2,3) - try use less ds cuz its weaker and its last jump of the map so its prety noticeable and should be emphasized?

[kalibes insane]
00:21:596 (2) - hi the hitsound here is so loud i tot there are no sound here in the original song try reduce volume just on this note maybe
00:35:921 (2) - the 8 bit 1/4 thing here is a bit weaker than previous slider try 2x 1/4 sliders instead might fit better than 1 with 3 reverses
01:05:471 (1,1) - why are there 3 nCs here lol even tho the ds are decreasing but judging from the shape u mapped those sliders the ncs are pretty much unnecessary so u can remove them so its constant wiht 00:55:421 -

[kibbs insane]

00:00:380 - i tried to listen to this thing closely and this fits better im o
01:00:671 (2) - lol nazi stack
01:17:321 (2) - same

[karens insane]
http://puu.sh/uIVST/d2b5e34ea8.png

[scarlets ex]
idk i think these are r u i n e d with this stack leniency, reduce it ?
or if you like it this way then ok
00:07:346 - can u mute this sliderend since it doesnt end on some exact sound
the patterns are pretty cool but the amount of copy paste ur using kinda ruins with the interestingness of the map ,its fine though but it could be more fun with more variation of these cool placements

[lit ex]
hi about the custom colors u could make 1 purple a bit darker to match vignes color cuz shes lot darker than raphi tbh and make it kinda more different than the other purple (it loks like these represent characters to me anyway)
00:00:380 - same with kiblerus insan try this rhythm ofc u can change 1/6 to circles
00:50:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try use something that sounds a bit like keysounding would fit better here tbh if you care about hitsounds enough lol
01:28:871 (1) - actually the sound should ends on 1/8 01:29:208

[loli doormat ex]
name this something e d g y maybe
00:01:730 (2) - same with hard diff lol
00:26:171 (1,2,3) - i'd say try to emphasize the last jump more it doesnt rly play differently than others atm when i played this
01:18:221 (1,2,3,4) - idk but these have the same movement with 01:17:321 (2,3,4,5) - anyways so it doesnt stand out much maybe change flow a bit?

lol good luck its cool
_handholding
@deppy, I'd really like 00:45:221 to be clickable as I feel like the transition to the next downbeat flows better rhythmically this way. Also glossing over 00:44:921 would make it feel rather empty imo

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249,375,75821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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29,109,78671,1,2,0:0:0:0:
41,211,78971,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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313,282,80321,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,197,80621,2,0,L|262:140,2,57.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,229,81071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
109,208,81371,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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290,72,83471,1,2,0:0:0:0:
203,15,83771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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222,377,85121,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,86621,12,2,88871,0:0:0:0:
Pentori
doormat can you snap everything for me when you get the chance? thx! c:
lit120

Deppyforce wrote:

bonsoir

[general]
00:35:621 - offset of these 1/4 things feel early check pls the entire map might be early too but i just noticed these so idrk
00:05:221 - also this might be off too cuz i tried to make 1/12 rhythm to follow that thing in the background and it doesnt fit :joy: :gun:

[lit ex]
hi about the custom colors u could make 1 purple a bit darker to match vignes color cuz shes lot darker than raphi tbh and make it kinda more different than the other purple (it loks like these represent characters to me anyway)
00:00:380 - same with kiblerus insan try this rhythm ofc u can change 1/6 to circles i kinda dislike that using 1/6 there is a bit too much for the start, so i'll just use 1/4 instead. i'll see how this goes anyway xd
00:50:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try use something that sounds a bit like keysounding would fit better here tbh if you care about hitsounds enough lol help orz
01:28:871 (1) - actually the sound should ends on 1/8 01:29:208 oh wow, that suits a lot xd

lol good luck its cool
thx

i'll update my diff later after the hitsounds are ready xd
Topic Starter
Doormat

Deppyforce wrote:

bonsoir

[general]
00:35:621 - offset of these 1/4 things feel early check pls the entire map might be early too but i just noticed these so idrk i tried adjusting offset by what venix suggested, maybe it's better now idk
00:05:221 - also this might be off too cuz i tried to make 1/12 rhythm to follow that thing in the background and it doesnt fit :joy: :gun:

[easy]
00:24:071 (1,2) - nazi blonket k
00:27:821 (3,4) - try ctrl+g rhythm on this, it emphasizes 00:28:571 - better and make it stands out more (strong sound and vocals)
same for all other ones i'm emphasizing the white ticks during this section because they stand out more due to the ticking sound
00:37:421 (3,4) - tbh i think this verse works better if u use bcuz now the 1/1 4th beat are stronger than last verse so mapping base on 1/1 here would make more sense so swap rhythm between this verse and last verse lmao here i'm emphasizing vocals more because the ticking sound stopped
01:05:021 (1) - i'd make it different shape from last slider to emphasize kiai better since u cant use ds so u gonna have to emphasize by shape if possible agree but i change shape of 01:03:827 (4) - instead
01:28:571 (4) - ds :thonkang: i mean its fine cuz readable 100% but if u do this u should emphasize start of kiai too tbh mistake on my part lmao

[hard]
00:01:730 (2) - the sound on reverse is weaker than other 2 surronding it maybe change to 1/1 slider or change shape to emphasize it? still pretty audible so i'd prefer to keep it for the sake of preserving the pattern here
00:28:421 (3,4) - maybe try stack these or do something to make the strong sound stand out more? same for others i think stack takes away emphasis on the "everyday" vocals though, same for others
00:43:121 (4,1) - nazi blanket again lamo loma
01:16:721 (3,1) - i saw u emphasize sounds with bigger ds before but not doing it here? ther is bigger ds here but i made it a bit bigger

[pentoris hard]
everything isnt snapped properly check aimod forgot to resnap for pentori when i changed bpm drops. fixed for him

[loli doormat ex]
name this something e d g y maybe lol no i don't like giving my tv sizes edgy names
00:01:730 (2) - same with hard diff lol same with hrd diff lol
00:26:171 (1,2,3) - i'd say try to emphasize the last jump more it doesnt rly play differently than others atm when i played this the idea here for the jump is that it's moving in the opposite direction of the previous jump pattern 00:25:427 (1,2,3,4) - which is why they're stacked underneath each other. i think it works out well given the idea, but i'm not opposed to changing it if more people agree that this should stand out more
01:18:221 (1,2,3,4) - idk but these have the same movement with 01:17:321 (2,3,4,5) - anyways so it doesnt stand out much maybe change flow a bit? [color=#0000F]i tried Ctrl + G the 3->4; had to rework next patterns a bit too but i think it should be better now[/color]

lol good luck its cool
updated kisses's diff and also some minor hitsounding stuff for the gds that copied my hitsounds
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