Edit: this isnt how i should be, even when tripping out and getting triggered. I'm sorry for not being able to keep my posture, i expect no further response.
original post if you care00:22:994 (1,1) - so both of these have a sharp angle here to emphasise the drum that comes in here, however at 00:24:058 (1,5) - you go about making the stream feel natural eventhough the song has the same sounds playing? i think this is an inconsitency
00:48:803 (5) - missed NC? the sound that's playing here is very similar to 00:48:271 (1) - which also had its own NC
00:54:923 (9) - would've loved to see this note be emphasised a bit more as its like a closure to me. the drum sound here seems to have a longer sound duration than the others (00:54:391 (1,5) - ) and yes it's stronger than the others. just try to consider adding in at least some NCs here to get it going good
00:58:648 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i fail to understand what was tried to be achieved here. what's being emphasised? it just feels like you started to feel that your streams were becoming too bland (which they are btw) so you just throw this in? it's making for a massive inconsistency in the streams and I'd suggest making this similar to the other 16 note boringness as before. not to mention that 00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is where all the drums are.
01:01:309 (9) - finish here like 01:00:776 (1) - but this time without emphasis!
01:03:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - can you PLEASE find a way to make this stand out more above the rest of the part. i mean, the streams i think should increase in spacing and increase even more off of 01:04:502 (9) - due to the pitch reaching an all-time high that wasn't done anywhere else in the song before and due to the extra background noices that are being added up to this particular set of notes. for the sake of representing a song through a map please do something
01:06:896 (1) - i like to believe that this slider shouldnt be visually the same as 01:07:162 (1) - due to the big difference in sound that they emphasise. 01:06:896 (1) - is clearly a different drum beat thats being emphasised as 01:07:162 (1) - which i think you should also be able to figure out. if caring about visuals, then i think this should most definetly change as if visuals were actually important you would differenciate objects accordingly to emphasise the difference in sounds that the song makes.
01:16:209 (7,8,9) - really no care in making this different? heck even stacking would already make a great difference in showing that the music changes here. if i were to play this map without the song itself i would never be able to see that the song is changing any bit at all.
01:39:890 (1,2) - HOLD YOUR HORSES HERE FAM where the Living Hell is my Clickable Objects? ?? ? in all seriousness though, if you really feel like these should be kicksliders there might be something wrong with your headset/speaker/ear pods. the song here clearly has 4 drumbeats played on the 1/4 here but the map doesn't acknowledge them at all by making only half of them clickable. major concern imo
01:51:664 (6,4,5) - chap even for my standards on visuals this just bad
01:55:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ok? so no emphasis on any of the 1/8 played here? like, not even mapping in 1/8 kicksliders to show that you're listening to the song here? also the last 8 notes don't have decreasing spacing while the song is clearly decreasing in intensity? damn time to buy some new audio setup boi cuz it feels like you have none.
"You're rude" is not really relevant when I as a player constantly find maps in the qualified section that looks like they had no effort put into them and were only made for gaining popularity and increasing his ego. This map feels very low quality, as if the mapper didn't give a single attempt to represent the song, but instead gives the impression "oh i mapped it in 1 hour lolxd." Please, try to put some more effort into your mapping and don't make streams that are this bland and boring to play. I haven't managed to finish the map once due to me clicking out of the map because I'm so bored, and I don't ever intend to look back. The map in its current state is a massive inconsistent pile of trash that shows no regard for what xi's song is doing