marshall_racer wrote:

03:28:784 (1,1) - sollten gleich aussehen ... kannst den ersten ja einfach kopieren

marshall_racer wrote:

marshall_racer wrote:

03:28:784 (1,1) - sollten gleich aussehen ... kannst den ersten ja einfach kopieren

i heard you fixed this ...
links von dem post gibt's einen kleinen text ... wenn du da draufdrückst, passiert was ganz tolles

DoKoLP wrote:

Sorry aber ich gebe dir jetzt nicht wegen jeder Kleinigkeit 'nen Kudos :'D

DoKoLP wrote:

Blue Dragon won't make a Nogard-diff anymore :'<

Blue Dragon wrote:

I'm sorry >:

song is WAYY too repetitive. I don't want to make the map shitty

marshall_racer wrote:

Blue Dragon wrote:

I'm sorry >:

song is WAYY too repetitive. I don't want to make the map shitty

since when are/will Nogard diffs. be shitty?

1. Raise the Lead in time to atleast 2500ms. Offset 0 means the song starts immediately and 1500ish ms isn't enough, given the fact that atleast half of that time is spent fading out/in into the map.
2. Difficulty: The HP drain is broken. This can be fixed in 2 ways. You can raise HP drain to 10 (LOL OMG HP DRAIN 10), but I tested it and it still plays fine, apart from the final section (section starts at 03:27:734 where you have 2 repeating sliders). This section needs more notes or you need spinners in between these (silent spinners, but not really recommended) to keep the HP going, because if you have less than almost full HP, you will die here.
   The other option is to reduce the amount of new combos, because the last note in the combo gives more HP back than the other ones. Also short sliders return massive amounts of HP back as well. I can't really say where you should do this because most if not all combos make sense, so I would probably opt for option 1. I will point out some obvious new combo removals though, so you don't have to really change them if you don't want to, just take them into consideration. Those combo suggestions will be green. The additional options, be it spinners or notes to handle HP10 will be in blue. You can probably mix these advices, because honestly, missing like 2 streams (as you saw by my terribad play ) and getting back to full hp right in the next 3 seconds feels broken and needs balancing.
3. 00:00:000 (1) - Soft finish on this note.
4. 00:00:134 - Remove this timing section, add an inheriting one if you need the volume change. This one screws up the whole map (everything is on red ticks).
5. 00:00:884 (1) - You don't really need new combo here, makes the HP drain look bad.
6. 00:02:984 (1) - ^
7. 00:04:484 (1) - ^
8. 00:06:134 (1) - ^
9. 00:18:284 (1) - ^
10. 00:20:534 (1) - ^
11. 00:25:484 (1) - ^
12. 00:27:584 (1) - ^
13. 00:30:734 (1) - ^
14. 00:31:034 (3) - New combo. Consistency and musical reasons.
15. 00:32:534 (1) - Same as up above (remove NC).
16. 00:34:934 (1) - ^
17. 00:37:334 (1) - ^
18. 00:48:059 - I am not 100% sure about approval maps, but I'm positive that silenced hitnotes are unrankable (atleast now they are). Raise the volume, sounded a bit confusing while playing as well.
19. 00:48:584 - ^
20. 00:58:034 (1) - Same thing about removing NC. Note: I will probably skip doing this from this point onward as it's quite obvious where I would pick a spot, instead I will just the regular combo mod, where it's better to have them placed.
21. 00:59:534 (1) - This new combo makes no sense at all. Remove at all costs.
22. 00:59:984 (4) - New combo.
23. 01:00:659 (1) - Remove NC.
24. 01:02:684 - I would argue this spot is missing a note. Swap to soft set for this spot if you decide to add one. I strongly suggest that you do.
25. 01:04:334 (1) - Remove this NC.
26. 01:05:084 (5) - New combo here, or since it's a returning slider, new combo @01:05:084 (5). Your choice, both seem good.
27. 01:07:184 (7) - New combo here and remove from next note.
28. 01:09:434 (2) - Same thing as 01:05:084 (5) up here, Add NC here or on the next note, but remove it from 01:09:284 (1).
29. 01:21:434 (1) - Remove NC, add it on the next note (that slider).
30. 01:29:984 (2) - New combo here and remove it from previous note (lol I did it backwards )
31. 01:37:184 (3) - New combo, remove it from (1) in the same combo.
32. 01:38:384 (6) - ^
33. 01:38:684 (1) - Remove NC.
34. 01:39:584 (5) - For consistency this spot is a good one to add a new combo. Up to you, this works as well.
35. 01:41:984 (7) - New combo here.
36. 01:42:584 (1) - Remove NC and add it on the next note instead.
37. 01:45:584 (2) - Here NC, remove it from the previous note.
38. 01:46:784 (9) - NC, remove from next note. Note: I will stop with combo mod here, from this point it should be obvious why I chose these combos (listen to the music). There are no complex patterns in the map which would really require new combos, and even if they were, having them in regular combos is fine since it's an approval map. If you can't figure out the next spots, just ask me in game and I will tell you, it will be faster and I won't need to write an essay.
39. 01:55:184 - Add a note here with soft finish.
40. 03:25:334 - Add a note here.
41. 03:25:784 - ^
42. 03:27:734 - ^
43. 03:28:184 - ^
44. 03:30:134 - ^
45. 03:32:534 - ^
46. 03:32:984 - ^

1. As BD already said, this song is repetitive and the map is as well. It's slightly overmapped (putting notes, triplets especially where there is nothing in the background, perfect example here: 00:58:259) but that's not a big deal. The big turn off was some patterns for me, mostly some of the slider. You did a nice work and they look great, but some look just like you copy pasted them and just lined them up.
   Here's a list:
   
   SPOILER

   01:31:634 (3) - You could flip it upside down or something. Just looks boring.
   01:44:234 (8) - You can flip it horizontally and increase the distance between them. Distance snap doesn't work well with maps like this when it comes to sliders. If you change it, 01:44:534 (1) could use some repositioning or reshaping.
   01:51:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - Lining them up like this is just boring. Make them jump a little. A small example.
   02:09:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You can increase the spacing between these, or make some patterns, this looks too easy.
   02:22:184 (4) - Just like 01:31:634 (3).
   02:54:134 (1,2,3,4) - It would be AMAZING if you could swap 2 and 3. Plays great and looks awesome.
   02:57:134 (1,2,3) - I would flip (2) horizontally and distance it a bit from the other two, looks better and adds in difficulty and fun.
   03:15:434 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I decided to add this "suggestions" section because of this pattern here. I won't judge you or anything, but this is really boring. When I was playing the map I was like, lolwut. Please, change this to something else, flip some of them horizontally, make them go 1-4-2-3 (as they are 1-2-3-4 now, talking about the positions) or something, but this really needs a cosmetic change.

1. mp3 file is 244 kbps , make it 128-192 plz

1. 00:21:284 - add circle ?
2. 00:23:834 (1,2) - 3 fird right ?
3. 00:24:584 (3) - 3 gird left if you changed previous one
4. 00:46:484 (3) - move to middle of the screen ?
5. 00:51:284 (3) - 2 gird down and ctrl + r
6. 02:52:334 (11,12) - ctrl + r
7. 03:05:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pentagon
8. 03:24:884 (3) - middle ?

Download: Renard - Blue Night (DoKoLP) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu

Hellzero wrote:

Random mod
Remove "Renard" from tags and add OzzyOzrock

DoKo
01:57:784 - end kiai done
Some nazi ;[
00:13:534 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - check spacing lul. i can't see anything wrong with the spacing
00:41:884 (3,3,3,3,3) - why not add the finish? cause it doesn't sound good to me ;p
00:53:884 (3) - remove finish at end slider? done
00:59:584 - silend end? done
01:02:584 (1,2) - spacing done
01:04:684 (6,7) - ^ ?!? Oo
01:10:534 (8,9) - ^ ^
01:10:684 (9,10) - ^ done
01:12:784 (9,10) - ^ (idk, maybe it purposely) done
01:19:834 (5,6) - ^ ?
01:20:884 (12,13) - ^ ^
02:12:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move 1 grid right? done
02:13:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ left done
02:25:234 (1) - remove NC done
02:25:384 (7) - add NC nope :3
02:26:134 (7) - remove repeat and add 3 notes 02:26:359 - 02:26:509? (cuz i hear them) done
02:54:484 (8) - add NC? done

Renard <3

OzzyOzrock wrote:

I don't think you added my name to ALL diffs, as it doesn't show up when I search my name lol.