Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover · forum

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-01-29T13:39:52+00:00

~~Isn't xinely a male~~

Doyak

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Doyak 2017-01-30T04:32:34+00:00

Oh I was going to choose this map but I guess I'm late, so I go to another map of yours~

lit120

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lit120 2017-01-30T05:34:59+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Oh I was going to choose this map but I guess I'm late, so I go to another map of yours~

Pls don't ;w;. Stay here ;w;

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-01-30T06:36:58+00:00

You find BN for my map la

lit120

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lit120 2017-01-30T06:55:56+00:00

KuranteMelodii wrote:
You find BN for my map la

Do it by urself

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-01-30T07:13:36+00:00

lit120 wrote:
KuranteMelodii wrote:
You find BN for my map la
Do it by urself

No i can't find one lol

Doyak

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Doyak 2017-01-30T09:16:35+00:00

Oh so Xinely isn't going to recheck? Then I'll check this map lol

lit120

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lit120 2017-01-30T09:30:29+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Oh so Xinely isn't going to recheck? Then I'll check this map lol

Asked her and that's a "no", so yeah xd

Doyak

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Doyak 2017-01-31T13:15:35+00:00

So yeah, here I am.

Can we increase HP overall? We wouldn't expect people to fail on a 30 sec song with such low HPs. 3-5-6-7-7 would be good enough.
OD as well. 3-5-6.5-8-8 I suggest.

Easy.
I always feel your maps aren't 'detailed' enough. You seem to rely mostly on your feelings without fully considering the details of the music or the map itself, and hope some modders would find errors out and tell you. What Xinely pointed out basically reflects it. Now the map is mostly fine, and I have one more thing I want to point out.
00:21:622 (1,2,1,2,3) - Visual pattern-wise it's pretty good. But I wonder if this represents the music nicely. As I can see on how you NC'd, you created two distinct patterns: 00:21:622 (1,2) - and 00:24:158 (1,2,3) - . But musically, 00:22:467 (2,1) - these two are rather similar than 00:24:158 (1,2,3) - . It also happened because you really hate to use 3/2 gaps on Easy, but I think it should be used when it can drastically represent the music better than using 3/2 reverse sliders.
In this song, 00:26:481 - is extraordinarily important than any other sounds, because its lyric is the title/theme of the song. But you merely put it inside a very regular reverse slider, without any emphasis.
So it would be great if you combine 00:21:622 (1,2,1) - into one pattern and 00:25:848 (2,3) - into another, or just make 00:26:481 - clickable. http://puu.sh/tIdQR/4411984617.jpg or http://puu.sh/tIdWj/2473fda934.jpg

Also 00:12:327 - isn't supposed to be a whistle?

Normal.
00:18:242 (1,2,3) - Make this more stable lol, idk why you would reject Xinely's mod on this. http://puu.sh/tIftA/14057fdae6.jpg
Also for 00:19:932 (3,4,5) - , how about trying http://puu.sh/tIfDE/3973b96529.jpg instead.
00:27:327 - Add whistle because it's weird to leave this empty while 00:27:749 - has a whistle. There's a start of a triplet anyway.

Hard.
00:09:580 (1) - It's weird that you ignored 00:09:791 - while you even made this clickable on Normal. Try 1/2 slider + circle or a 1/2 reverse slider.
00:11:481 (1,2) - 1/1s are stronger on every beats, so idk why you would use an offbeat rhythm here.

Lasse

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Lasse 2017-01-31T13:25:43+00:00

Doyak wrote:
So yeah, here I am.

Can we increase HP overall? We wouldn't expect people to fail on a 30 sec song with such low HPs. 3-5-6-7-7 would be good enough.
OD as well. 3-5-6.5-8-8 I suggest.

@lit
feel free to change hp on my diff to 7 if needed, im fine with either. it was 7 initially anyways, I think I reduced it after a mod

lolia

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lolia 2017-01-31T13:32:40+00:00

@lit120 : If you would change OD and HP in your Hard diff, plz change my diff to 8(OD) and 7(HP) too.

lit120

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lit120 2017-01-31T17:01:19+00:00

Doyak wrote:
So yeah, here I am.

Can we increase HP overall? We wouldn't expect people to fail on a 30 sec song with such low HPs. 3-5-6-7-7 would be good enough. cool
OD as well. 3-5-6.5-8-8 I suggest. ^

Normal.
00:18:242 (1,2,3) - Make this more stable lol, idk why you would reject Xinely's mod on this. http://puu.sh/tIftA/14057fdae6.jpg that'll ruin the triangle pattern there
Also for 00:19:932 (3,4,5) - , how about trying http://puu.sh/tIfDE/3973b96529.jpg instead. this is interesting...
00:27:327 - Add whistle because it's weird to leave this empty while 00:27:749 - has a whistle. There's a start of a triplet anyway. it doesn't fit well

Hard.
00:09:580 (1) - It's weird that you ignored 00:09:791 - while you even made this clickable on Normal. Try 1/2 slider + circle or a 1/2 reverse slider. another point. welp... did it on my own
00:11:481 (1,2) - 1/1s are stronger on every beats, so idk why you would use an offbeat rhythm here. i followed a guitar sound there,

did it for karia's and lasse's

updated

sekaii, where r u?

EDIT: irc'd with Doyak about Normal a bit, so yeah

Suimya

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Suimya 2017-02-01T13:59:04+00:00

Doyak wrote:
So yeah, here I am.

Can we increase HP overall? We wouldn't expect people to fail on a 30 sec song with such low HPs. 3-5-6-7-7 would be good enough.
OD as well. 3-5-6.5-8-8 I suggest.

Easy.
I always feel your maps aren't 'detailed' enough. You seem to rely mostly on your feelings without fully considering the details of the music or the map itself, and hope some modders would find errors out and tell you. What Xinely pointed out basically reflects it. Now the map is mostly fine, and I have one more thing I want to point out.
00:21:622 (1,2,1,2,3) - Visual pattern-wise it's pretty good. But I wonder if this represents the music nicely. As I can see on how you NC'd, you created two distinct patterns: 00:21:622 (1,2) - and 00:24:158 (1,2,3) - . But musically, 00:22:467 (2,1) - these two are rather similar than 00:24:158 (1,2,3) - . It also happened because you really hate to use 3/2 gaps on Easy, but I think it should be used when it can drastically represent the music better than using 3/2 reverse sliders. Okay fixed it
In this song, 00:26:481 - is extraordinarily important than any other sounds, because its lyric is the title/theme of the song. But you merely put it inside a very regular reverse slider, without any emphasis.
So it would be great if you combine 00:21:622 (1,2,1) - into one pattern and 00:25:848 (2,3) - into another, or just make 00:26:481 - clickable. http://puu.sh/tIdQR/4411984617.jpg or http://puu.sh/tIdWj/2473fda934.jpg Okay fixed it now, with note suggestion, I hope it's okay now

Also 00:12:327 - isn't supposed to be a whistle? Yes, fixed it

Thanks for mod!

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