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Log Off Now 2017-01-14T05:25:54+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 06 December 2017 at 22:28:20

Artist: Iria Hosizaki
Title: Private Sky
Source: この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
Tags: if my heart had wings Kono Oozora ni Tsubasa wo Hirogete 羽々音小鳥 Habane Kotori Minao Ohse pulltop eroge visual novel expansion opening op short version davided frostwich
BPM: 162
Filesize: 19672kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:

DavidEd's Hard (3.31 stars, 294 notes)
frost's Insane (4.01 stars, 295 notes)
Normal (1.88 stars, 134 notes)
Winter Break (4.42 stars, 321 notes)

Download: Iria Hosizaki - Private Sky
Download: Iria Hosizaki - Private Sky (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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「What shall we do for a special occasion?」

Difficulties

Normal - Log Off Now

Hard - DavidEd

Insane - Frostwich

Winter Break - Log Off Now

Special Thanks
Video - Shad0w1and

- Sinnoh

- Chewin

Metadata
https://i.gyazo.com/76841d0376ff49f1ec2285c3e3de76a5.png
https://i.gyazo.com/5e87c39175e0654314efd008cd224c6e.png
Screenshot taken from official website and opening video

Last edited by Log Off Now 2023-04-02T21:37:47+00:00, edited 80 times in total.

Dilectus

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Dilectus 2017-01-23T17:47:52+00:00

my diff finished

what the fuck is this video. why isnt agetha getting more screentime. wtf is this bullshit </3

DavidEd's Hard

osu file format v14

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GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

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Title:PrivateSky
TitleUnicode:PrivateSky
Artist:Hoshizaki Iria
ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora ni Tsubasa o Hirogete pulltop eroge visual novel expansion opening short version
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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-01-23T18:05:48+00:00

DavidEd wrote:
my diff finished

what the fuck is this video. why isnt agetha getting more screentime. wtf is this bullshit </3

this expansion is basically just kotori, feelsbadman

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2017-01-29T20:28:57+00:00

its ageha not agetha im triggered liek fuk david
ur nickname is now creepy misaka guy

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Weedy 2017-01-31T23:51:02+00:00

memehelp

global warming is coming

00:14:384 (4) - see picture https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7202465
00:16:421 (1,2,3,4,1) - ugly star fix please
00:45:680 (3) - move to x354 y214 because my spacing OCD is acting up
00:59:198 (4) - move a little up for readability
01:02:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what's with you and thicc stars xd

01:10:865 (4) - move to x176 y298
01:11:050 (5) - move to x70 t254 trust me it works
01:12:902 (1) - the three sections on this arent symmetrical

frosty the snowman

00:07:532 (1,2) - triggered not blanketed perfectly
01:02:532 (1,2) - Ctrl + G both of these Separately, awkward flow break
01:06:976 (1,2) - ples blanket better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7202504
01:22:902 (4) - move to x273 y89 because spacing ocd and because it's kinda hard to read otherwise
01:27:717 (1,3) - blanket intensifies

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 2017-02-01T00:02:28+00:00

[ Pika ] wrote:
frosty the snowman
00:07:532 (1,2) - triggered not blanketed perfectly yes it is
01:02:532 (1,2) - Ctrl + G both of these Separately, awkward flow break flow break for emphasis on intense rhythm starting therfe
01:06:976 (1,2) - ples blanket better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7202504i didnt even want to blanket those
01:22:902 (4) - move to x273 y89 because spacing ocd and because it's kinda hard to read otherwise no and no
01:27:717 (1,3) - blanket intensifies thats good enough for me LOL

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-01T00:07:12+00:00

[ Pika ] wrote:
memehelp
global warming is coming
00:14:384 (4) - see picture https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7202465 doesn't go offscreen ingame
00:16:421 (1,2,3,4,1) - ugly star fix please ok
00:45:680 (3) - move to x354 y214 because my spacing OCD is acting up moved it somewhere else
00:59:198 (4) - move a little up for readability moved to the side instead
01:02:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what's with you and thicc stars xd xd fixed

01:10:865 (4) - move to x176 y298 i think its ok
01:11:050 (5) - move to x70 t254 trust me it works not a fan of these two suggestions, i prefer the current arrow/cross jump shape
01:12:902 (1) - the three sections on this arent symmetrical fixed

thanks for the mod!

Rieri

906 posts

Joined December 2014

Rieri 2017-02-01T00:15:48+00:00

m4m from ur q

General

Tag conflict with frost's diff
uhh custom hitsound 69? pls change to 1 before i disqualify thx kappa what am i doing with my life
frost's insane with a sv of 1.7 but winter break with 1.4? hmm

Normal

Really hard to understand the NC pattern used here.
00:08:458 (6) - 01:32:902 (1) - inconsistent nc
01:32:532 (4,5) - not really a big problem but lets just make these a teensy bit closer together
01:37:717 (2,3) - sorta weird how you start stacking again here when you haven't done that for 01:34:198 (2,3) - here or 01:31:421 (2,3) - here. I think making identical patterns would be better consistency wise.

Hard

00:39:384 (2,3) - 00:39:569 (3,4) - can't distinguish the rhythmic difference if you make the distance equal.
00:57:161 (2,3) - 00:57:347 (3,4) - same goes for here.
00:58:643 (7) - make it go to the right? for flow
01:02:532 (1,2,3) - how come you don't emphasize on big sounds here and you add distance on smaller sounds such as 01:01:421 (6,7) - this or 01:00:309 (3,4) - this?

Insane

00:11:791 (4,5) - the strings in the back is in 1/3 not 1/4
00:39:291 (2) - I don't hear these sounds
01:04:384 (3) - a 1/2 slider would fit better since there are no drum sounds in between
01:06:606 (1) - unnecessary nc.
01:36:235 (4,5) - should be 1/3

summer break

00:11:050 (2) - how come you don't map the sound here but map it 01:36:235 (3) - here?
00:40:124 - should map triplet because that sound is pretty big
01:36:235 (3) - if you listen closely, it is 1/3
01:40:124 (3,4) - Just a suggestion, I think it would emphasize better if this set of notes were facing the same way as 01:39:569 (1,2) - these two. Creating sharper movement instead of flowy movements can help emphasize.

o sht 2 short ill shoot star pls dont hurt me

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 2017-02-01T00:21:05+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
m4m from ur q

General
Tag conflict with frost's diff
uhh custom hitsound 69? pls change to 1 before i disqualify thx kappa what am i doing with my life
frost's insane with a sv of 1.7 but winter break with 1.4? hmm

Insane
00:11:791 (4,5) - the strings in the back is in 1/3 not 1/4 1/4 sounded better to me because there were audible beats 00:11:791 - and 00:11:976 -
00:39:291 (2) - I don't hear these sounds there are sounds there
01:04:384 (3) - a 1/2 slider would fit better since there are no drum sounds in between it's pretty hard to distinguish normal sounds and additive drum sounds in this section so a kickslider fit best because there was a lot of sounds going on there
01:06:606 (1) - unnecessary nc. it's fine
01:36:235 (4,5) - should be 1/3 read above

o sht 2 short ill shoot star pls dont hurt me

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Log Off Now 2017-02-01T00:56:51+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
m4m from ur q

General
Tag conflict with frost's diff whoops
uhh custom hitsound 69? pls change to 1 before i disqualify thx kappa what am i doing with my life memeing xd
frost's insane with a sv of 1.7 but winter break with 1.4? hmm

Normal
Really hard to understand the NC pattern used here. reworked a lot of ncs xd
00:08:458 (6) - 01:32:902 (1) - inconsistent nc the nc patterning here is following the 'dododo' in the vocals
01:32:532 (4,5) - not really a big problem but lets just make these a teensy bit closer together ye
01:37:717 (2,3) - sorta weird how you start stacking again here when you haven't done that for 01:34:198 (2,3) - here or 01:31:421 (2,3) - here. I think making identical patterns would be better consistency wise. this is because this section is almost the exact same music as the start, so it follows the same visuals

summer break
00:11:050 (2) - how come you don't map the sound here but map it 01:36:235 (3) - here? since this little piano part in the second section is one of the only few differences in this section i wanted to map that instead
00:40:124 - should map triplet because that sound is pretty big ye
01:36:235 (3) - if you listen closely, it is 1/3 ok so thats why it sounds weird xd, fixed
01:40:124 (3,4) - Just a suggestion, I think it would emphasize better if this set of notes were facing the same way as 01:39:569 (1,2) - these two. Creating sharper movement instead of flowy movements can help emphasize. good idea, did something a little differently though

o sht 2 short ill shoot star pls dont hurt me

thanks for the mod and stars!

_orange

440 posts

Joined September 2015

_orange 2017-02-01T01:20:15+00:00

hey M4M

[Normal]

00:12:161 (3,1) - NCs are a bit unusual for me but maybe the NC should be switched here
00:29:939 (1,2,3) - Make the tail of 1, 2, and the head of 3 a triangle, it looks better. Right now it's a bit off
00:44:013 (4,1,2) - ^ Same here
00:58:828 (3,2) - I wouldn't make these the same, the musics a lot different so it doesn't really fit imo

[DavidEd's Hard]

00:07:532 (4,5) - I don't think you really have to emphasize 5, you didn't do it here 00:13:458 (4,5) -
00:21:050 (1) - 00:26:791 (9,1) - These need more emphasis imo
00:57:161 (2,3,4) - Spacing here is very confusing
00:52:902 (8) - Curve this slider to make it less awkward
01:06:050 - I think you should make this clickable
01:18:365 - You might want to map this sound

[frost's Insane]

00:19:569 (1,4) - Fix this stack
00:59:569 (1,2) - Spacing may be confusing to read, it looks a lot like this 01:00:865 (1,2) -
01:05:402 (1) - Why NC? I don't see a reason to here
01:14:198 (1) - This could flow better, maybe ctrl j?

[Winter Break]

00:40:217 - I would map this sound
00:44:569 (5) - I know there's a vocal on the red tick but it doesn't feel right to have the tail on such a strong downbeat
00:52:347 (1,6) - Stack?
01:06:050 (2) - Find a way to make both vocals here clickable
01:31:976 (1,2) - The flow here is a bit wonky

That's all I could find, GL!

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 2017-02-01T01:27:48+00:00

_orange wrote:
hey M4M

[frost's Insane]

00:19:569 (1,4) - Fix this stack ooh thanks
00:59:569 (1,2) - Spacing may be confusing to read, it looks a lot like this 01:00:865 (1,2) - nah, it's fine
01:05:402 (1) - Why NC? I don't see a reason to herefixe
01:14:198 (1) - This could flow better, maybe ctrl j? flow isnt everything

That's all I could find, GL!

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-01T01:35:28+00:00

_orange wrote:
hey M4M

[Normal]

00:12:161 (3,1) - NCs are a bit unusual for me but maybe the NC should be switched here yup
00:29:939 (1,2,3) - Make the tail of 1, 2, and the head of 3 a triangle, it looks better. Right now it's a bit off fixed
00:44:013 (4,1,2) - ^ Same here fixed (+ a few more :p)
00:58:828 (3,2) - I wouldn't make these the same, the musics a lot different so it doesn't really fit imo i don't want to make the rhythm more dense here because the music isn't that intense, + the slider follows the brass instrument in the background so i think it fits ok as it is

[Winter Break]

00:40:217 - I would map this sound updated in proezreals mod ^^
00:44:569 (5) - I know there's a vocal on the red tick but it doesn't feel right to have the tail on such a strong downbeat i think its ok, its obvious to the player that they're following the vocals and the drums are just mapped passively
00:52:347 (1,6) - Stack? yup (also fixed a duplicate hitsound on (1)
01:06:050 (2) - Find a way to make both vocals here clickable i want to give more emphasis on the drum hit than the vocal here, making them clickable would make me lose that emphasis
01:31:976 (1,2) - The flow here is a bit wonky ?? i think it plays fine

That's all I could find, GL!

thanks for the mod!

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2017-02-01T02:03:34+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
fixed all...

_orange wrote:
00:21:050 (1) - 00:26:791 (9,1) - These need more emphasis imo i stacked because of double bass and spaced out on the vocal beat because its stronger

Thanks

fixes

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iPhone XIII

5 posts

Joined October 2014

iPhone XIII 2017-02-01T02:55:36+00:00

Hey m4m

Normal
01:24:754 (1,2,3) - OCD kickin in a lil, maybe into a bit more of a skinny triangle, its thicker than a bowl of oatmeal rn
01:37:717 (2) - idk, feels a bit oddly placed, like its trying to form a dub chin. Maybe more centralized?
01:39:569 (1,2,3) - maybe just me, but felt awkward that the notes were off this far to the left, higher a bit

DavidEd's Hard
00:05:124 (1,2,3) - Bit of an uneven triangle, OCD comes in. Move them a little to make an equilateral triangle?
00:06:235 (1) - Regarding that^ maybe if an equilateral triangle was there, this note could be spaced out a little bit farther away from the sliders?
00:21:976 (3,4,6,7) - Maybe just me again, but this threw me off a little bit. Maybe a bit higher?
00:47:532 (10,1) - Looks ugly. New combo instead of that color changing?

Frost's Insane
00:38:828 (1,2) - Slider hidden, threw me off a lil bit. Move it to the left a tad bit so it doesn't mistake for a single note?
00:40:217 (5,1) - Oddly placed note on slider. Switch to the opposite side or somewhere on the other side but closer maybe?
01:04:013 (1,2,3) - ODC kicked in with the slider not leading into a straight line.
01:22:902 (4,1) - Kinda far spacing for this sort of difficulty, no?

Winter Break
Discussed this already with Log, fixed it and looks fairly good now.

SrSkyPlayer

487 posts

Joined January 2014

SrSkyPlayer 2017-02-01T17:40:20+00:00

General
fine

Winter Break
01:35:495 (1,2,3) - I don't think doing something like this should cover that sound very well, at least doing something like you did before (00:05:124 (1,2,3) -) would fit so much better

frost's Insane
disable widescreen support
00:11:050 (2) - I don't know what are you trying to emphasize here but it's kinda out of place, I mean it's not covering anything here and if you were trying to follow that flute sound you did it wrong. You can replace that for 2 1/2 circles without any problems tho
01:04:384 (3) - it somehow doesn't make the next slider 01:04:754 (1) - very clickable, should be because you did that reverse slider one tick more than enough, trying to make it finishes here 01:04:569 - would be fine

DavidEd's Hard
disable widescreen support

Normal
01:41:050 (1) - this spinner is triggering me because it starts too quick, I think starting somewhere like here 01:41:050 - should be better

Really cool set, good luck~

Log Off Now

957 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-01T18:40:33+00:00

iPhone 7 wrote:
Hey m4m

Normal
01:24:754 (1,2,3) - OCD kickin in a lil, maybe into a bit more of a skinny triangle, its thicker than a bowl of oatmeal rn it wasn't meant to be a triangle xd
01:37:717 (2) - idk, feels a bit oddly placed, like its trying to form a dub chin. Maybe more centralized? im not sure what you mean??
01:39:569 (1,2,3) - maybe just me, but felt awkward that the notes were off this far to the left, higher a bit ok

Winter Break
Discussed this already with Log, fixed it and looks fairly good now.

SrSkyPlayer wrote:
General
fine

Winter Break
01:35:495 (1,2,3) - I don't think doing something like this should cover that sound very well, at least doing something like you did before (00:05:124 (1,2,3) -) would fit so much better if you listen closely the first four notes that 01:35:495 (1,2) - cover are 1/2, i also want to hit the bell sound thats on (2)

frost's Insane
disable widescreen support whoops

DavidEd's Hard
disable widescreen support whoops

Normal
01:41:050 (1) - this spinner is triggering me because it starts too quick, I think starting somewhere like here 01:41:050 - should be better following the guitar held note and not that final part

Really cool set, good luck~

thanks for the mods!

Vivyanne

1,217 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2017-02-01T20:45:43+00:00

SPOILER

2017-02-01 21:24 HighTec: top dif fya
2017-02-01 21:25 Log Off Now: yeye
2017-02-01 21:25 HighTec: 00:15:865 (3,1) - idk about this timing gap, i understand that there isnt rly anything playing here
2017-02-01 21:25 HighTec: but leaving out even a chance of a slider to emphasise the flute thing
2017-02-01 21:25 HighTec: makes it feel really empty and kinda suprising as sudden break
2017-02-01 21:25 Log Off Now: doing that would feel strange though because the previous 1/1 sliders are following the bell
2017-02-01 21:26 HighTec: was thinking of perhaps
2017-02-01 21:26 HighTec: a kickslider or 1/2
2017-02-01 21:26 HighTec: having the break in is fine but it still feels kin d a long
2017-02-01 21:26 Log Off Now: ands only following half the flute doesnt make sense to me
2017-02-01 21:26 Log Off Now: i think its ok as it is atm
2017-02-01 21:26 HighTec: uwu
2017-02-01 21:27 HighTec: 00:16:976 (4,1,2,3,4) - where is my big spacing change compared to before since the drums are kicking in ?? ? ?
2017-02-01 21:27 Log Off Now: o
2017-02-01 21:27 Log Off Now: ye
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: i got told the star looked shit
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: ya
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: and totally forgot spacing is important
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: it doesnt look like a star LOL
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: fixing lmao
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: Thanks
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: fk sake
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: kd earned ye bb
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: ok if anyone calls it a star
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: its not
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: from now onm
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: g.
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: "ye but hitec told me it no look liek star so it no star !"
2017-02-01 21:29 Log Off Now: now it looks like a dumb star
2017-02-01 21:29 Log Off Now: but its ok because its not a star
2017-02-01 21:29 HighTec: lmao
2017-02-01 21:29 Log Off Now: ok i increased the spacing on 4/triple
2017-02-01 21:29 HighTec: yay
2017-02-01 21:30 Log Off Now: ezpz
2017-02-01 21:30 HighTec: 00:29:939 (1) - note feels like its missing emphasis from drum b eat
2017-02-01 21:31 Log Off Now: uh idk what i can rly do about that one without making an ugly overlap on the 3 slider end
2017-02-01 21:31 Log Off Now: nvm i lowered 6
2017-02-01 21:31 Log Off Now: so a bit bigger spacing
2017-02-01 21:31 HighTec: https://gabepower.s-ul.eu/yIPhsmeO quick idea
2017-02-01 21:32 Log Off Now: 00:30:680 (3,1) - that makes the flow into this wonky af tho
2017-02-01 21:32 HighTec: ya i just realised
2017-02-01 21:32 HighTec: fUK
2017-02-01 21:32 HighTec: o welL
2017-02-01 21:32 Log Off Now: i just lowered 6 for a bit more spacing
2017-02-01 21:32 HighTec: ya sounds goo d
2017-02-01 21:33 HighTec: 00:38:828 (1,2) - i think u might wanna increase spacing here as it might be confused with 00:38:087 (4,5) - spacing
2017-02-01 21:33 HighTec: also strong sound thing
2017-02-01 21:33 HighTec: i mean u have that weird bell thing so why not tell the player its shit
2017-02-01 21:33 HighTec: \o
2017-02-01 21:33 HighTec: 00:41:606 (6,2) - fix stack
2017-02-01 21:33 Log Off Now: rofl
2017-02-01 21:33 Log Off Now: oops
2017-02-01 21:33 Log Off Now: ty
2017-02-01 21:34 Log Off Now: 00:39:569 (2) - tbh i think the spacing on here is ok because of how previous 00:37:347 (3,4) - was spaced
2017-02-01 21:34 HighTec: tru
2017-02-01 21:34 Log Off Now: havent had anyone have any reading issues with it yet
2017-02-01 21:34 HighTec: ok then well skip
2017-02-01 21:35 HighTec: 00:48:458 (3,4) - i feel like u couldve done more with vocal here that is on blu tick
2017-02-01 21:35 HighTec: since now ur ignoring vocal chan ge
2017-02-01 21:35 Log Off Now: vocal on blue?
2017-02-01 21:35 HighTec: ya
2017-02-01 21:35 Log Off Now: the main impact of the vocal is on white/red
2017-02-01 21:35 HighTec: i hear be at there
2017-02-01 21:35 HighTec: no lies
2017-02-01 21:36 Log Off Now: oh 3/4
2017-02-01 21:36 Log Off Now: not 2/3
2017-02-01 21:36 Log Off Now: LUL
2017-02-01 21:36 HighTec: d
2017-02-01 21:36 Log Off Now: i was listening at the wrong thing
2017-02-01 21:36 HighTec: ggg
2017-02-01 21:36 Log Off Now: i guess, but i also want to hit the switch on the red tick aswell at least passively
2017-02-01 21:37 HighTec: do what u feel like
2017-02-01 21:37 Log Off Now: think ill leave that one, cus its not super noticeable
2017-02-01 21:37 HighTec: i just thought itd be fun to emphasise the change in vocals ya
2017-02-01 21:37 Log Off Now: yeye i getchu
2017-02-01 21:38 HighTec: 01:06:606 (1,3) - wai t y didnt u stack dis
2017-02-01 21:38 HighTec: is no visible overlap for mi
2017-02-01 21:38 HighTec: so would b better 2 stack imo o
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: o
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: i fukd up the stack
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: xd
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: fix
2017-02-01 21:39 HighTec: 01:16:421 (2,3,4,5,6) - star pls ok tha nk
2017-02-01 21:39 HighTec: 2 is off for the star ):
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: breh
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: its not a star
2017-02-01 21:39 HighTec: LOL
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: LUL
2017-02-01 21:40 Log Off Now: its two trianglesd
2017-02-01 21:40 Log Off Now: hehe xd
2017-02-01 21:40 HighTec: 01:21:421 (4) - different shape than 01:20:680 (2,3) - but no big change in song :thinking:
2017-02-01 21:40 HighTec: but 2 triangles make hexagon not pentagon z
2017-02-01 21:40 Log Off Now: wait was i consistent in my aesthetics up until that point?
2017-02-01 21:40 HighTec: ya
2017-02-01 21:40 Log Off Now: holy shit
2017-02-01 21:40 HighTec: otherwise i wouldve complained
2017-02-01 21:41 Log Off Now: my subconcious be like woaaaa
2017-02-01 21:41 Log Off Now: i didnt even notice
2017-02-01 21:41 Log Off Now: lmfao
2017-02-01 21:41 HighTec: wooa
2017-02-01 21:42 Log Off Now: ok changed
2017-02-01 21:42 HighTec: meh nothing esle that trigers me
2017-02-01 21:42 HighTec: o wait
2017-02-01 21:42 HighTec: i see the ar now
2017-02-01 21:42 HighTec: T R I G R D
2017-02-01 21:42 Log Off Now: d e n s i t y
2017-02-01 21:42 Log Off Now: this is precious wing v2
2017-02-01 21:42 HighTec: d
2017-02-01 21:42 Log Off Now: but with less triples
2017-02-01 21:43 HighTec: can i just say one thing about the song itself
2017-02-01 21:43 Log Off Now: ye?
2017-02-01 21:43 Log Off Now: apart from boring i already know that one
2017-02-01 21:43 HighTec: there is a reason to where i dont map most anime songs
2017-02-01 21:43 HighTec: :^)
2017-02-01 21:43 Log Off Now: xd
2017-02-01 21:43 Log Off Now: this song is probably the most boring one i've mapped
2017-02-01 21:44 HighTec: how do u even last
2017-02-01 21:44 HighTec: anywyaz want me to post loggo or
2017-02-01 21:44 HighTec: nah
2017-02-01 21:44 Log Off Now: yeye ofc

changes to some patterning and some emphasising things

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2017-02-01T21:47:09+00:00

iPhone 7 wrote:
DavidEd's Hard

00:05:124 (1,2,3) - Bit of an uneven triangle, OCD comes in. Move them a little to make an equilateral triangle? sure

00:06:235 (1) - Regarding that^ maybe if an equilateral triangle was there, this note could be spaced out a little bit farther away from the sliders? i dont on this pattern 01:35:495 (7,8,9,1) - so ill keep consistency. i keep the same spacing to not throw people off rhythm

00:21:976 (3,4,6,7) - Maybe just me again, but this threw me off a little bit. Maybe a bit higher? could you perhaps elaborate as to how it threw you off? (if you read this that is)

00:47:532 (10,1) - Looks ugly. New combo instead of that color changing? i have to keep nc consistent unfortunally

Thank you

@iphone apparently widescreen was off when i updated to i think lon fixed that for me. you sneaky, gurl

fixes

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Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2017-02-02T00:06:20+00:00

Did some IRC modding on the Normal and Insane.

Quick summary: Combo colors were blendy against the video, slider style usage is really inconsistent (linear vs. curved), patterns are forgettable, spacing is inconsistent in the highest diff and doesn't really represent the music well.

Good luck!

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 2017-02-02T12:06:28+00:00

SrSkyPlayer wrote:
General
fine

frost's Insane
disable widescreen support wowo
00:11:050 (2) - I don't know what are you trying to emphasize here but it's kinda out of place, I mean it's not covering anything here and if you were trying to follow that flute sound you did it wrong. You can replace that for 2 1/2 circles without any problems tho was not trying to emphasize the flute, the background rhythm was composed similar to 00:05:124 (1,2,3) -
01:04:384 (3) - it somehow doesn't make the next slider 01:04:754 (1) - very clickable, should be because you did that reverse slider one tick more than enough, trying to make it finishes here 01:04:569 - would be fine i see!

Really cool set, good luck~

Frost's Insane
00:38:828 (1,2) - Slider hidden, threw me off a lil bit. Move it to the left a tad bit so it doesn't mistake for a single note? nah its good
00:40:217 (5,1) - Oddly placed note on slider. Switch to the opposite side or somewhere on the other side but closer maybe? nah its good not everything has to be normal

01:04:013 (1,2,3) - ODC kicked in with the slider not leading into a straight line. i like it better tilted
01:22:902 (4,1) - Kinda far spacing for this sort of difficulty, no? i usually put object on downbeats far away from previous objects, ive done it for most objects in kiai that consist of intense/new lyrics

diff: http://puu.sh/tL0jM/c90be5044f.osu

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2017-02-02T15:56:10+00:00

cringy mod on a cringy song of a cringy mapper

[Winter Jake]
-00:07:532 (1) - id convert to circles
-00:08:458 (4) - why u make the vocals unclickable now skrub? if u ever choose to make a 1/1 slider it should be here 00:09:939 - instead of that non-sense repeat slider
-00:14:384 (4) - NO, no no no no, i hate this slider shape, its sotarks' trademark aaaaaa it looks untidy and bad with that transition after
-00:18:087 (1) - u are not sotarks just stack the damn thing on 00:17:161 (1) -
-00:20:865 (6) - dem overlaps kill meeeeeeeeeeee
-00:23:828 (5) - eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
-00:28:458 (1,3) - in the end, u are not better then him... http://puu.sh/tLcpK/e585382479.jpg
-00:30:680 (3) - eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
-00:35:680 (4) - wtf stack it S T A C K I T
-00:41:791 (1) - id make this rythme http://puu.sh/tLcDA/8aac387176.jpg
-00:44:569 (5) - no no no u cant make a big downbeat like that unclickable jake. just convert the damn thing in circles
-00:50:495 (1) - NO
-00:58:643 - id make triplet here
-01:00:309 (2) - #sotarks
-01:12:161 (4) - sssssssssssssssssssstack
-01:19:939 (4,5) - u following vocals so ctrl+g for rythm skrub
-01:30:680 (1) - the tail should be clickable

[Insane Jake]
-00:05:124 (1,3) - no need for claps
-00:11:050 (2) - nothing is on 1/6 u fgt, its all on 1/2 both melody and flute
-00:09:939 (3,1) - i dont get why put anchor when curve isnt noticable
-00:35:495 (3) - this overmap
-00:39:291 (2) - are u skystar? why overmapping dude
-00:45:124 (2) - more shap pls like this http://puu.sh/tLdEB/8b290281a2.jpg
-00:47:717 (1,4) - parallel when http://puu.sh/tLdGE/ef0a4f0edb.jpg
-00:57:717 (1) - curve the last part like this http://puu.sh/tLdcK/23c5c4179d.jpg
-01:11:235 (1) - 01:11:791 (2) - 01:12:902 (1) - 01:12:532 (5) - curve more or just remove anchor
-01:36:235 (4,5) - 1/3

[Hard Jake]
pls just combo every big downbeat i dont wanna see 13 combo lol
-00:21:976 (3) - feels overmapped
-00:27:902 (3) - ^
-00:31:606 (5) - ^
-01:06:050 (2,3) - no need to increase spacing for those

cringe cringe cringe

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2017-02-02T16:23:17+00:00

HB24 wrote:
[Hard Jake]
pls just combo every big downbeat i dont wanna see 13 combo lol yup
-00:21:976 (3) - feels overmapped if i find a way to replace it with something better, i will. its decent atm
-00:27:902 (3) - ^ ^
-00:31:606 (5) - ^ ^
-01:06:050 (2,3) - no need to increase spacing for those true

i seriously cringed so hard at this mod. so cringe...

thanks!

fixes

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: privatesky.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66976
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6235,18087,35865,40124,41791,59569,62532,65124,66976,98272,98365,98458,100680,105495
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:PrivateSky
TitleUnicode:PrivateSky
Artist:Hoshizaki Iria
ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora ni Tsubasa wo Hirogete pulltop eroge visual novel expansion opening short version davided frostwich
BeatmapID:1188944
BeatmapSetID:558107

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"SnowPresent.avi"
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Log Off Now

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-02T17:44:51+00:00

HB24 wrote:
cringy mod on a cringy song of a cringy mapper

[Winter Jake]
-00:07:532 (1) - id convert to circles would be inconsistent with previous pattern
-00:08:458 (4) - why u make the vocals unclickable now skrub? if u ever choose to make a 1/1 slider it should be here 00:09:939 - instead of that non-sense repeat slider the bell
-00:14:384 (4) - NO, no no no no, i hate this slider shape, its sotarks' trademark aaaaaa it looks untidy and bad with that transition after lol i think its ok
-00:18:087 (1) - u are not sotarks just stack the damn thing on 00:17:161 (1) - but then i lose blanket
-00:20:865 (6) - dem overlaps kill meeeeeeeeeeee
-00:23:828 (5) - eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
-00:28:458 (1,3) - in the end, u are not better then him... http://puu.sh/tLcpK/e585382479.jpg ok ok ok ok ok relax breh
-00:30:680 (3) - eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
-00:35:680 (4) - wtf stack it S T A C K I T
-00:41:791 (1) - id make this rythme http://puu.sh/tLcDA/8aac387176.jpg maybe if more people suggest, i think its ok atm
-00:44:569 (5) - no no no u cant make a big downbeat like that unclickable jake. just convert the damn thing in circles following vocals, and is consistent with the echo i follow in the bar after
-00:50:495 (1) - NO yes
-00:58:643 - id make triplet here theres nothing to make a triplet for tho
-01:00:309 (2) - #sotarks breh this slider look ok :thinking:
-01:12:161 (4) - sssssssssssssssssssstack
-01:19:939 (4,5) - u following vocals so ctrl+g for rythm skrub ye
-01:30:680 (1) - the tail should be clickable i think its ok, it follows the extended vocal

cringe cringe cringe

this mod

cringe

i left all the overlaps because they dont look shit and make it easier to read whats next
thanks xd

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 2017-02-02T20:28:46+00:00

HB24 wrote:
cringy mod on a cringy song of a cringy mapper

[Insane Jake]
-00:05:124 (1,3) - no need for claps it sounds cool
-00:11:050 (2) - nothing is on 1/6 u fgt, its all on 1/2 both melody and flute im 99% sure melody 1/3 but if i get more mods about it will chane
-00:09:939 (3,1) - i dont get why put anchor when curve isnt noticable my mapping style noob
-00:35:495 (3) - this overmap no its not theres a guitar scratch there
-00:39:291 (2) - are u skystar? why overmapping dude theres sounds all on those ticks which are mappable but eh
-00:45:124 (2) - more shap pls like this http://puu.sh/tLdEB/8b290281a2.jpg no
-00:47:717 (1,4) - parallel when http://puu.sh/tLdGE/ef0a4f0edb.jpg ok
-00:57:717 (1) - curve the last part like this http://puu.sh/tLdcK/23c5c4179d.jpg i like it now
-01:11:235 (1) - 01:11:791 (2) - 01:12:902 (1) - 01:12:532 (5) - curve more or just remove anchor no no no no
-01:36:235 (4,5) - 1/3 i will consider thise

cringe cringe cringe

diffff: http://puu.sh/tLwWd/c201570d29.osu

Shurelia

Global Moderator

2,782 posts

Joined December 2013

Shurelia 2017-02-03T07:55:54+00:00

3d kotori ready to...
things

[GeneraL]

y u didn't add Kotori to the tag even though SHE is the one who's doing the perfomance of this song ? ? "羽々音小鳥" "Habane Kotori"
silence the slider-slide's sound please. It doesn't really fit in this kind of song.

[Normal]

00:10:495 (3) - since the tail ended up on a downbeat probably it'll be mucho better if you change this into 2 cirlces instead. It also able to emphasize the drum on the bgm.
00:11:050 (1) - naah, not really necessary to do NC on this.
00:16:421 (3) - same
00:16:976 (1) - same
00:18:458 - why no map this ;;
00:29:939 (1) - but yeah seriously you really should map the break since it's awkward for me to resuming on the middle of a section (Highly suggested)
tbh I don't understand about your NC concept at here. Sometimes you did NC on new vocal section sometimes you aren't. plesae re-check

[Hard]

00:17:161 (7,8,9) - probably shouldn't stack these since the other stack that I found on this map are on 1/2 rhythm while this one have 1/4. It can confuse players.
00:55:680 (7,8,9) - same thing like the previous stacks

[Insane]

00:40:217 (5,1) - nice idea but this is kinda awkward to play so yeah but just stack it with instead.

[Winter Break]

fine, i guess

Where's the Easy ? ?

BeatofIke

4,172 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2017-02-03T08:04:04+00:00

Mod from my queue! I have not modded maps for a while, so I'm a bit rusty lol.

[Normal]

Wow! The break time is a really good spot here. Nice shot! owo=b

[Hard]

01:35:495 (7,8,9) - I don't hear 1/3 beats at the first 2 sliders (the last one is fine though). I would just use 1/2 sliders just like the Insane difficulty has done owo

[Insane]

00:11:050 (2) - Where's the 1/3 beats at? I can't hear it anywhere ._.
00:39:291 (2) - Ghost note. I hear no sounds here o3o
01:35:495 (2) - Same as 00:11:050 (2) lol.
01:36:235 (4,5) - These notes should be in 1/3, not 1/4. Alternately, you could just use 1/2 notes for this part if you like :3

[Winter Break]

Good ^-^

This song takes me back to 2014. Glad that some of the songs I mapped a few years ago are getting re-mapped haha.

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2017-02-03T13:01:59+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
00:17:161 (7,8,9) - probably shouldn't stack these since the other stack that I found on this map are on 1/2 rhythm while this one have 1/4. It can confuse players. gonna answer below

00:55:680 (7,8,9) - same thing like the previous stacks delete the notes and listen to it again. it is 1/4 but a different sound (1st one being snare triple and 2nd being tom triple)

BeatofIke wrote:
01:35:495 (7,8,9) - I don't hear 1/3 beats at the first 2 sliders (the last one is fine though). I would just use 1/2 sliders just like the Insane difficulty has done its the same rhythm used at 00:05:124 (1,2,3) - so it shouldnt come as a suprise to anyone. idk why the insane decided to ignore these beats as there are nothing else worthy of emphasizing here but i may be using NC on the beginning of these just for readability

Appreciate the help guys

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957 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-03T15:08:21+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
3d kotori ready to...
things

[GeneraL]
y u didn't add Kotori to the tag even though SHE is the one who's doing the perfomance of this song ? ? "羽々音小鳥" "Habane Kotori" i never really thought of that xd, added both tags
silence the slider-slide's sound please. It doesn't really fit in this kind of song. eeeee maybe if more people suggest

[Normal]
00:10:495 (3) - since the tail ended up on a downbeat probably it'll be mucho better if you change this into 2 cirlces instead. It also able to emphasize the drum on the bgm. since this is lowest diff i'm trying to make it as easy as possible whilst still maintaining all of the main beats
00:11:050 (1) - naah, not really necessary to do NC on this.
00:16:421 (3) - same
00:16:976 (1) - same
00:18:458 - why no map this ;; give players a bit of a break since it's the easiest diff, and trying to not overmap the vocals (since thats all there really is to follow) whilst maintaining the easiest diff is a bit difficult
00:29:939 (1) - but yeah seriously you really should map the break since it's awkward for me to resuming on the middle of a section (Highly suggested) i kinda disagree here, i think there is a transition in the two bars before the break ends that is a clear indicator that there is a change in the music incoming
tbh I don't understand about your NC concept at here. Sometimes you did NC on new vocal section sometimes you aren't. plesae re-check ye i reworked nc's again xd

Where's the Easy ? ? i think the normal is easy enough, and making an easy diff for this song whilst still making it fun to play is difficult, as the song focuses a lot on the offbeat and using lots of 1/2 in easy diffs isn't allowed, maybe if a bn thinks the spread needs it i'll try map an easy again, but i think the normal is passable for lowest diff in the set

BeatofIke wrote:
Mod from my queue! I have not modded maps for a while, so I'm a bit rusty lol.

[Normal]
Wow! The break time is a really good spot here. Nice shot! owo=b thanks ^^

[Winter Break]
Good ^-^
This song takes me back to 2014. Glad that some of the songs I mapped a few years ago are getting re-mapped haha. i recently played the android version of this game and it was my first vn i've actually played, the music was pretty good and it turns out there are two more expansions to the game, so i wanted to map the op to each one, then it turns out you've done the same thing but a loooong time ago, i promise im not stealing the songs you map xd

thanks for the mods!

Aniviuh

216 posts

Joined January 2015

Aniviuh 2017-02-03T17:26:16+00:00

Consider compressing the video. The filesize exceeds the 24mb file limit. (According to the OpenAi Mod)

- Normal -
00:53:643 (1) - Why is this slider so complex? Compared to the other sliders in the map it feels out of place.
00:13:457 (4,5) - DS seems a bit too high. (1.06)
00:34:013 (3) - DS seems to high. (1.11)
00:38:087 (5) - ^
00:49:198 (3) - DS seems too low (.93)

They're minor but it would be nice to fine tune them.

I can't really find anything wrong with the other maps because I avoid mapping them.

I hope this helps! GL!

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-03T20:00:30+00:00

ViolentBoo wrote:
Consider compressing the video. The filesize exceeds the 24mb file limit. (According to the OpenAi Mod) its fine, mapset is under 30mb

- Normal -
00:53:643 (1) - Why is this slider so complex? Compared to the other sliders in the map it feels out of place. give visual emphasis on the drum fill, the second slider 00:56:606 (1) - doesn't because there are only hihats in the drums
00:13:457 (4,5) - DS seems a bit too high. (1.06) fix as best as i could (its higher because stack)
00:34:013 (3) - DS seems to high. (1.11) ^
00:38:087 (5) - ^ ^
00:49:198 (3) - DS seems too low (.93) fix, this was my error :p

They're minor but it would be nice to fine tune them.

I can't really find anything wrong with the other maps because I avoid mapping them.

I hope this helps! GL!

thanks for the mod!

Hekireki

132 posts

Joined October 2013

Hekireki 2017-02-03T20:40:17+00:00

Hi! Coming from my queue

[Winter Break]

An AR9> Insane in 2017? Is this a dream?

00:18:087 (1) - I don't use a microscope to scan every blankets there is in a map but this one is pretty off just by briefly looking at it
00:31:050 (1) - Hmm i don't really understand the wave here because you have a symmetric pattern right next, what about straightening this slider or reduce the curves on both sides?
00:33:458 (4,5,1) - Looks rather cramped compared to the visual spacing you used during this section, try spreading it out a little bit
00:41:421 (5) - I think this would look more structured if you used it as the symmetry axis for the rest of the pattern, placing it at around x:440 y:142 works well
00:46:976 (4) - I would reverse this instead of having 00:47:347 (5) - as a circle, to fit the fading out feel in the song/the transition
01:04:384 (3,7) - Fully stack these?
01:28:828 (5) - I think you could place this at x:67 y:213 to make it the center of the whole 01:27:717 (1,2,3,4) - pattern, i also think decreasing ds here works well to emphasize to contrast better with how 01:29:013 (6,7,8) - are spaced out

Clean diff, good shit

[frost's Insane]

00:12:532 (2,3,1) - Would look better if you made the blankets consistent here
00:39:291 (2) - I really can't hear anything here but tbh even if there is (pretty sure there's not) i don't think it's appropriate to map them here considering it's a really calm part
01:05:495 - I'd suggest to add a note here, there's no reason to end the stream on the blue tick imo. Yes, drums end at that point but it's a lot more intuitive if you add the note for vocals so it ends on the white tick instead
01:27:717 (1,2,3) - Same as my first point
01:33:087 (4,1) - Any reason of why you changed the overlap pattern from 01:31:976 (1,2) - and 01:32:902 (3,5) - ?
01:36:235 (4,5,1) - Isn't this 1/3? I didn't point it out for 00:11:791 (4,5,1) - but i think they sound slightly different

Clean diff aswell

Hope any of this helped, good luck

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957 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-03T20:49:44+00:00

LeeSinOrAfk wrote:
Hi! Coming from my queue

[Winter Break]

An AR9> Insane in 2017? Is this a dream? wew
00:18:087 (1) - I don't use a microscope to scan every blankets there is in a map but this one is pretty off just by briefly looking at it fix
00:31:050 (1) - Hmm i don't really understand the wave here because you have a symmetric pattern right next, what about straightening this slider or reduce the curves on both sides? represents the wave like motion in the pitch of the bass
00:33:458 (4,5,1) - Looks rather cramped compared to the visual spacing you used during this section, try spreading it out a little bit moved 4 a bit for even spacing on both sides of (1)
00:41:421 (5) - I think this would look more structured if you used it as the symmetry axis for the rest of the pattern, placing it at around x:440 y:142 works well did something a bit different
00:46:976 (4) - I would reverse this instead of having 00:47:347 (5) - as a circle, to fit the fading out feel in the song/the transition i disagree, the red tick here is the weakest between these two white ticks, so it shouldn't be clickable imo
01:04:384 (3,7) - Fully stack these? oops, fix
01:28:828 (5) - I think you could place this at x:67 y:213 to make it the center of the whole 01:27:717 (1,2,3,4) - pattern, i also think decreasing ds here works well to emphasize to contrast better with how 01:29:013 (6,7,8) - are spaced out did something a little different, good idea though

Clean diff, good shit
Hope any of this helped, good luck

thanks for the mod!

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 2017-02-03T23:01:11+00:00

00:40:217 (5,1) - nice idea but this is kinda awkward to play so yeah but just stack it with instead. ok

00:11:050 (2) - Where's the 1/3 beats at? I can't hear it anywhere ._. i will attempt to fix
00:39:291 (2) - Ghost note. I hear no sounds here o3o fix
01:35:495 (2) - Same as 00:11:050 (2) lol. this 01:35:495 (2) - is essentially the same rhythm like 00:05:124 (1,2,3) - , it's 1/3
01:36:235 (4,5) - These notes should be in 1/3, not 1/4. Alternately, you could just use 1/2 notes for this part if you like :3 1/3 it is ;3

difff + hitsounds: http://puu.sh/tN8Rd/f93f7bd61e.rar

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2017-02-04T02:16:56+00:00

Ohayo~ As requested in exchange of a GD that I should've made ages ago >w<!!

Normal
Comment: This is a really pleasant and lovely difficulty to read and play! >w< Most of the patterns are catchy and the flows can be easily handle along with the structure of the note-placement. Good job! \o3o/ Some minor concerns:

00:34:013 (3) - In terms of beat-emphasis, this slider skips a very important sound 00:35:309 - which I think it would be cool if it were emphasized. As it is now it feels rather flat than actually providing feedback with the slider-reverse.
00:39:939 - This might have probably been suggested before and I'm totally against the idea of ignoring such as a great sound here. While I find the rhythm of emphasizing only the bell-sound somewhat reasonable, I strongly disagree with giving emphasis ONLY to that hitsounds. Hence, I do believe that, while adding a circle 00:39:939 - here, stressing that instrument up would feel way more intuitive to players. Just as well as you did here 00:41:050 (4) - with the slider-end.
00:41:050 (4) - This is only a reference, but I think it would hurt no one if you could use a 1/2 slider+reverse instead here to accentuate better the instruments. Might be somehow subjective, but worth to give it a try. /w\
01:30:680 - Quite interesting way to map this section, which really differs from the one you've mapped here 00:06:235 - Variation is important but I'm not sure is a good idea to map these section entirely different from each other. The way I see things, I think it would be more pleasant to players if you could avoid using 1/2 sliders as 00:09:754 (2,3) - 00:15:680 (2,3) - since it becomes unexpectedly harder from players to get the timing of them.

Since I was supposed to map a GD, here I only modded one diff as the deal. >w< Best of success with ranking! :3

Affirmation

2,548 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-02-04T07:28:47+00:00

Q

[Normal]
00:06:606 (2,5,6) - stack?
00:24:752 - I recommend you map this break.
01:17:717 (1) - Nc doesn't necessary imo

[Winter break]
00:26:421 (4,6,2) - looks overlap not so good for me.
00:40:217 (5,6,1,4,6) - make triangle? could be bettter.
01:06:606 (1) - ctrl G, looks weird pattern.
01:32:902 (4,1) - make blanket?

GL

Left

2,162 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-02-05T04:16:52+00:00

M4M~

[Normal]
00:44:754 (5) - NC 00:46:235 (1) - off
00:50:680 (5) - NC 00:52:161 (1) - off but maybe you have intention here?
00:52:532 (2,3,1) - maybe can make perfect triangle
01:34:384 (4) - only didn't stack with 3 here. reason?

all minor things, nice rhythm choice lol

[DavidEd's Hard]
used NC every 2dowbeats, but I felt it's too long often. at least you can use NC per 1 downbeat in Kiai part

00:16:976 (6) - I think NC here would be better since sound became stronger obviously. and number is too high

00:28:087 (4) - no obvious sound, I think just 1/2 slider from 00:27:902 (3) - would be better
00:48:643 (4,5) - improve blanket if you intended
01:16:606 (3,4,5,6) - can make square? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239296

[frost's Insane]
00:16:976 (2,3,4) - strong sounds here, maybe at least can use drum addition sounds or normal sampleset to show it
00:55:495 (3,7) - minor one, this two is too close. maybe can lower circle6 to improve it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239331
01:06:606 (1) - this nc really necessary
01:17:161 (1,2,3) - can make more linear from red tick of that slider?

your pattern use was quite interesting

[Winter Brake]
00:40:680 (1,2,3,4,6) - can make it better shape? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239365
00:44:939 (6) - NC 00:45:124 (1) - off
01:01:976 - maybe I can see your intention of 01:01:421 (1,2,3) - but missed this sound felt slightly uncomfortable.
01:05:124 (7,8,9,10,1) - stream-slider flow isn't nice. intentional?
01:22:347 (2,3,4,1) - make overlap degree same
01:40:680 (1) - can use more distance here?

ahh song is too nice..call me when you map nice song like this later...
good luck with your rank!

Osu Tatakae Ouendan

osu! Alumni

333 posts

Joined December 2010

Osu Tatakae Ouendan 2017-02-05T05:59:39+00:00

From World's Largest M4M Queue

('w')
[Normal]
00:10:495 (3) - My suggestion is to have it facing to the right like this: http://puu.sh/tOOKY/d744cb0f5c.jpg Reason is that with the slider end pointing upward, it feels like the gap of time between 00:09:754 (2,3) - is not obvious enough (i.e. it's not easy to tell they are 3/2 apart at first glance) because there's "more objects" in the space between them if the slider points upward. Having it face to the right opens up the space between them and makes the time gap more apparent. See 00:15:124 (1,2,3) - for example, where 2 and 3 are not bounded by any other hitobjects around them, and so the rhythm is easier to tell

At the kiai: I think you should map to vocals more. First half of the map maps to strong sounds: 00:06:235 - 00:18:087 - vocals are the dominant strong sound, with those bass sounds on 1/2s every now and again. Post break, strong bell sounds or bass, but thanks to vocals being on white ticks they're also mapped to vocals, with rhythm choices actually emphasizing vocals. On the kiai, vocals are the loudest parts of the song, so I think you should change the following parts:
01:06:976 (1,2,3) -
01:12:902 (1,2,3) -
01:18:828 (1,2,3) -
Rhythm should go something like this: http://puu.sh/tOVvK/7012cbb9ef.jpg

01:32:532 (4) - I think this should be on 01:32:717 - to mirror previous mapping at the intro, and the fact that the vocals are the strongest part here with not much to map to on 01:32:532 -
01:32:902 (1) - Re:move NC and NC this 01:33:643 - instead.

[davided's Hard]
My general opinion is that since you have some 1/2 jumps here and there, any 1/1s should be spaced out a bit more so that they're easier to distinguish, these notes in particular:
00:16:976 (6) -
00:22:532 (5) -
00:34:013 (4) -
00:52:347 (5) -

Sorry I can't really find something else to point out without affecting the map style

[frost's Insane]
00:11:050 (2) - not sure why this is 1/3, since doesn't sound like there's something to map to 1/3 here.
00:39:291 (2) - not sure why this is here either, there's nothing to map to here, it's not easy to guess the slider is actually on blue tick, and the 1/4 transition to 00:39:569 (3) - is hard to read as well.

[Winter Brake]
00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - It's in my opinion that you should space them like this (what is this called, anti-jumps? idk the term), specially since most of the map has spaced out 1/2s and i don't think this portion here warrants something like this

Hope this helps (/w\)

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2017-02-05T10:56:05+00:00

Left wrote:
used NC every 2dowbeats, but I felt it's too long often. at least you can use NC per 1 downbeat in Kiai part lon didnt update my latest changes
00:16:976 (6) - I think NC here would be better since sound became stronger obviously. and number is too high fix
00:28:087 (4) - no obvious sound, I think just 1/2 slider from 00:27:902 (3) - would be better stacked
00:48:643 (4,5) - improve blanket if you intended fix
01:16:606 (3,4,5,6) - can make square? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239296 i think this arrowhead pattern looks good

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:
My general opinion is that since you have some 1/2 jumps here and there, any 1/1s should be spaced out a bit more so that they're easier to distinguish, these notes in particular:
00:16:976 (6) -
00:22:532 (5) -
00:34:013 (4) -
00:52:347 (5) -

Some of these got fixed anyways because of Left's mod (2nd mention)

Lon didnt update my last changes so NC was messed up.

Thanks for the mods!

FIXES

osu file format v14

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Melter

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Melter 2017-02-05T21:01:55+00:00

frost's Insane
00:16:976 (2,3,4) - strong sounds here, maybe at least can use drum addition sounds or normal sampleset to show it ok!
00:55:495 (3,7) - minor one, this two is too close. maybe can lower circle6 to improve it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239331 , i think its fine, the distance spacing emphasis is ok and that part is more intense compared to that section of the song
01:06:606 (1) - this nc really necessary ok change
01:17:161 (1,2,3) - can make more linear from red tick of that slider? yes

your pattern use was quite interesting thanks i guess

frost's Insane
00:11:050 (2) - not sure why this is 1/3, since doesn't sound like there's something to map to 1/3 here. already changed it
00:39:291 (2) - not sure why this is here either, there's nothing to map to here, it's not easy to guess the slider is actually on blue tick, and the 1/4 transition to 00:39:569 (3) - is hard to read as well. already changed it

dif: http://puu.sh/tPUel/3e36b2eb31.osu

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HappyRocket88 wrote:
Ohayo~ As requested in exchange of a GD that I should've made ages ago >w<!!

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Comment: This is a really pleasant and lovely difficulty to read and play! >w< Most of the patterns are catchy and the flows can be easily handle along with the structure of the note-placement. Good job! \o3o/ Some minor concerns:
00:34:013 (3) - In terms of beat-emphasis, this slider skips a very important sound 00:35:309 - which I think it would be cool if it were emphasized. As it is now it feels rather flat than actually providing feedback with the slider-reverse. since this is the lowest difficulty in the set, and i didn't make the previous sound here 00:32:161 (4) - clickable either i left them both out for consistency and ease of playability
00:39:939 - This might have probably been suggested before and I'm totally against the idea of ignoring such as a great sound here. While I find the rhythm of emphasizing only the bell-sound somewhat reasonable, I strongly disagree with giving emphasis ONLY to that hitsounds. Hence, I do believe that, while adding a circle 00:39:939 - here, stressing that instrument up would feel way more intuitive to players. Just as well as you did here 00:41:050 (4) - with the slider-end. good idea, made this clickable aswell
00:41:050 (4) - This is only a reference, but I think it would hurt no one if you could use a 1/2 slider+reverse instead here to accentuate better the instruments. Might be somehow subjective, but worth to give it a try. /w\ will consider this, it works pretty nice both ways, will wait for more feedback
01:30:680 - Quite interesting way to map this section, which really differs from the one you've mapped here 00:06:235 - Variation is important but I'm not sure is a good idea to map these section entirely different from each other. The way I see things, I think it would be more pleasant to players if you could avoid using 1/2 sliders as 00:09:754 (2,3) - 00:15:680 (2,3) - since it becomes unexpectedly harder from players to get the timing of them. again will consider, i'm pretty sure i'm going to change a least a little bit of this section for more visual consistency, i'm not sure about removing the 1/2 sliders since i don't know how else to map the dodo/bass kicks without having to use needless 1/1 sliders or harder circles
Since I was supposed to map a GD, here I only modded one diff as the deal. >w< Best of success with ranking! :3

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Normal]
00:06:606 (2,5,6) - stack? can't stack without breaking ds/visual consistency
00:24:752 - I recommend you map this break. i think its ok, the part where it jumps back in is after a clear 1 bar transition
01:17:717 (1) - Nc doesn't necessary imo maybe change, i think it works well to accent the drum part and show a change in rhythm, but will change based on more feedback

[Winter break]
00:26:421 (4,6,2) - looks overlap not so good for me. moved 6 a bit
00:40:217 (5,6,1,4,6) - make triangle? could be bettter. fixed i think
01:06:606 (1) - ctrl G, looks weird pattern. no thanks, doing this gives weird flow onto 01:06:976 (1) -
01:32:902 (4,1) - make blanket? i think its ok, doing this would give 4 too much spacing emphasis

GL

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M4M~

[Normal]
00:44:754 (5) - NC 00:46:235 (1) - off
00:50:680 (5) - NC 00:52:161 (1) - off but maybe you have intention here? didn't nc these because the nc would cut off halfway through the vocal line which is what i'm following here, the ncs are where they are because it follows a different section momentarily whilst the vocals are out
00:52:532 (2,3,1) - maybe can make perfect triangle fix
01:34:384 (4) - only didn't stack with 3 here. reason? it's harder to read when stacked at this low difficulty

all minor things, nice rhythm choice lol

[Winter Brake]
00:40:680 (1,2,3,4,6) - can make it better shape? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239365 thats the shape i was going for xd, fixed
00:44:939 (6) - NC 00:45:124 (1) - off fix
01:01:976 - maybe I can see your intention of 01:01:421 (1,2,3) - but missed this sound felt slightly uncomfortable. maybe changed based on more feedback, this would fit into 1/2 pretty easy but the vocal switches are a bit late so i wanted to try hit that by having sliders on blue tick
01:05:124 (7,8,9,10,1) - stream-slider flow isn't nice. intentional? ye its intentional, i wanted to slow down the players movement here
01:22:347 (2,3,4,1) - make overlap degree sameoops, fix
01:40:680 (1) - can use more distance here? ok

ahh song is too nice..call me when you map nice song like this later... i might already have a song if you're interested ^^
good luck with your rank!

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:
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[Normal]
00:10:495 (3) - My suggestion is to have it facing to the right like this: http://puu.sh/tOOKY/d744cb0f5c.jpg Reason is that with the slider end pointing upward, it feels like the gap of time between 00:09:754 (2,3) - is not obvious enough (i.e. it's not easy to tell they are 3/2 apart at first glance) because there's "more objects" in the space between them if the slider points upward. Having it face to the right opens up the space between them and makes the time gap more apparent. See 00:15:124 (1,2,3) - for example, where 2 and 3 are not bounded by any other hitobjects around them, and so the rhythm is easier to tell
yup, good idea, fix
At the kiai: I think you should map to vocals more. First half of the map maps to strong sounds: 00:06:235 - 00:18:087 - vocals are the dominant strong sound, with those bass sounds on 1/2s every now and again. Post break, strong bell sounds or bass, but thanks to vocals being on white ticks they're also mapped to vocals, with rhythm choices actually emphasizing vocals. On the kiai, vocals are the loudest parts of the song, so I think you should change the following parts:
01:06:976 (1,2,3) -
01:12:902 (1,2,3) -
01:18:828 (1,2,3) -
Rhythm should go something like this: http://puu.sh/tOVvK/7012cbb9ef.jpg i kinda disagree here, i wanted to map the vocals passively and focus on the main drum beat since thats much easier for newer players to play as it's consistent, which is especially important in the lowest diff of a set. i focused more on the vocals earlier in the song because thats the only thing that you realistically can map without having really long sliders

01:32:532 (4) - I think this should be on 01:32:717 - to mirror previous mapping at the intro, and the fact that the vocals are the strongest part here with not much to map to on 01:32:532 - maybe, since the snare is a lot more pronounced in the outro compared to the intro i wanted to give it proper emphasis, maybe change based on more feedback
01:32:902 (1) - Re:move NC and NC this 01:33:643 - instead. fix + 1 removed another nc a bit later for consistency

[Winter Brake]
00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - It's in my opinion that you should space them like this (what is this called, anti-jumps? idk the term), specially since most of the map has spaced out 1/2s and i don't think this portion here warrants something like this
these are spaced like this because the tom toms play in groups of two, to represent that better than having individual jumps between each tom tom hit, i had jumps between each group of tom tom hits
Hope this helps (/w\)

thanks for the mods! updated all diffs

Dawns

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Dawns 2017-02-06T19:36:00+00:00

I'll edit this post into a mod eventually

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2017-02-08T00:01:48+00:00

Winter Break

00:10:495 (4,1,2,3,4) - This could be arranged more structurally imo. The triangle makes it look like its trying to be structured, but then the sliders mess it up.
00:15:124 (1,2,3) - These jumps really don't feel necessary here. Theyre really big but don't reflect any especially strong notes in the song ;p
00:18:087 - 00:40:309 - This whole section is really quiet. I feel you've overmapped this section and used too many jumps and circles xP.
00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Something like this would be a much better rhythm. Though i think the jump from 4>5>1 is still too big for the section.
00:41:791 - This section onward the music picks up and you hear more instruments int he background and theres a more frequent drum beat. But right now because of the overmap on the previous section you don't really get to appreciate that increase in density and tempo.
01:06:513 - No triplet?

frost's Insane

00:11:421 (3) - 1/2 slider? Theres definitely a note on the red tick
00:14:569 (4) - This note is barely audible i don't think it deserves a jump like this xP
00:27:902 (3) - Quite overmapped, Just do a 1/1 gap here?
00:39:384 (2) - ^
00:59:198 (6,1,2) - This is easily misread because 6>1 is a 1/2 jump but 1>2 is a 1/1 gap.

DavidEd's Hard

00:31:606 (2) - Sounds overmapped here. 1/1 gap?
00:34:569 (2) - ^

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00:16:421 (3) - I woudl extend this to a 1/1 slider instead because mapping 00:16:791 - leads into the next few notes better.
00:35:680 (4,1) - Use a 1/2 slider instead. two clicks is really dense here for a section thats supposed to be quiet. You could do a 1/1 rhythm here too
00:41:791 (1,2,3,4) - Weird that you're beginning a section thats more upbeat with such simple rhythms.
01:19:569 (2,3) - Moving these back 1/2 a beat sounds better with vocals.

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Monstrata wrote:
Winter Break

00:10:495 (4,1,2,3,4) - This could be arranged more structurally imo. The triangle makes it look like its trying to be structured, but then the sliders mess it up. i don't really understand what you mean here?
00:15:124 (1,2,3) - These jumps really don't feel necessary here. Theyre really big but don't reflect any especially strong notes in the song ;p reduced and changed following pattern a little bit
00:18:087 - 00:40:309 - This whole section is really quiet. I feel you've overmapped this section and used too many jumps and circles xP. i think i'll get some more opinions on this first, i wanted to make sure that i hit the vocals/occasional piano and emphasise them because there really isn't anything else in this section to do, over simplifying it wouldn't feel right for top diff either, so i'm not sure what i can really do apart from reduce the overall spacing
00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Something like this would be a much better rhythm. Though i think the jump from 4>5>1 is still too big for the section. nerfed the jump
00:41:791 - This section onward the music picks up and you hear more instruments int he background and theres a more frequent drum beat. But right now because of the overmap on the previous section you don't really get to appreciate that increase in density and tempo. i see what you mean, will ask for more opinions
01:06:513 - No triplet? no, i think the spacing emphasis between the bass kick and the rest of the music kicking in is more important hitting the piano scale

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00:16:421 (3) - I woudl extend this to a 1/1 slider instead because mapping 00:16:791 - leads into the next few notes better. i agree
00:35:680 (4,1) - Use a 1/2 slider instead. two clicks is really dense here for a section thats supposed to be quiet. You could do a 1/1 rhythm here too removed a circle since 1/2 slider would make the downbeat unclickable
00:41:791 (1,2,3,4) - Weird that you're beginning a section thats more upbeat with such simple rhythms. changed up this section a little bit by adding in more sliders and repositioned a few things
01:19:569 (2,3) - Moving these back 1/2 a beat sounds better with vocals. doing this would be inconsistent with the rest of the kiai, and since i'm focusing more on the simple drum beat i think it's ok as it is

thanks for the mod!

Miquella

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Miquella 2017-02-08T11:44:50+00:00

frost insane,

00:11:791 (4,5) - feel like you kinda losed the priveledge for this rhythm after you made the whistle land on a sliderend 00:11:050 (2) -
follow something consistently please

winterbreak

00:10:865 (1,2,3) - He means that your triangle looks bad?, i think rhythm sucks instead because the whistle that comes here is more prominent, and you just ignore it at first and then map to it :/, normal-hitwhistle also fit on these sliderbodies+sliderheads as a small suggestion

SPOILER

00:15:124 (1) - copy this slider and paste it 00:15:680 (2) - there

01:04:569 (4,5,6) - vocals stop there so i woudn't keep expanding that jump there

01:38:643 (4,5,6,7,8) - your star is uneven

SPOILER

_Meep_

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_Meep_ 2017-02-08T11:47:44+00:00

There is a space between private and sky ._. Its been ranked b4

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_Meep_ wrote:
There is a space between private and sky ._. Its been ranked b4

Precious Wing was ranked before but the metadata is movie ver, the tracklist on the official website lists it without the space (seen in the screenshot, can't link cuz nsfw) so I think its ok

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zev wrote:
winterbreak

00:10:865 (1,2,3) - He means that your triangle looks bad?, i think rhythm sucks instead because the whistle that comes here is more prominent, and you just ignore it at first and then map to it :/, normal-hitwhistle also fit on these sliderbodies+sliderheads as a small suggestion
SPOILER

the rhythm is fine imo, the bell on the 00:11:421 (4) - is extremely important compared to the rest of the sounds here, so i changed it into a slider, copy pasted it because having another 2 circles for a less intense sound compared to the rest of the bar doesn't make sense to me, i could change all of it into circles, but i feel like that would be overmapping it

00:15:124 (1) - copy this slider and paste it 00:15:680 (2) - there ?? why

01:04:569 (4,5,6) - vocals stop there so i woudn't keep expanding that jump there these jumps don't follow the vocal they follow the rising pitch and intensifying snare roll

01:38:643 (4,5,6,7,8) - your star is uneven it wasn't meant to be a star, but i changed the pattern now :p
SPOILER

thanks for the mod!
oops double post sorry

_Meep_

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_Meep_ 2017-02-09T03:01:54+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
_Meep_ wrote:
There is a space between private and sky ._. Its been ranked b4
Precious Wing was ranked before but the metadata is movie ver, the tracklist on the official website lists it without the space (seen in the screenshot, can't link cuz nsfw) so I think its ok

I meant that this private sky song was ranked before

iYiyo

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iYiyo 2017-02-13T02:23:44+00:00

hello there

m4m

[Winter Break]

00:39:569 (2,3,4) - feels like you could increase 00:39:569 (2,3) - distance a bit so the short time-distance 00:39:939 (3,4) - here is more noticeable
00:58:828 (2,3,4) - idk but this pattern here feels a bit messy in terms of DS. maybe you can do some symmetry copying 00:59:198 (4,5) - instead of the actual 00:58:828 (2,3) - ?
01:38:458 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - from the whole diff, i'd say that this is the only pattern that is messy, maybe you could try with some big triangle and then a mini triangle inside? idk but 01:38:828 (5,7,8) - it looks like random to me x.x

[frost's]
00:31:050 (1,1) - maybe you can do some color hax here and make both have same color? since they have same DS change and it's very noticeable I think it would fit quite good.
[DavidEd's]
since normal has ar4 and insane 8.5 I think that reducing the AR a bit would fit better for the mapset. maybe ar 6? 6.5? 7? idk xD but you get the idea
01:17:347 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - idk but spacing here feels a bit messy D: specially for 01:17:902 (3,4,5,1) - I think you could try with more similar DS for these? the music isn't that intense for those mini jumps imo

[normal]
00:15:124 (1) - why not making this a 1/1 slider just like u did 00:09:198 (1) - here?
00:40:680 - mmm I feel like you should map this beat, it might be a normal diff but still missing noticeable beats aren't good imo
00:44:754 (5) - since you were doing a NC every 2 downbeat, this should have a nc no? and so on..
01:23:272 - missing hitsound? maybe clap?

Ok that's all from me. Couldn't say much cause the set is already fine, you should call a BN D:

GL!

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