Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV size) · forum

walaowey

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2017-02-07T06:29:41+00:00

Yohanes wrote:
Flower
- 00:08:570 (2,4) - unsightly overlap, better if you can avoid them fixed from previous mod
- 00:24:934 (8) - move to 306|61 (stack with 6)? it feels more natural to jump there compared to suddenly change the spacing mid-jump imo. Not to mention it will have better transition toward the next slider i'm keeping this, imo the instruments there was slowing down on (8) then strong on (1), i think its ok here
- 00:27:271 (2,3) - It would be better if you swap this rhythm. Because the vocal start on 00:27:271 - and the sound on 00:27:466 - isn't as strong as 00:27:661 -. So, put a slider on 00:27:271 - is a no-brainer to me http://puu.sh/txUnG/9f2b06b78b.jpg yea, you're right, fixed
- 00:28:830 (2,3) - same here fixed
- 00:31:752 (2,3,4) - & 00:33:311 (2,3,4) - is nice
I think that's it.
Oh, in your future map, Try don't confine yourself to map "only" with hexagonal pattern because that can make some pattern's movement not as fluid as it can be. for example 01:13:051 (6,7,1) - for this, each of them have upward movements, resulting the sliders to move upward too, 00:48:505 (1,2,3,4) - this is flowing fine too imo can be better if you "break" those hexagonal pattern they are fluid to me tbh
Oh, Hi Calvin lol ayy

It feels like top 2 difficulty was made by the same mapper lool looooolll
Good luck!

thanks for the mod xD

Toyosaki Aki

Toyosaki Aki wrote:
Hi~ :3
from PM　※I'm not good at English

Flower
00:17:336 (1,2) - this is noticeable overlap through the whole. would change it to stack, perfectly unstack, or the way like 01:06:427 (5,1) - is better imo. this one should be ok imo, lets see what others will say about this
01:07:012 (1) - would move to about x:237|y:230? matching 01:07:012 (1) - 's center and 01:06:427 (5) - 's end is nice to look I think. If do it, also 01:06:817 (6,4) - would move with 01:07:012 (1) - ofc. alright fixed xD
SPOILER

all diffs look really fine~
nice mapset & song :3

thanks for the mod xD

Nya

-Nya- wrote:
Hi, you requested via PM.

General:
It would be a good idea if all the diffs end on the same spot. Mainly because it seems like there are different opinions on where the last spinner’s tail should be placed. If you listen to the music at 25%, you’ll hear that the music actually stops playing here: 01:29:155 – (It’s snapped to 1/6) I suggest ending all diffs here. Just talk to the GD’ers about this.

Flower:
Why didn’t you put your name in this diff? Everyone will think Del05 mapped it. LOLL ok fixed this, bcoz i think flower only will sound better :^)
You can actually raise the HP and AR a bit, so that it’s not the same as the Insane. i think ar8.5 works nicely but i'll think about this
I noticed that you didn’t use any hitsounds for these sounds: 00:00:583 - 00:00:973 - 00:01:362 – etc. Del05 did use a nice hitsound for them though and I highly suggest you do the same. Leaving them empty isn’t a good idea since the sounds can be heard so clearly. i dont really remember seeing that sampleset when i map >< , nvm i'll do it xd, its alot better with hitsound like u said
00:05:453 (2) –For strong vocals like this I suggest more spacing for more emphasis. The vocal really stands out and I feel the spacing should support that. Here are more similar places where a bit more spacing can be added to support the vocal: 00:17:921 (2) - 00:21:427 (3) – i'll think about this, bcoz for most slow parts i follow strong instruments only, want to keep it constant
00:21:817 –It would be better if there was a circle here instead imo. Because the vocal on the tail sound rather strong and a circle would emphasize that better. fixed

You can try something like above.
00:23:181 –Almost same as above. This piano beat sounds important so instead of a slider’s repeat, it would be better to have a slider’s head or a circle there instead for more emphasis. So perhaps a pattern like this: i heard piano sounds on (4) only actually, so i think its ok here xP

Also, the vocal here: 00:22:012 – is quite long so it would be a good idea to have a 1/1 slider there instead to support that. (Like I showed in the pic above) fixed
00:24:739 (7,8) –This spacing is so small and I don’t think it’s a good idea since the beat on (8) isn’t really that calm. I suggest increasing the distance a bit. i'm keeping this, imo the instruments there was slowing down on (8) then strong on (1), i think its ok here
00:27:271 (2,3) –Not the best flow. It’s a bit uncomfortable. Perhaps try something like this instead: fix it another way

Just lift the tail of the slider upwards a bit, like shown above. Or you can try a different approach; just something that flows nicely from (2)
00:28:245 (1,1) –You can stack here for aesthetic reasons. Right now it doesn’t look that good. i've changed this from previous mod
00:31:752 (2,3) –Same as 00:27:271 (2,3) – i'll think about this, the flow looks good to me
00:36:622 (4,5) –This is quite a big jump. One of the biggest before the kiai. I don’t really think the beat on 00:37:012 (5) – is strong enough to support this big jump. It also looks inconsistent with the other previous jumps. Imo the spacing here: 00:37:012 (5,6) – should be bigger than the spacing here: 00:36:622 (4,5) – since the beat on the head of 00:37:206 (6) – is stronger. yea i'm placing jump based on the piano sounds here but you're right, it looks inconsistent, reduced jump
00:46:947 (1,2) –I don’t really understand why this is a combo on its own. I think you should rather remove the NC here: 00:47:726 (1) – since there isn’t really anything in the music that suggests a NC there. fixed
00:49:284 (1,2) -^, remove NC here: 00:49:284 (1) – fixed
00:55:129 (2,3) –This is the only place where you added a jump for the beat here: 00:55:518 (3) – It’s a bit weird since you didn’t do this at the other similar patterns. I support the jump since it’s nice to emphasize the strong beat, but then you should do this for the other patterns as well for consistency. Places like: 00:50:843 (3) - 00:53:960 (3) - 00:58:635 (3) – can be emphasized more with a bit more spacing. i've decided to remove those jump instead

If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to poke me in-game. Good Luck~

thanks for the mod xD, nice and detail mod

Tenseki

Tenseki wrote:
hi, pm-req
i forget how 2 mod ;w ;
[Flower]
00:17:920 (2,3) - make it blanket perfectly its nice for me lol
00:22:596 (3,4) - two suggestion i'll keep it, since the sound is very weak, reverse slider works good imo
i) 1/2 slider and one circ
ii) 1/2 slider and two circs becuz there is low sound at 00:23:382
00:26:103 (4) - set to clap sounds good, i'll add the clap for the next part too xD
00:27:856 (4) - add clap? i didnt hear any sound there xP, this song got weird hitsound omg =3=
00:27:856 (4) - ctrl+j for making flow better with next slider changed this from previous mod
00:29:025 (3,1) - so concentrated in center changed this from previous mod
i show u one e.g about 00:29:025 (3)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7172671
make them better flow
00:50:843 (3) - not fit with this time about adding angle imo fixed

gl!

thanks for the mod xD

Irohas

Irohas wrote:
as requested

flower
01:02:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to improve this pattern, doesn't look good tbh but it flows nice imo
00:16:557 (3,4) - try to make as you did before making 00:16:752 - clickable the beat is weak there, will keep it
00:49:284 (1) - normal-hitfinish doesn't fit with the song at all D: previous mod suggest me to do that D: and i think its nice tbh xD
01:12:856 (5,6) - what about trying ctrl+g those ? I think it'll fit the flow better i think the flow is ok now
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sorry for this short mod, no kds if no change good luck!

thanks for the mod xD

Lecana

Lecana wrote:
Hi(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

[Flower]
00:31:362 (1) - this slider more long up to the point of 00:31:752 keeping this, 00:31:752 is clickable imo[/notice]
good song good mapset
Fight~٩(｡•ㅂ•｡)و

thanks for the mod xD

Adol Christin

Adol Christin wrote:
I'm coming, old friend.

Flower
I firstly thought the main diff is made by Del himself, until KaedekaShizuru reminded me..... yup fixed it from previous mod xd
00:09:349 (4) - how about moving this to (402,282)? It looks better. flow quite sharp, anyway i've fix this through previous mod xd
00:15:778 (1,2,3,4) - imo this pattern is quite boring, since the rhythm is quite repetitive. I tried another kind of "flower" pattern here. At least i hope u can change the rhythm. i think i'll keep this for now xP, i like this pattern more and better flow imo
00:45:194 (1,3) - blanket? fixed
01:07:986 (4,5) - Try this i've fixed (4) only, bcoz it (5) is bent, the transition to (1) is not that nice imo
The flow is nice, but urmap contains too many straight 1/2 sliders, which makes the general look messy. i think u need to avoid this consciously in the future. will do

That's all. Good luck!

Thanks for the mod xD

Little

Little wrote:
[General]

[Flower]
00:09:544 (1,2,3,4) - I think it would feel better if these were spaced out a bit more. The player is really only going to hit the slider head and hold instead of moving all the way through so it feels like playing 1/1. Same for 00:15:778 (1,2,3,4) i'll keep this for now, this is ok already for me, i'll see what others say bfore deciding :3
Good luck!

thanks for the mod xD

Xinying

Xinying wrote:
just messing around in editor and want to point a few things

Flower
00:22:986 (4) - this rhythm is much better because your current rebound doesn't follow anything. i'll keep this, it fits the slowing down of beats on the red ticks imo
00:27:271 (2) - turn from 00:26:688 (1) - plays very awkward, much prefer it stacked to 00:25:908 (3) - to have sort of a 90 degree curve fixed this from other mod
00:48:895 (3) - really huge unexpected jump even though there is a cymbal sound. Try placing it on 146|102 and 00:49:090 (4) - on 262|225 prefer the current jump, the cymbal was very loud, its nice to emphasize it with dem big jumps LOL
01:04:869 (4,5) - drum bass - drum bass - drum kick is better mapped as note-note-slider imo, to put emphasis on the bass. just take note for your future maps kk

pretty sure spinner ends at 1/6 because of the cut audio, I wonder where to find a better mp3?

thanks for the mod xD

updateaaa

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Wow thats quite a long reply ><
del i copy your hitsound for the front part xP, its nice

sorry for the delay anyway xd

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2017-02-07T11:37:57+00:00

Finally
time to search bn i think xD

all fix xinying mod

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2017-02-12T17:49:01+00:00

Is this the best mp3 you've got? The fade out at the end really feels sudden.

Easy.
Quite a fine easy, I can say. The rhythms were simple enough yet reflecting this particular song effectively enough.
01:00:200 - Missing clap.
01:17:343 (3) - Why the sudden linear curve? Applying a different slider concept felt inconsistent to happen.
01:25:329 (2) - This is the only 1/2 slider in this diff. Since such short sliders are not recommended in lower diffs, do you think this is avoidable?

Normal.
00:49:290 (6) - The curve rate of this slider was too high considering the length to be short. Try using a less curve rate.

Hard.
00:06:433 (1,2) - The spacing feels a bit close with the slider path. Mind giving more space?
00:35:070 (2,3) - I'm pretty sure it is possible to keep the spacings while not making things forced. I don't see a point using a random jump here.

Insane.
00:22:992 (3,4,1,2) - I'm pretty sure this plays poorly. The spacing of (3,4,1,2) is nearly the similar while the rhythms are different in (4,1). Also there wasn't a flow change at (4,1,2) so the jump starting from (1) quite had a weird experience while the song didn't called for.
00:29:225 (3,4,5) - (4) is having a jump while there is a strong sound at (5). The jump selection felt random to be here. Compare with how you did at 00:41:693 (3,4,5).
00:46:758 (5) - Similar opinion here. No need for such a large spacing when there weren't any strong sound.
01:27:570 (1) - You'll want to end this spinner at the same spot with other difficulties for consistency.

Walao.
00:21:823 (4) - This could have a bigger spacing with the previous because you've used bigger ones before xd
00:22:602 (2,3) - I don't see much reason for a jump here.
01:22:700 - The vocal line appears here. Mind giving expressing this difference?

Fine quality afterall.

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2017-02-13T13:48:00+00:00

All Fixed

Thank you Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:
00:35:070 (2,3) - I'm pretty sure it is possible to keep the spacings while not making things forced. I don't see a point using a random jump here. Actually i want to emphasis the piano sound xD. but if you said like that, i try to make the jump smaller (from 1.5 to 1.3)

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2017-02-13T14:14:15+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Insane.
00:22:992 (3,4,1,2) - I'm pretty sure this plays poorly. The spacing of (3,4,1,2) is nearly the similar while the rhythms are different in (4,1). Also there wasn't a flow change at (4,1,2) so the jump starting from (1) quite had a weird experience while the song didn't called for. This particular pattern has been switched a few times. I've decided to put 00:23:181 (4) - back to it's original spot at 500|293, and give 00:23:570 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:24:349 (1,2,3,4) - 2 different flow and direction to symbolise the difference in the rhythm. It should be much better now
00:29:225 (3,4,5) - (4) is having a jump while there is a strong sound at (5). The jump selection felt random to be here. Compare with how you did at 00:41:693 (3,4,5). fixed
00:46:758 (5) - Similar opinion here. No need for such a large spacing when there weren't any strong sound. fixed
01:27:570 (1) - You'll want to end this spinner at the same spot with other difficulties for consistency. It is already ending on the same spot as other difficulties, but it's probably not updated yet~

besides that, I changed quite a lot of patterns which I think could interfere with quality and spacing consistency, my new diff (please update) -> https://puu.sh/u1jQ5/40040d7c17.osu

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2017-02-13T18:56:09+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Walao.
00:21:823 (4) - This could have a bigger spacing with the previous because you've used bigger ones before xd fixed
00:22:602 (2,3) - I don't see much reason for a jump here. i'm emphasizing the piano sounds here, i've increase (2) spacing so both (2) and (3) have jumps now to emphasize the pianos
01:22:700 - The vocal line appears here. Mind giving expressing this difference? added a circle

Fine quality afterall.

thanks for the mod xD

asdads

osu file format v14

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Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2017-02-14T11:40:06+00:00

All updated and change mp-3 please re-download it. thank you

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2017-02-15T00:22:58+00:00

feels like the spinner should be end on 01:29:534 - try to check it

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2017-02-15T03:48:07+00:00

??
I think have end it at there xD
Lemme check it again later

edit: i already end it at 01:29:437 (follow kaede mapset)

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2017-02-20T22:24:22+00:00

Nominated.

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2017-02-24T16:23:16+00:00

some things I want to nitpick

00:00:606 ~ 00:23:982 - I don't think repeated claps sound very good. Maybe try sampleset drum?
preview point is unsnapped
new mp3, but there is still sudden cut at the end ;_;

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2017-02-25T15:53:05+00:00

Xinying wrote:
some things I want to nitpick

00:00:606 ~ 00:23:982 - I don't think repeated claps sound very good. Maybe try sampleset drum?
preview point is unsnapped
new mp3, but there is still sudden cut at the end ;_;

About the clap sound xD sorry looks like i accidentally delete it before the last update xD (or i didnt copy it when i move my osu data to my new laptop xD) i will upload it soon same with preview point, i will fix it soon after i get bn

about the mp3, i use kaede's though xD maybe i will try to search it again since it is said that in itunes there is a tv size for this

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-02-25T16:47:48+00:00

yeah fix that hitsounding thing for whatever diffs use your hitsounding

general
I'd suggest making the pink and yellow combocolors a bit less bright as they don't fit well with others, for example: http://i.imgur.com/9FIR5Ri.jpg

Combo1 : 254,241,90
Combo2 : 255,128,191
Combo3 : 178,159,151
Combo4 : 165,196,230
Combo5 : 182,224,84
Combo6 : 255,227,210

walao
bit higher drain would be nice, like 6.5 or even 7
how about setting stack leniency to 5? that way your 1/1 would become perfect stacks, which I think makes the map look a bit cleaner, up to you though.
00:01:580 (3,4) - unlike all other intro stacks this has vocals on both notes, so mapping it differently would be nice
00:49:307 (3) - feels a bit overdone spacing wise, maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/J1oiLVT.jpg that still fits your hexagons
01:11:125 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - really think this should be toned down a bit, your other jumps are kinda supported by vocals, so having only held vocals here makes it feel a bit too much, less spacing/circles would be great
01:27:489 (6,7) - this is one held vocal and a consistent drum roll, so a 5 note stream would fit better than kicksliders

xin
slightly lower ar would be great, like ~8-8.2
00:26:515 (5,6) - why is this suddenly stacked? dont think it works well here with the other emphasis and you don't stack similar things
00:42:878 (1,2) - this one maybe too, how about something like http://i.imgur.com/n8Hcrr9.jpg
00:46:190 (2) - this one works better cause of ther snare on the first note
00:55:346 (2) - why the sudden offbeat emphasis? white ticks seem more important here to me
01:04:112 (6,7) - is stacked when all other similar ones are jumps?
seems alright overall, I just don't get some of your 1/2 stacks lol

hard
fine

normal

eh
00:00:606 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - try to not have so many sliders, would be great if you could get rid of one or two an use some more circles here
same for basically the whole map, just try to make it a little more balanced
things like 00:13:073 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - are lol
chorus needs more circles, for example things like http://i.imgur.com/lv9Cg6i.jpg could work

easy
similar issue as normal, things like 00:26:320 (2) - could just be two circles
00:34:112 (4) - what is this following? all emphasis is on red ticks here. maybe http://i.imgur.com/iN3xsu1.jpg ?
00:46:579 (4) - ^
00:50:476 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - so many sliders :c maybe just replace some 1/1 sliders with circle + pause?
chorus also needs more circles

basically go over lower diffs and try to replace some slider with circles in parts where you have lots of sliders after each other.
slider are harder to play for beginner because you also have to hold and follow etc.
higher diffs are fine, so feel free to call me back if you can fix e/n

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2017-02-26T15:01:15+00:00

Lasse wrote:
I will let del decide on combo colors

xin
slightly lower ar would be great, like ~8-8.2 Changed to 8 to fit the spread
00:26:515 (5,6) - why is this suddenly stacked? dont think it works well here with the other emphasis and you don't stack similar things Fixed, stacked it on 00:25:930 (2) - for a circle flow
00:42:878 (1,2) - this one maybe too, how about something like http://i.imgur.com/n8Hcrr9.jpg sure
00:46:190 (2) - this one works better cause of ther snare on the first note
00:55:346 (2) - why the sudden offbeat emphasis? white ticks seem more important here to me Was following the instrument but yeah I'll change the rhythm for that part it should be better
01:04:112 (6,7) - is stacked when all other similar ones are jumps? right, fixed
seems alright overall, I just don't get some of your 1/2 stacks lol Actually I stack some 1/2 notes because I think they play better with the vocal, but it seems like they're all inconsistently bad. I'll fix what I can here, and I'll take note of this for my future maps. thank you!

also fixed a few things for better readability as ar8

thanks for the comments! they were really helpful

https://puu.sh/ukKP9/6f18853a28.osu

Last edited by Xinying 2017-02-26T15:06:29+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2017-02-26T15:02:05+00:00

seems like you don't need me anymore. good luck with the set!

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2017-02-27T01:41:21+00:00

Del05 wrote:
about the mp3, i use kaede's though xD maybe i will try to search it again since it is said that in itunes there is a tv size for this

full ver have been sold, but no short ver; the arrangement also different with short ver. gg

just qualified, gogogo

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2017-02-27T04:43:31+00:00

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
full ver have been sold, but no short ver; the arrangement also different with short ver. gg
just qualified, gogogo

we can always edit the mp3

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2017-02-27T08:39:35+00:00

Lasse wrote:
yeah fix that hitsounding thing for whatever diffs use your hitsounding

general
I'd suggest making the pink and yellow combocolors a bit less bright as they don't fit well with others, for example: http://i.imgur.com/9FIR5Ri.jpg seems like del fixed that xD
Combo1 : 254,241,90
Combo2 : 255,128,191
Combo3 : 178,159,151
Combo4 : 165,196,230
Combo5 : 182,224,84
Combo6 : 255,227,210
walao
bit higher drain would be nice, like 6.5 or even 7 alright sure
how about setting stack leniency to 5? that way your 1/1 would become perfect stacks, which I think makes the map look a bit cleaner, up to you though. i think i'll keep it as 7
00:01:580 (3,4) - unlike all other intro stacks this has vocals on both notes, so mapping it differently would be nice i'll keep this, bcoz the part after that i map it following the drum kick sound, and this part dont have that sound xD
00:49:307 (3) - feels a bit overdone spacing wise, maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/J1oiLVT.jpg that still fits your hexagons fixed
01:11:125 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - really think this should be toned down a bit, your other jumps are kinda supported by vocals, so having only held vocals here makes it feel a bit too much, less spacing/circles would be great change 2 circles -> slider
01:27:489 (6,7) - this is one held vocal and a consistent drum roll, so a 5 note stream would fit better than kicksliders fixed

thanks for the mod xD

updateaaa

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Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2017-03-04T04:11:26+00:00

some fixes

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2017-03-07T01:13:08+00:00

All updated

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2017-03-07T02:29:06+00:00

Lasse wrote:
Hitsound and color, all fixed

Normal
All fixed. I try to use my rhythm though, change some slider become circle, hope it is fine now

easy
All fixed. For chorus i change some 1/1 slider become 2 circles. But idk why the sr increase xD

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2017-03-07T06:32:01+00:00

its back bois!!

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-03-07T11:10:19+00:00

looks fine now
rebubbling cause so much changed on easy/normal

walaowey

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Joined March 2012

walaowey 2017-03-17T16:35:16+00:00

Doyak

osu! Alumni

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Joined November 2012

Doyak 2017-03-20T20:54:33+00:00

Random bubble check.

[General]
* I'm against the normal-hitclap in the intro. It just stands out too much on the calm part of this song. Especially when they're used on slider tails, they're so dominating that I lose track of what you're following now. It's even more strange that sometimes the notes are ignoring beats where those 'strong' hitsounds are supposed to appear. Try to find some softer hitsound to avoid this issue.

[Easy]
* 00:54:372 (2,3,4) - Can we avoid too much 3/2s? 00:53:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole transition of rhythm could be really confusing for new players. Use a reverse slider like others, or at least bind 3-4 as a slider. It fits the long vocal on 00:54:956 - as well.
* 01:01:385 (3) - This is pretty personal, but this pattern doesn't give any special feelings while it is one of the most unique sound in the whole song. 00:59:826 (1,2,3) - This as a whole looks very untidy as well. I would do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7615568 to give some kind of sharp flow to make it special, while balancing the whole pattern too.
* 01:14:437 - 01:14:826 - I may just add normal whistles here, cuz important
* 01:23:203 (2,1) - meh blanket

[Normal]
I don't like how this diff has some random-like trains instead of actual patterns, especially at the intro. It's hard to construct nice patterns with overlapped 1/2s, but you can still put some meaning behind the placements. 00:00:606 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 00:08:398 (3,4,5,1) - 00:20:865 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - etc. Not gonna ask you to improve all of them, but would be great if you can do something with them because this diff is the only one that seems to lacking proper patterns. I'd like to see at least a bit of adjusting before rebubbling this set.

* 00:03:333 (5) - 00:06:450 (5) - 00:09:567 (5) - I would avoid long trains for the calm intro. Also rather than the white ticks, the red ticks are generally important there imo, so you could just put a circle on 00:03:528 - 00:06:644 - 00:09:761 - instead.
* 00:29:826 - 00:42:294 - Consecutive claps sound really jarring. Just remove them from those.
* 00:41:709 (2) - 1/1 sliders sounds better for me because 00:42:099 - has both vocal and important drums. Also I would really try to avoid long trains that goes longer than a measure if possible.
* 00:38:787 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:44:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Also try to avoid these trains that are longer than the ones in the kiai D: There is no reason to make this part that dense.

[Hard]
* 00:36:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing. Why not just rotate (1) a little bit and put (2) closer to (3) so that they both have 1.20x, and pull 00:37:619 (4) - a bit upward to make it tidy 1.20x as well.

[Xinying's Insane]
* 00:28:268 - Missing clap
* 00:49:696 (3,4,5,6) - Could you at least put some hitsounds? Using a jump pattern without any hitsounds is very ironic.
* 00:56:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's quite weird that you suddenly changed the spacing concept when there's nothing changed in the song, nor the sv. Maybe a gradual increase of intensity for the entire part is fine, but at least you should use same concept within 00:56:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - these.

[Walao's Flower]
* 00:19:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The piano sound is not on 00:20:086 (4) - so using a full 1/2 jumps here reduces emphasis on what you're following here. Hope you would make a pattern that uses a slider for 00:19:891 (3,4) - . Well, you did it on 00:22:424 (1,2,3) - already so lol
* 00:59:826 (1,2) - I know it's for aesthetics but starting the jump pattern on this tiny beat doesn't seem right and exaggerated imo.

Fix these then you can call me back.

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2017-03-21T08:09:17+00:00

fixed everything

https://puu.sh/uSL6t/97107746d4.osu

Doyak wrote:
[General]
* I'm against the normal-hitclap in the intro. It just stands out too much on the calm part of this song. Especially when they're used on slider tails, they're so dominating that I lose track of what you're following now. It's even more strange that sometimes the notes are ignoring beats where those 'strong' hitsounds are supposed to appear. Try to find some softer hitsound to avoid this issue.

I'll second this, since it's a soft section hitsounds following piano is just fine

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2017-03-22T01:03:14+00:00

Arkkk...
I still busy with my univ stuff xD
I will apply the mod, search bn, and qualify it when i have more free time xD

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2017-04-01T05:18:57+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Random bubble check.

[Walao's Flower]
* 00:19:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The piano sound is not on 00:20:086 (4) - so using a full 1/2 jumps here reduces emphasis on what you're following here. Hope you would make a pattern that uses a slider for 00:19:891 (3,4) - . Well, you did it on 00:22:424 (1,2,3) - already so lol bye stars, jk aside, i've map it like 00:22:424 (1,2,3) - instead, since now that i listen it again , i heard both of their rhythm was similar, so using same rhythm here will be better
* 00:59:826 (1,2) - I know it's for aesthetics but starting the jump pattern on this tiny beat doesn't seem right and exaggerated imo. it has the piano sound here, and that jump was not very big imo xD

Fix these then you can call me back.

Thanks for the mod xD

update

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2017-04-22T08:00:32+00:00

Where are you Del

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2017-04-22T10:35:34+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Where are you Del

Here ;_;
i will back again on monday

since it is a holiday xD
thank you for wait me doyak-senpai

EDIT :
UPDATED

finally xD
All fixed
about the hs, hm... i think the hitsound is good imo (for me) and in this case i try to the volumer lower now

nb : i kinda forgot how to map lol xD and tell me if i didnt fix smth

Doyak

osu! Alumni

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Joined November 2012

Doyak 2017-04-29T04:00:11+00:00

Surprise, I changed my profile pic

Should be good for now, rebubbled~

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-05-01T08:53:59+00:00

qualified