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Volta wrote:

via m4m long time ago.
you suddenly have 2 version i ended up procrastinating it lol but i think v2 is better so i'll just mod those

[General]
disable widescreen support *slapped* > *Nowlf will bite you, but I still disable it :P

00:50:608 - you may resnap the preview point to here > re-snapped

Personal changes aside from your mod:

< 00:38:608 - change it into Finisher for stating a new start after vocal solo.

< 00:59:008 - / 00:59:508 - / 00:59:908 - change them into Finishers to state a new and independent melody except Oni

< 01:03:808 - / 01:04:308 - / 01:04:708 - same as above

[Kantan v2]
00:07:408 - maybe change to k to match the same pitch with 00:06:808 - , it also feels more interesting to me > on-beat d for emphasize and my focus is on d d k pattern there. 00:07:408 (5,6,7) -
00:39:208 - i think this would make a nice break spot. consider to delete it? > wise break here, changed.
01:17:608 - add K to make the length more consistent with 01:12:808 - and 01:22:408 - ? > nice spotted, added back a K.

[Futsuu v2]

Personal changes aside from your mod:

< 00:10:108 - remove it, to balance the pattern at 00:07:108 -

< 00:45:808 - / 00:46:708 - / 00:47:608 - change them into K for a better consistency across the difficulties

< 00:50:608 - extend the spinner to 00:51:208 - , and remove the kat at 00:51:208 - . It is easier for Futsuu level player comparing with previous pattern.


00:25:608 - this is a bit controversial for futsuu imo. consider to remove it to make it more friendly > kept, I want a better progression of pattern development at the third repetition of similar melodies.
00:52:408 - consider to add make more balanced spread in the kiai > I feel like keeping it clean is better to fit the mapping channel here.
00:58:708 - same as ^ > same reply as above
01:02:008 - same as ^ > I only map the concrete vocal (01:02:308 - )but not echo vocal (01:01:708 - ) here, to keep the mapping channel clean.

[Muzukashii v2]
00:21:208 - change to d to reflect to the low drum better? > consistent k at 00:16:408 - / 00:21:208 - / 00:26:008 - , so no change
00:26:108 - it can fit the music, but i don't know the reason why it should make longer pattern than 00:16:508 -. actually i'd prefer to make it consistent with first sequence > I want to create a nice progression here, referring to Futsuu's 1/3 pattern.
00:48:408 - add d? to closer the gap with Oni > 00:48:208 - /00:48:808 - / 00:49:408 - emphasizes are on these D, unnecessary don will upset the structure here and there.

[Oni v2]
00:41:508 - change to k? it seems more intuitive imo, like you did at 00:43:908 - > 00:41:508 - dd here to state different patterns at 00:41:758 - / 00:44:208 - . Hence, no change.

Good luck!
Thanks for your mod! Rename those v.2 back to my original difficulty namings after the above changes.
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Fixed a bit in Oni:

> 00:35:808 - /00:55:633 - delete this note because it is unnecessary and I feel it is clumsy.

> 01:01:408 - follow the pattern at 00:51:808 -
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recheck as requested, no kd.

[General]
remove 'number' from tag (redundant)

[Futsuu]
00:04:708 - remove finish here to be more consistent with muzu and oni. Or add finish in muzu since in oni is 1/3 pattern
00:14:608 - might want to add finish here like at other difficulties
00:19:408 and 00:24:208 - same as ^

00:25:608 - i can accept the 1/3 but i feel like it would reflect the music better if moved to 00:25:908 - since the instrument sound at 00:25:308 - is stretched.
or
you can emphasis the drum like you did at muzu by rearrange the pattern like below: (cursor on 00:25:108 - )

>> (5) and (6) is possible to switch color if you think d-kk is hard

[Muzukashii]
00:58:908 - consider to move to 00:58:608 - for better playability. note being too close with finisher might be very uncomfortable, especially for muzu level player
01:03:708 - consider to remove this note for various reasons.
> doesn't plays nicely since it leads to finisher note
> consistent with 00:54:108 -
> more balanced spread between futsuu and oni

[Something Oni]
00:42:358 - maybe delete this note so it is more clean to follow the vocal. doesn't hear any prominent sound here
00:44:758 - same as ^
00:51:208 - small note like muzu would work and plays better imo

you may call me again after that~
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Volta wrote:

recheck as requested, no kd.

[General]
remove 'number' from tag (redundant) > well spotted

[Futsuu]
00:04:708 - remove finish here to be more consistent with muzu and oni. Or add finish in muzu since in oni is 1/3 pattern > sure, it seems I mis-put it...
00:14:608 - might want to add finish here like at other difficulties
00:19:408 and 00:24:208 - same as ^

> ^ Fixed all

00:25:608 - i can accept the 1/3 but i feel like it would reflect the music better if moved to 00:25:908 - since the instrument sound at 00:25:308 - is stretched.
or
you can emphasis the drum like you did at muzu by rearrange the pattern like below: (cursor on 00:25:108 - )

>> (5) and (6) is possible to switch color if you think d-kk is hard

> My focus is on 00:25:608 (5) - , and I remain consistent at 00:16:408 (6,7,8) - / 00:21:208 (6,7,8) - / 00:26:008 (7,8,9) - in terms of structures.

[Muzukashii]
00:58:908 - consider to move to 00:58:608 - for better playability. note being too close with finisher might be very uncomfortable, especially for muzu level player

> 00:58:908 - Fixed along with your suggestion above. That dK in 1/3 is hard, and too hard for Muzukashii level player.

01:03:708 - consider to remove this note for various reasons.
> doesn't plays nicely since it leads to finisher note
> consistent with 00:54:108 -
> more balanced spread between futsuu and oni

> yes I agree with the strong rationale behind, 01:03:708 - is removed.


[Something Oni]
00:42:358 - maybe delete this note so it is more clean to follow the vocal. doesn't hear any prominent sound here > it can state the rhythm more clearly within 00:41:908 (6,7,8,9) - , leaving it 00:42:358 - blank seems weird to have a loosely packed pattern.
00:44:758 - same as ^ > same as above, and you can see that they are a pair of mirror patterns. No change
00:51:208 - small note like muzu would work and plays better imo > 00:51:208 (1) - I want to strongly emphasize the joining of real vocal here, with the accompaniments of small notes at 00:50:608 (50,51,52,53,54,55) - .

you may call me again after that~
Thanks for your re-check. :D
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Mapset looks fine.

Bubbled!
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As of the controversial and high-potentially unrankable (it is not unrankable) top difficulty name, I will change it from St(k)ylish Oni to St(y)lish Oni to keep my origin, without going against RC in the next amendment / next BN check.

Bubble from Volta is still valid.


Re-named the top difficulty to Oni.
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Some IRC mod~
Everything is fine to me!
gratz on your 1st qualify!

16:11 Skylish: Hey Kin, I saw you took my map in MrSergio's post. Can I bother you few minutes from your Aspire mapping?
16:11 Kin: ye ofc
16:12 Skylish: thanks
16:12 Skylish: can we have an IRC mod instead of a forum post, so we can save time
16:12 Kin: sure
16:13 Skylish: good, I have an amendment want to do in Oni
16:13 *Skylish is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1242057 gi(a)rlish number - Ima wa Mijikashi Yume Miyo Otome [Oni]]
16:13 Skylish: 01:06:208 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31) -
16:14 Skylish: I would like to change them to K k d K k d K, to show the relationship with 00:48:208 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45) -
16:14 Skylish: how do you think about it ^ ?
16:15 Kin: I'd say it's okay
16:15 Kin: as long we can see the vocal is ascending to the high pich
16:15 Skylish: aight, what do you spot out in all difficulties?
16:16 Kin: I'd say, those note are sure strong to be finisher 00:11:008 (29,30) -
16:16 Kin: but this one 00:12:208 (32) - kinda feel empty
16:16 Kin: maybe, change it into a D ?
16:17 Kin: It's still different from other finisher, while emphasis the strong note
16:17 Skylish: nice, adopted in all difficulties if applicable
16:18 Kin: if you do so, you might also wanna be consistent about other one like this one ? 00:17:008 (15) -
16:18 Kin: tho, i can understand to not finish note like those according to pattern
16:18 Skylish: wanna emphasize the start (00:14:608 - ) rather than the last note
16:19 Skylish: so nope for 00:17:008 - / 00:21:808 -
16:19 Skylish: etc.
16:20 Kin: 00:41:758 (5) - I know why this one is 1/2, but the voice being inaccurate, maybe it should be better to just go with the flow and change it into 1/3 ?
16:20 Kin: when I say the voice is kinda inaccurate, we can as exemple hear the "ko" from the vocal around here : 00:41:558 -
16:22 Skylish: 00:41:508 (3,4,5,6,7) - is different from 00:43:908 (17,18,19,20) -
16:22 Skylish: and about the inaccurate vocal
16:22 Skylish: 00:41:558 - this is the right place of the voca
16:22 Skylish: *vocal
16:23 Skylish: but it sounds very strange ....
16:23 Skylish: I mean, very off
16:23 Kin: ye, that's why I said the vocal is inaccurate
16:24 Kin: (I was thinking about something like this http://puu.sh/vMH13/6a285e2388.jpg )
16:24 Skylish: 00:41:608 - there's a guitar plug here
16:24 Skylish: it should be fine to keep the current pattern (wait lemme check your screenshot
16:24 Skylish: 00:41:758 - it is correct
16:24 Kin: it is
16:24 Skylish: --> 00:41:508 (3,4,5,6,7) - is different from 00:43:908 (17,18,19,20) -
16:25 Kin: but the voice is kinda inaccurate
16:25 Skylish: you can see the song has two variations in 1 section
16:25 Skylish: They have different rhythms lol
16:27 Kin: Well, I was just asking you if you prefer the overall flow or follow the vocal >_>
16:27 Kin: I guess you prefer vocal
16:27 Skylish: Those inaccurate vocals are not really noticable in my current patterns, as I try to follow both instruments and vocal
16:27 Kin: well
16:27 Skylish: the overall pattern flow also match the song's flow
16:27 Kin: that's something I can clearly hear
16:27 Kin: dunno about others
16:28 Skylish: clarify a bit: 00:41:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - no change at all now
16:31 Kin: this inaccurate voice gives me headaches =w=
16:31 Skylish: Nwolf said that as well lol (when we were undergoing the mentorship prog.)
16:31 Kin: other example, the big kat is well 00:59:233 (13) - ; but the voice isn't on it xD
16:31 Skylish: he asked the singers to eat dirt lmao
16:32 Kin: I know that feeling xD
16:32 Skylish: wait big KAT?
16:32 Skylish: at 00:59:233 - ?
16:32 Kin: oh
16:32 Kin: sorry
16:32 Kin: I mean
16:32 Kin: big don
16:32 Skylish: wew
16:32 Kin: I just finished my whiskey, don't mind
16:32 Skylish: but the vocal is meant to hitting on that timing
16:32 Skylish: lol
16:32 Kin: it is
16:33 Kin: the vocal is just more or less inaccurate
16:33 Skylish: somehow, yes
16:34 Kin: I'd say that's all about oni
16:34 Skylish: okay
16:36 Kin: damn
16:37 Kin: I've copy paste to wrong chat xD
16:37 Kin: so
16:37 Kin: I said :
16:37 Kin: on muzukashii :
16:37 Skylish: LMAO
16:37 Kin: 00:21:508 (10,11) - Maybe make one of those as don ?
16:38 Kin: kinda feel like this one 00:21:808 (11) - should be different from this one 00:21:508 (10) -
16:38 Kin: 00:16:608 (9,10,11) - tho, this one is fine, with the flow dk k
16:38 Skylish: this second repeated phrase 00:19:408 - has kat as the main theme in all difficulties
16:38 Skylish: so I will keep 00:21:408 (9,10) - as k k
16:39 Skylish: 00:21:808 - same as this one
16:39 Skylish: * 00:21:808 - is a consistent kat by the way
16:40 Kin: ye, it is consistent with this one : 00:17:008 (11) -
16:40 Kin: but the flow feel really different
16:40 Skylish: you can that progression of using kat in Oni and Futsuu as well
16:41 Skylish: more kats are used in the second repetition
16:42 Skylish: *you can 'see' that
16:42 Skylish: but if you insist on enhancing the overall flow there
16:42 Skylish: 00:21:508 - can be a d
16:42 Skylish: like what if you can accept k kk k usage at 00:21:208 -
16:43 Kin: well, depending on which on you prefer to change as d
16:43 Skylish: what if 00:21:508 - then?
16:43 Skylish: I feel like it would be the best option to polish the flow
16:43 Kin: I'd say if flow better than k spam
16:44 Skylish: alright, 00:21:508 - is a don now
16:45 Kin: almost same case goes here 00:26:008 (8,9,10,11,12) - ; tho, I can understand why you prefer to keep it like this
16:45 Skylish: ^ yes, so kept
16:46 Kin: 00:36:208 (17) - you used a big note on Oni here
16:46 Skylish: not really fond of using any Finishers in the middle part of the vocal solo
16:46 Kin: tho, easier diff doesn't have it
16:46 Skylish: oh
16:47 Skylish: I unite 00:36:208 - as a D now
16:47 Skylish: in all difficulties
16:47 Kin: okay
16:47 Skylish: it seperates the vocal solo part into two parts well
16:47 Skylish: thanks for notice
16:48 Kin: I'm kinda confuse
16:48 Kin: 00:41:808 (4) - you used 1/2 on the oni diff
16:48 Kin: but this one is 1/3
16:49 Kin: tho, full 1/2 on this pattern is quite weird
16:49 Kin: but it's currently inconsistent according to other diff
16:50 Skylish: looks like I mis-snapped lmao
16:50 Skylish: shift it back to 00:41:758 -
16:50 Skylish: 00:41:608 - d d k d in 1/2 now
16:50 Kin: the 1/2 snap as muzu really feels weird to me >_>
16:50 Kin: but well
16:51 Skylish: same explanation about that inaccurate vocal again :>
16:51 Skylish: yay
16:51 Kin: 00:51:208 (1) - change it into big note ?
16:51 Kin: since it's a big note on oni
16:53 Skylish: as there is no accompaniments by the small notes stream from 00:50:608 - to 00:51:058 -
16:53 Skylish: a single k at 00:51:058 - is fine
16:54 Kin: I'd say that's all for Muzu
16:55 Skylish: alright
16:55 Kin: those whistle spamming on the background tho >_>
16:56 Skylish: Nwolf hated that as well lmao
17:00 Kin: 00:25:608 (5,6) - not quite sure about using 1/3 here. It does fit, but even the kiai doesn't have those kind
17:00 Skylish: it's the only progression and the most symbolic rhythm of these repeated sections
17:01 Skylish: I am not going to remove them
17:05 Kin: except the weird snap from vocal, kiai on kantan & futsuu are pretty similar
17:10 Kin: tho, I'd say, it's fine according to what you're following
17:11 Skylish: yay
17:11 Kin: I guess that's pretty much all from the mapset ôwô
17:11 Skylish: WOW :D
17:11 Skylish: lemme update first
17:12 Skylish: updated
17:12 Skylish: please recheck the mapset to make sure nothing goes wrong :>
17:13 Kin: ofc
17:22 Kin: Okay everything is fine
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Gratz!

!chotose
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gratz~~ :3
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congratz senpai~ xD
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gratz duud Stylish (qf when poked hh)
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Congratz Sky,you really deserved it :^)
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gratz 1st rank :)
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CONGRATZ ON 1ST RANK!! SKYLISH-SENPAII :D!!!
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gratz
osu need more grillish number
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Congratz for a 1st rank map
Good job Sky

OwO
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Did you check official sound track ? I think the title should be added (TV size)


Link : http://www.neowing.co.jp/product/GNCA-1409

Ima wa Mijikashi Yumemiyo Otome (TV size)
今は短し夢見よ乙女 (TV size)
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alacat wrote:

Did you check official sound track ? I think the title should be added (TV size)


Link : http://www.neowing.co.jp/product/GNCA-1409

Ima wa Mijikashi Yumemiyo Otome (TV size)
今は短し夢見よ乙女 (TV size)
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/522393 My metadata is from the ranked mapset.

Metadata check: http://www.tbs.co.jp/anime/gn/music/cd02.html
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