Flower - Akikaze no Answer [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Magic Girl

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2017-01-30T23:29:54+00:00

hello yes look whats finally here i guess this can be considered a ~~M4Test but thats not really an equal trade why did i even agree to this idk~~ M4M bc plazma exists and i forget it all the time

this was updated in the middle of me modding if something doesn't make sense go ahead and ignore it

rant box v1.01

DISCLAIMER: This is literally just a way to vent its not intended to hurt anyone blah blah blah

GOD WHY
HOW DO I MOD
WHAT IS THIS
WHAT IS MOVEMENT
I'M LITERALLY JUST GOING LEFT AND RIGHT HERE BENNY
JWF(E)*DG(BUONDISCM
WAIT FUCK CTB IS LITERALLY JSUT LEFTS AND RIGHTS
OH ITS 98BPM THAT EXPLAINS A SHIT TON
WAIT WHY IS A SONG OF THIS INTENSITY 98BPM
WHAT?????????????????/
WAHT?????????????????????????????????????
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
HOLD ON A SECOND THE HYPERS FEEL SO FUCKING STRONG HERE????????
WHY DO YOU NEED SO MANY HYPERS RIGHT AFTER A SLOW PART THOOOOOO??
??????
DID SOMEONE PUT YOU UP TO THIS OR SMTH
THIS IS IN THE FIRST 10 SECONDS????????????
I really hate this song rn
Benny I swear why are half the vocals on slider ends
its giVING ME PTSD
JFOW(EC)DS(X&ZBINO
NEVERMIND A SHIT TON OF SOUNDS ARE ON SLIDER ENDS
W HYYYYYYYYYYY
the 1/4 are strong with this one.
Why do I keep putting question marks on every suggestion
oh wait its because i get panic attacks whenever i mod
hahahaahahhhahahhHAHHHAHA
i want to die
I just gave up at the kiai honestly
WHY DOES HALF THE MAP FEEL COPY PASTED
IS IT ONLY ME
AM I LOSING MY MIND
IS THIS SOMETHING ONLY I THINK?????
????????????????????????????????

[Benny's ~~better than anything i can map~~ Rain]

00:02:630 (1,2,3) - This general pattern kinda feels ambiguous, I don't really know whether to walk it to give it tiny dashes. Maybe reduce distance between (2) and (3)? Same with the following patterns.
00:15:334 (4,5) - These feel a bit forced, reduce distance?
00:15:946 (1,2) - Why not just extend (1) to the position of (2)? There's no sound where the (1) ends and (2) follows a small piano. I think it'd be more comfortable that way.
Oh yea same here 00:13:497 (2,3) -
00:17:018 (2,3) - 4.17x distance? The hyper feels fairly powerful here for a sound that (to me) is less powerful. Reduce distance?
00:17:783 (4) - The louder stronger sound has a lower distance than the one above, same point as above just wanted to point it out.
00:18:089 (5,6) - This feels fairly strong, reduce distance slightly?
00:19:008 (3,1) - Anti-flow plays out weirdly to me here, I don't really have anything to suggest for it though...
00:20:232 (4,5) - Maybe move (5) closer to (4)? The sound that (5) follows is fairly weaker to the rest and it'd play out smoother imo
00:30:334 (5,1,2) - The vocals here are pretty strong imo and there isn't much of a jump to compliment it. Again I don't really know what to do about it so feel free to ignore me
00:53:140 (2,3) - Feels kinda awkward to play to me, maybe move (3) slightly closer.
00:59:722 (7) - Change this to a slider to compliment the extended vocal maybe? It'll help reduce distance which I feel is a bit odd rn
01:11:355 (3,4) - I feel like the vocals overpower the sound you're following here, maybe change it to a slider?
01:43:957 (6,1) - Why the hyper when this sound was waaaayy weaker than the last tho

I kinda gave up on the kiai sorry i guess

Shadren

Featured Artist

531 posts

Joined March 2011

Shadren 2017-02-02T18:52:36+00:00

Hi there is m4m from me and NeilPerry

General: recheck tags in all diffs. Spread by SV should be nerf too.
Answer of the Autumn Wind:

00:07:987 (5,6) - nazi a bit but why do you rise ds here? xd
00:20:844 (1,2) - better not stack this cuz of consistency
00:24:365 (1) - wave can be more perfect
00:30:793 (2) - should be nc cuz of consistency but here not 00:30:640 (1) -
00:34:008 (3,4,3) - rly dont like how this is overalpped try do smthing like this http://puu.sh/tLjEd/08699df277.jpg
00:37:069 - make slider here? this note emphaze nothing 00:37:222 (3) -
00:38:599 (3) - gap should be more like here 00:43:191 (2,3) -
00:47:018 (3) - as i told previously
00:52:069 (3) - make this shape more aestheticaly http://puu.sh/tLjTC/4a4634f1da.jpg
00:54:518 (4,1) - gap should be more. move slider 4 more right(it's mean —> there xd)
01:10:436 (4,5) - there only 4 ticks for each reverse slider http://puu.sh/tLk52/8065198fd3.jpg
01:11:048 (1,2) - make smthing like this http://puu.sh/tLke1/5ad547576f.jpg to emphaze vocal better
01:21:763 (6) - nc mby? (just my own opinion to emphaze jump better)
01:30:487 (1,2,3) - rly wanna hear 1\3 emphazing
01:32:477 (3) - wrong slider end. try make that in 1\12 beatsnap http://puu.sh/tLkqW/13ec0bbcd4.jpg
01:33:089 (1) - and repeat previous here http://puu.sh/tLku6/f35bc00502.jpg you rly shouldnt ignore dat awesome beats
01:34:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - same here. i know that you tryed emphaze vocal. but you shoudnt ignore this downbeats threw the part. you should find way to combain rythmic as well
01:36:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:44:110 (1) - bad shape. try to make smthing another like this http://puu.sh/tLkGR/b4b0b99cfb.jpg

Other looks good for me. You need some improvment about rythmic ya.

Insane:

00:17:477 (2,3) - Bad distance for gap
00:44:110 (1,2) - ^
00:53:599 (4) - ned some emphazes for this beat with spacing lol
01:05:538 (3) - same
01:10:436 (3,4) - as i told in highest diff: there should be 4 ticks per each reverse
01:19:620 (1) - bad idea end slider on this strong tick
01:23:140 - same
01:32:477 (2) - as i told in highest diff, beats shouldnt be ignored
01:34:722 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - sameeeee

other looks okay. better to rework some space emphazes moments, and improve rythmic in the end.

Hard:
00:16:559 (3,4,5,1) - weird spacing
01:10:742 (5) - you know xd
01:12:120 (6,1) - this looks like unconsistence, cuz in futher u dont use dat hard space
SV in kiai part rly big. i think need to nerf some

Other looks good.(im a bit lazy after insane diffs xd)

Advanced:

The different in sv between soft and kiai parts VERY BIG (seems to mee this can be unrankable)
But looks good, nice rythmic

Normal:

nice diff
(ok im rly lazy?)

Easy:
Nice diff
(yes i am)

Nice set, Best of luck~

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-02-03T16:27:57+00:00

Shadren wrote:
Insane:

00:17:477 (2,3) - Bad distance for gap
00:44:110 (1,2) - ^
00:53:599 (4) - ned some emphazes for this beat with spacing lol
01:05:538 (3) - same
01:10:436 (3,4) - as i told in highest diff: there should be 4 ticks per each reverse
01:19:620 (1) - bad idea end slider on this strong tick - following vocals here
01:23:140 - same - ^
01:32:477 (2) - as i told in highest diff, beats shouldnt be ignored
01:34:722 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - sameeeee - ...

other looks okay. better to rework some space emphazes moments, and improve rythmic in the end.

No reply = fixed.

The 1/3 vocal at the end is infinitely more interesting to play than the drums. I don't want to make this diff a whack-a-mole "let's follow the drums only" diff because those are boring and I hate them. I'm not changing the 1/3 part unless I'm given a valid and good reason to do so.

Update: https://puu.sh/tMHDJ/99b4e1465e.osu

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2017-02-03T21:30:00+00:00

- Magic Girl - wrote:
hello yes look whats finally here i guess this can be considered a ~~M4Test but thats not really an equal trade why did i even agree to this idk~~ M4M bc plazma exists and i forget it all the time

this was updated in the middle of me modding if something doesn't make sense go ahead and ignore it

rant box v1.01
DISCLAIMER: This is literally just a way to vent its not intended to hurt anyone blah blah blah

GOD WHY - Because I asked nicely
HOW DO I MOD - Copy an object, post it in forum and make a suggestion
WHAT IS THIS - This is my map
WHAT IS MOVEMENT It's left and right
I'M LITERALLY JUST GOING LEFT AND RIGHT HERE BENNY - Yeah, that's kinda what ctb is
JWF(E)*DG(BUONDISCM ...
WAIT FUCK CTB IS LITERALLY JSUT LEFTS AND RIGHTS - You only just realized that?
OH ITS 98BPM THAT EXPLAINS A SHIT TON - The whole map is basically 1/4 though so
WAIT WHY IS A SONG OF THIS INTENSITY 98BPM - Because 1/4....
WHAT?????????????????/ ...
WAHT????????????????????????????????????? ...
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ...
HOLD ON A SECOND THE HYPERS FEEL SO FUCKING STRONG HERE???????? - I'LL FIX IT
WHY DO YOU NEED SO MANY HYPERS RIGHT AFTER A SLOW PART THOOOOOO?? - Because intensity is going up again?????
?????? ...
DID SOMEONE PUT YOU UP TO THIS OR SMTH - Nope I mapped this all by myself
THIS IS IN THE FIRST 10 SECONDS???????????? - ya, I suck
I really hate this song rn - hey It's cute, hate on the map not the song
Benny I swear why are half the vocals on slider ends - Because I suck
its giVING ME PTSD - Teach me how to map vocals (?)
JFOW(EC)DS(X&ZBINO ...
NEVERMIND A SHIT TON OF SOUNDS ARE ON SLIDER ENDS - ya ):
W HYYYYYYYYYYY - BECAUSE I SUCK
the 1/4 are strong with this one. - Which one
Why do I keep putting question marks on every suggestion - Because you are insecure
oh wait its because i get panic attacks whenever i mod - That's not nice ):
hahahaahahhhahahhHAHHHAHA ...
i want to die - Same tbh
I just gave up at the kiai honestly - Same tbh
WHY DOES HALF THE MAP FEEL COPY PASTED - Because it is
IS IT ONLY ME - Nope
AM I LOSING MY MIND - Nope
IS THIS SOMETHING ONLY I THINK????? - Still no
???????????????????????????????? - Thanks for your rant

[Benny's ~~better than anything i can map~~ Rain - Magic Girl - maps better tbh]
00:02:630 (1,2,3) - This general pattern kinda feels ambiguous, I don't really know whether to walk it to give it tiny dashes. Maybe reduce distance between (2) and (3)? Same with the following patterns. - All 1/4 distances are walkable, tested it several times and can't find anything wrong with it
00:15:334 (4,5) - These feel a bit forced, reduce distance? - Reduced cause it's not really that strong of a beat
00:15:946 (1,2) - Why not just extend (1) to the position of (2)? There's no sound where the (1) ends and (2) follows a small piano. I think it'd be more comfortable that way. - I guess this is where we have two different opinions about rhythm lmao. To me, in order to emphasize the piano on 2 better, I make a small jump to it instead of leaving it on a slider end.
Oh yea same here 00:13:497 (2,3) -
00:17:018 (2,3) - 4.17x distance? The hyper feels fairly powerful here for a sound that (to me) is less powerful. Reduce distance? - Yea, Agreed. Reduced
00:17:783 (4) - The louder stronger sound has a lower distance than the one above, same point as above just wanted to point it out. - Yeah, that's correct but I don't think it's that much of a difference when it isn't that big of a difference, either way it was reduced with previous point so yea
00:18:089 (5,6) - This feels fairly strong, reduce distance slightly? - yaaas
00:19:008 (3,1) - Anti-flow plays out weirdly to me here, I don't really have anything to suggest for it though... - Found a way to reduce the amount of antiflow, I hope it's better now!
00:20:232 (4,5) - Maybe move (5) closer to (4)? The sound that (5) follows is fairly weaker to the rest and it'd play out smoother imo - Made single notes curve instead, this doesn't really need any dashes or jumps
00:30:334 (5,1,2) - The vocals here are pretty strong imo and there isn't much of a jump to compliment it. Again I don't really know what to do about it so feel free to ignore me - Good point, that has been bugging me for a while but finally got the motivation to fix it!
00:53:140 (2,3) - Feels kinda awkward to play to me, maybe move (3) slightly closer. - Naaaa I tested around a lot with several different distances for this part and I found this is what works best
00:59:722 (7) - Change this to a slider to compliment the extended vocal maybe? It'll help reduce distance which I feel is a bit odd rn - Not really 100% sure what you meant here but I'll assume it is to make 7 a 1/2 slider repeated once which I disagree with because I feel a dash is needed to the next note
01:11:355 (3,4) - I feel like the vocals overpower the sound you're following here, maybe change it to a slider? - Deleted some notes here, should be better now
01:43:957 (6,1) - Why the hyper when this sound was waaaayy weaker than the last tho - Buuut it isn't weaker? ><

I kinda gave up on the kiai sorry i guess - Lazy mg ):

Thanks cute grill

Rain update again lol

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256,248,102121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,308,102274,2,0,L|102:308,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,312,102580,5,0,1:2:0:0:
416,312,102733,2,0,P|408:256|308:244,1,140,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,208,103192,2,0,L|156:144,1,70,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,103498,2,0,L|424:84,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,96,103804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,76,103957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,40,104570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,104723,2,0,L|270:132,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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124,120,105946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,184,106099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,280,106253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,336,106406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,192,107019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,107172,2,0,L|268:192,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,107478,5,0,1:2:0:0:
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252,40,108701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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436,36,109008,5,2,1:2:0:0:
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228,112,111304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,111610,12,6,113906,1:2:0:0:

dqs01733

296 posts

Joined October 2013

dqs01733 2017-02-03T23:15:20+00:00

just popping by

[Mir's Insane]

00:16:865 (3,4) - it would be way better if you stacked these on 00:17:477 (2) - . having some momentum going into 00:17:324 (1,2) - this jump feels a lot better than the complete standstill into a jump thats basically the same direction as 00:16:559 (2,3) - too.
00:21:763 (4,5) - and these on 00:22:375 (2) -
00:26:661 (3,4) -
00:34:926 (1) - Having some kind of flow change for emphasis strong beat would be pretty nice here. try this
00:37:375 (3) - I dont think this strong beat should be stacked =(
01:08:293 (1) - ctrl+h this would make a better counterclockwise flow into 01:08:753 (2,3,4) -
01:18:089 (3) - making a curved movement into 01:18:395 (1,2,3,4) - would be a nice contrast from it to make the pattern stand out more, right now its an up down slider into a pattern with the same type of movement which kinda takes away the magic of it. try
01:19:620 (1) - this ctrl g would flow nicer from 01:19:314 (3,4) -
01:30:640 (1,2,3,4) - i think it would be a good idea to make this a perfect triangle instead. such a small deviation like this only makes it look like a sloppy triangle instead
01:51:150 (4,5) - i would ctrl g these, same reason as first point
01:51:457 (1) - the normal-hitnormal + finish samples sounds just too empowering to me. the song is fading out and just the soft-hitnormal is a better way to end it imo. i would probably turn down the volume too. to like 20-25% maybe

something else i think would help the map would be if the sliders were a bit more consistent. it looks like you created most sliders the regular way. for the straight sliders as an example, it leads to some of them being completely vertical/horizontal, and then some having a small angle and then other having a little bigger angle. i recommend using one straight slider and keep copy pasting that one, using ctrl+h+j or rotating 90 degrees to get the desired direction, it will make the sliders parallell/have the same angle which is going to make it look a loooot neater. it might take a bit of time to go through it and change everything, but its going to help the map look a lot nicer, trust me. And besides, you wont really have to replace every slider, its really only noticeable when two differently angled are on the screen at the same time, like 00:41:661 (4,7,8) - or 00:52:681 (1,2) - for instance

[Answer of the Autumn Wind]

00:06:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - 72 degree rotation thing like 00:03:701 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be nicer, 00:07:987 (5) - makes it look really random currently
00:11:048 (1) - lowering vlume on it and adding soft whistle sounds nice
00:40:589 - i dont think the normal-hitnormal should be here
01:18:395 (1,2) - ctrl+g? just to mix up the flow a bit
01:31:865 (1) - making it circle-slider is a lot more appropiate imo. it will add more pressure to the strong vocals on 01:31:865 (1) - 01:32:477 (3) - , and add a jump between 01:31:865 - 01:32:069 - and get the slow slider from 01:32:069 - which i think fits better
01:51:457 (1) - same as Mir's diff, normal-hitnormal + the finish sounds too much, the song is fading out and having just the soft whistle is a nice and soft way to finish it off, reducing volume wouldnt hurt either.

I'd also recommend changing around the volumes a bit. having 50% across the board is kinda dull tbh, reducing volume at 00:33:089 - for instance would be nice. other than that its looking pretty nice, big improvement since the last time i looked at you map! good luck

Mir

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Mir 2017-02-04T00:51:37+00:00

dqs01733 wrote:
just popping by

[Mir's Insane]
00:16:865 (3,4) - it would be way better if you stacked these on 00:17:477 (2) - . having some momentum going into 00:17:324 (1,2) - this jump feels a lot better than the complete standstill into a jump thats basically the same direction as 00:16:559 (2,3) - too.
00:21:763 (4,5) - and these on 00:22:375 (2) -
00:26:661 (3,4) - all above denied cuz I really like the pause here, I think it's fine as it is and I don't want to use too many wide spacing gaps seeing as the bpm is so low
00:34:926 (1) - Having some kind of flow change for emphasis strong beat would be pretty nice here. try this
00:37:375 (3) - I dont think this strong beat should be stacked =(
01:08:293 (1) - ctrl+h this would make a better counterclockwise flow into 01:08:753 (2,3,4) -
01:18:089 (3) - making a curved movement into 01:18:395 (1,2,3,4) - would be a nice contrast from it to make the pattern stand out more, right now its an up down slider into a pattern with the same type of movement which kinda takes away the magic of it. try
01:19:620 (1) - this ctrl g would flow nicer from 01:19:314 (3,4) - but i don't want it to flow nicely, it's for emphasis :3
01:30:640 (1,2,3,4) - i think it would be a good idea to make this a perfect triangle instead. such a small deviation like this only makes it look like a sloppy triangle instead
01:51:150 (4,5) - i would ctrl g these, same reason as first point - yeah I think these are fine too, I do this consistently and it's a preference thing at this point
01:51:457 (1) - the normal-hitnormal + finish samples sounds just too empowering to me. the song is fading out and just the soft-hitnormal is a better way to end it imo. i would probably turn down the volume too. to like 20-25% maybe

something else i think would help the map would be if the sliders were a bit more consistent. it looks like you created most sliders the regular way. for the straight sliders as an example, it leads to some of them being completely vertical/horizontal, and then some having a small angle and then other having a little bigger angle. i recommend using one straight slider and keep copy pasting that one, using ctrl+h+j or rotating 90 degrees to get the desired direction, it will make the sliders parallell/have the same angle which is going to make it look a loooot neater. it might take a bit of time to go through it and change everything, but its going to help the map look a lot nicer, trust me. And besides, you wont really have to replace every slider, its really only noticeable when two differently angled are on the screen at the same time, like 00:41:661 (4,7,8) - or 00:52:681 (1,2) - for instance - fixed this up a little bit

No reply = fixed

Thanks!

Update: https://puu.sh/tNgvu/1f85a7693f.osu

Zer0-

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Topic Starter

Zer0- 2017-02-04T20:31:01+00:00

Shadren wrote:
Hi there is m4m from me and NeilPerry

General: recheck tags in all diffs. Spread by SV should be nerf too.
Answer of the Autumn Wind:

00:07:987 (5,6) - nazi a bit but why do you rise ds here? xd oops mistake xD
00:20:844 (1,2) - better not stack this cuz of consistency stacked cuz double kicks, like I've done in the entire diff
00:24:365 (1) - wave can be more perfect tried to make it nicer
00:30:793 (2) - should be nc cuz of consistency but here not 00:30:640 (1) - I nc every downbeat and the 2nd white tick
00:34:008 (3,4,3) - rly dont like how this is overalpped try do smthing like this http://puu.sh/tLjEd/08699df277.jpg fixed
00:37:069 - make slider here? this note emphaze nothing 00:37:222 (3) - alright
00:38:599 (3) - gap should be more like here 00:43:191 (2,3) - ok
00:47:018 (3) - as i told previously fixed
00:52:069 (3) - make this shape more aestheticaly http://puu.sh/tLjTC/4a4634f1da.jpg ok tried to
00:54:518 (4,1) - gap should be more. move slider 4 more right(it's mean —> there xd) alright
01:10:436 (4,5) - there only 4 ticks for each reverse slider http://puu.sh/tLk52/8065198fd3.jpg hmm okay
01:11:048 (1,2) - make smthing like this http://puu.sh/tLke1/5ad547576f.jpg to emphaze vocal better ya
01:21:763 (6) - nc mby? (just my own opinion to emphaze jump better) i dont think its really needed
01:30:487 (1,2,3) - rly wanna hear 1\3 emphazing this part seems fine
01:32:477 (3) - wrong slider end. try make that in 1\12 beatsnap http://puu.sh/tLkqW/13ec0bbcd4.jpg alright fixed
01:33:089 (1) - and repeat previous here http://puu.sh/tLku6/f35bc00502.jpg you rly shouldnt ignore dat awesome beats fixed here
01:34:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - same here. i know that you tryed emphaze vocal. but you shoudnt ignore this downbeats threw the part. you should find way to combain rythmic as well reworked this part
01:36:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ same here
01:44:110 (1) - bad shape. try to make smthing another like this http://puu.sh/tLkGR/b4b0b99cfb.jpg alright

Other looks good for me. You need some improvment about rythmic ya. Thanks! I tried to improve the rhythm, and its a lot better now!

Hard:
00:16:559 (3,4,5,1) - weird spacing ds? :O
01:10:742 (5) - you know xd same as for the insane? 4 ticks? ok
01:12:120 (6,1) - this looks like unconsistence, cuz in futher u dont use dat hard space i think its fine cuz i use high spacing like 01:16:099 (2) - and 01:20:997 (2) - too so it should be fine
SV in kiai part rly big. i think need to nerf some nerfed to 0.9 instead of 1.0

Other looks good.(im a bit lazy after insane diffs xd)

Normal:
nice diff
(ok im rly lazy?)

Easy:
Nice diff
(yes i am)

Nice set, Best of luck~

Thanks a lot for this mod, it was very helpful!

Zer0-

177 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Zer0- 2017-02-04T20:50:03+00:00

dqs01733 wrote:
just popping by

[Answer of the Autumn Wind]
00:06:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - 72 degree rotation thing like 00:03:701 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be nicer, 00:07:987 (5) - makes it look really random currently changed the current pattern
00:11:048 (1) - lowering vlume on it and adding soft whistle sounds nice alright
00:40:589 - i dont think the normal-hitnormal should be here removed
01:18:395 (1,2) - ctrl+g? just to mix up the flow a bit yeah sure why not
01:31:865 (1) - making it circle-slider is a lot more appropiate imo. it will add more pressure to the strong vocals on 01:31:865 (1) - 01:32:477 (3) - , and add a jump between 01:31:865 - 01:32:069 - and get the slow slider from 01:32:069 - which i think fits better kinda applied this, atleast to the first circle slider
01:51:457 (1) - same as Mir's diff, normal-hitnormal + the finish sounds too much, the song is fading out and having just the soft whistle is a nice and soft way to finish it off, reducing volume wouldnt hurt either. fixed this too

I'd also recommend changing around the volumes a bit. having 50% across the board is kinda dull tbh, reducing volume at 00:33:089 - for instance would be nice. changed up volume a bit other than that its looking pretty nice, big improvement since the last time i looked at you map! good luck

Thanks a lot for this mod! It was pretty random haha ♥

Frans Bauer

60 posts

Joined May 2013

Frans Bauer 2017-02-06T22:57:51+00:00

Random mod, because I like Mirs' maps

Mir's Insane

01:10:436 (3,4) - More spacing?
01:12:273 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Feels undermapped in comparisson to 01:22:069 (1) - this part, although it's spaced more.
01:31:865 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This part looks like 1/8, with very irregular rhythm like this at 01:31:865 (1) - and this at 01:34:314 (9) -, which repeats itself until 01:39:212 (2) - . You could leave it at 1/6 for playability, but rhythm wise, it should be 1/8.

Overall very nice map though, I love it : D

Answer of the Autumn Wind

00:01:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Did you use the rotation tool on these? They don't align in a nice flow.
01:11:661 (3,4,5,6) - You ignore the instrumentals here, where you actually did not ignore them here 01:10:436 (4,5) -
01:19:008 (5,6) - Why do you ignore the piano sound here?
01:31:865 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as Mir's Insane, 1/8 here, or keep it 1/6 for playability.

Nice map, good luck on ranking.

Zer0-

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Topic Starter

Zer0- 2017-02-06T23:07:33+00:00

marty45 wrote:
Random mod, because I like Mirs' maps

Answer of the Autumn Wind

00:01:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Did you use the rotation tool on these? They don't align in a nice flow. yeah I did, I think its fine
01:11:661 (3,4,5,6) - You ignore the instrumentals here, where you actually did not ignore them here 01:10:436 (4,5) - to emphasize the vocals as they are particularily intense!
01:19:008 (5,6) - Why do you ignore the piano sound here? emphasizing vocals once again
01:31:865 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as Mir's Insane, 1/8 here, or keep it 1/6 for playability. this whole section is 1/3(1/6)

Nice map, good luck on ranking.

Thanks for mod

Mir

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Mir 2017-02-06T23:12:18+00:00

marty45 wrote:
Random mod, because I like Mirs' maps - awwh <3

Mir's Insane

01:10:436 (3,4) - More spacing?
01:12:273 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Feels undermapped in comparisson to 01:22:069 (1) - this part, although it's spaced more.
01:31:865 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This part looks like 1/8, with very irregular rhythm like this at 01:31:865 (1) - and this at 01:34:314 (9) -, which repeats itself until 01:39:212 (2) - . You could leave it at 1/6 for playability, but rhythm wise, it should be 1/8.

Overall very nice map though, I love it : D

Applied everything. Changed the supposedly 1/8 part to be more intuitive to play. I just altered the last pattern snapping to 1/8 and it plays fine due to spacing changes already.

Update: https://puu.sh/tRvOT/f8484445d7.osu Please reapply hitsounds cuz I changed rhythm and stuff, thanks.

Winnie

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Joined November 2013

Winnie 2017-02-11T05:17:39+00:00

[Answer of the Autumn Wind]

The start feels quite nice.
00:37:987 (1,2) - Can't you make this a 1/1 slider. It's a lot more subtle and keeps things from being consistently played all the time. Slows down the song more and has a greater effect that way
00:40:130 (4,5) - Can be stacked imo such as 00:41:355 (4,5) - 00:38:906 (4,5) - With each having a certain particular thing to them.
00:42:885 (1,2) - Can be same said here as ^ to hold out the synthetic guitar sound but its fine
01:05:385 (2,3,4,5,1) - Reminds me of sotarks when he clutters things
01:09:212 (4) - Can you map out the vocal here? It's quite a strong vocal and doing a different rhythm change actually sounds quite nice using 1/8
01:12:273 (1,2) - Not particularly a good fit with these two sliders here. It seems like such a absurd rotation on (2) and the movement doesn't feel natural when playing them. Just an EX: Things like this can fit you and make it smoother as well http://puu.sh/tXUOl/a3ff9e1c73.jpg
01:24:518 (1,2) - This is nice
01:31:865 (1,2) - Spacing 1/6 like this doesn't feel natural. If you want to continue your rhythm choice should be somewhat like this for the first portion http://puu.sh/tXVjb/3a5e97a44d.jpg Follow this and the others will work as well. The only thing I want to see is the spacing in how you use them. I will come back to check it out. You can also mix rhythm around for other areas that sound the same as well

[Mir's Insane]

Nice Spacing 01:37:605 (2,1,2,1) -
00:41:661 (4,7) - Why not keep the sliders the same exact way? The sounds are completely identical and making them visually look similiar is great too
01:00:487 (2,3) - Such a sharp angle to hit. I think you can try moving this around to not make this feel so much more difficult than it seems
01:11:661 (5,6) - Feels slightly overmapped just to try and keep them consistent with 01:10:436 (3,4) - Doesn't quite fit the vocal during that part

That should do the rest I don't need to look at. Still some more things to mention but this will be ok

Mir

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Mir 2017-02-11T10:52:32+00:00

Kocari wrote:
[Mir's Insane]
Nice Spacing 01:37:605 (2,1,2,1) -
00:41:661 (4,7) - Why not keep the sliders the same exact way? The sounds are completely identical and making them visually look similiar is great too
01:00:487 (2,3) - Such a sharp angle to hit. I think you can try moving this around to not make this feel so much more difficult than it seems
01:11:661 (5,6) - Feels slightly overmapped just to try and keep them consistent with 01:10:436 (3,4) - Doesn't quite fit the vocal during that part

That should do the rest I don't need to look at. Still some more things to mention but this will be ok

Applied everything except for the last point. The little trill thing is still audible and it would be bad to map it in the first part and not in the second part.

Update: https://puu.sh/tYgcm/5a1fb6c72a.osu

Zer0-

177 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Zer0- 2017-02-11T18:05:12+00:00

Kocari wrote:
[Answer of the Autumn Wind]
The start feels quite nice.
00:37:987 (1,2) - Can't you make this a 1/1 slider. It's a lot more subtle and keeps things from being consistently played all the time. Slows down the song more and has a greater effect that way Alright made it into a 1/1 slider
00:40:130 (4,5) - Can be stacked imo such as 00:41:355 (4,5) - 00:38:906 (4,5) - With each having a certain particular thing to them.I havent stacked the other places that have the same sound such as 00:45:028 (4,5) - and 00:49:926 (4,5) - I've only stacked when it's a double kick
00:42:885 (1,2) - Can be same said here as ^ to hold out the synthetic guitar sound but its fine kept as is
01:05:385 (2,3,4,5,1) - Reminds me of sotarks when he clutters things tried to un-clutter
01:09:212 (4) - Can you map out the vocal here? It's quite a strong vocal and doing a different rhythm change actually sounds quite nice using 1/8 alright
01:12:273 (1,2) - Not particularly a good fit with these two sliders here. It seems like such a absurd rotation on (2) and the movement doesn't feel natural when playing them. Just an EX: Things like this can fit you and make it smoother as well http://puu.sh/tXUOl/a3ff9e1c73.jpg switched up this pattern
01:24:518 (1,2) - This is nice I agree
01:31:865 (1,2) - Spacing 1/6 like this doesn't feel natural. If you want to continue your rhythm choice should be somewhat like this for the first portion http://puu.sh/tXVjb/3a5e97a44d.jpg Follow this and the others will work as well. The only thing I want to see is the spacing in how you use them. I will come back to check it out. You can also mix rhythm around for other areas that sound the same as well

I changed the rhythm here a little bit to make it more consistent with the rest of the 1/6 part, I didnt quite do the rhythm you gave as an example as I want to put some emphasis on the drums here too, and not only follow vocals.

That should do the rest I don't need to look at. Still some more things to mention but this will be ok

Thanks a lot for the mod Kocari ♥

Shunao

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Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-02-11T23:30:37+00:00

Hi!
NM from my Queue ~ ( つ･`д･´)っ

[General]

Nothing in particular~

[Normal]

00:40:436 (1,3) - can you make them symmetrical?

[Chaos' Advanced]

It's should be Chao's Advanced or Chaos's Advanced..
00:41:661 (1,4,1) - a blanket should be better imo
01:21:610 (2,3,3) - there is a contact, maybe it's a overlap but it's not very beautiful
01:45:487 - there is a beat here..
01:51:457 - the end is here you can add a note with no hs

[Hard]

00:15:028 (2) - It can be straight because there is a NC here 00:14:569 (1) - and for be consistent with 00:13:497 (3,4,5) -. Or it's possible for this slider to be straight 00:14:569 (1) -.
00:16:865 (4,5,1) - the following of these notes should be a bit difficult to read, maybe you can stack them 00:17:018 (5,1) -. I think that the flow can work better.
00:19:008 (3) - it should be straight like I said on the top for the consistence with 00:17:171 (1,2,3)
00:47:783 (1,2) - Blanket?
00:38:599 (2,3,4) - why you spacing? this is not similar as 00:36:457 (3,4,1,2) - with a x1.80 DS you need to fix this
00:38:906 (3,4) - you can un-stack these notes like you make here 00:49:620 (3,4,5)
01:04:926 (1,2,3) - make a bigger spacing because we have the impression that they are really very close so it's not really beautiful to look
01:21:916 (6,1) - you don't think that you can make a jump? there is the strong vocals so it's would be recommended
01:28:191 (6,7) - better blanket?
01:36:763 (1,2,3) - you can curved this for to change sliders straight, something like this http://i.imgur.com/cEBgoqk.jpg?1
01:40:130 (4,5,1) - can you make a bigger spacing here too, too close..
01:46:406 (6,1) - put a jump here, it's should be better

Great mapset!
That's all for me~

GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR MAP!

Zer0-

177 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Zer0- 2017-02-12T00:23:10+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi!
NM from my Queue ~ ( つ･`д･´)っ

[General]
Nothing in particular~
[Normal]
00:40:436 (1,3) - can you make them symmetrical?
yeah sure
[Hard]
00:15:028 (2) - It can be straight because there is a NC here 00:14:569 (1) - and for be consistent with 00:13:497 (3,4,5) -. Or it's possible for this slider to be straight 00:14:569 (1) -. not really a big deal IMO
00:16:865 (4,5,1) - the following of these notes should be a bit difficult to read, maybe you can stack them 00:17:018 (5,1) -. I think that the flow can work better. changed this pattern a bit
00:19:008 (3) - it should be straight like I said on the top for the consistence with 00:17:171 (1,2,3)
00:47:783 (1,2) - Blanket? uh I think it works fine this way, too far to blanket and it would mess up the spacing
00:38:599 (2,3,4) - why you spacing? this is not similar as 00:36:457 (3,4,1,2) - with a x1.80 DS you need to fix this uhh its the same?
00:38:906 (3,4) - you can un-stack these notes like you make here 00:49:620 (3,4,5) stacked cuz double kick
01:04:926 (1,2,3) - make a bigger spacing because we have the impression that they are really very close so it's not really beautiful to look spaced slightly more
01:21:916 (6,1) - you don't think that you can make a jump? there is the strong vocals so it's would be recommended ok
01:28:191 (6,7) - better blanket? ok
01:36:763 (1,2,3) - you can curved this for to change sliders straight, something like this http://i.imgur.com/cEBgoqk.jpg?1 yeah why not
01:40:130 (4,5,1) - can you make a bigger spacing here too, too close..ok spaced
01:46:406 (6,1) - put a jump here, it's should be better okay
Great mapset!
That's all for me~

GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR MAP!

Thanks a lot for the mod!

Chaos

osu! Alumni

244 posts

Joined May 2013

Chaos 2017-02-12T07:40:22+00:00

Shadren wrote:
Advanced:

The different in sv between soft and kiai parts VERY BIG (seems to mee this can be unrankable) I don't think the SV change is overly high but I'll leave this for other people to consider and drop any feedback on.
But looks good, nice rythmic

Thank you

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi!
NM from my Queue ~ ( つ･`д･´)っ

[Chaos' Advanced]
It's should be Chao's Advanced or Chaos's Advanced.. Chaos' is a grammatically correct usage of the apostrophe given my name. I see no reason to have to change it but I'll leave it up to Zer0- whether he wants it to be Chaos' or Chaos's I guess, since I only have one other GD currently in pending.
00:41:661 (1,4,1) - a blanket should be better imo The slider isn't a perfect blanket slider but it still does the job of blanketing the circle. I don't think a perfectly blanketing slider is necessary here though.
01:21:610 (2,3,3) - there is a contact, maybe it's a overlap but it's not very beautiful. As mentioned in a previous mod, in play the overlap doesn't really exist visually at all, so I still don't see an issue here.
01:45:487 - there is a beat here..Added. This also fixes the issue I had with 01:45:640 (1) - being a bit awkward rhythm-wise, so thank you for pointing this out.
01:51:457 - the end is here you can add a note with no hs. I've added a circle at the last downbeat for now but I'm not really that sold on it personally. I liked that it ended where it did but *shrugs*, will visit this later I guess since either way is fine I imagine.

Thanks for the mod

Update

https://chaos.s-ul.eu/rCLo4HJG.txt

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-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2017-02-12T22:01:47+00:00

Hi, you requested.

Answer of the Autumn Wind:

01:51:457 –Unnecessary green line. You can remove it.
In the beginning of the song the sliderslide sounds are so loud and rather annoying. I highly suggest adding a soft-sliderslide soundfile to silence them. It’ll probably help for the other diffs as well.
Also, in the beginning of the song (and probably throughout the rest of the song as well) nice piano sounds can be heard. It would be nice to emphasize those sounds with the default soft-hitwhistle. Leaving the instrument empty with nothing to support it isn’t a good idea imo. This applies to your other diffs as well.
00:10:895 (1) –This spinner should rather start here: 00:10:895 – If you listen closely you’ll hear the music already starts on that blue tick.
00:17:324 (2) –There’s quite a loud beat on this object, so I suggest spacing it out a bit more for more emphasis. Right now the spacing is a bit too small.
00:25:130 (3,2) –For aesthetics try stacking the (2) on the head of (3). It’ll look neater. Just move the previous slider around a bit till you can stack.
00:22:987 (5,6) –These beats are quite loud, but these beats: 00:25:436 (4,5) – aren’t really. The spacing of 00:25:130 (3,4) – is bigger than the spacing here though: 00:22:681 (4,5) – It’s a bit weird since the beats where the bigger spacing is isn’t that strong. The spacings should be switched imo so that the music is supported correctly.
00:44:722 (3,4) –The music still has a level of calmness so using big spacing isn’t really fitting imo. I suggest nerfing the spacing here a bit.
00:52:987 (2,3) –There’s nothing in the music that really suggests a jump here imo. No strong beat/vocal. Rather make the spacing normal and don’t place a jump.
01:10:436 (4,5) –I think these two should be snapped to 1/8 instead and not 1/16. I’m not 100% sure. Perhaps ask other modders’ opinions as well.
01:32:477 (2,3,4) –This doesn’t look that good, since the spacing differs. Rather make the spacing similar for all three.
01:35:691 –This beat is rather strong and it would be a good idea to map it out for emphasis.

To me, consistency is important, especially when it comes to spacing. There were a few places where I felt the spacings were different but the beats are similar. I’ll point out a few places where I feel a bit more spacing is needed for consistency: 00:19:008 (3) - 00:22:222 (2) - 00:23:906 (3) – etc. Basically, try adding a bit more spacing where the beats are strong and lower spacing where the beats are calm. I feel that can still be improved.

Mir’s Insane:

Uncheck widescreen support. No need to have it enabled and it’s also inconsistent with other diffs.
00:01:253 –It’s not allowed to have a green line on a red one except to change the slider velocity. In this case you didn’t so remove the green line.
00:17:018 (4,1,1) –Impove the stack here. Right now (1) is a bit off.
00:18:089 –Are you sure you don’t want to map this out? It can be heard quite clearly and having it in a slider’s tummy isn’t a good approach imo. This applies to all similar cases.
00:27:579 (3) –This slider overlaps the HP bar quite a bit and is usually not advised since it can disrupt visualization. Rather try something else to make everything nicely visible.
00:28:191 (1,2) –I think this spacing should be similar to the other spacings before it. For example, similar to: 00:23:293 (1,2) – etc. Try to keep spacings of similar beats consistent.
00:36:763 (1,2) –Hmm, the spacing of this is a bit weird and you didn’t do the same here for example: 00:35:385 (3) – Spacing it out normally would be better imo. Or you can stack it like you did here: 00:40:283 (3) – Then I also suggest stacking 00:35:385 (3) –
00:47:171 –I don’t really think it’s a good idea to have a strong beat like this as a slider’s end. Rather try making the beat a circle so it has more emphasis.
00:52:069 (1) –There’s no SV change here so adding a new combo isn’t necessary. Rather remove the NC.
00:54:212 (2,3) –Whoa, this is quite a big spacing... The music isn’t really that intense so I highly suggest nerfing that spacing to fit the music better.
00:56:661 (2,3) -^, too big. There is a beat on the head of (3) but in this part of the music, placing such big spacings don’t fit.
01:02:477 (1,2,3) –Check the spacings here. Either make them similar or space them out normally because it looks a bit weird if different spacings are used.
01:33:089 (1,2,3) -^, make them similar since the objects are equally spaced on the timeline.
01:35:742 (1) –I think you decided to place this on the vocal but it sounds off-beat since the strong beat is right before it. I would rather place it on the blue tick where the strong beat is.

Hard:

Uncheck widescreen support.
The HP of 6 is a bit too high for a Hard and also, it can’t be the same as the setting for Insane and the other Insane. Lower it to 5 or something. Same goes for the OD. It’s a bit too high. Lower to 6.
00:10:895 –You can add a spinner here too. If you’re scared the reaction time between the spinner and the next note will be too short then just let the spinner end a bit earlier.
00:14:110 (5) –I suggest adding new combo here and removing it here: 00:14:569 (1) – since the strong beat is on (5) and the NC will support that better.
00:17:324 (6) –You should add NC here for consistency. This combo is longer than the previous combo.
00:32:018 –I suggest mapping out this beat. It’s rather strong and emphasizing it would be a good idea. Perhaps try a ½ slider and a circle or just circles. Up to you.
01:06:150 –Rather not leave this empty. There’s still an important beat there and the gap feels as if it should be filled. Place a circle there.
01:28:191 (6) –You should add NC here for consistency.

Chaos’ Advanced:

Your diff is the only one that has countdown enabled. Rather disable it for consistency with other diffs, plus the countdown doesn’t work so there’s no need to have it enabled.
Uncheck widescreen support too.
All the other diffs have a spinner at the end of the song. It fits nicely since the song still continues and mapping that out will be a good idea imo. I suggest starting your spinner here: 01:51:610 – for consistency and also since it fits.
The HP and OD settings should be lowered a bit. For an Advanced it’s quite high (I already mentioned that the settings for Hard is a bit too high too)
The objects are so close to each other. For an Advanced it’s a bit uncommon since the objects are usually more spaced out. I highly suggest lifting the distance spacing a bit so the objects don’t look so clustered. It can get uncomfortable to play if almost all the objects can hardly be seen.
00:21:763 (1) –I think this NC is a mistake... If not, it should be removed because it looks very out of place. This applies to all similar cases. In an Advanced short NC’s aren’t really used.
00:37:375 –This is such an important beat and leaving it empty is really not a good idea. I suggest placing the slider here or at least place a circle there to emphasize it.

You also left out a lot of important beats that should rather be mapped out since they’re so strong and very audible. Examples are: 00:14:110 - 00:16:559 - 00:19:008 – etc. Imo mapping out the beats that are the most strong makes more sense than mapping out the weaker sounds that can’t really be heard.

Normal:

Uncheck widescreen support here too.
01:03:395 (2) –I think you placed these sliders too early. If you listen closely the long vocals start here: 01:03:701 – so the slider should start there too instead. So something like this:
Picture
There’s probably a lot more similar instances.

Another thing that bothered is the slider velocity. It looks rather slow for a Normal. You can make it a bit faster. I see you made it 0.50x. That’s quite slow. Lift it a bit. Perhaps 0.60x.

Good Luck~

Mir

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Mir 2017-02-12T23:06:40+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Hi, you requested.

Mir’s Insane:
Uncheck widescreen support. No need to have it enabled and it’s also inconsistent with other diffs.
00:01:253 –It’s not allowed to have a green line on a red one except to change the slider velocity. In this case you didn’t so remove the green line. - I don't need to remove this lol, the settings are the same as the red point so it's fine.
00:17:018 (4,1,1) –Impove the stack here. Right now (1) is a bit off. - Seems fine to me.
00:18:089 –Are you sure you don’t want to map this out? It can be heard quite clearly and having it in a slider’s tummy isn’t a good approach imo. This applies to all similar cases. - Nah, this is fine because I'm mapping the bass sound.
00:27:579 (3) –This slider overlaps the HP bar quite a bit and is usually not advised since it can disrupt visualization. Rather try something else to make everything nicely visible.
00:28:191 (1,2) –I think this spacing should be similar to the other spacings before it. For example, similar to: 00:23:293 (1,2) – etc. Try to keep spacings of similar beats consistent. - I changed it after moving the above but I'm fairly certain this was similarly spaced before.
00:36:763 (1,2) –Hmm, the spacing of this is a bit weird and you didn’t do the same here for example: 00:35:385 (3) – Spacing it out normally would be better imo. Or you can stack it like you did here: 00:40:283 (3) – Then I also suggest stacking 00:35:385 (3) – Fixed this all up a bit in several ways.
00:47:171 –I don’t really think it’s a good idea to have a strong beat like this as a slider’s end. Rather try making the beat a circle so it has more emphasis.
00:52:069 (1) –There’s no SV change here so adding a new combo isn’t necessary. Rather remove the NC. - It's my style. (seriously tho it's for emphasis)
00:54:212 (2,3) –Whoa, this is quite a big spacing... The music isn’t really that intense so I highly suggest nerfing that spacing to fit the music better. - I think these are fine, because slider leniency makes this jump much less intense than it seems.
00:56:661 (2,3) -^, too big. There is a beat on the head of (3) but in this part of the music, placing such big spacings don’t fit. - Tbh this one is even more justified than the last one.. xD
01:02:477 (1,2,3) –Check the spacings here. Either make them similar or space them out normally because it looks a bit weird if different spacings are used.
01:33:089 (1,2,3) -^, make them similar since the objects are equally spaced on the timeline.
01:35:742 (1) –I think you decided to place this on the vocal but it sounds off-beat since the strong beat is right before it. I would rather place it on the blue tick where the strong beat is. - No thanks, I want to focus exclusively on the vocals here so I'm ignoring that beat. If I mapped it the whole section would be ruined.

Thanks for the mod!

Update: https://puu.sh/u0qDN/9641deb2dc.osu

Zer0-

177 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Zer0- 2017-02-12T23:23:49+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Hi, you requested.

Answer of the Autumn Wind:
01:51:457 –Unnecessary green line. You can remove it. ok
In the beginning of the song the sliderslide sounds are so loud and rather annoying. I highly suggest adding a soft-sliderslide soundfile to silence them. It’ll probably help for the other diffs as well. alright
Also, in the beginning of the song (and probably throughout the rest of the song as well) nice piano sounds can be heard. It would be nice to emphasize those sounds with the default soft-hitwhistle. Leaving the instrument empty with nothing to support it isn’t a good idea imo. This applies to your other diffs as well. not sure where you mean? the repeating sliders?
00:10:895 (1) –This spinner should rather start here: 00:10:895 – If you listen closely you’ll hear the music already starts on that blue tick. alright
00:17:324 (2) –There’s quite a loud beat on this object, so I suggest spacing it out a bit more for more emphasis. Right now the spacing is a bit too small. alright
00:25:130 (3,2) –For aesthetics try stacking the (2) on the head of (3). It’ll look neater. Just move the previous slider around a bit till you can stack. ok
00:22:987 (5,6) –These beats are quite loud, but these beats: 00:25:436 (4,5) – aren’t really. The spacing of 00:25:130 (3,4) – is bigger than the spacing here though: 00:22:681 (4,5) – It’s a bit weird since the beats where the bigger spacing is isn’t that strong. The spacings should be switched imo so that the music is supported correctly. switched up spacing
00:44:722 (3,4) –The music still has a level of calmness so using big spacing isn’t really fitting imo. I suggest nerfing the spacing here a bit. nerfed a lil
00:52:987 (2,3) –There’s nothing in the music that really suggests a jump here imo. No strong beat/vocal. Rather make the spacing normal and don’t place a jump. mmokay
01:10:436 (4,5) –I think these two should be snapped to 1/8 instead and not 1/16. I’m not 100% sure. Perhaps ask other modders’ opinions as well.think it sounds like 1/16 imo
01:32:477 (2,3,4) –This doesn’t look that good, since the spacing differs. Rather make the spacing similar for all three. fixed
01:35:691 –This beat is rather strong and it would be a good idea to map it out for emphasis. yea

To me, consistency is important, especially when it comes to spacing. There were a few places where I felt the spacings were different but the beats are similar. I’ll point out a few places where I feel a bit more spacing is needed for consistency: 00:19:008 (3) - 00:22:222 (2) - 00:23:906 (3) – etc. Basically, try adding a bit more spacing where the beats are strong and lower spacing where the beats are calm. I feel that can still be improved. fixed those and tried to fix consistency

Hard:
Uncheck widescreen support. ok
The HP of 6 is a bit too high for a Hard and also, it can’t be the same as the setting for Insane and the other Insane. Lower it to 5 or something. Same goes for the OD. It’s a bit too high. Lower to 6. ah alright
00:10:895 –You can add a spinner here too. If you’re scared the reaction time between the spinner and the next note will be too short then just let the spinner end a bit earlier. sure why not
00:14:110 (5) –I suggest adding new combo here and removing it here: 00:14:569 (1) – since the strong beat is on (5) and the NC will support that better.
00:17:324 (6) –You should add NC here for consistency. This combo is longer than the previous combo.
00:32:018 –I suggest mapping out this beat. It’s rather strong and emphasizing it would be a good idea. Perhaps try a ½ slider and a circle or just circles. Up to you. alright made it a 1/2 slider and a circle
01:06:150 –Rather not leave this empty. There’s still an important beat there and the gap feels as if it should be filled. Place a circle there. don't think theres a sound worth placing a beat on
01:28:191 (6) –You should add NC here for consistency. fixed all the nc stuff

Normal:
Uncheck widescreen support here too. ok
01:03:395 (2) –I think you placed these sliders too early. If you listen closely the long vocals start here: 01:03:701 – so the slider should start there too instead. So something like this:
Picture
There’s probably a lot more similar instances. that slider in particular is following the background noise, and I think it is fine that way so I won't change it now, but if it's an issue ill fix it

Another thing that bothered is the slider velocity. It looks rather slow for a Normal. You can make it a bit faster. I see you made it 0.50x. That’s quite slow. Lift it a bit. Perhaps 0.60x. Should be alright I think

Good Luck~ Thanks!

Thanks a lot for the mod! Appreciated!

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2017-02-13T06:43:13+00:00

I think you forgot to give me kudos >.<

Zer0-

177 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Zer0- 2017-02-13T07:55:25+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
I think you forgot to give me kudos >.<

oops

Chaos

osu! Alumni

244 posts

Joined May 2013

Chaos 2017-02-13T10:03:48+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Chaos’ Advanced:
Your diff is the only one that has countdown enabled. Rather disable it for consistency with other diffs, plus the countdown doesn’t work so there’s no need to have it enabled. Disabled.
Uncheck widescreen support too. Unchecked.
All the other diffs have a spinner at the end of the song. It fits nicely since the song still continues and mapping that out will be a good idea imo. I suggest starting your spinner here: 01:51:610 – for consistency and also since it fits. Added a spinner at 01:51:457 - to match the other diffs.
The HP and OD settings should be lowered a bit. For an Advanced it’s quite high (I already mentioned that the settings for Hard is a bit too high too) HP lowered to 5, OD lowered to 5.5
The objects are so close to each other. For an Advanced it’s a bit uncommon since the objects are usually more spaced out. I highly suggest lifting the distance spacing a bit so the objects don’t look so clustered. It can get uncomfortable to play if almost all the objects can hardly be seen. Overall I wanted to make the 1/4 easier to read and play because I felt the rhythm choices I made in places would make it a bit challenging if I kept the spacing the same DS as the 1/2 (namely I used a lot of polarity changes due to mapping the melody and vocals primarily). So I only used the same DS as the 1/2 in 1/4 in a couple of places towards the end. I understand where you're coming from but I don't think it is necessary to change the overall spacing concept. However, if other people bring this up as a potential issue, I may reconsider.
00:21:763 (1) –I think this NC is a mistake... If not, it should be removed because it looks very out of place. This applies to all similar cases. In an Advanced short NC’s aren’t really used. Removed NCs. Originally had it as a long combo but changed it initially because I thought the NCs would help in seeing the polarity changes.
00:37:375 –This is such an important beat and leaving it empty is really not a good idea. I suggest placing the slider here or at least place a circle there to emphasize it. I think adding a circle here would de-emphasize 00:37:528 (2) - too much given that I am focusing on the vocals. I would like to keep this as is as I don't find it necessary to emphasize the clap over the vocals.

You also left out a lot of important beats that should rather be mapped out since they’re so strong and very audible. Examples are: 00:14:110 - 00:16:559 - 00:19:008 – etc. Imo mapping out the beats that are the most strong makes more sense than mapping out the weaker sounds that can’t really be heard. As with the point above, my rhythm choices are meant to follow the melody. I don't believe that the choices I made are "weaker" sounds, even if they might be atypical for what most people would do.

Thanks a lot for the mod, much appreciated

Update

https://chaos.s-ul.eu/urfwZKwm.txt

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 71201
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13497,33089,52681,72273,81916,91865,101661,111457
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Akikaze no Answer
TitleUnicode:秋風のアンサー
Artist:Flower
ArtistUnicode:Flower
Creator:Zer0-
Version:Chaos' Advanced
Source:
Tags:Hanadokei Mio Nakajima Shuuka Fujii Manami Shigetome Reina Washio Kyoka Ichiki Nozomi Bando Harumi Sato Chiharu Muto Mir Benny- BennyBananas Lanturn Chaos
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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:2.6
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[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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vipto

716 posts

Joined May 2011

vipto 2017-02-17T21:10:54+00:00

cute song

IRC shenanigans

SPOILER

21:14 *Zer0- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1178590 Flower - Akikaze no Answer]
21:14 Zer0-: what do you think of this :v
21:16 vipto: hmm
21:16 vipto: it's aight
21:17 vipto: too jumpy for my taste
21:17 vipto: rather
21:17 vipto: too jumpy for the song
21:17 vipto: some jumps dont make sense
21:17 Zer0-: hmm
21:17 vipto: too little emphasis on lyrics, you skipped a bunch
21:17 Zer0-: I blame too much dnb mapping, focusing too much on drums ;(
21:17 vipto: that's what i think of it
21:18 vipto: *shrug*
21:18 Zer0-: welp
21:18 vipto: want me to point stuff out or something
21:18 Zer0-: idk sure why not
21:18 vipto: or were you gonna rank it soon
21:19 vipto: add "zero" in your tags
21:19 Zer0-: i dont think i could rank something when bns dont like it :^)
21:19 vipto: i think
21:19 Zer0-: yea i could do that
21:20 vipto: 00:08:599 (1,2,3,4,5) -
21:20 vipto: so
21:20 vipto: why spaced all of a sudden
21:20 vipto: you didnt space the previous 3 patterns
21:21 vipto: 00:18:855 (2) -
21:21 vipto: you see
21:21 vipto: emphasis is a thing here
21:21 vipto: but the difference is so small
21:21 vipto: it's pretty much negligible (?)
21:21 vipto: either just keep ds consistent
21:21 Zer0-: emphasis on 3?
21:21 vipto: or make it noticeable
21:21 vipto: yeah the spacing compared
21:22 vipto: 1 to 2 is 1,5
21:22 vipto: and 2 to 3 is 1,8
21:22 vipto: it's barely noticeable
21:22 vipto: 00:19:926 (2,3) -
21:22 vipto: and you emphasised the same sound here
21:22 vipto: with a much larger spacing
21:22 vipto: 00:23:293 (1,2) -
21:22 Zer0-: ok I made it more noticable
21:22 vipto: i read this as 1/4
21:23 vipto: it is
21:23 vipto: nvm
21:23 vipto: wait
21:23 vipto: you
21:23 vipto: this is mapped in 1/4 alright i read it as 1/8 then
21:23 Zer0-: .
21:23 Zer0-: yeah
21:23 vipto: spacing is fucked
21:23 Zer0-: my mistake
21:23 vipto: 00:22:681 (4,5,6,1) -
21:23 vipto: this is half emphasised half not
21:24 vipto: just do, idk
21:24 vipto: something like this idk https://viptwo.s-ul.eu/d2SNaqUc.png
21:24 vipto: 00:27:579 (4,5) -
21:24 Zer0-: spacing o-o
21:24 vipto: whatever just do
21:25 vipto: something
21:25 vipto: more noticable
21:25 vipto: and consistent
21:25 vipto: 00:32:783 (5,6,1) -
21:25 vipto: like here
21:25 Zer0-: yeah I get what you mean
21:25 Zer0-: yeah
21:25 vipto: 00:50:844 (3,4,5) -
21:25 vipto: i'd have the stack ds'ed to 3
21:25 vipto: and 4 emphasised
21:26 vipto: kinda separate the patterns
21:26 vipto: because the red combo is a whole new sound
21:26 vipto: so keep those together and have some emphasis into the new combo and the new sound
21:26 vipto: see where i am going at?
21:27 Zer0-: uhh
21:27 Zer0-: im not quite sure i understand what you mean with having the stack ds'd to 3
21:27 vipto: like
21:27 vipto: 1,9
21:28 vipto: https://viptwo.s-ul.eu/GJ1RMXmm.png
21:28 vipto: like so
21:28 vipto: need to figure something out with the red combo
21:30 vipto: a
21:30 Zer0-: a
21:30 vipto: yes/no/maybe
21:30 vipto: something
21:30 vipto: hello
21:30 Zer0-: move these ? 00:51:457 (1,2,3) -
21:30 Zer0-: hello same
21:30 vipto: i sent a screenshot
21:30 Zer0-: yes
21:30 Zer0-: did you move 1 in the screenshot
21:31 Zer0-: i moved the stack
21:31 vipto: oh yeah i explained that
21:31 vipto: red combo has this
21:31 vipto: high whatever noise
21:31 Zer0-: O
21:31 vipto: so keep those patterns separated
21:31 Zer0-: yeah ok im just retarded dont mind me
21:31 vipto: the way you had it before
21:31 vipto: they kinda mixed with the way you did the DS
21:31 vipto: uhh spacing sorry
21:31 vipto: so that makes more sense to me
21:31 vipto: 00:53:753 (1) -
21:31 vipto: lyrics
21:31 vipto: pls
21:32 vipto: 00:53:446 (5,6) -
21:32 vipto: idk what you tried with these jumops
21:32 vipto: they felt really empty
21:32 Zer0-: extend it by 1/8?
21:32 vipto: and the music doesnt really do...anything
21:32 vipto: 00:54:059 -
21:32 vipto: to here
21:33 vipto: 01:05:385 (2,3,4,5) -
21:33 vipto: like
21:33 vipto: why
21:33 vipto: the music doesnt do jack shit except for the drum on 01:05:538 (3) -
21:33 vipto: keep thos steady and on ds or whatever
21:34 vipto: i dont see why they would be jumps
21:34 vipto: they felt really off when playing
21:34 Zer0-: yeah ill rework those parts
21:34 vipto: from 01:05:538 (3) - to the kiai
21:34 vipto: the lyric emphasis is like
21:34 Zer0-: also
21:34 vipto: meh
21:34 Zer0-: 00:56:201 (1) -
21:34 Zer0-: extend this
21:34 vipto: you did well in some parts
21:34 Zer0-: consistency and stuff
21:34 vipto: somethimes not
21:34 Zer0-: right
21:35 vipto: yeah good
21:35 vipto: i missed it
21:35 vipto: 00:59:416 (4,5) -
21:35 vipto: i'd have this be a slider
21:35 vipto: 01:01:253 (1) -
21:35 vipto: long slider tpp
21:35 vipto: oo
21:35 vipto: 01:01:253 (1) -
21:35 vipto: oo
21:35 vipto: ps
21:35 vipto: 01:03:548 -
21:35 vipto: she sings offbeat here so meh skip it
21:36 Zer0-: 00:59:416 (4,5) -
21:36 vipto: 01:05:997 (1) - long slider too
21:36 Zer0-: but emphasis on vocals
21:36 vipto: https://viptwo.s-ul.eu/26XX11eZ.png
21:36 vipto: sliders can emphasise too
21:37 vipto: brb smoking
21:37 Zer0-: aight
21:40 Zer0-: which one should I skip cuz offbeat
21:40 Zer0-: 01:03:548 -
21:40 Zer0-: this?
21:45 vipto: yeah i mean you could probably map it with a slider
21:45 vipto: because it isnt really offbeat when youe 1/4 is basically 1/2
21:46 vipto: 01:03:395 -
21:46 vipto: circle here and 1/2 slider on 01:03:548 - works
21:46 Zer0-: yeah I thought it might
21:46 vipto: 01:14:722 (1,2,3) -
21:47 vipto: 2 and 3 are too close
21:47 vipto: considering the spacing between 1 and 2
21:47 Zer0-: i dislike this pattern fully but idk how to remake it
21:47 vipto: sec
21:47 Zer0-: i dislike how it goes from 1 to 2
21:47 Zer0-: aaaaa
21:47 Zer0-: who's idea was this
21:47 Zer0-: oh wait
21:47 Zer0-: past me
21:50 vipto: https://viptwo.s-ul.eu/1J9HLDT2.png
21:50 vipto: like this maybe idk
21:50 vipto: need to see how to fit that into the next pattern
21:50 Zer0-: pretty cute
21:50 vipto: if you do it like i did
21:50 Zer0-: hmm
21:50 vipto: you coult blaket it around
21:50 vipto: 01:15:946 (1) -
21:51 vipto: and then
21:51 vipto: move 01:16:099 (2) - to the right
21:51 vipto: to not have the linear shit
21:51 vipto: yeah that works
21:51 vipto: https://viptwo.s-ul.eu/fRO4WTr6.png
21:51 vipto: roughtly
21:51 vipto: ROUGHLY
21:52 vipto: 01:19:620 (1,2,3) -
21:52 vipto: what's going on here
21:53 Zer0-: LOL
21:53 Zer0-: what is my spacing
21:53 Zer0-: wtf
21:53 Zer0-: LO
21:53 vipto: i'd also make 01:19:620 (1,2) - a slider
21:53 vipto: oh wait the drums
21:53 vipto: nvm
21:53 Zer0-: double kicks
21:53 vipto: yeah
21:54 vipto: just
21:54 vipto: https://viptwo.s-ul.eu/ILtWB1ct.png
21:54 vipto: like that?
21:54 vipto: reverse 3 and 4
21:54 vipto: could move the stack lower
21:54 Zer0-: but then flow with the next pattern
21:54 vipto: yeah
21:55 vipto: https://viptwo.s-ul.eu/E0VMU5SD.png
21:55 vipto: that's pretty ugly tho
21:55 vipto: round and bent sliders together
21:55 Zer0-: agreed
21:55 vipto: you could
21:55 vipto: do some 120 rotate shit around
21:55 Zer0-: o i think i know how to fix it
21:55 vipto: 01:20:538 (5) -
21:56 vipto: https://viptwo.s-ul.eu/qlUACGq5.png
21:56 vipto: like so?
21:57 vipto: 01:25:436 (4,5,1) -
21:57 vipto: pls
21:57 vipto: 01:24:518 (1,2,3) -
21:57 vipto: these should be spaced further apart
21:57 vipto: yknow, raised voice and stuff
21:57 vipto: similar to 01:22:069 (1,2) -
21:58 Zer0-: doable
21:58 Zer0-: ill space them a bit
21:58 vipto: yee boi
21:58 vipto: 01:26:048 -
21:58 vipto: why no circles on the piano like you had before
21:58 vipto: 01:18:395 (1,2,3,4) -
21:58 vipto: as shown here
21:59 vipto: oh nvm it works
21:59 vipto: ah, you could
21:59 Zer0-: v o c a l s
21:59 vipto: 01:29:110 (4) -
21:59 vipto: strg H
22:00 vipto: and move it back
22:00 vipto: just for the curve
22:00 vipto: 01:32:783 (3,4) -
22:00 vipto: what's this owo
22:00 vipto: those were really confusing
22:00 Zer0-: true
22:00 vipto: 01:32:885 (4) -
22:00 Zer0-: 1/6
22:00 vipto: unsnapped
22:00 Zer0-: stacks
22:00 Zer0-: aa
22:00 vipto: it's
22:00 vipto: not on 1/6 tho
22:01 vipto: listen to it
22:01 vipto: on 25%
22:01 Zer0-: its like
22:01 Zer0-: the kick is on 1/4 but the vocal is 1/6
22:01 Zer0-: :_:
22:01 vipto: keep the drum
22:01 vipto: on 1/4
22:02 Zer0-: alright
22:02 vipto: 01:32:936 (4) -
22:02 vipto: missing something here
22:02 vipto: and get that slider away
22:02 vipto: clutter
22:02 Zer0-: wait what
22:02 vipto: it's hella emphasised
22:02 Zer0-: i moved the 2nd note to 1/4 snap
22:02 vipto: like this or something idk https://viptwo.s-ul.eu/51C2it7q.png
22:02 vipto: cant pass that up
22:02 Zer0-: you mean the next slider?
22:02 vipto: yes
22:03 Zer0-: o
22:03 vipto: 01:35:538 (1,2) -
22:03 vipto: here
22:03 vipto: https://viptwo.s-ul.eu/llwvpxsQ.png
22:03 vipto: like so maybe, add the circle in
22:04 Zer0-: but the vocal is 1/6 snapped
22:04 vipto: i'd keep it to 1/4 because the whole map beforehand stays on 1/6
22:04 vipto: i didnt expect it at all
22:04 vipto: stays on
22:04 vipto: 1/4
22:04 vipto: retarded sorry
22:05 vipto: 01:36:763 (1,2,3) -
22:05 vipto: you can do this with a reverse
22:05 Zer0-: hmm
22:06 Zer0-: but I feel it doesnt emphasize it as well then
22:06 vipto: just my feel
22:06 vipto: 01:45:028 (4,5,1) -
22:06 vipto: spacing
22:06 vipto: is messed up again
22:06 vipto: 01:46:406 (6,1) -
22:06 vipto: same thing as in the beginning
22:08 Zer0-: yea
22:08 vipto: aight i'm done
22:08 Zer0-: thanks a lot man
22:08 vipto: hope you can fix up more stuff based on what i said
22:08 vipto: want me to post this or something
22:08 vipto: that -1kd is looking pretty good tho
22:08 Zer0-: up to you
22:08 vipto: idk if i wanna wreck it
22:08 Zer0-: hmmmm
22:09 vipto: WHAT'S THE COMMAND AGAIN
22:09 Zer0-: UH

Logic Agent

483 posts

Joined April 2015

Logic Agent 2017-02-28T04:26:32+00:00

[General]

sb\effects\dot.png is unused
OD3 on the easy?

[Answer of the Autumn Wind]

00:15:793 (5,1) - would reccomend buffing this a bit to show it's stronger than the previous beats
00:18:855 (2,3) - compare the spacing on this to the previous 2 > 3 and it's pretty huge, would reccomend nerfing.
00:22:987 (5,6) - don't really think linear flow here represents the song very well, maybe use a back and forth pattern instead?
00:25:589 (5,1) - slider body here is kinda going against the implied flow
00:52:987 (2,3) - stack here?
00:56:201 (1) - move this to continue the circular flow?
01:01:253 (6) - nc?
01:03:548 (5) - nc?
01:06:304 (2,3) - how come
01:33:548 - i think maybe you should map the vocal here

[Mir's Insane]

00:17:324 (1,1) - fix stack cmon
00:24:365 (1,2) - put this closer to the end of the tail, not to the side of it?

[Hard]

00:13:191 (1,2,3) - make this less sharp?
00:19:926 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing here pls
01:05:997 - i would reccomend mapping the vocal here
01:45:028 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this corner looks a lil cluttered, maybe try and clean it up a bit?

Zer0-

177 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Zer0- 2017-02-28T04:54:22+00:00

Logic Agent wrote:
[General]
sb\effects\dot.png is unused removed it
OD3 on the easy? guess ill have to ask lanturn or smth
[Answer of the Autumn Wind]
00:15:793 (5,1) - would reccomend buffing this a bit to show it's stronger than the previous beats ok
00:18:855 (2,3) - compare the spacing on this to the previous 2 > 3 and it's pretty huge, would reccomend nerfing. nerfed
00:22:987 (5,6) - don't really think linear flow here represents the song very well, maybe use a back and forth pattern instead? linear flow works fine, its used all over the map so...
00:25:589 (5,1) - slider body here is kinda going against the implied flow it's fine, it plays well anyway and does what I intended
00:52:987 (2,3) - stack here? no cause I stack the double kicks and its the same all over the map, and I'd like to keep it consistent
00:56:201 (1) - move this to continue the circular flow? okay changed up this pattern
01:01:253 (6) - nc? ok
01:03:548 (5) - nc? ok
01:06:304 (2,3) - how come fixed
01:33:548 - i think maybe you should map the vocal here did

[Hard]
00:13:191 (1,2,3) - make this less sharp? ok
00:19:926 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing here pls fixed
01:05:997 - i would reccomend mapping the vocal here added a note
01:45:028 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this corner looks a lil cluttered, maybe try and clean it up a bit? tried to clean up a bit

fixed mir's stuff too

Last edited by Zer0- 2017-02-28T16:46:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2017-02-28T07:26:58+00:00

Hmm. I think OD2 is more appropriate here. The map itself is pretty calm.

PS. Can you remove the new combo at 01:49:008 (1) - ? not overly a huge deal if you don't, but it's just inconsistent. thanks

BoberOfDarkness

1,059 posts

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-03-06T16:55:08+00:00

IRC with Benny-

16:54 BoberOfDarkness: yo
16:54 Benny-: yoo
16:54 BoberOfDarkness: have you time now?
16:55 BoberOfDarkness: for irc mod
16:55 Benny-: sure
16:57 BoberOfDarkness: 00:16:865 (1,2) - sharp direction change after hyper dash feels too hard for a Rain
16:59 Benny-: i use this all the time 00:20:844 (1,2) -  00:22:222 (3,4) -
16:59 Benny-: it's a very basic pattern in my rains
17:00 BoberOfDarkness: well but spacing like 00:20:844 (1,2) -  work much easier to read
17:02 BoberOfDarkness: distance 1.8x forces player to quick dash
17:02 BoberOfDarkness: I think distance like 1.5 are more fine to use here :ok_hand:
17:03 Benny-: It's supposed to be a dash.. not a walk
17:03 BoberOfDarkness: and here 00:27:120 (3,4) - its way too hard
17:03 BoberOfDarkness: with 1.5 it is still dash
17:03 Benny-: all my dashes are 2,00x
17:03 Benny-: I already decreased the distance
17:04 Benny-: why is it too hard?
17:05 BoberOfDarkness: because it give small amount time to react 
17:06 BoberOfDarkness: like 2.0 distance is fine for normal dash but I guess its way too much for pattern like that with note into slider with direction change
17:06 Benny-: reduced the distance to 1,80 which is what I've used with antiflow patterns
17:07 BoberOfDarkness: :ok_hand:
17:07 BoberOfDarkness: okay lets move next
17:08 BoberOfDarkness: 00:40:130 (4) - I would note this as slider since those sounds works better with single notes and it works nicely as you did here
17:08 BoberOfDarkness: 00:35:232 (4,5) - 
17:10 BoberOfDarkness: if you aggre I want to suggest to make something similiar for 00:45:028 (4) - and 00:49:926 (4) - 
17:10 BoberOfDarkness: that would make patterns more interesting to play
17:11 Benny-: yeah I see what you mean, I need time to rearrange a lot of notes though
17:11 Benny-: cause it'll fuck up my spacing
17:11 BoberOfDarkness: ok sure
17:11 BoberOfDarkness: so PM when you will done
17:12 BoberOfDarkness: there is no need to hurry 
17:13 Benny-: okay done
17:15 BoberOfDarkness: thats pretty nazi but I think that deserve to be more spaced
17:15 BoberOfDarkness: 00:47:630 (4,1) - 
17:15 BoberOfDarkness: like 1,8 or so
17:16 Benny-: true
17:17 BoberOfDarkness: 01:09:824 (1) - for this I would expect something more 
17:17 BoberOfDarkness: since slider ignores a lot
17:17 BoberOfDarkness: but not sure 
17:18 BoberOfDarkness: timeline like that works nice to me
17:18 BoberOfDarkness: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499542
17:18 Benny-: following vocals tho:(
17:19 BoberOfDarkness: that stills follows vocals but without ignoring the backgroud sounds
17:21 BoberOfDarkness: 01:16:099 (2,3) - more distance here would be nice 
17:21 Benny-: I don't like it ><
17:21 BoberOfDarkness: ok ok
17:21 BoberOfDarkness: even 1/2 hyper works good since strong volals and hit at 01:16:559 - 
17:22 Benny-: it's impossible to add a 1/2 hyper
17:22 BoberOfDarkness: I just added nice one 
17:23 BoberOfDarkness: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499575
17:24 Benny-: I don't want a hyper though, the pitch is lowering ><
17:24 Benny-: and I literally have no other 1/2 hyper in the whole map
17:24 Benny-: and you shouldn't mix 1/2 and 1/4 hypers in rain
17:24 Benny-: even if it's low bpm it's still confusing to play
17:24 BoberOfDarkness: lol
17:25 BoberOfDarkness: you should't mix 1/2 and 1/4 in one pattern
17:25 BoberOfDarkness: not diff
17:25 Benny-: it is in a pattern
17:25 Benny-: 01:15:793 (1,2) - 1/4 hyper
17:25 Benny-: 01:16:099 (2,3) - 1/2 hyper
17:25 Benny-: ??
17:26 Benny-: I just said since I dont have any other 1/2 hyper I think it's weird to add one randomly
17:26 Benny-: those were two different reasons
17:26 BoberOfDarkness: guideline talks about situations like this
17:26 BoberOfDarkness: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499601
17:27 Benny-: I got that feedback on my day after map
17:27 Benny-: I had to remove almost all 1/2 hypers in kiai
17:27 BoberOfDarkness: and if I can as who said you cannot mix them?
17:28 Benny-: Koliron and jbh, but they didn't say don't mix them
17:28 Benny-: just be careful with the usage
17:29 BoberOfDarkness: considering words "you shouldn't mix 1/2 and 1/4 hypers in rain
17:29 BoberOfDarkness: my nightwish rain would be 300% unrankable
17:29 Benny-: did you even listen to what I said
17:30 BoberOfDarkness: since map is mostly 1/2 hypers with usage of 1/4 and 1/1 as well
17:30 Benny-: The pitch is lowering so I don't wanna add a hyper here
17:30 Benny-: I don't have any other 1/2 hypers in the map
17:30 BoberOfDarkness: thats other point^
17:30 Benny-: And I don't wanna mix 1/2 and 1/4 hypers
17:30 BoberOfDarkness: and its another^^
17:30 BoberOfDarkness: and this is fine
17:30 BoberOfDarkness: and lets move on
17:30 Benny-: that's three reasons why I don't wanna add a hyper
17:31 BoberOfDarkness: and 2 makes sense to me
17:31 BoberOfDarkness: so lets move
17:32 Benny-: okay
17:32 BoberOfDarkness: are you sure thats fine to having anti-flow patters like 01:28:804 (3,4) - with mix with this 01:29:110 (4,1,2) - ?
17:33 Benny-: t
17:33 Benny-: 01:28:804 (3,4) - these aren
17:33 Benny-: really that antiflowy
17:33 Benny-: it's not even stairs
17:34 BoberOfDarkness: but still players would dash to it and have to next to another one
17:34 BoberOfDarkness: next one*
17:35 Benny-: I think it's fine ? ><
17:35 BoberOfDarkness: okay then
17:35 Benny-: I would understand it if 01:28:804 (3,4) - were more tilted
17:35 Benny-: but they are simple dashes
17:36 BoberOfDarkness: maybe make distance a bit smaller at 01:28:804 (3,4) - ?
17:36 Benny-: 01:29:569 (2) - I make this closer to 01:29:416 (1,3) - instead
17:37 BoberOfDarkness: okay 
17:37 BoberOfDarkness: I am not sure about that 1/3 usage in your map since 01:31:865 - 
17:38 BoberOfDarkness: it works nice
17:38 BoberOfDarkness: but ignores some beats like 01:32:783 - 01:32:936 - 
17:38 Benny-: yeah but I can't map both :p
17:38 Benny-: and I've been following vocals mostly so makes more sense to map vocals
17:39 BoberOfDarkness: still 1/4 follows vocals 
17:39 Benny-: no
17:39 Benny-: the vocal is 1/3
17:41 Benny-: example here it would crash, drums on 01:35:691 - and vocal on 01:35:742 -
17:41 Benny-: 1/4 and 1/3
17:42 BoberOfDarkness: for example here vocals starts at 01:34:314 - and ends at 01:34:620 - (1/4), reverse at 01:34:518 - (1/3) doesn't fit as a reverse
17:42 BoberOfDarkness: but yea
17:42 BoberOfDarkness: that 01:34:722 - should be in 1/3 then
17:43 BoberOfDarkness: okay so lets stick to 1/3
17:43 Benny-: vocal is clearly 01:34:518 - 1/3
17:43 BoberOfDarkness: em
17:44 BoberOfDarkness: for me clearly ends at 01:34:620 - 
17:45 Benny-: it doesn't
17:45 Benny-: lol
17:45 BoberOfDarkness: lol
17:45 *Benny- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1178590 Flower - Akikaze no Answer [Answer of the Autumn Wind]]
17:45 Benny-: take this as reference
17:45 Benny-: it's 1/6
17:46 Benny-: making it easier for some beats
17:46 Benny-: but still not that drum I linked earlier
17:47 BoberOfDarkness: 3/6 = 1/2 so
17:47 BoberOfDarkness: I would map like this
17:47 BoberOfDarkness: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499760
17:47 BoberOfDarkness: with mix of 1/3 and 1/4
17:47 BoberOfDarkness: but its your map
17:48 Benny-: oh god no that would look so messy
17:48 BoberOfDarkness: ^

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2017-03-06T18:42:28+00:00

Did some small distance tweaking to make the diff more consistent as well as fixing stuff with Bober's suggestions shown above

Rain update

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Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2017-03-06T23:00:39+00:00

[Lanturn's Easy :]

00:39:212 (2,3) - Little spacing issue.

[Normal :]

00:29:722 (3) - Could be nice to have it same than 00:31:253 (2) - to make 00:29:722 (3,1,2,3) - like a whole coherent pattern (https://puu.sh/ux9QN/bed85effb3.png).
00:33:395 (2) - What about to make it straight vertical to make the flow more smooth to catch 00:34:314 (3) - ?

[Chaos's Advanced :]

00:42:273 (3,4) - I would unstack them, since you only used stack for 1/4 rhythm for the all time here, and it don't feel like it's necessary.
01:10:436 (1,2) - Could you space them a bit more to avoid overlap and help reading here?
01:12:120 (5,3) - I feel this overlap quite sad when you have space around to avoid it :c
01:21:763 (3,3) - Same even if almost invisible in game.
01:30:028 (2,3) - Same about spacing than before.
01:39:212 (1,1) - ^
00:15:028 (1) - / 00:19:926 (1) - / 00:24:824 (1) - / 00:29:722 (1) - / 00:54:518 (1) - / 00:34:314 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - / 01:10:130 (2) - / 01:14:110 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC (if you have question about that, just poke me).
01:09:824 (1) - / 01:19:620 (3) - Add NC

[Hard :]

00:42:885 (1,2) - Not fan of this 1/2 stack when you did only 1/4 before. For the sake of reading since it's still a Hard, I would unstack it (also you don't do it after with 00:45:334 (1,2) - so just unstack 100% sure).
01:15:946 (1,2) - / 01:20:844 (1,2) - I don't really get the point of these jumps. I don't think it's worth if only for clap since there's other places with claps who are not mapped the same way than them, and other have more intensity than these but don't use such spacing (like 01:21:457 (4,5,6) - ). So it could be nice if you could think about that again on kiai. Same for 01:40:436 (1,2) - .

[Mir's Insane :]

Stack Leniency 3 pls, 2 is way too much for an Insane and make the whole map way too hard to read for that kind of difficulty!
01:18:701 (3,3) - Maybe NC them ? Just an idea.

[Answer of the Autumn Wind :]

01:35:946 - Missing a beat here, and feel akward in play.

Fix all, make the CTB check by BN and call me back.
Mukyu~

Mir

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Mir 2017-03-06T23:26:14+00:00

might need to check my diff again next time you roll around since I made that part at 01:36:763 - 01:39:212 different to make it more playable.

https://puu.sh/uxfYX/c0f80b031e.osu

applied everything else anyways

Zer0-

177 posts

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Topic Starter

Zer0- 2017-03-07T16:27:39+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
[Normal :]
00:29:722 (3) - Could be nice to have it same than 00:31:253 (2) - to make 00:29:722 (3,1,2,3) - like a whole coherent pattern (https://puu.sh/ux9QN/bed85effb3.png). sure why not
00:33:395 (2) - What about to make it straight vertical to make the flow more smooth to catch 00:34:314 (3) - ?Alright, fixed
[Hard :]
00:42:885 (1,2) - Not fan of this 1/2 stack when you did only 1/4 before. For the sake of reading since it's still a Hard, I would unstack it (also you don't do it after with 00:45:334 (1,2) - so just unstack 100% sure). alright spaced it out like the other one
01:15:946 (1,2) - / 01:20:844 (1,2) - I don't really get the point of these jumps. I don't think it's worth if only for clap since there's other places with claps who are not mapped the same way than them, and other have more intensity than these but don't use such spacing (like 01:21:457 (4,5,6) - ). So it could be nice if you could think about that again on kiai. Same for 01:40:436 (1,2) - . adjusted spacing correctly
[Answer of the Autumn Wind :]
01:35:946 - Missing a beat here, and feel akward in play. fixed this too

Fix all, make the CTB check by BN and call me back.
Mukyu~

Alright! Thanks for the mod Noz~

Chaos

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Chaos 2017-03-07T17:37:43+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
[Chaos's Advanced :]
00:42:273 (3,4) - I would unstack them, since you only used stack for 1/4 rhythm for the all time here, and it don't feel like it's necessary. Done.
01:10:436 (1,2) - Could you space them a bit more to avoid overlap and help reading here? Done.
01:12:120 (5,3) - I feel this overlap quite sad when you have space around to avoid it :c :(
Pattern changed so it doesn't overlap anymore.
01:21:763 (3,3) - Same even if almost invisible in game. Same as above.
01:30:028 (2,3) - Same about spacing than before. Unstacked.
01:39:212 (1,1) - ^ Unstacked.
00:15:028 (1) - / 00:19:926 (1) - / 00:24:824 (1) - / 00:29:722 (1) - / 00:54:518 (1) - / 00:34:314 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - / 01:10:130 (2) - / 01:14:110 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC (if you have question about that, just poke me). The 1,1,1s ended up highlighting each new combo instead of specific ones as mentioned in Discord, so I generally made combos longer and more regular. I'd appreciate a re-check on the combos just in case. The simpler ones have been fixed.
01:09:824 (1) - / 01:19:620 (3) - Add NC Fixed.

In general the combos are a measure long now except where repeat sliders go over the measure lines. Let me know if I messed anything up there and if the patterns I used to change the stacking things are fine. Thanks a lot for the mod ^^ <3

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https://chaos.s-ul.eu/z3olMtC4.txt

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 71201
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13497,33089,52681,71010,72273,81916,91865,101661,111457
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Akikaze no Answer
TitleUnicode:秋風のアンサー
Artist:Flower
ArtistUnicode:Flower
Creator:Zer0-
Version:Chaos' Advanced
Source:
Tags:Hanadokei Mio Nakajima Shuuka Fujii Manami Shigetome Reina Washio Kyoka Ichiki Nozomi Bando Harumi Sato Chiharu Muto Mir Benny- BennyBananas Lanturn Chaos Zero Kanari
BeatmapID:1188976
BeatmapSetID:556945

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:2.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Untitled-1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2017-03-08T01:07:51+00:00

Thanks Nozhomi. Fixed the small spacing error.

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ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2017-04-08T19:11:36+00:00

BN Check requested by Benny-

00:02:630 (1,2,3) - I'd reduce the distance between this notes. By direct comparison with the previous distances, it may trigger some players to dash, which creates a dashing pattern that's a bit awkward IMO. I'd say using the usual x3,20 distance fits nicely here. Also applies for the remaining similar patterns.
00:14:569 (2) - I'd put this a bit closer to the previous object. Since there's a "brake" effect after landing the previous HDash, getting to this note feels a bit uncomfortable. Something like x:64 or 68 feels nicer.
00:15:334 (4,5,6) - These distances feel really tight. I'd put (5) on x:196 so both distances are clearly walkable.
00:16:865 (1,2) - This movement feels a bit harsh for this section; I think putting (2) closer to the previous object, something like x:388, already makes it a bit easier and comfortable to play.
00:18:089 (5) - Similar to what was suggested previously, I'd put this on x:256 or so to make it clearly walkable and not so tight.
00:19:467 (2) - Similar to what was suggested previously, I'd put this closer because of the "brake" effect after the HDash.
00:20:844 (1,2) - This dash between this doesn't fit at all IMO. The drum beat isn't that strong, and direct comparison with a similar vocal at 00:18:395 (1) - makes this feel odd. I'd just go for a similar timeline like you used in that previous part.
00:21:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is way too dash heavy. I would, at least, reduce the strenght of the dashes (or plainly make them walkable) after the HDashes.
00:23:906 (3) - I'd incline this slider (around 45°, going to the left) to make the distance to the next object walkable, which creates a nice emphasis for the drum at 00:24:365 - .
00:26:355 (3,1,2) - I'd try to do something similar here, making the first distance walkable. One option would be to move (3) a bit to the left, something like x:316 should work.
00:26:814 (2,3,4) - Maybe you could make the HDash between (3,4) instead? I think that type of emphasis works fine on this kind of drum doublets.
00:28:804 (3,1,2) - Similar to what has been suggested previously, I'd make the first distance walkable, emphasizing only the second drum beat.
00:30:640 (1,2) - Again, this feels odd because of what you did with the previous similar vocal.
00:31:253 (3,1,2) - Similar to 00:28:804 (3,1,2) -
00:31:712 (2,3,4) - ^Similar stuff
00:32:936 (7,1) - Could be better emphasized with a HDash because of the section change.
00:33:701 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I would make the distances a bit smaller to make it clearer that they are walkable. Additionally, I'd also make 00:35:538 (1) - larger to properly emphasize the downbeat with a stronger dash.
00:36:150 (2,3,1,2,3) - Similar stuff here.
00:36:763 (1,2,3,4) - Really weird patterning here. If you're following the drums, (4) isn't necessary and you should delete it, not to mention that the current (3,4) distance is barely walkable when there's nothing important there (just an extended vocal kind of ending), so it shouldn't deserve a circle on its own. If you intend to follow vocals, I think the following timeline does it better:
00:39:212 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I'd make the distances clearer here by reducing those that are meant to be walked.
00:42:732 (4,1) - Could have a larger distance to emphasize the downbeat.
00:43:804 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Similar to what was suggested for 00:39:212 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) -, make the walkable distances clearer.
00:46:559 (1,2,3,4) - Similar to what was mentioned for 00:36:763 (1,2,3,4) -
00:48:701 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, make the distances intended to be walked clearer by reducing the spacing a bit.
00:53:140 (2,3) - I think you can reduce this distance a bit to better emphasize the next dash. Moving 00:53:599 (3,4,5) - to x:424 does it, and it makes the 00:54:212 (5,6) - a bit more comfortable.
00:55:589 (2,3) - ^A similar thing could be done here, and on 00:58:038 (2,3,4,5) -, 01:02:936 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:05:385 (2,3,4,5) - too
01:00:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the vocals at the 1/2 ticks are way to strong to be ignored, particularly on the 01:00:487 (2) - repeat. I'd go for the following timeline:
01:12:885 (3,4) - I'd reduce this distance a bit. While it has the same distance at the 01:12:273 (1,2) - pair, it's significantly harder because there's an antiflow dash after the HDash, as opposed to the first pattern.
01:14:110 (2,3) - This sounds way better as a 1/2 repeat slider, with a single repeat. The blue tick at 01:14:569 - feels overmapped.
01:15:640 (4,1,2) - The shift to the drums threw me off constantly, as you mapped a similar part (01:12:885 (3,4,1) - ) completely different. I'd use the same pattern as 01:12:885 (3,4,1) - here.
01:19:620 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Again, I'd emphasize on the strong vocals at the 1/2 ticks.
01:22:069 (1,2) - This movement is really uncomfortable after the HDash. Maybe I'd make (1) go left and use a similar pattern to 01:12:273 (1,2) - .
01:22:987 (4,5) - I'd go for a single 1/2 slider, to keep the patterning you've been using throughout the Kiai.
01:23:906 (2,3) - Again, a single 1/2 repeat slider feels better here.
01:25:436 (4,1,2) - Same as in 01:15:640 (4,1,2) -
01:29:416 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I think the vocals are comparatively strong here, so I'd focus on them instead of the drums. For that, I'd make 01:29:416 (1,2) - a single slider and change the timeline on 01:30:334 (5,1,2) - as suggested previously.
01:39:212 (1,2) - I think this is better as a single slider. The following placement plays really nice:
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The same stuff I've mentioned (making walkable distances clearer, reducing antiflow movement after HDashes a bit) applies on the ending section starting from 01:41:661 - . However, I particularly want to point out 01:47:019 (2,3) - because it's 3 gridspaces from becoming an HDash, and it's really uncomfortable and hard to catch.

I'm not sure this will be ready even after my mod, so I can't guarantee anything, though I will check it again and, worst case, ask Benny to get some additional mods.

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2017-04-08T22:34:11+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
BN Check requested by Benny-

00:02:630 (1,2,3) - I'd reduce the distance between this notes. By direct comparison with the previous distances, it may trigger some players to dash, which creates a dashing pattern that's a bit awkward IMO. I'd say using the usual x3,20 distance fits nicely here. Also applies for the remaining similar patterns.
00:14:569 (2) - I'd put this a bit closer to the previous object. Since there's a "brake" effect after landing the previous HDash, getting to this note feels a bit uncomfortable. Something like x:64 or 68 feels nicer.
00:15:334 (4,5,6) - These distances feel really tight. I'd put (5) on x:196 so both distances are clearly walkable.
00:16:865 (1,2) - This movement feels a bit harsh for this section; I think putting (2) closer to the previous object, something like x:388, already makes it a bit easier and comfortable to play.
00:18:089 (5) - Similar to what was suggested previously, I'd put this on x:256 or so to make it clearly walkable and not so tight.
00:19:467 (2) - Similar to what was suggested previously, I'd put this closer because of the "brake" effect after the HDash.
00:20:844 (1,2) - This dash between this doesn't fit at all IMO. The drum beat isn't that strong, and direct comparison with a similar vocal at 00:18:395 (1) - makes this feel odd. I'd just go for a similar timeline like you used in that previous part. - That ignores the drum at 00:20:997 - so leaving it unmapped feels really awkward to me. Rearranged it a bit so it's easier to play though.
00:21:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is way too dash heavy. I would, at least, reduce the strenght of the dashes (or plainly make them walkable) after the HDashes. - Reduced the first two dashes, however, I feel the beat is strong enough on 00:22:681 (5,6,7) - to keep them as they are.
00:23:906 (3) - I'd incline this slider (around 45°, going to the left) to make the distance to the next object walkable, which creates a nice emphasis for the drum at 00:24:365 - .
00:26:355 (3,1,2) - I'd try to do something similar here, making the first distance walkable. One option would be to move (3) a bit to the left, something like x:316 should work.
00:26:814 (2,3,4) - Maybe you could make the HDash between (3,4) instead? I think that type of emphasis works fine on this kind of drum doublets. - That doesn't work at all for me,
I'm mostly keeping hyperdashes on the snares so suddenly changing where I put hyperdashes makes no sense to me.
00:28:804 (3,1,2) - Similar to what has been suggested previously, I'd make the first distance walkable, emphasizing only the second drum beat.
00:30:640 (1,2) - Again, this feels odd because of what you did with the previous similar vocal.
00:31:253 (3,1,2) - Similar to 00:28:804 (3,1,2) -
00:31:712 (2,3,4) - ^Similar stuff
00:32:936 (7,1) - Could be better emphasized with a HDash because of the section change.
00:33:701 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I would make the distances a bit smaller to make it clearer that they are walkable. Additionally, I'd also make 00:35:538 (1) - larger to properly emphasize the downbeat with a stronger dash.
00:36:150 (2,3,1,2,3) - Similar stuff here.
00:36:763 (1,2,3,4) - Really weird patterning here. If you're following the drums, (4) isn't necessary and you should delete it, not to mention that the current (3,4) distance is barely walkable when there's nothing important there (just an extended vocal kind of ending), so it shouldn't deserve a circle on its own. If you intend to follow vocals, I think the following timeline does it better: - I do get what you mean but personally I'm not a very big fan of repeat sliders, at least not how you suggest it where stronger beats like 00:37:069 - and 00:37:375 - remain as slider ends. I tried adjusting the timeline a bit though so I hope it's better now.
00:39:212 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I'd make the distances clearer here by reducing those that are meant to be walked.
00:42:732 (4,1) - Could have a larger distance to emphasize the downbeat.
00:43:804 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Similar to what was suggested for 00:39:212 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) -, make the walkable distances clearer.
00:46:559 (1,2,3,4) - Similar to what was mentioned for 00:36:763 (1,2,3,4) -
00:48:701 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, make the distances intended to be walked clearer by reducing the spacing a bit.
00:53:140 (2,3) - I think you can reduce this distance a bit to better emphasize the next dash. Moving 00:53:599 (3,4,5) - to x:424 does it, and it makes the 00:54:212 (5,6) - a bit more comfortable.
00:55:589 (2,3) - ^A similar thing could be done here, and on 00:58:038 (2,3,4,5) -, 01:02:936 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:05:385 (2,3,4,5) - too
01:00:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the vocals at the 1/2 ticks are way to strong to be ignored, particularly on the 01:00:487 (2) - repeat. I'd go for the following timeline: - eeeee don't do this to me I can't suddenly change rhythm usage it's against my belief and everything I stand for let me be please. kidding. I rearranged the jumps to fit the vocal instead of drums, hope it's better.
01:12:885 (3,4) - I'd reduce this distance a bit. While it has the same distance at the 01:12:273 (1,2) - pair, it's significantly harder because there's an antiflow dash after the HDash, as opposed to the first pattern.
01:14:110 (2,3) - This sounds way better as a 1/2 repeat slider, with a single repeat. The blue tick at 01:14:569 - feels overmapped.
01:15:640 (4,1,2) - The shift to the drums threw me off constantly, as you mapped a similar part (01:12:885 (3,4,1) - ) completely different. I'd use the same pattern as 01:12:885 (3,4,1) - here. - But the snares is placed accordingly to the song and I've been putting hypers on snares? Doesn't make sense to me to suddenly change that, even if you find it tricky, it's what follows the song best.
01:19:620 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Again, I'd emphasize on the strong vocals at the 1/2 ticks.
01:22:069 (1,2) - This movement is really uncomfortable after the HDash. Maybe I'd make (1) go left and use a similar pattern to 01:12:273 (1,2) - .
01:22:987 (4,5) - I'd go for a single 1/2 slider, to keep the patterning you've been using throughout the Kiai. - I've always mapped these drums, even outside of the kiai?
01:23:906 (2,3) - Again, a single 1/2 repeat slider feels better here.
01:25:436 (4,1,2) - Same as in 01:15:640 (4,1,2) -
01:29:416 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I think the vocals are comparatively strong here, so I'd focus on them instead of the drums. For that, I'd make 01:29:416 (1,2) - a single slider and change the timeline on 01:30:334 (5,1,2) - as suggested previously. - I disagree on you with this, yes the vocals are strong but that doesn't mean the drums shouldn't be emphasised as they are just as strong as previously. I think it plays fine as it is
01:39:212 (1,2) - I think this is better as a single slider. The following placement plays really nice: - Keeping the timeline but reduced the distance.
SPOILER
The same stuff I've mentioned (making walkable distances clearer, reducing antiflow movement after HDashes a bit) applies on the ending section starting from 01:41:661 - . However, I particularly want to point out 01:47:019 (2,3) - because it's 3 gridspaces from becoming an HDash, and it's really uncomfortable and hard to catch. - lmao that was supposed to be a hyper, anyway, fixed up the ending as well.
I'm not sure this will be ready even after my mod, so I can't guarantee anything, though I will check it again and, worst case, ask Benny to get some additional mods.

Your mod is seriously fucking up with my ocd and I feel so conflicted right now you have no idea but i tried ok, I tried. end me

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368,316,102580,5,0,1:2:0:0:
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Nokashi

304 posts

Joined December 2014

Nokashi 2017-04-23T16:29:41+00:00

Hello There!
Check on CTB diff requested by Benny~

[

Benny's Rain]

00:01:253 (1,2) - Personally i really liked how you started off this pattern that expresses the piano here, it would be way nicer to introduce a similar entry point to the following patterns here 00:03:701 (1,2) - , 00:06:150 (1,2) - and 00:08:599 (1,2) - instead of the one you have now. I Feel like the pattern will benefit, as the catcher will enter the pattern in a more fluid way
00:05:538 (2) - Ctrlg here to be consistent the other similar patterns like here for example 00:03:089 (2,3) -
00:14:416 (1,2) - There are really strong and equal kicks on these 2 ticks and the fact that they are walkable kinda throws me off. And the entry point to the HDash being on a faint beat doesnt help either. Try placing 00:14:416 (1) - on x:336 so the HDash in between these 00:14:416 (1,2) - . I Think its more fitting. Similar point here 00:19:008 (3,1,2) - by placing 00:19:314 (1) - somewhere on x:320 or something ( or you can make 00:19:008 (3,1) - a 1/2 reverse). Similar point here 01:42:274 (3,1,2) - as well
00:16:865 (1,2) - Also this should have been the HDash here, to be consistent with your HDash structure
00:24:212 (1,2) - HDash here?
00:26:661 (1,2) - Also pretty underwhelming. Generally your HDash placements are bit wonky and they arent on strong kicks or snares like this one. I Would place an HDash here
00:37:069 (2,3) - Inconsistent and unjustifiable HDash here, a normal dash like here 00:34:620 (2,3) - would have been enough
To be consistent with the previous dash on the higher vocal here 00:39:518 (2,3) -, 00:40:283 (5,1) - these should be normal dashes instead of walks
00:45:946 (2) - This 1/1 spacing is really sudden and inconsistent with 00:43:497 (2) - . I would suggesting reducing spacing here
00:52:681 - 01:12:273 - : My main issue with this section is that there are zero hypers, thats less than the slower section before so it feels really inconsistent to me tbh. You could for some hyperdashes here to better build up the intensity up until the kiai
01:13:191 (4,1) - Hdash here?
01:19:620 (1,2,3) - You mainly go for vocal expression in your patterns. Here there is a held vocal and the fact that you placed 3 dashes in a row doesnt really go well with how you played with vocals. I would go for something more lenient
01:21:457 (3,4) - Nerf it a slight bit, feels a bit edge dashy considering past normal dashes
01:22:069 (1) - A more horizontal rotation would have worked better here for the movement retention
01:25:742 (1,2) - Again i feel there is a bit of an excess movement here cause of the vocal hold
01:32:477 (2,3) - Hdash here?
01:47:019 (2,3,1) - in my opinion antiflow is a bit unfitting here, especially when antiflow hyperdashing wasnt a big thing in you kiai as well
01:51:304 (7,1) - You have to go out with a bang!! increase spacing so its at least a normal dash

I Really like what you did here, you HDdash structure is a bit wonky at times but it really doesnt overshadow the quality of this beatmap for me
Good Luck~

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2017-04-24T17:15:49+00:00

Nokashi wrote:
Hello There!
Check on CTB diff requested by Benny~

[ Benny's Rain]
00:01:253 (1,2) - Personally i really liked how you started off this pattern that expresses the piano here, it would be way nicer to introduce a similar entry point to the following patterns here 00:03:701 (1,2) - , 00:06:150 (1,2) - and 00:08:599 (1,2) - instead of the one you have now. I Feel like the pattern will benefit, as the catcher will enter the pattern in a more fluid way - Yes sure,
I can do that.. But then all patterns will be the same, and that's no fun ):
00:05:538 (2) - Ctrlg here to be consistent the other similar patterns like here for example 00:03:089 (2,3) - - But it is like this for variation, also, the pattern is similar to 00:10:436 (2,3) -
00:14:416 (1,2) - There are really strong and equal kicks on these 2 ticks and the fact that they are walkable kinda throws me off. And the entry point to the HDash being on a faint beat doesnt help either. Try placing 00:14:416 (1) - on x:336 so the HDash in between these 00:14:416 (1,2) - . I Think its more fitting. Similar point here 00:19:008 (3,1,2) - by placing 00:19:314 (1) - somewhere on x:320 or something ( or you can make 00:19:008 (3,1) - a 1/2 reverse). Similar point here 01:42:274 (3,1,2) - as well - I have to disagree on this too, yes they are equal but there is melody on 00:14:416 (1) - so that's why the hyperdash is placed the way it is. Moving the hyperdash to the blue tick makes little sense to me when the melody is on the red tick.
00:16:865 (1,2) - Also this should have been the HDash here, to be consistent with your HDash structure - I have never placed a hyperdash between these two beats before, the melody is still on the red tick so moving the hyperdash doesn't make sense to me.
00:24:212 (1,2) - HDash here? - Same as stated above.
00:26:661 (1,2) - Also pretty underwhelming. Generally your HDash placements are bit wonky and they arent on strong kicks or snares like this one. I Would place an HDash here - I still feel the red tick is stronger than the blue tick :s
00:37:069 (2,3) - Inconsistent and unjustifiable HDash here, a normal dash like here 00:34:620 (2,3) - would have been enough - but the beat here 00:37:375 - is stronger than 00:34:926 - and I chose to emphasise that with a hyperdash. So it's not inconsistent imo
To be consistent with the previous dash on the higher vocal here 00:39:518 (2,3) -, 00:40:283 (5,1) - these should be normal dashes instead of walks - I don't quite understand what you mean here
00:45:946 (2) - This 1/1 spacing is really sudden and inconsistent with 00:43:497 (2) - . I would suggesting reducing spacing here - Fixed
00:52:681 - 01:12:273 - : My main issue with this section is that there are zero hypers, thats less than the slower section before so it feels really inconsistent to me tbh. You could for some hyperdashes here to better build up the intensity up until the kiai - Like where? If you notice all the strong beats there are 1/2 distance from the previous note and then the hypers would be from one side to the other but if you have suggestions go ahead.
01:13:191 (4,1) - Hdash here? - I don't think this is strong enough for a hyperdash, the pitch is lowering
01:19:620 (1,2,3) - You mainly go for vocal expression in your patterns. Here there is a held vocal and the fact that you placed 3 dashes in a row doesnt really go well with how you played with vocals. I would go for something more lenient - made 3 into a slider, hope it's better now
01:21:457 (3,4) - Nerf it a slight bit, feels a bit edge dashy considering past normal dashes - I would say it's the distance between 01:21:763 (4,5) - that's too big and not 3,4 xd so yeah, nerfed that distance instead
01:22:069 (1) - A more horizontal rotation would have worked better here for the movement retention - Okay, fixed
01:25:742 (1,2) - Again i feel there is a bit of an excess movement here cause of the vocal hold - I think this one is fine as it is, can't really come up with any solution either lol
01:32:477 (2,3) - Hdash here? - I'm keeping the hypers on the snares 01:32:477 - 01:33:701 - etc :s
01:47:019 (2,3,1) - in my opinion antiflow is a bit unfitting here, especially when antiflow hyperdashing wasnt a big thing in you kiai as well - Fixed
01:51:304 (7,1) - You have to go out with a bang!! increase spacing so its at least a normal dash - This isn't a strong beat at all so that's why I don't feel like it needs a big bang!!! :s

I Really like what you did here, you HDdash structure is a bit wonky at times but it really doesnt overshadow the quality of this beatmap for me
Good Luck~

I don't feel like you understood the way I placed the hyperdashes, imo it's not wonky at all but very consistent! Either way, thanks for the mod!

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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-04-26T15:20:27+00:00

catch mod as requested

rip pc rip formatting so enjoy this basic shit i guess

Rain:

00:02:171 (3,1) - Even though these can be caught by stacking, there's a temptation to wiggle them which is excessive for the start of the song. I'd either remove the antiflow (linear triplet maybe?), reduce the spacing so they're comfortably walkable, or make them completely vertical. Same applies to similar like 00:03:701 (1,2) -
00:05:538 (2,3) - Would reduce this spacing a little, the music is still very calm here despite being the end of the stanza. Same applies to 00:10:436 (2,3) -
00:06:150 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Very centred on the right hand side, so not providing as much variety as I'd like. Perhaps you could Ctrl+H 00:07:529 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - or something to give a bit more movement
00:16:865 (1,2) - Considering the hyper strength, this is a bit high for a walkable spacing. Moving (1) left slightly solves both issues at the same time. This can be seen in other places like 00:22:222 (3,4) - so be sure to apply any changes there too
00:23:140 (7,1) - Antiflow feels very forced here, the music is soft rather than sharp, and a natural flow would feel better moving into the next stanza. Try facing (1) left instead
00:28:191 (1,2) - Stack feels a bit flow-breaky, since I have to wait for quite a while to move right again at this BPM. Try moving (2) right a little for better flow off the slider
00:29:110 (1,2) - Find myself overshooting this a lot considering the piano strength, maybe try (2,3) on x-112 or so
00:30:793 (2,3) - Awkward and kinda unexpectedly strong hyper after the previous antiflow curve, if you could reduce the strength here a bit it'd play much more smoothly
00:32:936 (7,1) - Same as 00:23:140 (7,1) -, this feels so much better without the antiflow considering you're going into a very calm section
00:38:599 (2,3) - Unexpected dash, compare this to 00:37:987 (1,2) - and the two sound nowhere near the same. I'd reduce this so it's walkable
00:39:212 (1) - 00:40:436 (1) - Increase SV for a better curve, the droplet formation on these is kinda ugly rn since the BPM is so low, they are basically played as vertical sliders instead
00:41:508 (3,1) - Was expecting more of a dash here for the vocal to be consistent with 00:40:283 (3,1) - etc.
00:44:110 (1) - Awkward tap walk due to the half angle on this slider, vocal here really could be more emphasized don't you think? Making it horizontal plays better
00:51:304 (4,5) - Deserves a hyper for consistency with vocal on 00:50:079 (3,1) - imo
00:56:048 (3,4) - More spacing here to emphasize vocal please, kinda weak dash atm
00:59:722 (7,1) - 01:01:865 (7,1) - These could really do with being hypers due to the strong vocal, feel very under-emphasized atm
01:11:355 (2,3) - Feels like this jump could be a bit bigger for better flow, I find myself having to pause a little here and it breaks flow somewhat
01:19:620 (1,2) - Too large for walkable spacing after hyper as mentioned before, drop this a little please
01:22:069 (1,2) - A little tricky to walk after the hyper, try reducing this just a little
01:27:579 (3,4) - Unexpected dash considering the pitch reduction, try moving 01:27:885 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - right slightly so this isn't as jarring
01:29:569 (2,5) - Reduce the distances to and from these circles, the music really calls for a walk here but these are annoyingly high atm, dashing everything feels very overdone
01:38:599 (7,1) - Bit of a flowstop, you could buff this distance a little I think
01:51:150 (6,7,1) - (1) is pretty strong with the cymbal, a more fitting end would be reduce (6,7) and dash/hyper to (1) imo

Hope this helps, god luck! (:

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2017-04-27T22:53:24+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
catch mod as requested

rip pc rip formatting so enjoy this basic shit i guess

Rain:
00:02:171 (3,1) - Even though these can be caught by stacking, there's a temptation to wiggle them which is excessive for the start of the song. I'd either remove the antiflow (linear triplet maybe?), reduce the spacing so they're comfortably walkable, or make them completely vertical. Same applies to similar like 00:03:701 (1,2) -
00:05:538 (2,3) - Would reduce this spacing a little, the music is still very calm here despite being the end of the stanza. Same applies to 00:10:436 (2,3) -
00:06:150 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Very centred on the right hand side, so not providing as much variety as I'd like. Perhaps you could Ctrl+H 00:07:529 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - or something to give a bit more movement
00:16:865 (1,2) - Considering the hyper strength, this is a bit high for a walkable spacing. Moving (1) left slightly solves both issues at the same time. This can be seen in other places like 00:22:222 (3,4) - so be sure to apply any changes there too
00:23:140 (7,1) - Antiflow feels very forced here, the music is soft rather than sharp, and a natural flow would feel better moving into the next stanza. Try facing (1) left instead
00:28:191 (1,2) - Stack feels a bit flow-breaky, since I have to wait for quite a while to move right again at this BPM. Try moving (2) right a little for better flow off the slider
00:29:110 (1,2) - Find myself overshooting this a lot considering the piano strength, maybe try (2,3) on x-112 or so
00:30:793 (2,3) - Awkward and kinda unexpectedly strong hyper after the previous antiflow curve, if you could reduce the strength here a bit it'd play much more smoothly
00:32:936 (7,1) - Same as 00:23:140 (7,1) -, this feels so much better without the antiflow considering you're going into a very calm section
00:38:599 (2,3) - Unexpected dash, compare this to 00:37:987 (1,2) - and the two sound nowhere near the same. I'd reduce this so it's walkable
00:39:212 (1) - 00:40:436 (1) - Increase SV for a better curve, the droplet formation on these is kinda ugly rn since the BPM is so low, they are basically played as vertical sliders instead
00:41:508 (3,1) - Was expecting more of a dash here for the vocal to be consistent with 00:40:283 (3,1) - etc.
00:44:110 (1) - Awkward tap walk due to the half angle on this slider, vocal here really could be more emphasized don't you think? Making it horizontal plays better
00:51:304 (4,5) - Deserves a hyper for consistency with vocal on 00:50:079 (3,1) - imo
00:56:048 (3,4) - More spacing here to emphasize vocal please, kinda weak dash atm
00:59:722 (7,1) - 01:01:865 (7,1) - These could really do with being hypers due to the strong vocal, feel very under-emphasized atm
01:11:355 (2,3) - Feels like this jump could be a bit bigger for better flow, I find myself having to pause a little here and it breaks flow somewhat
01:19:620 (1,2) - Too large for walkable spacing after hyper as mentioned before, drop this a little please
01:22:069 (1,2) - A little tricky to walk after the hyper, try reducing this just a little
01:27:579 (3,4) - Unexpected dash considering the pitch reduction, try moving 01:27:885 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - right slightly so this isn't as jarring
01:29:569 (2,5) - Reduce the distances to and from these circles, the music really calls for a walk here but these are annoyingly high atm, dashing everything feels very overdone
01:38:599 (7,1) - Bit of a flowstop, you could buff this distance a little I think
01:51:150 (6,7,1) - (1) is pretty strong with the cymbal, a more fitting end would be reduce (6,7) and dash/hyper to (1) imo
Hope this helps, god luck! (:

Fixed all, thanks a lot!

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