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hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: PASS
  1. Not needed.

BPM & Offset: MISS
  1. I tried 997 offset.

Diff.Spread: MISS
  1. I remember that the Lowest difficulty of the spread needs to have less than 2.00 Star Rating. NM currently has 2.04. Try to fix it.

Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: MISS
  1. Why NM has the same values than HD?
    1. NM: OD=8 -> OD=7 | HP=8 -> HP=7

Hitsound: PASS
Hitsound Volume: MISS
  1. NM Has 50% Volume, HD Has 20%. Is a bit inconsistent... (NM sounds good)

Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: PASS
Widescreen Support: MISS
  1. Uncheck Widescreen Support on NM.

Preview Point: PASS
AiMod Things: PASS
[NM]
00:10:636 (10636|1,10821|2,11006|3,11192|1,11377|2,11562|3) - A bit repetitive...

00:27:673 (27673|1,27673|2,28229|2,28229|3) - I suggest you to use only one note on the kicks (All the song to be honest) like these. Claps sounds = 2.

00:30:266 (30266|3,30266|1,30266|2) - I don't know if 3 notes is good in a NM, Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7055406

00:36:192 (36192|0,36192|1,36192|2) - ^

00:42:118 (42118|0,42118|1,42118|2) - ^

00:48:044 (48044|3,48044|2,48044|1) - ^

00:51:006 (51006|3,51006|2,51006|1) - ^

From 00:51:377 to 01:00:266 - Only one note for claps, so good!

00:51:377 (51377|1) - Move to |2|.

01:03:229 to 01:28:414 - I think is a bit overmapped, the sounds here are mostly Hats and Kicks. You can do 2 things imo here:
1. Erase the hats so you follow the rhythm with the kicks only. Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7055514
2. Erase the extra note on kicks, and rearrange better by pitch. Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7055570 (in this Screenshot i highlight the kicks.)
3. Something else . . .

01:29:247 (89247|2) - This should end on 01:29:895.

[HD]
00:25:451 (25451|0,25636|3,26006|2) - For the way that you mapping, these sounds should be DoubleNotes too...

00:45:081 (45081|3,45266|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7055649

00:49:710 (49710|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7055674

From 01:03:229 to 01:28:414 - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7055975

01:29:247 (89247|3,89247|0) - Should end on 01:29:895.


That's all.

Good luck!
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hi~

the truth...
It's very monotonous your map
I leave you suggestions ...
Take them or leave them is up to you

Columns 4K - 1|2|3|4

00:01:192 - Add note column 4
00:01:562 - add note column 3
00:01:932 - add note column 1
00:02:118 (2118|0) - move note to column 4
00:02:303 - add note column 1
Must be something like this ...


00:02:673 - move note to column 2
00:02:858 - add note column 1
00:03:044 - add note column 3

Do you understand the idea?

My suggestion is ...
Do not just take the base of the song to map
Uses effects, voice, sounds in general .... to map
Just use the voice of the song in this case to fill those spaces and make the map more fun

(Is a suggestion, if you do not want to do it do not do it: 3 no problem)


ok... good luck
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m4m time~ |1|2|3|4|

NM
  1. 00:55:451 (55451|2) - move this to col [4] and move this 00:55:821 (55821|3) - to col [1], then move this 00:56:192 (56192|0) - to col [4] cuz accroding to here 00:53:969 (53969|2,54340|1) - you did not make double-hit so it's better not do it there
  2. 01:01:747 - to 01:02:488 - ctrl+h, cuz you'll find 01:01:377 (61377|2,61562|2,61747|3,61840|2) - these all left hand, not balanced feeling with hand in NM
  3. 01:28:969 (88969|1,89247|2) - what's these LNs means? "Ever"? if it's vocal "ever" maybe it''s wrong position, maybe 01:29:062 - and 01:29:294 -
HD
  1. 00:33:414 (33414|1) - you can make it to LN
  2. 00:35:636 (35636|0) - change a col, cuz col 1 is too many notes from 00:35:081 - to 00:35:636 (35636|0) -
  3. 01:28:969 - same with NM

I think your map is great and it's rankable
but you should adda a diff or two, just 2 is not enough and I think maybe you can make a harder diff cuz I find there are many FX sounds or music sounds that you didn't catch, you can map them make more hard~
GOOD LUCK
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hihihi

col = 1~4

NM

00:01:192 (1192|2,1377|0) - make this stair? (2-3)
00:32:118 (32118|2) - move to 2?
00:38:044 (38044|2) - move to 2?
00:43:969 (43969|2) - move to 2?
00:49:895 (49895|1) - movet o1?
00:55:821 (55821|3) - move to 1 -> 00:56:192 (56192|0) - move to 4?

HD

00:06:747 (6747|2,6932|1,7118|2) - ctrl+h?
I see don't map the "tick tick" sound ..
and the reff is the same all over.. considering changing pattern some way?

good luck!~
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I can't check the mods for now because the internet connection in my house is disconnected and i think i can check this if the internet connection is back.

Add Standard diff soon :)
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good luck!
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Hi~Shiro-neechan
1|2|3|4|
00:16:377 (16377|0,16562|3,16747|0) - ^
00:27:673 (27673|1,27673|2) - remove (1,2)
00:36:192 (36192|0,36192|1,36192|2) - 00:42:118 (42118|0,42118|1,42118|2) - 00:48:044 (48044|3,48044|2,48044|1) - 00:51:006 (51006|2,51006|3,51006|1) - 3note? same bass
01:00:636 (60636|0,60821|0,61006|1,61192|1,61377|2,61562|2) - remove (3,3,2,2,1,1)
01:28:414 (88414|3,88414|0,88969|1,89247|2) - ^
00:27:303 - 00:50:883 - what?
01:03:229 (63229|3,63229|0,63229|2) - Ctrl+H
01:28:414 (88414|2,88414|1,88414|0,88414|3,88969|2,88969|1,89247|3,89247|0) - ^

Good luck! :)
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