From 00:51:377 to 01:00:266 - Only one note for claps, so good!
00:51:377 (51377|1) - Move to |2|.
01:03:229 to 01:28:414 - I think is a bit overmapped, the sounds here are mostly Hats and Kicks. You can do 2 things imo here: 1. Erase the hats so you follow the rhythm with the kicks only. Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7055514 2. Erase the extra note on kicks, and rearrange better by pitch. Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7055570 (in this Screenshot i highlight the kicks.) 3. Something else . . .
01:29:247 (89247|2) - This should end on 01:29:895.
00:25:451 (25451|0,25636|3,26006|2) - For the way that you mapping, these sounds should be DoubleNotes too...
My suggestion is ... Do not just take the base of the song to map Uses effects, voice, sounds in general .... to map Just use the voice of the song in this case to fill those spaces and make the map more fun
(Is a suggestion, if you do not want to do it do not do it: 3 no problem)
00:55:451 (55451|2) - move this to col  and move this 00:55:821 (55821|3) - to col , then move this 00:56:192 (56192|0) - to col  cuz accroding to here 00:53:969 (53969|2,54340|1) - you did not make double-hit so it's better not do it there
01:01:747 - to 01:02:488 - ctrl+h, cuz you'll find 01:01:377 (61377|2,61562|2,61747|3,61840|2) - these all left hand, not balanced feeling with hand in NM
01:28:969 (88969|1,89247|2) - what's these LNs means? "Ever"? if it's vocal "ever" maybe it''s wrong position, maybe 01:29:062 - and 01:29:294 -
00:33:414 (33414|1) - you can make it to LN
00:35:636 (35636|0) - change a col, cuz col 1 is too many notes from 00:35:081 - to 00:35:636 (35636|0) -
01:28:969 - same with NM
I think your map is great and it's rankable but you should adda a diff or two, just 2 is not enough and I think maybe you can make a harder diff cuz I find there are many FX sounds or music sounds that you didn't catch, you can map them make more hard~ GOOD LUCK