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Don't feel like you have to apply everything i said, I just give you some ideas to improve your map. :3 (It would be better with more sv)
O.O = weird
Inner Oni
00:04:967 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - I think this follow the rythm better :
This moment seems too empty :
00:07:149 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - kdddkdddk ?
or if it's too much :
00:06:876 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) -
00:08:922 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - it could be funnier with a lot of sv
00:18:876 (143,144,145,146,147) - this part seems weird, maybe kddkd ?
00:23:240 (190,191,192,193,194) - same ^
00:24:672 (207) - don?
00:30:126 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272) - seems weird too :
00:32:104 (285) - don?
00:34:422 (312,314) - don?
00:42:058 (342,343) - d k?
00:42:876 remove the kat?
00:49:285 (395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,1,2,3) - i think ddddkkkkddddk follows better the music, tt's worth for v too
00:58:422 (493,494,495,496,497,498,499) - or you can dddkkkk it's worth for ^ too
01:07:149 (568,569) - d k, because the next circle is k too, 01:07:285 (569) - and 01:07:558 (570) - are the same sound
01:12:467 (601,602,603,604,605,606,607) - and 01:16:558 (629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636) - I would have mapped those parts (same for the oni)
01:22:558 (671,672,673,674,675,676,677) -
01:27:467 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - it's hard but I find this better xD
There are moments with a lot of big don, you should change some to kat. (same for the oni)
This moment seems too empty :
00:07:149 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - kdddkdddk ?
or if it's too much :
00:06:876 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) -
00:08:922 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - it could be funnier with a lot of sv
00:18:876 (143,144,145,146,147) - this part seems weird, maybe kddkd ?
00:23:240 (190,191,192,193,194) - same ^
00:24:672 (207) - don?
00:30:126 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272) - seems weird too :
00:32:104 (285) - don?
00:34:422 (312,314) - don?
00:42:058 (342,343) - d k?
00:42:876 remove the kat?
00:49:285 (395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,1,2,3) - i think ddddkkkkddddk follows better the music, tt's worth for v too
00:58:422 (493,494,495,496,497,498,499) - or you can dddkkkk it's worth for ^ too
01:07:149 (568,569) - d k, because the next circle is k too, 01:07:285 (569) - and 01:07:558 (570) - are the same sound
01:12:467 (601,602,603,604,605,606,607) - and 01:16:558 (629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636) - I would have mapped those parts (same for the oni)
01:22:558 (671,672,673,674,675,676,677) -
01:27:467 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - it's hard but I find this better xD
There are moments with a lot of big don, you should change some to kat. (same for the oni)
Oni
00:29:649 (223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231) - O.O
in this part, it's better to put kat when the sound is acute
00:40:558 (280) - kat
00:41:104 (282) - kat
00:40:831 (281) - don
I'll let you do the rest until 00:43:831 (293) -
00:45:467 (294,295) - change a kat to a don?
00:50:785 (335) - kat?
01:07:149 (456,457,458) - d k k
01:15:467 (503,504,505,506,507,508) - O.O :
01:23:104 (548) - k
01:22:626 (544) - add d?
01:36:195 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - change some don to kat
01:42:740 (143) - kat
the doublet in kiai, as in the inner oni are a bit O.O
in this part, it's better to put kat when the sound is acute
00:40:558 (280) - kat
00:41:104 (282) - kat
00:40:831 (281) - don
I'll let you do the rest until 00:43:831 (293) -
00:45:467 (294,295) - change a kat to a don?
00:50:785 (335) - kat?
01:07:149 (456,457,458) - d k k
01:15:467 (503,504,505,506,507,508) - O.O :
01:23:104 (548) - k
01:22:626 (544) - add d?
01:36:195 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - change some don to kat
01:42:740 (143) - kat
the doublet in kiai, as in the inner oni are a bit O.O
Don't feel like you have to apply everything i said, I just give you some ideas to improve your map. :3 (It would be better with more sv)
O.O = weird