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katacheh
Hi~ NM Explosion!
mod
Inner oni :

  • 00:27:808 (227,228) - change to kd

    00:30:126 - kdd dk change to like this?


    01:06:195 (549) - change to k? I heard high pitch and no drum sound

    01:10:558 (578) - ^

    01:44:649 (194,195,196) - change to kdk
Oni :

  • 00:27:808 (210,211) - kd

    00:49:558 (333,334,335,336,337,338) - k k d kdk to make diffierence than before
    00:58:285 (406,407,408,409,410,411) - ^
    01:28:831 (34,35,36,37,38,39) - ^
Good map!
Forgot to close the queue ...;w; didnt have much time. that's it:3
Topic Starter
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katacheh wrote:

Hi~ NM Explosion!
mod
Inner oni :

  • 00:27:808 (227,228) - change to kd

    00:30:126 - kdd dk change to like this? i prefer an easier pattern.


    01:06:195 (549) - change to k? I heard high pitch and no drum sound

    01:10:558 (578) - ^

    01:44:649 (194,195,196) - change to kdk i would like the last note is d because of the pitch
Oni :

  • 00:27:808 (210,211) - kd

    00:49:558 (333,334,335,336,337,338) - k k d kdk to make diffierence than before
    00:58:285 (406,407,408,409,410,411) - ^
    01:28:831 (34,35,36,37,38,39) - ^
Good map!
Forgot to close the queue ...;w; didnt have much time. that's it:3
All fixed except the reds.
Thanks for mod!
Diva Days


[Kantan and Futsuu]

Kantan don't need to be under 1 star, just be easiest Diff like other ranked maps.

u actually Too much skipped notes for SR, That's make Kantan boring and unplayable.

and Futsuu, as u did that on Kantan so do on Futsuu.

refer those ranked map for ur Kantan and Futsuu :
AAAA Chazuke - Hop Step Adventure*
t+pazolite - Candy Crack Curtain Call
Erik McClure - Lagomorphic

and on wiki : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Kantan / https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Futsuu

00:35:104 ~ 00:39:467 - better make here break time than ur note placing.

[Muzukashii]

00:00:604 (4),(5),(6) - starting part here, don't need to follow streams always.

here, some idea for starting part. The current one actually for Oni. :



soo much used 1/4 triples even for muzu, that's not recommend. also another problem is that 3.5 Stars is enough for Oni

[Oni]

the result of overuse i guess. the real 'Oni' Diffs should mapped like this in nowadays?
Topic Starter
D o t

Diva Days wrote:



[Kantan and Futsuu]

Kantan don't need to be under 1 star, just be easiest Diff like other ranked maps.

u actually Too much skipped notes for SR, That's make Kantan boring and unplayable.

and Futsuu, as u did that on Kantan so do on Futsuu.

refer those ranked map for ur Kantan and Futsuu :
AAAA Chazuke - Hop Step Adventure*
t+pazolite - Candy Crack Curtain Call
Erik McClure - Lagomorphic

and on wiki : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Kantan / https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Futsuu

00:35:104 ~ 00:39:467 - better make here break time than ur note placing.

[Muzukashii]

00:00:604 (4),(5),(6) - starting part here, don't need to follow streams always.

here, some idea for starting part. The current one actually for Oni. :



soo much used 1/4 triples even for muzu, that's not recommend. also another problem is that 3.5 Stars is enough for Oni

[Oni]

the result of overuse i guess. the real 'Oni' Diffs should mapped like this in nowadays?
Add some difficulty on K and F. Delete some notes on Oni. Because of the gaps between these diff i wont change M and O so much.
Thanks for mod!
Quizmaegi
Modding From My Queue.

Inner
  1. 00:04:149 ~ 00:04:149 - change to kdddk
  2. 00:19:695 (148,149,150) - change to ddk
  3. 00:19:967 (151,152,153,154) - change to kk kk
  4. 00:21:467 (168,169) - remove finish or remove finish at 169 only
  5. 00:23:240 ~ 00:23:513 - change to kdddk or kdkkd
  6. 00:29:922 ~ 00:30:467 - add d at 00:30:058 , and remove 00:30:126 and add d at 00:30:331
  7. 00:42:876 - change to d?
  8. 01:22:967 - add d
  9. 01:26:376 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - change to ddd kkdkd or ddddkkdkd
  10. 01:30:740 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - ^ (Same as above)
  11. 01:36:535 (120,121,122,123) - kdkd sounds better
  12. 01:36:876 (124,125,126,127,128,129) - change to kd kdkd

Looks like a Good map 'w'

Oni
  1. 00:01:013 - add d
  2. 00:01:149 - change to d
  3. 00:07:831 - k sounds better
  4. 01:04:695 - change to k
  5. 01:14:513 (493,494,495,496) - kd kd sounds better
  6. 01:22:967 - add k
  7. 01:48:331 (165,166) - these two notes are less than 10ms apart.
Topic Starter
D o t

Quizmaegi wrote:

Modding From My Queue.

Inner
  1. 00:04:149 ~ 00:04:149 - change to kdddk
  2. 00:19:695 (148,149,150) - change to ddk
  3. 00:19:967 (151,152,153,154) - change to kk kk
  4. 00:21:467 (168,169) - remove finish or remove finish at 169 only
  5. 00:23:240 ~ 00:23:513 - change to kdddk or kdkkd
  6. 00:29:922 ~ 00:30:467 - add d at 00:30:058 , and remove 00:30:126 and add d at 00:30:331
  7. 00:42:876 - change to d?
  8. 01:22:967 - add d
  9. 01:26:376 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - change to ddd kkdkd or ddddkkdkd
  10. 01:30:740 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - ^ (Same as above)
  11. 01:36:535 (120,121,122,123) - kdkd sounds better
  12. 01:36:876 (124,125,126,127,128,129) - change to kd kdkd

Looks like a Good map 'w'

Oni
  1. 00:01:013 - add d same as Inner.
  2. 00:01:149 - change to d ^
  3. 00:07:831 - k sounds better ^
  4. 01:04:695 - change to k changed 440 to k reason^
  5. 01:14:513 (493,494,495,496) - kd kd sounds better
  6. 01:22:967 - add k
  7. 01:48:331 (165,166) - these two notes are less than 10ms apart.
not big change. but thanks for mod!
Yona
From my modding queue
Inner Oni
00:04:967 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - I think this follow the rythm better :


This moment seems too empty :
00:07:149 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - kdddkdddk ?
or if it's too much :
00:06:876 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) -


00:08:922 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - it could be funnier with a lot of sv
00:18:876 (143,144,145,146,147) - this part seems weird, maybe kddkd ?
00:23:240 (190,191,192,193,194) - same ^
00:24:672 (207) - don?
00:30:126 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272) - seems weird too :

00:32:104 (285) - don?
00:34:422 (312,314) - don?
00:42:058 (342,343) - d k?
00:42:876 remove the kat?
00:49:285 (395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,1,2,3) - i think ddddkkkkddddk follows better the music, tt's worth for v too
00:58:422 (493,494,495,496,497,498,499) - or you can dddkkkk it's worth for ^ too
01:07:149 (568,569) - d k, because the next circle is k too, 01:07:285 (569) - and 01:07:558 (570) - are the same sound
01:12:467 (601,602,603,604,605,606,607) - and 01:16:558 (629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636) - I would have mapped those parts (same for the oni)
01:22:558 (671,672,673,674,675,676,677) -

01:27:467 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - it's hard but I find this better xD

There are moments with a lot of big don, you should change some to kat. (same for the oni)

Oni
00:29:649 (223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231) - O.O

in this part, it's better to put kat when the sound is acute
00:40:558 (280) - kat
00:41:104 (282) - kat
00:40:831 (281) - don
I'll let you do the rest until 00:43:831 (293) -

00:45:467 (294,295) - change a kat to a don?
00:50:785 (335) - kat?
01:07:149 (456,457,458) - d k k
01:15:467 (503,504,505,506,507,508) - O.O :

01:23:104 (548) - k
01:22:626 (544) - add d?
01:36:195 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - change some don to kat
01:42:740 (143) - kat
the doublet in kiai, as in the inner oni are a bit O.O

Don't feel like you have to apply everything i said, I just give you some ideas to improve your map. :3 (It would be better with more sv)

O.O = weird
Topic Starter
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Yonakr wrote:

From my modding queue
Inner Oni
00:04:967 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - I think this follow the rythm better :


This moment seems too empty :
00:07:149 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - kdddkdddk ?
or if it's too much :
00:06:876 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) -


00:08:922 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - it could be funnier with a lot of sv
00:18:876 (143,144,145,146,147) - this part seems weird, maybe kddkd ?
00:23:240 (190,191,192,193,194) - same ^
00:24:672 (207) - don?
00:30:126 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272) - seems weird too :

00:32:104 (285) - don?
00:34:422 (312,314) - don?
00:42:058 (342,343) - d k?
00:42:876 remove the kat?
00:49:285 (395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,1,2,3) - i think ddddkkkkddddk follows better the music, tt's worth for v too
00:58:422 (493,494,495,496,497,498,499) - or you can dddkkkk it's worth for ^ too
01:07:149 (568,569) - d k, because the next circle is k too, 01:07:285 (569) - and 01:07:558 (570) - are the same sound
01:12:467 (601,602,603,604,605,606,607) - and 01:16:558 (629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636) - I would have mapped those parts (same for the oni)
01:22:558 (671,672,673,674,675,676,677) -

01:27:467 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - it's hard but I find this better xD

There are moments with a lot of big don, you should change some to kat. (same for the oni)

Oni
00:29:649 (223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231) - O.O

in this part, it's better to put kat when the sound is acute
00:40:558 (280) - kat
00:41:104 (282) - kat
00:40:831 (281) - don
I'll let you do the rest until 00:43:831 (293) -

00:45:467 (294,295) - change a kat to a don?
00:50:785 (335) - kat?
01:07:149 (456,457,458) - d k k
01:15:467 (503,504,505,506,507,508) - O.O :

01:23:104 (548) - k
01:22:626 (544) - add d?
01:36:195 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - change some don to kat
01:42:740 (143) - kat
the doublet in kiai, as in the inner oni are a bit O.O

Don't feel like you have to apply everything i said, I just give you some ideas to improve your map. :3 (It would be better with more sv)

O.O = weird
changed some issue. thanks for mod!
rew0825
Hello from my modding queue <3

Inner Oni
  1. 00:03:740 (36,38) - ctrl+g? look better play
  2. 00:05:308 (53) - move to 00:05:445? I think it's weird a bit about 7 notes stream and 3 notes. 5 and 5 look better
  3. 00:20:990 (163,166) - change to k? look better play
  4. 00:40:831 (328,330) - ctrl+g? 00:40:831 on this sound look higher than 00:41:104
  5. 00:42:740 (338,339,340,341,342) - change to d d k d d?
  6. 01:07:013 (557,558,559) - change to k d k?
  7. 01:22:626 and 01:22:763 - add notes

Oni
  1. 00:02:785 (25,26,28) - change to d k k and 00:02:990 (27,29) - delete for break?
  2. 00:05:035 (42) - i think it's not necessary. delete it and 00:04:831 (40,41) - ctrl+g
  3. 01:07:149 (453,454) - ctrl+g?
  4. 01:36:399 (91,92,94,95,98) - change to k all? look better play

Muzukashii
  1. 00:01:695 (11,12) - move to 00:01:490? look better
  2. 00:02:376 (16) - move to 00:02:240? look better
  3. 00:05:240 and 00:05:649 - add notes and 00:05:376 (37) - delete?
  4. 01:07:149 (336,337) - ctrl+g?

That's all from me. Hope it can help you, Good luck :)
Topic Starter
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rew0825 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue <3

Inner Oni
  1. 00:03:740 (36,38) - ctrl+g? look better play
  2. 00:05:308 (53) - move to 00:05:445? I think it's weird a bit about 7 notes stream and 3 notes. 5 and 5 look better keep.
  3. 00:20:990 (163,166) - change to k? look better play
  4. 00:40:831 (328,330) - ctrl+g? 00:40:831 on this sound look higher than 00:41:104
  5. 00:42:740 (338,339,340,341,342) - change to d d k d d?
  6. 01:07:013 (557,558,559) - change to k d k? no necessary i think
  7. 01:22:626 and 01:22:763 - add notes

Oni
  1. 00:02:785 (25,26,28) - change to d k k and 00:02:990 (27,29) - delete for break? nice catch!
  2. 00:05:035 (42) - i think it's not necessary. delete it and 00:04:831 (40,41) - ctrl+g
  3. 01:07:149 (453,454) - ctrl+g? same as inner
  4. 01:36:399 (91,92,94,95,98) - change to k all? look better play

Muzukashii
  1. 00:01:695 (11,12) - move to 00:01:490? look better seriously? this is just a muzu.
  2. 00:02:376 (16) - move to 00:02:240? look better follow the pattern
  3. 00:05:240 and 00:05:649 - add notes and 00:05:376 (37) - delete? idk what can this follow orz
  4. 01:07:149 (336,337) - ctrl+g? same as oni

That's all from me. Hope it can help you, Good luck :)
All fixed except the reds. Thanks for mod!
Remus
Hello.

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:05:240 - you lose instrumental here - lose rhytm.
  2. 00:53:854 - i do not hear triple here. Check again.
  3. 01:02:581 - ^. An yeah, emphasing "WOOB" here by triple is bad idea in Muzu(this is the only thing i can imagine here).
[Oni]
  1. 00:02:922 (26) - don here will suit therhytm better, than kat.
  2. 00:04:354 (37) - as above, this will suit better here, but in this moment it is only suggestion, no need in fixing (but yes, if you like - fix )
  3. 00:05:445 (46) - move it 00:05:581 - , because better to emphasize 00:05:376 - this don by spacing
  4. 00:14:922 (104) - don, because here in this part kats emphasize instrumental on 00:15:058 (106,108,109) - .
  5. 00:38:785 (268,269,270) - kkd, listen with 25%.
  6. 00:49:558 (323,324) - dk to emphasize 00:49:013 (319,321,324) - similar sounds.
  7. 00:49:967 (326) - do not her kat here. Put here don and listen with even 50%.
  8. 00:58:285 (391) - as i said before. Don here.
  9. 00:58:695 (394) - don ^.
  10. 01:12:195 (484,489) - you lose so much of sounds.
  11. 01:16:558 (506,511) - ^
  12. 01:20:376 - i think that it's bad to lose such loud sound here.
  13. 01:28:831 (31) - if you decided to change this moment - change here too.
  14. 01:29:240 (34) - the same as above.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:14:922 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - better to emphasize instrumantal as kats, so imo ddkdkdk suits here more than that.
  2. 00:32:922 (286,290,294,295,298,300,302) - those notes should be kats in this stream. Sounds more stable and better in my opinion.
  3. On this moment i lose the rhytm you mapped 00:40:831 (328) - . Is it fast switch from bass to instrumental? And then you again switch, for example, here00:42:467 (335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342) - and yeah, i don't hear so intensive part here, what you mapped. Anyway, think again about this musical part, looks not so neat.
  4. 00:51:876 (415,416,417,418,419,420,421) - every time i hear different emphasizing of similar sounds. Stability of Oni and Inner oni lost comparing with Muzu (which is VERY good mapped, really)
  5. 01:03:399 - better to put here note.
  6. 01:22:558 (661,662,663,664) - why didn't you emphasize that sounds? That's not just dddd here. 01:22:558 (661,662) - make them kats, for example, sounds even better.
  7. 01:37:422 (130,131,132,133) - you mapped here 5% volume instrumental, but didn't map HUGE basses of 95% of total part volume? Well...

Muzu is pretty good, but other diffs should be polished a lot. My suggestions is just suggestions, for improving the map you need someone more experienced, than me.
Anyway, good luck with that. Hope your effort will not lost. :D
Topic Starter
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Remus wrote:

Hello.

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:05:240 - you lose instrumental here - lose rhytm.
  2. 00:53:854 - i do not hear triple here. Check again.
  3. 01:02:581 - ^. An yeah, emphasing "WOOB" here by triple is bad idea in Muzu(this is the only thing i can imagine here).
[Oni]
  1. 00:02:922 (26) - don here will suit therhytm better, than kat.
  2. 00:04:354 (37) - as above, this will suit better here, but in this moment it is only suggestion, no need in fixing (but yes, if you like - fix )
  3. 00:05:445 (46) - move it 00:05:581 - , because better to emphasize 00:05:376 - this don by spacing
  4. 00:14:922 (104) - don, because here in this part kats emphasize instrumental on 00:15:058 (106,108,109) - .
  5. 00:38:785 (268,269,270) - kkd, listen with 25%.
  6. 00:49:558 (323,324) - dk to emphasize 00:49:013 (319,321,324) - similar sounds.
  7. 00:49:967 (326) - do not her kat here. Put here don and listen with even 50%.
  8. 00:58:285 (391) - as i said before. Don here.
  9. 00:58:695 (394) - don ^.
  10. 01:12:195 (484,489) - you lose so much of sounds.
  11. 01:16:558 (506,511) - ^
  12. 01:20:376 - i think that it's bad to lose such loud sound here.
  13. 01:28:831 (31) - if you decided to change this moment - change here too.
  14. 01:29:240 (34) - the same as above.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:14:922 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - better to emphasize instrumantal as kats, so imo ddkdkdk suits here more than that.
  2. 00:32:922 (286,290,294,295,298,300,302) - those notes should be kats in this stream. Sounds more stable and better in my opinion.
  3. On this moment i lose the rhytm you mapped 00:40:831 (328) - . Is it fast switch from bass to instrumental? And then you again switch, for example, here00:42:467 (335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342) - and yeah, i don't hear so intensive part here, what you mapped. Anyway, think again about this musical part, looks not so neat.
  4. 00:51:876 (415,416,417,418,419,420,421) - every time i hear different emphasizing of similar sounds. Stability of Oni and Inner oni lost comparing with Muzu (which is VERY good mapped, really)
  5. 01:03:399 - better to put here note.
  6. 01:22:558 (661,662,663,664) - why didn't you emphasize that sounds? That's not just dddd here. 01:22:558 (661,662) - make them kats, for example, sounds even better.
  7. 01:37:422 (130,131,132,133) - you mapped here 5% volume instrumental, but didn't map HUGE basses of 95% of total part volume? Well...

Muzu is pretty good, but other diffs should be polished a lot. My suggestions is just suggestions, for improving the map you need someone more experienced, than me.
Anyway, good luck with that. Hope your effort will not lost. :D
Fixed most. Thanks for mod!
Q____X
Hi ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ from my queue.

I just focus in muzu.

[General]

> Change the background position to this

[Muzukashii]

In the beginning you can improve the rhythm if you apply this.
> 00:01:149 (8) - change to k.
> 00:01:285 (9) - move to 00:01:558 - and change to k.
> 00:01:422 (10) - change to d.
> 00:02:104 (15) - move to 00:02:240 -
> 00:02:376 (16) - delete.

> 00:06:399 (45,46) - you can delete this.
> 00:10:695 - for me this break is weird, add d here.
> 00:15:058 - ^
> Add d here 00:25:558 - and 00:26:104 - if you do that, change this notes 00:25:831 (136,137) - to k.
> 00:46:013 (213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222) - this part don't have rhythm why don't use the same pattern as 00:50:376 (238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249) - because is the same rhythm and it's better.
> 00:54:740 (263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272) - same here (apply this in the second kiai too)

01:34:013 - to 01:36:195 -
> 01:34:558 (57) - move to 01:34:695 -
> 01:35:308 (62) - error? the sound is here 01:35:581 -
> 01:35:240 (61) - delete
> 01:35:376 (62) - k
> 01:35:785 - add d.
It look like this imo it's better
> 01:38:376 - you can apply the same suggestion in this part because is the same rhythm.
> 01:44:513 - add d
> 01:48:876 - ^

Good luck with this map :)
Topic Starter
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Q____X wrote:

Hi ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ from my queue.

I just focus in muzu.

[General]

> Change the background position to this

[Muzukashii]

In the beginning you can improve the rhythm if you apply this.
> 00:01:149 (8) - change to k.
> 00:01:285 (9) - move to 00:01:558 - and change to k.
> 00:01:422 (10) - change to d.
> 00:02:104 (15) - move to 00:02:240 -
> 00:02:376 (16) - delete.

> 00:06:399 (45,46) - you can delete this. but idk why i can, it sounds weird
> 00:10:695 - for me this break is weird, add d here.
> 00:15:058 - ^
> Add d here 00:25:558 - and 00:26:104 - if you do that, change this notes 00:25:831 (136,137) - to k.
> 00:46:013 (213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222) - this part don't have rhythm why don't use the same pattern as 00:50:376 (238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249) - because is the same rhythm and it's better.
> 00:54:740 (263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272) - same here (apply this in the second kiai too)

01:34:013 - to 01:36:195 -
> 01:34:558 (57) - move to 01:34:695 -
> 01:35:308 (62) - error? the sound is here 01:35:581 -
> 01:35:240 (61) - delete
> 01:35:376 (62) - k
> 01:35:785 - add d.
It look like this imo it's better
> 01:38:376 - you can apply the same suggestion in this part because is the same rhythm.
> 01:44:513 - add d
> 01:48:876 - ^

Good luck with this map :)
All fixed except the reds. Thanks for mod!
Ellyu
Hello from my q.
Focus on the lower diffs cuz my keyboard broke and it's hard to test to higher diffs.

[General]
the gap between muzu and futsuu is too big. in muzu there are 564 objects and in futsuu 235. nearly 2 times more than it.
The volume from 00:35:104 to 00:46:013 (57) - is too high. 90%? even higher than the strong kiai part. you should fix it.

[Kantan]
HP could be lower

[Futsuu]
00:00:467 (2,3,4) - k d d to fit the pitch and emphasize 00:01:149 (5) - better
00:02:649 (9,10,11) - same as^
00:19:013 (45,46) - d k for the pitch
00:23:376 (57,58) - same as^
00:49:285 (106,107) - d d better to aviod too many k here.
00:57:740 (127,128) - 01:28:558 (184,185) - same as^
01:18:740 (165,166,167) - to keep consistence with 00:32:922 (78,79,80,81,82) - it should be ddddD or kkkkD.
01:24:195 (172) - add finish

[Muzukashii]
at the intro:from 00:00:195 (1) - to 00:17:649 (92) - . This part is too hard. much harder than the kiai part cuz too many triplet in one pattern but I don't think the music here is stronger than the kiai part. you should remove some note here. and you can also reduce the gap between muzu too.
00:33:467 (173,174,175,176,177) - continuous 1/2 same color circles at high bpm for players who plays muzu is a little hard cuz they always use single fingers to hit them. so you could change the last circle to k
01:19:285 (390,391,392,393,394) - same as^
00:47:922 (228,229,230) - kkd
00:56:649 (276,277,278) - same as^
01:12:058 (364) - remove it to emphasize 01:12:195 (365) - better
01:23:104 (412) - k to keep consistence with 01:23:513 (415,416,417) -
01:36:195 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78) - to many same color circle here. I would change 01:35:513 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - kkk d d d k. and change 01:36:740 (71) - to k 01:37:558 (76,77) - to k k
Topic Starter
D o t

Ellyu wrote:

Hello from my q.
Focus on the lower diffs cuz my keyboard broke and it's hard to test to higher diffs.

[General]
the gap between muzu and futsuu is too big. in muzu there are 564 objects and in futsuu 235. nearly 2 times more than it.
The volume from 00:35:104 to 00:46:013 (57) - is too high. 90%? even higher than the strong kiai part. you should fix it. not really high.
instead the kiai part is too low. fixed to 85%. and there's no any rules constrained the volume of kiai part should be higher than others.


[Kantan]
HP could be lower keep

[Futsuu]
00:00:467 (2,3,4) - k d d to fit the pitch and emphasize 00:01:149 (5) - better
00:02:649 (9,10,11) - same as^
00:19:013 (45,46) - d k for the pitch
00:23:376 (57,58) - same as^
00:49:285 (106,107) - d d better to aviod too many k here.
00:57:740 (127,128) - 01:28:558 (184,185) - same as^ ^
01:18:740 (165,166,167) - to keep consistence with 00:32:922 (78,79,80,81,82) - it should be ddddD or kkkkD.
01:24:195 (172) - add finish no need i think.

[Muzukashii]
at the intro:from 00:00:195 (1) - to 00:17:649 (92) - . This part is too hard. much harder than the kiai part cuz too many triplet in one pattern but I don't think the music here is stronger than the kiai part. you should remove some note here. and you can also reduce the gap between muzu too.
00:33:467 (173,174,175,176,177) - continuous 1/2 same color circles at high bpm for players who plays muzu is a little hard cuz they always use single fingers to hit them. so you could change the last circle to k this is hard for me. keep
01:19:285 (390,391,392,393,394) - same as^ ^
00:47:922 (228,229,230) - kkd
00:56:649 (276,277,278) - same as^
01:12:058 (364) - remove it to emphasize 01:12:195 (365) - better
01:23:104 (412) - k to keep consistence with 01:23:513 (415,416,417) -
01:36:195 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78) - to many same color circle here. I would change 01:35:513 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - kkk d d d k. and change 01:36:740 (71) - to k 01:37:558 (76,77) - to k k
fixed except the reds. Thanks for mod!
[MTF] Wolfette
Kantan:

I got nothing

Futsuu:

00:12:740 (31) - I think a clap fits better here
00:19:285 (46) - This should be a triple tap
00:49:013 (105,106) - These should both be red notes
00:53:240 - there should be a note here
01:46:558 (229) - Should be a clap
01:47:922 (232) - ^^

The other diffs are beyond my current modding skill level
Topic Starter
D o t

AsrielDr33murr wrote:

Kantan:

I got nothing

Futsuu:

00:12:740 (31) - I think a clap fits better here
00:19:285 (46) - This should be a triple tap
00:49:013 (105,106) - These should both be red notes
00:53:240 - there should be a note here fixed
01:46:558 (229) - Should be a clap
01:47:922 (232) - ^^

The other diffs are beyond my current modding skill level
Thanks for mod!
Blushing

General

  1. Focused on lower diffs because oni+ seems to look swell to mee
  2. HP 7 on Kantan may be a little low, maybe raise to 8.
  3. Futsuu object ratio to muzu object ratio, might need some filler notes or get rid of some notes in muzu.


    Kantan

  4. 00:09:740 (9) - maybe make this a kat, since its the end of the pattern and if no finisher is going to be placed then a kat is in perfect alignment
  5. 00:12:331 (13) - add a kat here, there is a distinct sound right there.
  6. 00:16:695 (21) - ^^
  7. 00:57:467 (74,75) - ctrl + g, the sound doesn't fall on the don it should fall on the kat.
  8. 01:11:649 (95) - you add them in between others but not on a prominent sound? kat here.
  9. 01:19:831 (100) - switch to a kat, the sound change from singing to edm is very strong here and is nice to show it.
  10. 01:46:149 (139) - put a kat finisher here, if not kat put a finisher at least. it is so dry not having a hitsound on a sound.


    Futsuu

  11. 00:11:104 (27,28,29,30,31) - so many dons, try to get more variation in so the player learns different patterns and learns the colors, really.
  12. 00:25:831 (62) - putting a note in between things for futsuu is a lot better than not having anything and missing out on a good opportunity to give easy difficulty.
  13. 00:33:195 (80) - 00:33:740 (82) - switch to kat, 1 to add for the learning experience and 2. so it isn't too many dons.
  14. 00:57:740 (129) - switch to a don, no reason to have so many kat in this area, switch things up. Add variation
  15. 01:23:104 (174) - maybe add something like this before the (174) then and the now (178)
  16. 01:28:558 (189,190) - change to don, no hitsound for the kats and no reason for so many kats.
  17. 01:42:740 (230) - 01:43:558 (232) - make these two notes kat finisher notes so things go smoother and sound more hitsounded.
  18. 01:46:149 (236) - kat finisher here
  19. 01:49:695 (242) - ^^


    Muzukashii

  20. 00:00:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - in the first 5 seconds you have a lot of triplets, lets calm down with them and replace with something that makes sense. maybe doubles are steal the intro from your futsuu it was really good.
  21. 00:11:104 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - You almost have 10 dons in a single row, some variation in the mapping would be appreciated. the notes with high prominent sounds SHOULD become kats
  22. 00:20:035 (99) - i made a new pattern that I think will work the best. this
  23. 00:33:467 (168,169,170,171,172) - awkward playing this because just spamming don over and over is repetitive and very boring.
  24. 01:11:513 (356) - change to a don.
  25. 01:14:581 (365) - feels like you have to rush to hit this note, i would try and change the note or find some way around it to make it more enjoyable and pleasant to play.
  26. 01:19:285 (384,385,386,387,388) - awkwardly placed here and is awkward to play smoothly and accurately. plus there are a lot of dons again.
  27. 01:44:922 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - still lots of dons, give some variation
  28. 01:49:695 (140,141) - switch to kat finishers.
Topic Starter
D o t

Blushing wrote:

General

  1. Focused on lower diffs because oni+ seems to look swell to mee
  2. HP 7 on Kantan may be a little low, maybe raise to 8.
  3. Futsuu object ratio to muzu object ratio, might need some filler notes or get rid of some notes in muzu.


    Kantan

  4. 00:09:740 (9) - maybe make this a kat, since its the end of the pattern and if no finisher is going to be placed then a kat is in perfect alignment
  5. 00:12:331 (13) - add a kat here, there is a distinct sound right there.
  6. 00:16:695 (21) - ^^
  7. 00:57:467 (74,75) - ctrl + g, the sound doesn't fall on the don it should fall on the kat.
  8. 01:11:649 (95) - you add them in between others but not on a prominent sound? kat here.
  9. 01:19:831 (100) - switch to a kat, the sound change from singing to edm is very strong here and is nice to show it.
  10. 01:46:149 (139) - put a kat finisher here, if not kat put a finisher at least. it is so dry not having a hitsound on a sound.


    Futsuu

  11. 00:11:104 (27,28,29,30,31) - so many dons, try to get more variation in so the player learns different patterns and learns the colors, really.
  12. 00:25:831 (62) - putting a note in between things for futsuu is a lot better than not having anything and missing out on a good opportunity to give easy difficulty.
  13. 00:33:195 (80) - 00:33:740 (82) - switch to kat, 1 to add for the learning experience and 2. so it isn't too many dons.
  14. 00:57:740 (129) - switch to a don, no reason to have so many kat in this area, switch things up. Add variation
  15. 01:23:104 (174) - maybe add something like this before the (174) then and the now (178)
  16. 01:28:558 (189,190) - change to don, no hitsound for the kats and no reason for so many kats.
  17. 01:42:740 (230) - 01:43:558 (232) - make these two notes kat finisher notes so things go smoother and sound more hitsounded.
  18. 01:46:149 (236) - kat finisher here
  19. 01:49:695 (242) - ^^


    Muzukashii

  20. 00:00:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - in the first 5 seconds you have a lot of triplets, lets calm down with them and replace with something that makes sense. maybe doubles are steal the intro from your futsuu it was really good.
  21. 00:11:104 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - You almost have 10 dons in a single row, some variation in the mapping would be appreciated. the notes with high prominent sounds SHOULD become kats
  22. 00:20:035 (99) - i made a new pattern that I think will work the best. this
  23. 00:33:467 (168,169,170,171,172) - awkward playing this because just spamming don over and over is repetitive and very boring.
  24. 01:11:513 (356) - change to a don.
  25. 01:14:581 (365) - feels like you have to rush to hit this note, i would try and change the note or find some way around it to make it more enjoyable and pleasant to play.
  26. 01:19:285 (384,385,386,387,388) - awkwardly placed here and is awkward to play smoothly and accurately. plus there are a lot of dons again.
  27. 01:44:922 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - still lots of dons, give some variation
  28. 01:49:695 (140,141) - switch to kat finishers.
Thanks for mod!
DeletedUser_6637817
This isnt a tpz set without Ayyri in it tbh :^)
Nic.
iloveyou4ever
Hi sorry for late

[General]
BG change to
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,70
Just look better to me XD

[hp/od]
Futsuu change to hp7
Muzukashii change to hp6
Oni change to od5.5?

[Spread]
Seems note spread between futsuu and muzukashii and also muzukashii and oni is uneven.
Consider to add some notes on futsuu?
:arrow: so that note difference between even diffs will be around 200



[Kantan]
00:36:195 - remove this
:arrow: contrast with 00:40:558 - as from 00:39:467 - ,the music is a little bit stronger
00:43:285 - add d?
:arrow: feels empty here
00:52:558 - change to D and 00:53:513 - change to K
:arrow: both two are strong beats, I suggest you use finishers not normal notes
01:02:240 - change to K
:arrow: same point as above,and also you need not change 01:01:285 - this to D as to make variation
01:32:785 - change to K
01:41:513 - change to D

[Futsuu]
00:10:013 - maybe you can add so notes for this part,seems too empty here.
00:14:376 - ^
01:43:831 - ^
01:48:195 - ^
---------------------------
00:27:467 - idk is this a really strong beat,but you can change to finisher if you want
00:29:649 - ^
00:30:740 - please change the patterns to keep consistency of 00:17:649 - this point
00:47:649 - move to 00:47:104 -
:arrow: just feel 00:47:104 - so empty
*if you apply this,also apply to other places too!
01:28:831 - change to d?
01:34:422 (205,206) - can you explain what you're following for these doublets? I don't see the reason of using such patterns...
:arrow: I will change something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8595705 (if you think dkd is too hard,then just change ddd)
01:39:195 - I think you can change to dkd here as it's the most intense part of the music,change to dkd is more fun imo.

[Muzukashii]
00:04:354 - remove this?
:arrow: seems too hard for the beginning part of the song
00:26:104 - remove this
:arrow: 分段會清楚d,同埋比player一個break (idk how to say to english XD)
01:03:195 - remove this (ignore if you want to follow the music closely)
:arrow: same reason^
01:11:376 - change to d
:arrow: prevent using two kdk patterns continuously
01:13:285 -add a note?
01:17:649 - ^
01:39:740 - change to k to keep consistency of 01:35:376 -
01:40:695 - remove this
:arrow: overmapped I think

[Oni]
00:02:104 (17,18,19,20,21) - would it be too dense to use 5-plets at the beginning? 220bpm 5-plets should appear in kiai time only...
:arrow: maybe nerf some 5-plets in the beginning to triplets is better
00:08:922 - I don't know if it's allowed to use 220bpm x1.5 for Oni diff,I suggest you to change to x1.2
00:26:240 - remove this
:arrow: same reason as 00:26:104 - in muzukashii
00:49:422 - and 00:58:149 - change to k(optional tho)
01:06:263 - add d
01:06:399 - ^
01:10:626 - ^
01:10:763 - ^
01:50:376 - change to K to keep consistency of muzukashii diff? (or change muzu diff to D)

Seems the flow and progression of the map can be improved more,but overall is quite good imo.
You may check Inner Oni and other diffs yourself to make sure everything you mapped is explainable in terms of mapping concept.
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
D o t

iloveyou4ever wrote:

Hi sorry for late

[General]
BG change to
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,70
Just look better to me XD

[hp/od]
Futsuu change to hp7
Muzukashii change to hp6
Oni change to od5.5? oni keep

[Spread]
Seems note spread between futsuu and muzukashii and also muzukashii and oni is uneven.
Consider to add some notes on futsuu?
:arrow: so that note difference between even diffs will be around 200



[Kantan]
00:36:195 - remove this but i think this is strange here is empty
:arrow: contrast with 00:40:558 - as from 00:39:467 - ,the music is a little bit stronger
00:43:285 - add d?
:arrow: feels empty here
00:52:558 - change to D and 00:53:513 - change to K
:arrow: both two are strong beats, I suggest you use finishers not normal notes
01:02:240 - change to K
:arrow: same point as above,and also you need not change 01:01:285 - this to D as to make variation
01:32:785 - change to K
01:41:513 - change to D

[Futsuu]
00:10:013 - maybe you can add so notes for this part,seems too empty here.
00:14:376 - ^
01:43:831 - ^
01:48:195 - ^
---------------------------
00:27:467 - idk is this a really strong beat,but you can change to finisher if you want unnecessary
00:29:649 - ^ ^
00:30:740 - please change the patterns to keep consistency of 00:17:649 - this point
00:47:649 - move to 00:47:104 -
:arrow: just feel 00:47:104 - so empty
*if you apply this,also apply to other places too!
01:28:831 - change to d?
01:34:422 (205,206) - can you explain what you're following for these doublets? I don't see the reason of using such patterns...
:arrow: I will change something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8595705 (if you think dkd is too hard,then just change ddd)
01:39:195 - I think you can change to dkd here as it's the most intense part of the music,change to dkd is more fun imo.

[Muzukashii]
00:04:354 - remove this? considering this 00:06:331 (36,37,38) - ,and it's following the sound perfectly, i deleted the first finisher.
:arrow: seems too hard for the beginning part of the song
00:26:104 - remove this actually the finisher after this is already separating the parts, but i still deleted it.
:arrow: 分段會清楚d,同埋比player一個break (idk how to say to english XD)
01:03:195 - remove this (ignore if you want to follow the music closely)
:arrow: same reason^
01:11:376 - change to d
:arrow: prevent using two kdk patterns continuously
01:13:285 -add a note?
01:17:649 - ^
01:39:740 - change to k to keep consistency of 01:35:376 -
01:40:695 - remove this
:arrow: overmapped I think

[Oni]
00:02:104 (17,18,19,20,21) - would it be too dense to use 5-plets at the beginning? 220bpm 5-plets should appear in kiai time only...
:arrow: maybe nerf some 5-plets in the beginning to triplets is better
00:08:922 - I don't know if it's allowed to use 220bpm x1.5 for Oni diff,I suggest you to change to x1.2
00:26:240 - remove this
:arrow: same reason as 00:26:104 - in muzukashii
00:49:422 - and 00:58:149 - change to k(optional tho)
01:06:263 - add d
01:06:399 - ^
01:10:626 - ^
01:10:763 - ^
01:50:376 - change to K to keep consistency of muzukashii diff? (or change muzu diff to D)

Seems the flow and progression of the map can be improved more,but overall is quite good imo.
You may check Inner Oni and other diffs yourself to make sure everything you mapped is explainable in terms of mapping concept.
Good Luck!
Thanks for mod!
not mentioned means fixed
Lumenite-
it's weird for me to be modding this but at the same time even if mine gets ranked and you still want yours ranked this set needs a lot of improvement
3 diff NM out of nowhere

[General]
-t+pazolite, C-Show, SDVX IV HEAVENLY HAVEN, and SDVX4 should be removed from your tags, as t+pazolite and C-Show are part of the title itself, and SDVX IV HEAVENLY HAVEN / SDVX4 are part of the map's source. Because they're already in the maps metadata, they will show up even if not present in your tags.
-Because it's too tedious for me to figure out which tags you don't have, I'll just paste the ones I used here.
sdvx konami bemani don't waste me! e.p. lsm c.h.s chs comiket 85 c85 tpz
-Disable "Enable Countdown" in the maps settings under the Design tab, as it is not allowed in taiko.
Kantan ---> Futsuu(+113) ---> Muzukashii(+296) ---> Oni(+178) ---> Inner Oni(+161)
As I've labeled with the bold red font, the spread between Futsuu and Muzukashii is extremely large, which means there's too big of a difficulty gap between futsuu and muzukashii. I will not be modding futsuu, so I've decided to point that out here.

[Muzukashii]
-Before I get into any nitty gritty detail, it's worth noting this difficulty is lacking in sufficient 2/1 breaks, which is possibly the reason for the large spread gap between this difficulty and futsuu. In a bpm as rigorous for intermediate players as 220, 2/1 breaks should be the main break snapping in this difficulty as oppose to 1/1.
-Also, I recommend changing the HP to 5.
00:04:149 (21,22,23,24,25) - I think this sounds better if you invert the colors.
00:04:831 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - Same sounds as the ones at 00:00:467 (2,3,4,5,6) - and they should be mapped the same way as well. Plus this sounds really weird quite frankly.
00:06:604 - Your missing a kick here, which should be plotted as a k.
00:07:831 - I don't understand why you're not mapping the only mappable sound at this spot, if it's for the sake of a break, I recommend placing a break elsewhere because this is such a prominent part of the map it doesn't make sense to ignore it.
00:08:649 (44,45,46) - As these notes are more drum kicks than snare kicks, they should be dons rather than kats.
00:12:331 (62) - Same bass kick as notes before it, should be a don. If any note here is to be a kat, it should be note 64 as it stands alone with no heavy vocals.
00:13:285 (65) - ^
00:16:695 (80) - ^
00:17:649 - 00:35:104 - Only 1 2/1 break is present here. Going through every pattern and correcting it would force my style on to yours, which is not the goal. Revise this section to have more 2/1 breaks.
00:37:695 (180) - Higher pitch than note 179, implying a kat. (which makes 181 a don, and 182 a kat. It's all about relative pitch comparison.)
00:43:831 (205) - kat please, high synth note here
00:45:740 (207) - Pitch decreases quite dramatically here, don finisher is more appropriate.
00:52:967 (248,249,250) - You need to show some pitch contrast! 249 should be a don finisher.
01:01:695 (296,297,298) - ^
01:12:195 (356,357,358,359,360,361) - although 2/1 breaks are present this is a really weird and sudden drop in density. If you can change this to match density while still maintaining the 2/1 breaks that are currently there it would be golden.
01:16:558 (376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - ^
01:32:240 (43,44,45) - will not repeat what's wrong with this
01:36:195 (68) - unneeded finisher
01:40:831 (96) - delete this note, it places emphasis on note 97 which is where the emphasis needs to be.
01:41:785 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - these can be changed to a 1/2 pattern like d k k d k
01:46:149 (120) - sigh
01:47:104 (123) -
01:50:513 (1) - simple 1/1 notes such as k d do the job better than a finisher.

[Oni]
00:05:104 (41,42,43) - this triplet sounds out of place, and would sound better at 00:05:513 as a kkd
00:06:876 (58,60,62,64) - these can be deleted, again for the sake of emphasis on the finishers
00:07:831 - same thing as I mentioned in muzu
00:11:513 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - why is there color variation in the muzu but there is variation in the oni, if anything it should be the other way around
00:15:876 (100,101,102,103) - ^
00:37:285 (252,253,254,255) - same note idea as the ones i said in the muzu
00:43:831 (278) - same reason to be a kat as in muzu
01:12:195 (476,477,478,479,480) - what is this drop in density?
01:16:831 (499,500,501,502) - ^
01:36:195 (90,93,96) - unneeded finishers
01:50:513 (1) - same thing as muzu

[Inner Oni]
00:07:831 - i just don't get it
-SV changes are a bit extreme here from 00:08:922 - 00:17:649.
00:28:422 (230,231,232,233) - unneeded 1/6, these can be 1/4 and these would easily create the same effect
00:42:467 (329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336) - this structure is just wrong. 00:42:876 (333,335) - at minimal should be removed.
okay, everything else that i have to say I've already said at the same time on a different difficulty, so I deem it to be relatively a waste of time to repeat them all again twice or even a 3rd time.\

good luck with the rank
Topic Starter
D o t

Taikocracy wrote:

it's weird for me to be modding this but at the same time even if mine gets ranked and you still want yours ranked this set needs a lot of improvement
3 diff NM out of nowhere

[General]
-t+pazolite, C-Show, SDVX IV HEAVENLY HAVEN, and SDVX4 should be removed from your tags, as t+pazolite and C-Show are part of the title itself, and SDVX IV HEAVENLY HAVEN / SDVX4 are part of the map's source. Because they're already in the maps metadata, they will show up even if not present in your tags.
-Because it's too tedious for me to figure out which tags you don't have, I'll just paste the ones I used here.
sdvx konami bemani don't waste me! e.p. lsm c.h.s chs comiket 85 c85 tpz
-Disable "Enable Countdown" in the maps settings under the Design tab, as it is not allowed in taiko.
Kantan ---> Futsuu(+113) ---> Muzukashii(+296) ---> Oni(+178) ---> Inner Oni(+161)
As I've labeled with the bold red font, the spread between Futsuu and Muzukashii is extremely large, which means there's too big of a difficulty gap between futsuu and muzukashii. I will not be modding futsuu, so I've decided to point that out here.

[Muzukashii]
-Before I get into any nitty gritty detail, it's worth noting this difficulty is lacking in sufficient 2/1 breaks, which is possibly the reason for the large spread gap between this difficulty and futsuu. In a bpm as rigorous for intermediate players as 220, 2/1 breaks should be the main break snapping in this difficulty as oppose to 1/1.
-Also, I recommend changing the HP to 5.
00:04:149 (21,22,23,24,25) - I think this sounds better if you invert the colors.
00:04:831 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - Same sounds as the ones at 00:00:467 (2,3,4,5,6) - and they should be mapped the same way as well. Plus this sounds really weird quite frankly.
00:06:604 - Your missing a kick here, which should be plotted as a k.
00:07:831 - I don't understand why you're not mapping the only mappable sound at this spot, if it's for the sake of a break, I recommend placing a break elsewhere because this is such a prominent part of the map it doesn't make sense to ignore it.
00:08:649 (44,45,46) - As these notes are more drum kicks than snare kicks, they should be dons rather than kats.
00:12:331 (62) - Same bass kick as notes before it, should be a don. If any note here is to be a kat, it should be note 64 as it stands alone with no heavy vocals.
00:13:285 (65) - ^
00:16:695 (80) - ^
00:17:649 - 00:35:104 - Only 1 2/1 break is present here. Going through every pattern and correcting it would force my style on to yours, which is not the goal. Revise this section to have more 2/1 breaks.
00:37:695 (180) - Higher pitch than note 179, implying a kat. (which makes 181 a don, and 182 a kat. It's all about relative pitch comparison.)uh...but here...is lower pitch than that actually
00:43:831 (205) - kat please, high synth note here
00:45:740 (207) - Pitch decreases quite dramatically here, don finisher is more appropriate.
00:52:967 (248,249,250) - You need to show some pitch contrast! 249 should be a don finisher.
01:01:695 (296,297,298) - ^
01:12:195 (356,357,358,359,360,361) - although 2/1 breaks are present this is a really weird and sudden drop in density. If you can change this to match density while still maintaining the 2/1 breaks that are currently there it would be golden. another part from before and i want to make some comparison with before, also give a break.
01:16:558 (376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - ^
01:32:240 (43,44,45) - will not repeat what's wrong with this
01:36:195 (68) - unneeded finisher
01:40:831 (96) - delete this note, it places emphasis on note 97 which is where the emphasis needs to be.
01:41:785 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - these can be changed to a 1/2 pattern like d k k d k
01:46:149 (120) - sigh
01:47:104 (123) -
01:50:513 (1) - simple 1/1 notes such as k d do the job better than a finisher. um, keep bcz all the diffs do this and here is conform to place a spinner imo.

[Oni]
00:05:104 (41,42,43) - this triplet sounds out of place, and would sound better at 00:05:513 as a kkd
00:06:876 (58,60,62,64) - these can be deleted, again for the sake of emphasis on the finishers
00:07:831 - same thing as I mentioned in muzu
00:11:513 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - why is there color variation in the muzu but there is variation in the oni, if anything it should be the other way around
00:15:876 (100,101,102,103) - ^
00:37:285 (252,253,254,255) - same note idea as the ones i said in the muzu same as muzu
00:43:831 (278) - same reason to be a kat as in muzu
01:12:195 (476,477,478,479,480) - what is this drop in density? same as muzu
01:16:831 (499,500,501,502) - ^
01:36:195 (90,93,96) - unneeded finishers
01:50:513 (1) - same thing as muzu same as muzu

[Inner Oni]
00:07:831 - i just don't get it
-SV changes are a bit extreme here from 00:08:922 - 00:17:649. keep here bcz SV change between them is just 0.5x, not 1.0x.
00:28:422 (230,231,232,233) - unneeded 1/6, these can be 1/4 and these would easily create the same effect
00:42:467 (329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336) - this structure is just wrong. 00:42:876 (333,335) - at minimal should be removed.
okay, everything else that i have to say I've already said at the same time on a different difficulty, so I deem it to be relatively a waste of time to repeat them all again twice or even a 3rd time.\

good luck with the rank
Thanks for mod!
not mentioned means fixed
ts8zs
INNER
00:19:490 (145) - d for 1/4 later drum and keep same to 00:23:785 (190,191,192) -
00:27:467 (226,227,228,229,230) - K dK dK ,keep same to 00:29:649 (249,250) -
00:43:695 (340) - remove and 00:43:558 (339,340) - d K or d k
01:09:331 (565) - k
01:20:104 (634,635,636) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8611043
01:22:763 (655) - k
01:44:104 (186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8611052
ONI
00:25:285 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - kdkdkdk
00:45:740 (284) - D same with 00:46:013 (285) -
00:47:240 (297) - k
00:58:763 (387) - k
01:09:331 (458) - k
MUZU
00:48:467 (220,221,222,223) - kd kd ,to make difference to 00:49:967 (228,229) -
01:27:740 (16,17,18,19) - ^
00:52:422 (243) - del
00:52:967 (245) - K
FUT
01:43:831 (243) - del & 01:44:104 (244) - k
01:48:195 (254,255) - ^
KAT
01:14:376 - k
01:24:195 - slider or spinner
I'm going deaf
Topic Starter
D o t

ts8zs wrote:

INNER
00:19:490 (145) - d for 1/4 later drum and keep same to 00:23:785 (190,191,192) -
00:27:467 (226,227,228,229,230) - K dK dK ,keep same to 00:29:649 (249,250) -
00:43:695 (340) - remove and 00:43:558 (339,340) - d K or d k
01:09:331 (565) - k
01:20:104 (634,635,636) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8611043
01:22:763 (655) - k
01:44:104 (186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8611052
ONI
00:25:285 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - kdkdkdk
00:45:740 (284) - D same with 00:46:013 (285) -
00:47:240 (297) - k
00:58:763 (387) - k
01:09:331 (458) - k
MUZU
00:48:467 (220,221,222,223) - kd kd ,to make difference to 00:49:967 (228,229) -
01:27:740 (16,17,18,19) - ^
00:52:422 (243) - del
00:52:967 (245) - K
FUT
01:43:831 (243) - del & 01:44:104 (244) - k
01:48:195 (254,255) - ^
KAT
01:14:376 - k
01:24:195 - slider or spinner
I'm going deaf
Thanks for mod _(:3
Kbludoh
I think most things are good! Specially the higher difficulties! I did some suggestions, you're free to follow them at your leisure. :)

Fuutsu:


- 00:19:831 (53) - I think Kat represents better the increase in pitch

- 00:24:195 (65) - Same as above

- 00:29:649 (77) - Same as above

- 2nd Kiai - Having a higher note density to differentiate the climax of a Kiai time is recommended. Try using higher density like 01:25:285 (187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199) from the 3rd Kiai to represent the higher point of the song.

- 01:36:467 (220) - Has no sound cue. I know it's a simplification, but I think finding a better alternative could work better... A slider maybe?

- 01:46:149 (249,250) - Make 249 D, 250 K

Muzukashii


- 01:29:922 (28,29) - Invert D K to match difference in pitch

- 01:46:558 (120) - Make K for higher pitch note

Inner Oni


- 01:11:376 (580,581,582,583,584) - Try messing a bit with the SV. It makes it a bit hard to read when the notes overlap like that.
Tyistiana
Hi~ D o t :D
From my modding queue as you've request on here =w=
Don't expect too much, I'm only an inexperienced modder. ;;w;;
Don't take this seriously, just think that it's friendly modding~ =w=
Let's have a look on this forceful map!

[General]
- Muzukashii : HP 5 -> 6 , for the stable HP level if we have compare to the others difficulty.
- Widescreen Support should be disable in all difficulties.

[Kantan]
00:40:558 (54,55) - Ctrl+G , to emphasize 00:41:649 pitch which it's stronger.
01:06:195 - How about delete this note ? , For the consistency of the pattern. Like 00:17:649 (23,24,25,26,27)
01:10:558 - ^

[Futsuu]
00:00:467 - Delete , maybe it's too sudden for Futsuu's player
00:48:604 moves to 00:48:740 - To follow the pitch , and triplets will make beginner understand this rhythm easier.
00:49:285 - Change to d , as this pitch is difference to 00:48:740 (111,112)
00:49:695 moves to 00:49:831 - Maybe this will help beginner to understand this rhythm easier.
00:57:331 moves to 00:57:467 - Same reason as 00:48:604
00:58:422 moves to 00:58:558 - Same reason as 00:49:695
01:04:831 - Change to d , to emphasize 01:05:376
01:26:376 moves to 01:26:649 - Remember this? 00:47:376 , as you have emphasize this pitch before. To ignore this might not good.
And moves 01:25:831 to 01:26:376 for the consistency of the pattern.
01:27:876 moves to 01:28:013 - Same reason as 00:48:604

[Muzukashii]
Note : Too hard somehow, will have a look again after my queue is free for a better suggestion on Muzukashii.

Overall change suggestion : A doublet like 01:20:104 , for me , this sound is too weak to place a note on Muzukashii. And if delete, it'll can emphasize more 01:20:513 (391,392).
And maybe need to make some different to the finisher, like 00:13:013. This point have a pitch which it's different from 00:12:740 / 00:13:285 But it's only my opinion, maybe ignore/refuse this.

00:17:922 / 00:22:285 / 00:31:013 - Add k here might be good in order to follow the vocal. For me, it's notable enough to place a note.
00:19:013 / 00:23:376 / 00:32:104 - Add d , to emphasize the vocal here as you've do it like 00:19:149 (93,94,95,96) And maybe 5-notes pattern might be better on Muzukashii.
00:37:285 - Change to k , to make a difference between this one and 00:37:695 which it have different pitch.
01:12:740 / 01:13:831 / 01:17:104 / 01:18:195 - Add d , feel that this part is too blank for Muzukashii.
01:22:967 - How about add k here ? , it's notable pitch too.
01:26:240 - How about add k here ? , imo

[Oni]
Overall change suggestion : Like Muzukashii, maybe need to make some different to the finisher, like 00:13:013. This will help to emphasize 00:13:285 in the way more stronger.
And almost got heart attack after I've test play this difficulty (Not that much, just joking. XD) Like 00:24:195 ~ 00:26:104 it's too hard for Oni. Maybe delete 00:25:149 to give a rest after they have to tap kd kd kkkkd might be better for the player. Maybe take a look to check the part which it have something like this too. And as I've said , it's only my opinion, maybe ignore/refuse this.

00:04:558 - Change to K , to make a difference between this note and 00:04:081 which it's have different pitch.
00:25:967 (177,178) - Ctrl+G? , to follow the vocal here.
00:28:285 - Change to k , not strong enough to use finisher here cause it's only have vocal here, not have any pitch.
00:28:149 (197,198) - Ctrl+G , to follow the vocal here too.
00:28:285 - Not strong enough to use finisher here cause it's only have vocal here, not have any pitch.
00:40:558 / 00:41:649 / 00:42:740 - Change to k, to make a difference between this one and 00:40:285 (266,267) that it's have a different pitch.
00:47:854 moves to 00:47:785 - Maybe it's fitter as 00:47:854 don't have any pitch but 00:47:785 have some. And doublets are too hard on Oni somehow in my opinion. And I find that this will be fitter after I've test this. If agree to this one, I've mark the point for you to change something that have a same reason with this. (00:52:217 / 00:56:581 / 01:00:945 / 01:27:126 / 01:31:490)
00:48:467 / 00:48:876 / 00:57:195 / 00:57:604 / 01:27:740 / 01:28:149 / - Change to k , same pitch as 00:48:604 for example.

[Inner Oni]
Note : Maybe you'll ask me that why I don't comment about any doublets like I've do on Oni. As it's Inner Oni, not much rule. This difficulty, you can herald your rhythm in your form. So I understand in Inner Oni. =w=

Overall change suggestion : Like Like Muzukashii and Oni, maybe need to make some different to the finisher, like 00:13:013. This will help to emphasize 00:13:285 in the way more stronger. In my opinion again.

00:21:740 - Change to k , not strong enough to use finisher here cause it's only have vocal here, not have any pitch.
00:34:695 - Change to d , have a look on Oni on this part, you've did this before.
01:11:376 (580,581) - Change to d , to emphasize 01:11:649
01:12:876 / 01:13:422 / 01:13:695 / 01:13:967 / 01:17:240 / 01:17:785 / 01:18:058 / 01:18:331 - How about add d ? , as this is Inner Oni, maybe we shouldn't ignore any pitch or vocal. And I think that it'll have more inner to play if we add this. (And don't forget change color on some note to follow the vocal too in case that you've follow this suggestion. =w=)

Hope that this will help you some.
Good luck for ranking! :)
Topic Starter
D o t

brluckybr wrote:

I think most things are good! Specially the higher difficulties! I did some suggestions, you're free to follow them at your leisure. :)

Fuutsu:


- 00:19:831 (53) - I think Kat represents better the increase in pitch

- 00:24:195 (65) - Same as above

- 00:29:649 (77) - Same as above

- 2nd Kiai - Having a higher note density to differentiate the climax of a Kiai time is recommended. Try using higher density like 01:25:285 (187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199) from the 3rd Kiai to represent the higher point of the song.

- 01:36:467 (220) - Has no sound cue. I know it's a simplification, but I think finding a better alternative could work better... A slider maybe?

- 01:46:149 (249,250) - Make 249 D, 250 K

Muzukashii


- 01:29:922 (28,29) - Invert D K to match difference in pitch

- 01:46:558 (120) - Make K for higher pitch note

Inner Oni


- 01:11:376 (580,581,582,583,584) - Try messing a bit with the SV. It makes it a bit hard to read when the notes overlap like that.

Tyistiana wrote:

Hi~ D o t :D

From my modding queue as you've request on here =w=

Don't expect too much, I'm only an inexperienced modder. ;;w;;

Don't take this seriously, just think that it's friendly modding~ =w=

Let's have a look on this forceful map!



[General]

- Muzukashii : HP 5 -> 6 , for the stable HP level if we have compare to the others difficulty.

- Widescreen Support should be disable in all difficulties.



[Kantan]

00:40:558 (54,55) - Ctrl+G , to emphasize 00:41:649 pitch which it's stronger.

01:06:195 - How about delete this note ? , For the consistency of the pattern. Like 00:17:649 (23,24,25,26,27)

01:10:558 - ^



[Futsuu]

00:00:467 - Delete , maybe it's too sudden for Futsuu's player

00:48:604 moves to 00:48:740 - To follow the pitch , and triplets will make beginner understand this rhythm easier.

00:49:285 - Change to d , as this pitch is difference to 00:48:740 (111,112)

00:49:695 moves to 00:49:831 - Maybe this will help beginner to understand this rhythm easier.

00:57:331 moves to 00:57:467 - Same reason as 00:48:604

00:58:422 moves to 00:58:558 - Same reason as 00:49:695

01:04:831 - Change to d , to emphasize 01:05:376

01:26:376 moves to 01:26:649 - Remember this? 00:47:376 , as you have emphasize this pitch before. To ignore this might not good.

And moves 01:25:831 to 01:26:376 for the consistency of the pattern.

01:27:876 moves to 01:28:013 - Same reason as 00:48:604



[Muzukashii]

Note : Too hard somehow, will have a look again after my queue is free for a better suggestion on Muzukashii.



Overall change suggestion : A doublet like 01:20:104 , for me , this sound is too weak to place a note on Muzukashii. And if delete, it'll can emphasize more 01:20:513 (391,392).

And maybe need to make some different to the finisher, like 00:13:013. This point have a pitch which it's different from 00:12:740 / 00:13:285 But it's only my opinion, maybe ignore/refuse this.



00:17:922 / 00:22:285 / 00:31:013 - Add k here might be good in order to follow the vocal. For me, it's notable enough to place a note.

00:19:013 / 00:23:376 / 00:32:104 - Add d , to emphasize the vocal here as you've do it like 00:19:149 (93,94,95,96) And maybe 5-notes pattern might be better on Muzukashii.

00:37:285 - Change to k , to make a difference between this one and 00:37:695 which it have different pitch.

01:12:740 / 01:13:831 / 01:17:104 / 01:18:195 - Add d , feel that this part is too blank for Muzukashii.

01:22:967 - How about add k here ? , it's notable pitch too.

01:26:240 - How about add k here ? , imo



[Oni]

Overall change suggestion : Like Muzukashii, maybe need to make some different to the finisher, like 00:13:013. This will help to emphasize 00:13:285 in the way more stronger.

And almost got heart attack after I've test play this difficulty (Not that much, just joking. XD) Like 00:24:195 ~ 00:26:104 it's too hard for Oni. Maybe delete 00:25:149 to give a rest after they have to tap kd kd kkkkd might be better for the player. Maybe take a look to check the part which it have something like this too. And as I've said , it's only my opinion, maybe ignore/refuse this.



00:04:558 - Change to K , to make a difference between this note and 00:04:081 which it's have different pitch.

00:25:967 (177,178) - Ctrl+G? , to follow the vocal here.

00:28:285 - Change to k , not strong enough to use finisher here cause it's only have vocal here, not have any pitch.

00:28:149 (197,198) - Ctrl+G , to follow the vocal here too.

00:28:285 - Not strong enough to use finisher here cause it's only have vocal here, not have any pitch.

00:40:558 / 00:41:649 / 00:42:740 - Change to k, to make a difference between this one and 00:40:285 (266,267) that it's have a different pitch.

00:47:854 moves to 00:47:785 - Maybe it's fitter as 00:47:854 don't have any pitch but 00:47:785 have some. And doublets are too hard on Oni somehow in my opinion. And I find that this will be fitter after I've test this. If agree to this one, I've mark the point for you to change something that have a same reason with this. (00:52:217 / 00:56:581 / 01:00:945 / 01:27:126 / 01:31:490)

00:48:467 / 00:48:876 / 00:57:195 / 00:57:604 / 01:27:740 / 01:28:149 / - Change to k , same pitch as 00:48:604 for example.



[Inner Oni]

Note : Maybe you'll ask me that why I don't comment about any doublets like I've do on Oni. As it's Inner Oni, not much rule. This difficulty, you can herald your rhythm in your form. So I understand in Inner Oni. =w=



Overall change suggestion : Like Like Muzukashii and Oni, maybe need to make some different to the finisher, like 00:13:013. This will help to emphasize 00:13:285 in the way more stronger. In my opinion again.



00:21:740 - Change to k , not strong enough to use finisher here cause it's only have vocal here, not have any pitch.

00:34:695 - Change to d , have a look on Oni on this part, you've did this before.

01:11:376 (580,581) - Change to d , to emphasize 01:11:649

01:12:876 / 01:13:422 / 01:13:695 / 01:13:967 / 01:17:240 / 01:17:785 / 01:18:058 / 01:18:331 - How about add d ? , as this is Inner Oni, maybe we shouldn't ignore any pitch or vocal. And I think that it'll have more inner to play if we add this. (And don't forget change color on some note to follow the vocal too in case that you've follow this suggestion. =w=)



Hope that this will help you some.

Good luck for ranking! :)
thanks for mod!
Aisha
Hi! ~

[General]
  1. Why HEAVENLY Oni diff is the only one using 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,50 instead 0,70 as every others?
  2. I think 00:46:013, 01:25:285 - should be 90% and 00:17:649 - 85% (volumes). I think second and third Kiai are way stronger than first
  3. Even I think you should delete this Kiai 00:17:649 -. It's not really different than rest of the song (even same as 01:03:467 - )
  4. It's pretty strange to see more HP on Inner than Oni
  5. Spread is... really unequal... Kantan +112=Futsuu. Futsuu+287=Muzu. So try to make them a little more closer ^^. It's a short song so the difference is way huge. I suggest you nerfing muzu maybe
[Kantan]
  1. What about making 00:04:149 (2) - don so you emphatise next D better (also stronger sound is on second note :p)
  2. 00:07:285 (5) - I don't feel this note that correct tbh D: specially as finish (way too strong)
  3. 00:32:376 (44) - what about deleting this? So you don't make a long chain of 4/1 notes (that makes it a little... strange)
  4. 01:03:467 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - way same as above, it's even harder than Kiai (not supposed to xD)
  5. Through the Kiai I think you should delete some finish notes like 00:59:104 (77) - (example) and only hold the first one
  6. 01:41:513 (26) - K? To consistency with 01:02:240 (81) -
    Other than that looks well imo :p
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:04:558 (14,15,16,17,18) - why is this that different compared to 00:00:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? They're way same so no reason to make they different imo (also second one doesn't fit at all)
  2. 00:02:922 (10,11,12) - what about k k d? to make variation and emphatise descendant rhythm
  3. 00:17:649 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - what about separating them into patterns of 3 / 5 notes instead long chain of 7 like this? Make this a little unconsistent and so hard in some parts compared to single triples
  4. Second Kiai is great :p
  5. 01:03:467 - this section has a little of unconsistent stuff. I like patterns like 01:03:467 (150,151,152) - to start sections instead 01:05:649 (155,156,157) -
  6. ^also second half of this section isn't even similar to first one considering it's almost the same rhythm
  7. 01:24:195 (185,186) - I highly suggest you to delete and replace to spinner same as Kantan
[Muzukashii]
  1. This diff gets a little hard overall, specially on unnecesary sections (beggining for example). Don't forget it's a 220 bpm song!
  2. Well I'll talk in general, try to nerf it a little specially on not neccesary sections. Try to save triples for Kiai (and a little usage out of Kiai's)
[Oni]
  1. Generally it's a little difficult too, but more acceptable than Muzu imo
  2. Try to make SV changes a little smoother, remember it's an Oni diff not Inner :p
  3. 00:05:513 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - why making this tri-triple in a row? It doesn't make sense at all compared to the rest of this section
  4. 00:14:922 (97,98,99,100,101) - what about kkddk instead? It's more accurate for Oni at this bpm and fills better
  5. 00:18:876 (119,120,121,122,123,124) - maybe avoiding these patterns is better, I think using kkd kdk or ddk kdk mixed is better than using kdk dkd (hard for this diff imo)
    In general mapping is way great but can be really pulished specially when sometimes I feel it like an Inner Oni than Oni. Try to make it more balanced a little and could be really good ^^
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Best of lucks boy ~~ Hope this can be helpful for you and sorry for the long time ;;!
Surono
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17:24 Surono: hi.
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17:25 Surono: quack quick `<`
17:25 D o t: do you accept mod request now?
17:25 Surono: nope x'd but /np your map
17:25 *D o t is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1178064 Lite Show Magic (t+pazolite vs C-Show) - TRICKL4SH 220]
17:25 D o t: :3
17:25 Surono: ahh i see, nothing happened(2)
17:25 Surono: x3
17:26 D o t: yea i deleted the hardest diff so nothing happened
17:29 *Surono is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1178061 Lite Show Magic (t+pazolite vs C-Show) - TRICKL4SH 220 [Inner Oni]] <Taiko>
17:31 Surono: wih
17:37 Surono: hmmm, overall.. some of pattern colors are too tricky ;w; and yeah few emphasized colors with the sounds a bit redundant in some spot
17:38 Surono: 00:40:422 - 00:42:604 - when I test it twice, yeh i ignore to hit these.. idk why 3plet X"D
17:40 Surono: 01:25:899 - 01:26:717 - 01:28:558 (40) - 01:28:967 (45) - some spots are too tricky or overemphasized imo, well its good map i just nub since not playing recently x'd
17:42 Surono: 01:12:126 - well its overlap sv, change it too 90x and 01:11:990 - here 95x to make a neat reducing svs
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D o t

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi! ~

[General]
  1. Why HEAVENLY Oni diff is the only one using 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,50 instead 0,70 as every others? i already deleted HEAVENLY Oni before request :thinking:
  2. I think 00:46:013, 01:25:285 - should be 90% and 00:17:649 - 85% (volumes). I think second and third Kiai are way stronger than first ok
  3. Even I think you should delete this Kiai 00:17:649 -. It's not really different than rest of the song (even same as 01:03:467 - ) ok
  4. It's pretty strange to see more HP on Inner than Oni
  5. Spread is... really unequal... Kantan +112=Futsuu. Futsuu+287=Muzu. So try to make them a little more closer ^^. It's a short song so the difference is way huge. I suggest you nerfing muzu maybe
[Kantan]
  1. What about making 00:04:149 (2) - don so you emphatise next D better (also stronger sound is on second note :p)
  2. 00:07:285 (5) - I don't feel this note that correct tbh D: specially as finish (way too strong)
  3. 00:32:376 (44) - what about deleting this? So you don't make a long chain of 4/1 notes (that makes it a little... strange)
  4. 01:03:467 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - way same as above, it's even harder than Kiai (not supposed to xD)
  5. Through the Kiai I think you should delete some finish notes like 00:59:104 (77) - (example) and only hold the first one
  6. 01:41:513 (26) - K? To consistency with 01:02:240 (81) -
    Other than that looks well imo :p
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:04:558 (14,15,16,17,18) - why is this that different compared to 00:00:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? They're way same so no reason to make they different imo (also second one doesn't fit at all)
  2. 00:02:922 (10,11,12) - what about k k d? to make variation and emphatise descendant rhythm
  3. 00:17:649 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - what about separating them into patterns of 3 / 5 notes instead long chain of 7 like this? Make this a little unconsistent and so hard in some parts compared to single triples
  4. Second Kiai is great :p
  5. 01:03:467 - this section has a little of unconsistent stuff. I like patterns like 01:03:467 (150,151,152) - to start sections instead 01:05:649 (155,156,157) -
  6. ^also second half of this section isn't even similar to first one considering it's almost the same rhythm
  7. 01:24:195 (185,186) - I highly suggest you to delete and replace to spinner same as Kantan
[Muzukashii]
  1. This diff gets a little hard overall, specially on unnecesary sections (beggining for example). Don't forget it's a 220 bpm song!
  2. Well I'll talk in general, try to nerf it a little specially on not neccesary sections. Try to save triples for Kiai (and a little usage out of Kiai's)
[Oni]
  1. Generally it's a little difficult too, but more acceptable than Muzu imo
  2. Try to make SV changes a little smoother, remember it's an Oni diff not Inner :p
  3. 00:05:513 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - why making this tri-triple in a row? It doesn't make sense at all compared to the rest of this section
  4. 00:14:922 (97,98,99,100,101) - what about kkddk instead? It's more accurate for Oni at this bpm and fills better
  5. 00:18:876 (119,120,121,122,123,124) - maybe avoiding these patterns is better, I think using kkd kdk or ddk kdk mixed is better than using kdk dkd (hard for this diff imo)
    In general mapping is way great but can be really pulished specially when sometimes I feel it like an Inner Oni than Oni. Try to make it more balanced a little and could be really good ^^
[HEAVENLY Oni]
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Best of lucks boy ~~ Hope this can be helpful for you and sorry for the long time ;;!
well i already forgot what i changed lol

Surono wrote:

quack quick `<`
17:23 D o t: hi Surono!
17:23 Surono: dut
17:23 Surono: .
17:24 D o t: i'm .!
17:24 Surono: !!!1111 X"D
17:24 Surono: hi.
17:24 D o t: :3
17:25 Surono: quack quick `<`
17:25 D o t: do you accept mod request now?
17:25 Surono: nope x'd but /np your map
17:25 *D o t is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1178064 Lite Show Magic (t+pazolite vs C-Show) - TRICKL4SH 220]
17:25 D o t: :3
17:25 Surono: ahh i see, nothing happened(2)
17:25 Surono: x3
17:26 D o t: yea i deleted the hardest diff so nothing happened
17:29 *Surono is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1178061 Lite Show Magic (t+pazolite vs C-Show) - TRICKL4SH 220 [Inner Oni]] <Taiko>
17:31 Surono: wih
17:37 Surono: hmmm, overall.. some of pattern colors are too tricky ;w; and yeah few emphasized colors with the sounds a bit redundant in some spot
17:38 Surono: 00:40:422 - 00:42:604 - when I test it twice, yeh i ignore to hit these.. idk why 3plet X"D
17:40 Surono: 01:25:899 - 01:26:717 - 01:28:558 (40) - 01:28:967 (45) - some spots are too tricky or overemphasized imo, well its good map i just nub since not playing recently x'd
17:42 Surono: 01:12:126 - well its overlap sv, change it too 90x and 01:11:990 - here 95x to make a neat reducing svs
all fixed, thank you both for modding
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