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so fun!!!

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very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very fun

i love this map

I like this map :3
GL!


________________________
-My Pending Map-
Mizuki Nana - Jyunketsu Paradox (TV Size)
Yasunori Mitsuda - Frog's Theme

Thanks all of you! :3

star

General

1. Disable countdown and letterboxing from all difficulties. It looks nicer and countdowns aren't actually being used anyway.
2. Move the timing to offset 1323. This is extremely important: this will fix the metronome. Don't shift any objects when you do this.

Easy

1. The difficulty has numerous problems. Sliders are bunched up and hard to read, bad spacing, circles and sliders randomly starting on the downbeat, inconsistent breaks and kiai, this difficulty needs major reworking.
   
   Not modding this one in depth, this difficulty needs an overhaul.

Normal

1. The difficulty needs some serious spacing work. Try sticking to distance snap for the majority of the map.
   
   Not modding this one in depth, the spacing needs work before that.

Hard

1. 00:01:639 (2,3) - Make the spacing larger, it's bad spacing right now.
2. 00:16:481 (1,2) - Same as above.
3. 01:20:902 (1,2,1) - Same as above, this one it would just be nice to have larger spaced.
4. 01:37:639 (2) - This slider is hard to see.
   
   I like it.

Insane

1. 00:10:797 (9,10) - Increase the spacing of these, no point in having an antijump
2. 02:20:902 (10) - Way too hard to see
3. 02:36:692 - Stop the kiai here.
   
   So awesome O_O

Extra

• 
  Nothing here is unapprovable, so I'll only point out the really really hard to read things.

1. Set the combo colors to the same colors as the other difficulties. It would be much more readable, and Gray isn't recommended as a combo color because of conflicts when playing multiplayer.
2. 01:34:165 (3) - Really hard to read, people might complain
3. 01:35:428 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - This is by far the hardest thing to read in the map.
4. 01:40:481 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - This comes in a close second (they're the same thing except this one is in the middle and the approach circles are easier read.
5. 02:04:797 (5) - New combo here, drain gets pretty nasty.
6. 02:05:823 (2,4) - Remove these two circles, no need for them.
7. 02:50:586 (5) - New combo here for the same reason as 02:04:797

Also, a few months ago I was working on an Easy difficulty. If you want I can finish it up and give it to you.

[Insane]
02:36:692 (7) - End kiai here
[Extra]
Maybe better use beatcolor such a hard\insane...?

Charles445 wrote:

General

1. Disable countdown and letterboxing from all difficulties. It looks nicer and countdowns aren't actually being used anyway.
2. Move the timing to offset 1323. This is extremely important: this will fix the metronome. Don't shift any objects when you do this.

Easy

1. The difficulty has numerous problems. Sliders are bunched up and hard to read, bad spacing, circles and sliders randomly starting on the downbeat, inconsistent breaks and kiai, this difficulty needs major reworking.
   
   Not modding this one in depth, this difficulty needs an overhaul.

Normal

1. The difficulty needs some serious spacing work. Try sticking to distance snap for the majority of the map. Reworked this diff
   
   Not modding this one in depth, the spacing needs work before that.

Hard

1. 00:01:639 (2,3) - Make the spacing larger, it's bad spacing right now. Fixed
2. 00:16:481 (1,2) - Same as above. Fixed
3. 01:20:902 (1,2,1) - Same as above, this one it would just be nice to have larger spaced. Fixed
4. 01:37:639 (2) - This slider is hard to see. Fixed
   
   I like it.

Insane

1. 00:10:797 (9,10) - Increase the spacing of these, no point in having an antijump Fixed
2. 02:20:902 (10) - Way too hard to see Fixed
3. 02:36:692 - Stop the kiai here. Fixed
   
   So awesome O_O

Extra

• 
  Nothing here is unapprovable, so I'll only point out the really really hard to read things.

1. Set the combo colors to the same colors as the other difficulties. It would be much more readable, and Gray isn't recommended as a combo color because of conflicts when playing multiplayer. Yeah I don't know what I was thinking when I changed the colors in the first place
2. 01:34:165 (3) - Really hard to read, people might complain Modified the combo
3. 01:35:428 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - This is by far the hardest thing to read in the map.
4. 01:40:481 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - This comes in a close second (they're the same thing except this one is in the middle and the approach circles are easier read.
5. 02:04:797 (5) - New combo here, drain gets pretty nasty. Fixed
6. 02:05:823 (2,4) - Remove these two circles, no need for them. Fixed
7. 02:50:586 (5) - New combo here for the same reason as 02:04:797 Fixed

Also, a few months ago I was working on an Easy difficulty. If you want I can finish it up and give it to you.

Thanks for the mod. I can replace the easy diff with yours so I didn't modify my diff now. Hate mapping easy difficulties anyway

hackSL wrote:

[Insane]
02:36:692 (7) - End kiai here
[Extra]
Maybe better use beatcolor such a hard\insane...?

Sorry but those came up already on Charles' mod

hi~from mod que! (next time look carefully... and i said post in my songs thread...not my queue)

the map is gooood...but really hard to see and predict the location of next note. of course, pro players will really like it.....
but im gonna take a panadol pain killer

general: why grey combo color ...... it really become very hard to see especially plz dont do it in easy/normal
although the diff. spread is good... but it is rare to see a mapper make 5 diff. for a map without GD

Extra
00:19:560 (4) - grid it out a bit...i thought it was a slider dude
00:40:797 (2) - i really cant see the note....i know you do it purposely but unlike notes before...this is really really cant see
ahhhhh i cant mod extra anymore skip

Insane
00:16:481 (1) - i really dont like this slider....make it straight or 45 degree or curve
00:18:060 (8) - http://puu.sh/937n
01:53:034 (3) - delete this
01:55:560 (3) - same
02:32:586 (1) - bad shape XX

Hard
00:18:376 (3) - delete 1 repeat, add a note ( because really hard to predict )
01:13:955 (3) - same
01:34:797 (6,7) - yew... kinda unrankable
02:02:270 (9) - make it shorter with 1 repeat?
02:06:060 (6) - make it just right side of the previous slider to create a surround effect

ah.......the most painful mod in my mod history.......
but star for nice map though

Thanks for the mod, L_P. I'll apply the changes next friday as soon as possible.

Sorry for messing up with your queue though

nvm

L_P wrote:

hi~from mod que! (next time look carefully... and i said post in my songs thread...not my queue)

the map is gooood...but really hard to see and predict the location of next note. of course, pro players will really like it.....
but im gonna take a panadol pain killer

general: why grey combo color ...... it really become very hard to see especially plz dont do it in easy/normal
although the diff. spread is good... but it is rare to see a mapper make 5 diff. for a map without GD Fixed the color.. At least tried to

Extra
00:19:560 (4) - grid it out a bit...i thought it was a slider dude Fixed
00:40:797 (2) - i really cant see the note....i know you do it purposely but unlike notes before...this is really really cant see
ahhhhh i cant mod extra anymore skip

Insane
00:16:481 (1) - i really dont like this slider....make it straight or 45 degree or curveFixed
00:18:060 (8) - http://puu.sh/937n Fixed
01:53:034 (3) - delete this Umm no
01:55:560 (3) - same ^
02:32:586 (1) - bad shape XX Fixed

Hard
00:18:376 (3) - delete 1 repeat, add a note ( because really hard to predict ) Fixed
01:13:955 (3) - same Fixed
01:34:797 (6,7) - yew... kinda unrankable Fixed
02:02:270 (9) - make it shorter with 1 repeat? Fixed
02:06:060 (6) - make it just right side of the previous slider to create a surround effect Fixed

ah.......the most painful mod in my mod history.......
but star for nice map though

Thanks for the mod! Hoped mods for easy and normal diffs too but oh well..

fROM mY qUEUE

lol, good song and BG

[Easy]
01:13:323 (2,4) - according to the new rulez, don't put notes on slider tracks on E/N/H
01:15:849 (1,2,3) - the hitburst from last combo makes it a little ugly... (at least on my skin)
01:25:323 (2,3,4,5) - don't you think it's a little hard for an Easy...? at least delete 3 and 5 so it's not so streamy (stream for new ones...) um. and delete the 5 from the last combo too
01:29:112 (4,1) - or you can try to combine 2 sliders in to one long slider... to make it easier
02:01:954 (2) - put it in front of (1)
02:05:111 (3,4,5) - slider www
02:08:270 (4) - spacing? don't jump on easy = =
02:15:534 (4) - -1 reverse?
02:16:796 (1) - overlapped... and it doesn't look good

[Normal]
so many spacing problems in AI mod, you should have none in Easy and Normal (at least make it show "Normal" in difficulty rating... = =)

Also the hitsounds sound random, so many whistles which don't appeal to my ear... For some patterns you just need to put claps on the 1st and 3rd white lines after the long one (24clap), I think it fits the song in most of the parts...
00:12:692 (3) - +1 reverse, then put 4 on top of it?
00:18:375 (4) - feels strange... maybe just make a circle at 00:18:691 and a slider (1/1) at 00:19:007?
00:38:902 (1) - don't do this on normal plz = =
00:53:428 (3,5) - reverse??
01:00:376 (6) - 1/1 slider at 01:00:059?
01:09:849 (3) - wiggle this slider?
01:25:954 (4) - remove whistles on reverses
01:25:007 (2) - remove whistle ww
01:30:060 (1) - 1/1 earlier and longer
01:31:323 (2) - ^
01:32:586 (1,2) - sliders..?
01:34:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too many whistles = = and spacing of 4 and 5
01:40:165 (1) - 1/1 earlier, and +1 reverse?
01:59:428 (4) - overlapped wwww
02:00:376 (1) - please don't stack = = can't read...
02:01:955 (4) - add 1 reverse?
02:15:218 (4) - Ctrl+R
02:44:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so many whistles... and add finish on 7

[Hard]
00:08:902 (1,2,3) - spacing...
00:15:849 (3) - -1 reverse
01:22:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern is so random... = =
01:38:270 (4,5) - can you just link them... = =lll
01:38:902 (6,8,9,10,11) - hard to play this... = =
01:54:376 (4) - I suggest cutting it to the half and reverse it...
01:56:902 (7) - slider?
02:01:955 (7,8) - 1 reverse slider?
02:04:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - oh WTF

um, Extra is a good map... = = looks much better than other diffs

nice song, good luck!!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

fROM mY qUEUE

lol, good song and BG

[Easy]
01:13:323 (2,4) - according to the new rulez, don't put notes on slider tracks on E/N/H Fixed
01:15:849 (1,2,3) - the hitburst from last combo makes it a little ugly... (at least on my skin) Fixed (?)
01:25:323 (2,3,4,5) - don't you think it's a little hard for an Easy...? at least delete 3 and 5 so it's not so streamy (stream for new ones...) um. and delete the 5 from the last combo too Fixed
01:29:112 (4,1) - or you can try to combine 2 sliders in to one long slider... to make it easier
02:01:954 (2) - put it in front of (1) Fixed (added +1 reverse)
02:05:111 (3,4,5) - slider www Fixed
02:08:270 (4) - spacing? don't jump on easy = = Fixed
02:15:534 (4) - -1 reverse? Fixed
02:16:796 (1) - overlapped... and it doesn't look good Fixed

[Normal]
so many spacing problems in AI mod, you should have none in Easy and Normal (at least make it show "Normal" in difficulty rating... = =)
Not sure about that since AI Mod tells whatever it wants from too long to too small gaps even if I fix them. It's bad guidance imo though it does tell the basics pretty well. You may disagree with me.
Also the hitsounds sound random, so many whistles which don't appeal to my ear... For some patterns you just need to put claps on the 1st and 3rd white lines after the long one (24clap), I think it fits the song in most of the parts...
00:12:692 (3) - +1 reverse, then put 4 on top of it? Fixed
00:18:375 (4) - feels strange... maybe just make a circle at 00:18:691 and a slider (1/1) at 00:19:007? Fixed
00:38:902 (1) - don't do this on normal plz = = Fixed
00:53:428 (3,5) - reverse?? Fixed
01:00:376 (6) - 1/1 slider at 01:00:059? Fixed
01:09:849 (3) - wiggle this slider? Fixed
01:25:954 (4) - remove whistles on reverses Fixed
01:25:007 (2) - remove whistle ww Fixed
01:30:060 (1) - 1/1 earlier and longer Fixed
01:31:323 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:32:586 (1,2) - sliders..? Fixed
01:34:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too many whistles = = and spacing of 4 and 5 Fixed
01:40:165 (1) - 1/1 earlier, and +1 reverse?
01:59:428 (4) - overlapped wwww Fixed
02:00:376 (1) - please don't stack = = can't read... Fixed
02:01:955 (4) - add 1 reverse?
02:15:218 (4) - Ctrl+R Fixed
02:44:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so many whistles... and add finish on 7 Fixed

[Hard]
00:08:902 (1,2,3) - spacing... Fixed
00:15:849 (3) - -1 reverse Fixed
01:22:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern is so random... = = Fixed
01:38:270 (4,5) - can you just link them... = =lll Fixed
01:38:902 (6,8,9,10,11) - hard to play this... = = Fixed
01:54:376 (4) - I suggest cutting it to the half and reverse it...
01:56:902 (7) - slider?
02:01:955 (7,8) - 1 reverse slider?
02:04:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - oh WTF lol Fixed

um, Extra is a good map... = = looks much better than other diffs

nice song, good luck!!

Thanks for modding!

I love this map

Hi ~ >~< A request from My Modding Queue ~

Blue - I see no problem here o.o" ( Map )
Purple - seems okay~ ( Map )
Pink - Suggestion

[Easy]

[Normal]
00:03:533(x) = add note
00:06:059(x) = ^
00:08:586(x) = ^
02:51:533(x) = ^

[Hard]


That's all >~<"
Please don't KUDOS this post if it doesn't very helpful to you =="

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ >~< A request from My Modding Queue ~

Blue - I see no problem here o.o" ( Map )
Purple - seems okay~ ( Map )
Pink - Suggestion

[Easy]

[Normal]
00:03:533(x) = add note
00:06:059(x) = ^
00:08:586(x) = ^
02:51:533(x) = ^

[Hard]


That's all >~<"
Please don't KUDOS this post if it doesn't very helpful to you =="

Sorry but I prefer not to add more notes on normal since the diff rating would go to H as well

Thanks anyways!

Random mod of the day! Huzzah!

~Easy~
01:10:796 (1,1) - This overlap is kind of... bleh.
02:31:007 (4) - It seems like you could just rotate this slider so you could keep the little rotation pattern going.

~Normal~
00:23:744 (1,2) - Move the New Combo to (2).
00:38:270 (4) - Move this note 1 space down?
00:39:533 (x) - Add one tiny note here?
01:32:270 (x) - Here too?
02:51:533 (x) - One last note?

~Hard~
01:38:902 (6,7,8,9,10) - Center (6) and (8)?
02:10:796 (8) - Add finish to the slider end?

~Insane~
00:13:165 (8) - Pop a whistle on that slider end!
00:18:060 (8) - Here too.
00:21:218 (10) - Here too maybe?
00:31:481 (9) - Center this maybe?
00:33:849 (11) - Add finish to the start of this slider.
00:40:402 (1) - End this spinner at 00:41:744.

Very Nice, Map!!!

theMikeAG wrote:

Random mod of the day! Huzzah!

~Easy~
01:10:796 (1,1) - This overlap is kind of... bleh. Fixed
02:31:007 (4) - It seems like you could just rotate this slider so you could keep the little rotation pattern going. Fixed

~Normal~
00:23:744 (1,2) - Move the New Combo to (2). Fixed
00:38:270 (4) - Move this note 1 space down? Fixed
00:39:533 (x) - Add one tiny note here? Fixed
01:32:270 (x) - Here too? Fixed
02:51:533 (x) - One last note?

~Hard~
01:38:902 (6,7,8,9,10) - Center (6) and (8)?
02:10:796 (8) - Add finish to the slider end? Fixed

~Insane~
00:13:165 (8) - Pop a whistle on that slider end!Fixed
00:18:060 (8) - Here too. Fixed
00:21:218 (10) - Here too maybe? Fixed
00:31:481 (9) - Center this maybe? Fixed, thus reworked the couple of following notes/sliders
00:33:849 (11) - Add finish to the start of this slider. Fixed
00:40:402 (1) - End this spinner at 00:41:744. Fixed

Very Nice, Map!!!

Thanks for the mod!

Edit: Also I put back the notes 02:05:823 (2,4) - in Extra since the map doesn't feel the same without them as it was used to :<

Hi there~~ mod from queue~

General:
There're THREE insane diffs showed in beatmap information page.. I heard it's not allowed..u may need to reduce the difficult of hard.

Audio Lead-in: 1s (1000)...2s is too long for this song... it's suggested to leave approx 2s between the beginning of song and first note.

Make sure all diffs have same countdown setting... i suggest to disable all.

Lack of source...sorry i cannot find where it come from...just leave it here D:

You have same combo colors... i'm not sure if that's allowed or not


Hard:
AR-1, HP-1，OD-1

01:00:534 (6) - insert a break here
01:10:639 (2) - ^

01:26:586 (6,7) - this style may be not allowed in hard diff...confusing

01:30:217 (4) - move to stack with the beginning of 01:30:376 (5) -

01:54:376 (4) - Ctrl+r? keep the same

01:56:270 (5) - NC

02:02:270 (9) - break

02:13:007 (6,7) - style

02:46:165 (3) - break
02:48:060 (1) - ^


Insane:
02:04:376 (3,4) - stack together or more closer?


Extra:
omg 24M Max score...for APP?

BUT, Really a wonderful map! I cannot find anything unrankable...maybe ..overmapping a little?



that's all, I like these this map, GL, star~

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue~

General:
There're THREE insane diffs showed in beatmap information page.. I heard it's not allowed..u may need to reduce the difficult of hard. I don't think that rule applies in this case since the extra stage is meant for approval (?) + N + I + I (+I) is okay in my opinion Might need more opinions to this[/color]

Audio Lead-in: 1s (1000)...2s is too long for this song... it's suggested to leave approx 2s between the beginning of song and first note. Fixed

Make sure all diffs have same countdown setting... i suggest to disable all. Fixed.. How could I miss that? lol

Lack of source...sorry i cannot find where it come from...just leave it here D: Yeah well the song is grabbed from Soundcloud which I wouldn't define valid for "source". It's like putting youtube as source.

You have same combo colors... i'm not sure if that's allowed or not It's mainly for the color's orders... Like not having such a big gap in color's tones. Dunno if that makes any sense lol. Oh well I fix that anyway


Hard:
AR-1, HP-1，OD-1 Fixed

01:00:534 (6) - insert a break here Fixed
01:10:639 (2) - ^ Fixed

01:26:586 (6,7) - this style may be not allowed in hard diff...confusing Fixed

01:30:217 (4) - move to stack with the beginning of 01:30:376 (5) - Fixed

01:54:376 (4) - Ctrl+r? keep the same Fixed

01:56:270 (5) - NC Fixed

02:02:270 (9) - break Fixed

02:13:007 (6,7) - style Fixed

02:46:165 (3) - break Fixed
02:48:060 (1) - ^ Fixed


Insane:
02:04:376 (3,4) - stack together or more closer? Fixed


Extra:
omg 24M Max score...for APP? Yeap it is as stated in front page

BUT, Really a wonderful map! I cannot find anything unrankable...maybe ..overmapping a little? ^^



that's all, I like these this map, GL, star~

Thanks for modding!

hi~
from my queue

Easy
00:02:586 ,00:03:217 - add a circle
00:03:533 (3) - delete
02:34:796 (1) ~ 00:40:165 - a little hard for beginner cause the BPM is 190
00:59:744 (1,2) - not so good this sliders in Easy
01:02:269 (1,2,3,4) - to 01:01:954 -
01:06:376 (1) - delete
01:09:217 (2) - ,01:10:796 (1),01:52:481 (1) - same as 00:59:744 (1,2)
01:17:744 - ,01:19:638 - ,01:20:270 - ,01:20:901 - add a circle ( delete 01:20:270 (2) - )
02:05:112 (3) - 1grid down the slider tick (x:328 y:208)

Normal
remapping if you can

Hard
01:06:376 (8) - Ctrl+ J
01:09:534 (10) - NC
01:10:165 (1) - remove NC

Insane
Good

Extra
sorry, i can't mod FOR APPROVAL Map

that's all..
good luck~

Star Stream wrote:

hi~
from my queue

Easy
00:02:586 ,00:03:217 - add a circle Fixed on 02:586
00:03:533 (3) - delete
02:34:796 (1) ~ 00:40:165 - a little hard for beginner cause the BPM is 190 Fixed
00:59:744 (1,2) - not so good this sliders in Easy Fixed
01:02:269 (1,2,3,4) - to 01:01:954 - Fixed
01:06:376 (1) - delete Fixed
01:09:217 (2) - ,01:10:796 (1),01:52:481 (1) - same as 00:59:744 (1,2)
01:17:744 - ,01:19:638 - ,01:20:270 - ,01:20:901 - add a circle ( delete 01:20:270 (2) - )
02:05:112 (3) - 1grid down the slider tick (x:328 y:208) Fixed

Normal
remapping if you can Hmm? Is the difficulty that bad?

Hard
01:06:376 (8) - Ctrl+ J Fixed
01:09:534 (10) - NC Fixed
01:10:165 (1) - remove NC Fixed

Insane
Good

Extra
sorry, i can't mod FOR APPROVAL Map

that's all..
good luck~

Thanks for modding, sir

Extra

01:12:060 (1) - not exactly sure why you need to have all this combo spamming here.
02:31:007 (3) - new combo

--omg awesome diff. All this confusing spacing really makes this diff all the more fun to play imo. I really don't want to touch the spacing and overlaps at all to be honest. I love it the way it is.

Insane

00:09:534 (3) - i would delete note, doesn't really fit imo. You can then add a newcombo on the next note
00:25:323 (5) - slider is somewhat hidden.
02:27:534 (4) - I really can't help but realize the slider is going down, and i feel like there would be much more impact if it went up (or if you changed this slider into a 1/8 tick repeat slider or something)

Hard

00:08:586 (1,1,2,3) - seems a little confusing.
00:30:376 (1,2) - you could try something like this so that you can add a note at 00:31:480. http://puu.sh/borB
01:00:691 - Add a note? also, to be honest, i feel like removing this break adds more suspense and makes the song more interestnig imo.
01:36:534 (6,7,8,1) - could be a little confusing for not as experienced players.
01:39:534 (10) - turn this into a slider that ends at 01:39:691 - ?
02:47:112 - remove these two breaks..?

Normal

00:23:428 - this is awkward without a note imo.
00:25:954 - ^
00:31:007 - ^
00:54:691 (5) - new combo? this combo is a little long
01:00:691 - i like it beter if you removed this break :/ you could also add a note here.
01:24:691 (1,2) - beginners will misread this as 1/2 tick apart
01:52:480 (1,2,3,4) - end all sliders at the same point
02:03:849 (1,2,3,4) - erm... confusing for a beginner. try this? http://puu.sh/bouc
02:49:638 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

--a little above the 10 minute limit, but Easy looks pretty much fine, so yea.

Awesom map! :3 gogorank

02:26:586 - this part... omg <3

Thanks for the mod, winber1

I'll apply the changes next week when I have time

winber1 wrote:

Extra

01:12:060 (1) - not exactly sure why you need to have all this combo spamming here. I agree actually :p
02:31:007 (3) - new combo okies

--omg awesome diff. All this confusing spacing really makes this diff all the more fun to play imo. I really don't want to touch the spacing and overlaps at all to be honest. I love it the way it is.

Insane

00:09:534 (3) - i would delete note, doesn't really fit imo. You can then add a newcombo on the next note
00:25:323 (5) - slider is somewhat hidden. fiiix
02:27:534 (4) - I really can't help but realize the slider is going down, and i feel like there would be much more impact if it went up (or if you changed this slider into a 1/8 tick repeat slider or something) ctrl+r'd

Hard

00:08:586 (1,1,2,3) - seems a little confusing. fixed
00:30:376 (1,2) - you could try something like this so that you can add a note at 00:31:480. http://puu.sh/borB i prefer to keep it
01:00:691 - Add a note? also, to be honest, i feel like removing this break adds more suspense and makes the song more interestnig imo. fixed
01:36:534 (6,7,8,1) - could be a little confusing for not as experienced players. fixed
01:39:534 (10) - turn this into a slider that ends at 01:39:691 - ? fixed
02:47:112 - remove these two breaks..? fixed

Normal

00:23:428 - this is awkward without a note imo. fixed
00:25:954 - ^ fixed
00:31:007 - ^ fixed
00:54:691 (5) - new combo? this combo is a little long fixed
01:00:691 - i like it beter if you removed this break :/ you could also add a note here. fixed
01:24:691 (1,2) - beginners will misread this as 1/2 tick apart fixed
01:52:480 (1,2,3,4) - end all sliders at the same point fixed
02:03:849 (1,2,3,4) - erm... confusing for a beginner. try this? http://puu.sh/bouc Fixed with some changes
02:49:638 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

--a little above the 10 minute limit, but Easy looks pretty much fine, so yea.

Awesom map! :3 gogorank

02:26:586 - this part... omg <3

Thanks for the mod once again!

Hi zapy, do you want me to make a taiko for this?

Backfire wrote:

Hi zapy, do you want me to make a taiko for this?

No. Sorry.

Zapy wrote:

Backfire wrote:

Hi zapy, do you want me to make a taiko for this?

No. Sorry.

You should let him, he's good at making taikos and it doesn't hurt to have one.

Zapy said he didn't want one, it's alright c:

WHY ISN'T THIS RANKED YET

so... Star

Do NOT ask why this took so long, please. :3 Sorry for the wait, however.

Queue~

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I'll start of by saying good song choice and great map.

[Timing]

Hey, try an off-set of 1310. That's a -13 ms difference.I'll be modding in the new off-set time.

[General]

Consider turning up the volume by 5-10%? I know it's at 70 so the hitsounds don't overpower the music, but frankly right now the music is overpowering the hitsounds. I can't really hear them, mostly in the Easy+Normal diffs.

[Easy]

00:34:467 (1) - Is this meant to be not aligned? If not, one grid right please.
01:07:625 (1,2) - You should disable grid snap to move the first point back so it'll be symmetrical.
01:38:257 (2) - Again is this meant not to be aligned to (1)?
01:54:363 (2) - Consider adding a whistle to the entire slider?
01:56:889 (2) - ^
01:59:415 (2) - ^
02:02:257 (2) - I would shorten the slider to stress that "drop" in the song.
02:14:573 (3) - One grid down so it's on the same placement as (2).
02:16:783 (1) - Please move this further away from the previous slider? And if you care about slider Nazism, then there's a line in that slider that isn't perfectly straight.

[Normal]

01:18:362 (2) - Eh, put the clap on the other end of the slider?
01:20:257 (4,5) - ^
01:24:678 (1,2) - Maybe a clap on the ends of both of these? Yeah, this next part needs some hitsounds.
01:52:467 - 02:01:310 - Be cool if you put a clap on the ends of all of these.

[Hard]

00:11:415 - 00:20:257 - Needs hitsounds. No wait, the entire map needs hitsounds lol.
02:26:889 (1) - Since this is a Hard map, you should probably shorten this slider and make it repeat once more.

[Insane]

02:09:363 (3) - Disable grid snap so you can get this perfectly on the end of (1).
02:09:836 (5) - ^, but this time so it's on (3).
02:27:521 (4) - I feel ou're losing a lot of rhythmic potential by just using a straight slider. I'd recommend making a stream that fits this rhythm, a slider that fits the rhythm, or maybe even increasing the slider velocity to then just use a slider.
02:46:152 (3) - No grid snap so this can be on (1).
02:46:468 (4) - ^ so it can end on (2).

[Extra]

Sorry, I'm not experienced enough to mod Approval maps, I might mess up the modding. :S

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I love this map! I'm out of KD, but if you KD this post, I'll definitely star this map!

SuperMICrophone wrote:

Do NOT ask why this took so long, please. :3 Sorry for the wait, however.

Queue~

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I'll start of by saying good song choice and great map.

[Timing]

Hey, try an off-set of 1310. That's a -13 ms difference.I'll be modding in the new off-set time.Changed it after listening closely to it. Seems better

[General]

Consider turning up the volume by 5-10%? I know it's at 70 so the hitsounds don't overpower the music, but frankly right now the music is overpowering the hitsounds. I can't really hear them, mostly in the Easy+Normal diffs. I'll look into this later

[Easy] Applied all of these

00:34:467 (1) - Is this meant to be not aligned? If not, one grid right please.
01:07:625 (1,2) - You should disable grid snap to move the first point back so it'll be symmetrical.
01:38:257 (2) - Again is this meant not to be aligned to (1)?
01:54:363 (2) - Consider adding a whistle to the entire slider?
01:56:889 (2) - ^
01:59:415 (2) - ^
02:02:257 (2) - I would shorten the slider to stress that "drop" in the song.
02:14:573 (3) - One grid down so it's on the same placement as (2).
02:16:783 (1) - Please move this further away from the previous slider? And if you care about slider Nazism, then there's a line in that slider that isn't perfectly straight.

[Normal] Applied completely.

01:18:362 (2) - Eh, put the clap on the other end of the slider?
01:20:257 (4,5) - ^
01:24:678 (1,2) - Maybe a clap on the ends of both of these? Yeah, this next part needs some hitsounds.
01:52:467 - 02:01:310 - Be cool if you put a clap on the ends of all of these.

[Hard] Agreed and added more hs too

00:11:415 - 00:20:257 - Needs hitsounds. No wait, the entire map needs hitsounds lol.
02:26:889 (1) - Since this is a Hard map, you should probably shorten this slider and make it repeat once more.

[Insane] Yeap, thanks for having accurate eye, lol.

02:09:363 (3) - Disable grid snap so you can get this perfectly on the end of (1).
02:09:836 (5) - ^, but this time so it's on (3).
02:27:521 (4) - I feel ou're losing a lot of rhythmic potential by just using a straight slider. I'd recommend making a stream that fits this rhythm, a slider that fits the rhythm, or maybe even increasing the slider velocity to then just use a slider. I applied this. I hope it's okay.
02:46:152 (3) - No grid snap so this can be on (1).
02:46:468 (4) - ^ so it can end on (2).

[Extra]

Sorry, I'm not experienced enough to mod Approval maps, I might mess up the modding. :S

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I love this map! I'm out of KD, but if you KD this post, I'll definitely star this map!

Thanks a bunch for modding! I did some little tweaks on Insane and Extra too, mostly regarding Insane's overlengthy combos. Oh and some volume tweaking.

Great map, star~

I'm back.

General

1. Find a more plain background, it's way too hard to see stuff on it.

Easy

1. This Easy still needs a lot of work. It's not consistent enough, and there are some parts that are significantly harder than others. I suggest either redo-ing it or getting someone else to make you a guest Easy.

Normal's nice.

Hard

1. 02:04:388 (2) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.
2. 02:50:178 (2) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.

Insane

1. 02:04:388 (3) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.
2. 02:12:362 (4) - This slider is barely visible. Make it clearer please.
3. 02:23:731 (5,6) - These are hard to see, make them more clear like this maybe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/253529
4. 02:27:520 (4,5,6,7,8) - Make this a repeat slider instead, the beat isn't clear here.
5. 02:50:178 (3) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.
   

Extra

1. 02:04:388 (3) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.
2. 02:50:178 (3) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.
3. 00:41:731 to 00:51:836 - Augh! This is so confusing! Please make it more readable Q_Q
4. 00:54:678 (3) - This slider is very hard to read because it is directly under the previous. Please consider making it more visible.
5. 01:35:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is pain. Please do something else here...
6. 01:40:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same as above. This kills me every time.
7. 02:05:810 (2,4) - Remove these, they don't work well at all.
8. 02:08:494 (14,15) - Reverse these please
   
   Things seems randomly placed, it's gonna be hard to get this approved.

Charles445 wrote:

I'm back.

General

1. Find a more plain background, it's way too hard to see stuff on it.

Easy

1. This Easy still needs a lot of work. It's not consistent enough, and there are some parts that are significantly harder than others. I suggest either redo-ing it or getting someone else to make you a guest Easy.

Normal's nice.

Hard

1. 02:04:388 (2) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.
2. 02:50:178 (2) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.

Insane

1. 02:04:388 (3) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.
2. 02:12:362 (4) - This slider is barely visible. Make it clearer please. Fixed
3. 02:23:731 (5,6) - These are hard to see, make them more clear like this maybe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/253529 Fixed
4. 02:27:520 (4,5,6,7,8) - Make this a repeat slider instead, the beat isn't clear here. Replaced with a slider that it used to be
5. 02:50:178 (3) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.

Extra

1. 02:04:388 (3) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.
2. 02:50:178 (3) - This is snapped wrongly! Put it on the 1/3 please.
3. 00:41:731 to 00:51:836 - Augh! This is so confusing! Please make it more readable Q_Q Some players actually do fc it on the first try. Seen it
4. 00:54:678 (3) - This slider is very hard to read because it is directly under the previous. Please consider making it more visible. Fixed this
5. 01:35:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is pain. Please do something else here... I'll consider this
6. 01:40:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same as above. This kills me every time.
7. 02:05:810 (2,4) - Remove these, they don't work well at all. I removed them once before. I actually got requests for putting them back
8. 02:08:494 (14,15) - Reverse these please Yeah sure
   
   Things seems randomly placed, it's gonna be hard to get this approved.

Anyways the extra diff is not meant to be an average insane diffy in the first place. So I'm sorry I reject some of the mods considering it.

Thanks for keeping up with this map for so long though!