1. Bitter Dance (7.43 stars, 1842 notes)

DarkestMagi wrote:

Hi
Small mod because the map looks pretty clean to me. I'm not a big fan of the overlapping patterns but that might just be my perspective as a player; it seems alright with the song.

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00:21:675 - this bit doesn't really fit with the music, https://puu.sh/tggjw/8b893b8a23.png (in 1/6) sounds much nicer to me + the musical pattern shows up 2 more times immediately after. It seems like you partially mapped to those patterns but I believe you should either use them or ignore them I don't really get it, I tried your idea, but didn't really like it. Still I get what you're saying. I may need to change it later
00:23:874 (1) - to 00:24:973 (5) - same as above, I don't hear the triples and there's a neat intense part in the music that's being ignored, tough less noticeable/serious than aboveSame as above
02:52:774 - Spacing change is a bit abrupt here compared to the others Fixed. Thanks
04:16:649 - and 04:17:277 - are odd patterns, not really consistent with all the other triplesFixed. That was stupid of me. Wanted to try something new, didn't work out.
04:54:031 - boring and un-fun pattern imo :< Thanks for your opinion. If more people complain, I'll change it. But that focuses on repetitive precise aim, which was one of the points of this. I wanted to exemplify geometry and precise aim in this map.
05:04:162 - Is there supposed to be a note here? Looks like probably got accidentally deleted. Fixed. Nice Catch.

-Sakurasaki wrote:

M4M from #modreq

GENERAL :

1. Consider more spacing on high-bpm maps, which are the most rigorous to judge when a BN checks its quality. Will do, Thanks.
2.the only thing to keep in mind are the tags and the shape of your sliders.


After that, all is well.

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00:10:209 - Important sound without mapping Fixed.
00:15:078 (1,2,3) - this is a bit confusing, try to separate them more That was a problem with the stack leniency between (1,3,5,7) but I fixed it. The pattern should be more visible now.
00:43:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - because the sudden change in the streams ?, there is no considerable sound to change the way you should follow.I kinda focused the map on cursor speed changes, so I want to keep this.
00:44:607 (1,2) - consider the space towards 00:44:921 (3,4) - which is very difficult to click. Fixed, sort of...
00:52:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - you changed the linear form that was perfect maintain it like the previous patterns At the end of the previous measure, I switched from linear to triangular. I'll be keeping this one.
00:54:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - the space is much in comparison to the previous patterns. Fixed.
01:42:094 (1,2) - these jump are acceptable but would look better as 01:41:780 (1,2) - with more spacing between notes I was playing with the midpoints of each combo, but I get what you are saying about the spacing. At 01:42:094 (1,2), I reversed the selection, which allowed for the spacing while maintaining the geometry.
02:01:570 (4,1) - separates the reverse of the stream, it is difficult to hit the note taking into account the bpm that has the song Don't really get your point here. Are you talking about the first note in the stream that is hidden? If so, I've fixed it.
02:18:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the spacing between the notes is too much and is not rankeable Seriously? I need to confirm this.
02:18:691 (7,1) - the same, it would be better to unite or narrow their spacing to the minimum I'll fix the stream, but I think this jump is fine.
02:38:167 (8,1) - reduce space more I think this is fine.
02:38:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - would look better as a perfect star or triangles in rotation Yeah that was a weird jump, so I fixed it.
03:21:125 (1) - should start on 03:21:047 - Fixed.
03:35:026 (2) - Align with 03:35:183 (3) - Don't get it.
04:16:963 (5) - Ctrl + G, Makes sense.
04:25:602 (4,5) - Too much space between the notes does not allow time to click on the note Reduced the distance a little.
04:55:916 (13,14,15,16) - from here these jumps are no longer rankeables and monstrata knows I believe you
04:58:429 (13,14) - Ctrl + G Fixed.
05:02:198 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - it's a good idea to start the streams with the spacing but try to make them a bit, Little more glued without losing that spacing so that they are clickable. Can you clarify?
05:32:356 (3) - a small blanket.

Hahaha , fixed the overlap. Thanks

Good Luck , is a verry subarashi map >w</

Nostalgic wrote:

Belated mod

1. Try to refer to this map and you will have a better idea how this song can be mapped
2. Offset should be 56 or something. I am not very good at timing but it's definitely not 0 Fixed
3. resize your bg into 1366x768 Will fix later
4. Disable countdown Fixed
5. Source: KAKATTEKOYEAH!!!! Updated
6. Due to the unplayable offset I didn't do a testplay. I will just mention the obvious
7. 00:07:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try not to overlap. Fixed.
8. 00:13:821 afterwards: you ignore a lot of interesting wub sounds in the background. This song is way more than 1/2 jump spams and occasion 1/4 streams like SLIDERS, SV CHANGES AND ANTIJUMPS It's been a while since I've edited this song, but after getting a lot more mapping ideas and experimentation, I do agree that this song has potential for more stuff other than the general things. I'll be working on them.
9. 00:21:675 (2,3,4,5) - don't stack Kinda disagree, more because I don't know how to lead into the rest. Do you have an idea?
10. 00:42:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - why the spacing changes when the music has no variation at all? The spacing of the stream should never be that random
11. 00:58:586 (6,7) - ctrl g? why break the flow here?
12. 01:42:879 (4) - ????
13. 01:43:115 (1) - break time instead of spinner
14. 01:58:743 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this stream flow is awful. It looks like you simply turn on the distance snap and put circles. This is not how you map streams. MAKE GOOD USE OF CTRL SHIFT F
15. 02:20:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
16. 02:52:774 (8,9,10,11,12) - This is the definition of overmapping. There's no 1/4 sounds whatsoever
17. 03:21:047 (1) - remove it
18. I guess I will just stop here. Instead let's talk about three major ideas on how you create a map, namely rhythm, pattern and intensity. First, the rhythm choice of this map is simply bad. Sometimes you ignore some of the most important yet interesting sounds. Or else you pack the whole map with highscore jumps and streams. Let not forget half of this song is wub. When it comes to pattern what I can say is boring. Those stars // 1-2 jumps // rabbit jumps aren't even best fitted the rhythm. Lastly, songs have high and low, maps should be able to represent the intensity of the songs. While some sections in your map are more jumpy than the others it doesn't really reflect the intensity at all. In spite of spacing, sv and patterns are also great to show the intensity of the song.
    
    For those experienced mappers they have played almost every single ranked map and also a lot of unranked maps so as to produce such great quality of maps. Most of them can also play their maps well cuz they are well aware of what they are doing. You gotta have some advance knowledge about this game to fully understand why maps have such sv changes/ ds/ rhythm intensity/ difficulty spike/ flow etc. I am not trying to discourage you but both your map and mine still have a long way to go in order to successfully get ranked.

Good luck

KeyLoGreen wrote:

Change offset to 23ms :^)