Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV size) · forum

KaedekaShizuru

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2017-01-08T07:19:49+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年2月14日星期二 at 19:40:20

Artist: Oku Hanako
Title: Kimi no Hana (TV size)
Source: セイレン
Tags: seiren 清恋 DreaM117er Pata-Mon anime opening short ver
BPM: 153.99
Filesize: 12269kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

117's Hard (2.92 stars, 220 notes)
Love (3.89 stars, 297 notes)
Normal (1.56 stars, 112 notes)
Pata-Mon's Advanced (2.33 stars, 211 notes)

Download: Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV size)
Download: Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#14
Wish you a Sweet Love
Happy Valentine's Day~
Map this song only for Oku Hanako.
See also an other map set here: 奥華子 - キミの花 (TV size) by Del05

佐仓一屁股坐在了我的桌子上从此我爱上了学习
那个……宫前学姐，车爆胎了……
向女装男主低头

Lyrics

キミの花TV size
詞/曲：奧華子
編曲：森本隆寛
もう僕のこの胸は　どこにも逃げない　君へと向かうよ
今　駆け出してゆける　恋する場所へと　何度でも

初めて君を見た瞬間のこと　スローモーションみたいに全てが
僕の頭の中にインプットされてく　君の髪も　笑う横顔も

教室に響く声たち　すぐに君を探し出せる

会うたび君を好きになって　小さな手に触れたくて
君の声が　風に煌めく花のように
儚げで　だけど強く　輝き続けてるから
いつだって　僕だって　その手をちゃんと握り締めたい

This map get a Achievement: Qualified on Valentine's Day
Advanced by Pata-Mon.
Hard by DreaM117er.
Video by Shad0w1and.

Last edited by KaedekaShizuru 2017-03-27T06:42:05+00:00, edited 24 times in total.

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2017-01-17T07:18:28+00:00

2.93* 音效不下啦

117's Hard

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 50091,62170,73859
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi no Hana
TitleUnicode:キミの花
Artist:Oku Hanako
ArtistUnicode:奥華子
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:117's Hard
Source:セイレン
Tags:seiren
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"optc.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-01-17T15:53:03+00:00

结果还是用了自己的音效组

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2017-01-18T10:21:36+00:00

GD update
set ready
二位辛苦了

WTF iTunes are you joking me ???

I need someone's help about the metadata.

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2017-01-19T09:36:02+00:00

摸个鱼

截图用的puush，可能要代理才能看到

00:11:905 - 不考虑来点钢琴？就2个音可以随手加一下

[Love]
00:02:164 (1) - 个人觉得flow朝上而不是向下比较舒服，因此顺时针旋转一定角度后再调整
00:17:750 (1) - 这里就接应上一个combo而言应该再顺时针旋转20度，但这样又太倾斜不配合下一个note，所以建议是：变成弯的

SPOILER

00:23:984 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个有点莫名其妙感觉，还是combo内间距一致，下一个combo再缩小，毕竟不是渐进往返跳
00:25:933 (2,3,4,5,6) - 摆成等边菱形
00:29:342 (3) - 个人觉得放在00:29:537 - 比较舒服合曲，经验是比较舒缓的曲子一般三连白线起
00:41:811 (4) - ^
00:30:803 (3,4,5,6,7) - ctrl+shift+d，no need to explain
00:34:700 (6,1) - 觉得逆时针旋转一点比较舒服，让6的尖头微微偏向左边，flow比较流畅
00:38:596 (2,3,4,5,6) - 丑
00:47:753 - 00:48:143 - 00:48:532 - 00:48:922 - 你需要一个较低音量的crash，翻音效包吧
00:49:312 - 这个怎么样？http://puu.sh/trAVe/7b6b6034b2.wav
01:07:430 (1) - 把白锚点提升，更对称的形状

SPOILER

01:25:159 (3) - 放到下面来（x:104, y:356左右）更舒服感觉

[117‘s Hard]
01:02:170 (5) - 感觉容易当成1/2，用0.75x吧？

[Normal]
01:26:328 (3,4) - 对称

加油吧
匿了

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2017-01-20T02:39:32+00:00

同楼上

没看metadata 见谅。

不知道是曲子还是mp3问题，结尾像是有音被吞掉了。最好能再接个fading。（还有我老感觉这人唱歌跑掉啊233）
[Normal]
00:26:322 (2,3) - 主要是这种节奏的问题，在这个段落里面的这种节奏。本来音乐是节奏加快的，但是这个滑条本身的存在使得不确定什么时候才能结束滑条，因为每个1/2上面基本都有人声，所以其实本身你也在忽略一些，这里也不太需要cover到全部的vocal。何况后边也没有完全cover鼓声。这里一定要跟鼓的话显得得不偿失。这里我的想法如下：

SPOILER

00:45:025 - 其实要是跟vocal的话，我觉得这种节奏型应该更合适，因为原来的打击点有点奇怪，没有起在人声甚至鼓点上面。

SPOILER

[Pata-Mon's Advanced]
有些音轨跟的不是很清楚。
00:36:648 - 打击起于这里有点奇怪，我觉得这个音应该是附属于前一个note的，也就是这里可以这么安排

SPOILER

00:45:025 - 不知道为啥这里miss过两次，有一次还直接fail了。可能是换气声太像人声了，本身这里就有点tricky吧，可以的话试试map全beat，毕竟也是条白线。
[117's Hard]
00:13:074 - 这里开始的音效音量不够，听上去打击感不够充分。
[Love]
00:26:322 (4) - 不知道为啥我觉得拉远一点会好打一些，可能跟音乐buildup有关系，也可能跟本身这种flow不是很好打有关系。

SPOILER

00:49:701 (3,4,5,6) - 我是觉得这四个太近了，反而不好抓flow。按说这种地方不是可以跳开的么，就算不跳开，也尽量不要太靠近。两个一组的stack也是可以的。
01:15:028 - 个人觉得这里不用NC。这里没有那么剧烈的变化，也不用过分强调。

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2017-01-20T04:11:23+00:00

Loved

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2017-01-20T04:28:18+00:00

Can you get a better mp3? The end just disappears and doesn't really feel natural enough. Some fade out would work better if possible.

Normal.
00:03:333 (4) - etc - Due to the low sv, such 1/2 sliders are having a really short visual length. I'd say such aspects not to be really beginner friendly due to the need of effort to read that it is a slider afterall. Beginners wouldn't be much used to gameplay elements, and a slider without a path wouldn't be familiar to see.
00:29:829 - Clap?
01:01:391 (3,1) - Despite the consistent spacing, I think the actual spacing is too far for beginners to properly aim it. Mind making a closer spacing?
01:02:949 - You've used a 1.2x sv multiplier and the base spacing has also really increased. I wouldn't feel such constantly large spacings to be beginner friendly.. Considering this being the lowest diff in this mapset, a remap using a 1.00x sv multiplier is recommended from me.

Pata.
01:02:949 - From this section.. I feel a huge portion of snare sounds weren't expressed as a hitsound due to your custom settings. Such as 01:03:339 - 01:04:118 - etcetc you'll know what parts I'm saying. Totally ignoring those didn't felt like expressing the music properly, and I recommend you to express those with a hitsound as other diffs did.

117.
01:22:821 (3,4) - I feel a 3/4 slider on (3) would be better to express the vocals, but it's up to you.

Love.
00:53:598 (1,3) - Consider making the slider curve rate consistent. Using a different slider concept felt a little unpolished.

Not bad overall. Good luck with this~

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2017-01-24T07:14:47+00:00

Just comments.
Personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable points.

General

check AI mod
推荐bg用waifu2x放大一波

Normal

00:28:660 (1) - 推荐更换一个节奏
01:14:639 (4,1) - hitsound

Pata-Mon's Advanced

01:00:611 (3) - 和2堆叠
01:15:321 - add a note

117's Hard

01:13:080 (5,6) - ？

Love

01:15:125 (2) - 去掉这个一样好玩，没必要的overmap
01:14:639 (5,1) - hitsound

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2017-01-24T14:30:59+00:00

送

Normal

00:03:333 (4) - 00:09:567 (4) - 作为最低难度还是不推荐1/2滑条，新人很容易拉断尾的。真的。建议强行忽略鼓点，改成圈。00:51:649 (2) - 00:54:767 (2) -

117's Hard

00:17:750 (1,2) - nazi，感觉可以再包好点
00:28:271 (4) - 试试这个？这样在音乐转折的地方flow没那么顺，感觉会好一些。
01:20:873 (5) - 试试ctrl+g？

Love

00:16:776 (1) - 要不去掉吧。感觉这里留出空拍的话节奏变化多一些，更好玩。
00:27:102 (1,2) - 建议换成折返，感觉更合曲。00:33:336 (1,2) - 同理

好久没听奥华子的歌了

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2017-01-25T06:29:01+00:00

~~star first, will mod when i am free~~
鸽了

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2017-01-29T09:21:31+00:00

我觉得sonnyc说的有点道理啊 MP3稍微结尾弄点淡出吧
至少你的normal和love应该都有个转盘不然draining都不一样长
[Normal]
od和ar有点高吧都-1？
[Advanced]
其他难度都开着widescreen support 不知道是你该开开还是其他难度应该关掉
[Hard]
00:07:424 (2) - 看了看其他地方这里好像应该是个圈而不是1/2滑条
01:08:794 (5) - 这个音人声是拖长的我觉得用1/2滑条比圈好
01:27:302 (3) - 有点坑要不要加个nc
[Love]
00:20:478 (5) - 其实我感觉也是滑条好
00:49:312 (2) - 拉远点至少和5到1差不多比较好
00:59:637 - 补个note吧前面空了这再空有点不合适
01:14:639 (5) - 用soft-finish, 别用drum 憋死了
01:27:107 (5) - 同上滑条头用soft

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2017-01-29T15:14:49+00:00

哦对了 title用不用加个(TV size.)?

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2017-01-29T15:53:51+00:00

先咕咕一下这两天天天跑亲戚……
I will reply all mods here
wait me

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2017-01-30T13:33:18+00:00

花花

Flower wrote:
摸个鱼

截图用的puush，可能要代理才能看到

00:11:905 - 不考虑来点钢琴？就2个音可以随手加一下找了一下音效包里居然没相配的……而且这是吉他吧

[Love]
00:02:164 (1) - 个人觉得flow朝上而不是向下比较舒服，因此顺时针旋转一定角度后再调整顺时针转了13度
00:17:750 (1) - 这里就接应上一个combo而言应该再顺时针旋转20度，但这样又太倾斜不配合下一个note，所以建议是：变成弯的 OK
SPOILER
00:23:984 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个有点莫名其妙感觉，还是combo内间距一致，下一个combo再缩小，毕竟不是渐进往返跳这段全部都是缩小的连续8个降调
00:25:933 (2,3,4,5,6) - 摆成等边菱形 OK
00:29:342 (3) - 个人觉得放在00:29:537 - 比较舒服合曲，经验是比较舒缓的曲子一般三连白线起不巧的是刚好这里有适合摆三连的弱音而00:29:537没有
00:41:811 (4) - ^ 同上
00:30:803 (3,4,5,6,7) - ctrl+shift+d，no need to explain regular polygons are not my style
00:34:700 (6,1) - 觉得逆时针旋转一点比较舒服，让6的尖头微微偏向左边，flow比较流畅思考
00:38:596 (2,3,4,5,6) - 丑
00:47:753 - 00:48:143 - 00:48:532 - 00:48:922 - 你需要一个较低音量的crash，翻音效包吧
00:49:312 - 这个怎么样？http://puu.sh/trAVe/7b6b6034b2.wav 插绿线调音量好了
01:07:430 (1) - 把白锚点提升，更对称的形状 OK
SPOILER
01:25:159 (3) - 放到下面来（x:104, y:356左右）更舒服感觉好

[Normal]
01:26:328 (3,4) - 对称好

加油吧
匿了

黄书

Atrue wrote:
同楼上

没看metadata 见谅。自行解决了

不知道是曲子还是mp3问题，结尾像是有音被吞掉了。最好能再接个fading。（还有我老感觉这人唱歌跑掉啊233）CD没出只能从动画里截取这没办法要等到2月22号 ~~谁会等啊喂~~ 顺便跑调你妹
[Normal]
00:26:322 (2,3) - 主要是这种节奏的问题，在这个段落里面的这种节奏。本来音乐是节奏加快的，但是这个滑条本身的存在使得不确定什么时候才能结束滑条，因为每个1/2上面基本都有人声，所以其实本身你也在忽略一些，这里也不太需要cover到全部的vocal。何况后边也没有完全cover鼓声。这里一定要跟鼓的话显得得不偿失。这里我的想法如下：
SPOILER
好果然还是这样最舒服了
00:45:025 - 其实要是跟vocal的话，我觉得这种节奏型应该更合适，因为原来的打击点有点奇怪，没有起在人声甚至鼓点上面。
SPOILER
改了
[Love]
00:26:322 (4) - 不知道为啥我觉得拉远一点会好打一些，可能跟音乐buildup有关系，也可能跟本身这种flow不是很好打有关系。
SPOILER
OK
00:49:701 (3,4,5,6) - 我是觉得这四个太近了，反而不好抓flow。按说这种地方不是可以跳开的么，就算不跳开，也尽量不要太靠近。两个一组的stack也是可以的。 keep 我觉得作为单点不算近了这地方更不适合跳两两stack让我考虑一下
01:15:028 - 个人觉得这里不用NC。这里没有那么剧烈的变化，也不用过分强调。好不NC了

Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:
Can you get a better mp3? The end just disappears and doesn't really feel natural enough. Some fade out would work better if possible.
sorry CD has not started selling, I can only get mp3 from video

Normal.
00:03:333 (4) - etc - Due to the low sv, such 1/2 sliders are having a really short visual length. I'd say such aspects not to be really beginner friendly due to the need of effort to read that it is a slider afterall. Beginners wouldn't be much used to gameplay elements, and a slider without a path wouldn't be familiar to see.
you're right, but I need them. I can't add a circle at 00:03:528 because of it‘s too close to 00:03:723 in NM/EZ, so I choose short sliders.
00:29:829 - Clap? hmm... sure
01:01:391 (3,1) - Despite the consistent spacing, I think the actual spacing is too far for beginners to properly aim it. Mind making a closer spacing?
but I suit the DS, here has enough blank time
01:02:949 - You've used a 1.2x sv multiplier and the base spacing has also really increased. I wouldn't feel such constantly large spacings to be beginner friendly.. Considering this being the lowest diff in this mapset, a remap using a 1.00x sv multiplier is recommended from me. ok, back to 1.0

Love.
00:53:598 (1,3) - Consider making the slider curve rate consistent. Using a different slider concept felt a little unpolished. OK

Not bad overall. Good luck with this~

爱抚

yf_bmp wrote:
Just comments.
Personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable points.
General
check AI mod 巴达萌背锅
推荐bg用waifu2x放大一波好吧
Normal
00:28:660 (1) - 推荐更换一个节奏我觉得这个挺好的
01:14:639 (4,1) - hitsound ？？没少啊

Love
01:15:125 (2) - 去掉这个一样好玩，没必要的overmap 爱抚你这样很没良心知道吗（摔
01:14:639 (5,1) - hitsound ？？所以说没少啊？

Adol Christin

Adol Christin wrote:
送

Normal
00:03:333 (4) - 00:09:567 (4) - 作为最低难度还是不推荐1/2滑条，新人很容易拉断尾的。真的。建议强行忽略鼓点，改成圈。00:51:649 (2) - 00:54:767 (2) -
你说的我懂 sonnyc也说了不重复

Love
00:16:776 (1) - 要不去掉吧。感觉这里留出空拍的话节奏变化多一些，更好玩。我要糊满
00:27:102 (1,2) - 建议换成折返，感觉更合曲。00:33:336 (1,2) - 同理 hard我会 insane就no了 sry

好久没听奥华子的歌了

妹

imoutosan wrote:
我觉得sonnyc说的有点道理啊 MP3稍微结尾弄点淡出吧编辑MP3什么的太麻烦不搞 CD没发售呢只能从动画里截取只能这样咯
至少你的normal和love应该都有个转盘不然draining都不一样长好
[Normal]
od和ar有点高吧都-1？ OD-0.5吧 AR不动

[Love]
00:20:478 (5) - 其实我感觉也是滑条好这里给我休止的感觉挺强的不是没考虑过slider 想想还是circle好了
00:49:312 (2) - 拉远点至少和5到1差不多比较好 5跟1那个距离是作为小节间的放这俩之间就大了……拉远不过没那么大
00:59:637 - 补个note吧前面空了这再空有点不合适不不前面空了这里不应该也空么
01:14:639 (5) - 用soft-finish, 别用drum 憋死了 soft那个嚓音不对把
01:27:107 (5) - 同上滑条头用soft 同上

imoutosan wrote:
哦对了 title用不用加个(TV size.)?
CD没发售title不明的情况下只能用full name 跟Kwan确认过的

thank you for mods

Last edited by KaedekaShizuru 2017-01-30T13:51:04+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-01-30T13:43:04+00:00

好来回摸
@黄书第一处00:36:648 - 这里有鼓+钢琴声，而后面那里没有，所以做成现在的节奏．后面那里白线并没有声，没声就不跟，读图是玩家的事
@sonnyc I prefer my hitsound now. I will consider if somebody else mentione this again.
@yf 01:00:611 (3) - 这里是重音，不跟前面叠．后面一处我这难度不打算放连打
@妹桑静流帮我改
no change
thanks for mod

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2017-01-31T05:50:38+00:00

@Flower: 01:02:170 (5) - 沒問題，大師 ((膜
@Ature: 音效我自己重下了
@Sonnyc: That part I think is fine, keep it. Thanks
@yf: 沒問題，大神 ((膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜膜
@Adol Christin: 這些都是在遊玩上體會到的梗，我不會去動它們。flow的部分我也不動，不用完全包好才好

境留神麻破

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61975
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi no Hana
TitleUnicode:キミの花
Artist:Oku Hanako
ArtistUnicode:奥華子
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:117's Hard
Source:セイレン
Tags:seiren 清恋 DreaM117er Pata-Mon anime opening tv size short ver
BeatmapID:1184042
BeatmapSetID:555792

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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344,339,17555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,267,17750,6,0,P|418:249|510:244,1,107.999996704102
463,325,18334,2,0,P|452:274|441:201,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,141,18919,2,0,P|440:132|413:130,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,73,19309,6,0,P|331:90|259:97,1,107.999996704102
184,57,19893,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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360,370,22231,1,2,0:1:0:0:
433,324,22426,5,2,0:1:0:0:
256,192,22523,12,0,23984,0:0:0:0:
160,160,24374,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,160,24764,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,123,24959,2,0,P|74:91|69:54,2,53.9999983520508
49,207,25543,6,0,P|19:253|29:332,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,370,26127,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,334,26322,2,0,P|215:325|255:321,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,258,26907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,181,27102,6,0,P|232:185|296:202,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,153,27686,2,0,P|378:111|382:89,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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481,53,28271,2,0,P|469:95|465:117,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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401,346,29245,2,0,P|340:353|266:371,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
206,318,29829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,318,30024,6,0,P|146:309|63:292,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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97,73,30998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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313,300,37038,1,2,0:0:0:0:
313,300,37135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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480,277,44149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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434,72,45220,1,2,0:1:0:0:
500,11,45415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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203,126,46389,2,0,P|195:175|194:204,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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241,45,47266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,45,47363,6,0,P|183:29|123:22,1,120,2|8,0:1|3:2,0:0:0:0:
37,252,48143,2,0,P|96:244|154:229,1,120,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
236,193,48727,1,8,0:0:0:0:
275,273,48922,5,0,0:0:0:0:
193,310,49117,1,2,0:1:0:0:
236,193,49312,1,4,0:0:0:0:
495,347,49701,2,0,L|481:273,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,263,50091,2,0,L|400:322,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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289,29,51844,2,0,P|297:70|307:136,1,90.0000034332277,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,194,52429,1,2,0:1:0:0:
278,194,52818,2,0,P|270:235|260:301,1,90.0000034332277,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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229,111,55546,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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443,58,56130,2,0,P|467:63|493:65,2,45.0000017166138,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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61,278,59832,6,0,P|50:320|42:382,2,90.0000034332277,2|2|8,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,210,60806,1,2,0:0:0:0:
62,141,61001,2,0,P|37:136|0:132,1,45.0000017166138,0|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
105,210,61391,5,2,0:0:0:0:
184,196,61585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
225,126,61780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,45,61975,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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314,225,73859,6,0,P|351:193|446:191,1,138.000002632141,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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28,151,76002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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347,310,83211,6,0,P|403:312|462:249,1,138.000002632141,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2017-01-31T09:10:15+00:00

update
二位辛苦了

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 2017-02-01T13:08:59+00:00

Hi hi

Metadata --> http://www.tbs.co.jp/anime/seiren/music/cd01.html <-- キミの花（TVアニメ「セイレン」オープニングテーマ）

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2017-02-06T19:55:58+00:00

[General]

我試了把最後fade out你看看要不要換個mp3 https://reol.s-ul.eu/Zp5XB3Ks

[Normal]

00:15:802 (4,1) - 這兒的Flow打起來不是很順, 要不直接00:15:802 (4) - 尾向下吧
eg
00:35:674 - 沒音吧, 把00:35:479這個琴音也跟一下, 00:35:869 (3,4,5) - 這些都跟了
00:37:427 - 同上
00:45:220 (2,3) - 美麗的spacing
01:04:313 (3) - 01:07:430 (3) - 這些要不要拆成1/1+note配合vocal啊跟01:09:768 (2,4) 有個差別
01:12:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個疊的有點嚴重, 建議改改
01:16:782 (3,3) - 跟01:04:313 (3) - 01:07:430 (3) - 一樣
01:26:328 (3,4) - 這跟回vocal? 1/1+1/1+note

[Pata-Mon's Advanced]

00:14:633 (4) - Missing NC
00:20:478 (3,1) - 只是相差1/1還是不建議stack上
00:25:543 (1,2) - ^, 讓新手打這種和00:23:984 (1,2) - 肯定會混亂
整體沒問題, 唯一就是那些stack了

[117's Hard]

00:48:143 (2) - 不用這麼遠吧, 把角度調調
00:52:818 (5,1) - ^也是啊, 這裡也太靜

[Love]

00:18:919 (1,2) - NC錯了吧
00:23:984 (1,2,3,4) - 這個角度放得...還是要吐糟一下
01:20:873 - Finish

我是不是在聽dancing stars on me

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-02-07T11:24:46+00:00

唔……我个人觉得，Advanced毕竟是接近hard的难度．玩家在normal里需要会读最基本的stack，而在Advanced里应该开始学会处理不同间隔的stack，由于两个approaching circle都在一起，可以比较直观地看出1/1和1/2的区别，并不算那么的困难
另外我觉得在很多地方stack确实会更合曲一些，在两句之间使用会stack，playing的时候会有一种停顿的感觉，比较舒服；相对地，00:34:895 (1,2) - 这种我就不会使用stack，因为这两个音是在一句里．
所以如果可以的话我还是想保留现在的stack

@静流 00:14:633 (4) - 这里帮我加一下nc吧谢谢

谢摸~

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2017-02-07T12:23:50+00:00

Del05 wrote:
Hi hi

Metadata --> http://www.tbs.co.jp/anime/seiren/music/cd01.html <-- キミの花（TVアニメ「セイレン」オープニングテーマ）

that's great ! thank you~
but this screenshot from http://recochoku.jp/album/A1005793093/

Pata-Mon wrote:
@静流 00:14:633 (4) - 这里帮我加一下nc吧谢谢

搞定

Chaoslitz wrote:
[General]
我試了把最後fade out你看看要不要換個mp3 https://reol.s-ul.eu/Zp5XB3Ks 那啥码率美丽Orz
[Normal]
00:15:802 (4,1) - 這兒的Flow打起來不是很順, 要不直接00:15:802 (4) - 尾向下吧 OK 把00:16:191 (1) 也调了下
eg
00:35:674 - 沒音吧, 把00:35:479這個琴音也跟一下, 00:35:869 (3,4,5) - 這些都跟了
00:37:427 - 同上思考了下这段节奏重新下了抄D05的
00:45:220 (2,3) - 美麗的spacing 发现啦
01:04:313 (3) - 01:07:430 (3) - 這些要不要拆成1/1+note配合vocal啊跟01:09:768 (2,4) 有個差別听了几遍感觉还是算了 sry
01:12:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個疊的有點嚴重, 建議改改 后面整个都重新摆了
01:16:782 (3,3) - 跟01:04:313 (3) - 01:07:430 (3) - 一樣是一样的啊0.0？？
01:26:328 (3,4) - 這跟回vocal? 1/1+1/1+note OK
[117's Hard]
00:48:143 (2) - 不用這麼遠吧, 把角度調調
00:52:818 (5,1) - ^也是啊, 這裡也太靜
discuss with 117, all fixed
[Love]
00:18:919 (1,2) - NC錯了吧本来是打算类似00:15:997 (1,2) 这样的NC的不过你这么一说好像真没必要
00:23:984 (1,2,3,4) - 這個角度放得...還是要吐糟一下 233
01:20:873 - Finish ohh yes

我是不是在聽dancing stars on me
这是啥0.0

多谢~

Chaoslitz

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Chaoslitz 2017-02-08T14:19:21+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
唔……我个人觉得，Advanced毕竟是接近hard的难度．玩家在normal里需要会读最基本的stack，而在Advanced里应该开始学会处理不同间隔的stack...

重點是這個set沒有Easy, 而且Normal diff裡面一個stack都沒有
照你spread的說法現在的Advanced就不需要不同snapping的stack吧?

不是說不可以沒stack, 可是00:20:478 (3,1) - 00:25:543 (1,2) - 這些不同的NC的也用同一種stack我是不能接受的了

Edit: 剛剛看了看sonnyc的摸, 我也覺得kiai可以加上clap強調一下~~和避免戳泡~~

Pata-Mon

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Pata-Mon 2017-02-08T14:34:55+00:00

有道理．改了一些，现在所有nc处stack都是1/1，所有没nc的stack都是1/2
谢谢~

edit: 音效调了

https://puu.sh/tTS0g/34e183d05f.rar

Chaoslitz

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Chaoslitz 2017-02-08T16:30:28+00:00

Bubbled

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2017-02-13T09:32:45+00:00

hard.
can you add a spinner at the end for consistency with other difficulties?
od5.5 feels a bit too low for this kind of diff. mind increasing a little?

F D Flourite

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F D Flourite 2017-02-13T16:31:43+00:00

Seems that Sonnyc doesn't want to take care of this set (he told me) so let's start (But still be sure to reply to Sonnyc's recheck)

[General]

Disable all Widescreen Support if there is no storyboard.

[Normal]

有很多没用的绿线：00:24:179 - 00:24:569 - 00:24:959 - 00:25:348 - 00:47:948 - 00:48:337 - 00:48:727 - 00:49:117 - 00:49:896 - 00:50:286 - 01:01:975 -
00:08:398 (3) - 与底部acc bar亲密接触，看起来很像要超出屏幕了。最好把这一块调整一下，把这个滑条往上移一点

[Pata-mon's Advanced]

00:14:633 (4) - NC
00:19:309 (1) - finish on slider head
不太明白你怎么放clap的。如果说是跟着这段音乐的沉鼓点的话，那么00:31:388 (4) - 滑条尾要去掉clap，00:48:337 (2) - 滑条头要加上clap，等等。反正听起来还是比较违和。毕竟你这一段只用了沉音clap，所有的高音鼓点你全用whistle了。而这个whistle终究还是太轻了，导致你整个一大段听起来特别不平衡，低音音效太多。不过，你先改完consistency，其它的再说。

[117's Hard]

00:19:309 (1) - 滑条头normal-hitwhistle
01:06:846 (3) - ^
如sonnyc说的最后加一个转盘

[Love]

00:37:622 (5) - 把这个滑条的滚动方向往上带，让00:37:622 (5,1) - 有个小跳，大概如是
01:27:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉还是换个凹陷的方向比较好。毕竟01:27:107 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这种反flow在后面是滑条的情况下无所谓，在连打的情况下还是稍微注意一点好。

懒了懒了，快改吧

Pata-Mon

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Pata-Mon 2017-02-14T05:09:54+00:00

nc加了 finish没加，那段音乐很弱，也没听到明显的finish，感觉不加更好
中间段音效重新弄了下，之后那段是sample错了

谢摸

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KaedekaShizuru

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KaedekaShizuru 2017-02-14T10:02:53+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
hard.
can you add a spinner at the end for consistency with other difficulties?
od5.5 feels a bit too low for this kind of diff. mind increasing a little?

discuss with 117, add the spinner at the end; OD5.5→6

F D Flourite wrote:
Seems that Sonnyc doesn't want to take care of this set (he told me) so let's start (But still be sure to reply to Sonnyc's recheck)

[General]
Disable all Widescreen Support if there is no storyboard.
[Normal]
有很多没用的绿线：00:24:179 - 00:24:569 - 00:24:959 - 00:25:348 - 00:47:948 - 00:48:337 - 00:48:727 - 00:49:117 - 00:49:896 - 00:50:286 - 01:01:975 -
00:08:398 (3) - 与底部acc bar亲密接触，看起来很像要超出屏幕了。最好把这一块调整一下，把这个滑条往上移一点
[117's Hard]
00:19:309 (1) - 滑条头normal-hitwhistle
01:06:846 (3) - ^
如sonnyc说的最后加一个转盘
[Love]
00:37:622 (5) - 把这个滑条的滚动方向往上带，让00:37:622 (5,1) - 有个小跳，大概如是
01:27:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉还是换个凹陷的方向比较好。毕竟01:27:107 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这种反flow在后面是滑条的情况下无所谓，在连打的情况下还是稍微注意一点好。
懒了懒了，快改吧