1. Doomsday's Easy (1,27 stars, 144 notes)
2. Dunskin's Taiko Oni (4,94 stars, 1088 notes)
3. Fight69's Normal (2,34 stars, 230 notes)
4. Insane (4,75 stars, 714 notes)
5. Yuki's Hard (3,67 stars, 234 notes)

dvorak wrote:

Artist : senpi-

song name : Suteki na Hakaba de Kuraseru to Omotta noni
(no ni works , but noni better)

don't kudosu this post

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http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm14252659

see this, Suteki na Hakaba de Kuraseru to Omotta noni

also go homepage and read, SenP, or Senpi- senpi- this 3 work, and if you have anything about this, go read all.
But senpi- better maybe.

youtube or somewhere song name / artist title, etc are usually shit like Toaru < (To Aru), To Aru is totally incorrect

dvorak wrote:

>>manten
・MUSIC　『東方　素敵な墓場で暮らせると思ったのに』公開。

説明よろ私は面倒、そして多分誤植はMusicページのみ

Magicphoenix wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]

*00:35:892 (6) - Soft Default-finish
*00:38:245 (7) - New Combo
*01:17:656 (1) - Remove NC no change here
*01:32:362 (5) - Soft Default-finish
*01:34:715 (2) - ^
*01:42:950 (4) - ^ on slider end

1. Timing: I feel that the first offset is quite late compared to the other ones. It needs -6ms if you ask me. Just to be sure, check this with someone. Just be careful if you change it, once you resnap, certain sliders broke for me (ones in the later timing sections especially).
2. SB: I feel that you could optimize the SB a bit, with almost no real effort. Just re-use your background as a SB element once (to disable it), and then use it again after you stop using your 2nd picture (to use it like you are now, pretty much). It will make SB load go 1.0x instead of 2.0x. Probably doesn't matter that much, but it's an easy fix and it improves the mapset imo.
3. Use slider tick 3 maybe? It sounds pretty cool. (for hard and insane only, normal and easy have quite sparse timeline and the tickrate would make the map look full of holes imo)Now that I am awake, I see that this makes Insane jump to 19m. Oh well.

1. 00:36:676 - Add a note? It connects the streams better. Or maybe use a combination of kick sliders in both streams, and map the unmapped ticks around here? The piano is noticeable at those parts as well.
2. 01:53:793 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These should be sliders imo. I think it fits the music a little better and it gives the player a better feel of the BPM change. As it is now, unless you are a sightreading god or you know the song in advance, you're bound to screw this part.
3. 02:48:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I suggest that you rearrange your combos a little, so the overlaps are easier to read. Or just remove the overlaps. While it is confusing, I think it should be alright cause if you notice the first one, you notice them all, so you could make them 1-2 1-2 combos for better reading. Or, as I said already, change them somehow.
4. 02:54:675 (1) - Place this new combo on 02:54:796 (2)? Follows the music better.
5. 02:59:160 (12) - New combo? This combo is really long.
6. 03:01:705 - Add a note here? There is a beat here and the red combo doesn't exactly follow the "melody" fully (you didn't map 03:01:160). I think it makes it easier to play as well.
7. 03:01:948 (1) - Place this new combo on 03:02:069 (2) instead? Follows the music better.
8. 03:05:948 (1) - Place this new combo on 03:06:433 (3)? ^, also, maybe curve the slider 03:06:069 (2) in this case? Just so you have a pattern of linear sliders starting from (1), instead of previous combo.
9. 03:11:766 (1) - ^^ combo @03:12:251 (4).

1. General opinion: I think the sliders could use some work. Sure, it doesn't matter that much, but some sliders just look shabby and lazy, while others are okay. Would be awesome if you could make them more pretty somehow.
2. 00:14:127 (2) - Put a whistle on 00:15:303 so its more consistent?
3. 00:17:068 (5) - New combo? There is a change in the music.
4. 00:35:892 (6) - Considering the combo logic used in this section, this one should be a new combo I think. Also remove the NC from the next note in that case.
5. 02:02:278 (1,2) - Use claps at each slider start? It sounds empty without those.
6. 03:00:251 (1,3) - I don't like the claps on these because they are offbeat and they throw the rhythm off. Try placing them on 03:00:615 and 03:01:341 (2) instead.

1. AR+1. The faster part looks awkward with AR3.
2. 00:09:415 (1) - I don't like how you slide into the start of a new section. Should probably just use either 2 hitcircles, or just one hitcircle at 00:10:003.
3. 01:01:768 (6) - New combo?
4. 01:42:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is incredibly inconsistent with the rest of the map. It was quite easy and then suddenly you have so many notes in a row. I don't think stuff like this should be in a normal. If you really want to keep it, I guess it's okay, but I suggest that you do something about it.

1. 03:15:342 (1) - You should silence this spinner. It really ruins it.

lolcubes wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]

1. General opinion: I think the sliders could use some work. Sure, it doesn't matter that much, but some sliders just look shabby and lazy, while others are okay. Would be awesome if you could make them more pretty somehow.
2. 00:14:127 (2) - Put a whistle on 00:15:303 so its more consistent?
3. 00:17:068 (5) - New combo? There is a change in the music.
4. 00:35:892 (6) - Considering the combo logic used in this section, this one should be a new combo I think. Also remove the NC from the next note in that case.
5. 02:02:278 (1,2) - Use claps at each slider start? It sounds empty without those.
6. 03:00:251 (1,3) - I don't like the claps on these because they are offbeat and they throw the rhythm off. Try placing them on 03:00:615 and 03:01:341 (2) instead.

Fix all

thx for mod =D