1. Easy (1,4 stars, 164 notes)
2. Hard (3,27 stars, 83 notes)
3. Insane (5,2 stars, 1051 notes)

Dawnsday wrote:

here for m4m

meow

00:10:189 (10) - move this down or rework entire 00:09:557 (8,9,10,11) - section because it looks bad done, remapped
00:32:130 (2) - this and (5) are misaligned. fixed
00:49:798 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - weird spacing, all 1 beat apart but spacing increase randomly thats because the vocal tone gradually increase, but maybe its a bit too much? scaled to 0.9
01:05:626 (9) - maybe better as a stream yeah
01:11:148 (1) - looks ugly ok
01:21:363 (2,3) - hard to read thats the point on that part.
01:30:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - random spacing again uhm, I follow the DS, which is 1.5, the entire section. as for the pattern, its a two ring pattern which every single alternate between them.
01:38:755 (7) - ugly slider again fixed
01:46:669 (8) - random spacing increase same vocal tone increment but scaled to 0.9
01:52:743 (1,2,3) - impossible to hit for me LOL I don't want to change this simply because I always hit it and feels good lol (before missing horribly on streams).

rest is fine imo

Shaaazi420 wrote:

Hello!

Easy

1. General: What about increasing the spacing to 1.2? yeah, that might be better.
2. 00:21:873 (1,1) - Hard to read for new players. fixed
3. 00:32:866 (2,3,4) - ^fixed
4. 00:35:811 (2,3,4) - ^fixed
5. 00:24:399 (1,2,3,4) - This four stacked notes is also hard for new players. fixed
6. 00:27:344 - Add break. theres already a break no?

Insane

1. 00:47:774 (7,8) - I don't think that this part needs that big jump as it is slow part of the song. you're right
2. 02:12:988 (3) - I dont like the angle of this slider. How about this: https://puu.sh/txqqo/322dcbb056.png https://puu.sh/txqoE/6e5114cb60.PNG ? fixed
3. 01:05:074 - Why ignore? Place a note here. no sound + no flow gameplay to follow.
4. 00:50:719 (8,9) - Lack of flow. How about 00:50:903 (9) - CTRL+G? remapped 9,10,11
5. 01:14:093 (5,6) - Lack of flow. there's a sudden change on vocals so I break the flow.
6. 01:43:725 (3,4) - You can make a better blanket here. fixed

Good song! I will add it to my playlist.
Good luck!

IceKalt wrote:

Hello~

Hi from /modreqest

Insane

Your NCs are a bit messed up in this map. I try to fix them as i could^^
00:24:084 (1) - Remove note cause ur mapping sounds and not vocals fixed
00:24:400 (2) - NC
00:25:872 (3) - NC
00:26:056 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Try to put end of 3-stacks on a white tic, plays better imo yeah you're right
00:43:541 (2,3,4) - Change DS on 3 like here 00:44:277 (4,5,6) - (5) fixed
01:11:516 (2) - NC
01:14:461 (6) - NC
01:15:289 (1) - remove NC
01:17:406 (3) - NC
01:17:682 (1) - remove NC
01:17:774 (2) - NC
01:29:185 (8) - NC
01:35:074 (5) - Would put 3-stack here + NC no, will keep all the sliders pattern.
01:40:780 (1) - remove NC
01:40:964 (2) - NC
01:42:436 (6) - NC
01:42:988 (1) - remove NC
02:01:393 (1) - remove NC
02:01:577 (2) - NC
02:04:154 (1) - Remove NC
02:04:522 (2) - NC
02:16:301 (3) - NC
02:21:087 (7) - NC
02:21:823 (1) - remove NC
02:25:136 (9) - NC
02:28:265 (7) - Your missing the sound on 02.28.173. Mybe place 3-stack or a note b4 the 1/4 slider + NC I don't hear anything
02:31:025 (6) - NC
02:33:970 (7) - NC
02:38:387 (4) - NC
02:38:571 (1) - remove NC
03:33:602 (1,2) - Would make stream until 03.34.154. Your mapping the Sound in the refrain and not the vocals so i guess that would make more sense yeah, it also looks good!

all NC are applied by default because I actually have no clue about them xD

Nice map dude^^
Played song years ago and still love it~
Bye and have a nice day

• Insane

1. i would change firsts redline bpm to 190
2. 00:01:662 (1,2) - This blankets are off.
3. 00:08:926 (7) - i would put circle instead and put slider there 00:09:241 - In overall, avoid placing sliders on red ticks because more important beats are on white ones.
4. 00:08:294 (6) - this is kinda bad.try this http://puu.sh/tzN1Z/897a44e40d.jpg or that (imo best option) http://puu.sh/tzNg9/09d6cd1fc3.jpg
5. 00:11:768 (2,4) - blanket is off
6. 00:24:400 (1,2,3,4) - its nice but you missed beat here 00:25:412 - i would remap this fragment
7. 00:29:369 (6) - this slider should start here 00:29:185 - imo
8. 00:50:903 (9) - nc, nc's should be placed on big white ticks
9. 00:53:847 (6) - nc
10. 00:59:737 (6) - ^
11. 01:01:209 (1,2,3) - this is nice but kinda too fast and confusing imo
12. 01:21:639 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1) - so much nc's :v
13. i think beat is here 01:38:295 - , not 01:38:111 (2) -
14. 01:46:853 (9) - nc :v
15. 01:51:271 (1,2,3) - very confusing
16. 01:52:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - this speed-up is hard to play, try this: http://puu.sh/tzO97/52db6284ce.jpg
17. 02:08:387 (7) - i would remove this and stack these 02:08:203 (6,1) -
18. 03:03:418 (8) - nc
19. 03:03:786 (9,10) - put slider here instead of circles

Blan_C wrote:

Hello there :v

NM from #modreqs

• Insane

1. i would change firsts redline bpm to 190
2. 00:01:662 (1,2) - This blankets are off.
3. 00:08:926 (7) - i would put circle instead and put slider there 00:09:241 - In overall, avoid placing sliders on red ticks because more important beats are on white ones.
4. 00:08:294 (6) - this is kinda bad.try this http://puu.sh/tzN1Z/897a44e40d.jpg or that (imo best option) http://puu.sh/tzNg9/09d6cd1fc3.jpg
5. 00:11:768 (2,4) - blanket is off
6. 00:24:400 (1,2,3,4) - its nice but you missed beat here 00:25:412 - i would remap this fragment
7. 00:29:369 (6) - this slider should start here 00:29:185 - imo
8. 00:50:903 (9) - nc, nc's should be placed on big white ticks
9. 00:53:847 (6) - nc
10. 00:59:737 (6) - ^
11. 01:01:209 (1,2,3) - this is nice but kinda too fast and confusing imo
12. 01:21:639 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1) - so much nc's :v
13. i think beat is here 01:38:295 - , not 01:38:111 (2) -
14. 01:46:853 (9) - nc :v
15. 01:51:271 (1,2,3) - very confusing
16. 01:52:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - this speed-up is hard to play, try this: http://puu.sh/tzO97/52db6284ce.jpg
17. 02:08:387 (7) - i would remove this and stack these 02:08:203 (6,1) -
18. 03:03:418 (8) - nc
19. 03:03:786 (9,10) - put slider here instead of circles

I played it and it showed me that i often clicked too fast. I am not good with timing so i cant help you, but i think you should find proper offset

Good luck.

IceKalt wrote:

There is also a map ranked (it is old) with the same song which has the same bpm so it is right ^^ The offset is ok too i guess

Blan_C wrote:

Hello there :v

NM from #modreqs

• Insane

1. i would change firsts redline bpm to 190 nah, I think its fine all high beats are white ticks.
2. 00:01:662 (1,2) - This blankets are off. oops
3. 00:08:926 (7) - i would put circle instead and put slider there 00:09:241 - In overall, avoid placing sliders on red ticks because more important beats are on white ones. you're right
4. 00:08:294 (6) - this is kinda bad.try this http://puu.sh/tzN1Z/897a44e40d.jpg or that (imo best option) http://puu.sh/tzNg9/09d6cd1fc3.jpg mm I like this, but maybe its more actions than what it needs that slow part. I will change it. but if people complain I will change it back (to this actually http://puu.sh/tzN1Z/897a44e40d.jpg)
5. 00:11:768 (2,4) - blanket is off oops
6. 00:24:400 (1,2,3,4) - its nice but you missed beat here 00:25:412 - i would remap this fragment I would skip that beat in favor of those opening sliders (its like counting 1, 2, 3, 4 lol) but I will change their position
7. 00:29:369 (6) - this slider should start here 00:29:185 - imo ok.
8. 00:50:903 (9) - nc, nc's should be placed on big white ticks not evey 4/4 should start a nc, its ok here.
9. 00:53:847 (6) - nc no need, I will end the section then start a nc.
10. 00:59:737 (6) - ^ ok
11. 01:01:209 (1,2,3) - this is nice but kinda too fast and confusing imo it is cofunsing, but I find that the velocity helps thinking less than its necessary, since its hard to break combo with this pattern (if you follow the song)
12. 01:21:639 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1) - so much nc's :v it is to emphatize the mess of that part
13. i think beat is here 01:38:295 - , not 01:38:111 (2) - oops, you're right.
14. 01:46:853 (9) - nc :v ok
15. 01:51:271 (1,2,3) - very confusing my testplayers played it well that part :c
16. 01:52:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - this speed-up is hard to play, try this: http://puu.sh/tzO97/52db6284ce.jpg nah, this pattern will live forever here toned it down a little bit (downscaled 0,9) since many are complaining xD
17. 02:08:387 (7) - i would remove this and stack these 02:08:203 (6,1) - Its fine like that.
18. 03:03:418 (8) - nc ok
19. 03:03:786 (9,10) - put slider here instead of circles fixed

I played it and it showed me that i often clicked too fast. I am not good with timing so i cant help you, but i think you should find proper offset

Good luck.

Blan_C wrote:

IceKalt wrote:

There is also a map ranked (it is old) with the same song which has the same bpm so it is right ^^ The offset is ok too i guess

maybe you are right, maybe its just my hearing which can be wrong ^^.
Edit: Maybe this will catch you attention 01:25:504 (3,4,5) - play it on 25% speed. I think objects are a bit late here

Lumario wrote:

Hey here's my part of our M4M
00:56:792 (1,2,3) - These sliders are hard to read because of the exact overlap you can choose if you fix them or not because it isn't too bad this as well as this 01:52:743 (1,2,3) are points where I "want" people to break xD they are kind of hard to read but I've tested them and also ask for testplays and generally they are confortable to play.
01:01:946 (3) - Would be nice if you could slow down this slider (I know it's some slider art combined with the other sliders) while playing you probably will break here because it's a bit sudden. well, I guess I should slown down a bit, but first slider is 1, second 1.2 and this third one is 1.4, so I don't think its sudden (also the following 3 rules the same way. 1.2 -> 1 -> 0.8) will make it 1 -> 1.15 -> 1.3 -> 1.15 -> 1 -> 0.8
01:45:933 (4,5,6,7,8) - You increased DS here for every circle in this pattern but I think you could keep the same DS here because I don't think the song is "building up" and it would be more visually appealing. I will have to seriously ask for more opinions because.. I legit hear a build up coming from the vocals.
02:35:442 (1,2) - Either make this overlap clearer like http://puu.sh/tDP8U/c3d5df2423.jpg or do no overlap at all like here 02:40:596 (3,4) oops, fixed
Try to make this circle 02:48:970 (6) - not touch the sliders around it (02:48:694 (5,7) - ) :3 fixed (tho, I want to keep it as close as possible since its a point where I miss too much for what I've planned xP)
02:54:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This part feels to intense playing wise yeah, as it should imo
02:59:001 (2,3) - This overlap is not perfect :3 fixed c:
03:01:485 (4,5) - These circles feel kinda out of place/random placed tbh I don't know how you could improve them either ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ yeah this are just placed on sliderheads since I didn't know where to put them, so this way they are "not random" but just could be better. suggestions open

I didn't look that much at Easy since it's not done yet but I'll leave this here :3
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/517731

Well that's it, I liked the map gl continuing the mapset :3