1. Futsuu (2,19 stars, 690 notes)
2. Kantan (1,97 stars, 372 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2,81 stars, 940 notes)
4. Oni (3,47 stars, 1245 notes)

Vulkin wrote:

ok i just cant xD

Source should be just: ご注文はうさぎですか？
Tags should be: Is the order a rabbit? GochiUsa kirima Gochuumon wa Usagi Desu ka? anime j-pop

you placed " Gochuumon wa Usagi Desu ka?" twice LOL

Vulkin wrote:

OK that was too little to be worth a KDS, asking someone to remove it (Plus they are in the ranked mapset( , but ill shoot star for ya

Vulkin wrote:

Ok, now for something that IS worth a kds lol
also M4M from my queue lol
Im so not used to modding this type of song lol, so pls forgive me for that orz

-General-
theres like 30 not mapped at the end, you could finish it lol I'll finish it later
Also i dont think breaks that large are needed owo

d=don
k=kat
D=Big don
K=Big kat

-Kantan-
00:13:783 (17) - K, since its same pitch as the previous note (which is a K) Fixed
00:26:475 (29) - K Fixed
On 1st kiai, is it me or theres too many kdkdkdkdk every 4/1? Fixed
02:13:014 (30) - Move to 02:12:821 - to follow the voice Fixed
02:35:706 (69) - K Fixed
02:47:629 (88) - Move to 02:47:437 - Fixed
03:32:244 (38) - Move to 03:32:052 - Fixed
03:42:245 - I think theres too many big notes imo Fixed
03:56:859 (77) - Move to 03:56:668 - Fixed

-Futsuu-
00:13:206 - Too condensed for the big notes for a futsuu owo Fixed
00:20:514 (39) - make it d for consistency with the background Fixed
01:17:629 - Too condensed Fixed
01:19:552 (197) - Dont think it needs to be big note Fixed
01:31:859 (240) - ^ Fixed
01:42:437 - Too condensed Fixed
02:34:552 - Too condensed Fixed
02:36:475 (113) - Dont think it needs to be big note Fixed
02:48:782 (156) - ^ Fixed
02:59:360 - Too condensed Fixed
OK from here its same issue lol, so imma skip that Fixed others

-Muzukashii-
Too many ddk in kiai's? Fixed
And that 03:17:629 - you could have put some notes, because the jump from muzu to oni in this specific part is too large I don't know how to fix that :/
No other issues here though

-Oni-
01:09:937 - Im not sure, but isnt this pattern a bit too long? Fixed
02:26:860 - ^ Fixed
03:43:783 - You went overboard with the length of this pattern x) Fixed
No other issues though

Its a pretty neat map!, Ill shoot a few stars for ya

Smallwu wrote:

Hello, random general mod because I like the song <3
[General]
You should use higher HP in lower diff Because
So, I think you can set like this：
Kantan : OD3/HP7 Fixed
Futsuu : OD4/HP6 Fixed
Muzukashii : OD5/HP5 Fixed
Oni : OD5.5/HP6.5 or OD6/HP6 Fixed
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Delete it pls Fixed
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These are useless in Taiko mode, turn off them! Fixed
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Example They are useless speed changes. Fix them, find more then remove them! Fixed
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Kantan & Futsuu : 03:17:629 (18) - Fix it >< Fixed
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Kantan : Nothing to say, but here's one thing you should know : Kantan shouldn't has any speed change
156 bpm is slow, and your Slider Velocity is 1.20. So use speed change 1.00 is OK Fixed

Futsuu : Remove it AiMod also says that Fixed
I think Futsuu can use some speed change , but you use too fast to play :3
±0.15 is can be accepted imo, try to let your speed changes keep in the range Fixed

Muzukashii : Muzukashii shouldn't use too many ddk/kkd/dkk/kdd, about that you need to find more modder :3
Oh and, 03:17:629 - 03:18:975 - I have some idea. Choose which you want? Exam1 | Exam2 | Exam3 Exam1 looks fine

Oni : Slider Velocity don't use 1.50 please 1,50 => 1,40
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Thought only general check, hope I still can help you
GL with Rank!!

luv too <3 <33

[R] wrote:

yo

[Muzukashii]
00:05:129 - delete , sound will more clear Fixed
00:08:206 - | 00:08:591 - delete, doesn't fit to follow vocal here Fixed
00:12:052 - can add note here, i hear drum sound Fixed
00:15:995 - delete ? to make same part with 00:19:071 - | 00:22:148 - I'd like to keep it
00:26:475 - should be kat here, high pitch but low sound Fixed
00:27:052 - delete ? nah
00:29:937 - can move 00:29:745 - if you follow the vocal Fixed
00:38:975 - change kat to emphasize 00:39:168 - d is better here I think
01:16:668 - | 01:17:052 - delete ? make same with 01:15:129 - Fixed
01:18:783 - change kat ? Fixed
01:19:360 (267,268) - consider to delete every this similliar note, not a good place to give triplet (place around 01:30:898 - here instead) nah, I think it's good
01:41:283 - add note ? Fixed
03:14:360 - add note ? has drum sound here Fixed
03:17:052 - can add don here Fixed

[Oni]
00:12:052 - add note Fixed

00:27:725 - add note ? i feels monotune Fixed
00:29:937 - move 00:29:745 - Fixed
00:30:610 - ^ Fixed
00:40:033 - add note Fixed
00:43:687 - ^ Fixed

01:09:745 - make triplet maybe Fixed


that's all from me
good luck Thanks

1. 00:11:475 (14) - change to K because K is easier to hit from d and same pitch
2. 00:28:398 (32) - switch this to k because there's a change in the vocals and the instruments there
3. 00:28:783 (60,61) - ctrl+g here is more accurate if you want to follow the lyrics
4. 00:42:245 (54,55,56) - d here for impact 00:46:860 (61) - here
5. 00:52:821 (71) - move this 1/2 forward (00:53:014 - ) because 1/2 patterns are very confusing for Kantan players unless they are used to emphasize very strong notes like finishes
6. 00:54:552 (73) - / 01:11:475 (95) - switching to k here is more accurate if you want to follow the lyrics
7. 01:13:014 - / 01:18:206 - try not to say monochrome for this long it's excessive when the pitch is changing and you have potential to use both colors
8. 01:23:014 (114) - / 01:35:321 (133) - idk what you're following in your kiai but if you want consistent kats switch this to kat
9. 01:26:860 (119) - switch this to kat to be consistent with the other part of the kiai
10. 01:40:321 (141) - switch this to kat because it's easier to hit the next D that's enough

1. 00:16:091 (26) - / 00:17:629 (29) - / 00:19:168 (33) - / etc., remove these to emphasize the held out notes just before them
2. 00:16:475 (26,27) - ctrl+g if you want to follow the instrumental pitches more accurately
3. 00:29:360 (62,63) - ^
4. 00:27:245 (54) - move this 1/2 back to follow the vocals more accurately
5. 00:35:129 (78) - / 00:35:129 (78) - add kats here because you missed vocals
6. 00:45:898 (112) - / 00:47:245 (116) - switch to d same reason as before
7. 01:19:168 (192) - generally start the kiai on a big D or K
8. 01:26:475 (216,217,218,219,220) - / 01:38:783 (259,260,261,262,263) - invert, dk kdk, for more accurate vocals

Jonawaga wrote:

M4M
Remember to only apply what seems good to you!!
[Kantan]

1. 00:11:475 (14) - change to K because K is easier to hit from d and same pitch I changed 00:11:091 (13) - to k
2. 00:28:398 (32) - switch this to k because there's a change in the vocals and the instruments there Fixed
3. 00:28:783 (60,61) - ctrl+g here is more accurate if you want to follow the lyrics I think you are talking about Futsuu here, so I did change it in Futsuu
4. 00:42:245 (54,55,56) - d here for impact 00:46:860 (61) - here Fixed
5. 00:52:821 (71) - move this 1/2 forward (00:53:014 - ) because 1/2 patterns are very confusing for Kantan players unless they are used to emphasize very strong notes like finishes Fixed
6. 00:54:552 (73) - / 01:11:475 (95) - switching to k here is more accurate if you want to follow the lyrics Fixed
7. 01:13:014 - / 01:18:206 - try not to say monochrome for this long it's excessive when the pitch is changing and you have potential to use both colors Fixed
8. 01:23:014 (114) - / 01:35:321 (133) - idk what you're following in your kiai but if you want consistent kats switch this to katFixed
9. 01:26:860 (119) - switch this to kat to be consistent with the other part of the kiaiFixed
10. 01:40:321 (141) - switch this to kat because it's easier to hit the next D that's enough Fixed all of them

[Futsuu]

1. 00:16:091 (26) - / 00:17:629 (29) - / 00:19:168 (33) - / etc., remove these to emphasize the held out notes just before them Fixed
2. 00:16:475 (26,27) - ctrl+g if you want to follow the instrumental pitches more accurately Fixed
3. 00:29:360 (62,63) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:27:245 (54) - move this 1/2 back to follow the vocals more accurately Fixed
5. 00:35:129 (78) - / 00:35:129 (78) - add kats here because you missed vocals But there are kats already
6. 00:45:898 (112) - / 00:47:245 (116) - switch to d same reason as before They are fine
7. 01:19:168 (192) - generally start the kiai on a big D or K Don't need to
8. 01:26:475 (216,217,218,219,220) - / 01:38:783 (259,260,261,262,263) - invert, dk kdk, for more accurate vocals Fixed

best of luck! Thanks a lot!

1. Add tags : Heart Purupuru Jiken desu ハートぷるぷる事件です (album)
2. Loud hitsound is really annoying. 80% might be better
3. No one recommended (and allow?) any SV change on KFM, in any case, except the BPM changes. And, if you give breaks on easier diffs, might broke the spread. Kantan is way too dense with 3/1, and i see you use 3/2 on some parts as well. That is not good. :\
4. SV on Futsuu is 1.30 lols please change to 1.40

1. The SV changes have been getting on my nerve these past few days asdf no i don't like the SV change, i rarely sees that on many maps. Tbh it's annoying, like example 04:09:937 this line, makes the k overlapped with kd so they would not able to be hit. It's like a troll. Except for the final kiai, imo, remove the other SV changes.
2. 00:14:360 (43) - imo better as d, it flows better too, and follows the music well. Furthermore, k kdk is hard to hit (i missed on the first try lol) because of the monotone between the 1/1 and 3/4 there
3. 00:21:283 (79) - remove to keep the consistency, which is giving breaks every after the melody plays (ex : 00:18:206 , 00:15:129 etc
4. 00:23:206 (87) - k? same clap as 00:23:398 (88) -
5. 00:24:552 (93,94,95,96) - since the music is rising, why not DDKK?
6. 00:26:475 (98) - K here sounds brighter and more cheerful for me
7. 00:34:360 (134) - i suggest k here, because the vocal is still high there, same with 00:33:975 (132,133) -
8. 00:33:014 (128) - 00:39:168 (157) - 00:45:321 (187) - etcetc finish? the bass kicks lots of notes need to be emphasized because the bass kicks there, idk why don't you want to give them finisher. q_q?
9. 01:30:706 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401) - the sudden stream out of nowhere is shocking. Q_Q can you break them to ddd kkk D?
10. 01:38:014 (438,441,442) - could be changed to k for variation on the pattern
11. 02:02:052 why not following the vocal too on this part, like the first part? the inconsistency is just weird, because the first part (build up) is really dense, meanwhile the main part (the center?) is really light.
12. 03:00:706 (805,806,807,808,809,810,811,812,813,814,815,816,817,818,819,820,821,822,823,824,825,826,827,828,829,830,831,832,833,834,835,836,837,838,839,840,841,842,843,844,845,846,847,848,849,850,851,852,853,854,855,856,857,858,859,860,861,862,863,864,865,866,867,868,869,870,871,872,873,874,875,876,877,878,879) - try to make the hitsound more vary here, not just ddk d d d k d d ddk d d d k d d ddk etc it's boring to play